my gears are ground
keep in mind these are all opinions
death
00:02:797 - completely disagree with the SVs at the start - its fine that theyre flashy like that but what they convey is another thing
what the SVs seem to try to show is the how jumpy this section is, and i agree that the jumpiness is there - however, it seems as though the hop between the pairs of beats is overemphasized in your case, the music seems to be a much happier and hence lighter piano sequence kind of thing whilst your SVs tell me a big woosh kind of thing, between each pairs of beats especially.
would encourage you to lower the values of 2.11 and 1.41 by .2 or .1 OR just delete the SVs altogether, the jacks e.g 00:06:562 (6562|2,6680|2) - are enough to show the jumpiness. same applies to all diffs that have this kind of thing
00:11:150 (11150|2,11268|3,11268|0,11268|1,11268|2) - please at least lower the SV value of this jump - youre ending on a quad
00:22:444 (22444|2,22562|0,22562|1,22562|2,22562|3) - nice copy paste lol
00:27:371 - not sure why you would think the player would expect an SV change from x0.5 on 219 bpm to x1 on 240 bpm - at least have preliminary SVs leading the player up from x0.5 to x1 between the intervals of 00:27:371 - to 00:27:576 -
00:31:451 (31451|0,31471|1,31492|2,31513|3,31534|0,31555|1) - i know this looks correct on paper but youd have to put this in context - i feel as if this little burst section in the music doesnt need to be emphasized to this degree (1/12s on 240 bpm)
00:33:826 (33826|0,33826|1,33888|2,33888|3,34076|1,34076|0,34138|2,34138|3,34326|0,34326|1) - same overemphasis thing - youve been using jumps as the bam bam thing in the music but here there are jumps for the much less emphasized snares(?) in the music. the thing i dont get is how you wish to portray this section as a rough jumptrill since the music doesnt seem to be anywhere near a rough jumptrill.
00:35:576 - x2? this is too much already; i know youre trying to show the sudden jump and sure x2 is a good way to show that sudden jump but you have to remember that there are people who will be playing this chart not expecting a jump of this magnitude and suddenness especially in a 240bpm chord mashing section with fast bursts
00:37:451 (37451|1,37701|2) - not sure what youre trying to emphasize here - 00:37:201 (37201|2) - this is clearly not the same as the two above, so why are they shown through the same patterning?
00:39:451 (39451|2,39513|3,39701|1,39701|0) - not sure why you want to mask the 1/12 burst with these LNs - dont think there is anything wrong with using normal notes to show the bzzt thing in the music if the bzzt thing last for a few milliseconds at most
00:45:076 (45076|0,45076|3,45076|1) - dont think this warrants a triple note
01:00:576 (60576|0,60617|1,60659|0) - i dont think this emphasizes anything - its more of extraneous notes more than anything else, the sound youre following here is way weaker than what this trill conveys
01:19:513 (79513|3,79576|3) - please dont do this
01:31:451 (91451|0,91451|1,91513|0,91513|1) - im very sure this is the first time youve shown such a sound with jacks
01:39:326 (99326|3,99388|2,99451|3,99513|2,99576|3,99638|2,99701|3,99763|2,99826|3,99951|2) - dont understand howd you expect players to hit LNs after a trill like this one
01:53:826 - this is really unreadable; 01:55:201 (115201|3) - like id expect this to be a jump just by looking at the pattern itself but hey look it isntfor whoever who wants to mod this
if you remove all the LNs from 01:55:826 - all the way to 02:01:013 - the death difficulty drops from 6.94 to 6.34
memes aside, i dont really have much to say about the ending jumptrills/LNs - be it intentionally SR inflating or not its ultimately up to you to decide whether or not you wish to keep this sort of thing, including all consequences of leaving such a thing.ending words
dont wish to bother with the other difficulties tbh
yeah thats it nothing morehope my mod helped, dont kds if it didnt help since this was basically just an opinionated tirade if you look at it differently
good luck with rankos