Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles
Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggest and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not always right and also I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
• Also this is a mod ticket, I will request to you once I have my new map to work on
• And.. I just want to ask, what are with those Bookmarks holy moly xD
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• Breaktime issue. Solution included in my mod below.
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[Rhapsody Of The Warriors]
SPOILER
00:01:469 - I think there should be a note at 1/8th snap since the guitar sound can be heard there. Use playback rate 25% to check. Also compare it to 00:02:782 (2782|4,2867|5) - which they are quite different. You decide mate.
00:11:257 (11257|0,11257|2) - - move to 1 column to right so it wont be that awkward after 00:10:918 (10918|4,11003|2,11087|0) -
00:13:799 - add note to 5 since you made 00:13:460 (13460|2,13460|5) - with the same sound double notes.
00:16:172 - ^ add note to 3 same reason.
00:16:511 - ^ same reason
00:19:138 (19138|3,19308|4,19393|3) - suggesting https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5562472 which is neat to sight and easier to execute.
00:32:952 (32952|1,33121|0) - swap column, to avoid this 00:32:782 (32782|1,32952|1) - to avoid confusion feeling.
00:43:121 - add note here like you did at the same sound on 00:42:613 (42613|4,42613|2) -
00:44:477 (44477|2,44477|0,44647|3,44647|1,44816|2,44816|4,44986|3,44986|1) - I find these doubles inconsistent due vocal mapping without a strong instrument along with it. I suggest something like single notes or can even single LNs because of that organ-synth-like sound. You decide~
00:46:342 (46342|0,46342|5) - move to 2 and 5 since the pitch of guitar changed
01:05:748 (65748|1,65918|1) - move to 5 for comfortability, its kinda feel weird with the left hand.
01:06:426 (66426|5,66511|4,66596|5) - swap columnm, same reason above.
01:13:630 - add note since you made strong cymbal sounds quads at 01:13:884 (73884|1,73884|4,73884|5,73884|0) -
01:14:138 - ^ same reason. add note.
01:14:308 (74308|4) - remove note, there's no cymbal strong sound here to be quad.
01:29:732 (89732|2) - move to 2 so it can be the same as the same sound at 01:29:393 (89393|3,89393|1) -
01:48:884 - add note to 1 since you made the 1st kiai starting notes are quads.
01:58:376 (118376|5,118376|0) - remove? sudden quads without additional instrument and its the same sound as 01:58:715 - and not even strong as 01:59:732 (119732|5,119732|1,119732|0,119732|4) -
02:05:155 - add note to 6 strong starting sound.
02:21:426 - add one more LN similar to 02:21:426 (141426|3) - since there's multiple long sound and that would be fit. You can just change 02:21:426 (141426|1) - into LN.
02:24:436 - ^ same reason above
02:31:263 (151263|4) - remove and extend 02:31:056 (151056|5) - to the white line 02:31:470 - because there is no new strum at 02:31:263 -
02:34:367 (154367|5,154573|4) - ^ same situation.
02:37:677 (157677|3,157884|2) - ^
02:45:953 (165953|2,166160|1) - ^
02:54:642 (174642|1,174642|2) - add one more note to make it chord for snares, same as you did at 03:01:263 (181263|1,181263|5,181263|0) - . The part is just too easy for the entire difficulty and I think its good to make it chords. With that being said, apply the same as the following:
• 02:55:470 (175470|1,175470|2) -
• 02:56:298 (176298|1,176298|2) -
• 02:57:125 (177125|2,177125|1) -
• 02:57:953 (177953|2,177953|1) -
• 02:58:780 (178780|1,178780|2) -
• 02:59:608 (179608|1,179608|2) -
• 03:00:436 (180436|1,180436|2,180436|3) - (add one more note for cymbal differ)
• 03:02:918 (182918|3,182918|4) -
• 03:03:746 (183746|1,183746|3) -
* You decide mate~
03:07:884 - add notes here since snare with guitar. Do like you did at 03:10:367 (190367|4,190367|1) -
03:08:711 - ^
03:09:539 - ^
04:14:589 - add note to 2 since strong start cymbals.
04:19:843 - add chord here for that consistent snare end.
04:28:403 (268403|3,268572|3) - move to 3 for hand balance.
04:36:284 - this pattern really looks neat!
04:39:758 (279758|1,279843|0,279843|2,279928|1,280182|2,280182|0,280267|1,280352|0,280352|2) - you might want to rearrange these brackets, it gives an uncomfortable feeling. You decide~
04:50:945 (290945|0,291030|2) - swap column so it can be clearer to execute.
oh I forgot, 04:03:742 - you might want to add some notes for those guitar inorder to solve the Breaktime issue. Sadly, breaktime is not allowed in mania if there are instruments playing in that breaktime.
00:11:257 (11257|0,11257|2) - - move to 1 column to right so it wont be that awkward after 00:10:918 (10918|4,11003|2,11087|0) -
00:13:799 - add note to 5 since you made 00:13:460 (13460|2,13460|5) - with the same sound double notes.
00:16:172 - ^ add note to 3 same reason.
00:16:511 - ^ same reason
00:19:138 (19138|3,19308|4,19393|3) - suggesting https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5562472 which is neat to sight and easier to execute.
00:32:952 (32952|1,33121|0) - swap column, to avoid this 00:32:782 (32782|1,32952|1) - to avoid confusion feeling.
00:43:121 - add note here like you did at the same sound on 00:42:613 (42613|4,42613|2) -
00:44:477 (44477|2,44477|0,44647|3,44647|1,44816|2,44816|4,44986|3,44986|1) - I find these doubles inconsistent due vocal mapping without a strong instrument along with it. I suggest something like single notes or can even single LNs because of that organ-synth-like sound. You decide~
00:46:342 (46342|0,46342|5) - move to 2 and 5 since the pitch of guitar changed
01:05:748 (65748|1,65918|1) - move to 5 for comfortability, its kinda feel weird with the left hand.
01:06:426 (66426|5,66511|4,66596|5) - swap columnm, same reason above.
01:13:630 - add note since you made strong cymbal sounds quads at 01:13:884 (73884|1,73884|4,73884|5,73884|0) -
01:14:138 - ^ same reason. add note.
01:14:308 (74308|4) - remove note, there's no cymbal strong sound here to be quad.
01:29:732 (89732|2) - move to 2 so it can be the same as the same sound at 01:29:393 (89393|3,89393|1) -
01:48:884 - add note to 1 since you made the 1st kiai starting notes are quads.
01:58:376 (118376|5,118376|0) - remove? sudden quads without additional instrument and its the same sound as 01:58:715 - and not even strong as 01:59:732 (119732|5,119732|1,119732|0,119732|4) -
02:05:155 - add note to 6 strong starting sound.
02:21:426 - add one more LN similar to 02:21:426 (141426|3) - since there's multiple long sound and that would be fit. You can just change 02:21:426 (141426|1) - into LN.
02:24:436 - ^ same reason above
02:31:263 (151263|4) - remove and extend 02:31:056 (151056|5) - to the white line 02:31:470 - because there is no new strum at 02:31:263 -
02:34:367 (154367|5,154573|4) - ^ same situation.
02:37:677 (157677|3,157884|2) - ^
02:45:953 (165953|2,166160|1) - ^
02:54:642 (174642|1,174642|2) - add one more note to make it chord for snares, same as you did at 03:01:263 (181263|1,181263|5,181263|0) - . The part is just too easy for the entire difficulty and I think its good to make it chords. With that being said, apply the same as the following:
• 02:55:470 (175470|1,175470|2) -
• 02:56:298 (176298|1,176298|2) -
• 02:57:125 (177125|2,177125|1) -
• 02:57:953 (177953|2,177953|1) -
• 02:58:780 (178780|1,178780|2) -
• 02:59:608 (179608|1,179608|2) -
• 03:00:436 (180436|1,180436|2,180436|3) - (add one more note for cymbal differ)
• 03:02:918 (182918|3,182918|4) -
• 03:03:746 (183746|1,183746|3) -
* You decide mate~
03:07:884 - add notes here since snare with guitar. Do like you did at 03:10:367 (190367|4,190367|1) -
03:08:711 - ^
03:09:539 - ^
04:14:589 - add note to 2 since strong start cymbals.
04:19:843 - add chord here for that consistent snare end.
04:28:403 (268403|3,268572|3) - move to 3 for hand balance.
04:36:284 - this pattern really looks neat!
04:39:758 (279758|1,279843|0,279843|2,279928|1,280182|2,280182|0,280267|1,280352|0,280352|2) - you might want to rearrange these brackets, it gives an uncomfortable feeling. You decide~
04:50:945 (290945|0,291030|2) - swap column so it can be clearer to execute.
oh I forgot, 04:03:742 - you might want to add some notes for those guitar inorder to solve the Breaktime issue. Sadly, breaktime is not allowed in mania if there are instruments playing in that breaktime.
[Overall]
Nice song choice, its Dragon Force after all >w<)b
I will pm you once I need a mod, I hope my mod helps. Thank you and Goodluck~