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DragonForce - Symphony of the Night [OsuMania]

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Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 14, 2016 at 11:39:26 PM

Artist: DragonForce
Title: Symphony of the Night
Tags: Collaboration Marathon Killer Elite Maximum Overload power metal [Crz]Derrick Derrick Wolf ExUsagi
BPM: 177
Filesize: 8028kb
Play Time: 05:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Melody of the Darkness // 4K - 4Key (4.8 stars, 3730 notes)
  2. Rhapsody of the Warriors // 6K - 6Key (5.87 stars, 4481 notes)
Download: DragonForce - Symphony of the Night
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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= Long Notes // Brackets // Polyrhythm Streams // Jack Hammer =



ReDL before 14/10

// 4K by Me
// 6K collab with pro furry charter Derrick Wolf

collab part
00:00:410 - 00:22:104 - Dog
00:22:104 - 01:16:342 - Wolf
01:16:342 - 02:10:579 - Dog
02:10:579 - 02:54:229 - Wolf
02:54:229 - 03:33:953 - Dog
03:33:953 - 04:14:589 - Wolf
04:14:589 - 04:20:013 - Dog
04:20:013 - 04:25:436 - Wolf
04:25:436 - 04:30:860 - Dog
04:30:860 - 04:38:996 - Wolf
04:38:996 - 05:15:280 - Dog
Timing & Audio from s/469148
thanks for playing!
Last edited by Arzenvald , edited 74 times in total.
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
another kweff.,
Furry of the Storm,

bedugh cecede.

edit:
om gabung bedug woleh ra?
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Surono wrote:

another kweff.,
Furry of the Storm,

bedugh cecede.

edit:
om gabung bedug woleh ra?
wado kudu collab dgn gw, lu tau gw ccd ngemap tako..

klo lu ngemap sendiri unrankable
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
>:V cacads kowkOKWokwokw (dasar mamak tofoe setcrot)
Kawawa
Kawawa
always nice structure.
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Kawawa wrote:

always nice structure.
<3 thank you kawa
Aste-
2,387 posts
Joined September 2014
Aste-
hookaaay

Damn Jee.. This is difficult


Column 1-2-3-4-5-6

Da MOD~

00:11:765 (11765|4) - its really hard to press for me.. how about moving that to 3, or if you want to keep it.. move 00:11:935 (11935|0) - to 2 instead. to make a nice feel of the drum * cuz i really feel that 00:11:596 (11596|0,11935|0) - shouldn't be at the same column

00:11:765 (11765|3,12274|5) - are you really sure about this? cuz what i hear are the guitar change key here 00:12:274 - and change again here 00:12:613 -

00:13:630 - this too

01:02:782 - 01:03:121 - 01:03:460 - 01:03:799 - 01:04:138 - not give any SV here? it's good tbh to use a land worm SV here, well since you skipped the kick stream in this part

01:47:528 - no sv here? teleport sv will do here to give a nice inpact with this part 01:48:884 -

03:07:677 (187677|1,187884|2) - uh.. it have a same pitch.. why not moving these note to single column? to make a nice feel and syncronize the pitch.

03:08:504 (188504|3,188711|2) - this too and other that similar with this

03:24:091 (204091|2) - till 03:25:573 (205573|0) - . all of it are wrong snaped. try to listen it with 25% speed to listen to the guitar solo

03:35:608 (215608|3,215815|3,216022|3,216642|3,216849|3,217056|3) - care to explain what is this LN for? cuz if you follow the guitar. the LN should be like this one. 03:35:401 (215401|2) - *cuz i can see it that you only use it for the plucked one

05:10:193 (310193|2,310193|4,310193|5,310193|3,310193|0,310193|1) - hmm.. better beware with this.. cuz there's some kbd that still ghosting with 6 key pressed

hmm.. guess i'm getting old now ehehe

hope it'll help

GL
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Aste- wrote:

hookaaay

Damn Jee.. This is difficult


Column 1-2-3-4-5-6

Da MOD~

00:11:765 (11765|4) - its really hard to press for me.. how about moving that to 3, or if you want to keep it.. move 00:11:935 (11935|0) - to 2 instead. to make a nice feel of the drum * cuz i really feel that 00:11:596 (11596|0,11935|0) - shouldn't be at the same column // not quiet agree, but moved couple things instead

00:11:765 (11765|3,12274|5) - are you really sure about this? cuz what i hear are the guitar change key here 00:12:274 - and change again here 00:12:613 - // all done

00:13:630 - this too

01:02:782 - 01:03:121 - 01:03:460 - 01:03:799 - 01:04:138 - not give any SV here? it's good tbh to use a land worm SV here, well since you skipped the kick stream in this part // no SV for this part

01:47:528 - no sv here? teleport sv will do here to give a nice inpact with this part 01:48:884 - // o.o i already put some SV there

03:07:677 (187677|1,187884|2) - uh.. it have a same pitch.. why not moving these note to single column? to make a nice feel and syncronize the pitch. // the LN note transition should be enough

03:08:504 (188504|3,188711|2) - this too and other that similar with this

03:24:091 (204091|2) - till 03:25:573 (205573|0) - . all of it are wrong snaped. try to listen it with 25% speed to listen to the guitar solo // HALP HAAALP

03:35:608 (215608|3,215815|3,216022|3,216642|3,216849|3,217056|3) - care to explain what is this LN for? cuz if you follow the guitar. the LN should be like this one. 03:35:401 (215401|2) - *cuz i can see it that you only use it for the plucked one // lemme ask derrick cuz its his part

05:10:193 (310193|2,310193|4,310193|5,310193|3,310193|0,310193|1) - hmm.. better beware with this.. cuz there's some kbd that still ghosting with 6 key pressed // noooooooooooooo it doesn't :^)

hmm.. guess i'm getting old now ehehe

hope it'll help

GL
danke!
ArcherLove
1,434 posts
Joined March 2013
ArcherLove
1~6 haihaihaihai

00:11:172 (11172|2,11257|3) - ctrl+h
02:08:460 (128460|5) - pindah ke 5?

I have no complain for other zz

try ask underjoy_ skalim and fullerene-
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald
asking uncle skalim, waiting his respond.. danke!
PANDAAAAAAAA
745 posts
Joined September 2012
PANDAAAAAAAA
Hi. in-game req.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|

[Rhapsody Of The Warriors]
00:18:884 (18884|2) - delete. why double? it's same sound (drum kit)
00:30:240 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561880 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561882 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561887 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561890
00:53:291 (53291|4,53291|0,53291|1,53291|5) - if you follow guitar sound. should release at 00:53:460 - i suggest to follow guitar.
01:04:901 (64901|2,64901|0) - delete one note (there isn't snare sound)
01:10:325 (70325|3,70325|4) - ^
01:40:410 (100410|3) - delete (there isn't drum kit sound)
02:10:240 (130240|4,130240|1,130240|0,130240|5,130325|1,130325|4,130410|5,130410|0,130494|0,130494|5) - i think it is too hard for my fingers lol
03:03:125 (183125|2,183229|1) - i'm not suggest o2Jam style. please change them to 1/4 beat.
03:11:401 (191401|0,191504|2) - ^
03:12:229 (192229|1,192332|3) - ^
03:13:056 (193056|2,193160|3) - ^
03:27:401 - i'm not sure it is 1/6 or not.
04:14:589 - omg noodles lol
04:32:499 (272499|3,272555|1) - move to 2 and 1

good luck
[Crz]Derrick
28 posts
Joined July 2014
[Crz]Derrick

nowsmart wrote:

Hi. in-game req.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|

[Rhapsody Of The Warriors]
00:18:884 (18884|2) - delete. why double? it's same sound (drum kit)
00:30:240 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561880 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561882 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561887 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561890
00:53:291 (53291|4,53291|0,53291|1,53291|5) - if you follow guitar sound. should release at 00:53:460 - i suggest to follow guitar.
01:04:901 (64901|2,64901|0) - delete one note (there isn't snare sound)
01:10:325 (70325|3,70325|4) - ^
01:40:410 (100410|3) - delete (there isn't drum kit sound)
02:10:240 (130240|4,130240|1,130240|0,130240|5,130325|1,130325|4,130410|5,130410|0,130494|0,130494|5) - i think it is too hard for my fingers lol
03:03:125 (183125|2,183229|1) - i'm not suggest o2Jam style. please change them to 1/4 beat.
03:11:401 (191401|0,191504|2) - ^
03:12:229 (192229|1,192332|3) - ^
03:13:056 (193056|2,193160|3) - ^
03:27:401 - i'm not sure it is 1/6 or not.
04:14:589 - omg noodles lol
04:32:499 (272499|3,272555|1) - move to 2 and 1

good luck
00:30:240 - You suggested pattern looks way more fluent than mine, accepted.
00:53:291 (53291|4,53291|0,53291|1,53291|5) - Agree, accepted.
01:04:901 (64901|2,64901|0) - OMG...of sourse accepted
01:10:325 (70325|3,70325|4) - Same Fault...Accepted.
04:32:499 (272499|3,272555|1) - Way more fluent after moving these two, accepted.
Thank you so much!!
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

nowsmart wrote:

Hi. in-game req.
|1|2|3|4|5|6|

[Rhapsody Of The Warriors]
00:18:884 (18884|2) - delete. why double? it's same sound (drum kit) // ok
00:30:240 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561880 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561882 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561887 >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5561890
00:53:291 (53291|4,53291|0,53291|1,53291|5) - if you follow guitar sound. should release at 00:53:460 - i suggest to follow guitar.
01:04:901 (64901|2,64901|0) - delete one note (there isn't snare sound)
01:10:325 (70325|3,70325|4) - ^
01:40:410 (100410|3) - delete (there isn't drum kit sound)
02:10:240 (130240|4,130240|1,130240|0,130240|5,130325|1,130325|4,130410|5,130410|0,130494|0,130494|5) - i think it is too hard for my fingers lol // lemme rearrange them
03:03:125 (183125|2,183229|1) - i'm not suggest o2Jam style. please change them to 1/4 beat.
03:11:401 (191401|0,191504|2) - ^
03:12:229 (192229|1,192332|3) - ^
03:13:056 (193056|2,193160|3) - ^ // but there will be a noodle part DD:
03:27:401 - i'm not sure it is 1/6 or not. // same :T will ask QAT whether this snapping is fine because its hard to follow nature guitar sound, (fyi Endless Tears . . . has same questionable guitar snapping, and its better to use 1/6 instead)
04:14:589 - omg noodles lol
04:32:499 (272499|3,272555|1) - move to 2 and 1

good luck

ArcherLove wrote:

1~6 haihaihaihai

00:11:172 (11172|2,11257|3) - ctrl+h
02:08:460 (128460|5) - pindah ke 5?

I have no complain for other zz

try ask underjoy_ skalim and fullerene-
\

otherwise noted, all done! thanks guys!!

updated C:
arcwinolivirus
1,588 posts
Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus' M4M"

Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles


Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggest and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not always right and also I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
• Also this is a mod ticket, I will request to you once I have my new map to work on :)

• And.. I just want to ask, what are with those Bookmarks holy moly xD



[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Breaktime issue. Solution included in my mod below.

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ 
6K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|

[Rhapsody Of The Warriors]
SPOILER
00:01:469 - I think there should be a note at 1/8th snap since the guitar sound can be heard there. Use playback rate 25% to check. Also compare it to 00:02:782 (2782|4,2867|5) - which they are quite different. You decide mate.

00:11:257 (11257|0,11257|2) - - move to 1 column to right so it wont be that awkward after 00:10:918 (10918|4,11003|2,11087|0) -

00:13:799 - add note to 5 since you made 00:13:460 (13460|2,13460|5) - with the same sound double notes.

00:16:172 - ^ add note to 3 same reason.

00:16:511 - ^ same reason

00:19:138 (19138|3,19308|4,19393|3) - suggesting https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5562472 which is neat to sight and easier to execute.

00:32:952 (32952|1,33121|0) - swap column, to avoid this 00:32:782 (32782|1,32952|1) - to avoid confusion feeling.

00:43:121 - add note here like you did at the same sound on 00:42:613 (42613|4,42613|2) -

00:44:477 (44477|2,44477|0,44647|3,44647|1,44816|2,44816|4,44986|3,44986|1) - I find these doubles inconsistent due vocal mapping without a strong instrument along with it. I suggest something like single notes or can even single LNs because of that organ-synth-like sound. You decide~

00:46:342 (46342|0,46342|5) - move to 2 and 5 since the pitch of guitar changed

01:05:748 (65748|1,65918|1) - move to 5 for comfortability, its kinda feel weird with the left hand.

01:06:426 (66426|5,66511|4,66596|5) - swap columnm, same reason above.

01:13:630 - add note since you made strong cymbal sounds quads at 01:13:884 (73884|1,73884|4,73884|5,73884|0) -

01:14:138 - ^ same reason. add note.

01:14:308 (74308|4) - remove note, there's no cymbal strong sound here to be quad.

01:29:732 (89732|2) - move to 2 so it can be the same as the same sound at 01:29:393 (89393|3,89393|1) -

01:48:884 - add note to 1 since you made the 1st kiai starting notes are quads.

01:58:376 (118376|5,118376|0) - remove? sudden quads without additional instrument and its the same sound as 01:58:715 - and not even strong as 01:59:732 (119732|5,119732|1,119732|0,119732|4) -

02:05:155 - add note to 6 strong starting sound.

02:21:426 - add one more LN similar to 02:21:426 (141426|3) - since there's multiple long sound and that would be fit. You can just change 02:21:426 (141426|1) - into LN.

02:24:436 - ^ same reason above

02:31:263 (151263|4) - remove and extend 02:31:056 (151056|5) - to the white line 02:31:470 - because there is no new strum at 02:31:263 -

02:34:367 (154367|5,154573|4) - ^ same situation.

02:37:677 (157677|3,157884|2) - ^

02:45:953 (165953|2,166160|1) - ^


02:54:642 (174642|1,174642|2) - add one more note to make it chord for snares, same as you did at 03:01:263 (181263|1,181263|5,181263|0) - . The part is just too easy for the entire difficulty and I think its good to make it chords. With that being said, apply the same as the following:
• 02:55:470 (175470|1,175470|2) -
• 02:56:298 (176298|1,176298|2) -
• 02:57:125 (177125|2,177125|1) -
• 02:57:953 (177953|2,177953|1) -
• 02:58:780 (178780|1,178780|2) -
• 02:59:608 (179608|1,179608|2) -
• 03:00:436 (180436|1,180436|2,180436|3) - (add one more note for cymbal differ)
• 03:02:918 (182918|3,182918|4) -
• 03:03:746 (183746|1,183746|3) -
* You decide mate~

03:07:884 - add notes here since snare with guitar. Do like you did at 03:10:367 (190367|4,190367|1) -
03:08:711 - ^
03:09:539 - ^

04:14:589 - add note to 2 since strong start cymbals.

04:19:843 - add chord here for that consistent snare end.

04:28:403 (268403|3,268572|3) - move to 3 for hand balance.

04:36:284 - this pattern really looks neat!

04:39:758 (279758|1,279843|0,279843|2,279928|1,280182|2,280182|0,280267|1,280352|0,280352|2) - you might want to rearrange these brackets, it gives an uncomfortable feeling. You decide~

04:50:945 (290945|0,291030|2) - swap column so it can be clearer to execute.

oh I forgot, 04:03:742 - you might want to add some notes for those guitar inorder to solve the Breaktime issue. Sadly, breaktime is not allowed in mania if there are instruments playing in that breaktime.

[Overall]
Nice song choice, its Dragon Force after all >w<)b
I will pm you once I need a mod, I hope my mod helps. Thank you and Goodluck~ :)



~ END OF MOD ~
Arzenvald
4,033 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Arzenvald

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M"

Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles


Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggest and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not always right and also I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
• Also this is a mod ticket, I will request to you once I have my new map to work on :)

• And.. I just want to ask, what are with those Bookmarks holy moly xD



[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Breaktime issue. Solution included in my mod below.

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ 
6K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|

[Rhapsody Of The Warriors]
SPOILER
00:01:469 - I think there should be a note at 1/8th snap since the guitar sound can be heard there. Use playback rate 25% to check. Also compare it to 00:02:782 (2782|4,2867|5) - which they are quite different. You decide mate.

00:11:257 (11257|0,11257|2) - - move to 1 column to right so it wont be that awkward after 00:10:918 (10918|4,11003|2,11087|0) -

00:13:799 - add note to 5 since you made 00:13:460 (13460|2,13460|5) - with the same sound double notes.

00:16:172 - ^ add note to 3 same reason.

00:16:511 - ^ same reason

00:19:138 (19138|3,19308|4,19393|3) - suggesting https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5562472 which is neat to sight and easier to execute.


01:29:732 (89732|2) - move to 2 so it can be the same as the same sound at 01:29:393 (89393|3,89393|1) -

01:48:884 - add note to 1 since you made the 1st kiai starting notes are quads.

01:58:376 (118376|5,118376|0) - remove? sudden quads without additional instrument and its the same sound as 01:58:715 - and not even strong as 01:59:732 (119732|5,119732|1,119732|0,119732|4) -

02:05:155 - add note to 6 strong starting sound.


02:54:642 (174642|1,174642|2) - add one more note to make it chord for snares, same as you did at 03:01:263 (181263|1,181263|5,181263|0) - . The part is just too easy for the entire difficulty and I think its good to make it chords. With that being said, apply the same as the following:
• 02:55:470 (175470|1,175470|2) -
• 02:56:298 (176298|1,176298|2) -
• 02:57:125 (177125|2,177125|1) -
• 02:57:953 (177953|2,177953|1) -
• 02:58:780 (178780|1,178780|2) -
• 02:59:608 (179608|1,179608|2) -
• 03:00:436 (180436|1,180436|2,180436|3) - (add one more note for cymbal differ)
• 03:02:918 (182918|3,182918|4) -
• 03:03:746 (183746|1,183746|3) -
* You decide mate~

03:07:884 - add notes here since snare with guitar. Do like you did at 03:10:367 (190367|4,190367|1) -
03:08:711 - ^
03:09:539 - ^

04:14:589 - add note to 2 since strong start cymbals.

04:19:843 - add chord here for that consistent snare end.

04:28:403 (268403|3,268572|3) - move to 3 for hand balance.


04:39:758 (279758|1,279843|0,279843|2,279928|1,280182|2,280182|0,280267|1,280352|0,280352|2) - you might want to rearrange these brackets, it gives an uncomfortable feeling. You decide~

04:50:945 (290945|0,291030|2) - swap column so it can be clearer to execute.

[Overall]
Nice song choice, its Dragon Force after all >w<)b
I will pm you once I need a mod, I hope my mod helps. Thank you and Goodluck~ :)



~ END OF MOD ~
04:19:843 - only keep in this one because i want player to focus on guitar layering only.. C:

thank you so much papa <3


updated, waiting derrick now
Kyousuke-
1,796 posts
Joined May 2013
Kyousuke-
our chatlog on usagi's part =w=
22:40 Kyousuke-: eyyy bsa irc ga?
22:40 ajeemaniz: bisa
22:40 ajeemaniz: o3o
22:40 Kyousuke-: btw gw cuma light mod doang ye =w=
22:41 ajeemaniz: okay!
22:41 Kyousuke-: 00:16:511 (16511|1) - pindah ke 3?
22:41 Kyousuke-: 00:16:342 (16342|1,16511|1,16681|1) - seems this jacks not very good huehue
22:41 ajeemaniz: ok
22:42 Kyousuke-: btw gw mod nya lama :^)
22:42 ajeemaniz: o3o silahkan
22:42 *Kyousuke- karena gw emg ga bsa mod cepet" akwkw
22:43 ajeemaniz: bagus itu
22:43 Kyousuke-: btw part lu yg mana
22:43 ajeemaniz: yg merah
22:43 Kyousuke-: dat blue itu bookmark? DDL
22:43 Kyousuke-: *DD:
22:43 ajeemaniz: iya
22:43 ajeemaniz: a r t
22:43 Kyousuke-: LOL keren
22:43 Kyousuke-: lol ywd part lu dlu ya
22:44 ajeemaniz: ya wajar, temen collab nya baru pertama kali
22:44 Kyousuke-: dagian yg blue itu stream smua
22:44 ajeemaniz: biar dia gampang ngemapnya
22:44 Kyousuke-: mata picek @@
22:44 Kyousuke-: tpi keliatan bgs sih streamnya akwwk
22:44 ajeemaniz: belum liat kiai 3
22:44 ajeemaniz: style hand balance buatan derrick itu <3
22:44 Kyousuke-: wew
22:46 ajeemaniz: gw mendadak ngebet ngemap 6K, sehabis liat https://osu.ppy.sh/s/466803
22:46 ajeemaniz: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/469426
22:47 Kyousuke-: lel blame derick
22:48 Kyousuke-: 01:21:765 - btw ga add note?
22:49 ajeemaniz: pengennya sih
22:49 ajeemaniz: tapi gk bagus aja setelah jack trus di tambah triplet trus ketemu triplet lagi
22:49 ajeemaniz: but added anyway
22:49 Kyousuke-: oww ga gtu harus sih =w=
22:50 Kyousuke-: tpi kan pattern selanjutnya 3 note trus .w.
22:50 ajeemaniz: dah di rearrange jacknya biar lebih enak pas ketemu downbeat kok
22:50 ajeemaniz: iya
22:50 Kyousuke-: 01:24:986 - http://puu.sh/pUIbA/2675f61ee5.jpg bgini? =w=
22:50 Kyousuke-: yg sebelumnya seems hard
22:51 Kyousuke-: tpi klo player 6k bsa pass ya gpp deh wkwk
22:52 ajeemaniz: ide bagus!
22:53 Kyousuke-: patternnya keren" wkwk
22:53 ajeemaniz: enaknya di 6K gitu
22:53 ajeemaniz: hand balane everywhere
22:54 ajeemaniz: lebih less /tryhard/ patternya
22:54 Kyousuke-: 01:32:613 - hmm kalo ada suara finish dibuat 3 note ap nga? .w.
22:54 ajeemaniz: hs nya wip woy
22:55 ajeemaniz: removed finish anyway
22:55 Kyousuke-: 01:32:952 (92952|1,94986|1) - kykny ini ga gtu neccesarry wkwkw
22:55 Kyousuke-: biar pattern structurenya sama yg kyk sebelumnya
22:55 ajeemaniz: okay
22:56 Kyousuke-: 01:35:325 - this part so gg
22:57 ajeemaniz: itu udah di edit dikit biar lebih smooth
22:57 Kyousuke-: seems cool to me
22:57 Kyousuke-: how to make LNs pattern lol xD
22:58 Kyousuke-: btw ini lagu dragonforce yg paling bgs dri yg laennya wkwk
22:58 Kyousuke-: yg gw denger di osu sih =w=
23:00 Kyousuke-: lel
23:01 Kyousuke-: 01:46:342 (106342|2,106596|2,106765|2,106935|2,107104|2,107274|2,107443|2) - too much col in 3?
23:01 Kyousuke-: 01:47:104 (107104|2) - gmn klo pindah ke 2?
23:03 ajeemaniz: test
23:03 Kyousuke-: inet nya lola ya? wkwk
23:03 ajeemaniz: dc
23:03 Kyousuke-: 01:46:342 (106342|2,106596|2,106765|2,106935|2,107274|2,107443|2) - too much col 3?
23:03 ajeemaniz: lola sih iya
23:04 Kyousuke-: 01:47:104 (107104|2) - gmn klo pindah ke 2 wkwk
23:04 Kyousuke-: 01:54:308 - ~ 01:57:020 - wow wkwwk
23:04 ajeemaniz: 01:46:850 (106850|3,107020|3,107189|3,107359|3) - 4 juga banyak
23:04 ajeemaniz: rigid patternning sengaja
23:04 Kyousuke-: iy sih tpi ga sebanyak yg 3 
23:05 Kyousuke-: yup klo keep buat pattern fine =w=
23:05 ajeemaniz: dapapa, index finger ini
23:06 Kyousuke-: 01:57:189 (117189|1) - pindah ke 1 lbh bgs keknya
23:06 ajeemaniz: wa keep
23:11 Kyousuke-: 03:02:711 (182711|0) - pindah ke 3? .w.
23:11 ajeemaniz: oj
23:11 ajeemaniz: *ok
23:11 ajeemaniz: eh wait
23:11 ajeemaniz: no
23:11 ajeemaniz: kick
23:12 Kyousuke-: lel okela 
23:12 Kyousuke-: gw liat dri sisi playability sih :^)
23:12 ajeemaniz: belah atas dah di perbaiki soalnya
23:12 ajeemaniz: yg double triple jack di part selanjutnya
23:13 Kyousuke-: how2make creative pattern like usagi lol
23:13 ajeemaniz: belajar anagram
23:13 Kyousuke-: apa itu
23:14 ajeemaniz: '_J'
23:14 Kyousuke-: wkwk
23:14 ajeemaniz: entah, seperti ngebayangin pola pola tertentu yg bisa di buat dari angka
23:14 ajeemaniz: 1234 > 12 12 23 23 34 34 /mirror/ 34 34 23 23 12 12
23:15 ajeemaniz: 123456 // 13 24 35 46 35 24 13
23:15 Kyousuke-: 03:16:780 (196780|5) - ini apus?
23:15 Kyousuke-: yg itu ga kena melody kyk yg laen wkwkw
23:15 ajeemaniz: eh itu guitar
23:15 ajeemaniz: 03:16:367 (196367|4) - dari sini sengaja double
23:16 Kyousuke-: ow oke
23:19 Kyousuke-: 03:24:022 - gg snapping
23:19 Kyousuke-: 04:14:589 - kok tba" lgsg part lu disambut dgn noodles awkwkwk
23:20 ajeemaniz: need someone to confirm the snapping
23:20 ajeemaniz: orz
23:20 ajeemaniz: ya kiai
23:20 ajeemaniz: why not
23:20 Kyousuke-: lel bakal susah snappingnya
23:20 Kyousuke-: mungkin blocko can help
23:20 ajeemaniz: toh di padupadan dgn non-noodle
23:20 ajeemaniz: yus
23:20 Kyousuke-: my eyes @@ awkwkw
23:21 Kyousuke-: nice perpaduannya
23:21 ajeemaniz: frankly LN nya gampang di maenin
23:21 Kyousuke-: lu jago ln si derick jago stream wkwk
23:21 ajeemaniz: 04:17:470 (257470|0,257555|1,257640|2,257725|3,257809|4,257894|5) -
23:22 ajeemaniz: STAIR NYA GK LIAT ITU
23:22 ajeemaniz: awkakwkakwwkkwkwk
23:22 Kyousuke-: wkwk gw dri dulu ga bsa maen noodles kyk bgitu :^)
23:22 ajeemaniz: spam
23:22 Kyousuke-: asalkan hp od nya kecil mungkin bsa pass skarat wkwk
23:22 ajeemaniz: ini od 7.8 pan
23:23 Kyousuke-: ow oke blom liat wkkw
23:24 ajeemaniz: oiya
23:24 ajeemaniz: jgn salah, derrick 6K LN nya jauh lebih anjay dari gw punya
23:24 Kyousuke-: lel gw cuma liat dri yg map ini doang 'w'
23:24 Kyousuke-: noodle master
23:25 ajeemaniz: yg tadi gw link
23:26 ajeemaniz: banyak referensi buat 6K
23:26 Kyousuke-: 04:49:843 - ga add note?
23:26 ajeemaniz: added
23:27 Kyousuke-: 04:52:555 (292555|1) - how about pindah ke 4
23:28 ajeemaniz: ok
23:29 Kyousuke-: oke done
23:29 Kyousuke-: not much to complain
23:30 Kyousuke-: karena pattern stylenya ud gg akwkwk
23:30 ajeemaniz: ayy ayy
23:30 ajeemaniz: danke!
23:30 ajeemaniz: part yg biru?
23:30 Kyousuke-: part yg biru nanti aja =w=
23:30 Kyousuke-: ud mau off wkwk
23:30 ajeemaniz: okay
23:30 ajeemaniz: savelog mas




/me so noob 6K
goodluck owo
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
danke kyou! noob dari mana, padahal yg di point out pada oke punya =w=
updated, still waiting derrick's reply
[Crz]Derrick
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[Crz]Derrick

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M"

Willing to help you in times of mania mod struggles


Note:
• First of all I want to apologize if I am to say something that will hurt your mapper feelings. Remember that I only want to advice, suggest and recommend ideas for the improvement of your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• Do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not always right and also I do not bite rawr.
• If I am to suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
• Also this is a mod ticket, I will request to you once I have my new map to work on :)

• And.. I just want to ask, what are with those Bookmarks holy moly xD



[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• Breaktime issue. Solution included in my mod below.

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ 
6K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|

[Rhapsody Of The Warriors]
SPOILER
00:01:469 - I think there should be a note at 1/8th snap since the guitar sound can be heard there. Use playback rate 25% to check. Also compare it to 00:02:782 (2782|4,2867|5) - which they are quite different. You decide mate.

00:11:257 (11257|0,11257|2) - - move to 1 column to right so it wont be that awkward after 00:10:918 (10918|4,11003|2,11087|0) -

00:13:799 - add note to 5 since you made 00:13:460 (13460|2,13460|5) - with the same sound double notes.

00:16:172 - ^ add note to 3 same reason.

00:16:511 - ^ same reason

00:19:138 (19138|3,19308|4,19393|3) - suggesting https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5562472 which is neat to sight and easier to execute.

00:32:952 (32952|1,33121|0) - swap column, to avoid this 00:32:782 (32782|1,32952|1) - to avoid confusion feeling.

00:43:121 - add note here like you did at the same sound on 00:42:613 (42613|4,42613|2) -

00:44:477 (44477|2,44477|0,44647|3,44647|1,44816|2,44816|4,44986|3,44986|1) - I find these doubles inconsistent due vocal mapping without a strong instrument along with it. I suggest something like single notes or can even single LNs because of that organ-synth-like sound. You decide~

00:46:342 (46342|0,46342|5) - move to 2 and 5 since the pitch of guitar changed

01:05:748 (65748|1,65918|1) - move to 5 for comfortability, its kinda feel weird with the left hand.

01:06:426 (66426|5,66511|4,66596|5) - swap columnm, same reason above.

01:13:630 - add note since you made strong cymbal sounds quads at 01:13:884 (73884|1,73884|4,73884|5,73884|0) -

01:14:138 - ^ same reason. add note.

01:14:308 (74308|4) - remove note, there's no cymbal strong sound here to be quad.

01:29:732 (89732|2) - move to 2 so it can be the same as the same sound at 01:29:393 (89393|3,89393|1) -

01:48:884 - add note to 1 since you made the 1st kiai starting notes are quads.

01:58:376 (118376|5,118376|0) - remove? sudden quads without additional instrument and its the same sound as 01:58:715 - and not even strong as 01:59:732 (119732|5,119732|1,119732|0,119732|4) -

02:05:155 - add note to 6 strong starting sound.

02:21:426 - add one more LN similar to 02:21:426 (141426|3) - since there's multiple long sound and that would be fit. You can just change 02:21:426 (141426|1) - into LN.

02:24:436 - ^ same reason above

02:31:263 (151263|4) - remove and extend 02:31:056 (151056|5) - to the white line 02:31:470 - because there is no new strum at 02:31:263 -

02:34:367 (154367|5,154573|4) - ^ same situation.

02:37:677 (157677|3,157884|2) - ^

02:45:953 (165953|2,166160|1) - ^


02:54:642 (174642|1,174642|2) - add one more note to make it chord for snares, same as you did at 03:01:263 (181263|1,181263|5,181263|0) - . The part is just too easy for the entire difficulty and I think its good to make it chords. With that being said, apply the same as the following:
• 02:55:470 (175470|1,175470|2) -
• 02:56:298 (176298|1,176298|2) -
• 02:57:125 (177125|2,177125|1) -
• 02:57:953 (177953|2,177953|1) -
• 02:58:780 (178780|1,178780|2) -
• 02:59:608 (179608|1,179608|2) -
• 03:00:436 (180436|1,180436|2,180436|3) - (add one more note for cymbal differ)
• 03:02:918 (182918|3,182918|4) -
• 03:03:746 (183746|1,183746|3) -
* You decide mate~

03:07:884 - add notes here since snare with guitar. Do like you did at 03:10:367 (190367|4,190367|1) -
03:08:711 - ^
03:09:539 - ^

04:14:589 - add note to 2 since strong start cymbals.

04:19:843 - add chord here for that consistent snare end.

04:28:403 (268403|3,268572|3) - move to 3 for hand balance.

04:36:284 - this pattern really looks neat!

04:39:758 (279758|1,279843|0,279843|2,279928|1,280182|2,280182|0,280267|1,280352|0,280352|2) - you might want to rearrange these brackets, it gives an uncomfortable feeling. You decide~

04:50:945 (290945|0,291030|2) - swap column so it can be clearer to execute.

oh I forgot, 04:03:742 - you might want to add some notes for those guitar inorder to solve the Breaktime issue. Sadly, breaktime is not allowed in mania if there are instruments playing in that breaktime.

[Overall]
Nice song choice, its Dragon Force after all >w<)b
I will pm you once I need a mod, I hope my mod helps. Thank you and Goodluck~ :)



~ END OF MOD ~
00:32:952 (32952|1,33121|0) - Accepted.
00:43:121 - Oh of course. Accepted.
00:44:477 (44477|2,44477|0,44647|3,44647|1,44816|2,44816|4,44986|3,44986|1) - I changed them to LN.
00:46:342 (46342|0,46342|5) - Accepted.
01:05:748 (65748|1,65918|1) - Of course.
01:06:426 (66426|5,66511|4,66596|5) - Same.
01:13:630 - Accepted.
01:14:138 - Accepted.
01:14:308 (74308|4) - I removed the note on No.3.
02:21:426 & 02:24:436 - Accepted.
02:31:263 (151263|4) - I think there should be a note here, rejected.
02:34:367 (154367|5,154573|4) - 02:37:677 (157677|3,157884|2) - 02:45:953 (165953|2,166160|1) - Same above, rejected.
04:03:742 - Accepted. I add lots of 1/4 here until 04:12:555.
Thank you so much Arcwin, you give me lots of useful mods :3
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Arzenvald
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Topic Starter
Arzenvald
alright! pause the mod. redownload before you apply those mods! i added storyboard & fixed my part again

not updated yet
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
double post.. updated!

added 4K Difficulty for 4K Players
dionzz99
677 posts
Joined April 2013
dionzz99
THIS IS MY CHATLOGYYYYYY!!!
21:03 ajeemaniz: mz
21:03 *ajeemaniz is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1024052 Dragonforce - Symphony Of The Night]
21:04 dionzz99: YAH BG NYA
21:04 ajeemaniz: 6K pls
21:04 *dionzz99 is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1022326 Dragonforce - Symphony Of The Night [6K Collab Legend]] <osu!mania> |6K|
21:04 dionzz99: yeeee
21:04 dionzz99: GG
21:07 ajeemaniz: enable SB
21:07 dionzz99: EH
21:07 dionzz99: BG gw 100% Dim
21:07 ajeemaniz: jadi tau part gw dan part si wolf yg mana
21:08 dionzz99: ooo
21:08 dionzz99: hmm perasaan gw aj atau vocalis nya ganti org
21:08 ajeemaniz: ngga ah
21:08 ajeemaniz: vocal tuning nya beda mungkin
21:10 ajeemaniz: fakhing jack
21:10 dionzz99: ^yes
21:10 dionzz99: fahking jack [2]
21:11 ajeemaniz: SEKARANG 4K :D
21:11 ajeemaniz: 34 1221 4334 1212 3434
21:11 dionzz99: AISSHH
21:17 dionzz99: YEEE
21:17 dionzz99: MINI JACK LU HAMPIR JADI MEME "HOW TO BREAK COMBO"
21:17 ajeemaniz: omg kepencet esc
21:17 ajeemaniz: oh
21:17 ajeemaniz: LOL
21:17 ajeemaniz: mod
21:17 ajeemaniz: ty
21:18 dionzz99: - puxtu 2k14-now
21:18 ajeemaniz: > bukan pattern insanity
21:18 ajeemaniz: entah kenapa males ngeluarin pattern yg biasa gw map
21:18 dionzz99: gpp
21:19 dionzz99: sedikit impruv mapping style
21:19 ajeemaniz: gw anggap ini sbg penurunan
21:20 dionzz99: wait klo gk salah ad LN nyebelin
21:20 dionzz99: dimana ya..
21:20 dionzz99: GILA ITU GARIS ATAU KARPET BIRU http://puu.sh/pVLjx.jpg
21:21 ajeemaniz: itu bukan part gw
21:21 ajeemaniz: maklum dia baru pertama kali bikin collab
21:22 ajeemaniz: biar gampang nunjukin part punya dia.. ckckck
21:22 dionzz99: ooo pantes
21:25 dionzz99: oke itu LN nyebelinny7a
21:25 dionzz99: dapet
21:25 dionzz99: 03:11:401 (191401|0,191504|1) - 
21:25 ajeemaniz: which one
21:25 ajeemaniz: astaga
21:26 ajeemaniz: gitu doang nyebelin
21:26 ajeemaniz: QwQ tega
21:26 dionzz99: panjangnya 1/4 aj
21:26 dionzz99: aiyooooo itu reflek player dilepas 1/4 daripada 1/2
21:26 ajeemaniz: ok
21:31 ajeemaniz: ada lagi?
21:32 dionzz99: ini minijacknya ada fungsi apa ya lel
21:32 dionzz99: 03:38:298 (218298|0,218401|0) - 
21:33 dionzz99: klo buat ngeselin player yg lagi tegang udh FC sih gk tau lah awkawkwakaw
21:35 ajeemaniz: bagus itu
21:35 ajeemaniz: 99% safe pattern
21:35 ajeemaniz: 0.000001% shit pattern
21:35 dionzz99: 0,999998% ngeselin
21:36 dionzz99: 0,000001% nya sumbangan buat DragonForce
21:37 dionzz99: welp.. minijack yg diatas atasnya itu reasonable lah.. ad musiknya ngewakilin
21:37 dionzz99: 05:16:003 (316003|0,316069|1) - YHA INI MAS
21:37 dionzz99: ORG UDH SENENG FC LU KASI NOTE INI
21:37 ajeemaniz: lah
21:37 ajeemaniz: itu enak kali
21:38 ajeemaniz: bikin  artificial stairs
21:38 dionzz99: leh mending tambah notenya di atas LN itu
21:38 ajeemaniz: dah
21:38 ajeemaniz: ok
21:38 dionzz99: sip
21:39 ajeemaniz: ada lagi? 6K gitu
21:41 dionzz99: welp..
21:41 dionzz99: walaupun gw ccd LN
21:41 dionzz99: no change lah
21:41 dionzz99: menurut gw udh pas
21:41 ajeemaniz: woooo cool
21:41 ajeemaniz: okay!
21:41 dionzz99: soalnya gw gk bisa LN + gk tau LN yg bener itu apa
21:42 ajeemaniz: cari suara yg nge mimick pattern LN nya lah
21:42 dionzz99: yg gw tau ya shit noodle LN unsnapped unstable kek o2jam
21:42 ajeemaniz: lol
21:42 dionzz99: dan itu yg gw butuhkan
21:42 dionzz99: asupan mie o2jam
21:42 ajeemaniz: okesip post irc?
21:42 dionzz99: SIP GPP
Arzenvald
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Arzenvald
4K updated!
waiting for couple more mods and ready for BN check
Another Lie
Another Lie
Map terpanjang & terbaik ke 3 yg pernah gw mod

4k Legend
part sini 00:37:020 - sampai sini 00:38:376 - coba diganti kyk 00:35:664 - sampai 00:35:664 -
00:48:545 (48545|1,48545|0,48545|2,48545|3) - knp harus 4? apa ga bisa 3 aja kyk dibawahnya?

6k Collab
01:21:765 - part sini sampai 01:25:833 - apa ga dijadiin sama kyk dibawah? (jack part i mean)
Lanjutkan :D
Surono
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Surono

ajeemaniz wrote:

double post.. updated!

added 4K Difficulty for 4K Players
Tatsujin difficulty when

kalau buru2 ngebet di kepala sambil bernafas, tinggalkan hamba.. setidaknya jawab "y" atau "n".,
Arzenvald
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Topic Starter
Arzenvald

Another Lie wrote:

Map terpanjang & terbaik ke 3 yg pernah gw mod

[4k Legend]part sini 00:37:020 - sampai sini 00:38:376 - coba diganti kyk 00:35:664 - sampai 00:35:664 - // applied
00:48:545 (48545|1,48545|0,48545|2,48545|3) - knp harus 4? apa ga bisa 3 aja kyk dibawahnya? // keep beda pitch relevancy, di emphasize

[6k Collab]01:21:765 - part sini sampai 01:25:833 - apa ga dijadiin sama kyk dibawah? (jack part i mean) // betul sih, cuman kudu di pertimbangin playability juga, klo semua jack bisa kena nuke dari player.. nanti bisa aja di change kok C:
Lanjutkan :D
singkat padat berisi.. ntah kenapa lebih suka mod seperti ini (daripada yg panjang panjang move 1 add 2 delete 3 bla bla wkwkwk)

thanks!
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
_underjoy
Hello,
M4M as you requested (only 4K though)
nice bg lmao

the mod inside
00:13:460 (13460|0,13799|0) - those are single but 00:13:460 (13460|0,13799|0,16003|2,16003|0,16172|0,16172|2) - these not, I think you should make all single. 00:16:511 (16511|2,16511|1) - oh this also
00:11:257 (11257|0,11765|2) - also I don't know what are the LN in this section following, if vocal then they're not accurate, if guitar then... well my headphones are bad so i can't tell if they're correct
00:17:698 (17698|3) - is this for vocal? because it seems like you are following vocal at this section which means the LN aren't accurate (the vocal in many parts is different that what you mapped)
00:20:748 - oshit inversions. I'm a fan of that but I don't know if it's justified enough xD
00:21:935 (21935|3) - I would throw this LN off and start the next section with a triple. Better accent.
00:22:698 (22698|2,22867|1,23376|0,24054|2,24732|1) - ghost notes. Also, clear up the chords when you delete them (to make sense with the deleted notes)
00:45:494 - add 2, the 3-2-1 note distribution doesn't make sense.
00:45:833 - add a LN at 1, ending like the second one. (for the vocal cool effect)
00:46:426 - you should add a note at 4 here
01:03:121 (63121|2,63291|2,63460|2,63630|2,63799|2,63969|2,64138|2,64308|2) - that's a big anchor here, 01:03:630 (63630|2) - move to 2 for the better trill and anchor break.
Side note: I don't really know how are you layering the 3-chords but I think that you should add more of them especially at the starts and middles of the chorus sections or so
01:04:816 (64816|2) - move to 1 to make it similar to previous 3-chords, also 01:04:986 (64986|1,64986|0,65071|3,65071|2,65155|1,65155|0,65240|2,65240|3,65325|0,65325|1,65410|2,65494|3,65494|1,65494|0,65664|3,65664|2,65748|1) - ctrl+H this afterwards
01:06:681 - this section is too much faced from right to left, I think you should change the flow here by 01:07:274 (67274|0,67359|2,67359|3) - ctrl+H this fragment
01:08:037 (68037|3,68037|1,68206|0,68376|3,68376|1,68545|2,68715|0,68715|2,69393|1,69393|3,69562|0,69562|2,69732|2,69732|0) - that's quite a lot of [13][24] chords without a clear reason, I think you should 01:08:715 (68715|0,68884|1) - swap those notes at least, to make it one chord less. (it just looks better)
01:10:579 (70579|3,70664|2,70833|2,70918|3,71003|2,71172|2,71257|3,71342|2) - this is really mindblocking in my opinion, I think you should try to invert the latter trills, so 01:11:172 (71172|2,71257|3,71342|2,71511|2,71596|3,71681|2,71850|2,71935|3,72020|2) - you should make it 434 434 instead of 343 343 (it plays better while retaining your idea)
01:12:528 (72528|1,72613|0,72698|1,72867|1,72952|0,73037|1,73206|1,73291|0,73376|1) - the same
^ if you want to save the [12]343[12] connection between the notes, you can alternatively swap those 01:10:579 (70579|3,70664|2) - and those 01:12:274 (72274|0,72359|1) - to make it easier to transition into.
01:16:511 (76511|3,76511|2,76596|1,76681|3,76681|0,76765|1,76850|3,76850|2) - avoid this pattern. try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5584050. also swap 01:17:189 (77189|1,77274|2) - those notes if you apply that (breaking the anchor)
01:22:274 (82274|2,82359|3,82443|2,82528|3,82613|2) - , 01:22:782 (82782|3,82867|2,82952|3,83037|2,83121|3,83206|2,83291|3,83376|2,83460|3) - that's a real difficulty spike as the trill is not really suggested by the music and it doesn't happen everywhere else.
use this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5584061
01:27:359 (87359|3,87359|1,87443|2) - move one column to the left, feels better
01:43:121 (103121|0,103121|1) - this chord feels weird as I can't hear the sound for it, I think mapping chords to characteristic vocal here is a good option (icyworld style)
01:47:443 - you can safely add a minijack at 4 here
01:55:833 (115833|2,115918|3,116003|2,116087|3,116172|2,116257|3,116426|3,116511|2,116681|3,116681|2,116850|2,116935|3,117020|2,117104|3,117189|2) - 01:57:952 (117952|1,118037|0,118121|1,118206|0,118376|0,118460|1,118545|0,118630|1) - there are some errors with hand bias, you should repattern that section a bit (occasional trills are okay but not in settings like this)
01:59:138 (119138|3,119308|2,119477|1,119647|0) - I don't hear those notes, maybe consider leaving just the chords and making 01:59:393 - a triple?
03:35:608 (215608|0,215815|0,216022|0,216229|2,216436|2,216642|2,216849|2,217056|2) - I don't get those LN, the guitar makes different sound each time so why are they set like this?
03:45:642 - I think you can put a 2 here, and move 03:45:746 (225746|1) - to 1 to make a minijack that plays good (to accent the drum which you used only 1 note for)
04:00:125 (240125|1) - I don't think a double is necessary, especially that the bass is silent. delete this one
04:06:453 - that should definitely be a triple.
04:07:809 - ^
04:08:487 - 04:08:826 - same
04:12:131 (252131|0,252131|3,252131|2,252386|3,252386|0,252386|1) - i don't understand this at all. Why dont you map a jumpstream here? You skipped many sounds.
04:25:606 (265606|3,265691|3,265775|2,265860|3,265945|2,266030|2) - move the jack to the second hand, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5584150 this works very well

the last chorus is on fire though, good job

gl usagi :3
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ok its mean no, no is no. bye
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ajeemaniz wrote:

singkat padat berisi.. ntah kenapa lebih suka mod seperti ini (daripada yg panjang panjang move 1 add 2 delete 3 bla bla wkwkwk)

thanks!
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Surono wrote:

ok its mean no, no is no. bye
OMG ngambek DDD:


00:11:257 (11257|0,11765|2) - also I don't know what are the LN in this section following, if vocal then they're not accurate, if guitar then... well my headphones are bad so i can't tell if they're correct // bass line, its very strong tho

00:17:698 (17698|3) - is this for vocal? because it seems like you are following vocal at this section which means the LN aren't accurate (the vocal in many parts is different that what you mapped) // you know my relationship with LNs... :^) just to emphasize last stanza with double layered LN like usual

00:22:698 (22698|2,22867|1,23376|0,24054|2,24732|1) - ghost notes. Also, clear up the chords when you delete them (to make sense with the deleted notes)// there's a slight guitar string in background, removed this 00:24:732 (24732|1) - one that really inaudible (will fix in 6K as well)

00:45:833 - add a LN at 1, ending like the second one. (for the vocal cool effect) // keep for monorhythm

00:46:426 - you should add a note at 4 here // not quiet sure, there's no sound either of guitar or drum

Side note: I don't really know how are you layering the 3-chords but I think that you should add more of them especially at the starts and middles of the chorus sections or so // trying to spice up each stanza with different structures gradually, so you won't find harsh pattern in beginning C:

01:04:816 (64816|2) - move to 1 to make it similar to previous 3-chords, also 01:04:986 (64986|1,64986|0,65071|3,65071|2,65155|1,65155|0,65240|2,65240|3,65325|0,65325|1,65410|2,65494|3,65494|1,65494|0,65664|3,65664|2,65748|1) - ctrl+H this afterwards // applied in sightly different way

01:10:579 (70579|3,70664|2,70833|2,70918|3,71003|2,71172|2,71257|3,71342|2) - this is really mindblocking in my opinion, I think you should try to invert the latter trills, so 01:11:172 (71172|2,71257|3,71342|2,71511|2,71596|3,71681|2,71850|2,71935|3,72020|2) - you should make it 434 434 instead of 343 343 (it plays better while retaining your idea) // gonna keep this part like this since you said its hard.. eheheheh :^)

but i swapped as you suggested in

01:16:511 (76511|3,76511|2,76596|1,76681|3,76681|0,76765|1,76850|3,76850|2) - avoid this pattern. try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5584050 . also swap 01:17:189 (77189|1,77274|2) - those notes if you apply that (breaking the anchor) // keep, gonna keep the rest of the map almost have no anchor (and trill pattern) except in bridge part / transition between stanzas like this.. some trill toned down as you suggested though

01:55:833 (115833|2,115918|3,116003|2,116087|3,116172|2,116257|3,116426|3,116511|2,116681|3,116681|2,116850|2,116935|3,117020|2,117104|3,117189|2) - 01:57:952 (117952|1,118037|0,118121|1,118206|0,118376|0,118460|1,118545|0,118630|1) - there are some errors with hand bias, you should repattern that section a bit (occasional trills are okay but not in settings like this) // and there we go about the gradually increased difficulty, since its 177, i guess some nazi trill can be ok C:

01:59:138 (119138|3,119308|2,119477|1,119647|0) - I don't hear those notes, maybe consider leaving just the chords and making 01:59:393 - a triple? // there's some low tom there o3o
not replied means done! thank you uj! very helpful! i'll consider to reduce those anchors & trills when i feel i like it

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I'll probably take a look at this :d
testplay first, mod incoming soon
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[4K Legend]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5585865
Pretty comfortable overall, SV is readable ' w'b
Streams are ok, balanced and just right imo
Just that some parts with the mini LNs felt a little weird ( didn't go well with finger movements, mayb? ) eg 01:45:494 (105494|2,105494|3,105664|2,105664|3) - , I'll check it out so yeah
Also, I just realised 4K diffu doesn't have SB? lol

[6K Collab Legend]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5585826
I got killed by BLUE DRAGON's twin brother :') ( unless it's him back for revenge or something >_>... )
Overall feels fine, it should be passable. I don't have much experience with 6K so I can't comment much
I'll probably take a look at note consistency mainly and patterns for the parts I managed to play
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