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Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Thanks guys! :)
Kert
How do you like these snowflakes instead?



I also tried to find a better BG, but couldn't..
The closest to what I wanted to see is something like this:


Ayeen_old
Nothing much to say,

General:
Try advertise some more of your song in #modreqs. That will give some more attention and stars
Kiai time is too long?
If you can find a nicer BG, that would be cool
Mp3 bitrate is fine
If custom hit (300 elite, 300, 100,100 elite, 50) that would make it perfect with the circle overlay

Normal
Notice 1 spacing issue 00:50:666
Maybe lower approach rate 1 tick
Attached is the fixed issues i found in normal, just the spacing issue.
Download: Evanescence - Lithium (narakucrimson) [Normal].osu

Hard
I cant play much hard/insane - wont bother comment/mod


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Star donated ;)
Topic Starter
narakucrimson

CracK wrote:

How do you like these snowflakes instead?
[attachment=1:d356e]star2.png[/attachment:d356e] <- Maybe a more sky-blue version of this one would look cool, I'll try it.
[attachment=0:d356e]star2_2.png[/attachment:d356e]

I also tried to find a better BG, but couldn't..
The closest to what I wanted to see is something like this:


Well no, I still preffer my bg xD
Thanks for taking the time!

Ayeen wrote:

Nothing much to say,

General:
Try advertise some more of your song in #modreqs. That will give some more attention and stars Ok :3
Kiai time is too long? Nah it's just ok
If you can find a nicer BG, that would be cool I like the one I used eOe
Mp3 bitrate is fine
If custom hit (300 elite, 300, 100,100 elite, 50) that would make it perfect with the circle overlay That's not hard to do~~

Normal
Notice 1 spacing issue 00:50:666
Maybe lower approach rate 1 tick
Attached is the fixed issues i found in normal, just the spacing issue.
[attachment=0:d356e]Evanescence - Lithium (narakucrimson) [Normal].osu[/attachment:d356e]

Hard
I cant play much hard/insane - wont bother comment/mod


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Star donated ;)
Ok, thanks!
lolcubes
Hey, here's some stuff I came up with.

[General]:
  1. Consider changing the color of spinner approach circle to something else, I feel like orange doesn't really fit, maybe white or silver.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:50:031 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  2. 00:50:158 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  3. 00:52:065 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  4. 00:52:192 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  5. 01:02:234 - OPTIONAL: Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio. (the reason why this is optional is because this section skips the drum very often, so it may not fit best)
  6. 01:02:361 - If the above change is made, ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  7. 01:18:505 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  8. 01:18:633 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  9. 01:28:675 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  10. 01:28:802 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  11. 01:36:301 (4) - Instead of a whistle, put a clap at the end of the slider.
  12. 02:00:454 (3) - Instead of a whistle, put a clap at the start of the slider.
  13. 02:19:521 (2) - Instead of a whistle, put a clap at the start of the slider.
  14. 02:20:538 (3,4) - Put claps on these.
  15. 02:21:556 (5) - Put claps on the start and the middle of the returning slider. Put a whistle at the end.
  16. 02:56:133 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  17. 02:56:260 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  18. 03:14:438 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  19. 03:14:565 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
[Hard]:
  1. 00:40:370 (1,2,3) - Finish on all three notes.
  2. 00:44:438 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:54:099 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  4. 00:54:226 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  5. 01:08:336 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  6. 01:08:463 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  7. 01:28:675 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  8. 01:28:802 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  9. 01:36:811 (7) - Remove whistle, add clap instead.
  10. 01:42:912 (3) - ^
  11. 02:45:200 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  12. 02:45:327 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  13. 02:50:031 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  14. 02:50:158 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  15. 02:52:065 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  16. 02:52:192 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  17. 03:02:488 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  18. 03:02:616 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  19. 03:14:438 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  20. 03:14:565 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  21. 03:22:573 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  22. 03:22:700 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  23. 03:23:336 (8) - Add a clap.
  24. 03:28:675 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  25. 03:28:802 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  26. 03:29:946 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  27. 03:30:073 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  28. 03:30:709 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  29. 03:30:836 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  30. 03:30:455 (6) - At the end of the slider, remove finish and add clap.
[Lan's Sorrow]:
  1. 00:50:031 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  2. 00:50:158 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  3. 00:54:099 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  4. 00:54:226 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  5. 01:04:268 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  6. 01:04:395 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  7. 01:06:302 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  8. 01:06:429 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  9. 01:08:336 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  10. 01:08:463 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  11. 01:14:183 (2) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  12. 01:14:438 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  13. 01:14:565 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  14. 01:16:216 (5) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  15. 01:16:471 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  16. 01:16:599 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  17. 01:18:251 (2) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  18. 01:18:505 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  19. 01:18:632 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  20. 01:20:539 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  21. 01:20:666 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  22. 01:20:793 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  23. 01:20:921 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  24. 01:21:048 (5) - Remove whistle from the end of the slider, add a clap instead.
  25. 01:35:793 (1) - Remove whistle from the middle of the returning slider, add a clap instead.
  26. 01:36:556 (2) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
  27. 01:36:810 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  28. 01:36:938 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  29. 02:11:387 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  30. 02:11:514 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  31. 02:13:421 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  32. 02:13:548 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  33. 02:15:200 (2) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  34. 02:15:454 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  35. 02:15:582 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  36. 02:51:810 (3) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  37. 02:52:065 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  38. 02:52:192 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  39. 02:59:945 (2) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  40. 03:00:200 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  41. 03:00:327 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  42. 03:01:979 (5) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  43. 03:02:234 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  44. 03:02:361 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  45. 03:04:014 (2) - Remove the clap from the start of the slider.
  46. 03:04:268 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  47. 03:04:395 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  48. 03:06:048 (2) - Remove the clap from the start and add it at the end of the slider instead.
  49. 03:06:302 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  50. 03:06:429 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  51. 03:06:810 (3) - Add clap at the start of the slider.
  52. 03:14:183 (3) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
  53. 03:14:438 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  54. 03:14:565 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  55. 03:22:319 (3) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
  56. 03:22:573 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  57. 03:22:700 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  58. 03:30:454 (3) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
  59. 03:30:709 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  60. 03:30:836 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
  61. 03:32:488 (2) - Remove clap from the start of the slider.
  62. 03:32:743 - Add inheriting timing section and set soft custom override 2 under Audio.
  63. 03:32:870 - ^ just like the above but set to custom override 1.
Apologies for the lengthy post, ridiculous amount of copy paste and the hitsound nazi, but I believe that these changes would make a huge difference.
Nice work, very little stuff I could find. Only the hitsounds got my attention, the rest looks very nice. Starred and good luck.
:)

Also here are the hitsounds you will need for the changes I made.

Download: hitsounds.zip
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Sorry for everything I explained on irc lolcubes ;_;

I did change the approach circle btw :3 I'll submit it soon~~
Raimon
Me encanta el beatmap en conjunto + la canción :D STAR!! :D
Mok
Okay, here i come!

[Normal]
00:40:369 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:10:116 - 01:11:133 - Add.

[Hard]
01:02:997 (5,6,7,8,9) - I would flip vertically this.

[Lanttu]
00:48:760 (1) - I don't really like it.

All! Good job!
Topic Starter
narakucrimson

Mok wrote:

Okay, here i come!

[Normal]
00:40:369 (1) - Remove New Combo. Ok!
01:10:116 - 01:11:133 - Add.

[Hard]
01:02:997 (5,6,7,8,9) - I would flip vertically this. Hmm it's not a bad idea but I still preffer the symmetry

[Lanttu]
00:48:760 (1) - I don't really like it. Lanttu said she won't change it ;_;

All! Good job!
Thanks :3
Louis Cyphre
comboburst img, remove it. It dosn't fit to the song and BG at all. Also it's standart template comboburst, why did you put it in folder?
Offset is not same in all difficulties. Make them absoutely same
01:51:938 - not sure about such break
03:39:607 (6) - this note is off.

[Normal]
Discrease volume.

01:47:743 - start spinner there and end here 01:50:031
03:34:014 - same
Final note sounds off. Remove it. Well, you can add spinner from 03:37:827~03:39:734 and silence the end.

Good luck
Topic Starter
narakucrimson

Louis Cyphre wrote:

comboburst img, remove it. It dosn't fit to the song and BG at all. Also it's standart template comboburst, why did you put it in folder? Oh god I forgot to remove it! I was going to do some stuff on it but at some point decided not to, but apparently forgot to remove it eOe
Offset is not same in all difficulties. Make them absoutely same. Oh sure
01:51:938 - not sure about such break
03:39:607 (6) - this note is off. On Normal, I removed it. But not on the other diffs.

[Normal]
Discrease volume. Nah it's just ok

01:47:743 - start spinner there and end here 01:50:031
03:34:014 - same
Final note sounds off. Remove it. Well, you can add spinner from 03:37:827~03:39:734 and silence the end. Hmm I'll leave nothing after the kiai finishes in Normal, I guess

Good luck
Thanks! Might take a while to full submit xD
Neko_Ray
Normal
01:51:810 (2): Si lo mueves al 01:52:065 ?

Eso es todo, el map en si es... awesome! 8-)
Topic Starter
narakucrimson

Neko_Ray wrote:

Normal
01:51:810 (2): Si lo mueves al 01:52:065 ? Hmm siento como que no sé... Le quitaría... Sabor (?)

Eso es todo, el map en si es... awesome! 8-)
Muchas gracias!! :D
Sure
BPM is wrong. :o
BPM 117.975 is fine to me.


[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]
03:39:607 (6) - maybe new combo?


[Lan's Sorrow]
01:51:827 (9) - new combo due to spacing and speed were changed.
01:52:590 (1) - then remove new combo


Anyway beautiful map. 8-)
Andrea
[Lan's Sorrow]

01:51:810 (9) - I agree with carrot about this, add a new combo here due to BPM and spacing change.
01:52:573 (1) - Remove new combo as carrot said about this too.

02:22:700 (1) - Add custom clap here?

Also, I agree with the new BPM that carrot gave you.

You don't need to change the offset... just resnap all notes, green lines, etc.
Lanttu
New combos and offset changed~ :3
Download: Evanescence - Lithium (narakucrimson) [Lan's Sorrow].osu
Andrea
Go fix the timing on Normal and I'll bubble :P
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Timing fixed on all difficulties :D
Andrea
That's cool.

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Excellent~
EvianBubble
Oh it's bubbled already D; Well you don't have to do this if you don't want to then, I just kept forgetting to post -_-"
You might want to add "the open door" to tags, since it's the album name :P

How the heck did you get BAT attention so quickly? Seriously, tell me your secret please D;

GOGOGOGOGOGO ;P
Selee
I'm too slow at modding ;_; sorry..

Star for Evanescence~ Can't wait this to be ranked ..
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Cool :P Thanks!
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Oh Evian, it's a secret, after all :P
James2250
Needs to be submitted again~
The no video version is fine but with the video you only get Hard when you download. Call me back when fixed

(Thanks kirby for double check)
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Reuploaded~~
Megaparadox
star!!1
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Added "the open door" to tags (and since the search engine isn't case-sensitive, there won't be any problems with capitals)
yeahyeahyeahhh
Stepping in for James, don't hate me :3

Here's your bubble back.
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
:3
James2250

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Stepping in for James, don't hate me :3
No prob, I can barely keep up with half the maps I have to recheck :P

Alot of kiai time usage..I guess it all fits though

Hard:
-This has starts too high for a Hard right now (and doesn't look good compared to Normal) Do at least -1 on HP/AR/OD
03:39:646 (6) - new combo might make this easier to read

Call me back after fixes and I will rank~
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Ok, done~
James2250
I kinda like the skin, all looks good

Ranked~
Firo Prochainezo
Congratulations! :)
Gonzvlo
Great Job!

Congrats.
Topic Starter
narakucrimson
Thanks guys! :3
SapphireGhost
Good map and stuff~
Only one complaint beeeing:I always seem to get a 100 on the (1) cause I can't see the end. Other than that, nice indeed
Beuchi
I love you.
Topic Starter
narakucrimson

Beuchi-chan wrote:

I love you.
Is it ok to say "thanks" to this? :3
Armin
Oh MAI GOD I LOVE THIS MAP AND EVANESCENCE
LAN' S SORROW IS JUST AWWW çWç

10/10, you really deserve it!
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