MYTH & ROID - Paradisus-Paradoxum

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StarrStyx

ProfessionalBox wrote:

did u pick the bg up from my trash can xd?
sorta xd
rem>emilia
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major mods on the extras

major


having four overkill extreme diffs and nothing between 4.9 and 5.8 seems kinda dumb :eeeeee
-.<.<y.


kamal
- 00:24:614 - should be clickable and not a sliderend since you decided to add huge jumps on these guys 00:22:823 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - its basically the same instrument so ye smth likethis would b great as you did here 00:26:853 -
- 00:25:659 - doesnt ncing like this makes more sense bc of the strong sounds
- 00:27:972 - either remove this triple or add a circle here 00:28:569 - for conistency tho
- 00:29:092 - also i feel like this part is slightly too intense in terms of pressing/clicking. I see what you try to follow but going for more sliders to match the calm part seems more fitting to me [starr did a fantastic job here]
- 00:53:271 - and 00:54:465 - add ncs to match the previous ncs or remove the other onesss up2you
- 01:26:703 (2,1) - ignoring the vocal here even though you emphasized it so good here 01:24:315 - :((
- after playing this a few times 01:27:300 (1,2,3) - kicks me out everytime. Slider starts on the blue tick, which shouldnt be a problem at all. But in combination with the vocal on the white tick it just feels ew. Going for something like ee3ee would make everyone happy


hvick
- there is absolutly nothing here 00:09:614 (6) - and ppl told me that overmapping is a bad thinG //
- 00:15:062 - might add a nc here so its easier to read the 1/1 gap // a 00:16:256 - 01:14:763 - 01:15:957 -
- 00:28:345 (8) - nc because of the squirly sound here, as you already did before like 00:28:345 (1) - or 00:28:345 (1) -
- 00:42:226 - should probably be clickable since vocal+clap, if you dont want to change too much, an extended slider would be k here http://puu.sh/pUKQX/66da63074c.jpg
- 00:46:704 (1,1,1) - 1/3 tho
- 01:27:226 - instead of adding the triple here i would rather follow the drums and add a circle here 01:27:375 - and even here 01:27:524 - (or smth like 01:28:047 (2,3) - would also work)
- some nc swapssss i would recommend - 01:25:957 (1,3) -
- and one more nc here 01:27:301 -


handsome
- 00:28:793 (1) - sliderpixels cant handle the curve nice
- 01:12:524 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vocal on 5 makes me think that the slider below starts on the red tick so either remove a circle and place the slider on the red tick or at least ctrl+g 6 otherwise this will be a pain in the asss
- 01:23:644 (8,2) - eee ew e
- after playin this a few times 00:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - feels really weird, increasing the spacing 1 -> 2 slightly helps a lot imo

sweet thing here


starr
- 00:08:047 (3,1,1) - oh, ncing like this would prob make more sense due to the quirky sounds
- 00:23:420 (4) - i feel like 4 gets too emphasized even though there isnt too much in the instrumentals, in contrary 00:22:972 - is a sliderend even though there is a strong sound :(( (->>>>>>>>>>>> http://puu.sh/pULWV/6c127bdd22.jpg)
- 00:28:569 - and 00:28:718 - are stronger than 00:28:420 - soooo mapping these aswell would make sense
- 00:55:062 - unpopular opinion- first few jumps are overdone. starting with medium jumps which lead into huge jumps would be way cooler and reasonsable


good diffs, gl
Kencho
[General]
  1. 我覺得kiai time應該需要統一一下
[Easy]
  1. 00:56:853 (1) - 取消NC,00:58:047 (3) - NC
[deetz' Less Insane]
  1. Missing video optc.flv
  2. 00:46:704 (1) - Distance spacing too close, move far away.
[Sing's Insane]
  1. 00:21:330 - Don't empty this, it is strange
  2. 00:28:047 (4,5,6,1) - This a bit difficult to read, player will easily wrong click 00:28:345 (1) - so move 00:28:345 (1,2,3) - to other place?
  3. 01:21:032 - Same problem 00:21:330 -
[Kamal's Extra]
  1. 00:08:793 (2) - Move to x348 y200 will be better flow
  2. 00:30:136 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:32:524 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Difficult to read, don't stack 1/2 circles is better.
[hvick225's Extra]
  1. OD8.5?
  2. 00:29:987 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:32:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這邊連打有點overmap,而且背景音那麼輕
  3. 01:16:554 (1,2) - 可以包好一點,看縮圈包
  4. 01:25:957 (1,2,3,5) - 沒疊好
[handsome's Master]
  1. 00:50:808 (3,1) - Stack?
[Re:Life]
  1. 00:55:957 (1,2,1,2) - 這兩組12換一下位置,相信我,這樣更順
  2. 00:56:853 (1,2,1,2) - 這兩組也是換一下位置更順,然後星數還加了0.01
  3. 01:09:912 (3) - 可以刪掉,然後01:09:838 (2) - 可以放在01:08:644 (2) - 的位置
-kevincela-
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Shoga
Re:Life
  1. 00:15:062 (3,3) - these 2 can be emphasizzed more imo
  2. 00:30:883 (3) - add something there? just a note there is bit underwhelming something like this 00:35:659 (3) but restructured it a bit
  3. 00:38:644 (2) - idk but stacks 3 on top of the start of 1 might be better than just the end of 1
  4. 01:14:614 (2,3) - Idk, it doesn't flow as well as 01:15:808 (2,3)
  • handsome's Master
  1. 00:56:256 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - great idea due to the vocal repeating. but what is this? Tengaku?(Nope, Tengaku is better) First the music there doesn't change anything. plus the vocal pitch at 00:55:957 (1,2) even higher than these. These are just repetitive, not stronger than these 00:55:957 (1,2). One thing it is played bad on purpose, gj
h3n+@!vick225's Extra
  1. 00:28:196 (7) - NC here?
  2. 00:56:256 (1,2) - idk should these 2 spaced out becuz of the previous momentum from these jumps 00:55:659 (1,2,1,2)?
deetz' Less Insane
  • dude, wut's poppn'?
  1. 00:07:301 (1,1,1) - idk but like the beat there is kinda constant but it is not that onstant it is a bit different for each one. may be rotate or do some thing.
  2. 00:33:569 (1) - extend to 00:34:166
  3. 00:57:450 (1,1,1) - ^2
Vert
88
Topic Starter
StarrStyx
Added hitsounds to diffs apart from deetz, sing and kevincela
finished the rest.
sahuang

Vert wrote:

88
wmw gugu
ikorza
relife is the wrong anime
-Mo-


Easy
- Kiai time disappeared somewhere.
- 01:28:196 (5) - Could make this a slider so that the beat on 01:28:345 is mapped.
- I can only find blanket issues after that, if you care enough to fix them.

sahuang's Normal
- 00:44:763 (6,1) - Pretty nazi thing, but when copying this, I would do a Ctrl+H rather than rotating so that it looks more symmetrical.
- 01:16:554 (1) - Also nazi but I don't think this is even. Drag the third white tick out a little more.
Sorry :|

deetz' Less Insane
- 01:14:166 (7) - NC here for the SV change, and I think it's worth placing a hitsound on the head too

Sing's Insane
- Combo colour 1 and 2 are too similar. I would try to make them omre distinguishable, or alternatively change the order of them so that these two colours aren't next to each other.
- 00:18:793 (3,4,1) - This is a weird stack and is pretty hard to read that this is a triple at the end.
- 00:28:047 (4,5,6,1) - This is also very confusing. Because of the pattern immediately prior, 00:27:599 (1,2,3), one would expect the rhythm to constantly stay on 1/4, and the stack you have on the next pattern suggests so, but there is a gap between 6 and 1. I would highly suggest moving 00:28:345 (1) elsewhere so that the timing is easier to read.
- 00:29:539 (3) - Whistle on the head.
- 01:14:166 (1) - Hitsound the head of this with a whistle or finish.
- 01:18:495 (3,4,1) - Another weird stack.

-kevincela-'s Extra
- 00:29:539 (3) - Whistle on the head.
- 00:49:390 (2,3,1) - Weird stack which makes read the triple kind of awkward.
- 01:14:166 (1) - Whistle or finish on head.

Hitsound copier OP.

Kamal's Extra
- 01:28:495 (1) - There's isn't anything significant on this beat that you can get away with not mapping this. It would also be consistent with the other difficulties if you removed this.

hvick225's Extra
- 00:10:435 (4) - A kick slider isn't necessary in my opinion.
- 00:13:868 (1,2,1) - I would have the spacing between these notes consistent.
- 00:46:903 (1,1) - I believe these should be snapped to 1/3, like in Kamal's difficulty.
- 01:02:226 (6) - I feel like the NC should be over here so that it matches the pitch change in the vocals.
- 01:11:778 (6) - Same thing here.

handsome's Master
- 01:28:495 (3) - Same as Kamal's diff where this can be removed if you wanted.

Re:Life
- 00:46:704 (1,2,1,2) - The timing of the beats gets kinda weird at this section of the music, and it seems like everyone is doing different things. I think 1/3 timing in Kamal's seems the most accurate, although not too intuitive to play. I would suggest being consistent though.
- 00:53:271 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps feel like they're out of nowhere compared to the music. It's fairly calm here so I don't think it needs such big jumps, but reducing does mess with your Star Rating Wars. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
- 01:14:166 (1) - Head is missing hitsound.
- 01:16:554 (1) - Minor: The curve of this slider seems a little off. I think you'll need two white points to make it smooth.

I'm bad at modding Extras.
Wing My Way
久等了 :)
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213,107,70435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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457,106,71480,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Sing
00:21:330 - Don't empty this, it is strange not rlly strange imo, plays to the violin and plays fine
00:28:047 (4,5,6,1) - This a bit difficult to read, player will easily wrong click 00:28:345 (1) - so move 00:28:345 (1,2,3) - to other place? fixed
01:21:032 - Same problem 00:21:330 same was above-
- Combo colour 1 and 2 are too similar. I would try to make them omre distinguishable, or alternatively change the order of them so that these two colours aren't next to each other. i think starr did those combo colors, so ill fix them myself lol
- 00:18:793 (3,4,1) - This is a weird stack and is pretty hard to read that this is a triple at the end. i dont think its weird, triple is not that hard to read, plus the end is a slider so theres slider leniency if u end up misreading the last circle, dont think ppl will misread the 2nd 1/1
- 00:28:047 (4,5,6,1) - This is also very confusing. Because of the pattern immediately prior, 00:27:599 (1,2,3), one would expect the rhythm to constantly stay on 1/4, and the stack you have on the next pattern suggests so, but there is a gap between 6 and 1. I would highly suggest moving 00:28:345 (1) elsewhere so that the timing is easier to read. fixed
- 00:29:539 (3) - Whistle on the head. fixed
- 01:14:166 (1) - Hitsound the head of this with a whistle or finish. fixed
- 01:18:495 (3,4,1) - Another weird stack. same as above
http://puu.sh/pY5AG/dc7637fad0.osu updated, ty for mods
-Mo-
wMw's Hard
- 00:21:032 (1) - This NC feels unecessary in my opinion.
- 00:43:420 (1,2,3) - I'd keep the spacing consistent if you can.
- 00:45:509 (1,2,3,4) - These have similar spacing, but the timing of 2-3 is shorter, which makes this pattern confusing to read.
- 00:59:539 - I would have this vocal note mapped, either by extending 00:59:241 (3) or placing a circle here (circle to stack ontop of 00:59:838 (1) would be pretty cool I think).
- 01:12:748 (3,4) - This is poor polarity (did you miss a circle on 01:12:674 ?)
- 01:14:166 (1) - Head seems to be missing hitsound.
- 01:21:330 (1) - Move this slightly futher away from 01:21:778 (2) so that there's consistent spacing.
SnowNiNo_
抱歉沒法摸HARD 對不起啦><
如你說的 注重維克DIFF和最高難度
注意 00:46:704 - 00:47:301 - 是1/3 如果有其他難度這邊是1/2或3/4的話會"可能"會被dq, 建議你過目所有的難度, 詳細 : p/5306411

  • [Re:Birth]
  1. 可多利用角落 但這絕對不是問題xd 只是我之前常常被小船點出來爾以=w=
  2. 00:08:345 - 這邊會不會有點太overmap了? 如果真的要在 00:08:495 - 00:08:942 - 加note的話 我建議把間距縮小, 畢竟重音不再這2個音 像是這樣 把黃1>2跟粉1>2的間距縮小, 這樣更能強調00:08:345 (1,3,1) - 的重音, 還有00:08:495 (2) - 不該有clap
  3. 00:14:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建議把這邊的間距擺得比00:13:271 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 還打, 因為這邊音調明顯升高, 用不同間距來分開這兩個部分
  4. 00:20:435 (3) - NC在這邊會比較好
  5. 00:25:659 (1) - 這NC 有目的嗎? 感覺沒必要
  6. 00:28:644 (5,1) - 間距擺大一點 強調00:28:793 (1) - , 還有00:28:495 (4,5) - 這邊也可以 因為這邊的小提琴聲音變高了, 可用不同間距來express/分開
  7. 00:29:092 (2) - 可nc 因為這邊是vocal的開始
  8. 00:37:748 (1) - 這nc也感覺不需要呢 有目的嗎:o?
  9. 00:45:808 (2) - 試試ctrl + g? 原本的flow可以但 ctrl + g感覺更順手
  10. 00:50:808 - 這note有必要? 如果是用來強調的話就留著八 但我覺得是有點overmap
  11. 00:58:495 (1,1,2) - 建議把1>1的間距擺得比1>2還大 因為重音不再00:59:092 (2) - 而是在00:58:942 (1) - 我知道你有用hs 但音樂的snare聲還是比較主要的 可以試試看這樣 你也可以照你的結構擺 不過 1>2的間距要拉小
  12. 01:08:793 - 這連打的間距可以在擺大一點來強調finisher跟鼓聲
  13. 01:15:360 (1,2) - stack here either, for consistent with 01:14:166 (1,2) -
  14. 01:20:733 (1) - 這不用NC八..
  15. 有些連打像是 00:52:077 - 00:13:271 - 等等, 你都會NC在地5個NOTE上 但我覺得不需要 因為間距沒變,方向也沒變,也沒有特別突出的音需要NC,hp也沒有高到需要做NC spam的地步, 考慮把這些nc拿掉八
  • [hvick225's Extra]
  1. ㄐㄓ作圖 尿
  2. 00:09:614 (6) - 很多餘 有目的嗎? 沒有的話可以刪掉了 感覺overmap =w=
  3. 00:10:136 (3,4) - 可以拉開點 不要stack 不好讀 尤其kick後的note又特別遠
  4. 00:09:092 (4) - nc for emphasized
  5. 00:12:077 (3) - 這要nc 而00:12:524 (1) - 不用
  6. 00:14:017 (2) - 把這也換成連打八 跟最高難度一樣 比較合音樂, 2個kick明顯不合八
  7. 00:14:166 - 跟最高難度同問題 去看一下八 但我覺得你這邊把 00:13:271 - 的間距縮小就好 00:14:166 - 已經夠大了 lol
  8. 00:21:330 (3) - nc for consistent
  9. 00:26:106 (3) - ^
  10. 00:28:345 (8) - 這邊可以nc 看你瞜
  11. 00:29:092 (2) - 這要nc 因為vocal從這開始
  12. 00:39:539 (4) - nc在這八 00:38:942 (1) - 不用nc
  13. 00:40:733 (3) - nc
  14. 00:46:704 - 注意是1/3 00:46:927 (1) - 要在00:46:903 - , 00:47:077 (1) - 要在00:47:102 -
  15. 00:50:584 (2,5) - 這有點醜阿 stack或擺遠點
  16. 00:55:957 (1,2) - 這間距我也是跪 只有你打得到八xd, 可以縮小點.., 因為你這邊00:56:256 (1,2) - 間距又突然縮很小 感覺很奇怪
  17. 00:58:495 (1,2,3,4) - 跟最高難度同問題 去看一下八, 可改成這樣
  18. 01:00:584 - 恩同問題
  19. 01:02:226 (6) - 怎不nc勒=w=
  20. 01:06:704 (3,4) - 別stack會比較好喔 因為這stack跟你整個結構很不合呢 你看看只有這邊stack其阿都是跳不覺得這stack很突兀嗎
  21. 01:11:778 (6) - 怎不nc勒=w= x2
  22. 01:14:166 (2) - 條一下八= =
  23. 01:14:166 (2) - 怎不nc勒=w= x3
  24. 01:14:763 (4,5) - 01:15:957 (3,4) - 這邊跟 00:15:062 (3,4) - 00:16:256 (3,4) - 統一一下, for consistent 整張圖的結構會比較好
  25. 01:18:868 - 一樣沒目的的話就刪掉八 感覺overmap
  26. 01:28:196 (3) - nc for emphasized
  27. 01:28:345 (4) - 這我建議這樣, 因為01:28:196 (3,4) - 很明顯有小提琴 所以2個物件最好要一樣 而這邊我覺得kick比較能表達小提琴 雖然note也是可以 看你八
  • [handsome's Master]
  1. lol the bg xd
  2. 00:19:166 (2) - is this note really necesasry? sound a bit overmapped for me
  3. 00:20:435 (2) - NC for emphasized?
  4. 00:46:704 - is 1/3 here
  5. 00:57:301 (2,1,2) - the spacing change is really awkward imo, cuz 00:57:450 (1,2) - is really intense either but the spacing is much smaller then 00:56:256 - , consider to increased the spacing
  6. 01:13:271 - the spacing change is quite intense imo, try to make them equal or make the spacing increased slowly cuz the pitch of the drum sound here didnt change
  7. 01:18:868 (2) - same
  8. 01:28:495 (3) - delete? isnt really necessary cuz there isnt a sound here obviously, the music clearly stop at the violin sound 01:28:420 -


多摸一個DIFF 這樣時間才比較公平 :D
記得那邊是1/3阿
GL~
乾這圖花了我一小時摸 =W=
-ClariS-
  • [撒谎]
    00:15:062 (2,3) - 00:16:256 (5,6) - 这两个地方是跟vocal吧,可是只在第一个note上面哨子就感觉不像是跟vocal了
    01:14:166 (1,2) - ^
    00:35:360 (3) - 这个滑条可以不要吧
    01:06:704 - 漏着总感觉不太舒服
    01:18:047 - 01:18:495 - 为啥不要了
  • [呜喵王]
    00:13:271 (5,6,1,2) - 这几个短滑条摆好看点不行吗....还有最后一个是四连简直坑
    00:17:898 (2) - 放1尾巴上吧
    00:57:450 (1,2,1,2) - 间距和NC配起来简直不能再坑
    01:07:002 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这里为什么是3/4塞爆.....
    01:23:718 (1,2,3) - 滑条从大白线起吧...或者圈塞爆
    01:26:256 (2,3) - 节奏上ctrl+G
    01:27:002 - 塞上吧
    01:28:196 (4) - 折返如何
-NanoRIPE-
Hi ~ NM request from my q

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:09:689 (1) - maybe finish?
00:44:315 (1) - ^ (cymbal emphatize)
00:46:704 (4) - straight sliders ~ (i dont like a flow when a slider have same position with previous slider)
00:52:674 (1) - add finish instead (cymbal emphatize)
01:23:718 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:09:689 (1) - finish
00:18:793 (3) - ^
00:19:241 (1,3) - i think straight sliders would be better (it looks little bit curve)
00:53:271 (2) - move to (391,117) for better blanket
00:58:495 (4) - what about finish?
01:16:554 (1,1) - littie bit overlap
01:23:718 (1) - finish
01:28:196 (7) - NC?

[Hard] nice diff name
00:19:241 (1,4) - are u sure about this overlap?
00:20:584 (1) - remove NC (it looks unnecessary)
00:21:629 (1) - ^
00:41:927 (1,2) - too close
00:49:689 (1) - remove NC
00:50:883 (1) - ^
00:52:674 (1) - i think finish would be better
00:55:957 (1) - remove NC
00:59:539 - add circle here (follow vocal)
01:05:211 (1) - remove NC
01:06:405 (1) - ^
01:07:599 (1) - ^
01:12:748 (3) - move the circle to white tick
01:23:121 (1) - remove NC and NC the next one and then remove NC again at 01:23:718
01:25:211 (1,2) - make it closer

GL ~ and sorry for my terrible english and short mod ;w;
Shad0w1and
sing
change your combo color or separate them based on color groups, your NC does not help much on these patterns because of you combo colors
00:18:793 (3) - this sound does not deserve such a high DS
00:19:689 (2) - 211-328 works better for me
01:06:256 (2,4) - blanket better
stacking leniency 7 let osu take care of these patterns 01:18:495 (3,4,1) -

deetz
00:28:644 (9) - 1/4 slider and add a note on downbeat?

sahuang
00:14:465 (1,2,1,2) - 这两组音是一样的,都用3/4算了
00:16:853 (1) - 建议延长到 00:17:748 -
00:19:241 (1,4) - 尽量别overlap好看点
01:00:733 (4) - 这个间距对hard有点JB

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/474696
hehe

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

  • [handsome's Master]
  1. lol the bg xd xd
  2. 00:19:166 (2) - is this note really necesasry? sound a bit overmapped for me fits with the music
  3. 00:57:301 (2,1,2) - the spacing change is really awkward imo, cuz 00:57:450 (1,2) - is really intense either but the spacing is much smaller then 00:56:256 - , consider to increased the spacing antijump is intended as the music changed drastically
  4. 01:28:495 (3) - delete? isnt really necessary cuz there isnt a sound here obviously, the music clearly stop at the violin sound 01:28:420 - theres a soft echo
rest fixed http://puu.sh/pYYTh/40745c64f8.zip
sahuang

-Mo- wrote:

sahuang's Normal
- 00:44:763 (6,1) - Pretty nazi thing, but when copying this, I would do a Ctrl+H rather than rotating so that it looks more symmetrical.
i'm avoiding 00:44:017 (4,1) - overlap w
- 01:16:554 (1) - Also nazi but I don't think this is even. Drag the third white tick out a little more. k

-ClariS- wrote:

  • [撒谎]
    00:15:062 (2,3) - 00:16:256 (5,6) - 这两个地方是跟vocal吧,可是只在第一个note上面哨子就感觉不像是跟vocal了 就当vocal音不同吧
    01:14:166 (1,2) - ^
    00:35:360 (3) - 这个滑条可以不要吧
    01:06:704 - 漏着总感觉不太舒服 就漏
    01:18:047 - 01:18:495 - 为啥不要了 break下

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ NM request from my q
[Normal]
00:09:689 (1) - finish
00:18:793 (3) - ^ n
00:19:241 (1,3) - i think straight sliders would be better (it looks little bit curve)
00:53:271 (2) - move to (391,117) for better blanket
00:58:495 (4) - what about finish?
01:16:554 (1,1) - littie bit overlap doesnt matter,long duration
01:23:718 (1) - finish n
01:28:196 (7) - NC? no
No rep=fixed ty

Shad0w1and wrote:

sahuang
00:14:465 (1,2,1,2) - 这两组音是一样的,都用3/4算了 o
00:16:853 (1) - 建议延长到 00:17:748 - ?
00:19:241 (1,4) - 尽量别overlap好看点 ?
01:00:733 (4) - 这个间距对hard有点JB ?
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288,229,31181,6,0,P|352:151|290:71,1,220,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,75,32077,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,134,32375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,355,39987,2,0,L|429:362,1,165,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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500,127,41181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,166,41927,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,119,42226,2,0,L|97:124,1,110,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,107,42674,2,0,B|67:161|67:161|58:222,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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187,257,43569,1,2,0:0:0:0:
251,332,43868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,332,44017,2,0,L|374:329,1,110,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,256,44614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,256,44763,2,0,P|440:172|417:91,1,165,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,91,45509,6,0,P|308:175|331:256,2,165,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,29,46704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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79,151,47599,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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424,258,49092,2,0,P|411:193|431:91,1,165,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,51,49689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,14,49987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,77,50286,6,0,B|223:96|163:71,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,71,54763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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465,58,55659,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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432,136,62226,6,0,P|379:149|323:133,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,372,64614,5,4,0:0:0:0:
244,372,64912,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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333,342,74166,5,2,1:0:0:0:
333,342,74465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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  • mWm's Hard


  1. 01:14:166 (1) - Slider should end at 01:14:614
  2. 01:24:763 (1) - Should be 1/1 slider
  3. 01:26:256 (2) - ^

    Just came across those main issues and wanted to point them out~
    There are DS and pattern issues that make the map a bit messy, but I think u can fix them with some hard work :p
    GL~

  • deetz's Less Insane

  1. 00:07:301 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These patterns dun give out much momentum imo, maybe move 00:07:748 (2,2) further away. Maybe around X: 136 Y: 32
  2. 00:10:584 (5) - Make the spacing more evenly spread for the triangle 00:10:435 (4,5,6) ?
  3. 00:14:241 - Blanket?
  4. 00:16:853 (1) - No slider art? :<
  5. 00:32:375 (1) - Blanket better?
  6. 00:40:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very empty pattern imo, http://puu.sh/pZ3S1/91f1a48880.jpg would fill up the the map better and keep the drum rhythms
  7. 00:44:763 (3) - I think this would flow better if u moved it up a bit
  8. 00:45:509 (1,1,1,1) - There are sounds at the 1/2 beat red ticks, the 1/1 patterns are fine too but I just think it could be less monotone xd
  9. 00:46:704 (1,1) - Idk, but I think the flow here is a bit weird when I was test-playing the map
  10. 00:57:450 (1,2,1,2,1) - Same
  11. 01:12:823 (6) - Make it more symmetrical?
  12. 01:14:166 (7) - NC for SV change :v
  13. 01:16:554 (1) - Man :c Feeling lazy? :p

    Generally I think there are too many pauses in the map which I think can be patched with sliders. The pauses just overall make the map flow weird..
    Well that's all from me here~ GL~
  • Sing's Insane


  1. 00:28:047 (4,5,6,1) - Easily misread and I believe the flow shouldnt be halted here. What about http://puu.sh/pZ4Ki/e6a6a63766.jpg ?

    Pretty standard diff ~ GJ~
  • -kevincela-'s extra


  1. 00:15:062 (1,1,1) - I think u can express this SV change differently, cuz the slider ends are stacked so its potentially perplexing and misleading. Something like http://puu.sh/pZ55P/250e143bf8.jpg ? Cuz as of now, players have to make a slight jump to get to the next slider, but if you follow my placement, it's more of a one way flow.
  2. 00:18:345 (2,1) - 1x SV contrast is too big here imo. Make 00:18:345 - 1.5x SV and lengthen the slider? http://puu.sh/pZ5gg/b1ab123fb4.jpg Sounds better imo.
  3. 01:14:763 (1,1,1) - Same
  4. 01:18:047 (2) - Same
  5. 01:27:748 (5,6,1,2,3) - Star looks unsymmetrical here cuz of 01:27:748 (5,6) xd
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