frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?! XD

This map has so many stars and the diffs are pretty good, so these comments are suggestions instead of errors.

Kantan is good enough. Thanks!

Futsuu

00:35:541 (50) - Well, don't you think this slider is a bit much for futsuu? Maybe you can replace it with actual notes that are spaced in 1/2. For instance: 00:35:541 - d here, 00:35:874 - d here, 00:36:207 - k here, 00:36:374 - d here and 00:36:541 - d here. The instance is great, but should I need to give some break here? keep.

Muzukashii

00:43:874 (135,136,137) - Well, there is no drum attack here yet deleted 136
00:41:041 (123,124) - you kept these attacks as 1/2 spaced notes. Why don't you swap these patterns? yeah;w;

01:08:374 (268,269) - I recommend kkk (1/4) and k (1/2). That way the drum attack will be emphasized. changed!

Oni

00:25:124 - Maybe you can add a don here since there is a noticeable kick sound. V

00:36:124 (132) - I think you can delete this one, the drum attack is pretty slow, a triplet after a 5-plet pattern is not neccesary. I see

01:11:541 (366) - I think you are following the keyboard sounds here, so the keyboard sound is pretty low. I think you can turn this to a don. Good! changed

01:13:874 (380,381) - Ctrl + g? It will support the higher keyboard sound. ^

A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Fan's Oni

00:25:957 (103) - How about a don? The drum sound is very low. D:::: is it ?? or my ears problem;w; but i heard medium but is partial high ?_?

00:53:707 (253) - The vocal is starting from the previous note and you already did a kat to emphasize it, so you can change this to don to emphasize the kick sound of drums. change~~

_yu68 wrote:

[Fan's Oni]

1. 00:28:541 (114) - change to kat? to express presence or absence of vocal m.. here is with the voice?
2. 00:39:374 (162) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:39:541 - emphasize the big note?A?
3. 00:42:041 (176) - ^ ?A?
4. 00:52:624 (245,246) - delete? to make a break like 00:47:207 - was put with the..ah....idk what that sound >.>
5. 00:53:124 (249) - move to 00:53:457 - ? same as this measure 00:47:541 - change

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Hello from my modding queue! im surprised, no gimmick map?!

stu's Oni

00:22:041 - 00:22:374 - Why skipped these kicks here? Dons at these points will be good. ok! I add a at 00:22:041[/color]

01:05:041 (332,333,334) - 01:05:541 (336,337,338) - I think these 2 patterns are hard for an oni diff. The players who play oni diffs will have trouble to hit them, since these patterns have color switches. Maybe you can make these easier like using ddk or kkd. You're right :3 . Why this map called "Oni" because there stars are lower than kata's Oni diff . It's a Inner before preparing for rank

01:06:207 - A bit long stream don't you think? You can divide this stream into 2 or 3 (and maybe even more) patterns which have 11 notes maximum. same as ↑

01:10:874 - You can add a don here to support the kick sound. ok! added

01:19:957 (1) - The 1/8 snap on this spinner looks weird, I couldn't read the last note because of my skin for instance. You can move it to 01:20:041 - here. ok!

A solid mapset, good luck on ranking! Now we see katacheh ranked maps? ;-;

_yu68 wrote:

hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

[stu's Oni]

1. 00:22:041 - add any circle? to fit to melody fixed!
2. 00:29:541 (94) - change to don? to make a difference with this measure 00:26:207 - You're right O: . fixed!
3. 00:33:041 (114,115) - delete? same pattern ok! fixed
4. 00:36:707 (139) - delete or change to kat? to emphasize 00:36:874 - keep :3
5. 01:04:707 (330) - 01:06:041 (340) - delete? to make a break before the stream sounds good I fixed it , but I keep this because I want to check everyone whether they think this is a Inner :3
6. 01:08:457 - add any circle? to fit to drum sounds that make 01:08:791 sounds weird so I delete it

good luck!

_yu68 wrote:

hi~ Hi~
mod from stu's m4m
If there is something you can't understand because of my noot good English, please chat or PM

[box=mod][General]

1. Nowadays, there are few maps with Soft hitsounds, so it is recommended to unify hitsounds to Normal. Also there is no reason to use Soft hitsounds. Since there is no durm sound(only piano and vocal) at the start, I think it's good to use soft.

[Kantan]

1. HP:7 -> 8? since notes is few ok
2. 00:11:465 (11) - delete and 00:11:808 (1) - move spinner start point to 00:11:465 - ? same as Futsuu yes
3. 00:18:207 (5) - or 00:18:874 (6) - change to don? to make even color scheme I think original is good.
4. 00:26:874 (16) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm yes, good!
5. 00:35:541 (27) - ~ 00:36:541 - change to slider? same as Futsuu yes c:
6. 00:40:541 (31) - change to don? same as 00:18:207 - yes but what is relation with 18:207?
7. 00:48:707 (40) - move to 00:48:874 - ? ignore vocal to make a simpler rhythm yes good
8. 00:54:041 (47) - same as ^ ^
9. 01:00:207 (55) - delete? to make a break right after a complex rhythm Fixed!
10. 01:06:874 - add kat? to express a drum sound keep.

[Futsuu]

1. HP:6 -> 7? same reason as Kantan ^
2. In the intro, I think should delete more notes and make more difference with Muzukashii.
   
   1. 00:02:208 (4) - V
   2. 00:04:951 (10) - V
   3. 00:07:008 (15) - V
   4. 00:08:379 (18) - V
3. 00:20:874 (17) - add finisher? same as Kantan and Muzukashii yeah I missed it
4. 00:26:207 - add don(with finisher)? to unify the basic rhythm with other diffs ^

[Muzukashii]

1. This diff is too difficult compared other diffs, so it is recommended to delete all 1/4s.
   It is also recommended to reduce other notes to adjust difficulty spread.
   
   • 
     delete all? deleted some of them. thank you for point out them c:
   1. 00:25:957 (53,54) -
   2. 00:27:041 (59) -
   3. 00:28:041 (64) -
   4. 00:29:707 (71) -
   5. 00:30:707 (76) -
   6. 00:32:374 (83) -
   7. 00:33:874 (90) -
   8. 00:34:874 (95) -
   9. 00:35:207 (97) -
   10. 00:43:957 (136) -
   11. 00:44:707 (141) -
   12. 00:46:957 (154,155) -
   13. 00:47:707 (158) -
   14. 00:48:291 (162) -
   15. 00:49:457 (169) -
   16. 00:49:707 (171) -
   17. 00:50:374 (174) -
   18. 00:50:791 (177) -
   19. 00:51:041 (179) -
   20. 00:52:041 (184) -
   21. 00:53:041 (189) -
   22. 00:53:624 (193) -
   23. 00:54:791 (200) -
   24. 00:55:041 (202) -
   25. 00:55:707 (205) -
   26. 00:56:124 (208) -
   27. 00:56:374 (210) -
   28. 00:57:374 (215) -
   29. 00:57:791 (218) -
   30. 00:58:041 (220) -
   31. 01:14:291 (296,297) -
   32. 01:19:124 (318) -
       I can't propose any more because of my lack of ability. However, I think you should reduce more notes to adjust difficulty spread.
       If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
2. 00:36:707 (106) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 - yes
3. 00:38:207 (111) - delete? to fit to drum sounds ^
4. 00:40:874 (122) - ^ ^
5. 00:43:541 (133) - ^ ^
6. 01:14:541 (298) - add finisher? to emphasize cymbal sound keep this. I want to emphasize piano sound.

[Oni]

1. This diff also needs to reduce notes.(same reason as Muzukashii)
   There is also a method that make this diff difficult more, rename to Inner Oni and make new Oni. Oni is ok.
   If you make a new Oni you should use simple 1/4 for difficulty spread.(ddd, kkk, ddk, kkd) Since many ranked maps (recently) are not following difficulty spread (still have some maps are following), I did not think I need to do that. and also I have GDs to link up diffs.
   
   • 
     delete all?
   1. 00:26:124 (60) -
   2. 00:26:374 (62) -
   3. 00:26:791 (65) -
   4. 00:27:707 (71) -
   5. 00:29:041 (79) -
   6. 00:29:457 (82) -
   7. 00:30:124 (87) -
   8. 00:30:374 (89) -
   9. 00:30:791 (92) -
   10. 00:32:291 (101) -
   11. 00:32:791 (105) -
   12. 00:33:041 (107) -
   13. 00:33:457 (110) -
   14. 00:34:124 (115) -
   15. 00:34:374 (117) -
   16. 00:34:791 (120) -
   17. 00:35:291 (124) -
   18. 00:35:624 (127) -
   19. 00:39:124 (149) -
   20. 00:41:624 (163) -
   21. 00:41:791 (165) -
   22. 00:46:457 (192) -
   23. 00:46:624 (194) -
   24. 00:46:791 (196) -
   25. 00:47:707 (203,204) -
   26. 00:48:291 (208) - or 00:48:457 (210) -
   27. 00:48:791 (213,214,215) -
   28. 00:50:041 (223) -
   29. 00:50:291 (225) - or 00:50:457 (227) -
   30. 00:50:957 (231) -
   31. 00:53:041 (244,245) -
   32. 00:53:624 (249) - or 00:53:791 (251) -
   33. 00:54:124 (254,255,256) -
   34. 00:55:374 (264) -
   35. 00:55:624 (266) - or 00:55:791 (268) -
   36. 00:56:291 (272) -
   37. 00:57:791 (282) -
   38. 00:58:374 (288) -
   39. 01:00:124 (299) - or 01:00:457 (302) -
   40. 01:00:957 (306,307) -
   41. 01:12:957 (374) -
   42. 01:17:457 (401) -
   43. 01:18:124 (406) -
       If you reduce notes, you can change the color scheme according to your preference to make even color scheme.
2. 00:30:791 (92) - change to don and move to 00:31:124 - ? to fit to drum sounds I would like to keep this.
3. 00:33:457 (110) - move to 00:33:791 - ? ^
4. 00:35:374 (125) - change to don? to emphasize 00:35:541 - keep
5. 00:36:707 (136) - delete? to emphasize 00:36:874 - yeah just like other diffs c:
6. 00:38:207 (142) - delete? to fit to drum sounds yes
7. 00:40:874 (157) - ^
8. 00:43:541 (173,174) - ^
9. 01:14:207 (382) - change to don, 01:14:457 (385) - delete and 01:14:541 (386) - add finisher ? same reason as Muzukashii keep this. same as muzu

good luck!

katacheh wrote:

yes but what is relation with 18:207?

125601228 wrote:

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ

125601228 wrote:

muzukashii

00:18:207 (18) - 感覺可以改成 k 這個沒有改 d會比較順暢
00:24:541 - 加個 d? 這邊也沒改 跟著風琴聲之類的?A? 讓他跟oni有差別

Oni

00:05:294 (17,18) - 要不要加個k 配合鋼琴音 是想說跟人聲就好了:3
00:14:874 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - d_ddk_kkd 改成 ddddkkk_D 配合旋律也能增加難度 其實以前是ddddkkkkd 這邊沒改 跟著鼓聲就好了
00:22:041 (38,39,40) - 感覺改成kdd比較符合旋律 這邊也沒改 覺得ddd就好了XD
00:25:874 (58,59,60,61,62) - 感覺61的d有點多餘 好像是ww 刪掉了
00:31:874 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - k_d_ddd_k 打起來不太協調 感覺 k_ddd_d_k比較能配合後面的 這邊的話換成k ddd d k 之前SM也說過這邊自己是覺得沒差 可以有變化這樣ww
還有100也許能改成k?
00:34:041 (115,116,117) - 看要不要改成ddk 117感覺比較適合k 好w 我前後也換了一些花色 感覺比較搭
00:34:707 (120) - 改成k 配合人聲 V
00:48:207 (202,203,204,205,206) - 把205砍掉 變成 kkd_k 因為後面還有一串連打 連續兩個有點怪 我喜歡這邊所以沒改;w;
00:54:041 (248,249,250,251,252) - 把249消失 改成 k_kkd 原因和剛剛一樣 同上x-x
01:17:374 (395,396,397) - 把396改成k來凸顯395和397 dkd 覺得ddd比較好
01:18:707 (405,406,407,408,409) - kdkdd 比較合鋼琴 kkddk比較圓滑的感覺?A? 暫時沒改

都沒人幫我ㄉ圖mod...幫QQ ......QAQ 我有空的時候可以幫你摸摸

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hello,隨便摸=w= 安安>3<
[General]
Tags:請加上''stu00608'',''Fantazyee''因為他們是做GD的 其實我都有加了 只是下載的頁面都沒顯示... 不知道為什麼啦qwq

就這樣,加油=w=

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hello,隨便摸=w=

[stu's Oni]
00:08:722 - 這個跟前面的ctrl+g
這個音高比前面那個高 這個先不改 保留

00:34:374 - 把這個remove ok!
-00:33:207 - 這串好像太長了=3=,把這個斷一斷比較好

00:38:874 - 轉k ok!
vocal pitch升了

00:53:541 - 轉k? 本來就是:3?

01:01:207 - 轉k
-能與01:01:541 - 彼此呼應(我也不清楚我在說什麼ww) 保留

01:03:374 - 轉d ok
emphasis finisher

01:06:207 - 會不會太長了XDD 這張原本是Inner阿 :3

01:18:707 - 轉kdkkkdkkdk比較好? 覺得還好ww

就這樣,加油=w=

iloveyou4ever wrote:

[Fan's Oni]
00:34:541 - 這兩粒轉k比較好 m................好?

00:46:457 - 把這個remove
-我認為這五粒才是高潮(00:46:874 - ),所以我不太支持前面放7個音pattern 欸等等 欸有意思!! 很有意思!!!!!!

00:57:707 - 轉d? 跟那個應該是鋼琴的鋼琴聲

01:18:041 - 如果你是跟鋼琴,我建議轉k
不是的就無視=w= ((無視>.>

15:48 Charlotte: I modding your map
15:52 Charlotte: First All diff suggestion
15:52 Charlotte: Last spinner is fade out part.so I pefer add some green (e.g.75→65→55%)
15:52 katacheh: ok
15:52 katacheh: i see
15:53 Charlotte: 01:24:874 - but,have strong sound.so you can again 75% or other %
15:53 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020348 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Kantan]]
15:54 katacheh: like this?
15:54 katacheh: https://puu.sh/uiSwZ/723ee28138.png
15:54 katacheh: 65% 55% 45% 75%
15:55 Charlotte: try
15:57 Charlotte: I prefer 55 40 25 75
15:58 katacheh: ok sounds good
16:01 Charlotte: 00:27:874 - del 00:30:541 - del 00:33:202 - del
16:02 Charlotte: I think this 1/1 triplet is little strange.
16:02 katacheh: ok fixed
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:541 - move to 00:44:207 - 
16:04 Charlotte: dd k(1/2) d slider (This flow is hard to Kantan player)
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:207 - have sound.
16:05 katacheh: i see.. fixed c:
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:874 - You can remove this notes
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 (49,50,51,52) - same rhythm
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 - 00:49:541 - 
16:07 katacheh: removed c:
16:08 katacheh: 00:53:207 - too right?
16:09 Charlotte: yes
16:10 Charlotte: 00:58:541 - del
16:10 katacheh: yes fixed
16:12 Charlotte: 00:51:374 -  move to 00:51:541 - How about you think?
16:12 katacheh: make it easier?
16:13 katacheh: okay fixed that
16:13 katacheh: 00:56:707 - and 00:59:374 - too?
16:14 Charlotte: 00:59:374 - no
16:14 katacheh: ok
16:14 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - 00:56:707 - only
16:14 Charlotte: same part
16:14 katacheh: okay
16:15 Charlotte: can you update?
16:15 katacheh: yes
16:15 Charlotte: plz~~ =w=
16:16 katacheh: updated c:
16:18 Charlotte: 01:16:207 - & 01:16:541 - add?
16:19 katacheh: yes good..-w-
16:19 katacheh: added
16:19 Charlotte: I think Kantan is good :D
16:20 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020316 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Futsuu]]
16:22 Charlotte: 00:29:374 - move to 00:29:707 - 
16:23 Charlotte: aa
16:23 Charlotte: miss
16:23 Charlotte: igonore please
16:23 katacheh: okay
16:28 Charlotte: 00:26:207 - 00:36:541 - https://puu.sh/uiUoY/0508b76273.jpg
16:28 Charlotte: try?
16:30 Charlotte: 00:35:374 - You can add notes.
16:30 katacheh: wait a min..
16:32 katacheh: sound good xD...
16:32 katacheh: changed
16:33 katacheh: no need to put 1/2 at here?
16:33 Charlotte: 1/1-1/1-1/1(5plet) is sound good
16:33 Charlotte: yes
16:33 katacheh: okay
16:34 Charlotte: Kantan = 2/1 only so no need 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: but this is futsuu xD?
16:35 Charlotte: 00:51:041 - del
16:35 Charlotte: yes
16:35 Charlotte: no need all part 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: oh.. i see c:
16:36 katacheh: 00:56:374 - del too?
16:36 Charlotte: yes
16:36 Charlotte: more clean
16:36 katacheh: fixed that
16:37 Charlotte: update plz~
16:38 katacheh: done!
16:41 Charlotte: 01:12:541 - move to 01:13:207 - 
16:42 Charlotte: Futsuu suggestion is that's all
16:42 katacheh: fixed
16:42 katacheh: ty c:
16:43 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020269 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Muzukashii]]
16:43 Charlotte: Kantan~Mzu & I'll mod stu diff =w=
16:43 Charlotte: Muzu
16:44 katacheh: okay
16:46 Charlotte: 00:01:008 - del & 00:01:694 - del 00:01:351 - add notes
16:47 Charlotte: 00:15:041 - del
16:48 katacheh: 00:01:008 - this part i follow the vocal ?
16:49 katacheh: 00:15:041 - fixed this c:
16:49 Charlotte: aa ok.first suggestion ignore please
16:52 Charlotte: 00:21:707 - del
16:52 katacheh: fixed!
16:55 Charlotte: 00:45:541 - you can remove notes.
16:55 katacheh: yes
16:59 Charlotte: I'll check your Muzukashii later
16:59 katacheh: okay
16:59 katacheh: thank you

• 
  
  00:14:874 - change to k & 00:15:041 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - kdkkddk? I think more fit.You can try it.
  
  00:28:374 - add d & 00:28:707 - add k.This map is Oni.so 1/1-pattern is little strange.
  
  00:34:791 - add k.I think 1/2 pattern is long & I think follow the vocal.
  
  00:35:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next 00:35:541 -
  
  00:36:541 - change to k.don pattern is long.I think need variety.
  
  00:36:707 - You can remove this notes.for emphasized to next 00:36:874 - (if agreed this suggestion,also other place change please)
  
  00:41:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next kk
  
  00:45:374 - d & 00:45:874 - d.I think don is not bad.
  
  00:46:624 - del & 00:46:791 - del.felt a bit long.
  
  00:52:707 - If you think 1/2 + 1/4 pattern is long,you can remove this notes.
  
  00:56:124 - move to 00:55:791 - & 00:56:457 - add don.
  
  00:57:957 - del & 00:58:124 - del.I think no need.You can make variety pattern.
  
  01:03:874 - d & 01:04:374 - d.because,next notes is K.for emphasized to next K
  
  01:05:707 - don?
  
  01:06:207 - pattern is lonnngggg.I have suggestion.You can try it.01:06:207 - 01:08:874 - https://puu.sh/up4qA/a37763aafa.jpg
  
  01:10:041 - add k.follow the piano.
  
  01:16:457 - add d.
  
  01:18:374 - del.1/2 pattern is long.

Charlotte wrote:

First IRC LOG

15:48 Charlotte: I modding your map
15:52 Charlotte: First All diff suggestion
15:52 Charlotte: Last spinner is fade out part.so I pefer add some green (e.g.75→65→55%)
15:52 katacheh: ok
15:52 katacheh: i see
15:53 Charlotte: 01:24:874 - but,have strong sound.so you can again 75% or other %
15:53 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020348 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Kantan]]
15:54 katacheh: like this?
15:54 katacheh: https://puu.sh/uiSwZ/723ee28138.png
15:54 katacheh: 65% 55% 45% 75%
15:55 Charlotte: try
15:57 Charlotte: I prefer 55 40 25 75
15:58 katacheh: ok sounds good
16:01 Charlotte: 00:27:874 - del 00:30:541 - del 00:33:202 - del
16:02 Charlotte: I think this 1/1 triplet is little strange.
16:02 katacheh: ok fixed
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:541 - move to 00:44:207 - 
16:04 Charlotte: dd k(1/2) d slider (This flow is hard to Kantan player)
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:207 - have sound.
16:05 katacheh: i see.. fixed c:
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:874 - You can remove this notes
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 (49,50,51,52) - same rhythm
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 - 00:49:541 - 
16:07 katacheh: removed c:
16:08 katacheh: 00:53:207 - too right?
16:09 Charlotte: yes
16:10 Charlotte: 00:58:541 - del
16:10 katacheh: yes fixed
16:12 Charlotte: 00:51:374 -  move to 00:51:541 - How about you think?
16:12 katacheh: make it easier?
16:13 katacheh: okay fixed that
16:13 katacheh: 00:56:707 - and 00:59:374 - too?
16:14 Charlotte: 00:59:374 - no
16:14 katacheh: ok
16:14 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - 00:56:707 - only
16:14 Charlotte: same part
16:14 katacheh: okay
16:15 Charlotte: can you update?
16:15 katacheh: yes
16:15 Charlotte: plz~~ =w=
16:16 katacheh: updated c:
16:18 Charlotte: 01:16:207 - & 01:16:541 - add?
16:19 katacheh: yes good..-w-
16:19 katacheh: added
16:19 Charlotte: I think Kantan is good :D
16:20 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020316 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Futsuu]]
16:22 Charlotte: 00:29:374 - move to 00:29:707 - 
16:23 Charlotte: aa
16:23 Charlotte: miss
16:23 Charlotte: igonore please
16:23 katacheh: okay
16:28 Charlotte: 00:26:207 - 00:36:541 - https://puu.sh/uiUoY/0508b76273.jpg
16:28 Charlotte: try?
16:30 Charlotte: 00:35:374 - You can add notes.
16:30 katacheh: wait a min..
16:32 katacheh: sound good xD...
16:32 katacheh: changed
16:33 katacheh: no need to put 1/2 at here?
16:33 Charlotte: 1/1-1/1-1/1(5plet) is sound good
16:33 Charlotte: yes
16:33 katacheh: okay
16:34 Charlotte: Kantan = 2/1 only so no need 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: but this is futsuu xD?
16:35 Charlotte: 00:51:041 - del
16:35 Charlotte: yes
16:35 Charlotte: no need all part 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: oh.. i see c:
16:36 katacheh: 00:56:374 - del too?
16:36 Charlotte: yes
16:36 Charlotte: more clean
16:36 katacheh: fixed that
16:37 Charlotte: update plz~
16:38 katacheh: done!
16:41 Charlotte: 01:12:541 - move to 01:13:207 - 
16:42 Charlotte: Futsuu suggestion is that's all
16:42 katacheh: fixed
16:42 katacheh: ty c:
16:43 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020269 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Muzukashii]]
16:43 Charlotte: Kantan~Mzu & I'll mod stu diff =w=
16:43 Charlotte: Muzu
16:44 katacheh: okay
16:46 Charlotte: 00:01:008 - del & 00:01:694 - del 00:01:351 - add notes
16:47 Charlotte: 00:15:041 - del
16:48 katacheh: 00:01:008 - this part i follow the vocal ?
16:49 katacheh: 00:15:041 - fixed this c:
16:49 Charlotte: aa ok.first suggestion ignore please
16:52 Charlotte: 00:21:707 - del
16:52 katacheh: fixed!
16:55 Charlotte: 00:45:541 - you can remove notes.
16:55 katacheh: yes
16:59 Charlotte: I'll check your Muzukashii later
16:59 katacheh: okay
16:59 katacheh: thank you

Muzukashii HP5,5→6?
stu's Oni OD5→5.5?

[ stu's Oni]

• 
  
  00:14:874 - change to k & 00:15:041 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - kdkkddk? I think more fit.You can try it. keep
  
  00:28:374 - add d & 00:28:707 - add k.This map is Oni.so 1/1-pattern is little strange. ok!
  
  00:34:791 - add k.I think 1/2 pattern is long & I think follow the vocal. ok!
  
  00:35:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next 00:35:541 ok!
  
  00:36:541 - change to k.don pattern is long.I think need variety. fixed. this part has been modded twice
  
  00:36:707 - You can remove this notes.for emphasized to next 00:36:874 - (if agreed this suggestion,also other place change please) I think no
  
  00:41:374 - change to d.for emphasized to next kk ok!
  
  00:45:374 - d & 00:45:874 - d.I think don is not bad. I changed the whole part to dkddkk 00:45:207 (183,184,185,186,187,188)
  
  00:46:624 - del & 00:46:791 - del.felt a bit long. I like the hard one
  
  00:52:707 - If you think 1/2 + 1/4 pattern is long,you can remove this notes. ok!
  
  00:56:124 - move to 00:55:791 - & 00:56:457 - add don. ok!
  
  00:57:957 - del & 00:58:124 - del.I think no need.You can make variety pattern. keep
  
  01:03:874 - d & 01:04:374 - d.because,next notes is K.for emphasized to next K ok!
  
  01:05:707 - don? ok! I just want to make a different XD
  
  01:06:207 - pattern is lonnngggg.I have suggestion.You can try it.01:06:207 - 01:08:874 - https://puu.sh/up4qA/a37763aafa.jpg thank you but only this part I want it keep SO LONG XD
  
  01:10:041 - add k.follow the piano. ok!
  
  01:16:457 - add d. nice idea! ok!
  
  01:18:374 - del.1/2 pattern is long. follow the drum so \(ツ)/
  
  実はこれ前Innerです 　でもスターはkataさんのdiffと同じくらいなのでOniに変えたんだ　なるべく元の難しさをそのままランクしてほしいと思います
  ありがとうございます！　そちらの譜面ができたらmodします

Charlotte wrote:

First IRC LOG

15:48 Charlotte: I modding your map
15:52 Charlotte: First All diff suggestion
15:52 Charlotte: Last spinner is fade out part.so I pefer add some green (e.g.75→65→55%)
15:52 katacheh: ok
15:52 katacheh: i see
15:53 Charlotte: 01:24:874 - but,have strong sound.so you can again 75% or other %
15:53 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020348 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Kantan]]
15:54 katacheh: like this?
15:54 katacheh: https://puu.sh/uiSwZ/723ee28138.png
15:54 katacheh: 65% 55% 45% 75%
15:55 Charlotte: try
15:57 Charlotte: I prefer 55 40 25 75
15:58 katacheh: ok sounds good
16:01 Charlotte: 00:27:874 - del 00:30:541 - del 00:33:202 - del
16:02 Charlotte: I think this 1/1 triplet is little strange.
16:02 katacheh: ok fixed
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:541 - move to 00:44:207 - 
16:04 Charlotte: dd k(1/2) d slider (This flow is hard to Kantan player)
16:04 Charlotte: 00:44:207 - have sound.
16:05 katacheh: i see.. fixed c:
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:874 - You can remove this notes
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 (49,50,51,52) - same rhythm
16:06 Charlotte: 00:47:541 - 00:49:541 - 
16:07 katacheh: removed c:
16:08 katacheh: 00:53:207 - too right?
16:09 Charlotte: yes
16:10 Charlotte: 00:58:541 - del
16:10 katacheh: yes fixed
16:12 Charlotte: 00:51:374 -  move to 00:51:541 - How about you think?
16:12 katacheh: make it easier?
16:13 katacheh: okay fixed that
16:13 katacheh: 00:56:707 - and 00:59:374 - too?
16:14 Charlotte: 00:59:374 - no
16:14 katacheh: ok
16:14 Charlotte: 00:51:374 - 00:56:707 - only
16:14 Charlotte: same part
16:14 katacheh: okay
16:15 Charlotte: can you update?
16:15 katacheh: yes
16:15 Charlotte: plz~~ =w=
16:16 katacheh: updated c:
16:18 Charlotte: 01:16:207 - & 01:16:541 - add?
16:19 katacheh: yes good..-w-
16:19 katacheh: added
16:19 Charlotte: I think Kantan is good :D
16:20 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020316 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Futsuu]]
16:22 Charlotte: 00:29:374 - move to 00:29:707 - 
16:23 Charlotte: aa
16:23 Charlotte: miss
16:23 Charlotte: igonore please
16:23 katacheh: okay
16:28 Charlotte: 00:26:207 - 00:36:541 - https://puu.sh/uiUoY/0508b76273.jpg
16:28 Charlotte: try?
16:30 Charlotte: 00:35:374 - You can add notes.
16:30 katacheh: wait a min..
16:32 katacheh: sound good xD...
16:32 katacheh: changed
16:33 katacheh: no need to put 1/2 at here?
16:33 Charlotte: 1/1-1/1-1/1(5plet) is sound good
16:33 Charlotte: yes
16:33 katacheh: okay
16:34 Charlotte: Kantan = 2/1 only so no need 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: but this is futsuu xD?
16:35 Charlotte: 00:51:041 - del
16:35 Charlotte: yes
16:35 Charlotte: no need all part 1/2 notes
16:35 katacheh: oh.. i see c:
16:36 katacheh: 00:56:374 - del too?
16:36 Charlotte: yes
16:36 Charlotte: more clean
16:36 katacheh: fixed that
16:37 Charlotte: update plz~
16:38 katacheh: done!
16:41 Charlotte: 01:12:541 - move to 01:13:207 - 
16:42 Charlotte: Futsuu suggestion is that's all
16:42 katacheh: fixed
16:42 katacheh: ty c:
16:43 *Charlotte is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020269 Emilia(CV:Setsunan) - Unfinished START [Muzukashii]]
16:43 Charlotte: Kantan~Mzu & I'll mod stu diff =w=
16:43 Charlotte: Muzu
16:44 katacheh: okay
16:46 Charlotte: 00:01:008 - del & 00:01:694 - del 00:01:351 - add notes
16:47 Charlotte: 00:15:041 - del
16:48 katacheh: 00:01:008 - this part i follow the vocal ?
16:49 katacheh: 00:15:041 - fixed this c:
16:49 Charlotte: aa ok.first suggestion ignore please
16:52 Charlotte: 00:21:707 - del
16:52 katacheh: fixed!
16:55 Charlotte: 00:45:541 - you can remove notes.
16:55 katacheh: yes
16:59 Charlotte: I'll check your Muzukashii later
16:59 katacheh: okay
16:59 katacheh: thank you

Muzukashii HP5,5→6?Fixed!

404 AccNotFound wrote:

hi, come from your m4m forum ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉツ
Hope to help a little to this map
If you can't read my poor English, plz ignore it.


[ General ]

01:19:874 (1) - we are not BANCHOBOT xD. Maybe we can finish this spinner early. how about add finish drum sound from 01:24:707 (1) ?
yeah but i hate note after spinner. xD



[ Kantan ]

00:39:207 (34) - delete? no. why? xD Is this not too hard or what?
00:41:874 (38) - ^

00:56:874 (61) - move 00:56:707 cause of vocal flow i know but i want to put simple rhythm in kantan.



[ Futsuu ]

00:17:541 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - little long stream in futsuu. How about dkd kdk or dkddk d? not too long i think.c:

00:57:874 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - k d k d dk change!

01:08:541 (131) - delete? cause of next Big note and avoid 6 stream. keep.

01:13:874 (143) - delete. keep.



[ Muzukashii ]

00:15:374 (6) - delete? next is D and muzu diff player is diffrenet at Big note even it connected. i think it's fine?

00:57:707 (196,197,198) - ddd and 00:58:041 (199) - k i think original one is better.

01:15:041 (280) - delete or KK? Kk seems not good. changed!



[ Oni ]

00:15:874 (11) ~ 00:21:207 (34) - note is a little lacking than every next parts in this diff. put some 1/4 ? it's fine i think.

00:37:707 (137) - d? Impact of next K is so high. i think D is fine c:
00:40:374 (151) - ^^
00:43:041 (166) - ^^

01:14:541 (379) - d and delete 01:14:707 (380) . no sound in 380 and for smooth flow. keep 379 and del 380


So perfect that I can't touch anymore ^3^b
I think this is really perfect and fun map xD
Take my Star ★ and Hope to ranked soon~ THANKS!

+OMG graveyard from yesterday wwwww

404 AccNotFound wrote:

[ Fan's Oni ]

00:00:494 (1) ~ 00:12:836 (34) - i think this part is following piano, and i think it is better to add a little note following vocal with present notes. ya..but.. how and it will make feeling not quite right?

00:28:207 (113,114) - ctrl g. vocal sound is going up from 113 to 114. change
00:30:874 (123,124) - ^ V

00:44:707 (190) - k. so many d is here. for the same pattern , change 00:44:874 (191) - to K

00:57:707 (276,277,278,279,280) - kkddk? Follow a sound? its high high? change to ddkdk for easier?

01:01:374 (300) - d. to avoid monotonous same color notes. how about 01:01:541 (301,302,303,304,305) - d kdk k?

01:14:374 (375) - k? its going down here

01:16:041 (383,384,385,386) - k ddd d kkd

mliencheng wrote:

路過一mod

不好意思換電腦了 mod格式隨便一點

[ stu's Oni ]

00:15:457 - 我覺得後面那個k就好 這個可以放d以凸顯後面的高音 ok. 滿多人有提出來的

00:25:957 - k , 他音跟前面的音一樣 所以建議放k 好owob

01:11:374 - 跟 01:10:041 一樣的音, 可以加個k? 那我把 01:10:707也一併砍掉 前後都有對到

01:12:707 - 高音, k? 那邊我跟鼓音 如果要改那 01:13:374 也要一起改 先保留

Xay wrote:

Hi, I got here through stu's userpage. Giving mod because I want to learn and need kds!!

I will try to write in simple english, but I am sorry if it is difficult to understand.


[General]

BGs: OK
Offset: OK
MP3: OK (I think?)


[Kantan]

I am bad at modding Kantan, but I think this diff is good. Thanks


[Futsuu]

00:03:922 (7) - k here, because voice is similar to 00:00:836 (1,2) changed!

00:18:541 - remove d here? triplets seem good enough okay c:

00:38:874 (57,58) - k d sounds better to me changed!

00:47:207 onward is good changed!


[Muzukashii]

00:04:436 - k here because of 00:01:522 (4,5,6) I'm following vocal here//

00:21:541 (31,32,33,34,35,36) - Suggestion:

no change. i think original is good.

00:46:207 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139) - Suggestion:

keep. dont want kkd in this diff.

00:54:374 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - I would change these patterns so they are not identical to 00:53:207 (169,170,171,172,173,174,175). Maybe something like this?

Changed but i want to aviod ddk
01:19:374 (298) - k here? keep. there's no high pitch or what


[Oni]

00:16:041 (12) - d here, just like at 00:18:541 (22,23,24,25,26) keep to have some variety..

I do not want to destroy patterns in this map because I think they are good.


I hope this helps, good luck everyone!!

Xay wrote:

Hi, I got here through stu's userpage. Giving mod because I want to learn and need kds!!

I will try to write in simple english, but I am sorry if it is difficult to understand.


[stu's Oni]

00:14:458 - d here to emphasize drums stronger It's no sound here so :/

01:01:874 (311) - k maybe to follow flow of 01:00:374 (300,301,302,303) ? keep

01:06:874 (346,347) - make both notes k, because I think that makes this stream more fun

Can't find more, map is fun I think it's unnecessary :/

nothing changed but still thank you !!

I hope this helps, good luck everyone!!

Skylish wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for waiting so long since I am too busy irl ;w;.

[General]

> 00:00:494 - Using HS:S is too soft for Taiko HS in most cases. The music genre or dynamic of song does not support for a Soft Hitsound obviously. You may use HS:N 40~50% (the setting in Stu's Oni) instead of using HS:S 75%. (In 99% cases Taiko maps use HS:N) Ok I changed this. N 50%

[Kantan]

! 00:00:494 - not really recommended to use any SV changes in Kantan even it's just 90%. Consider remove it, except you have very strong rationale behind. changed! i dont really know about this xD

> 00:16:541 - you can remove this note for the sake of consistency at 00:18:207 (7,8,9) - , and showing a better note spread with Futsuu as well. ok i see. changed!

> 00:44:874 - Finish is available right here to state it per 2 bars. yea right!

> 00:59:374 - umm, how about shifting it 1/2 forward to 00:59:541 - , so as to fit your previous mapping style in Kiai (having the note hit on the on beat instead of the exact vocal timing)? changed!

> 01:02:207 - V / 01:02:707 - V / 01:16:874 - V Finish them, strong instrumental accompaniment.

[Futsuu]

> 00:21:202 - shifting it to 00:20:541 - seems better. Then you will have constant nnn nnn nnn pattern from 00:16:207 - to 00:20:874 - . (00:21:207 - no need to worry about missing a drum kick here since the D at 00:20:874 - dominates the music there, that's fine.) alright!

> 00:58:207 (104) - you definitely missed a Finish here. added!

> 01:00:374 - unnecessary note breaks your consistent vocal mapping channel, remove it. deleted

> 01:03:541 - / 01:04:874 - / 01:06:207 - Finisher of coz ~_~ added all

> 01:07:874 - It's a potential Finisher due to the high-pitch drum kick. I see you used it in　Oni only, you may make this timing consistent in all of your difficulties. added finisher

> 01:14:541 (144,145,146) - they should be N n N because of the drum set. The instrumental part seems having a bigger dynamic here, although the melody goes to the piano. ok.. following drums now

[Muzukashii]

> 00:22:207 - shiting it to 00:21:707 - can be more consistent to 00:16:207 (9,10,11) - / 00:17:541 (14,15,16) - these patterns. Meanwhile, shifting this note can also emphasize the expression of melody-mapping. alright. changed!

> 00:36:541 - Change it to k for emphasizing the upcoming Dons, matching 1st & 3rd beat drum kick? i think this is a low pitch drum sound. keep this. upcoming Dons are already have finisher to emphase.

> 00:57:791 - shifting it to 00:57:624 - so as to let the vocal start outstandingly at 00:57:874 - ? changed!

> 01:03:541 - / 01:04:874 - / 01:06:207 - / all Finishers should be used right here lol added

> 01:07:874 - it depends what are you going to change in Futsuu, either using Finisher or normal note is fine added same as futsuu

> 01:14:541 - same case in Futsuu, I am pretty confused about the usage of Finisher here. I can understand that you want to emphasize the strong piano fz chord by using Fnishers, but on the other sides, you neglect the drum elements which should be more famailiarized actually in Taiko mapping. Therefore, how about k KK D ---> K kk D ?

[Oni]

> 00:20:874 - You missed a Finish here added

> 00:23:541 - inappropriate and unclear usage of Finish here. The obvious one should be at 00:24:874 - , not 00:23:541 - . Remove the latter's Finish please, the piano chord or drum set cannot support its existence. removed finisher

> 00:25:874 - actually you can just map what you did in Muzukashii right here, ddd suit the low-pitch drum hit triplet. kkd seems a bit weird, I can't exactly tell where it's strange though. i think 1st and 2nd drum pitch are higher than 3rd one. keep this.

> 00:26:207 - another missing Finish added;-;

> 00:26:374 - You may remove it to create a space to make the spotlight shed on the vocal. Take ref. at 00:28:707 - / 00:31:707 - removed!

> 00:36:124 - adding a kat here to form a triplet to show better note spread with Muzukashii added and changed ddd to kkk in muzu

> 00:36:541 - same advice in other difficulties, changing it to kat? i think this is low pitch drum. keep

> 00:37:707 - / 00:40:374 - / 00:43:041 - small notes fit better since they can emphasize the upcoming K/D yea changed!

> 00:46:624 - you may remove this note to redue the length of this stream (it's too long for Oni but okay for Inner Oni). Meanwhile, the drum kick at 00:46:541 - can be specified with its end. alright! changed!

> 00:48:791 - / 00:54:124 - Remove it since two consecutive 5-plets seems too much in the whole Oni. I like this and want to keep this... and this diff is like a harder oni than other GD's Oni, idk if i need to change this to inner oni.


> 00:51:374 - / 00:56:707 - be consistent! Finish is not really needed ok removed!

> 01:14:207 - How about kkd K? The following suggestion at 01:14:874 (377,378,379) - would be the same in Muzukashii. changed!

Skylish wrote:

[Fan's Oni]

> 00:00:494 - I feel like the upcoming gap is too big. How about adding a kat at 00:01:179 - ? (though I know that you are trying to follow the instrumental part very strictly) i agree.. but...m.... i feel little strange? :thinking:
> 00:14:036 - ineffective green timing point, you may remove it. oh no i didnt notice it DX

> 00:17:207 (55,56,57,58,59) - sounds a bit dull, maybe putting a note at 00:17:291 - would be richer in terms of patterns add kdd

> 00:22:041 - using ddd triplet to fill up the gap to map the instrumental part as well? It seems you are going to match all things.... m......ok? add it

> 00:24:707 - this little part is very strange here: 00:24:874 - / 00:25:374 - they share the same dynamic but you used different patterns to display them. The former is loud enough for a Finisher, try not to waste it if possible... How about something like this? 00:24:707 - After listening carefull ... oh no , i do mix drum and violin? patterns D:::::: , change it

> 00:36:541 - same in other difficulties, change it to a kat? i feel d is better
> 01:06:207 - it is as same as 01:16:874 - in terms of structure, let them be consistent (either normal note/ Big note)
why i feel strange after u say????_?_? some kind of end finish feel *fix other big notes
> 01:15:374 - cymbal crash here same as 01:14:541 - , Finish is needed consequently 01:14:541 -is much more lower?
but i think that would be good feel in playing? ((change but if there are any comment

Skylish wrote:

[Stu's Oni]

> 00:10:779 - you may add a d here because you start mapping piano since 00:08:722 - I'm following the vocal D:

> 00:46:207 - this stream is way too long, cut it down please.... Similar at Oni's case, how about removing 00:46:624 - ? no , since this diff was a Inner Oni so I want to keep it

> 00:59:541 (292,293,294) - sounds unnecessary and cannot show the similar gap like what you did at 00:56:874 - / 00:51:541 - , consider remove these 3 notes. 00:59:707 here is a drum sound , if i del that 3 notes it will be more weird so I keep it

> 01:06:207 - completely over-mapped stream, nerf it already. You may use K ddd K this rhythm back again until 01:07:541 - . For example 01:06:207 (1) - : no , same as 00:46:207

> 01:16:874 - missing Finish, add it back no , for that isn't a loud sound

> 01:19:707 - ddk does not fit that single guitar chord ending to be very honest. A simple D + spinner / single spinner ending is good to go. fixed it

[]
thank you

There should be more to be polished in GDs, get a few more mods and feedback, then find me again. Good luck from now on.

• 
  Hi Fantazy o/

1. 00:01:522 (2) - this note is a little unnecesary since you're totally following piano on the intro :p
2. 00:06:494 (15) - same as above, you could delete them :p (suggestion ofc)
3. 00:11:979 (29) - ^ and make this 00:12:151 (30) - don according to piano pitch (almost same as next note)
4. What about deleting 00:18:707 (65,66) - and making atriple on 00:19:207 - according to rhythm and to have consistency?
5. Kiai is fine but notes like 00:52:874 (248) - finishing on big white lines are a little strange (about consistency)
6. 01:14:541 (377) - big note why? D:
7. 01:17:207 (391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400) - what about using d d k d d d k d d d on singletaps? Sounds better imo ^^

1. 00:03:751 (11,12) - what about using ctrl+g according to vocals? I think it feels like this pattern: 00:01:522 (4,5,6) - sounds same as the second one but isn't at all :p
2. 00:57:541 (276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - this one could fit better at ddkkddk to emphatise more next kat. If you use lot of kat it loses the emphasis imo
3. 01:19:291 (422) - try a don here, current kkdk at finishing stream is kind strange

xfraczynho wrote:

Hey kata o/ modding your GD's as req :p

[stu's Oni]

1. 00:03:751 (11,12) - what about using ctrl+g according to vocals? I think it feels like this pattern: 00:01:522 (4,5,6) - sounds same as the second one but isn't at all :p I don't think kdk will better than kkd , so keep D:
2. 00:57:541 (276,277,278,279,280,281,282) - this one could fit better at ddkkddk to emphatise more next kat. If you use lot of kat it loses the emphasis imo fixed it
3. 01:19:291 (422) - try a don here, current kkdk at finishing stream is kind strange

I think it's normal XD
I just hope it can helps you boys (you too kata xD). Nice mapset; I'm sure this will get ranked soon so GL!Thank you <333

xfraczynho wrote:

[Fan's Oni]

• 
  Hi Fantazy o/ O/

1. 00:01:522 (2) - this note is a little unnecesary since you're totally following piano on the intro :p =A=? but if delete will make tooo much space?
2. 00:06:494 (15) - same as above, you could delete them :p (suggestion ofc) =3=
3. 00:11:979 (29) - ^ and make this 00:12:151 (30) - don according to piano pitch (almost same as next note) sound not bad 00:12:151 (30) - change d and 31 change k but 00:12:151 (30,31) - are different =A=
4. What about deleting 00:18:707 (65,66) - and making atriple on 00:19:207 - according to rhythm and to have consistency?
   m....?_? i followed the drum and little highlight these single drums 00:19:541 (70,71) -
5. Kiai is fine but notes like 00:52:874 (248) - finishing on big white lines are a little strange (about consistency) ah....eh...mh....mah? ?A?A?A? i make Unite for 00:47:541 (211) - 00:52:874 (247) - 00:58:207 (283) - add finish and no note after 1/2
6. 01:14:541 (377) - big note why? D:D::::::::::: ?W? IDKwww 01:14:874 (377,380) - change these finish
7. 01:17:207 (391,392,393,394,395,396,397,398,399,400) - what about using d d k d d d k d d d on singletaps? Sounds better imo ^^ not bad but... i steel wana highlight this part 01:18:207 - of going higher?

jacky10186 wrote:

[Fan's Oni]然後我最喜歡的是: 笨笨fanfan 的副歌 真的很完美

jacky10186 wrote:

被kata拖來的(? 新手modder一枚 較注重整體架構與聲音搭配 只會做Oni 所以只Mod Oni @@

[共同部分]

01:20:041 - 01:24:874 這個轉盤 最後有對好嗎?我是感覺沒對好啦 我覺der有對到就是了 後面反而沒對到keep
如果跟鼓聲應該要到 01:24:957 後面沒差了吧 討厭轉盤後面突然來個什麼鬼的 陷阱喔keep
如果跟吉他應該要到 01:25:041 ?A?

[Oni]

很完美 尤其前奏是三張Oni難度中最好的 最爛的難度.w.!

建議: 00:48:791 和 00:54:124 可以刪掉 這個就沒改了 我覺得不用刪拉 keep




希望可以幫助rk~ 吃飯去

Smallwu wrote:

jacky10186 wrote:

[Fan's Oni]然後我最喜歡的是: 笨笨fanfan 的副歌 真的很完美

jacky10186 wrote:

[Fan's Oni]

雖然不建議前面跟鋼琴 但是前面既然跟了 後面 01:08:874 - to the end 建議也跟鋼琴,不用跟鼓聲 額額額 基本上是根鼓聲比較好

00:14:874 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - 我是覺得3.7星的難度,可以再把這個長串簡化一點,用鼓聲為基底,不用全跟到也可以(看個人) 對於這難度來說.. 這建議 有意思? ?__? 我改成 ddddk kdk

00:26:541 - 00:28:541 建議也可以不要跟後面相同放法,可以更凸顯後面00:29:207 - 00:31:207
( ex. 00:26:541 - 00:28:541 改成ddk_d_k_d_kdk 底線/d/k為1/2 ) 不太喜歡 這裡是有一些的mirror mode

然後我最喜歡的是: 笨笨fanfan 的副歌 真的很完美 ?_?_?_?_?__?_?_?_?_?

1. 1698x1199: Fan's Oni BG resolution, try to adjust to 1920x1200/1366x768 (would be nicer since other diff used this) if possible
2. If stu's Oni isn't using 'Khlby6N' file then delete it
3. Fan's Oni: 00:14:208 - use 60% on this redline, isn't neccesary to have 70%
4. stu's Oni: 00:00:494 -

1. 00:00:494 - 00:12:836 - consider adding some notes, i know you want to make this part calm but spread is affected; muzu is a lot denser than this D:
   example:
   

1. 01:07:624 (355,356) - just ctrl+g on these, kdkdk seems inaccurate

1. 00:44:707 - add a note here, it feels so empty
2. I'm not a fan of overmapping stuff, but it would be nice if you make an stream 01:06:207 , so you make a good kiai ending like on stu's oni

jacky10186 wrote:

[stu's Oni]

00:33:791 - 這個放在00:33:207 - 00:34:207 中的哪裡節奏聽起來都怪怪的,所以我建議可以分段
( ex. 00:33:207 - 00:34:207 可以改成k_d___d_k_ddk 底線/d/k為1/4 )
00:33:791 這邊其實背景有一個不太明顯的鈀音在 前兩顆kd我改了 後面的部份我先保留 owob


01:06:207 (338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358) - 這段在4.02星有點超過,建議可以簡化...
媽ㄉ一切都是osu評星數太爛QQ 我改了 =>

我最喜歡stu大大的副歌部分喔 ^^ 過獎了 謝謝你~

xfraczynho wrote:

stu's Oni:

1. 01:07:624 (355,356) - just ctrl+g on these, kdkdk seems inaccurate

I simplified that with the mod which jacky10186 wroted , thank you~

xfraczynho wrote:

hey some things to point in!

1. 1698x1199: Fan's Oni BG resolution, try to adjust to 1920x1200/1366x768 (would be nicer since other diff used this) if possible changed
2. If stu's Oni isn't using 'Khlby6N' file then delete it deleted. it's my mistake.
   
   Oni:
   
   1. 00:44:707 - add a note here, it feels so empty yes, added here.
   2. I'm not a fan of overmapping stuff, but it would be nice if you make an stream 01:06:207 , so you make a good kiai ending like on stu's oni made some change here,

it looks nice! call me if when you apply!

xfraczynho wrote:

Fan's Oni:

1. 00:00:494 - 00:12:836 - consider adding some notes, i know you want to make this part calm but spread is affected; muzu is a lot denser than this D:
   example:
   

Anyway adding, I feel very strange, idk how to add more