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Planecakes
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_Meep_
First and lolz
Scythe-
saw u in #modreqs

Another

00:12:637 (8,9,10,11) - Change patterns?
00:20:099 (1,2,3,4) - Same on this too?

Relife

01:15:323 (4,5,6,7,8) - uhh redesign these? spacing is kinda off imo
00:15:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change patterns? [2]
01:11:294 (2,3,4) - Same on this too? [2]

there's nothing i could mention on the other diffs since i can't do them, sorry idrk what im doing xdxd
if you're going for rank, goodluck! >w<
Ornithos

Scythe- wrote:

saw u in #modreqs

Another

00:12:637 (8,9,10,11) - Change patterns?
00:20:099 (1,2,3,4) - Same on this too?

Relife

01:15:323 (4,5,6,7,8) - uhh redesign these? spacing is kinda off imo
00:15:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change patterns? [2]
01:11:294 (2,3,4) - Same on this too? [2]

there's nothing i could mention on the other diffs since i can't do them, sorry idrk what im doing xdxd
if you're going for rank, goodluck! >w<
Maybe Star-type jumps for the "change patterns"?
Also, the "Insane" has higher AR than the "Another"? Maybe you need to shuffle the ARs around?
Relife has low(er) HP Drain than the previous difficulties as well.

Another

00:14:404 (1,2,3,4,5) seems quite boring, maybe make it like 00:15:625 (1,2,3,4,5) ?

I'm awful at modding, so this is all I found for now, but good luck!
[ Shamwow ]
from #modreqs

Normal

- please check your distance snap throughout the entire map, a lot of the notes are way too close to each other considering how far away they are time wise
-00:12:040 (6) - make this a repeating slider? either that or add a note at 00:12:637, the gap in between 00:12:040 (6) and 00:12:935 (1) looks weird/awkward to me
-00:17:861 (6) - too close to 00:16:816 (5) ?
-00:18:308 (7,8) - these sound odd? it doesnt go with the song very well. it sounds a lot better when you have 00:18:308 (7) end at 00:18:308 (7) (red tick) and move 00:18:905 (8) so that it starts at 00:19:204 instead.
-00:21:891 (5,1) - i dont think there should be a gap in between these two, you can add a note there ( 00:22:488 )
-00:26:965 (2) - distance snap
-00:27:562 (3) - ^
-00:35:920 (1,2,3) - i'd get rid of these and keep the break going until 00:38:308 (4) imo
-00:41:294 (7,1) - another gap in between these that should probably have something (maybe remove 00:42:786 (1) and add a slider from 00:42:189 to 00:42:637 ?)
-00:44:279 (3,4) - distance snap
-00:58:607 (2) - ^
-01:08:756 (5,6) - these can be replaced with something that goes with the song a lot better
-01:11:741 (3,4) - ^
-01:12:935 (5) - this should start at 01:12:786 (red tick)
-01:18:308 (1) - doesn't fit the song. I'd make it so that it starts at 01:18:010 and ends at 01:18:458 and have a spinner from 01:18:905 to 01:22:786

Hard

-there are some distance snap issues you should fix, AImod will point all of those out for you ;w;
-hard diffs shouldn't have AR 8
-00:08:905 (3) - id remove this
-I'd move 00:16:667 (1) to 00:16:517 it goes with the song better
-00:27:711 (6) - this looks really lazy, put more notes here instead of one super long repeat slider
-00:29:055 (1,2,3,4,5) - these all sound off, it'll sound a lot better if you remove 00:29:652 (2) and have 00:29:055 (1) end at 00:29:502
-00:38:308 (3) - move the beginning to 00:38:607
-there are a lot of inconsistencies in patterns and such that i'm not sure how to explain. just go through this and try to fix any sliders/notes that don't sound like they go with the song, there are a lot of them

good luck !
MiniYou
Nice :)
Topic Starter
Planecakes

MiniYou wrote:

Nice :)
God bless you
Rizevim
Normal
00:26:667 - add notes here :D
00:27:264 - you can add notes here :D
00:39:204 - you can add notes here :D
00:40:697 (4) - move it to 00:40:398
00:40:697 - add slider here :D
00:44:577 - you can add notes here :D
00:45:174 - you can add notes here :D
00:54:726 - you can add notes here :D
01:00:697 - you can add notes here :D
01:01:891 - add notes here :D
01:03:682 - add notes here :D
01:04:876 - you can add notes here :D
01:05:473 - you can add notes here :D
01:06:070 - you can add notes here :D
01:07:264 - you can add notes here :D
01:08:458 - add notes here :D
01:12:040 - you can add notes here :D
01:23:085 (1) - this doesn't sound right
01:25:920 - add notes here :D
01:28:159 (5) - move it to 01:28:010
idk why , but after the spinner it didn't fit with the songs :o
Hard
00:19:055 - you can add notes here :D
00:20:249 - you can add notes here :D
00:28:308 - add notes here :D
00:28:756 (9) - move this to 00:28:607
00:29:055 - add slider/circle here :D
00:30:398 - add notes here :D
00:33:980 - you can add notes here :D
00:34:279 - you can add notes here :D
00:35:771 - you can add notes here :D
00:38:458 - you can add notes here :D
00:42:935 (3) - delete this :D
00:48:905 - you can add notes here :D
01:14:428 - add notes here :D
01:16:965 - you can add notes here :D
01:17:264 - you can add notes here :D
01:23:831 - add notes here :D
01:24:876 (1) - move to 01:24:726
01:25:174 (2) - move to 01:25:025
01:25:473 (3) - move to 01:25:323
01:25:771 (4) - move to 01:25:622
01:26:517 - add notes here :D
01:26:965 (7) - move to 01:26:816
01:27:562 (8) - move to 01:27:413
01:27:562 - you can add notes here :D
01:27:861 (9) - move to 01:27:711
Topic Starter
Planecakes

Rizevim wrote:

Normal
00:26:667 - add notes here :D suuure
00:27:264 - you can add notes here :D sure
00:39:204 - you can add notes here :D sure
00:40:697 (4) - move it to 00:40:398 sounds weird
00:40:697 - add slider here :D ?
00:44:577 - you can add notes here :D added a slider here
00:45:174 - you can add notes here :D sure
00:54:726 - you can add notes here :D sure
01:00:697 - you can add notes here :D sure
01:01:891 - add notes here :D sure
01:03:682 - add notes here :D sure
01:04:876 - you can add notes here :D sure
01:05:473 - you can add notes here :D slider
01:06:070 - you can add notes here :D sure
01:07:264 - you can add notes here :D ofc
01:08:458 - add notes here :D yeah
01:12:040 - you can add notes here :D sure
01:23:085 (1) - this doesn't sound right added slider
01:25:920 - add notes here :D 01:25:771 i did something diffrent
01:28:159 (5) - move it to 01:28:010 ^^^
idk why , but after the spinner it didn't fit with the songs :o
Hard
00:19:055 - you can add notes here :D sure
00:20:249 - you can add notes here :D sure
00:28:308 - add notes here :D sure
00:28:756 (9) - move this to 00:28:607 no
00:29:055 - add slider/circle here :D ^^^
00:30:398 - add notes here :D
00:33:980 - you can add notes here :D sure
00:34:279 - you can add notes here :D slider end
00:35:771 - you can add notes here :D no
00:38:458 - you can add notes here :D sounds pretty weird
00:42:935 (3) - delete this :D hell no
00:48:905 - you can add notes here :D sure
01:14:428 - add notes here :D sure
01:16:965 - you can add notes here :D no
01:17:264 - you can add notes here :D no
01:23:831 - add notes here :D sure
01:24:876 (1) - move to 01:24:726 w
01:25:174 (2) - move to 01:25:025 h
01:25:473 (3) - move to 01:25:323 a
01:25:771 (4) - move to 01:25:622 t hell no
01:26:517 - add notes here :D ofc <3
01:26:965 (7) - move to 01:26:816 did something diffrent
01:27:562 (8) - move to 01:27:413 ^^^
01:27:562 - you can add notes here :D ^^^
01:27:861 (9) - move to 01:27:711^^^
Thank you but i could not do all the changes. ;)
_Meep_
Rizevim

Planecakes wrote:

Thank you but i could not do all the changes. ;)
That's okay :D
Beako Chan
Beswt Beatmap everr :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :)
CookieSlay3r
I really want these maps getting ranked !
Xinnoh
For the Normal/Hard difficulties, the wiki highly recommends not to change distance spacing during the map, of which there is a lot of. The target demographic for this difficulty are still learning the relationship between distance and timing. I even dropped the combo on Normal because of the spacing, these two difficulties need to have consistent on distance snapping for around 90% of the map. No point in further mods from me yet for those difficulties since the distance snapping alone will change a lot.
Also, use a lot more hitsounds, there's the occasional change but there's just too much of the same drum.
Korey
from modreqs

i think youll have to rename the Relife diff iirc only the highest diff can have a custom name.
also i think you should just have the one bg which your using on every diff except the gd as it looks nicer imo but also is different to the other mapsets going around atm.

hope my modhelps i wrote a lot so i hope it helps :)

SPOILER

Mazziv's Ultra


00:08:508 (2) - 2 is given equal spacing even though its clearly weaker
00:12:090 (4) - more spacing
00:12:537 - start a note here
00:12:687 (6,7,8) - spacing seems random just use the same spacing youve used for other 1/4
00:13:134 - start note here
00:14:478 (1) - this looks bad imo the end of the slider
00:14:478 (1,2) - if you keep this blanket fix it up
00:19:030 - i dont think you should end this on the blue tick
00:20:448 - start note here
00:21:194 - ^
00:26:269 (1,2,3) - this plays pretty awkward
00:27:612 (1,2,1,2) - circles would fit here better imo, as the slider end on pretty audible sounds
00:30:522 (2) - make the dip of the slider happen at 00:30:896 - were the vocal starts
00:32:090 (2,1) - spacing is different for no clear reason
00:35:672 (3) - i think 2 circles would be better atleast try it out
00:36:866 - pretty sure the stream starts here
00:40:746 (1,2,3) - theres other stuff to map to the long sliders arent as appealing
00:43:582 - theres a sound here
00:44:179 - you should have a slider end on here no reason for the pause
00:45:969 (9) - i think itd be good if you put some emphasis on the vocal by either putting a kink in the stream or having a kickslider where 9 is into the NC
00:46:716 (9,10,11,12,13) - not sure about this, i dont think you should be ending it on the 1/8 00:47:052 -
00:47:612 (1,1) - more spacing?
00:49:702 (3) - ^
00:51:493 (1) - theres obviously other stuff going on here map that instead of just the slider
00:57:612 - note here
00:58:657 (2) - remove note or put a slider end here
00:59:552 (1,1) - more spacing
01:02:687 - note here
01:03:433 - ^
01:04:477 (2,1) - more spacing might be funner
01:04:627 (1,2) - i dont get why these are stacked
01:05:821 (1) - slider instead?
01:07:015 (1) - might wanna fix this up so it blankets 2 and 3
01:10:448 (4) - this slider especially looks uneven try and fix it up
01:12:090 - start note here
01:13:582 (1,2,1,2) - just a suggestion for this part try this rhythm http://puu.sh/q3ZJb/6fe643b1c1.jpg
01:14:179 (1) - this slider looks terrible imo, same as 00:14:478 (1) -
01:15:970 (3,1) - overlap doesnt look nice
01:18:433 (2) - different than 00:18:731 (2) - when i think they should be the same
00:18:731 (2) - start note here
01:23:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - doesnt represent the music, not exactly sure about the spacing but it doesnt call for that many jumps imo

Relife

00:08:508 (2) - 2 is given equal spacing even though its clearly weaker
00:09:402 (1) - make a slider instead
00:09:701 - start a note here and have it as the NC
00:10:596 (1,2) - give some spacing
00:10:895 - start note here
00:11:193 (4,5) - give some spacing
00:11:492 - start note here
00:12:089 - ^
00:14:178 (9) - change in the music at 9 which isnt being mapped for
00:12:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2,3 and 5,6 are the strong beats in this pattern take that into account and nerf the jumps a big because they seem to big to me
00:14:477 (1,2) - this isnt following the music 00:14:477 (1) - slider here
00:15:074 (4) - make a sluider ending at 00:15:372 -
00:15:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont hear 5 individual beats hear i feel this part calls for a slider
00:16:566 - note here
00:18:357 - ^
00:18:805 (1) - more spacing
00:19:253 (2) - ^
00:21:492 (4,5) - give some spacingf shouldnt be stacked
00:22:984 - start note here
00:23:730 - ^
00:24:029 (2) - obvious sound here but is getting treated like nothing happened, give it some spacing atleast or make a slider there
00:24:626 (5) - slider here
00:25:074 (1,2,3) - i dont think this is a triple please double check it
00:27:462 (1,2,3) - same with this keep in mind im not too good with picking up these things by ear so i might be wrong with this/ missed a lot
00:27:760 - start note here
00:28:357 (10) - emphasis 10 somehow
00:29:253 (2,3,4) - shouldnt be a triple
00:30:148 - i think theres a triple starting here wif you want to map it
00:30:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this is just a triple
00:31:641 (5) - think this is overmap and even if it wasnt i dont see why this should be made easier with the slider instead
idk this part is really feint so im just gonna skip it actually but im pretty sure youve mapped it wrong so maybe see how other diffs have done it or remap it yourself
00:38:357 (4) - slider instead
00:38:656 - start note here
00:42:238 (2) - show the vocal in your mapping somehow 00:42:089 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - i dont think this pattern fits at all imo
00:42:835 (4,5) - more spacing
00:44:626 - starrt note here
00:44:775 (5,8) - this overlap looks bad also not sure about 8 looks like a bad slider too me
00:46:119 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - jumps are way too big
00:47:611 (4,5) - i think you should stack 5 on to the end of 4
00:48:507 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing
00:48:805 (3) - slider instead
00:50:895 - start note here
00:50:298 (4,5,6,7,8) - more spacing
00:52:089 - streams starts here
00:55:074 - note here? but i see kinda what your doing here
00:56:566 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - maybe make the stream kick sliders insteads so you emphasis the vocals a bit more
00:58:656 (2) - not much of a beat here
00:59:178 (5) - overmap
00:59:850 (1) - slider here
01:00:298 (5,6) - more spacing
01:00:895 (7) - ^
01:01:939 - start note here
01:03:432 (2) - slider here?
01:04:626 (9) - more spacing
01:08:656 (1) - just make this part of the stream so the kick sliders start on the vocals
01:09:402 (5) - more spacing and probably make it a slider
01:09:551 (6,7) - these shouldnt be stacked
01:10:447 - start note here
01:11:193 - ^
01:12:014 (6) - overmap
01:13:581 (5,7) - make these sliders and you could give em some more spacing
01:14:178 (1) - more spacing
01:15:074 - start note on here
01:15:372 (4,5,6,7,8) - too large spacing and doesnt fit
01:16:492 (2) - overmap
01:17:611 (5) - just make a circle instead
01:18:283 (2) - overmap
01:18:507 - start note here
01:18:954 (6) - more spacing
01:20:895 - start note here
01:21:342 - ^
Topic Starter
Planecakes

ikorza wrote:

from modreqs

i think youll have to rename the Relife diff iirc only the highest diff can have a custom name.
also i think you should just have the one bg which your using on every diff except the gd as it looks nicer imo but also is different to the other mapsets going around atm.

hope my modhelps i wrote a lot so i hope it helps :)

SPOILER

Mazziv's Ultra


00:08:508 (2) - 2 is given equal spacing even though its clearly weaker
00:12:090 (4) - more spacing
00:12:537 - start a note here
00:12:687 (6,7,8) - spacing seems random just use the same spacing youve used for other 1/4
00:13:134 - start note here
00:14:478 (1) - this looks bad imo the end of the slider
00:14:478 (1,2) - if you keep this blanket fix it up
00:19:030 - i dont think you should end this on the blue tick
00:20:448 - start note here
00:21:194 - ^
00:26:269 (1,2,3) - this plays pretty awkward
00:27:612 (1,2,1,2) - circles would fit here better imo, as the slider end on pretty audible sounds
00:30:522 (2) - make the dip of the slider happen at 00:30:896 - were the vocal starts
00:32:090 (2,1) - spacing is different for no clear reason
00:35:672 (3) - i think 2 circles would be better atleast try it out
00:36:866 - pretty sure the stream starts here
00:40:746 (1,2,3) - theres other stuff to map to the long sliders arent as appealing
00:43:582 - theres a sound here
00:44:179 - you should have a slider end on here no reason for the pause
00:45:969 (9) - i think itd be good if you put some emphasis on the vocal by either putting a kink in the stream or having a kickslider where 9 is into the NC
00:46:716 (9,10,11,12,13) - not sure about this, i dont think you should be ending it on the 1/8 00:47:052 -
00:47:612 (1,1) - more spacing?
00:49:702 (3) - ^
00:51:493 (1) - theres obviously other stuff going on here map that instead of just the slider
00:57:612 - note here
00:58:657 (2) - remove note or put a slider end here
00:59:552 (1,1) - more spacing
01:02:687 - note here
01:03:433 - ^
01:04:477 (2,1) - more spacing might be funner
01:04:627 (1,2) - i dont get why these are stacked
01:05:821 (1) - slider instead?
01:07:015 (1) - might wanna fix this up so it blankets 2 and 3
01:10:448 (4) - this slider especially looks uneven try and fix it up
01:12:090 - start note here
01:13:582 (1,2,1,2) - just a suggestion for this part try this rhythm http://puu.sh/q3ZJb/6fe643b1c1.jpg
01:14:179 (1) - this slider looks terrible imo, same as 00:14:478 (1) -
01:15:970 (3,1) - overlap doesnt look nice
01:18:433 (2) - different than 00:18:731 (2) - when i think they should be the same
00:18:731 (2) - start note here
01:23:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - doesnt represent the music, not exactly sure about the spacing but it doesnt call for that many jumps imo

Relife

00:08:508 (2) - 2 is given equal spacing even though its clearly weaker
00:09:402 (1) - make a slider instead
00:09:701 - start a note here and have it as the NC
00:10:596 (1,2) - give some spacing
00:10:895 - start note here
00:11:193 (4,5) - give some spacing
00:11:492 - start note here
00:12:089 - ^
00:14:178 (9) - change in the music at 9 which isnt being mapped for
00:12:238 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 2,3 and 5,6 are the strong beats in this pattern take that into account and nerf the jumps a big because they seem to big to me
00:14:477 (1,2) - this isnt following the music 00:14:477 (1) - slider here
00:15:074 (4) - make a sluider ending at 00:15:372 -
00:15:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - i dont hear 5 individual beats hear i feel this part calls for a slider
00:16:566 - note here
00:18:357 - ^
00:18:805 (1) - more spacing
00:19:253 (2) - ^
00:21:492 (4,5) - give some spacingf shouldnt be stacked
00:22:984 - start note here
00:23:730 - ^
00:24:029 (2) - obvious sound here but is getting treated like nothing happened, give it some spacing atleast or make a slider there
00:24:626 (5) - slider here
00:25:074 (1,2,3) - i dont think this is a triple please double check it
00:27:462 (1,2,3) - same with this keep in mind im not too good with picking up these things by ear so i might be wrong with this/ missed a lot
00:27:760 - start note here
00:28:357 (10) - emphasis 10 somehow
00:29:253 (2,3,4) - shouldnt be a triple
00:30:148 - i think theres a triple starting here wif you want to map it
00:30:596 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think this is just a triple
00:31:641 (5) - think this is overmap and even if it wasnt i dont see why this should be made easier with the slider instead
idk this part is really feint so im just gonna skip it actually but im pretty sure youve mapped it wrong so maybe see how other diffs have done it or remap it yourself
00:38:357 (4) - slider instead
00:38:656 - start note here
00:42:238 (2) - show the vocal in your mapping somehow 00:42:089 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - i dont think this pattern fits at all imo
00:42:835 (4,5) - more spacing
00:44:626 - starrt note here
00:44:775 (5,8) - this overlap looks bad also not sure about 8 looks like a bad slider too me
00:46:119 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - jumps are way too big
00:47:611 (4,5) - i think you should stack 5 on to the end of 4
00:48:507 (2,3,4,5) - more spacing
00:48:805 (3) - slider instead
00:50:895 - start note here
00:50:298 (4,5,6,7,8) - more spacing
00:52:089 - streams starts here
00:55:074 - note here? but i see kinda what your doing here
00:56:566 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - maybe make the stream kick sliders insteads so you emphasis the vocals a bit more
00:58:656 (2) - not much of a beat here
00:59:178 (5) - overmap
00:59:850 (1) - slider here
01:00:298 (5,6) - more spacing
01:00:895 (7) - ^
01:01:939 - start note here
01:03:432 (2) - slider here?
01:04:626 (9) - more spacing
01:08:656 (1) - just make this part of the stream so the kick sliders start on the vocals
01:09:402 (5) - more spacing and probably make it a slider
01:09:551 (6,7) - these shouldnt be stacked
01:10:447 - start note here
01:11:193 - ^
01:12:014 (6) - overmap
01:13:581 (5,7) - make these sliders and you could give em some more spacing
01:14:178 (1) - more spacing
01:15:074 - start note on here
01:15:372 (4,5,6,7,8) - too large spacing and doesnt fit
01:16:492 (2) - overmap
01:17:611 (5) - just make a circle instead
01:18:283 (2) - overmap
01:18:507 - start note here
01:18:954 (6) - more spacing
01:20:895 - start note here
01:21:342 - ^
Thanks, I'm too busy to reply what changes i have done. Mazziv will mod his own diff.
Topic Starter
Planecakes

Beako Chan wrote:

Beswt Beatmap everr :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :)
I agree.
Topic Starter
Planecakes

CookieSlay3r wrote:

I really want these maps getting ranked !
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Omg my replies is too slow
Topic Starter
Planecakes

Sinnoh wrote:

For the Normal/Hard difficulties, the wiki highly recommends not to change distance spacing during the map, of which there is a lot of. The target demographic for this difficulty are still learning the relationship between distance and timing. I even dropped the combo on Normal because of the spacing, these two difficulties need to have consistent on distance snapping for around 90% of the map. No point in further mods from me yet for those difficulties since the distance snapping alone will change a lot.
Also, use a lot more hitsounds, there's the occasional change but there's just too much of the same drum.
My redid hard and it looks much better. I played a lot of hard maps and learned how a hard should be.
Yeah hitsounds, yes i will find some new cool hitsounds for this beatmap.

Update 07.22.2016
Redid Normal


omg i have updated the old version of normal twice.... This will be the third time i'm redoing normal.d,s.,ad

Redid normal again 07.22.2016
Mazziv

ikorza wrote:

from modreqs

i think youll have to rename the Relife diff iirc only the highest diff can have a custom name.
also i think you should just have the one bg which your using on every diff except the gd as it looks nicer imo but also is different to the other mapsets going around atm.

hope my modhelps i wrote a lot so i hope it helps :)

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Mazziv's Ultra


00:08:508 (2) - 2 is given equal spacing even though its clearly weaker decreasing the spacing wouldnt fit the whole pattern imo
00:12:090 (4) - more spacing no cuz that would make no sense lo
00:12:537 - start a note here no....? mayb tell me why lo
00:12:687 (6,7,8) - spacing seems random just use the same spacing youve used for other 1/4 this plays like doubles,increasing spacing is a nogo here lo
00:13:134 - start note here no cuz i dont know why i should put a not there xd
00:14:478 (1) - this looks bad imo the end of the slider turned it to the nex tnot lo l
00:14:478 (1,2) - if you keep this blanket fix it up fixd d
00:19:030 - i dont think you should end this on the blue tick o fixd
00:20:448 - start note here no o
00:21:194 - ^aaa
00:26:269 (1,2,3) - this plays pretty awkward i kn wo a rfrind told me bout it rledy lo theks plolz !!!!
00:27:612 (1,2,1,2) - circles would fit here better imo, as the slider end on pretty audible sounds if more people complain iw ill lokat it
00:30:522 (2) - make the dip of the slider happen at 00:30:896 - were the vocal starts made something different,i made it so the ball is at the end of the v to emphasize the new vocal,makjing extra slider doesnt look good to me :CV
00:32:090 (2,1) - spacing is different for no clear reason aaaaa
00:35:672 (3) - i think 2 circles would be better atleast try it out i emphasized 00:35:373 (2,3) - on this quick noise you hear so no lo
00:36:866 - pretty sure the stream starts here lol no
00:40:746 (1,2,3) - theres other stuff to map to the long sliders arent as appealing fixd lool
00:43:582 - theres a sound hereyes
00:44:179 - you should have a slider end on here no reason for the pause no xd
00:45:969 (9) - i think itd be good if you put some emphasis on the vocal by either putting a kink in the stream or having a kickslider where 9 is into the NC 00:46:119 (1) - here starts the strong vocal,basically where the stream goes to the right,also ncd' here o
00:46:716 (9,10,11,12,13) - not sure about this, i dont think you should be ending it on the 1/8 00:47:052 - why not lo
00:47:612 (1,1) - more spacing?okdad
00:49:702 (3) - ^ explained already,3/4 slider aaa
00:51:493 (1) - theres obviously other stuff going on here map that instead of just the slider i tryed both,following the piano and following the vocal and for me following the vocal fits better
00:57:612 - note here o
00:58:657 (2) - remove note or put a slider end here same as in the beginning lo
00:59:552 (1,1) - more spacing its ok like that daddy
01:02:687 - note here noooo
01:03:433 - ^ noooo
01:04:477 (2,1) - more spacing might be funner yeah cuz streamjumps at 210 bpms is fun xd
01:04:627 (1,2) - i dont get why these are stacked wops
01:05:821 (1) - slider instead? doesnt fit for me lo
01:07:015 (1) - might wanna fix this up so it blankets 2 and 3 fixd.....?
01:10:448 (4) - this slider especially looks uneven try and fix it up d o ne
01:12:090 - start note here nolol
01:13:582 (1,2,1,2) - just a suggestion for this part try this rhythm http://puu.sh/q3ZJb/6fe643b1c1.jpg i made the same rhythm 3 times before and u didnt say anything -_ -
01:14:179 (1) - this slider looks terrible imo, same as 00:14:478 (1) - fixd kinda
01:15:970 (3,1) - overlap doesnt look nice aaaa
01:18:433 (2) - different than 00:18:731 (2) - when i think they should be the same fxdxxxdxxdx
00:18:731 (2) - start note hereneo
01:23:731 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - doesnt represent the music, not exactly sure about the spacing but it doesnt call for that many jumps imo emphasized the dt pp part she sung -_
tekns for mod

code for map xd
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400,224,85672,1,2,1:0:0:0:
223,326,85821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
379,50,85970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,199,86119,5,0,1:0:0:0:
458,146,86269,1,2,0:1:0:0:
249,44,86418,5,8,0:0:0:0:
417,340,86567,1,0,1:0:0:0:
90,262,86716,5,2,0:1:0:0:
403,82,86866,1,0,1:0:0:0:
277,363,87015,5,8,0:0:0:0:
114,59,87164,1,2,0:1:0:0:
372,68,87313,5,8,3:0:0:0:
495,355,87463,1,0,3:0:0:0:
90,325,87612,5,2,3:1:0:0:
273,26,87761,1,4,3:0:0:0:
254,304,87911,6,0,P|202:255|271:271,1,192.500005874634,2|4,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,324,88358,2,0,P|340:264|356:228,1,96.250002937317,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Noya
from modreqs
im not very good at doing insanes so ill do your easier ones ><

Normal
Check AiMod! Your kiai isn't snapped as well as you have some distance snap issues that should be obeyed since it is a normal.
00:09:701 (5) - NC
00:26:715 (2,3) - Don't make the slider so fast, rather keep it the same velocity as the others but have it end where 3 is.
00:27:611 (5) - Have this start a combo and make 00:27:611 (5,1,1,1) - the same combo.
00:45:521 (5) - NC
00:50:895 (5) - ^
00:59:253 (4) - ^
01:08:805 (5) - ^
01:12:387 (2) - Move out from under 01:11:790 (1) - a bit more.
01:14:178 (5) - NC
01:14:178 (5) - I think the kiai section should end here as well since the rest of the song is mostly the outro.

Sorry I didn't point out much but it's hard to when there are distance errors ><

Hard
Check AiMod for the same reasons as your normal.
00:10:895 (4) - Start on the red tick before it and make it end where it ends now.
00:11:492 (5) - NC
00:12:835 (1,2) - Make this a part of the previous combo and start the new combo at 00:14:477 (3) -
00:21:193 (10) - NC
00:27:611 (5) - ^
00:33:283 (3) - Start at red tick and make it go to where it ends now.
00:47:312 (6) - NC
01:04:178 (5) - ^
01:18:656 (3) - Start on red and end where it ends now or keep it the same and add a single note where it ends now.

hope it helps and good luck with ranking ;D
Topic Starter
Planecakes

Noya wrote:

from modreqs
im not very good at doing insanes so ill do your easier ones ><

Normal
Check AiMod! Your kiai isn't snapped as well as you have some distance snap issues that should be obeyed since it is a normal.
00:09:701 (5) - NC Sure
00:26:715 (2,3) - Don't make the slider so fast, rather keep it the same velocity as the others but have it end where 3 is. Sure
00:27:611 (5) - Have this start a combo and make 00:27:611 (5,1,1,1) - the same combo. Sure
00:45:521 (5) - NC Sure
00:50:895 (5) - ^ Sure
00:59:253 (4) - ^ Sure
01:08:805 (5) - ^ Omg i can't use nc
01:12:387 (2) - Move out from under 01:11:790 (1) - a bit more. Sure
01:14:178 (5) - NC Sure
01:14:178 (5) - I think the kiai section should end here as well since the rest of the song is mostly the outro. Sure

Sorry I didn't point out much but it's hard to when there are distance errors ><

Hard
Check AiMod for the same reasons as your normal.
00:10:895 (4) - Start on the red tick before it and make it end where it ends now. Added extra note here
00:11:492 (5) - NC Sure
00:12:835 (1,2) - Make this a part of the previous combo and start the new combo at 00:14:477 (3) - Sure
00:21:193 (10) - NC Sure
00:27:611 (5) - ^[color=#408000 ]Sure[/color]
00:33:283 (3) - Start at red tick and make it go to where it ends now. Sure
00:47:312 (6) - NC Sure
01:04:178 (5) - ^ Sure
01:18:656 (3) - Start on red and end where it ends now or keep it the same and add a single note where it ends now. Sure


hope it helps and good luck with ranking ;D
thanks, i need to learn how to nc tho...
Fanteer
Hi
M4M

Normal
you have to use DS all map (preferably from 0.8 to 1.2) and you can not change SV (there are
exceptions)
00:27:611 (5,6,7,8) - it should be Normal , It should be simple

Insane
00:07:313 (1,2,6,7) - it is 4.15 stars . You use very big jumps. Make their less
00:14:626 (2,3) - spacings need to do more in comparison with the 00:14:477 (1,2) -
00:20:298 (8) - do the same spacings between 2 sliders 00:42:537 (7,8,9) - 00:50:298 (3,4,5) -
00:51:492 (6,7,8) - 01:19:551 (9,1,2) - 01:20:745 (4,5,6) - 01:25:223 (9,1,2) -
00:28:506 (4,5) - I do not know why you're here reduced spacings
00:32:089 (9,2,3,5) - - ?
00:47:014 (9,2) - blanket
00:59:850 (6) - NC
01:04:328 (6,7,8) - blanket
01:05:969 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:04:328 (6,1) - overlap
01:10:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing
01:28:451 (7) - why green point

Another
Set AR 9.1
00:08:506 (6) - NC
00:09:999 (3,4) - blanket
00:10:148 (4,6) - bad flow
00:10:148 (4,1) - stack
00:12:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix jumps. Very ugly
00:13:805 (8) - fix spacing 00:20:148 (1,2,3,4) -
00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing make it the same 00:23:731 (2,3,4,5) -
00:18:357 (6) - NC
00:20:746 (5,6,7) - do the same spacings between 2 sliders 00:21:940 (2,3,5) - 00:31:193 (7,8,9) - 00:35:372 (4,6,7) - 00:39:999 (1,2,3) - 01:10:596 (6,7,8) -
00:22:537 (5,7) - blanket
00:24:775 (6,2) - ^
00:25:820 (5,7,1) - bad flow
00:42:686 (4,7) - blanket
00:47:910 (6) - NC
00:55:522 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It 5 star. Make jumps
00:29:104 (3) - NC
00:57:462 (1,2) - ctrl g
00:59:850 (7) - NC
01:02:686 (1,2) - blanket
01:05:522 (6,7) - ^

Extreme
00:09:701 (8) - NC
00:09:850 (1) - remove NC
00:16:865 (3,6) - stack
00:19:551 (2,3) - blanket
00:20:895 (7,4) - overlap
00:38:357 (4) - NC
00:38:208 (3,4,6,7) - overlap
00:39:104 (1,2,3) - do the same spacings between 2 sliders
00:49:701 (1,2,3) - big spacing
00:49:701 (1,6) - blanket
00:53:880 (4,7) - fix blanket
01:04:626 (9) - NC
01:04:775 (1) - remove NC
01:05:223 (4,7) - overlap
01:15:969 (3) - put on 288 112

Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Planecakes

Fanteer wrote:

Hi
M4M

Normal
you have to use DS all map (preferably from 0.8 to 1.2) and you can not change SV (there are
exceptions)
00:27:611 (5,6,7,8) - it should be Normal , It should be simple Removed 0.75-2/1.5 SV? i can't remember

Insane
00:07:313 (1,2,6,7) - it is 4.15 stars . You use very big jumps. Make their less Sure
00:14:626 (2,3) - spacings need to do more in comparison with the 00:14:477 (1,2) - Sure
00:20:298 (8) - do the same spacings between 2 sliders 00:42:537 (7,8,9) - 00:50:298 (3,4,5) -
00:51:492 (6,7,8) - 01:19:551 (9,1,2) - 01:20:745 (4,5,6) - 01:25:223 (9,1,2) - Added 1.4 SV
00:28:506 (4,5) - I do not know why you're here reduced spacings idk
00:32:089 (9,2,3,5) - - ? What are you trying to tell me...
00:47:014 (9,2) - blanket Sure
00:59:850 (6) - NC Sure
01:04:328 (6,7,8) - blanket Sure
01:05:969 (3,4) - fix blanket Fixed
01:04:328 (6,1) - overlap Fixed
01:10:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing Can't see anything wrong with this spacing
01:28:451 (7) - why green point My old kiai time, lol

Another
Set AR 9.1
00:08:506 (6) - NC Sure
00:09:999 (3,4) - blanket Sure
00:10:148 (4,6) - bad flow Can't see anything bad here
00:10:148 (4,1) - stack Sure
00:12:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - fix jumps. Very ugly Fixed
00:13:805 (8) - fix spacing 00:20:148 (1,2,3,4) - Sure
00:14:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix spacing make it the same 00:23:731 (2,3,4,5) - Sure
00:18:357 (6) - NC Sure
00:20:746 (5,6,7) - do the same spacings between 2 sliders 00:21:940 (2,3,5) - 00:31:193 (7,8,9) - 00:35:372 (4,6,7) - 00:39:999 (1,2,3) - 01:10:596 (6,7,8) - Sure
00:22:537 (5,7) - blanket Sure
00:24:775 (6,2) - ^ Sure
00:25:820 (5,7,1) - bad flow Fixed
00:42:686 (4,7) - blanket Sure
00:47:910 (6) - NC Sure
00:55:522 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It 5 star. Make jumps I made new jumps i have never seen before in osu, tried something new
00:29:104 (3) - NC Sure
00:57:462 (1,2) - ctrl g Sure
00:59:850 (7) - NC Sure
01:02:686 (1,2) - blanket Sure
01:05:522 (6,7) - ^ Sure

Extreme
00:09:701 (8) - NC Sure
00:09:850 (1) - remove NC Sure
00:16:865 (3,6) - stack Sure
00:19:551 (2,3) - blanket Sure
00:20:895 (7,4) - overlap Sure
00:38:357 (4) - NC Sure
00:38:208 (3,4,6,7) - overlap Sure
00:39:104 (1,2,3) - do the same spacings between 2 sliders Sure
00:49:701 (1,2,3) - big spacing Removed note
00:49:701 (1,6) - blanket Sure
00:53:880 (4,7) - fix blanket Sure
01:04:626 (9) - NC Sure
01:04:775 (1) - remove NC Sure
01:05:223 (4,7) - overlap Fixed
01:15:969 (3) - put on 288 112 Sure

Good Luck :)
Thank you for the mod!
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