Meyrink wrote:

lmao

Crimmi wrote:

Your BG "rem bg.jpg" is 1233 x 768, try to find that similar bg with a more correct resolution. I'll try to fix this as soon as possible
All combo colours are consistent except in Mikii's difficulty. Fixed
Why is the kiai end earlier in toybot's difficulty, ending at 01:14:167 while the others end at 01:18:943? Fixed
Add "toybot" & "Mikii" to the tags since they provided difficulties for you. Fixed


Normal



00:38:346 (x) - Hmm, you kind of missed a downbeat here, plus it's clickable too. There must be atleast this much room between spinner end and the next object
00:47:152 (3) - Even though it looks like it fits but I don't hear anything in that part to support it but I guess that's just me. The vocals have this "ah" sound from breathing that is present at this point
00:59:839 (x) - You have two inherited points on the same line here, I guess you must've forgotten to remove one or added one by mistake. Fixed

Drill loli

01:10:585 (1) - This slider is not snapped correctly. Fixed!

1. 00:44:615 (2) - watch DS here. (Missing note?)
2. 00:51:481 (2) - and here... Also.. this could really flow better into the upcoming notes. (unless it's a missing note)
3. 00:53:869 (3) - ^ (Missing note?)
4. 01:20:734 (2) - ^
5. 01:22:525 (2) - ^
6. 01:25:510 (2) - ^ (missing note?)
   ----------------------
7. 00:13:272 (2) - Second node 359 234 for slightly better blanket
8. 00:19:540 (1,2) - I'd honestly swap these. 00:20:436 - should be clicked, and 00:19:839 - has no strong sounds really.
9. 00:24:018 (1,2) - Try a 1/1 slider and then a 3/2 reverse slider starting at 00:25:212 - that sound at 00:25:809 - isn't really dominant
10. 00:46:704 (2,3) - For this I'd suggest splitting (2) up so the head and the tail each get their own clicks. Try using a 1/1 slider or two circles for the eie in eien
11. 00:47:899 (1) - Last node 154 143 for DS if you want.
12. 01:09:391 (1,1) - These tails hit nothing in the music. Try 3/2 reverse sliders maybe?

1. 00:33:421 (4) - I'm against trying to use polarity here. The sound it tries to capture is barely audible enough for this difficulty to warrant mapping. A 3/2 gap because of how you emphasize vocals will play just fine here tbh.
2. 00:34:466 (2) - DS issue here.
3. 00:47:899 (1) - This would flow better if it was curved upwards instead. try flipping and then giving it a -28° rotate.
4. 00:55:063 (1) - Maybe shorten by 1/2? This is quite a bit of 1/2 to play in a row here.
5. 01:07:003 (1) - Really nothing strong at the end of the tail here. I suggest reducing by 1/2?

1. 00:13:272 (1) - A little bit more curve definitely could help.
2. 00:24:466 (2,3) - swap for drums? You were kinda following them this whole time, so it's a bit of a sudden change. If you're following the violin, skip this and the next suggestion.
3. 00:25:361 (2) - Try swapping this with the (1) if you aren't following the violin.
4. 00:56:779 (3) - not sure what you're following with this.. The drum 1/4 happens between the (1,2) actually. Maybe move it there?

1. 00:09:391 (2) - Unsnapped
2. 00:09:093 (1,2) - I was expecting these to be slower.. Imo like 0.75
3. 00:19:242 (1) - to 00:27:600 (1) - feels a bit underwhelming for movement. Consider buffing this up a little. (Hard is more dense and jumpy)
4. 00:23:869 (6) - if you wish, you can try x388 y0 for even DS.
5. 00:28:421 (7) - Delete? For an Insane, it should try to stick to simple rhythms. Also it gives nice emphasis to (8)
6. 00:55:660 (3,4) - Try moving the (3) over to the right and angle it a bit more left. As such, move the head of (4) over to the right a little as well so these flow nicely with (2)
   SPOILER

   

1. Previewtime is at 00:59:093 - right now, however this means the snare is involved when selecting the song. You could move this to "59120" to avoid it.
2. Ninos, harutos and toybots diff have not the same tags like your diffs. i think mapper names were missing lel
3. add "and" to tags for the "&" in the name of the artist.
4. Spreadwise it would be advisable to push easy and normal a bit in ar or od, to have better spread between E/N/H
5. Spread between Normal and Hard is pretty huge comparing to the other diffs.

1. 00:14:913 (1,2) - Isn't the handmovement rather the way with ctrl+g? I mean you obviously turn to the right after the stream. Btw. dunno why ou nc it? seems not necessary to me.
2. 00:22:227 (3) - I suppose you can skip that piano thing sound? but I wouldn't since you don't really follow the vocal either which an extended slider should representtttttt
3. 00:29:988 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you don't really have good feedback in the song for the stream here, so I'd suggest you to put some hitsounds down to support that factor 00:29:988 (1,5,1,5) - add whistles on these?
4. 00:32:600 - you map the triplet before but not here me >: - tbh i wouldn't map the triplets here at all, they are very inaudible anyway and you gotta map them all the time since they reoccur every 2 sec
5. 00:37:152 - doesn't sound right to me with 1/8 and i don't hear anything on the 1/8 either, sounds more like simple 1/4 to me lol,
6. 00:37:451 - ^same 00:37:749 - however this sounds legit on 1/8. really weird this part.
7. 00:42:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about using drumset here intead? ofc on sliderhead to? i mean its a clear drumroll here, unlike the other parts in the map.
8. 00:45:884 - theres no sound to map to 00:46:406 (3) - no sounds on the blue ticks either.
9. 00:46:704 - 00:47:301 (1) - this whole section is 1/3, but you could map 00:46:704 - from here to 00:46:854 - since the piano supports it.
10. 00:50:436 - Skip triplet with extended slider >:
11. 00:50:809 - ignoring triplet
12. 00:51:481 (1) - wouldnt do a extended here because you skip the red tick, but you could add softsampleset on the end of tail
13. 00:52:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - drumset like before dkdkdkdkdkfff
14. 00:56:257 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - vibrating shit is prolly enough to represent those even tho those sound like pure random mix of 1/4 drumroll and some electric sounds which end on 1/3, so i'd suggest you to make that vibrating shit more vibrating with drumset.
15. 00:59:242 (1,1) - could use lower volume on these, since they are the same voluem like the rest lol, and the ends are to loud imo, however you can silence the ends if you don't want to loweer the volume on these.
16. 01:04:018 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - drumset :^D
17. 01:08:794 - the drumroll starts the first time there, so everything before that is just 1/2, besides 01:08:421 - 01:08:545 - those two. The snapping is really weird in those parts no shit and its hard to figure out to lol.
18. 01:11:107 - triplet skip >: for an extended slider
19. 01:23:346 - nc is not needed and you could add a note 01:23:346 - here
20. 01:27:525 - skipping this triplet for 01:27:301 (1,2,3) - weaker triplet why not
21. 01:28:122 - triplet skip for jump nggg r u fort?
22. 01:28:421 - ^NDNDNDN

1. 00:13:272 - u did not just skip the triplettttttt orrrrrrrr
2. 00:14:913 (2) - looks like 1/4 because of the kickslider spacing you had before hdndndnd
3. 00:21:033 - r u sure skipping th ekick like that maybe consider not to. >:
4. 00:29:988 (1) - could you make these streams more audible with hitsounds see reasoning on highest diff
5. 00:42:675 (1) - drumset on this instead of normalset?
6. 01:08:197 - stream starts there before theres nothing. I hear nothing at least.
7. 01:13:570 (1,2,3,4,1) - no idea if you wanted this straight or curvy, but if you wanted it straight well then its not.
8. 01:25:063 (2) - first ime u space this like this underneath. I'd suggest using about the same spacing like you did before.
9. 01:28:346 (2) - this is a triplet tho...

1. why is the hp so lol dkdkd? You have tons of 1/1 sliders, and it doesn't fit with the spread either.
2. 00:09:391 (2) - unsnapped object.
3. 00:24:466 (2) - ded blanket noodjdjdd don't hit me >:
4. 00:42:525 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - drumset here instead? drurrmrmrmrmrmdroll
5. 00:45:212 (3) - claapap for consistency
6. 00:46:704 - this part is 1/3, see toybots diff
7. 00:49:093 - add nc? 00:49:540 - delete nc..
8. 01:04:316 (7) - nc since you change the angle suddenly might be hard to read (prolly not but k)
9. 01:27:003 - don't skip the snare lol >:>:>:>::>:>:> -> 01:27:152 (1) - iff you still use this you could add a triplet at th end since its very prominent in the song.

1. why is the hp so low.
2. 00:09:391 (4,1,2) - how to figure out whats 1/2 and whats 1/4 due to the weird spacingmanagement here. The larger spacing is 1/4 and the lower spacing is 1/4 dkkdkkkkkkk
3. 00:12:973 (3,4) - what are those antijumps xddd
4. 00:23:943 - wud sound better as a triplet imo on the head
5. 00:46:704 - this is 1/3kddkkd *plays moonlight sonata*
6. 01:12:227 (2,3) - spacing looks like 1/4 at this point and its really similar to the spacing you use before at the reverse sliders.
7. 01:21:182 (8,1) - kinda anticlimatic having the note before the snare on stack lol

Feb wrote:

-600 bpm new ways of mapping
boxbox m4m
from q
i love myth & roid

[Toybot extrapackung]

1. 00:13:272 - u did not just skip the triplettttttt orrrrrrrr // I did
2. 00:14:913 (2) - looks like 1/4 because of the kickslider spacing you had before hdndndnd // not really, since kickslider spacing has more of an implication toward 1/2 spacing. i dont think any player who can reasonably play this diff won't misread this
3. 00:21:033 - r u sure skipping th ekick like that maybe consider not to. >: // i don't think the kick is that audible here
4. 00:29:988 (1) - could you make these streams more audible with hitsounds see reasoning on highest diff // i feel like the hitsounds for this section are loud enough.. i put one more whistle to make the streams more distinct
5. 00:42:675 (1) - drumset on this instead of normalset? // ok
6. 01:08:197 - stream starts there before theres nothing. I hear nothing at least. // i heard low undertones of drums here, so i put streams there
7. 01:13:570 (1,2,3,4,1) - no idea if you wanted this straight or curvy, but if you wanted it straight well then its not. // its supposed to be curved
8. 01:25:063 (2) - first ime u space this like this underneath. I'd suggest using about the same spacing like you did before. // i used this spacing in other areas, like 00:27:003 (3,4) -
9. 01:28:346 (2) - this is a triplet tho... // triplet would underemphasize the shit out of this

dhdhddnnndndnd

I mentioned some things not on lower diffs. Like the overmapped stuff.

Good Luck on the set, I like this to be honest more than the other opening.

Feb wrote:

-600 bpm new ways of mapping
boxbox m4m
from q
i love myth & roid

[General]

1. Previewtime is at 00:59:093 - right now, however this means the snare is involved when selecting the song. You could move this to "59120" to avoid it.
2. Ninos, harutos and toybots diff have not the same tags like your diffs. i think mapper names were missing lel
3. add "and" to tags for the "&" in the name of the artist.
4. Spreadwise it would be advisable to push easy and normal a bit in ar or od, to have better spread between E/N/H
5. Spread between Normal and Hard is pretty huge comparing to the other diffs.

[Haruto Verrückt]

1. why is the hp so low. o i frgt to chnged it d chnged to 6 now
2. 00:09:391 (4,1,2) - how to figure out whats 1/2 and whats 1/4 due to the weird spacingmanagement here. The larger spacing is 1/4 and the lower spacing is 1/4 dkkdkkkkkkk how to figure out? you'll figure it out yourself :D actually nothing is weird on the spacing here. i mostly do spacing like these for 1/4 sliderjump so this should be fine imo but will change if anyone will mention this again, im a bit unsure tbh so yea, need more ppl opinions xd
3. 00:12:973 (3,4) - what are those antijumps xddd for ~ e m p h a s i s ~ on 00:13:122 (4,1) - lo
4. 00:23:943 - wud sound better as a triplet imo on the head great idea
5. 00:46:704 - this is 1/3kddkkd *plays moonlight sonata*
6. 01:12:227 (2,3) - spacing looks like 1/4 at this point and its really similar to the spacing you use before at the reverse sliders. im doing sliderjumps before and this shud be okay too xd
7. 01:21:182 (8,1) - kinda anticlimatic having the note before the snare on stack lol did something lo

dhdhddnnndndnd

I mentioned some things not on lower diffs. Like the overmapped stuff.

Good Luck on the set, I like this to be honest more than the other opening.

sahuang wrote:

ok m4m for ticket ><

check your preview time, tag and stack leniency in all diffs, they are not consistent now.

[Haruto's Insane]

1. 00:08:346 (1,2) - blanket
2. 00:12:078 (1,2) - blanket
3. 00:25:809 (3,1) - stack
4. 01:10:287 (3,1,2,3) - they are all stacking but one is 1/1 the other is 1/2. quite confusing imo
5. 01:15:063 (4,4) - NC as you did b4
6. 01:24:018 (2,4,5) - stack? i manually stack here so it won't overlaped
   
   fixed all except the stack one

Nice mapset, have my star!

Sharkie wrote:

m4m stuff ayy

Haruto's Insane

[Haruto's Insane]
00:34:466 (2,3,4) - I find this kinda confusing to play, although it does make sense. basically following the calm sound there so yeah it should be okay
01:21:331 (1,2) - These are not perfectly stacked, unless you want it that way. did something here, like doing finetuning

Are you sure the slider velocity is not too high? It feels kinda high, oh well. nahh it should be fine imo.

Absolutely love this mapset.

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Sharkie wrote:

Easy
[Easy]
00:08:346 (2) - I personally think that this would look better at x:413 y:111 and 00:09:093 (3) - moved to x:224 y:94, moving the objects thereafter accordingly. I feel like the current way works just find and doesn't lack in visuals
00:18:346 (4) - I think this would play even better if it was moved 5 degrees clockwise, the slider head at the same coordinates. Sure


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[Normal]
01:11:779 (1) - I think this plays a bit weird, with the sharp incoming angle compared to the shape of the slider body. I would keep the same coordinates, but flip the slider of the y-axis. I can't see why this would play weird?
01:15:063 (3) - I would much rather prefer this at x:269 y:331. I think where you have it now might confuse players. Sure

Sharkie wrote:

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Can't find anything wrong, it's perfect. <3

sahuang wrote:

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00:24:018 (1,2,3) - ds fixed
00:29:093 - how about starting break from this point? :w: sure :p


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00:47:899 (1,2) - ds? xd
01:14:167 (1,2,3) - flow is bit too straight imo fixed
01:25:212 (3,4,5) - same This one I like so no changes

sahuang wrote:

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00:57:600 (2,1) - 00:58:048 (2,3) - ds quite same and it's confusing www I think I fixed?
01:27:600 (4,6) - maybe NC Sure why not

Feb wrote:

[what does that name even mean diff]

00:14:913 (1,2) - Isn't the handmovement rather the way with ctrl+g? I mean you obviously turn to the right after the stream. Btw. dunno why ou nc it? seems not necessary to me. The current way plays really well
00:22:227 (3) - I suppose you can skip that piano thing sound? but I wouldn't since you don't really follow the vocal either which an extended slider should representtttttt I like my extended sliders xd
00:29:988 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you don't really have good feedback in the song for the stream here, so I'd suggest you to put some hitsounds down to support that factor 00:29:988 (1,5,1,5) - add whistles on these? Sure
00:32:600 - you map the triplet before but not here me >: - tbh i wouldn't map the triplets here at all, they are very inaudible anyway and you gotta map them all the time since they reoccur every 2 sec Mapped triplet xd
00:37:152 - doesn't sound right to me with 1/8 and i don't hear anything on the 1/8 either, sounds more like simple 1/4 to me lol,
00:37:451 - ^same 00:37:749 - however this sounds legit on 1/8. really weird this part. Kept this the same rhythmwise
00:42:525 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - how about using drumset here intead? ofc on sliderhead to? i mean its a clear drumroll here, unlike the other parts in the map. Sure
00:45:884 - theres no sound to map to 00:46:406 (3) - no sounds on the blue ticks either. This isn't an issue imo, it fits nonetheless
00:46:704 - 00:47:301 (1) - this whole section is 1/3, but you could map 00:46:704 - from here to 00:46:854 - since the piano supports it.
00:50:436 - Skip triplet with extended slider >:
00:50:809 - ignoring triplet
00:51:481 (1) - wouldnt do a extended here because you skip the red tick, but you could add softsampleset on the end of tail
00:52:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - drumset like before dkdkdkdkdkfff
00:56:257 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - vibrating shit is prolly enough to represent those even tho those sound like pure random mix of 1/4 drumroll and some electric sounds which end on 1/3, so i'd suggest you to make that vibrating shit more vibrating with drumset. Used drumset
00:59:242 (1,1) - could use lower volume on these, since they are the same voluem like the rest lol, and the ends are to loud imo, however you can silence the ends if you don't want to loweer the volume on these.
01:04:018 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - drumset :^D
01:08:794 - the drumroll starts the first time there, so everything before that is just 1/2, besides 01:08:421 - 01:08:545 - those two. The snapping is really weird in those parts no shit and its hard to figure out to lol.
01:11:107 - triplet skip >: for an extended slider I like my extended sliders x2
01:23:346 - nc is not needed and you could add a note 01:23:346 - here Meh I like it the way it is
01:27:525 - skipping this triplet for 01:27:301 (1,2,3) - weaker triplet why not yes im a boss
01:28:122 - triplet skip for jump nggg r u fort? I added a triplet there or something
01:28:421 - ^NDNDNDN huh?