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MYTH & ROID - Paradisus-Paradoxum

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Aertex
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, August 22, 2016 at 9:47:52 PM

Artist: MYTH & ROID
Title: Paradisus-Paradoxum
Source: Re:ゼロから始める異世界生活
Tags: Re:Zero kara hajimeru isekai seikatsu MYTH & ROID tv size life in a different world from zero
BPM: 201
Filesize: 19167kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.98 stars, 187 notes)
  2. Insane (4.48 stars, 259 notes)
  3. Normal (1.88 stars, 99 notes)
  4. Suffering (5.47 stars, 366 notes)
Download: MYTH & ROID - Paradisus-Paradoxum
Download: MYTH & ROID - Paradisus-Paradoxum (no video)
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TenshiMegumin
good job
01:08:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Distance is a bit too short
Topic Starter
Aertex

TenshiMegumin wrote:

good job
01:08:186 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Distance is a bit too short
Thank You for your earlier Mod! Fixed!

PM Log of earlier mod
17:59 TenshiMegumin: hello
17:59 TenshiMegumin: :D
17:59 Aertex: hihi
17:59 TenshiMegumin: Have the time to listen to my suggestion?
18:00 Aertex: Yes please, but im a new mapper, so if you could kindly go into a bit more depth?
18:00 Aertex: Still learning now to not be bad
18:00 TenshiMegumin: My English is not very good, can understand not too smooth.
18:01 Aertex: Its fine, i can understand
18:02 TenshiMegumin: 00:14:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Do some mistakes here, if you try this correction, will be more beautiful. Also more likely to
18:02 TenshiMegumin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5540400
18:03 TenshiMegumin: 00:17:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - overmap:d
18:03 TenshiMegumin: Please use 25% here to listen to the rhythm
18:04 TenshiMegumin: If there is no good way to come up with more, my advice is to add a spinner
18:04 Aertex: Ill try to fix that, Is there anything else thats bad?
18:05 Aertex: I know I still need to try and hitsound the entire map.
18:06 TenshiMegumin: umm.....
18:07 TenshiMegumin: 00:18:484 (1) - I am very suggest start from here, with 25% of the lower right corner to listen to the rhythm
18:07 TenshiMegumin: D
18:08 TenshiMegumin: In fact, I also began to learn, later can do a friend
18:08 Aertex: What sort of general suggestion would you make for 00:18:484 (1) - ?
18:09 TenshiMegumin: This map is doing very good, but a little wrong with the rhythm
18:09 TenshiMegumin: playback rate 25%
18:10 Aertex: Oh, is it ok if i ask you a question?
18:10 Aertex: Regarding this map's BPM?
18:11 TenshiMegumin: Didn't understand the meaning.. You mean a BPM on what's the problem?
18:12 Aertex: In your oppinion, is 201 BPM ok for the song?
18:13 TenshiMegumin: Maybe because I have wrong, cause you understand is wrong
18:13 TenshiMegumin: 201 BPM is correct
18:13 Aertex: Alright, thank you. I was worried i got the wrong bpm
18:13 TenshiMegumin: I mean you may need to use the lower right corner of playback rate to hear some sounds wrong rhythm now
18:14 Aertex: Will do. I actually just finished uploading the finished difficulty 10 seconds before you pmed me.
18:15 Aertex: If you want, you can put these suggestions on the forum page so I can give you a kudosu?
18:16 TenshiMegumin: Very glad to
18:16 TenshiMegumin: But I'm also just started learning mapper, something I know a lot less than you
18:17 Aertex: I would say you probably know more than me. I dont think i know enough to try and mod another persons song :D
18:17 TenshiMegumin: 00:00:425 (1) - The place of the pause time is too long, will let players feel confused
18:17 Aertex: Thank you for your time in helping though
18:17 TenshiMegumin: The spinner can try on the difficulty of the more simple
18:19 TenshiMegumin: nothing
18:19 Aertex: When you say pause time
18:19 TenshiMegumin: Because I'm doing this song :D
18:20 Aertex: Do you mean from 00:00:425 to 00:05:201?
18:20 Aertex: or
18:20 Aertex: 00:05:201 to 00:07:589?
18:21 TenshiMegumin: If you want to start to do a runner, I suggest to join a 0.5 times the speed
18:21 TenshiMegumin: Add the slider and then use of variable speed
18:23 TenshiMegumin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5540478
18:23 Aertex: hmm
18:24 TenshiMegumin: It doesn't appear your rhythm very abrupt
18:26 TenshiMegumin: Another suggestion is try to arrange scattered, not pile up in the middle..Actually I don't have to correct this mistake, this requires a lot of experience
18:26 TenshiMegumin: ))
18:27 Aertex: Yeah, im stil trying to figure out how to best use the entire play area for notes.
18:32 Aertex: http://i.imgur.com/wFuupud.jpg Like this?
18:33 TenshiMegumin: ye
18:34 Aertex: Ok, thank you :)
18:34 Aertex: Now i will try to fix the part you said I overmapped.
18:35 Aertex: If you do /savelog and paste it onto this map's forum page I can give you Kudosu if you want to.
18:35 TenshiMegumin: I help you ready the slider
18:36 TenshiMegumin: Don't do the slider you quite right
18:37 TenshiMegumin: Outside the chain to download. I can't use abroad.....I live in China
18:38 Aertex: Im sorry, I dont understand
18:38 TenshiMegumin: :D
18:38 TenshiMegumin: I don't know much about osu BBS... I have no contact with
18:38 Aertex: How to use osu to host the image?
18:38 TenshiMegumin: I mean I have to help you to complete the slider part, I'm thinking about how to give you a download link
18:39 Aertex: hmm
18:39 TenshiMegumin: Because of China's network is special
18:41 Aertex: 376,280,5424,6,0,B|376:184|376:184|408:152|408:152|408:104|424:80|424:80|399:55,1,250 Like this?
18:41 TenshiMegumin: I think that the use of two different networks to communicate too much difficult than mapper hhahh
18:42 Aertex: If you want to send a slider type, you can send it via chat like that ^
18:42 Aertex: http://i.imgur.com/SqAiojZ.png
18:42 Aertex: Need to open .osu file of difficulty and copy the hitobject
18:43 TenshiMegumin: I found a solution
18:43 TenshiMegumin: hhah
18:43 TenshiMegumin: Open. Osu file,
18:44 TenshiMegumin: Cover at the beginning of a paragraph
18:44 TenshiMegumin: 256,192,425,12,0,5201,0:0:0:0:
18:44 TenshiMegumin: 144,24,5350,6,0,B|104:56|104:56|128:104|128:136|128:136|160:184|160:184|160:240,1,250
18:44 TenshiMegumin: Sorry, copy is wrong
18:44 TenshiMegumin: 256,192,425,12,0,5201,0:0:0:0:
18:44 TenshiMegumin: 144,24,5350,6,0,B|104:56|104:56|128:104|128:136|128:136|160:184|160:184|160:240,1,250
18:44 TenshiMegumin: 224,360,6245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18:44 TenshiMegumin: 368,360,6395,6,0,B|408:328|408:328|384:280|384:248|384:248|352:200|352:200|352:112,1,275
18:45 TenshiMegumin: 272,80,7365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18:45 Aertex: ok, let me see if i can do it...
18:46 TenshiMegumin: The passage under the [HitObjects]
18:49 Aertex: Ok, i think i got it, let me just fix a thing
18:49 Aertex: Sorry for taking a bit
18:49 TenshiMegumin: I look at the time, should be in your country is now in the evening.? Wish you have a good night
18:50 Aertex: 6:50 PM Right now
18:50 TenshiMegumin: um
18:50 Aertex: http://i.imgur.com/7xvbPBU.jpg
18:50 Aertex: Is this fixed?
18:51 TenshiMegumin: ye
18:52 Aertex: Thank you :D
Lilyanna
Hi Nm from my queue

Normal

you may wanna check distance snap just to make sure distance stayes equal
00:11:171 (4,5,1) - can be blanket better
00:14:156 (3,5) - try avoid overlaps
00:40:275 (2,3) - avoid so much stacks in normal because new players may have hard time reading stacked notes
00:42:514 (2,3) - this doesnt look pretty maybe try this
00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,1) - looks messy and overlapped pls try avoid D:
00:49:678 (7,8) - same comment about so much stacked notes
01:24:007 (2,3) - blanket
01:24:007 (2) - try avoid this too cuz new players dont know when the revers slider will stop imo and its rly high bpm
01:27:439 (3,4,5,6,7) - .. i recommand u remap this it doesnt suite the normal difficultie
00:46:992 (1,2) - spacing issue
New combos
00:49:977 (8) - NC
00:53:559 (5) - NC
01:01:917 (5) - NC
01:04:007 (9) - nc
01:09:081 (3) - nc
01:11:469 (8) - nc
01:14:753 (5) - nc
Normal general : spacing , overlaps issues and try be more creative with sliders so they can flow better with the song
Hard

00:17:141 (4,5) - i dont hear any 1/4 revers
00:26:693 (13) - too long combos add nc on downbeats
00:32:365 (13) - ^
00:57:887 (1,3) - make more parallel with the next slider
01:05:051 (4,5,6) - unecessary triple imo
01:10:126 (4,5) - blanket
Hhard general: too long combos that need to set correctly and fix flowing

thats it for me u seem new at mapping dont worry some practice and help and u get through Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Aertex

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi Nm from my queue

Normal

you may wanna check distance snap just to make sure distance stayes equal
00:11:171 (4,5,1) - can be blanket better
00:14:156 (3,5) - try avoid overlaps
00:40:275 (2,3) - avoid so much stacks in normal because new players may have hard time reading stacked notes
00:42:514 (2,3) - this doesnt look pretty maybe try this
00:45:798 (1,2,3,4,1) - looks messy and overlapped pls try avoid D:
00:49:678 (7,8) - same comment about so much stacked notes
01:24:007 (2,3) - blanket
01:24:007 (2) - try avoid this too cuz new players dont know when the revers slider will stop imo and its rly high bpm
01:27:439 (3,4,5,6,7) - .. i recommand u remap this it doesnt suite the normal difficultie
00:46:992 (1,2) - spacing issue
New combos
00:49:977 (8) - NC
00:53:559 (5) - NC
01:01:917 (5) - NC
01:04:007 (9) - nc
01:09:081 (3) - nc
01:11:469 (8) - nc
01:14:753 (5) - nc
Normal general : spacing , overlaps issues and try be more creative with sliders so they can flow better with the song
Hard

00:17:141 (4,5) - i dont hear any 1/4 revers
00:26:693 (13) - too long combos add nc on downbeats
00:32:365 (13) - ^
00:57:887 (1,3) - make more parallel with the next slider
01:05:051 (4,5,6) - unecessary triple imo
01:10:126 (4,5) - blanket
Hhard general: too long combos that need to set correctly and fix flowing

thats it for me u seem new at mapping dont worry some practice and help and u get through Good luck :)
Fixed! Thank you for mod!
PhantomHunt3r
hello, this is from my mod queue, i hope this helps <3
Insane
00:08:633 (6,7) - fix this blanket please
00:21:917 (5,6) - maybe blanket?
00:49:827 (3,4) - fix this blanket
01:07:663 (2,3,4) - blanket, if it was intentional
01:18:335 (1,2) - plz avoid overlapping

Suffering
00:09:081 (5) - nudge down 6 to fix blanket
00:09:678 (2) - raise this to blanket and avoiding overlapping
00:18:932 (3,4) - stack these 2
00:32:962 (1,2,3) - avoid overlapping please
00:34:902 (4) - nudge right 11 and down 1 to overlap

i have this sudden urge to rewatch Re: Zero now
Topic Starter
Aertex

PhantomHunt3r wrote:

hello, this is from my mod queue, i hope this helps <3
Insane
00:08:633 (6,7) - fix this blanket please
00:21:917 (5,6) - maybe blanket?
00:49:827 (3,4) - fix this blanket
01:07:663 (2,3,4) - blanket, if it was intentional
01:18:335 (1,2) - plz avoid overlapping

Suffering
00:09:081 (5) - nudge down 6 to fix blanket
00:09:678 (2) - raise this to blanket and avoiding overlapping
00:18:932 (3,4) - stack these 2
00:32:962 (1,2,3) - avoid overlapping please
00:34:902 (4) - nudge right 11 and down 1 to overlap

i have this sudden urge to rewatch Re: Zero now
Thank you for Mod! Fixed!
[ D Myung ]
Yohoo o/ From my Modding Queue

-Mod-

Suffering

00:30:275 (5) Change this double slider to a simple slider and add another slider here 00:30:872 and finish it here 00:31:021.
00:31:171 - Add a new note. I don't know if it is good but the slider is not good there
00:32:514 Delete this note
01:21:629 Consider to put a spinner here with the ''aaahhhhh'' following the song XD
01:27:141 This slider is unnecessary

I hope that my mod has been helpful :|
Topic Starter
Aertex

[ Korox ] wrote:

Yohoo o/ From my Modding Queue

-Mod-

Suffering

00:30:275 (5) Change this double slider to a simple slider and add another slider here 00:30:872 and finish it here 00:31:021.
00:31:171 - Add a new note. I don't know if it is good but the slider is not good there
00:32:514 Delete this note
01:21:629 Consider to put a spinner here with the ''aaahhhhh'' following the song XD
01:27:141 This slider is unnecessary

I hope that my mod has been helpful :|
Changed everything minus the spinner suggestion, Thank you for mod! :D
Kyuukai
Ayy, I'm here from my Modding queue !

Suffering
00:09:977 - Make it clickable because it's a highlight of the map (You have to make a debut slider there or a note)
00:09:380 (1,2) - The 2 is too close from the 1, space them more.
00:11:171 (5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit to the pattern there 00:12:365 (1,2,3,4,5), the flow of the map completely changes, but the rhythm is still the same. You should fully map that part 00:12:365 - 00:13:410
00:18:633 (2) - Up the length of that slider till it reaches there 00:18:932, delete this 00:18:932 (3)
00:19:007 (4) - Move it there 00:19:081
00:19:977 (3,1) - Not well stacked
00:20:723 (3,4) - Same
00:21:917 (9,10) - Same
00:23:111 (4,5,6) - They are too close to each other, space them
00:24:753 (7,8) - 8 is too close from the 7
00:25:350 (2,3) - 3 is too close from the 2
00:25:499 (3,4,5,6) - Space them more
00:24:230 (4,5) - Distance between thoses are not the same as the distance of the stream.
00:28:186 - Stream starts there and finishes there 00:29:081, just in case you didn't notice
00:29:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very tight, you should space them
00:30:126 (4,5) - Blanket
00:34:753 - Make it clickable since you are mapping the voices
00:36:544 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should really change that
00:38:633 - Make it clickable
00:45:201 (9,10,11) - Space them more
00:48:186 - Make it clickable because the rhythm changes there
00:53:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very tight for an extra, space them
00:56:992 (3) - NC
00:57:738 (8) - NC
00:58:335 (1) - NC
00:58:783 (4,5) - Too close each other, space them
01:00:126 - Make it clickable
01:00:574 (5) - Breaks the rhythm and the flow, map that part with single taps + sliders instead of this
01:05:350 (4,5,6,7) - Way too hard to read, will be hard to rank this unless you're HW
01:05:947 (7,8,9,10) - The triple is too close from the 7, space the triple more
01:06:395 (11,12,13) - Spacing them more
01:09:827 (1,2) - Blanket
01:10:126 (2,3) - Blanket
01:10:872 (3,4) - Too close, space them
01:16:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Change the shape of the stream, this is very weird lol
01:19:230 (1) - NC
01:27:887 (1,1) - Not symmetric

Way too much Finish hitsounds, reduce their presence !

I like your mapping style, good luck !
Topic Starter
Aertex

yaleufeu wrote:

Ayy, I'm here from my Modding queue !

Suffering
00:09:977 - Make it clickable because it's a highlight of the map (You have to make a debut slider there or a note)
00:09:380 (1,2) - The 2 is too close from the 1, space them more.
00:11:171 (5,6,7,8) - Doesn't fit to the pattern there 00:12:365 (1,2,3,4,5), the flow of the map completely changes, but the rhythm is still the same. You should fully map that part 00:12:365 - 00:13:410
00:18:633 (2) - Up the length of that slider till it reaches there 00:18:932, delete this 00:18:932 (3)
00:19:007 (4) - Move it there 00:19:081
00:19:977 (3,1) - Not well stacked
00:20:723 (3,4) - Same
00:21:917 (9,10) - Same
00:23:111 (4,5,6) - They are too close to each other, space them
00:24:753 (7,8) - 8 is too close from the 7
00:25:350 (2,3) - 3 is too close from the 2
00:25:499 (3,4,5,6) - Space them more
00:24:230 (4,5) - Distance between thoses are not the same as the distance of the stream.
00:28:186 - Stream starts there and finishes there 00:29:081, just in case you didn't notice
00:29:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Very tight, you should space them
00:30:126 (4,5) - Blanket
00:34:753 - Make it clickable since you are mapping the voices
00:36:544 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should really change that
00:38:633 - Make it clickable
00:45:201 (9,10,11) - Space them more
00:48:186 - Make it clickable because the rhythm changes there
00:53:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very tight for an extra, space them
00:56:992 (3) - NC
00:57:738 (8) - NC
00:58:335 (1) - NC
00:58:783 (4,5) - Too close each other, space them
01:00:126 - Make it clickable
01:00:574 (5) - Breaks the rhythm and the flow, map that part with single taps + sliders instead of this
01:05:350 (4,5,6,7) - Way too hard to read, will be hard to rank this unless you're HW
01:05:947 (7,8,9,10) - The triple is too close from the 7, space the triple more
01:06:395 (11,12,13) - Spacing them more
01:09:827 (1,2) - Blanket
01:10:126 (2,3) - Blanket
01:10:872 (3,4) - Too close, space them
01:16:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Change the shape of the stream, this is very weird lol
01:19:230 (1) - NC
01:27:887 (1,1) - Not symmetric

Way too much Finish hitsounds, reduce their presence !

I like your mapping style, good luck !
Fixed/Modified everything! Thank you for mod! :D
anna apple
Insane
  1. 00:08:633 (6) - NC
  2. 00:09:678 (8) - angle from this note to 00:09:977 (1) - doesn't play well.
  3. 00:10:574 (3,4) - the way this overlaps to 00:09:977 (1) - looks ugly and the angle to 3 doesn't play well.
  4. 00:11:171 (6) - this over lapping on 5 looks bad and overlapping on 4 also looks bad.
  5. 00:13:857 (9,10) - this doesn't play to well because of the 00:13:559 (8) - direction
  6. 00:14:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this moving through the slider is a cool idea but because its not perfectly through the slider it looks bad.
  7. 00:17:141 (3,4) - these have no sound to back them up
  8. 00:18:186 - make this time clickable.
  9. 00:18:633 (1,2) - shapes seem a little random and the reverse slider doesn't really fit here.
  10. 00:19:529 - make this time clickable as well.
  11. 00:19:678 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - rhythmically speaking this section is kind of weak because of 00:19:977 (5,8) -. These sliders take away from the rhythmic quality because their ends land on white ticks that are over strong beats.
  12. 00:20:723 - through 00:29:081 - pick an instrument and consistently map to that instrument ( I mean you should do that for the whole map but here your rhythms seem pretty random.)
  13. 00:28:186 - you can make a 1/4 stream here
  14. *skipping to look at kiai*
  15. 01:00:126 - make this clickable
  16. 01:04:156 (6) - try this out see how you like it: http://puu.sh/qelHN/d1ad71b8f9.jpg
  17. 01:05:350 (3) - this plays badly because of the angle
  18. 01:06:096 - make this clickable
  19. 01:09:827 (10) - this plays badly because of the angle
  20. 01:17:887 - make this clickable.
(ya my NM is kind of short because I get bored or there isn't much, in this case I'm bored.)

you need more practice with mapping, maybe even mod some maps. study some well known mappers. And you need better modders xD. oh and re do ur NC's -- just nc every large white tick and then good modders will tell you what to change from there. Also when you reply to mods be more specific as to what you changed.

Good luck with ranking!
Topic Starter
Aertex
Thank you for mod; lets try to follow your suggestion and begin to comment on changes:

Pyroflayer wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:08:633 (6) - NC - Re-NC'd the entire map, dunno if I should do this change or not
  2. 00:09:678 (8) - angle from this note to 00:09:977 (1) - doesn't play well. Re-mapped
  3. 00:10:574 (3,4) - the way this overlaps to 00:09:977 (1) - looks ugly and the angle to 3 doesn't play well. removed overlap
  4. 00:11:171 (6) - this over lapping on 5 looks bad and overlapping on 4 also looks bad. Re-mapped
  5. 00:13:857 (9,10) - this doesn't play to well because of the 00:13:559 (8) - direction ^
  6. 00:14:156 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this moving through the slider is a cool idea but because its not perfectly through the slider it looks bad. Removed idea
  7. 00:17:141 (3,4) - these have no sound to back them up Replaced with long slider
  8. 00:18:186 - make this time clickable. Fixed
  9. 00:18:633 (1,2) - shapes seem a little random and the reverse slider doesn't really fit here. Changed slider shapes, removed reverse
  10. 00:19:529 - make this time clickable as well. clickifyed
  11. 00:19:678 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - rhythmically speaking this section is kind of weak because of 00:19:977 (5,8) -. These sliders take away from the rhythmic quality because their ends land on white ticks that are over strong beats. Shifted sliders to down ticks
  12. 00:20:723 - through 00:29:081 - pick an instrument and consistently map to that instrument ( I mean you should do that for the whole map but here your rhythms seem pretty random.) This is the one part im a bit confused about, I listened to it multiple times and it still seems like its mapped to the violin thing in the bg, am I wrong? The only part that might seem questionable is from 00:20:737 to 00:23:708. Sorry if i'm wrong ;w;
  13. 00:28:186 - you can make a 1/4 stream here Added Triples
  14. *skipping to look at kiai*
  15. 01:00:126 - make this clickable Clickifyed
  16. 01:04:156 (6) - try this out see how you like it: http://puu.sh/qelHN/d1ad71b8f9.jpg Implemented suggestion, thank you
  17. 01:05:350 (3) - this plays badly because of the angle Remapped
  18. 01:06:096 - make this clickable clickifyed
  19. 01:09:827 (10) - this plays badly because of the angle Remapped
  20. 01:17:887 - make this clickable.Clickifyed

(ya my NM is kind of short because I get bored or there isn't much, in this case I'm bored.) Im sorry for it being boring;W; I will try to make my next map not so boring

you need more practice with mapping, maybe even mod some maps. study some well known mappers. And you need better modders xD. oh and re do ur NC's -- just nc every large white tick and then good modders will tell you what to change from there. Also when you reply to mods be more specific as to what you changed.

Good luck with ranking! TY :D
Once again, thank you very much for mod. :D
Chalwa
Hello! Mod from my queue!
Normal
Imo 1.0 SV is too high, pleasechange it to 0.8-0.9
00:10:275 (3,4) - Blanket improve
00:11:171 (4,5,1) - ^
00:12:365 (1,3) - ^^
00:15:051 (4,5) - ^^^
00:15:947 (5,7) - You can make it parallel
00:38:932 (1,2,1) - Another blanket improve
00:47:887 (2,3) - ^
00:49:977 (1) - Make this curve smaller, fits better for music
01:01:022 (2) - BLANKET!!!
01:01:320 (3,1) - ^^^
01:06:693 (1) - You can map more here, cause you have strong beats
01:08:783 (2,2) - Overlap. Fix it
01:09:977 (3,4) - Make it parallel
01:12:365 (3) - So much big curve imo. Make it smaller ;)
01:16:842 (1) - Weird slider. Make it like on screen:
Hard
Make SV 1.3 or 1.2 pls IT ISN'T INSANE!
I can't mod it. Please look at this three forums and remap it :/
Flow Tutorial 1

Flow Tutorial 2

blanket guide

END!
Sorry, but I can't mod Insane, cuz i must go out.
Nice mapset, but you must make better blankets
GOOD LUCK!
Topic Starter
Aertex

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! Mod from my queue!
Normal
Imo 1.0 SV is too high, pleasechange it to 0.8-0.9
00:10:275 (3,4) - Blanket improve Improved, i think.
00:11:171 (4,5,1) - ^ ^
00:12:365 (1,3) - ^^ ^^
00:15:051 (4,5) - ^^^ ^^^^
00:15:947 (5,7) - You can make it parallel Made parallel
00:38:932 (1,2,1) - Another blanket improve Improved
00:47:887 (2,3) - ^ Improved
00:49:977 (1) - Make this curve smaller, fits better for music. I tried reducing this slider from a whole slider to a half slider. It did sound better, but it left a wierd empty sounding space that I didn't really like. Sorry.
01:01:022 (2) - BLANKET!!! BLANKETED!
01:01:320 (3,1) - ^^^ Applied more blankets
01:06:693 (1) - You can map more here, cause you have strong beats Mapped some more
01:08:783 (2,2) - Overlap. Fix it Re-mapped
01:09:977 (3,4) - Make it parallel Parallel-ized
01:12:365 (3) - So much big curve imo. Make it smaller ;) Smallify'd ;)
01:16:842 (1) - Weird slider. Make it like on screen: Suggestion Applied

Ended up also flow-ifying the normal diff too.


Hard
Make SV 1.3 or 1.2 pls IT ISN'T INSANE!
I can't mod it. Please look at this three forums and remap it :/
Flow Tutorial 1

Flow Tutorial 2

blanket guide

RE-MAPPED

END!
Sorry, but I can't mod Insane, cuz i must go out.
Nice mapset, but you must make better blankets
GOOD LUCK!
Thank you for mod :D. I think I need to apply better flowing for the insane and extra too :o
MaridiuS
[General]
Offset is incorrect, just checked on slow motion and correct offset is 449 +-2 possibly. If my links don't work change offset of map to 443 first.


[Suffering]

New combos
00:09:997 (3) - NC
00:20:442 (1) - delete NC
00:20:741 (3) - NC Here
00:21:935 (9) - NC
00:22:532 (1) - delete NC
00:23:129 (4) - NC
00:24:323 (5) - NC
00:25:219 (1) - delete NC
00:25:517 (3) - Add NC
00:29:098 (14) - NC
00:29:398 (1) - delete NC
00:31:487 (9) - NC
00:37:457 (5) - NC
00:38:651 (9) - NC
00:38:950 (1) - remove NC
00:39:845 (5) - NC
00:44:920 (8) - I'd NC here
00:47:009 (11) - NC
00:48:204 (3) - NC
00:50:592 (6) - NC
00:52:980 (14) - NC
00:53:129 (1) - delte NC
00:55:368 (8) - NC
01:01:338 (8) - NC
01:03:726 (5) - NC
01:04:920 (15) - NC
01:05:069 (1) - Delete NC
01:06:114 (8) - NC
01:07:905 (5) - NC
01:09:696 (9) - NC
01:09:845 (1) - delte NC
01:14:472 (9) - Nc
01:14:771 (1) - delte NC
01:14:472 (9) - kiai should end here.
01:17:905 (15) - NC
01:20:442 (5) - NC
01:21:040 (1) - delete NC
01:22:831 (6) - NC
01:25:517 (9) - NC

[Structure]

00:11:489 (7,10) - fix overlap
00:13:430 (4,6) - two kinds of overlapping visible in the same time is not good. Stack 4 upon 6.
00:14:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make a smooth curve using sliders transform, simply make 2 sliders like this http://puu.sh/qn87k/aab22f6ff4.jpg. You can transform by using ctrl+shift+F. To get identical sliders simply select one, copy paste, 2x ctrl+> and then ctrl+G on that slider. http://puu.sh/qn8ex/ba6b2a618f.jpg looks much better.
00:19:547 (1) - put it more far away from slider for better looks.
00:21:030 (4,7) - fix overlap
00:21:776 (8,11) - ^
00:21:925 (9,10) - no real reason to do that, make something more simple
00:24:612 (6,7,1,2) - make them to have same distance visual from these 2 sliders 00:24:313 (5,8) -
00:32:970 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't do such touching, doesn't look good imo
00:34:761 (4,5) - don't make such close blankets if you're doing it only once.
00:36:552 (2,3,4) - copy paste them to look more clean and dont touch.
00:39:388 (2,5) - fix overlap
00:40:731 (8,1) - ^
00:43:418 (1) - too curved doesn't look good, make it same as 00:44:015 (4) -
00:43:418 (1,4) - don't let em touch
00:44:612 (7,8) - ^
00:46:403 (5,10,11) - fix overlap
00:47:895 (2) - make it more far away from slider
00:52:671 (10) - Flow/spacing change should start from this circle, not later.
00:53:418 (2,4) - fix overlap
00:57:149 (2,5) - ^
01:02:373 (13,2) - ^
01:07:149 (13,3) - ^
01:10:134 (2) - doesn't look good at all when placed inside the stream basically
01:10:134 (2,4) - also this overlap
01:14:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - very weird blanketing really confusing for the brain
01:24:164 (4,6) - overlap



[Rhythm]
00:00:425 (1) - end 00:04:902 - here
00:05:350 (1) - put slider 00:05:201 - . Slider should have some clickable sound. which is where i linked.
00:07:385 (2) - delete this
00:13:577 (5) - Stream should start here, start it in low DS and slowly increase DS.
00:21:189 (5) - offbeat slider is more suitable here
00:21:637 (7,8,9) - make jumps here
00:22:383 (11) - offbeat slider is more suitable here
00:23:726 (6) - transform into circles, make jumps!
00:27:831 (8) - no beat here
00:38:054 (7) - end on red tick
00:38:260 - note here
00:38:335 - make a 3/4 slider here,
00:41:040 (1,2,3) - rather than this, make it all to be jumpy 6 circles. http://puu.sh/qn9ox/ae7a4992de.jpg random suggestion
00:43:278 (9) - misplaced
00:44:472 (6) - delete this, no sound there
00:45:517 (11) - make it into a slider
00:46:338 - add a beat here
00:49:099 (2) - make slider 1/2
00:49:398 - add a beat here.
00:50:069 (2) - delete this
00:50:144 - add a beat here, make a 3stack.
00:51:487 (2) - make slider 1/2
00:51:786 - add a beat here.
00:54:025 (4) - delete this; add circle here 00:54:017 - and slider 00:54:166 - here, you need to follow the downbeat with something clickable.
00:54:771 (6) - make into 2 circles, jumps
00:56:413 (1) - shouldn't exist. 00:56:263 (2) - should be slider
01:01:338 (8,9) - make them into 4 circles, jumps
01:05:144 (2) - no sound here, remove beat.
01:05:219 (3) - slider should be here instead
01:06:189 (9) - no sound here, delete this
01:09:845 (1) - delete this
01:09:995 - add a circle here.
01:18:204 (1) - delete this
01:18:353 - add a circle here
01:18:641 (3) - should be offbeat slider, starts on where this slider ends.
01:19:835 (3,4) - circles, jumps
01:20:880 (7) - should be offbeat slider,
01:23:418 (1,2) - make jumps
01:27:895 (1,1,1) - transform into circles
01:28:418 - form a 3stack with this once you make jumpy circles.




Map needs much work, you need to check out the map and make more jumps as it is an expert difficulty not just a few parts to make it more fun. Make patterns more consistent and also the structure. Like what you did with same sounds do it once again, and then switch per 2 times or something. Some flow issues but they should be checked once you decide to fix most of the things i mentioned, good luck.
-Latias-
From my modding Q :D

General:

-In the ranked version of this map, made by StarrStyx, he added Kiai time for 00:09:701 to 00:14:402 consider adding the Kiai time
-Another thing is that the offset of the ranked map also made by StarrStyx has an offset of 6,119 while yours is 425. Consider changing this
-Theres no need for commas in the tags so remove those
-Remove "Enable Countdown" on every difficulty by going to song setup, design

Insane
00:08:186(4) put on slider 7 and move 5 accordingly
00:10:275(3,4,5) imo, you should remove 4, and make it so that 3 takes up to the tick 4 would have taken
00:11:768(2,3,4,5) no need for all these circles. Add a slider or two there
00:14:156 nc here
00:19:678 not stacked properly
00:27:738(2,3,4) triple here doesn't sound right
00:47:141(1,2,3,4) these two stacks doesn't sound right here, add something else to replace this
01:04:305(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) this stream is out of place, basically doesn't need to be here. Its overmapped, put something else here to replace it
01:07:663(2,3) stack here ? doesn't work
01:08:260(5,6) ^
01:08:857(8,9)^
01:09:081(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) idk why, but this stream here feels strange

I feel you should start Kiai time a little later by like 3 ticks

Suffering
00:11:171(5,6,7,8) something feels off with this
00:28:186(2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) remove note this and put note 14 somewhere and emphasis it with hitsounds
00:42:813(3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) overmapped replace it with something else
00:46:693(7) nc
00:47:141(12,13,14,15) this two stacks don't feel right replace it
00:52:365(6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) again overmapped, replace it with a creative slider
01:16:842(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) overmapped, replace with something else

try not to overmap as this is the case with lots of maps with this kind of song. Hope this helps ! :D
Topic Starter
Aertex
Wowow big mod, thanks :D

MaridiuS wrote:

[General]
Offset is incorrect, just checked on slow motion and correct offset is 449 +-2 possibly. If my links don't work change offset of map to 443 first. Changed offset


[Suffering]

New combos
00:09:997 (3) - NC
00:20:442 (1) - delete NC
00:20:741 (3) - NC Here
00:21:935 (9) - NC
00:22:532 (1) - delete NC
00:23:129 (4) - NC
00:24:323 (5) - NC
00:25:219 (1) - delete NC
00:25:517 (3) - Add NC
00:29:098 (14) - NC
00:29:398 (1) - delete NC
00:31:487 (9) - NC
00:37:457 (5) - NC
00:38:651 (9) - NC
00:38:950 (1) - remove NC
00:39:845 (5) - NC
00:44:920 (8) - I'd NC here
00:47:009 (11) - NC
00:48:204 (3) - NC
00:50:592 (6) - NC
00:52:980 (14) - NC
00:53:129 (1) - delte NC
00:55:368 (8) - NC
01:01:338 (8) - NC
01:03:726 (5) - NC
01:04:920 (15) - NC
01:05:069 (1) - Delete NC
01:06:114 (8) - NC
01:07:905 (5) - NC
01:09:696 (9) - NC
01:09:845 (1) - delte NC
01:14:472 (9) - Nc
01:14:771 (1) - delte NC
01:14:472 (9) - kiai should end here.
01:17:905 (15) - NC
01:20:442 (5) - NC
01:21:040 (1) - delete NC
01:22:831 (6) - NC
01:25:517 (9) - NC
ALL NC CHANGES APPLIED

[Structure]

00:11:489 (7,10) - fix overlap I decided to stack 00:11:493 (7) - and the end of the 00:12:090 (10) - slider, not sure if this is better or not
00:13:430 (4,6) - two kinds of overlapping visible in the same time is not good. Stack 4 upon 6. Stacked
00:14:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make a smooth curve using sliders transform, simply make 2 sliders like this http://puu.sh/qn87k/aab22f6ff4.jpg. You can transform by using ctrl+shift+F. To get identical sliders simply select one, copy paste, 2x ctrl+> and then ctrl+G on that slider. http://puu.sh/qn8ex/ba6b2a618f.jpg looks much better. Fixed
00:19:547 (1) - put it more far away from slider for better looks. Farther-ifyed
00:21:030 (4,7) - fix overlap Nice catch, fixed
00:21:776 (8,11) - ^ ^
00:21:925 (9,10) - no real reason to do that, make something more simple I think that I was trying to keep it sort of consistent with the other pattern like 00:21:195 (5,6) - when I was mapping it. After a couple of mods regarding overlapping, I re-did most of the other patterns that were like it. If its really a problem ill fix it.
00:24:612 (6,7,1,2) - make them to have same distance visual from these 2 sliders 00:24:313 (5,8) -Im not really sure what you mean, but I moved 00:24:612 (6,7,1,2) a bit more to the left, away from 00:24:313 (5,8) -
00:32:970 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't do such touching, doesn't look good imo I'm not really sure which other way to set them up here, before the current layout they were overlapping near the end point. I tried switching to windmill sliders, but it didnt really work too well.
00:34:761 (4,5) - don't make such close blankets if you're doing it only once. Stacked 00:34:777 (4) - ontop of 00:34:926 (5) -
00:36:552 (2,3,4) - copy paste them to look more clean and dont touch. Fixed
00:39:388 (2,5) - fix overlap Meant to stack 00:39:404 (2) - on top of 00:39:851 (5) - end point
00:40:731 (8,1) - ^Fixed
00:43:418 (1) - too curved doesn't look good, make it same as 00:44:015 (4) - Was Blanketing error, fixed
00:43:418 (1,4) - don't let em touch Fixed
00:44:612 (7,8) - ^ Seperated them a bit more
00:46:403 (5,10,11) - fix overlap Fixed
00:47:895 (2) - make it more far away from slider Moved it a tiny bit farther away
00:52:671 (10) - Flow/spacing change should start from this circle, not later. moved the flow change to that circle
00:53:418 (2,4) - fix overlap Overlap fixed
00:57:149 (2,5) - ^ ^
01:02:373 (13,2) - ^ ^^
01:07:149 (13,3) - ^ ^^^
01:10:134 (2) - doesn't look good at all when placed inside the stream basically I had an idea similar to this that I tried to use earlier on in the song, but it didnt work out. I tried to fix it here, lets see how it works.
01:10:134 (2,4) - also this overlap Fixed
01:14:761 (1,2,3,4,5) - very weird blanketing really confusing for the brain Tried to make the blanket a bit neater
01:24:164 (4,6) - overlap Fixed



[Rhythm]
00:00:425 (1) - end 00:04:902 - here Ended spinner a bit earlier
00:05:350 (1) - put slider 00:05:201 - . Slider should have some clickable sound. which is where i linked.moved slider
00:07:385 (2) - delete this Deleted, but it leaves an empty space for a little bit; not sure if like, but ill test it
00:13:577 (5) - Stream should start here, start it in low DS and slowly increase DS. I think this would lead to a stream that would be a tad bit way to long
00:21:189 (5) - offbeat slider is more suitable here I like the patter that it has right now a bit more
00:21:637 (7,8,9) - make jumps here Spread them out a little more
00:22:383 (11) - offbeat slider is more suitable here Changed to offbeat slider
00:23:726 (6) - transform into circles, make jumps!Jumpifyd
00:27:831 (8) - no beat here Deleted
00:38:054 (7) - end on red tick I want to keep all the 1/8 sliders the same length so that they can be played easier
00:38:260 - note here^
00:38:335 - make a 3/4 slider here, ^
00:41:040 (1,2,3) - rather than this, make it all to be jumpy 6 circles. http://puu.sh/qn9ox/ae7a4992de.jpg random suggestion That dosnt really flow into the next few notes, sorry.
00:43:278 (9) - misplaced Fixed
00:44:472 (6) - delete this, no sound there Deleted
00:45:517 (11) - make it into a slider Sliderfyd
00:46:338 - add a beat here I added a beat, and it did sound better; however, its in the middle of jumps, and I dont think it would be fun to have a triple in the middle of jumps
00:49:099 (2) - make slider 1/2 I like how it looks and sounds better than the result after i change the slider and add the note, sorry.
00:49:398 - add a beat here.^
00:50:069 (2) - delete this That sounds better than what I currently have
00:50:144 - add a beat here, make a 3stack. ^
00:51:487 (2) - make slider 1/2 Same as before, sorry.
00:51:786 - add a beat here.^
00:54:025 (4) - delete this; add circle here 00:54:017 - and slider 00:54:166 - here, you need to follow the downbeat with something clickable. Deleted and replaced. However, im not sure how readable the thing i replaced it with is...
00:54:771 (6) - make into 2 circles, jumps Jumpifyd
00:56:413 (1) - shouldn't exist. 00:56:263 (2) - should be slider I dont really understand what you mean by "shoudn't exist"
01:01:338 (8,9) - make them into 4 circles, jumps Made 01:01:344 (8) - into circles, kept 01:01:643 (10) - as a slider
01:05:144 (2) - no sound here, remove beat. Removed
01:05:219 (3) - slider should be here instead Moved
01:06:189 (9) - no sound here, delete this Deleted
01:09:845 (1) - delete this I like how it sounds right now better than by deleting and adding the note, sorry.
01:09:995 - add a circle here. ^
01:18:204 (1) - delete this Deleted and note added
01:18:353 - add a circle here ^
01:18:641 (3) - should be offbeat slider, starts on where this slider ends. Made off-beat
01:19:835 (3,4) - circles, jumps Jumpifyd
01:20:880 (7) - should be offbeat slider, Sliderfyd
01:23:418 (1,2) - make jumps I ctrl+g 01:23:732 (2) - , not sure if jumpy enough, but it should also flow better if im right...
01:27:895 (1,1,1) - transform into circles Nice idea
01:28:418 - form a 3stack with this once you make jumpy circles. Nice idea




Map needs much work, you need to check out the map and make more jumps as it is an expert difficulty not just a few parts to make it more fun. Make patterns more consistent and also the structure. Like what you did with same sounds do it once again, and then switch per 2 times or something. Some flow issues but they should be checked once you decide to fix most of the things i mentioned, good luck.
Thank you again for mod! :D
Topic Starter
Aertex

captainlatias wrote:

From my modding Q :D

General:

-In the ranked version of this map, made by StarrStyx, he added Kiai time for 00:09:701 to 00:14:402 consider adding the Kiai time Adding kiai in that interval would end in the middle of a stream
-Another thing is that the offset of the ranked map also made by StarrStyx has an offset of 6,119 while yours is 425. Consider changing this These should be the same offset, the major difference being that his offset starts on the first hittable note, while mine starts on the first audiable chorus sound for the spinner.
-Theres no need for commas in the tags so remove those oops, fixed
-Remove "Enable Countdown" on every difficulty by going to song setup, design Fixed

Insane
00:08:186(4) put on slider 7 and move 5 accordingly Replaced notes 4 and 5 with a slider
00:10:275(3,4,5) imo, you should remove 4, and make it so that 3 takes up to the tick 4 would have taken It fit better with the sliders that come after, fixed
00:11:768(2,3,4,5) no need for all these circles. Add a slider or two there Added a slider
00:14:156 nc here NC'd
00:19:678 not stacked properly Stacked
00:27:738(2,3,4) triple here doesn't sound right fixed
00:47:141(1,2,3,4) these two stacks doesn't sound right here, add something else to replace this Replaced with triples
01:04:305(1,2,3,4,5,6,7) this stream is out of place, basically doesn't need to be here. Its overmapped, put something else here to replace it If you delete the stream and listen to the music, you can hear a faint stream of drums
01:07:663(2,3) stack here ? doesn't work Deleted a note from each triplet
01:08:260(5,6) ^ ^
01:08:857(8,9)^ ^
01:09:081(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) idk why, but this stream here feels strange??

I feel you should start Kiai time a little later by like 3 ticks Imo i think its fine. From what I understand , starting kiai on strong white ticks is standart?

Suffering
00:11:171(5,6,7,8) something feels off with this ??
00:28:186(2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) remove note this and put note 14 somewhere and emphasis it with hitsounds Remove which note? The last note on that stream is already being emphasized by a finish hitsound
00:42:813(3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) overmapped replace it with something else If you delete that stream and listen closely, there is a faint stream of drums.
00:46:693(7) nc Re-did NC, not sure whether to do this one or not.
00:47:141(12,13,14,15) this two stacks don't feel right replace it Replaced With a triple
00:52:365(6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) again overmapped, replace it with a creative slider If you delete the stream, you can hear a faint stream of drums.
01:16:842(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) overmapped, replace with something elseYou're right, I replaced it with a spinner

try not to overmap as this is the case with lots of maps with this kind of song. Hope this helps ! :D
MaridiuS
00:56:413 (1) - shouldn't exist. 00:56:263 (2) - should be slider I dont really understand what you mean by "shoudn't exist"
There is no vocal sound on that beat, therefore the beat before it should be a slider, i know it ruins the pattern, but it's better than overmapping.

00:38:054 (7) - end on red tick I want to keep all the 1/8 sliders the same length so that they can be played easier
00:38:260 - note here^
00:38:335 - make a 3/4 slider here, ^
I know that you want it, but this is considered overmap. Don't worry it is easiliy readable the way i said it should be.

00:13:577 (5) - Stream should start here, start it in low DS and slowly increase DS. I think this would lead to a stream that would be a tad bit way to long
You can always make the stuff easier with kicksliders. Ignoring 1/4 beats on expert difficulty is not advised, for insane it would be okay.

ALL NC CHANGES APPLIED
That was so satisfying to see lol.

Also 3stacks are fun in a middle of a jump section if they're stacked.
Topic Starter
Aertex

MaridiuS wrote:

00:56:413 (1) - shouldn't exist. 00:56:263 (2) - should be slider I dont really understand what you mean by "shoudn't exist"
There is no vocal sound on that beat, therefore the beat before it should be a slider, i know it ruins the pattern, but it's better than overmapping. There is vocals there; on each note of that jump part you can hear a transition from ii to aa, back and forth.

00:38:054 (7) - end on red tick I want to keep all the 1/8 sliders the same length so that they can be played easier
00:38:260 - note here^
00:38:335 - make a 3/4 slider here, ^
I know that you want it, but this is considered overmap. Don't worry it is easiliy readable the way i said it should be. Changed it, but imo still looks and sound a bit wierd. Lets see how it goes.

00:13:577 (5) - Stream should start here, start it in low DS and slowly increase DS. I think this would lead to a stream that would be a tad bit way to long
You can always make the stuff easier with kicksliders. Ignoring 1/4 beats on expert difficulty is not advised, for insane it would be okay. Added kick sliders, lets see how that works out...

ALL NC CHANGES APPLIED
That was so satisfying to see lol.

Also 3stacks are fun in a middle of a jump section if they're stacked.
Does this count as another mod? Dunno whether to kudosu or not...

Thanks again! :D
Vovan
Hi, NM from my queue

[Normal]

You should reduce the sliderticks frequency (2→1) because the player here the slidertick everytime and that's sounds really heavy and that's boring. If you don't understand, just open the box :p

Check AImod with distance snap enabled ! Spacing problems

00:12:389 (1,3) - Overlap with the slider head of (3). Move the sliders

00:15:075 (4,5) - What do you think about a double blanket ?

01:08:210 (4,2) - Overlap

01:10:001 (3) - Curve less the slider, it looks ugly

01:12:389 (3) - ^

01:23:434 (1,2) - Fix blanket / improve blanket

01:26:866 (2) - Looks ugly

[Hard]

00:10:747 (9,10) - This part of the blanket is to fix

00:18:657 (1,2) - Pattern don't fit with rythm

00:23:434 (2,3) - Fix blanket

00:40:299 (3,6,7) - (3) overlaps with (6) & (7)

00:42:538 (1,2) - Fix blanket a bit

00:50:001 (1,2) - Fix blanket

00:50:747 (2,4) - Make blanket, fix blanket I don't know x)

01:12:090 (5,6) - Fix blanket

01:18:359 (1,2) - Pattern looks strange : placing & overlaping

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Topic Starter
Aertex

Lexis wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue

[Normal]

You should reduce the sliderticks frequency (2→1) because the player here the slidertick everytime and that's sounds really heavy and that's boring. If you don't understand, just open the box :p Fixed

Check AImod with distance snap enabled ! Spacing problems AIMod is being a butt and wont show me DS errors, so I went through and manually snapped any weird DS Hopefully I got all of them...

00:12:389 (1,3) - Overlap with the slider head of (3). Move the sliders Fixed

00:15:075 (4,5) - What do you think about a double blanket ? Nice idea, implemented

01:08:210 (4,2) - Overlap Fixed

01:10:001 (3) - Curve less the slider, it looks ugly Straightened it out a bit

01:12:389 (3) - ^ ^

01:23:434 (1,2) - Fix blanket / improve blanket Is there any tip on how to blanket arches with other arches? I tried fixing it, not sure if its still correct.

01:26:866 (2) - Looks ugly Made prettier

[Hard]

00:10:747 (9,10) - This part of the blanket is to fix Nice catch, fixed

00:18:657 (1,2) - Pattern don't fit with rythm You're right, that didn't fit at all. Fixed

00:23:434 (2,3) - Fix blanket Blanket fixed

00:40:299 (3,6,7) - (3) overlaps with (6) & (7) Ctrl+h'd 00:38:956 (1,2,3) , should be fixed now

00:42:538 (1,2) - Fix blanket a bit Tried to fix, not sure if ok yet

00:50:001 (1,2) - Fix blanket ^

00:50:747 (2,4) - Make blanket, fix blanket I don't know x) I think I was going for a double blanket, so blanket fixed

01:12:090 (5,6) - Fix blanket Fixed

01:18:359 (1,2) - Pattern looks strange : placing & overlaping Made into prettier mirrored slider

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Thanks for mod! :D
Shunao
Hey~

This is your NM :D

Difficulties

Normal

  1. 00:33:881 (2) - Move to the previous white tick.
  2. 00:34:777 - Add a circle

Hard

  1. 00:47:165 - Add a stack with 3 circles ( it's cool )
  2. 01:24:301 - You can make it:

Good luck with your map! :)
Topic Starter
Aertex

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hey~

This is your NM :D

Difficulties

Normal

  1. 00:33:881 (2) - Move to the previous white tick. Semi-implemented. Instead of moving 00:33:881 (2), i made it shorter which allowed me to make 00:34:777 clickable. It would have sounded really weird if I did it the way you had planned, but this should still fix the problem of making a strong vocal part clickable.
  2. 00:34:777 - Add a circle^


Hard

  1. 00:47:165 - Add a stack with 3 circles ( it's cool ) You're right that this does sound neat, but I think its a bit much for this difficulty. I actually did do this in the insane and extra diff, but I feel like it wouldn't fit well in the hard diff. Sorry.
  2. 01:24:301 - You can make it:
    Implemented, but made the three stack into a triangle instead of a stack so its not confused with a triple
Good luck with your map! :)
Thank you for the mod! :D
awesometonychen
Here is your mod

Hard:
00:09:404 (6) - nc?
00:17:165 (6) - i think you should try to make this slider symmetrical with 00:16:269 (4)
00:23:135 (1,2,3) - try shifting this to the left so the second slider doesn't over lap 00:24:329 (6) and to bridge this awkward gap 00:23:732 (3,4) a bit
00:48:210 (3,4,5) -

00:50:747 (2,3) - I think that having the circle first then the slider would be more appropriate to the song

01:26:269 (1) - I think this could be changed to a repeat

Insane:
00:16:568 (4) - I think it looks better shifted to (256,192)
00:53:732 (6) - this note looks a bit to close to the slider shift it out a bit
00:59:851 (2) - I don't really see a point to this note just extend the slider
01:18:359 (1,2) - these two sliders are slightly touching
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