1. Another (5 stars, 368 notes)
2. Beginner (1.99 stars, 91 notes)
3. Heat's Taiko (4.83 stars, 716 notes)
4. Hyper (4.83 stars, 273 notes)
5. Normal (4.25 stars, 135 notes)

Samah wrote:

[Beginner]
00:08:303 (1) - Like this:

SPOILER

00:48:033 (2) - One grid left.
00:50:465 (5) - Down four, left one, so it lines up with [00:48:033 (2)]
01:29:384 (1) - Like this:

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:24:519 (1) - Like this:

SPOILER

[Hyper]
00:24:722 (2,3,4,6) - Like this:

SPOILER

00:35:060 (5) - One grid right, if you want to keep this shape fairly tight.
00:40:736 (1,2) - Right and up one grid.
00:44:790 (5,6) - One grid right.
00:45:195 (7,8,9) - Two grids right.
00:57:763 (3,4) - This gap is really misleading. Switch the positions of (4) and (5).
00:58:979 (6,8) - Hitcircle overlaps the slider in an awkward way. Move (6) to here:

SPOILER

01:11:141 (3,4,5,6) - Ouch... don't do this, because osu! automatically stacks them up and it looks awful.
01:36:884 (6) - Move this and everything after it (right through to the end of the song) one grid right.
01:42:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The overlapping sliders here look a bit messy. I'd rethink that section.

[Another]
This map is.... unique. Somehow I don't think it's rankable. If you remove some of the overlapping and short combos you might be able to go for approval. Xeno was following the beat when he was hearing "Watch Out" with that (1,2) constant combo in the song.

Since the majority of my suggestions are nazi, I'll star, but you'll want to rethink Another.

XZero94 wrote:

I think the offset is wrong. Everything is 2 beats late. Somewhere around 5050 would be better IMO.

CrimmiSkye wrote:

XZero94 wrote:

I think the offset is wrong. Everything is 2 beats late. Somewhere around 5050 would be better IMO.

I don't think so. it'll make it too late, i'm sticking with my offset until otherwise.

Xeno wrote:

Some updates on my part. =p

1. Offset is wrong in all diffs. The correct offset is 1819. Don't forget to resnap the circles. Also don't forget to adjust all other timings in the maps, kiai especially.

1. I suggest that instead of curvy sliders you use those angled ones throughout the whole difficulty. It would fit the style better.
2. 00:11:549 (4) - New combo.
3. 01:03:440 (1) - This slider looks ugly. It is not mirrored properly. Make it's endpoint something like this to make a proper shape.
4. 01:06:684 (3) - New combo.
5. 01:19:657 (3) - New combo.
6. 01:26:143 (3) - New combo.
7. 01:37:494 (3) - Another ugly slider. Try to center the red dot.

1. This diff seems a bit too hard for a classic normal difficulty. That is fine though, but since you have 4 diffs, try to spread the difficulty a little bit, removing some of the circles and put sliders in their place.
2. 01:06:683 (6) - New combo.
3. 01:13:170 (5) - New combo.
4. 01:26:143 (4) - New combo.
5. 01:32:629 (5) - New combo.
6. 01:34:251 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 01:35:872 (3) - New combo.
8. 01:37:494 (1) - Remove new combo.
9. 01:39:116 (8) - New combo.

1. AR+1.
2. 00:14:386 (3,4,5) - I don't like how this looks. Seems a bit too confusing. Just make a regular triplet. :p
3. 00:19:859 (5) - New combo.
4. 00:37:494 (6) - New combo.
5. 01:39:521 (5) - New combo.
6. 01:43:980 (5) - Consider putting a new combo here as well, although not required since the song is different here.

1. 00:26:953 (3) - You need to fix the endpoint of this slider. If it's that far the arrow will point in the wrong direction. Not that this has any change on gameplay, but it does look weird and confusing.
2. 00:35:872 (5) - New combo.
3. 00:50:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,x) - This combo has it's notes a bit off in the field. Check the lower and the upper part, it's really visible once you reach sliders. Move both upper and lower notes by 1 grid down to fix, this also includes the following sliders. This also fixes spacing (which is kinda irrelevant because it's not confusing).
4. 00:52:089 (9) - New combo.
5. 01:08:305 (6) - New combo.
6. 01:24:521 (6) - New combo.
7. 01:25:129 (11) - This slider also has the arrow problem. Fix the end point (move it to the middle of the circle).
8. 01:27:764 (6) - New combo.
9. 01:43:170 (3,4) - These sliders also have the arrow problem. Fix end points.

lolcubes wrote:

• Offset is wrong in all diffs. The correct offset is 1819.

Blue Dragon wrote:

hey hey ~

Beginner
00:04:824 (1) - finish?

Normal
00:29:756 (4,5,1) - this spacing DDD:

Hyper
00:24:891 (4) - 1 grid up because of consistency with (1) and (8)
01:09:486 (7) - 1 grid right and then fix 01:09:688 (1) - spacing

Another
00:09:891 (1) - Move the endpoint 1 grid up so the reverse arrow doesn't glitch

Nice map. Star ~

DJPop wrote:

I think the gap between stars of Beginner & Normal is too high (1.96 <-> 4.10).
You should make Normal a bit easier.

~Beginner~
00:11:309 (4) - new combo
00:15:769 (1) - remove new combo
00:38:877 (4) - new combo
00:43:742 (4) - ^

~Normal~
00:40:498 (5) - new combo
00:42:120 (1) - remove new combo
00:43:742 (3) - new combo
01:37:255 (6) - ^
01:38:877 (1) - remove new combo
01:44:147 (4) - new combo
01:45:363 (7) - ^

~Hyper~
00:06:444 (1) - add whistle OR finish
00:09:688 (6) - new combo
00:16:174 (5) - ^
00:37:255 (6) - ^
00:40:296 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:498 (2) - new combo
01:11:309 (6) - ^
01:19:417 (5) - ^
01:40:904 (1) - remove new combo

~Another~
- Stack Leniency should be 6.
00:16:580 (2) - move right & up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:35:634 (5) - new combo
00:39:688 (5) - ^
00:54:688 (7) - ^
00:55:093 (1) - remove new combo
01:08:066 (6) - new combo
01:24:282 (6) - ^
01:27:525 (6) - ^
01:34:012 (6) - ^
01:37:255 (7) - ^


+Star

Ekaru wrote:

Another:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO. I agree.

It's Insane, that's all I can say really. Felt kinda slow for the song but eh. >.>

Hyper:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO.
-I would decrease the circle size by 1. The spacing is way too close to play like a Hard with such big circles, so making the circles still a good size but smaller improves the experience significantly. The 1/2s are touching and stuff, and that's not Hard-like spacing. Also, for future reference, 1.1x slider velocity is slow for a 148 BPM Hard. ><; I'll remember that.

Normal:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO.

Beginner:

00:04:823 (1) - Consider deleting this spinner. Creates a better intro IMO.
01:11:715 (2,3,4) - I would rearrange these, this looks weird. Done.

Overall, it's a rankable mapset. Didn't really excite me but eh, some people will love it. Star.

1. Offset 1585~1600. Try 1590?
2. OD shouldn't be the same on Hyper and Another, change it in one of the diffs?

1. Maybe AR +1? Not sure for this one.
2. Spacing is often changing between 0,9 and 1,2 you should fix it and make a regular spacing since it's an easy diff.
3. 00:16:174 (5) - Maybe a new combo here?
4. 00:17:796 (7) - Here you should add a new combo.
5. 01:06:444 (3) - Add a new combo?
6. 01:45:363 (5) - Mmh maybe a new combo? Not sure.

1. AR is way too slow here D: make it +2 or at least +1
2. I think some parts have too much linear sliders, try to make a shape for some of them?
3. 00:24:282 (1,2) - Fix spacing here?

1. AR is a bit too slow imo, AR7 would fit better.
2. 00:39:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Uh, remake this part? It's not really nice and spacing is wrong

1. Break time shouldn't be the same than other diffs? Oh well not so important however.
2. 00:13:539 (3) - Remove a repeat and add a circle?
3. 00:19:215 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really disturbing. Move the centre of the pattern somewhere else than under the slider or make the combo start at (9) or make more spacing between (9) and (2) or you can do all of those suggestions.
4. 01:30:566 (4,5,1,2,3) - Hmm this pattern looks a bit weird.

Kurosanyan wrote:

Mod4mod request

[General]

1. Offset 1585~1600. Try 1590?
2. OD shouldn't be the same on Hyper and Another, change it in one of the diffs?

[Beginner]

1. Maybe AR +1? Not sure for this one. done.
2. Spacing is often changing between 0,9 and 1,2 you should fix it and make a regular spacing since it's an easy diff. i did that intentionally.
3. 00:16:174 (5) - Maybe a new combo here? no.
4. 00:17:796 (7) - Here you should add a new combo. done
5. 01:06:444 (3) - Add a new combo? done.
6. 01:45:363 (5) - Mmh maybe a new combo? Not sure. nope.

[Normal]

1. AR is way too slow here D: make it +2 or at least +1
2. I think some parts have too much linear sliders, try to make a shape for some of them? i'm lazy :(
3. 00:24:282 (1,2) - Fix spacing here?

[Hyper]

1. AR is a bit too slow imo, AR7 would fit better.
2. 00:39:282 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Uh, remake this part? It's not really nice and spacing is wrong

[Another]

1. Break time shouldn't be the same than other diffs? Oh well not so important however. i mapped that part
2. 00:13:539 (3) - Remove a repeat and add a circle?
3. 00:19:215 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really disturbing. Move the centre of the pattern somewhere else than under the slider or make the combo start at (9) or make more spacing between (9) and (2) or you can do all of those suggestions. No i've seen patterns like this before.
4. 01:30:566 (4,5,1,2,3) - Hmm this pattern looks a bit weird. no it's not

That's all! Good map have a star :3 Also the music is cool.

HeatKai wrote:

8-)
I still hate you

Sakura Hana wrote:

I'm only getting Beginner and Another try full submitting the map again and i will come back when the osz includes all the difficulties

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Heat's Taiko]
54 Unsnapped notes! Done.

[Normal]
Many sections sound weird, i dont really know what you were following with the notes, but if anything i'd recommend the sliders would follow the "weeeeeooooo" on the background Hmm k.

[Beginner]
00:38:951 (1,2) - This should probably be a repeat slider like earlier, since 1.5 beat time can be hard to predict for newbies.
00:39:560 (2,1) - Spacing too close.
00:47:465 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:06:519 (3,4) - These would look better if they were centered.
01:09:762 (1,2) - I think distance snap would like to have a word with you.
01:45:438 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
Lots of spacing inconsistencies that i didnt feel like pointing out, just apply DS to most of your map, that's all. Done.
Looking good, dont like the song much, but the map's nice

Crimmi wrote:

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Heat's Taiko]
54 Unsnapped notes! Done.

[Normal]
Many sections sound weird, i dont really know what you were following with the notes, but if anything i'd recommend the sliders would follow the "weeeeeooooo" on the background Hmm k.

[Beginner]
00:38:951 (1,2) - This should probably be a repeat slider like earlier, since 1.5 beat time can be hard to predict for newbies.
00:39:560 (2,1) - Spacing too close.
00:47:465 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:06:519 (3,4) - These would look better if they were centered.
01:09:762 (1,2) - I think distance snap would like to have a word with you.
01:45:438 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
Lots of spacing inconsistencies that i didnt feel like pointing out, just apply DS to most of your map, that's all. Done.
Looking good, dont like the song much, but the map's nice

Thanks. + 600th Post.