Monstrata wrote:

Randomly downloaded this map xD.

You have duplicate osb files. One of them is unused and is taking up unnecessary file space. wtf, is this a bug? cause it wasn't here before update, anyways removed, Thanks for pointing out

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01:31:200 (4,1) - This jump felt quite big compared to previous jumps. It doesn't really emphasize a particularly strong note in the song so I think you can do something smaller here. I could say the same for 01:43:462 (4,1) - . At least here theres vocals, but its not a really emphasized note vocally I'm emphasizing a drum here, if you take a look to 01:33:389 - 01:35:141 - 01:36:893 - 01:38:645 - etc, all the ones are enphasized with jumps, now why I decided to use a long jump here, maybe is just to have more consistent visual spacing.
03:06:236 (1,2,3) - I think this arrangement makes it look very similar to 1/2 spacings. I tried something similar, but brought the sliders a bit closer together so players will wonder why they are closer than usual. Okie, fixed.

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03:18:061 (3,4) - This sounds better as just a slider. 4 isn't really that audible so I think mapping a jump to it feels kinda odd. This rhythm is the "reply" to 03:16:309 (3) - . true, fixed
04:56:601 (1,2) - This jump isn't very characteristic of the section. Your SV is slower and so is your base structure and spacing, so this comes across as unusual due to the large spacing and the flowbreak from 1>2 is to enphasize vocal, also I put a similar jump at 04:52:003 (4,5) -
05:00:981 (4,5,6) - I would also recommend making these jumps smaller to fit the quiet atmosphere better. Okie, fixed

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Only popping for unrankable issue, if you need another BN you can poke me. if not, anyone is free to rebubble once the duplicate osb has been deleted.

Thank you very much

05:09:740 - Around that timestamp, the lyric of "あなたに恋をしたあたしの青春" feels weird imo. Why is "あな" have a pink font? yet "恋" have a white color lol. I think you should recomposition the font color on that one if you want to highlight the lyric better No, that "あなた" it's special, that's why it does have a font color

Mako Sakata wrote:

I have one more concern, hope you don't mind

05:09:740 - Around that timestamp, the lyric of "あなたに恋をしたあたしの青春" feels weird imo. Why is "あな" have a pink font? yet "恋" have a white color lol. I think you should recomposition the font color on that one if you want to highlight the lyric better No, that "あなた" it's special, that's why it does have a font color

That one a bit questionable actually, because if you think the "あなた" is special, then the "た" supposed to be have pink color as well right? it's a bit weird if you just highlight the "あな" instead the whole "あなた" http://puu.sh/ue1C9/c088573c21.jpg.

The rest reasoning understandable enough to me, waiting to play the full ver ~

Xinely wrote:

SB :
- 01:54:411 - there is a dot left in black bg while its friends are faded out. is this intentional? Yep
- can you move the light effects in first kiai 01:57:915 - a bit to rightside? while the lyrics are stacked with it, we cant read the lyrics Moving the effect would be outplaced from the bg. The lyrics with background dim are readable (those are one of the consecuences of additive uwu, that actually discussed it with Monstrata, so it's fine)
- 05:19:375 - until 05:28:134 - it would be nicer if the lyrics are in center? Those are on the center, aren't they? The editor field it's not the same that the play field, so it's normal that the objects are some left-up on the editor field

Xinely wrote:

diff :
- 05:08:864 (1) - based on flow, ctrl+g gives smoother flow here. if u agree you can move 05:09:520 (2) - 288,180 to keep the jump Done