[re:Start]
00:08:285 (1,2,3) - Just a suggestion, but maybe try this
http://puu.sh/q23vK/992deeacfc.jpg pattern of jump? and also stack 00:08:584 (3,2) - these.
00:12:465 (5) I highly suggest you to start a slider in the strongs white ticks instead of ending with one, because that's where the music usually emphasizes more. in this case the slider should start 00:12:614 - here.
00:12:763 (1,2,3) - this triplet here, I think it doesn't go here since in the music there is no sound of a triplet. Suggest you changing it for something else.
00:16:196 (1) - Not really an issue, but you can make this slider nicer. Something like this
http://puu.sh/q23Py/8075d4436d.jpg00:17:241 (5,6,7) - ^ (I won't mention the rest of these in the mod so you have tu be careful these triplets.)
00:28:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - the jumps at the end of this pattern seem to be a little bit random, they need to be more spaced. You can try to do something like this pattern
http://puu.sh/q240Z/cee84986b7.jpg00:40:076 (7) - you can make a nicer slider here, try to blanket 00:39:629 (5) -
00:47:838 (1,2,3) - make them less-spaced, I think it'd fit better since it's a really calm part of the song.
00:53:211 (16) - since it's a strong beat, I suggest you to start with a slider instead of a single note.
00:59:032 (1) - Add NC? Basically because of the change of spacing
00:59:330 (1) - ^
01:14:703 (3) - you can make this slider a lot better in order to blanket 01:14:106 (7) - You just need to leave 1 gray node in the slider.
01:15:897 (1) - Same as above, better to start with a slider here.
01:16:644 (5,6) - Since there's no instrumental music at all, i think you should leave it empty. 01:17:091 - then add a note here, or make the spinner begin here.
01:19:479 - the kiai section ends here, so delete the actual one.
The diff is good but you need to polish some part. For example, the white ticks are normally strong beats where the music emphasizes more, so u'd probably want to start with a slider instead of ending with one there. Also another thing is that you don't use the NewCombos in the proper way. Basically you add a NC when a strong beat appear, that's normally in a big white ticks. For example 00:11:420 (9) - here you'd want to add a NC and therefore delete 00:11:718 (1) - this. Check all your diff because you need to correct that. Also you need to be more careful when listening to the music, there're some triplets that are overmapped.
[Tedda's]
00:07:838 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - I think the rhythm here is a little bit awkward, try something like this
http://puu.sh/q2538/a7ec07c628.jpg00:22:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I felt this way overmapped
00:25:002 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
00:28:435 (3) - make this a 1/1 slider reverse
01:15:300 - you missed a note here
01:16:494 - ^
01:21:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - overmapped D:
01:29:032 (9) - Listening to the music, there's no beat there, so maybe delete it?
There're are some parts that are really overmapped. Good diff but it need to be polished a bit more.
[----'s]
Why not adding Combo Colours like in the other diffs? you should try it.
For the sliders at the very beginning, try making them simplier, with less gray nodes, just for aesthetic purposes.
00:08:285 (3) - Add NewCombo
00:09:778 (2,3,4) - there's no sound of such a triplet, so try making something else here.
00:19:778 (1,1) - You can do some nice patterns instead of adding these spins.
00:29:330 - You missed a note here, maybe add a 1/2 slider.
00:37:688 (1,2) - extend them just a 1/4 more, till the blue tick.
00:58:435 (3) - add NC?
00:59:032 (6) - ^
01:19:479 - Add a green line here in order to end with the kiai.
01:28:584 (7) - instead of a slider here, you should make it more clickable, adding some single notes instead.
Same issues as i said with re:Start diff, basically the NewCombo's and emphasizes more in the white ticks. Also you skipped a lot of stream along the map, try making some!
[Xe's]
00:08:285 (3) - Add NewCombo?
00:52:912 - 00:53:211 - You missed a lot of notes here, try making a stream.
01:04:554 - the stream starts here, therefore i suggest you to add a note 01:04:629 - here.
01:19:479 - kiai ends here.
01:28:435 (5) - end the slider 01:28:882 - here or make some single notes here, a jump would fit great.
Same as with ----'s and re:Start, check what i told them too
That's it, great mapset, however you need to polish them a little bit and as I said before, try to emphasizes more the white ticks, instead ending with a slider, you can try to start with one, or place some single notes, try it!
Also there're some NC issues but that's easy fixable.
by zosanfc
by Shiratoi
by ----
by Tedda
by KcHecKa
by V-Clude
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