Vulkin wrote:

ok mod from queue
#sorryforbeinglate;w;

-Inner Oni-
00:21:730 (52) - make it a d? seems more player-friendly i think ok?!! be friendly!! friendly!!!DDX
01:05:615 (32) - ^ more friendly!!!
01:36:301 (74,80,86) - make them k? sounds better somehow i don't think so D:
03:12:901 (140) - k? it's a low sound here :3
03:56:015 (45) - make it a d for the pitch ok~
04:11:101 - Why not like this? seem like not very well.. but still thinking about here


Very fun map!
Lemme give some stars for ya

S a n d wrote:

Taiko mod request from: Fantazy
Request Type: M4M
Request Diff: -
Modding Content: Inner Oni
*Note: I mod map according to my style of mapping, so sorry if it is unpractical >_<*


- 00:11:615 - kk kdkd -> kkdk kd 因為如果你放慢成50%聽的話, 在 00:11:787 上有一個連續的1/1重低音 好(? 暫時就先採用
-- 00:14:530 - 跟上面同樣的道理 V
- 移動 00:13:587 到 00:13:158 - 理由同上, 也感覺比較不overmap 那就overwatch吧
-- 00:15:901 - 加d? 跟上面同樣的道理 -V-
-- 00:17:272 - ^ ~V~
-- 00:18:644 - ^ >V>
- 00:23:958 - 改成k? 因為你會發現這顆比前三顆的音還高 哇 我居然發現了
- 00:24:815 - 改成k? 因為你會發現這個kd跟 00:23:244 的音一模一樣 ㄟ~~~ 00:24:815 (26) - 這顆音比較低喔 只是好像kd比較好>__>
-- 00:26:187 - ^ <V<
-- 00:41:272 - ^ =V=
---如果改上面的話-->我建議 00:26:015 改成k, 這樣能更加凸顯00:26:272的轉折 ~V~轉吧note
-- 00:27:558 - ^^ 這裡沒什麼差吧?
- 00:32:187 - 改成k? 因為第二個音是高音 真的嗎? 是我音感異於常人嗎?;w; 我感覺的高低醬捏
- 00:37:844 - dkd d -> dkddk 或是 dkddd? 比較跟音 也比較好凸顯 00:38:530 的d 那還是把00:38:530改成kd好了
已下的串play我就當all accept了 這裡超不會;w;;
- 00:44:958(12,13) - Ctrl + G, 因為高音在12 ((聽不太出來>___>
-- 00:47:701(12,13) - Ctrl +G, ^ >___>
- 00:46:244 - 改成 k? 明顯的音差 阿斯可能是我的疏失
--如果改上面的話--> 00:46:586(15,16) - 都改成dd, 也是音差 也比較跟音
- 00:47:272 - 改成k, 是高音
- 00:49:244(14,15) - 改成kk? 跟背景的音, 後面的d是為了撇清下一段落
- 00:53:530(16,1) - Ctrl+G, 高音很明顯是在1喔, 1
- 00:54:987 - ddddkkd -> dddkddk 聽起來比較順
-- 00:56:358 - ^
-- 00:57:730 - ^
-- 00:59:101 - ^
- 00:58:930 - 改成k? 這三個音都應該是同樣的, 所以kkk比較搭 我記得你前面也有用過類似的
- 00:43:958 ~ 01:05:958 - 一個break都沒有很容易被嗆喔www 你中間多少加一點吧 例如: 00:54:901 中間點, 擺點誠意, 做個樣子 以上V
- 02:01:587 - 改成k? 因為這邊的音跟02:00:987 一模一樣啊 沒什麼理由不同譜面w. 下面很多都有這樣的問題, 我就不一個一個列了 我有幻聽 這樣 ((誤
- 02:00:815 - 應該是說節拍整個歪囉, 這樣比較像: 下面一段也一樣就不多說了 V
-- 02:11:958 - 整個kiai都同上^, 你每個2連 (例如dk 或是 kd) 都早了一個1/4拍 沒人找到我好訝異 O:
- 02:03:558 - 節拍整個歪囉w, 這樣比較跟音: 下面同上 V
- 02:44:701 - 開始因為塞note所以看不太出來問題, 但是還是因為上一段擺錯了某些重音 例如: 02:49:158 - 跟重音的話是kdkdd不是kddkd V
- 02:59:187(31,32) - 兩個都是高音喔 改k 只有32?
- 03:03:472 跟 03:03:644 - 兩個都可以刪掉, 比較能凸顯單音的魅力, 也能避免overmap 原來這樣就好;w;;;;;;;;
- 03:31:330 - 改成d? 是低音 而且03:31:672的音比較高 該改為k 這裡就真的是高and低了=3=
- 04:02:701 - 加d? 背景的重低音已經開始出來了, 可以開始塞滿1/2了 這不太好咧
-- 04:05:444 - ^ ^
-- 04:08:187 - ^ ^
- 04:13:672 - 這邊有聲音, 所以從04:12:987開始 建議改成: 因為你04:12:472是用k, 但是後面的段落分隔都用d 一致性不夠. 整個段落都建議, 看你要不要刪一些, 給難度一點高低起伏 我要大改個了 我發覺我之前的音感幾乎相反
- 04:40:415 - 改成d? 前後有音差 這個再看看吧
就這樣
你加油wwww=w=

Ceryuia wrote:

Hihi~ From my Queue :3

[Inner Oni]
01:47:101 (169,170,171,172) - Change this to ddkdk to fit in with 01:47:787 (174,175,176,177,178) m.. the first k is not consort here but i think can use ddddk :3
02:03:387 (18) - Change this to a don as there is a loud drum sound here ;w; felt not well i use it before but still thinking for it
02:32:872 (89) - Change this to a don? The pitch goes down here and then rises again D: i heard wrong before ;w;
02:35:787 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - Just a suggestion, change this to dkddkdkdd for higher than 02:37:158 - :3
02:42:644 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - Change to dkddkkddk? ok~~
03:19:501 (11,12) - Ctrl+G, there is a higher note on 03:19:672 no ;w; is low and same as 03:20:015 (13) -

This is a really fun map~! I'll shoot some kudosu stars as I couldn't find a lot ;-; THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good Luck ~!!

steven1 wrote:

random mod from me because i really liked the map! >W<

Inner Oni

00:11:101 (1) - change this one to D i forgot here DX
01:28:415 (4,5,6,7,8) - change it to ddddk, then 01:35:958 (70,71,72,73,74) - change it to ddddd because the tones is lower than the first one i got little wrong here but its not good k in head and tail this part ...
01:44:187 - change it to this change to kkdkd :3
01:46:930 - change it to this change to dkddd k dkddkdk
03:55:587 (40) - change it to kat, i think dkkkddk is better than ddkkddk, just a suggestion its low sound :3
its better if u say this one 04:01:072 (84) -
04:06:558 (41) - ^ this too :3
04:23:014 (104) - ^ this one ok~

Smallwu wrote:

來騙kud的random mod =___=
[Inner Oni]
00:00:130 - 你這裡各有一條紅線和綠線 可是Volume是50%和75% 讓他們保持一樣 不然一個點上有兩個音量很怪 已修正~

00:49:158 (12,13,14) - kkd/kdd (12)的音和後面的(1)一樣都有種"ㄉ-ㄉ-"的音 所以應該要和它相同才對 (而且你後面的三連打第一顆也是k) 安壓 整個沒注意到的說 一定是受到SM之力影響的

02:11:787 - 02:11:872 - 怎放兩條Kiai開頭@口@ 阿~~~又沒注意到;w; 一定又是SM之力害的;w;

03:55:672 (41) - k 比較好打 而且從Break Time結束到這裡 白線上有Note的全部都是k 沒理由這裡不是吧!!!!!!!!!!!! 呵呵呵呵好吧 後面寫得比較合理 呵呵呵

=====
沒了 祝早日Rankㄛ>w<

[R] wrote:

yo

[Inner Oni]
00:29:530 - can add note to cover high pitch forward i think...no? DDD; but change some other <3
01:48:387 - change don to give variety with this part 01:47:015 - not good in d add the finish now :3
01:53:358 - change kat, for variety not sure and possible will change back?_? ((cant heard clear ;w;
01:54:730 - ^ V
02:56:530 - can add note here V
03:12:215 - drum sound stop here, move 03:12:301 - drum? change the 215 to k 301 add d
03:39:215 (75,76) - invert, pitch piano has drop in end part change to ddkkddkk >_>


well maybe just that from me
good luck

Devli wrote:

香腸

Devli wrote:

香腸

Smallwu wrote:

Devli wrote:

香腸

美味!

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi fan o/ sorry for late check ;

General

1. Metadata suggestions (tags and design): Hmmm I think 'Indonesia' tag isn't neccesary (if you have a reason for this could be nice). Also where does 'Doujin Music Circle' come from? o: i thought https://osu.ppy.sh/s/347650 this map was a reliable source >.>||||||| ((i change some viable tags
2. Kiai times: 02:32:358 - 02:33:730 - what about a Kiai break cause it goes more calmer than the rest? :p nice?_?nice
3. Volumes:
   
   1. 00:33:044 - the volume here is really similar than 00:22:072 - so 80% on both fits nice
   2. 00:44:015 - 90% on here maybe cause it's just a little higher than last one
   3. 05:12:815 - 80% could fit better here

how could i missed the front volumes!!!!!!D:::::::::::::::::::::: lol thx for note xp
[Inner Oni]

1. I highly suggest to make the 1/6 on 00:21:044 - instead 00:20:701 - cause it fits song perfectly (dddk is nice I think) but i feel so strange if it all d are some other pattern :thinking: can hv some suggest? >.> i make dddd first
2. 00:24:130 - this longstream doesn't make so much sense since there isn't any other longstream in the whole section D:, so you can add one on 00:29:615 - or make it more short change
3. 00:42:644 (1) - finish it on 00:43:672 - like 00:09:730 (1) - i think if make short its better finish here?00:43:501 - and the sound with?
4. 00:44:015 - wow this is hard but nice xD lol
5. 01:05:958 - I think you could make some variations like d d k k instead lot of d k (for example: 01:07:672 (6,7) - ctrl+g) hm... how about the second repeat make with other sound?
6. 01:30:044 (19) 01:36:901 (76) - - kat on them fills nice :p :thingingingingingink:
7. mmm 03:16:844 (10,11,12,13) - k ddd? 1/6 kats seems too spammy D: ahm...... i change to like 03:16:587 - kkdd d kkkdddk d?

Wow you really just made a nice job on here, call me when you have applied my mod

Surono wrote:

zzzzz makes me want to map a song that would be p-

typeMARS terima kasih banyak

Fantazy wrote:

Surono wrote:

typeMARS terima kasih banyak

terima kasih banyak?

Surono wrote:

a circle tofu clicking game or hitting game.... ?w?w?w?

00:20:615 - swap with 00:20:872 - this, more appropriate on flows pattern emphasis hm.........still not find the best pattern ;w;

00:44:015 - " RC: No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point." delete one of them oh no!!! that's my fault!!!!!

01:05:958 - ~ 01:16:758 - it plays dull zz, you could make structures like x x xxx x x xxx and so on how do u think of these? ((update

01:16:930 - hello a u t h e n t i c c style :-) ：－）

01:19:501 - 01:22:244 - 01:24:987 - can you make these alteration svs to be neat please like example 02:03:387 - from here? somehow it doesnt look good fixed and 01:05:958 - this part too

01:49:844 - 20% to low, i cant even hear the don sounds. change it to 30% D::::::::::::::::::::::(changed

so well first kiai like this, ehh but Im fine with this style coloring like dk kd or kd kd zz

I will rebubble this if the issues has been fixed



https://osu.ppy.sh/u/typeMARS Ｄ：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：： is typeMARS!! omgwww

yeah thats why mania ver. has " Indonesia " on tags cuz the artist is from Indo lo :shrugs: i think...keep not tag for avoid controversy?