Junichi Masuda - A Rival Appears!

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-Faded- wrote:

Double posts are cool

[Easy]
  1. 00:04:066 (2,1) - for a neater appearance, you could stack these two notes properly. I did have it stacked once, but editor must've unstacked when I moved them around.


[Normal]
  1. 00:03:011 (1,3) - This blanket could be improved slightly, as it isn't perfectly parallel towards the end of (3). Doing this will make the map appear nicer. I think I fixed? >.<
  2. 00:08:465 (4,1,2) - You could alter (1) so that it's ends form a perfect triangle with (4,2). Like the previous suggestion, this will make the map look nicer. I think it looks fine and trianglish
  3. 00:17:087 (1,2,3) - Personally, this pattern doesn't feel that structured since it's asymmetrical and I feel that it doesn't really represent anything. It also has straight line flow, which is boring compared to the intensity of the music. cursor flow through the slider rectifies cursor flow between.
  4. 00:22:542 (5,2) - Again, for neater aesthetics you could stack (5) properly onto the end of (2)Fixed! :D


[Hard]
  1. 00:00:196 (1,2,3) - tbh this is fairly out of place, and this isn't the kind of song to justify such a pattern. These are generally used when the sound on the two sliders are nearly identical. Here, however, they sound different. I believe the pattern fits in a place in which the music gradually progresses to the main theme. However, if more ask for a change here I will consider it. ^^
  2. 00:10:049 (1,2) - Why are these so spaced out? The antijump will be clearer if you made them much closer together. It'll also look nicer. Ok, I put them closer together.
  3. 00:10:929 (3,4,1,2) - I feel as though this pattern is kinda lacking in structure, as 00:10:929 (3,1) - aren't really relevant with each other in terms of geometry/symmetry. Red anchors? x.x
  4. 00:17:615 (2,3,4,5) - You can improve the half-pentagon here for a nicer look. Move (5) to somewhere like x:308 y:216 and adjust the notes that come afterwards. Fixed on own accord :P
_DT3
Ok, as said an M4M :D
I hope you're fine with the fact that I only modded Easy and Normal. Those are my specialities. If you're not fine, call me back for 'Hard' and 'Rivalries'

Easy

  1. I felt like this diff could have a bit of a makeover looking at some parts cause of flow (aesthetics). The flow was rather fine but I think Easy has to have a nearly "Perfect" flow. I have some recommendations in the mod but it's your personal preference:
  2. First of all: Nazi Blanket fixes:
  3. 00:06:530 (2,3) ; 00:10:049 (2,1) ; 00:12:864 (2,1)
  4. 00:03:011 (1) - This could be rotated 55° around selection centre for better flow (If you do this also adjust the following objects as well)
  5. 00:15:327 (2) - Could be put a bit higher
  6. 00:22:717 (1) - Can be put in a triangle with 00:20:606 (2,3)
  7. Nevertheless, sophisticated diff, good job :D
Normal

  1. 00:05:826 (1,2,3) - Could flow better but it's fine
  2. 00:10:049 (3,4,5) - Can be put in a triangle
  3. 00:14:800 (3) - Personal Suggestion: Can be rotated by a bit
  4. 00:17:087 (1) - 1. Minor DS error; 2. Ctrl + G would be better (Reverse Selection)
  5. 00:19:902 (1,2,3) - This is tricky to catch because before it was 2/1 or 1/1 and now it's 1/2
  6. 00:23:421 (2) - Huge DS error
  7. 00:29:756 (3) - This straight slider is a bit unfitting because everything else was curvy/edgy

Sorry for not finding/modding much, if you find this unfair, you have a ticket good with me. GL! This is a nice and sophisticated mapset!
Topic Starter
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_DT3 wrote:

Ok, as said an M4M :D
I hope you're fine with the fact that I only modded Easy and Normal. Those are my specialities. If you're not fine, call me back for 'Hard' and 'Rivalries'

Easy

  1. I felt like this diff could have a bit of a makeover looking at some parts cause of flow (aesthetics). The flow was rather fine but I think Easy has to have a nearly "Perfect" flow. I have some recommendations in the mod but it's your personal preference:
  2. First of all: Nazi Blanket fixes:
  3. 00:06:530 (2,3) ; 00:10:049 (2,1) ; 00:12:864 (2,1) What?
  4. 00:03:011 (1) - This could be rotated 55° around selection centre for better flow (If you do this also adjust the following objects as well) Plays fine and the flow is not questionable here, it also flows well to the notes after and I don't plan on changing them either.
  5. 00:15:327 (2) - Could be put a bit higher This would create an ugly overlap with the previous slider, I believe it flows off alright too.
  6. 00:22:717 (1) - Can be put in a triangle with 00:20:606 (2,3) Triangle won't be on screen at this point >.>
  7. Nevertheless, sophisticated diff, good job :D
Normal

  1. 00:05:826 (1,2,3) - Could flow better but it's fine I changed this a bit, but to my own accord.
  2. 00:10:049 (3,4,5) - Can be put in a triangle Yeah you're right I made it more consistent.
  3. 00:14:800 (3) - Personal Suggestion: Can be rotated by a bit Nah it would ruin a triangle I set up.
  4. 00:17:087 (1) - 1. Minor DS error; 2. Ctrl + G would be better (Reverse Selection)
  5. 00:19:902 (1,2,3) - This is tricky to catch because before it was 2/1 or 1/1 and now it's 1/2 Ok changed.
  6. 00:23:421 (2) - Huge DS error For consistency and stacking, it's intended & not game breaking.
  7. 00:29:756 (3) - This straight slider is a bit unfitting because everything else was curvy/edgy Added curve.

Sorry for not finding/modding much, if you find this unfair, you have a ticket good with me. GL! This is a nice and sophisticated mapset!
Thanks for the mods, ples do Hard and Insane though.
Stamby
Hi, mod as requested!

General

Very good set, almost ready for ranking

Timing is a bit off. I would move all the offsets 25 ms later, first one should be 221 (timestamps on this mod are from the current timing)

I'd remove the kiai as the song is short and monotonous

Easy

00:00:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Notes could be moved down a little. Just so they fit better into the screen

The map looks fine

Normal

00:00:196 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Move down these notes

00:25:533 (1,2,3) - I like this pattern more than 00:11:456 (3,4). Replace those by the first if you want

Hard

00:02:307 (3,4,5) - This little jump looks a bit hard to do after 00:01:603 (1,2,3). Maybe you could put 00:02:483 (4,5) together and then move 00:03:011 (1) to x=496; y=196 to fit spacing

00:15:327 - The slider end here looked a bit confusing when I played it, you could make it end at 00:14:800 (2) and place a small 1/2 slider next to it

00:25:885 (2) - This slider is "playing" another sound than in 00:09:521 (4) and in 00:12:336 (8). You could try using the same pattern than in those at this part although this is not really necessary

00:29:580 - Add a circle here, maybe draw a triangle with 00:29:404 (3,4)

Faded's Rivalry

00:29:932 (2,3) - These notes could be a single slider instead



Now check these stats



Good luck ranking this map :D
Topic Starter
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Stamby wrote:

Hi, mod as requested!

General

Very good set, almost ready for ranking

Timing is a bit off. I would move all the offsets 25 ms later, first one should be 221 (timestamps on this mod are from the current timing) It sounds a bit late, if others say I will consider though

I'd remove the kiai as the song is short and monotonous

Easy

00:00:196 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Notes could be moved down a little. Just so they fit better into the screen what? x.x
The map looks fine

Normal

00:00:196 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Move down these notes ^

00:25:533 (1,2,3) - I like this pattern more than 00:11:456 (3,4). Replace those by the first if you want tbh I like them both, no change :P

Hard

00:02:307 (3,4,5) - This little jump looks a bit hard to do after 00:01:603 (1,2,3). Maybe you could put 00:02:483 (4,5) together and then move 00:03:011 (1) to x=496; y=196 to fit spacing That's an antijump into normal ds.

00:15:327 - The slider end here looked a bit confusing when I played it, you could make it end at 00:14:800 (2) and place a small 1/2 slider next to it I don't see how it couldn't play fine imo

00:25:885 (2) - This slider is "playing" another sound than in 00:09:521 (4) and in 00:12:336 (8). You could try using the same pattern than in those at this part although this is not really necessary What? XD

00:29:580 - Add a circle here, maybe draw a triangle with 00:29:404 (3,4) It's inconsistent if I do that q.q

Good luck ranking this map :D

Thanks ^^
-Faded-

Stamby wrote:

Hi, mod as requested!

Faded's Rivalry

00:29:932 (2,3) - These notes could be a single slider instead No need, that wouldn't play very well imo
No changes on my part~
Khoal
Hi, m4m here. :^)

Offset should be 218 (+-1)
Looks good, except that the map could be a litte bit more centered (this is achieved by pressing CTRL + A and dragging the notes down and slightly to the left to achieve this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5537673 instead of https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5537669
Same as above, the map could be more centered. (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5538013 )
00:00:218 (1,2,3) - feels off while playing, I suggest to remove this note 00:00:745 (2) -
00:02:505 - I think this one on the other hand should be mapped
00:17:109 (1,2,3) - here I would suggest to reverse the slider (by pressing CTRL + G) 00:18:517 (3) - and to place 00:18:165 (2) - a little bit more downwards
Otherwise, nice looking map! :^)
00:00:196 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't fit the song (sorry :<)
00:26:940 (1,2) - could be stacked, I think a full stop motion wise would fit the beat better
00:25:532 (1) - the end of this slider isn't snapped.
Otherwise, I think this map is fine. :^)


Good luck! :^)
Tem
First time modding :^)


[Faded's Rivalry]

  1. 00:27:468 (2,3) - The spacing of the end slider and note is too far apart.



[Hard]

  1. 00:11:456 (5) - Start a new combo here.



[Normal]

  1. 00:19:902 (5) - Start a new combo here.
  2. 00:24:125 (4,1) - This blanket could be improved, the head of (4) isn't completely parallel with (1).
-Faded-

Khoal wrote:

[Faded's Rivalry]
  1. 00:25:532 (1) - the end of this slider isn't snapped. Absolutely correct, I snapped it.
    Otherwise, I think this map is fine. :^)

Tem wrote:

[Faded's Rivalry]
  1. 00:27:468 (2,3) - The spacing of the end slider and note is too far apart. Agreed, I don't feel as though this deserves as much emphasis.
Applied both mods and did some self modding of my own. Thanks guys!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: RivalAppears.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 8641
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:A Rival Appears!
TitleUnicode:ライバルあらわる
Artist:Junichi Masuda
ArtistUnicode:増田 順一
Creator:-Space-
Version:Faded's Rivalry
Source:ポケットモンスター 赤・緑
Tags:-Faded- pokemon pokémon red blue green yellow generation one gen
BeatmapID:1018905
BeatmapSetID:476986

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:7
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Topic Starter
-Space-
:)

Khoal wrote:

Hi, m4m here. :^)

Offset should be 218 (+-1) h'ok. :^)
Looks good, except that the map could be a litte bit more centered (this is achieved by pressing CTRL + A and dragging the notes down and slightly to the left to achieve this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5537673 instead of https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5537669 Don't see why? >.< there isn't even that much note on an easy so it's not a big thing. It also looks like it's getting a touch too close to the top on some notes./color]
Same as above, the map could be more centered. (like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5538013 )
00:00:218 (1,2,3) - feels off while playing, I suggest to remove this note 00:00:745 (2) - If I do that I am ignoring a profound beat in the music.
00:02:505 - I think this one on the other hand should be mapped Yeah you're right, changed.
00:17:109 (1,2,3) - here I would suggest to reverse the slider (by pressing CTRL + G) 00:18:517 (3) - and to place 00:18:165 (2) - a little bit more downwards I did the first part, but left note 2 as it is.
Otherwise, nice looking map! :^) thanks ^^
00:00:196 (1,2,3) - this pattern doesn't fit the song (sorry :<) Alright, edited pattern.
00:26:940 (1,2) - could be stacked, I think a full stop motion wise would fit the beat better would be inconsistent with the first part.


Good luck! :^)

Thanks :D

Tem wrote:

First time modding :^) welcum to modding

[Hard]

  1. 00:11:456 (5) - Start a new combo here. Right ^^



[Normal]

  1. 00:19:902 (5) - Start a new combo here. Oops missed that xD Thanks
  2. 00:24:125 (4,1) - This blanket could be improved, the head of (4) isn't completely parallel with (1). Panic rushed that one >.>
Thanks both of your mods were helpful.
Firmatorenio
depressed pone noises

[General]
Insanely loud hitsounds, a player that plays at 35% hitsounds volume (and 100% music) tells you this, nerf pls

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:033 (1) - why do you have an angle in this slider? it looks somewhat out of style..
  2. 00:05:848 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) slightly overlap, yet (2) and (3) don't, inconsistent combo :\
  3. 00:15:701 (3) - why finish?


[Normal]
  1. The balance of SV, CS and DS in this map is quite ridiculous for a normal, players basically have to make jumps to click the next object. I'd suggest lower the DS or increase the SV if you don't want to change the CS for mapset balance, but ugh, that needs a remap .-. psst, sv1.25ds1.16
  2. 00:14:294 (1,3) - bad overlap


[Hard]
  1. AR7.5 for the bpm (srsly you had an unnecessary 7.5 on the previous pokemaps and here you decided to lower it?)
  2. 00:00:218 (1,2) - really not a fan of this blanket
  3. 00:11:478 (1) - i feel like this is missing a hitsound.. you have a crash there on the second occurence
  4. why is 00:16:581 (1) - NCed and 00:02:681 (5) - is not?
  5. rhythms are weird but adsf


[cs7 memes]
whee tiny changes for tiny circles
  1. check AiMod on this diff
  2. my point about starting a map with a stream stands, suggest 2 clicksliders or something
  3. 00:12:512 (4) - 1px down, looks reeeeally off otherwise
  4. 00:26:764 (5) - 1px down too, not so off without it though
-Faded-

Firmatorenio wrote:

[cs7 memes]
whee tiny changes for tiny circles
  1. check AiMod on this diff Space fix ur hard
  2. my point about starting a map with a stream stands, suggest 2 clicksliders or something Nah, each sound has equal strength so it's kinda unnecesary.
  3. 00:12:512 (4) - 1px down, looks reeeeally off otherwise Done
  4. 00:26:764 (5) - 1px down too, not so off without it though Done
Thanks for modding!

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Topic Starter
-Space-

Firmatorenio wrote:

depressed pone noises

[General]
Insanely loud hitsounds, a player that plays at 35% hitsounds volume (and 100% music) tells you this, nerf pls they used to be 100%, I will change them down to 60%

[Easy]
  1. 00:03:033 (1) - why do you have an angle in this slider? it looks somewhat out of style.. You're right fixed
  2. 00:05:848 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) slightly overlap, yet (2) and (3) don't, inconsistent combo :\ It didn't overlap on mine? :x I changed it anyway due to your above suggestion.
  3. 00:15:701 (3) - why finish? wrong hitsound sry


[Normal]
  1. The balance of SV, CS and DS in this map is quite ridiculous for a normal, players basically have to make jumps to click the next object. I'd suggest lower the DS or increase the SV if you don't want to change the CS for mapset balance, but ugh, that needs a remap .-. psst, sv1.25ds1.16 It's fine. The 'jumps' are 1/1 and the spacing through 1/2 is minimal. If they can't manage to aim at 1/1 they need to go back to easy.
  2. 00:14:294 (1,3) - bad overlap It's fine, it's at the pivotal point of slider 3 which was intended. However, since it's subjective if more people say I will consider.


[Hard]
  1. AR7.5 for the bpm (srsly you had an unnecessary 7.5 on the previous pokemaps and here you decided to lower it?) I don't ocd my maps bpm they're different songs.
  2. 00:00:218 (1,2) - really not a fan of this blanket ok.
  3. 00:11:478 (1) - i feel like this is missing a hitsound.. you have a crash there on the second occurence accidently took it off mb
  4. why is 00:16:581 (1) - NCed and 00:02:681 (5) - is not? removed nc
  5. rhythms are weird but adsf
Thanks for mod.
Arphimigon
DAD kdsfarmingtime

[Easy]
Lol blankets
00:03:033 (1,3) - Lolblanket
00:12:886 (2) - I think easy players would benefit if this curve didn't angle so far up, yknow it makes the slider feel like 2 movements to them (and they don't understand leniency)


[Normal]
00:16:933 (4,1) - Lolnazithings move the slider end point down a bit so that the sliderstart and end are equal distant to note here? About 4 pixels does it.
I actually find the OD to be quite low esp for a map that has 3 note taps but idk your choice on that.

[Hard]
00:16:581 (5,6,1) - I feel like this transition here to next section would work a lot nicer with 3 notes. Mainly because that first slider ends on a stronger sound and a higher pitched sound, making it weird to tap in this situation, and the simple 3 taps is just standard transitional stuff.
00:18:165 (3,4) - How about making this a slider since 00:18:341 - this sound is really quiet and passive? On every other case here there has been an anti-jump because of no sound, but now there is a sound, it IS really faint so doesn't need an extra tap.

[Faded Rivalry]
To be real honest, I don't think this map is dense enough or fast enough for AR9, and I think the use of something like AR8.5 might make for reading some of the spacing changes to be easier. Just my two cents, AR9 is fine still though.
00:05:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know you moved slider 5 away because pitches and so but it can still point towards the notes in the middle right? It's odd having the first two sliders point to the middle notes and not the last in the pattern.

feed
Topic Starter
-Space-

Arphimigon wrote:

DAD kdsfarmingtime

[Easy]
Lol blankets
00:03:033 (1,3) - Lolblanket looks fine
00:12:886 (2) - I think easy players would benefit if this curve didn't angle so far up, yknow it makes the slider feel like 2 movements to them (and they don't understand leniency) you're right, changed.


[Normal]
00:16:933 (4,1) - Lolnazithings move the slider end point down a bit so that the sliderstart and end are equal distant to note here? About 4 pixels does it.
I actually find the OD to be quite low esp for a map that has 3 note taps but idk your choice on that. Nah it looks fine to me :s

[Hard]
00:16:581 (5,6,1) - I feel like this transition here to next section would work a lot nicer with 3 notes. Mainly because that first slider ends on a stronger sound and a higher pitched sound, making it weird to tap in this situation, and the simple 3 taps is just standard transitional stuff. Would make it inconsistent with everything else :P
00:18:165 (3,4) - How about making this a slider since 00:18:341 - this sound is really quiet and passive? On every other case here there has been an anti-jump because of no sound, but now there is a sound, it IS really faint so doesn't need an extra tap. okay I put a slider here

feed
Thanks for mod! :D
-Faded-

Arphimigon wrote:

[Faded Rivalry]
To be real honest, I don't think this map is dense enough or fast enough for AR9, and I think the use of something like AR8.5 might make for reading some of the spacing changes to be easier. Just my two cents, AR9 is fine still though.
00:05:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know you moved slider 5 away because pitches and so but it can still point towards the notes in the middle right? It's odd having the first two sliders point to the middle notes and not the last in the pattern.
feed
Applied all, thanks!

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300,200,25203,1,0,1:0:0:0:
252,332,25379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,316,25555,6,0,P|392:280|388:240,3,75,4|0|2|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,26259,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,144,26435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,140,26610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,141,26786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,260,26962,5,0,1:0:0:0:
280,276,27490,2,0,B|225:277|225:277|180:268|180:268|116:272,1,150,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,28018,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,340,28194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,196,28370,5,4,1:0:0:0:
224,180,28546,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,28722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,148,28898,2,0,P|232:104|196:8,1,150,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,176,29426,2,0,P|304:132|304:88,1,75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,212,29778,5,0,1:0:0:0:
348,228,29954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,244,30130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,124,30305,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,31185,12,0,34000,0:0:0:0:
[ Shamwow ]
m4m \o/

hard



-00:13:414 (6) - theres a lot going on in the song during this slider that can be mapped imo
-00:27:490 (7) - ^

faded's rivalry


I couldn't find anything wrong with the map, however I think it would be worth it to map the parts in between 00:04:968 (2,1),00:07:783 (2,1), etc. but if you prefer not to then thats fine, i just wanted to make whatever suggestions i could since i have no issues with this map

i'll shoot a star since I didn't have much to say, feel free to ask for another mod anytime so i can make up for this :p good luck!
-Faded-

-Dave Strider- wrote:

m4m \o/

faded's rivalry


I couldn't find anything wrong with the map, however I think it would be worth it to map the parts in between 00:04:968 (2,1),00:07:783 (2,1), etc. but if you prefer not to then thats fine, i just wanted to make whatever suggestions i could since i have no issues with this map

i'll shoot a star since I didn't have much to say, feel free to ask for another mod anytime so i can make up for this :p good luck!
Thanks for the star. I intentionally don't have these mapped because I want to draw out a contrast between the lesser emphasised notes and the more emphasised notes.
-GriM-
grim has large penis modding inc.

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00:04:968 (2) - like below

00:07:783 (2) - feels too empty after this, i feel like more attention should be paid attention to the background

00:12:886 (1,2) - see, something like this i would understand. The spacing between notes fits alot better.

00:19:044 (2) - once again

00:21:860 (2) - ^, I feel like in such a short map the most should be made out of it.

Also regarding the stacks, I feel like something could be done to be more creative instead of using the stacks. My opinion though <3
LOVE YA FADED BB XDDDDDDDDD rawr

Space's hard dick.jpeg

couldn't really find anything here, flows really well, GJ!

Space's normal size weiner.exe

00:01:625 (1,2,3) - lower a bit maybe?

00:08:487 (4,1,2,3,4) - you use circles and sliders here, but why one big slider here? 00:11:478 (1) -

some slider art doesnt look very good but i wont judge for that

Space's easy diff for nerds like me

00:29:778 (3) - may be a bit too high

rest of diff is good, nice job

sorry if mod is bad i haven't done it in forever and i dont know how to do the special shit so i just use colors to make it look semi decent
-Faded-

-Faded- wrote:

I intentionally don't have these mapped because I want to draw out a contrast between the lesser emphasised notes and the more emphasised notes.
No changes on my part.
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