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Mawatari Matsuko - Sayonara Bye Bye

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taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
taNa_Coppola
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月23日 at 1:45:27

Artist: Mawatari Matsuko
Title: Sayonara Bye Bye
Source: YuYu Hakusho
BPM: 150.22
Filesize: 3467kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.6 stars, 190 notes)
  2. Insane (4.97 stars, 427 notes)
  3. Normal+ (4.11 stars, 234 notes)
Download: Mawatari Matsuko - Sayonara Bye Bye
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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YuYu Hakusho ED2
Last edited by taNa_Coppola , edited 48 times in total.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
Offset = 8.302 ms

for the rest very nice map

star ^^
Rigeru_old
426 posts
Joined January 2009
Rigeru_old
:oops:
itigosama
4 posts
Joined June 2010
itigosama
会長～
April_old
119 posts
Joined December 2010
April_old
:(
Yimo_Coppola
24 posts
Joined May 2010
Yimo_Coppola
:P
Heatherfield
927 posts
Joined March 2010
Heatherfield
;)
star first
Mucha_old
109 posts
Joined October 2009
Mucha_old
:D
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
modding ;)


SPOILER
[Overall]
- sourceにYu Yu Hakushoを追加（全dif）
- ★3以下のdifがないので作ってください
- osbファイル削除（本当は削除の必要はありませんが、他の方に注意される可能性があるので念のため...）


[Normal]
全体的にヒットサウンドが少ないです(Insaneも)
また、ヒットサウンドの付け方も気になる所が多かったです

オブジェクトの端を重ねる配置のスぺーシングが
ぐちゃぐちゃになっているように思います
（例：00:07:703(1,2)は 1.28なのに、00:33:065 (3,1)は 1.12）
※全て完璧にそろえるのは不可能ですが、ある程度は揃えておいたほうがいいと思います
（その部分のスぺーシングのMODは省いていますが、修正し終わったことを教えていただければもう一度MODします）

00:25:077 (4) - 1grid 下
00:43:051 (3) - x:96 y:288
01:17:001 (1) - 前のサークルと離れすぎです。01:16:202 (2,3,4,5)の配置をいじってスぺーシングを統一してください
02:04:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全てclapはあまりよくないと思います
02:14:516 (1) - 02:14:117 (5)に重ねるとスぺーシング整います
02:28:696 (5) - ヒットサウンド変えたほうがいいと思います（始点、終点だけにつけるetc...）


[Insane]
00:08:302 (1) - もし00:07:703(1,2,1)のスぺーシングを統一したい場合は2grid 下
00:15:492 (5) - 1grid 左
00:18:088 (2,3) - ^
00:21:683 (6,7,8) - ^
01:02:622 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - 音量の上げ方が大きいと思いました
01:13:806 (1) - 1grid 左
01:20:796 (1) - 1grid 上
01:29:383 (4) - 1grid 左*
01:29:583 (5) - 2grid 左*
*:形が汚く見えるので別の修正の仕方のほうがいいかもしれません（平行四辺形の形にしてみるetc...）

01:46:957 (2) - 1grid 下
01:58:141 (4) - 1grid 左
02:01:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 単発3で音量変えたほうがいいかも
02:16:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - スペーシング整う位置を探してみてください（基本1.20の±0.05くらいで）
02:21:706 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:28:097 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全てclapはあまりよくないと思います
02:30:494 (1) - remove clap

見落とし or ミスがあったらごめんなさい :o
BGのサイズが1024*768 or 800*600ではなかったので
リサイズしたものをPMで送っておきます（上書きしてください！）

リクエストもらったのにあまり良いMODできなくてごめんなさいﾟ(ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)ﾟ

starヽ(*´∀｀)ノ★
Omega
133 posts
Joined August 2009
Omega
Okay. General mod on insane:

Make sure of your BPM, are you sure it is 150.22?

Health drain is too high for a song of this tempo. Please reduce it by at least one.

You don't have source or tags. Don't forget to add them, please.

Many beats don't seem to be properly snapped, try to refrain from placing too many in that style, even if it makes it more fun.

Other than that the map is very okay. Please continue!

Also star!
Lettel
13 posts
Joined April 2009
Lettel
:shock:
Endy Mion
6 posts
Joined October 2010
Endy Mion
☆
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
:oops:
osuyo
225 posts
Joined December 2009
osuyo
sayonara
Bye-bye :)
K3nsh1n_H1mur4
410 posts
Joined November 2009
K3nsh1n_H1mur4

osuyo wrote:

sayonara
Bye-bye :)
Sayonara Bye Bye

Source: http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclopedia/anime.php?id=311

Star because I love this anime...
GUBA_old
5 posts
Joined May 2009
GUBA_old
8-)
m i z u k i
418 posts
Joined February 2010
m i z u k i
:oops:
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
:oops:
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
;)
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
nice map

star !
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
:O nice map~

SPOILER
oh..and here an offset advice...
I think maybe offset8320 will be better?
hmm you can try it and decide whether you change it or not xD
but if you decide to change that, please don't forgot to resnap all notes and align some necessary green lines. xD

hmm final, star for really nice map~ >w</
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
;)
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
swish
wow :oops:
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
taNa_Coppola
>quintitem

arigatou :oops:
PEPOTTI
195 posts
Joined May 2010
PEPOTTI
nice map~
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. Title: Sayonara Bye Bye
  2. Source: YuYu Hakusho (as http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/YuYu_Hakusho)
  3. don't make stack leniency to the left top, use the default setting (0.7) plz
  4. byebye (taNa_Coppola).osb remove this file and full submit
  5. lacks hitsounds imo
  6. first offset: 6,722 to make all notes after first timing section
  7. try to cut the mp3 or find someone to cut it for you
[Insane]:
  1. 00:14:710 (T) - claps like this is not fit, try to set at 2nd/4th white tick (for example 00:15:110, 00:15:908 of course you can hear the drum clearly and then place clap)
  2. 00:45:365 (T) - cancel this break
  3. 00:57:847 (1) - cancel new combo
  4. 00:58:246 (2,1) - exchange new combo
  5. 01:17:019 (1,2,1) - ^
  6. 01:50:470 (5) - remove
  7. 02:09:741 (1,2,1) - new combo things
  8. 02:22:523 (1,2,1) - ^
[Normal]:
  1. nothing much but the claps
[Easy]:
  1. 02:28:913 (4) - 1 more reverse and place the finish at 02:30:511
star~
taNa_Coppola
169 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
taNa_Coppola
>Colin Hou


Thank you mod :oops:

i tried again.
mercury2004
615 posts
Joined February 2010
mercury2004
star
Kojoo_old
7 posts
Joined May 2010
Kojoo_old
ばいばい
jnkinsu
91 posts
Joined March 2010
jnkinsu
な・・・ないすまっぷだ！
別に☆とかあげたくねぇけどよ　
気持ちだけな
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

[All diff]
01:59:955 (T) ここからclapが少しうるさく聞こえるので音量下げたほうがいいかもです
02:29:512 (T) このtiming pointを02:30:511に移動？

[Easy]
HP +1 , OD +1
00:11:514 (1) 抜いてもいいんじゃないでしょうか？
00:31:485 (4) new combo
00:32:683 (1) remove new combo - 00:33:882 (2) new combo
00:46:663 (3) change finish?
00:53:054 (7) new combo & はじめのほうにfinish?
01:02:639 (n) (6)の上にcircle入れてfinish? (賛成なら01:02:240 (6)のfinish外す)
01:44:977 (1) 最後にfinish?
01:48:972 (7) new combo

[Normal]
HP +1 OD +2 (OD低すぎですorz)
00:37:077 (1) (5,6,7)でリターンが見えないので見えるようにしましょう
00:46:663 (2) はじめのほうにfinish?
00:59:244 (4) 真ん中にfinish?
01:05:835 (3) はじめのほうにfinish?
01:18:416 (4) 後ろのほうのclap外す
01:27:803 (3) remove finish
01:28:202 (1) remove clap & add finish
01:45:776 (3,4) spacing miss

[Insane]
HP -1? OD +1 or +2
00:59:444 (6) add finish?
01:02:639 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) ちょっとclapが…　赤線のclapは外したほうがいいかもです…
あと音量を02:01:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4)と同じようにしたほうがいいかもです、ちょっと大きい気がします
01:05:835 (2) remove clap
01:18:616 (1) はじめのほうのclap外す
01:29:600 (5) 1個下
01:29:700 (1) 01:31:397で終わったほうがいいかもです
01:32:995 (4) add finish?
02:01:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) 01:02:639と同様
02:04:948 (5) new combo
02:17:729 (1) remove clap
02:20:525 (4,5,6,7) 1個下
02:24:120 (4) 真ん中にclap?

good map!
ファイトです! >w</
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