Coyote Kisses - Acid Wolfpack

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RikiH_
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 5 settembre 2017 at 09:17:21

Artist: Coyote Kisses
Title: Acid Wolfpack
Tags: Dubstep Electronic EDM Marathon
BPM: 180
Filesize: 9547kb
Play Time: 05:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Aggressive (6,08 stars, 954 notes)


Download: Coyote Kisses - Acid Wolfpack
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#11


Beware! This map contains jumps and sexy sliders.
RyoKazuka


cumming stars

tatemae
yo from m4m
00:24:731 (3) - He is lonely and the slider desigining is a bit ugly here imo :/
00:26:731 (1,2,3,4,1) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh. Either change up the angles a little bit or change the slider shape
00:39:731 (4,3) - nazi stack
00:40:731 (3) - http://puu.sh/pXJ8Z/4589a360bb.png
01:57:397 (1) - Aesthetically, I think you could improve the slider
01:17:397 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:22:731 (1,2,1,2) - different spacing here just looks really weird to me.
01:39:397 (1) < 01:17:397 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) 01:44:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would be better and captures both the melody and the clickable downbeat imo
02:08:731 (4) - I know you kinda didnt try to repeat yourself, but this looks pretyt shitty imo :D
02:10:564 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:16:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why diffetent spacing?
etc
02:37:398 (7) - nc?
02:20:731 (3) - make him strange as the others xDD
02:33:398 (10) - nc?
02:37:398 (7) - ^
etc
03:32:731 (1,1,1) - kreygasm
03:45:397 (3) - nc
04:02:731 (1) - http://puu.sh/pXJXP/b900a3f5c4.png
04:30:064 (1) - Same as pointed out earlier
05:20:064 (1) - reduce sv xD too hard for playing imo
od 8 plees
Soory for nazi mod, take my star.
Good luck RikiH :3
Kirin
wewe m4m

[pH=Zero]
00:50:731 (1) - questo slider mi sembra simile a quello prima e dato che accade questo, ti suggerisco di cambiarlo
01:01:397 (1,2,3,4) - mettilo così che viene più simmetrico (ho copiaincollato le prime due note e poi le ho girate di conseguenza)
01:05:620 (2,3) - scusami se sono simmetria faggot ma il primo kickslider non è allineato perfettamente ,_, (anche se questo volendo puoi tralasciarlo)
01:26:397 (8,1) - la blanket puoi farla meglio qui (ho spostato un po' il 6° e il 5° punto dello slider e viene meglio, poi se non è così vedi te)
01:33:397 (1) - non ho idee su come potresti migliorarlo, ma potevi fare di meglio
01:39:397 (1) - questo slider la prima volta mi ha confuso per la sua direzione e la sua speed, vedi se non sono l'unico e se è il caso di cambiarlo
02:41:064 - non capisco perchè da qui a 03:17:397 - qui in tutto quel pezzo ci stanno due parti, una con gli slider non allineati e una bene o male con gli slider allineati, o fai uno o fai l'altra (perdona il mio essere simmetry faggot)
04:30:064 (1) - ??????????????????????
05:11:397 (3) - questo imho per bellezza potevi farlo simile allo slider precedente

buona fortuna mate! :3
Topic Starter
RikiH_

SherryCherry wrote:

yo from m4m
00:24:731 (3) - He is lonely and the slider desigining is a bit ugly here imo :/ Can't do better :c
00:26:731 (1,2,3,4,1) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh. Either change up the angles a little bit or change the slider shape Same, I'd f*ck up the spacing xD
00:39:731 (4,3) - nazi stack ok mom
00:40:731 (3) - http://puu.sh/pXJ8Z/4589a360bb.png I can't see the difference honestly!
01:57:397 (1) - Aesthetically, I think you could improve the slider done... tried, at least
01:17:397 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - 01:22:731 (1,2,1,2) - different spacing here just looks really weird to me. I'll wait for more opinions, hope noone else annoys me about this or ill change
01:39:397 (1) < 01:17:397 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) 01:44:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - would be better and captures both the melody and the clickable downbeat imo no :c
02:08:731 (4) - I know you kinda didnt try to repeat yourself, but this looks pretyt shitty imo :Dokies
02:10:564 (4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 02:16:064 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why diffetent spacing? because yes
etc
02:37:398 (7) - nc? yes
02:20:731 (3) - make him strange as the others xDD nah, just wanted to make a different pattern!
02:33:398 (10) - nc? added somewhere else
02:37:398 (7) - ^
etc
03:32:731 (1,1,1) - kreygasm <3
03:45:397 (3) - nc would break my nc pattern...
04:02:731 (1) - http://puu.sh/pXJXP/b900a3f5c4.png lol noice
04:30:064 (1) - Same as pointed out earlier same tbh
05:20:064 (1) - reduce sv xD too hard for playing imo you don't even need to move the cursor, since it starts and finished in the same point!
od 8 plees 7.8 <3
Soory for nazi mod, take my star.
Good luck RikiH :3
Thanks a lot for your mod, and omg 5 stars, I love you forever <3

Kirin wrote:

wewe m4m

[pH=Zero]
00:50:731 (1) - questo slider mi sembra simile a quello prima e dato che accade questo, ti suggerisco di cambiarlo ma è fatto apposta
01:01:397 (1,2,3,4) - mettilo così che viene più simmetrico (ho copiaincollato le prime due note e poi le ho girate di conseguenza) è quello che ho fatto... comunque alla fine le ho messe a quadrato
01:05:620 (2,3) - scusami se sono simmetria faggot ma il primo kickslider non è allineato perfettamente ,_, (anche se questo volendo puoi tralasciarlo) sì, anche perchè per 1 pixel chissene lol
01:26:397 (8,1) - la blanket puoi farla meglio qui (ho spostato un po' il 6° e il 5° punto dello slider e viene meglio, poi se non è così vedi te) fatto, ora è più bello!
01:33:397 (1) - non ho idee su come potresti migliorarlo, ma potevi fare di meglio è un suono irregolare, mappato con uno slider irregolare, purtroppo nemmeno io ho idee migliori tbh
01:39:397 (1) - questo slider la prima volta mi ha confuso per la sua direzione e la sua speed, vedi se non sono l'unico e se è il caso di cambiarlo se qualcuno rompe lo cambio, spero di no comunque
02:41:064 - non capisco perchè da qui a 03:17:397 - qui in tutto quel pezzo ci stanno due parti, una con gli slider non allineati e una bene o male con gli slider allineati, o fai uno o fai l'altra (perdona il mio essere simmetry faggot) sono messe a random, semplicemente
04:30:064 (1) - ?????????????????????? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
05:11:397 (3) - questo imho per bellezza potevi farlo simile allo slider precedente vero, ma ho preferito pensare al flow!

buona fortuna mate! :3
Grazie per il mod! Scusa se fixo pochissime cose :c
Spork Lover
Sup RikiH_, M4M tiiime :3

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The purple color seems very bright for how.. non-purple? the background is, consider making it a little paler :3 "Hi I'm that color"

The sliders with the "tiny" turns should show emphasis on white ticks (or if short, the third 1/6 tick, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5653518 (I changed this one)) 'cause they're somewhat special :3 (00:50:731 (1) - this one for example is a bit too early etc etc, but I give different suggestions for that slider in particular below because it's slow)

unbelievably acidic


00:28:731 (3,4) - Consider reverting 3, I feel it looks/flows a bit better than the shape you have on 3 here. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5653433)
00:33:064 (4,4) - Overlap the sliderend of the first with the sliderstart of the second
00:48:064 (1) - The turn in the middle is really odd to me imo :3 (You generally see a hole or something in the middle if there's a 360 degree turn during the slider) (Same applies to the next few ones
00:53:397 (1) - Kinda the same here (An idea could be to have the strongest part of the turn on 00:55:064 to reeeeally squeeze out the emphasis :3)
00:56:064 (1) - This one's fine.
01:02:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd overlap the stream on 01:01:564 (2) - instead + I'd probably give the lower part of the stream a kind of "copy-paste-ish" look to it, so 01:02:397 (1,2,3,4) - is similar to 01:02:064 (1,2,3,4) - ;o
01:04:064 (1) - o, now I know why you did the tiny turns, I still feel you should give them some sort of emphasis thing with the white ticks so the turn feels more natural.
01:04:731 - This should be clickable, if 01:07:397 (2) - is clickable imo :3
01:10:397 (1,2) - Small overlap issue, but still adds to the aesthetics.
01:12:064 (1,2) - Move 2 a bit to the right to blanket it better with the 1
01:35:397 (1,2) - 2 kicksliders or a reverse slider would fit from the slider end of 1 I think to match the wubs in the song :D
01:39:397 (1) - there are some weird imo unnecessary curves like the red anchor in the middle of the left side of the slider (I hope that made sense lol) (Mainly so the "hole" in the middle of the slider is smooth >//<)
02:01:397 (5) - NC consistency with 01:58:731 (1,1) - ?
02:24:731 (4,3) - Nazi overlap lol
02:34:397 (1,3) - Switch NC for consistency with 02:40:064 (1) - and 02:29:397 (1) :3
03:31:397 (9) - Maybe NC here so the NC density isn't insanely different from the stream?
04:07:064 (2,3,4,5) - I'd emphasis those somehow with NC's (Maybe 2 and 5)
04:54:064 (7) - Fancy ;o I like
04:58:064 (1) - Extend this to the red tick on 04:58:564 -
05:20:064 (1) - LOL I donno why I laughed, was just so unexpected to play this slider (It's a bit like the one from PritiElvis' If You Can't Hang map if you tried it xD) There's nothing straight up wrong with it though, so you don't have to change it if you don't wanna xD
Topic Starter
RikiH_

Spork Lover wrote:

Sup RikiH_, M4M tiiime :3

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The purple color seems very bright for how.. non-purple? the background is, consider making it a little paler :3 "Hi I'm that color" Ok mommy

The sliders with the "tiny" turns should show emphasis on white ticks (or if short, the third 1/6 tick, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5653518 (I changed this one)) 'cause they're somewhat special :3 (00:50:731 (1) - this one for example is a bit too early etc etc, but I give different suggestions for that slider in particular below because it's slow) Yeah I am aware of it, but personally I disagree, there's no need to emphasize white ticks in this way :c btw if someone else points this out, I'll change it

unbelievably acidic


00:28:731 (3,4) - Consider reverting 3, I feel it looks/flows a bit better than the shape you have on 3 here. (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5653433) Noice
00:33:064 (4,4) - Overlap the sliderend of the first with the sliderstart of the second It would mess up the spacing, also it's not noticeable in playmode!
00:48:064 (1) - The turn in the middle is really odd to me imo :3 (You generally see a hole or something in the middle if there's a 360 degree turn during the slider) (Same applies to the next few ones) Yeah but it's not a problem xD
00:53:397 (1) - Kinda the same here (An idea could be to have the strongest part of the turn on 00:55:064 to reeeeally squeeze out the emphasis :3) This is my best slider ever :c
00:56:064 (1) - This one's fine.
01:02:064 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I'd overlap the stream on 01:01:564 (2) - instead + I'd probably give the lower part of the stream a kind of "copy-paste-ish" look to it, so 01:02:397 (1,2,3,4) - is similar to 01:02:064 (1,2,3,4) - ;o Okay, changed the stream!
01:04:064 (1) - o, now I know why you did the tiny turns, I still feel you should give them some sort of emphasis thing with the white ticks so the turn feels more natural. But these sliders are not natural, they are just cancer
01:04:731 - This should be clickable, if 01:07:397 (2) - is clickable imo :3 If you listen, the beat here 01:07:397 (2) - is so much stronger! That's why I made it clickable xD btw if someone else suggests it I'll change
01:10:397 (1,2) - Small overlap issue, but still adds to the aesthetics. The spacing is a bit weird now, but fixed!
01:12:064 (1,2) - Move 2 a bit to the right to blanket it better with the 1 done!
01:35:397 (1,2) - 2 kicksliders or a reverse slider would fit from the slider end of 1 I think to match the wubs in the song :DI tried them, but they are too noisy! I will wait for more suggestions about this, by the way
01:39:397 (1) - there are some weird imo unnecessary curves like the red anchor in the middle of the left side of the slider (I hope that made sense lol) (Mainly so the "hole" in the middle of the slider is smooth >//<) Ow, I understand what you say, but this slider is irregular on purpose!
02:01:397 (5) - NC consistency with 01:58:731 (1,1) - ? 1,1 looks weird but fixed!
02:24:731 (4,3) - Nazi overlap lol ok daddy
02:34:397 (1,3) - Switch NC for consistency with 02:40:064 (1) - and 02:29:397 (1) :3 okay!
03:31:397 (9) - Maybe NC here so the NC density isn't insanely different from the stream? Yeah, good idea xD
04:07:064 (2,3,4,5) - I'd emphasis those somehow with NC's (Maybe 2 and 5) It would be inconsistent with the previous patterns!
04:54:064 (7) - Fancy ;o I like <3 hope it's rankable lmao
04:58:064 (1) - Extend this to the red tick on 04:58:564 - Done, I'll need to silence the slidertick xD
05:20:064 (1) - LOL I donno why I laughed, was just so unexpected to play this slider (It's a bit like the one from PritiElvis' If You Can't Hang map if you tried it xD) There's nothing straight up wrong with it though, so you don't have to change it if you don't wanna xD It's the best slider ever made, B I T CH H E S
Good mod, thanks a bunch :3
sdafsf
00:22:731 (1,2) - these are too close imo looks weird
00:23:398 (3,4) - i dont like how 3 is not pointing towards 4 like other sliders in this combo. consider changing it
00:25:398 (1,2) - ^
00:27:398 (3,4) - move these further down
00:40:731 (3,4) - make end of 3 point to 4. also might increase spacing
00:45:398 (1,2) - move 2 so they are symmetrical
00:48:064 - not so aesthatically pleasing slider art.. id change all of them
01:04:064 (1) - im not going to point out every single slider i find ugly but i feel like the longer they get the uglier you made them :/
01:22:731 (1,2,1,2) - make this patter more interesting the straight sldiers are really underwhealming
03:29:397 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - id make these 4 repeat sliders
03:33:064 (1) - ctrl+g?
04:30:064 (1) - im really sorry i cant say that much about this map because you caught the rhythm fine and sv changes are fitting all of that. but i really have a problem with the way your sliders look. i also dont know a lot about slider style maps... id understand if you refuse to mod my map for such a weak mod.
message me back if you want me to point out every slider i dislike.

05:20:314 (1) - last of all this spinner is really unfitting id remove it and put one in the beginning instead(drain time will still be long enough if its like 3 seconds long)
Mazziv
[some chemical shit,most likely crystal meth]
  1. 00:24:731 (3) - no daddy please make good looking penis slider
  2. 00:31:398 (3,2) - stack?
  3. 00:56:064 (1) - i dont know bout that part of the slider v: maybe try to make it have a hole in the middle? o:
  4. 01:00:064 (1,4) - strg+g those motherfakas?
  5. 01:01:731 (3,2) - do you want to die?
  6. 01:04:064 (1) -
    could look a bit better if you make it if you round it more up! maybe like this? see? i also did the blanket hi daddy
  7. 01:05:397 (1,2) - idk the pause here really makes it sound weird,espicially because 01:05:397 (1,2) - is literally a instant slider which I GUESS will play weird but maybe im just dumb ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
  8. 01:06:731 (1) - same as i mentioned before,maybe try to make the circular part look neat
  9. 01:07:620 (4,5) - very sharp angle,that played super awkward for me v: also with this 1/3 stuff its fast and aaaa u know what i MEAN
  10. 01:08:064 (6,2) - do you want to die? v2
  11. 02:00:731 (3) - ctrl+g?
  12. 03:33:064 (1) - ctrl+g AAA
  13. 04:03:564 (2,4) - aaaa
  14. 04:23:647 (3,1) - try to blanket 04:24:064 (1) - sliderhead with 04:23:647 (3) - ? aaa
  15. 04:30:064 (1) - were u drunk when making this slider? NONE OF THEM ARE STRAIGHT AAAA HOW IT LOOKS LIKE HOW IT SHOULD LOOK LIKE DADDY PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
  16. 04:33:897 (4,5) - Blanket could be better tbh aa
  17. 05:20:064 (1) - HOW SHOULD ANYONE KNOW THIS RIKI? I WILL EAT YOU


fucing degen -_ -
Tacto
M4M Hope i can help a little bit
01:25:397 (1,2,3) - This could be changed to something like this (just felt better for me)


01:35:397 (1) - Could be moved a little bit down


01:57:064 (8,9,10,11,1) - I would think this would feel better moved over a bit like this


02:06:064 (2) - this could be under the end of 1 like 1 is under the previous 4

02:23:397 (1,2) - I personally would like this to be a slider but thats just bc it is hard for me to read it

02:57:064 (2) - could be turned the other way like ->


03:07:731 (2) - feels out of place bc the rest of the section is just normal sliders no hard cuts

03:49:814 (2,3) - might feel better if you move 3 up a little but idk what you want the flow to feel like at that part so up to you Ex:

Hoped this helped even a little bit :)
Topic Starter
RikiH_

sdafsf wrote:

00:22:731 (1,2) - these are too close imo looks weird It's 1.70x spacing like the entire section
00:23:398 (3,4) - i dont like how 3 is not pointing towards 4 like other sliders in this combo. consider changing it symmetry and other stuff is not necesary...
00:25:398 (1,2) - ^
00:27:398 (3,4) - move these further down everyone is hating these, so fixed, let's try this
00:40:731 (3,4) - make end of 3 point to 4. also might increase spacing okay
00:45:398 (1,2) - move 2 so they are symmetrical no
00:48:064 - not so aesthatically pleasing slider art.. id change all of them lol absolutely no
01:04:064 (1) - im not going to point out every single slider i find ugly but i feel like the longer they get the uglier you made them :/ pls
01:22:731 (1,2,1,2) - make this patter more interesting the straight sldiers are really underwhealming maybe i'll change it into circles, need to think about it
03:29:397 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - id make these 4 repeat sliders but why
03:33:064 (1) - ctrl+g? i think it would make the pattern unreadable
04:30:064 (1) - im really sorry i cant say that much about this map because you caught the rhythm fine and sv changes are fitting all of that. but i really have a problem with the way your sliders look. i also dont know a lot about slider style maps... id understand if you refuse to mod my map for such a weak mod.
message me back if you want me to point out every slider i dislike.
Yeah not everyone likes long sliders, but I'm quite sure they look good, don't worry about the mod!
05:20:314 (1) - last of all this spinner is really unfitting id remove it and put one in the beginning instead(drain time will still be long enough if its like 3 seconds long) not sure about this, but you may have a point, let's wait for more opinions
Thanks!

Mazziv wrote:

[some chemical shit,most likely crystal meth]
Crystal Meth confirmed
  1. 00:24:731 (3) - no daddy please make good looking penis slider
    sexy desu
  2. 00:31:398 (3,2) - stack? who givess a shit xd
  3. 00:56:064 (1) - i dont know bout that part of the slider v: maybe try to make it have a hole in the middle? o: u like holes don't you. btw i think it's fine :c
  4. 01:00:064 (1,4) - strg+g those motherfakas? ok mom
  5. 01:01:731 (3,2) - do you want to die? what is this
  6. 01:04:064 (1) -
    could look a bit better if you make it if you round it more up! maybe like this? see? i also did the blanket hi daddy
    fixed a bit, it looks better nao
  7. 01:05:397 (1,2) - idk the pause here really makes it sound weird,espicially because 01:05:397 (1,2) - is literally a instant slider which I GUESS will play weird but maybe im just dumb ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ yeah but there's no sound there :c i'll wait for more suggestions
  8. 01:06:731 (1) - same as i mentioned before,maybe try to make the circular part look neat this wasn't intended to look circular, it was intended more like cancer
  9. 01:07:620 (4,5) - very sharp angle,that played super awkward for me v: also with this 1/3 stuff its fast and aaaa u know what i MEAN yeah that part used to flow like shit, now i tried something different
  10. 01:08:064 (6,2) - do you want to die? v2 oh fuck you :c
  11. 02:00:731 (3) - ctrl+g? ok mom
  12. 03:33:064 (1) - ctrl+g AAA evil xd more readable this way
  13. 04:03:564 (2,4) - aaaa asab (all stacks are bastard)
  14. 04:23:647 (3,1) - try to blanket 04:24:064 (1) - sliderhead with 04:23:647 (3) - ? aaa how? :c both are straight, unlike you <3
  15. 04:30:064 (1) - were u drunk when making this slider? NONE OF THEM ARE STRAIGHT AAAA HOW IT LOOKS LIKE HOW IT SHOULD LOOK LIKE DADDY PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA but if you look it the right way it's fine xd
  16. 04:33:897 (4,5) - Blanket could be better tbh aa fixed a little bit
  17. 05:20:064 (1) - HOW SHOULD ANYONE KNOW THIS RIKI? I WILL EAT YOU It starts and ends in the same point on purpose lol


fucing degen -_ -


Bulldog wrote:

M4M Hope i can help a little bit
01:25:397 (1,2,3) - This could be changed to something like this (just felt better for me)

Changed a little bit!

01:35:397 (1) - Could be moved a little bit down Changed, ctrl+j'ed lol


01:57:064 (8,9,10,11,1) - I would think this would feel better moved over a bit like this much better now!


02:06:064 (2) - this could be under the end of 1 like 1 is under the previous 4 nope, sorry

02:23:397 (1,2) - I personally would like this to be a slider but thats just bc it is hard for me to read it I don't think it's a problem, since the AR is quite high

02:57:064 (2) - could be turned the other way like -> But I like the overlap


03:07:731 (2) - feels out of place bc the rest of the section is just normal sliders no hard cuts no big deal imo

03:49:814 (2,3) - might feel better if you move 3 up a little but idk what you want the flow to feel like at that part so up to you Ex: Yep!

Hoped this helped even a little bit :)

It did, thanks a lot!
Updated.
Kayne
00:48:064 (1) - Indovina lo slider!!!! :DDDD é una E!!!!!
00:50:731 (1) - W!!!!!
00:53:397 (1) - canna da pesca bionica con un cancro all'amo!!!!!
00:56:064 (1) - piccolo mostriciattolo nato male
01:09:897 (1,1,1) - svastica senza un pezzo
01:24:064 (1,2,3) - AndreaH_
02:05:397 (1,2) - I MIEI OCCHI
02:08:731 (4) - Questo prende vita
03:32:731 (1,1) - ???????
04:02:731 (1) - Skystar's sliders pls
04:14:731 (1,2,3) - MA MIA NONNA FLOWA MEGLIO SONO BRUTTI
04:30:064 (1) - I TUBI DEL MIO LAVANDINO HANNO LA STESSA IDENTICA FORMA DI QUESTO ABORTO
04:57:397 (1,2,3,4,1) - ma come pensi che sia leggibeilkdiujkashbdiujHUHAHHU9FDSIFJKDSMFN
05:20:064 (1) - 2000bpm slider
Topic Starter
RikiH_
Made some little changes... It's 6.27* now LMAO
Mazziv
riki is the true meme master
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  1. Timing/Offset ✔
  2. Tags ✘ You have no Tags! You could add: Dubstep, Approval, Electronic, etc.
  3. Song Setup: 7,8 OD is a bit low for a 2016 map but thats just my opinion... ^^ i would take 8 or something above.

pH=Zero

General:

  • 1. Really good map! Just some flow problems and wired or ugly sliders which i count on in the Timing Points section.



Timing Points:

  • Slider who are not really comfortable to play:

    01:04:064 (1) - to many wired curves. its not impossible to play or to hard or something.... its just that this slider doesnt look really beautiful and is horrible to follow it on a smooth way... i would delete the "looping" in it, because this slows it down on an wired way

    01:06:731 (1) - This is a bit better to follow... even if i dont understand why. xDD you can keep it like that, but im still not a fan of it and would change it ^^"

    01:30:731 (1) - meeeeh, dont know what to say .... just say its the same shit as before :/ and also the transition to the next slider is a bit meeh. Maybe because the next one is a bit to near to the first one because of the high SV.

    01:32:064 (1) - its clear enough to read and also not really bad to play so yeah .... should work well even if it could look a bit better ... maybe like [url=this]http://puu.sh/qhhxz/2b501e57a4.jpg[/url] ???

    01:39:397 (1) - finally im by this slider .... this was the most annyoing and confusing slider in the whole song because the "crossroad" in this slider is way to early and in the first moment i have no idea where i have to go ... you have a similar slider in the song which is instead of this slider super good to play.
    I mean this 04:30:064 (1) - one! PLEASE CHANGE IT!

    03:44:064 (1) - one of the few slider of this kind which i find beautiful and good to play. Perfect shape and fits perfect in his blanket :)

    04:21:397 (1) - come on ..... you show 04:22:731 (1) - here that you can make beautiful sliders, but this one looks just really sick... like its going to die soon xD

    04:33:897 (4,5) - the blanket between this 2 could be better.

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    Combo:

    01:02:397 (1) - doesnt sounds important to make a NC here because in contrast to the stream before here isnt a faster beat by every white tick which means it sounds like one full stream= NC

    03:45:397 (3) - NC

    04:07:731 (1) - NC is not necessary

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    Rythm:

    The Rhythm in youre Song seems really good. I cant really find something where i can say "thats wrong!",sometimes im not really sure, but when i hear how perfect you place the Hitsounds the rhythm makes sense again. xD You really did a great job here. Nothing seems random to me.
    Im just wondering about one thing: 01:19:231 (2,3,1) - Triple // 01:24:564 (2,3) - circle and slider // 01:39:397 (1) - wtf thing // 01:46:064 (1,2) - my favourite pattern so far :) // 02:12:731 (1,2) - 2 circles // What i want to say is that you change at exactly the same part everytime the Rhythm pattern... im not sure if thats ok, but i saw it by other ranked maps too so i doesnt think its a reason for not ranking a song.
    I just say it because its a bit out of system and maybe you want to know it.
    :)

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    Flow:
    01:08:064 (6,7,8) - its kind of flow but not a really comfortable one .... you have to swing out really far with the pen in a form which is not round ◯ to play ...
    you have to play edgy ⬜ and thats pretty hard, which isnt the problem normally by a 6 star map because it should be hard XD, but its not a beautiful flow.
    A Triangle △ for example is very good to follow no matter how far the spacing is :)Good example in youre map: 01:25:397 (1,2,3) -


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Slider Velocity ✘ You dont really have to change the SV generally but on some "very creative sliders" the balance between readability/playability and speed is to low. I hope you know what i mean. XDD (i will count it in the Timing Points section)
Pattern ✘ some Patterns kill the Flow... more information in Timing Points section.
Blankets Everything seems connected and in a system.
Combo ✘ just 3 things... the rest is perfect in my opinion :D
Hitsounds ✔ Absolutely great!
Rhythm fits to the Song

Thats it!
I hope i could help you a bit and that i have everything sufficiently justified. ;)
Good luck with the map :D
Topic Starter
RikiH_

R4UP1 wrote:



Mod Type: M4M


My Map:
If I Die Young - Dear Professor (XTREM)


[General Stuff]
  1. Timing/Offset ✔
  2. Tags ✘ You have no Tags! You could add: Dubstep, Approval, Electronic, etc. Fuck tags xD jk, added some tags!
  3. Song Setup: 7,8 OD is a bit low for a 2016 map but thats just my opinion... ^^ i would take 8 or something above. Yeah, 8.3 FTW

pH=Zero

General:

  • 1. Really good map! Just some flow problems and wired or ugly sliders which i count on in the Timing Points section.



Timing Points:

  • Slider who are not really comfortable to play:

    01:04:064 (1) - to many wired curves. its not impossible to play or to hard or something.... its just that this slider doesnt look really beautiful and is horrible to follow it on a smooth way... i would delete the "looping" in it, because this slows it down on an wired way Yeah I'm aware of it, let's wait for more suggestions and I'll most likely change it!

    01:06:731 (1) - This is a bit better to follow... even if i dont understand why. xDD you can keep it like that, but im still not a fan of it and would change it ^^" Same here

    01:30:731 (1) - meeeeh, dont know what to say .... just say its the same shit as before :/ and also the transition to the next slider is a bit meeh. Maybe because the next one is a bit to near to the first one because of the high SV. Yeah this is crap, changed

    01:32:064 (1) - its clear enough to read and also not really bad to play so yeah .... should work well even if it could look a bit better ... maybe like [url=this]http://puu.sh/qhhxz/2b501e57a4.jpg[/url] ??? Good suggestion! The problem is: the current slider is blanket'ed with the previous one, yours has a blanket with the following one. In any case it can't have a blanket with both, so I'd rather keep it this way

    01:39:397 (1) - finally im by this slider .... this was the most annyoing and confusing slider in the whole song because the "crossroad" in this slider is way to early and in the first moment i have no idea where i have to go ... you have a similar slider in the song which is instead of this slider super good to play.
    I mean this 04:30:064 (1) - one! PLEASE CHANGE IT! Wait, is the "crossroad" the problem? I think it's quite clear that it goes straight! Should be readable... By the way let's wait for more suggestions and I'll see!

    03:44:064 (1) - one of the few slider of this kind which i find beautiful and good to play. Perfect shape and fits perfect in his blanket :) lol thanks

    04:21:397 (1) - come on ..... you show 04:22:731 (1) - here that you can make beautiful sliders, but this one looks just really sick... like its going to die soon xD That's honestly one of my favourite :c

    04:33:897 (4,5) - the blanket between this 2 could be better. Yep, ctrl+h'ed and fixed

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    Combo:

    01:02:397 (1) - doesnt sounds important to make a NC here because in contrast to the stream before here isnt a faster beat by every white tick which means it sounds like one full stream= NC I agree

    03:45:397 (3) - NC Forgot it, now added

    04:07:731 (1) - NC is not necessary ok mom

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    Rythm:

    The Rhythm in youre Song seems really good. I cant really find something where i can say "thats wrong!",sometimes im not really sure, but when i hear how perfect you place the Hitsounds the rhythm makes sense again. xD You really did a great job here. Nothing seems random to me.
    Im just wondering about one thing: 01:19:231 (2,3,1) - Triple // 01:24:564 (2,3) - circle and slider // 01:39:397 (1) - wtf thing // 01:46:064 (1,2) - my favourite pattern so far :) // 02:12:731 (1,2) - 2 circles // What i want to say is that you change at exactly the same part everytime the Rhythm pattern... im not sure if thats ok, but i saw it by other ranked maps too so i doesnt think its a reason for not ranking a song.
    I just say it because its a bit out of system and maybe you want to know it.
    :)

    Let me explain this to you! It looks similar, yeah, but there are differences:
    01:19:231 (2,3,1) - Triple because there's a clear 1/4 drum, which is not present in the other sections!
    01:24:564 (2,3) - There's a wub sound here, so I decided to follow it with a slider
    01:39:397 (1) - Well, here the "BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ" can be clearly audible, so it has to be followed with a WTF slider in my opinion!
    01:46:064 (1,2) - Again, this is slightly different! Wub sounds
    02:12:731 (1,2) - This is really similar to 01:24:564 (2,3) - but there's no wub to follow so 2 circles are a better choice!


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    Flow:
    01:08:064 (6,7,8) - its kind of flow but not a really comfortable one .... you have to swing out really far with the pen in a form which is not round ◯ to play ...
    you have to play edgy ⬜ and thats pretty hard, which isnt the problem normally by a 6 star map because it should be hard XD, but its not a beautiful flow.
    A Triangle △ for example is very good to follow no matter how far the spacing is :)Good example in youre map: 01:25:397 (1,2,3) -

    What if I told you that squares are playable with a circular flow? Just look at this (AND FUCK MY PAINT SKILLZ)



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Slider Velocity ✘ You dont really have to change the SV generally but on some "very creative sliders" the balance between readability/playability and speed is to low. I hope you know what i mean. XDD (i will count it in the Timing Points section)
Pattern ✘ some Patterns kill the Flow... more information in Timing Points section.
Blankets Everything seems connected and in a system.
Combo ✘ just 3 things... the rest is perfect in my opinion :D
Hitsounds ✔ Absolutely great!
Rhythm fits to the Song

Thats it!
I hope i could help you a bit and that i have everything sufficiently justified. ;)
Good luck with the map :D
Thanks a lot, really useful mod in my opinion, I hope I could address everything in a proper way!
6th
Hello !

00:54:731 - Why is there no direction change ?
01:18:897 (2) - Move it to like (392;352) so it fits with 01:17:564 (2,2,2,2,2) -
01:35:397 (1,2) - This is paradoxal with the low SV, consider making the spacing lower.
03:28:564 (2,3,1) - That high spacing is a bit unjustified, and it's really hard to suddenly reduce speed at 03:29:397 -
03:38:397 (1) - Consider making it a bit faster, again it's overdone imo. It deserves to be slower, but not that slower.
05:20:064 (1) - Again, does that high SV really makes sense ?

RIKIH SLIDERZZ


Well, I'm really sorry for the poor mod, it seems to be really well made... just take your mod on my map as a NM I guess lol
Topic Starter
RikiH_

6th wrote:

Hello !

00:54:731 - Why is there no direction change ? Because it's a continuous sound
01:18:897 (2) - Move it to like (392;352) so it fits with 01:17:564 (2,2,2,2,2) - okay
01:35:397 (1,2) - This is paradoxal with the low SV, consider making the spacing lower. done
03:28:564 (2,3,1) - That high spacing is a bit unjustified, and it's really hard to suddenly reduce speed at 03:29:397 - It follows the build-up in the song, i see nothing wrong here
03:38:397 (1) - Consider making it a bit faster, again it's overdone imo. It deserves to be slower, but not that slower. Nah, it's okay. i don't want to break the structure of the whole map
05:20:064 (1) - Again, does that high SV really makes sense ? yes

RIKIH SLIDERZZ


Well, I'm really sorry for the poor mod, it seems to be really well made... just take your mod on my map as a NM I guess lol
SEXY SLIDERS
Izzz
IMO I think the opening could go for some lower sv, like maybe .75 or so at least. Seems a bit fast considering what's going on.

00:48:064 - Make this notch a bit wider maybe? Right now it looks especially messy, whereas 00:50:731 (1,1,1) - all look way nicer.

00:48:064 (1,1,1) - Should probably be snapped on the 1/3, since there's a pretty important sound on the 1/3 you could map the slider ends to. You can hear it best on the end of the first slider.

03:44:731 (2) - Move first red anchor to x:323 y:230 for a better blanket of 03:44:064 (1) - and to have a smoother looking slider in general
Can't really comprehend most of the map atm
Imakuri
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