NeilPerry wrote:
Hi, just friendly nm
toybot's extra:
00:10:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - as i told in probox's diff, guess 1\3 would be better // its 1/4 in most of it, so staying with 1/4 would be more comfortable, even if the violin is a bit muddy
00:32:091 - 00:35:967 - 00:37:484 - you lost beats here. but throw all part you use same beats. it's crush rythm consistence a bit. Guess better to fix it.
01:18:945 (4,1) - not too close? // i think its fine for me to play
01:35:040 (4) - no need. without tripple sounds better, change it to 2 kickslider, should me awesome. // did kickslider + circle
02:25:012 (1,2,3) - intuatively it's feels bad cuz of spacing. previous dobles looks simple like this 1\2 rythm. hope you understand me
02:26:698 (1,2,3,4) - 1\6 // definitely sure this is 1/4
02:31:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - wanted to advice you improve rythm here. try smthing like this. tripple sounds bad http://puu.sh/rpgWc/160d684cbb.jpg // there's a beat on 02:32:091 - though
Other looks awesome.
sory for poor mod, hope im help you a bit. Good luck. <3
thx for mods ppl! https://0paste.com/9257.txtXilver wrote:
:coffee: fighter
[toybot]
00:05:125 (4) - slider ends on downbeat asdf // downbeat barely even matters in such a slow section tbh
00:15:911 (3) - asdf
01:11:445 (2,1) - pretty sure this is overmapped, should del note on 01:11:445 (2) -
01:40:349 (5,6,7,8,9) - ctrl g maybe to the whole stack? // i want the slider leading into the stream
02:26:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - can't hear a stream here honestly // certain there are 1/4 beats
02:28:046 (1) - ctrl g? // i changed the previous circle's position instead to flow in better
good diff c:
good luck :box: