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Narcissu the god !









Topic Starter
Narcissu
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Satellite
i can support
Topic Starter
Narcissu
;w; thx very much, i love you
Faaa97
I was going to mod it, but I couldn't find any issue with standart diffs. I don't play mania so can't mod those.

Something to add: maybe 3* - 4* diffs?

Good job with Camellia diff and good luck in ranking.
Topic Starter
Narcissu
ye will add 3~4 diff :)
-[ AmiShici ]-
Hii there~

CS req Here

4k=1~4
Mania Mod here
  • [CSNM]
  1. 00:02:972 - add SV 1.25x? so noob not suprise since at 00:26:597 - being fast ''w')b
  2. 00:33:047 - add at 2? piano. as u mapped at 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - :3
  3. 01:03:797 (63797|1,64097|2) - change to 1/2s LN like as 01:02:597 (62597|0,62897|3,63197|0,63497|3) -
  4. 01:11:447 - add in 3?
  5. 01:15:347 - 01:15:647 - add note like as 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) -
  6. 01:23:297 (83297|2) - delete? no piano like 01:21:797 (81797|0,82097|1,82397|2,82697|3,82997|1) -
  7. 01:34:547 - 01:34:847 - add same as before
  8. 01:56:747 - add piano?
  9. 01:59:297 (119297|2,119597|3) - delete? no piano
  10. 02:16:397 - 02:17:597 - 02:18:797 - etc add note for clap sound? like this 02:19:997 (139997|1,139997|0,141197|1,141197|3) -

    [CSHD]
  11. 00:46:997 (46997|3,46997|2) - 00:49:397 (49397|3,49397|2) - 00:56:597 (56597|1,56597|0) - 00:58:997 (58997|1,58997|0) - etc, delete one note? like this 00:51:797 (51797|2) - ? since no drum there? just kick only
  12. 01:51:497 (111497|1) - LN star here 01:51:197 (111197|1) - ?
  13. 02:02:897 (122897|3,123047|2,123497|1,123647|2,124097|3,124247|2) - etc, idk why there just using single note while 02:04:697 (124697|0,124697|3,124847|2,124847|1) - using double note :3
  14. 03:07:397 - ~03:08:297 - i think each blue line have sound too like as 03:08:447 (188447|2,188747|2,189047|2,189347|2,189647|1) -
Goodluck 'w')b
Critical_Star

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Hii there~

CS req Here

4k=1~4
Mania Mod here
  • [CSNM]
  1. 00:02:972 - add SV 1.25x? so noob not suprise since at 00:26:597 - being fast ''w')b yea good idea, added lol
  2. 00:33:047 - add at 2? piano. as u mapped at 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - :3 here is 1/6 piano sound so i thought it may be a little bit forcing for NM diff
  3. 01:03:797 (63797|1,64097|2) - change to 1/2s LN like as 01:02:597 (62597|0,62897|3,63197|0,63497|3) - cool
  4. 01:11:447 - add in 3? like before, these are 1/6 piano sound so i decide to ignore this one xD
  5. 01:15:347 - 01:15:647 - add note like as 00:36:947 (36947|1,37097|2,37247|3,37397|0) - ok i added on other side too
  6. 01:23:297 (83297|2) - delete? no piano like 01:21:797 (81797|0,82097|1,82397|2,82697|3,82997|1) - feel empty to leave the kick note here, so i keep it but i used a LN to empyhsize the last piano sound better
  7. 01:34:547 - 01:34:847 - add same as before ok
  8. 01:56:747 - add piano? would prefer to catch those louder pitch piano sound here,
  9. 01:59:297 (119297|2,119597|3) - delete? no piano deleted the red tick note but the white tick have piano sound here
  10. 02:16:397 - 02:17:597 - 02:18:797 - etc add note for clap sound? like this 02:19:997 (139997|1,139997|0,141197|1,141197|3) - the drum sound are soft unlike start 02:31:397 - then i would use double for it, is good for build up pattern here ;)

    [CSHD]
  11. 00:46:997 (46997|3,46997|2) - 00:49:397 (49397|3,49397|2) - 00:56:597 (56597|1,56597|0) - 00:58:997 (58997|1,58997|0) - etc, delete one note? like this 00:51:797 (51797|2) - ? since no drum there? just kick only i know but it just feel a little special there for double, is like emphysize the piano sound here
  12. 01:51:497 (111497|1) - LN star here 01:51:197 (111197|1) - ? pretty sure it started at the red tick line :o
  13. 02:02:897 (122897|3,123047|2,123497|1,123647|2,124097|3,124247|2) - etc, idk why there just using single note while 02:04:697 (124697|0,124697|3,124847|2,124847|1) - using double note :3 yea you are right but it just feel too full here and i wanted to give some space for single stream here instead jumpstream till the end
  14. 03:07:397 - ~03:08:297 - i think each blue line have sound too like as 03:08:447 (188447|2,188747|2,189047|2,189347|2,189647|1) - some are pretty noticeable like u mention that yea, but some are not too obvious, would prefer to add note to those much noticeable piano sound here
Goodluck 'w')b
thanks ya ami 'w')/
- K e n -
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- K e n -
awesome map <3
Crystal
beep beep

[Camellia]
AR9.25??
00:28:997 (1,2) - 感觉形状一样的比较好看
01:01:997 (5) - NC? 前面有个间隔1/1的是4个1NC 知道是按白线下的不过这次还是NC下感觉比较好(?
01:59:597 (5) - ^
02:30:797 - why skip
02:34:997 (5) - NC 前面的都加了
02:39:797 (5) - 也是
02:58:997 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏大约是这样的 http://puu.sh/q938X/4b5b7d29b4.jpg 感觉可以2 3连个滑条 1/16 snap
03:18:797 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/q93e7/0e14a6ba0c.jpg 也是随便两个连成滑条?

prpr
Topic Starter
Narcissu
顏色是為了每一段都藍色開頭,我修了一下手動跳過都改了……那個節奏是為了打起來好打一點,相同的01:05:597 (2,3,4,5,1) - 也是錯的snap……不過我看了記譜應該是再來一碗他自己手彈彈偏了= =

除了1/8和一樣的形狀和kiai 的換色都改了

thx mod ><
Ikaros
Just a random mod passing by.

Can't really say much to Easy/Normal but i'll try.


  • Easy

    01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.
    01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

  • Normal

    01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.
    03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO.

  • Camellia

    00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
    00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
    02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?).
    03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.
    03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c
    03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.
Hope it was helpful. If not, i'll stop modding forever. Camellia was really fun to play. :D
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Ikaros wrote:

Just a random mod passing by.

Can't really say much to Easy/Normal but i'll try.


  • Easy

    01:28:997 (1) - Maybe change to shorter slider + 1 circle. Looks better IMO.……i think skip some paino better …… if not it's have 1/1 * ∞ ……
    01:50:597 (3) - Same, but not as necessary.

  • Normal

    01:16:997 (1) - Piano plays right in the middle. Sounds weird.……same as easy diff
    03:16:997 (1) - Red slider point feels somewhat misplaced. Straight or curved slider would suit better IMO. …… ok

  • Camellia

    00:28:997 (1,2) - These 2 should look the same. First one with red slider point doesn't really fit.
    00:58:396 (3,4) - You did it here tho, lol.
    02:50:147 (2,3,4) - The triple kinda feels forced. Consider replacing it(?). …… deleted
    03:18:797 (3,4,5) - Make triple into double? Piano seems to be playing that.……paino is triple ?
    03:21:197 (1,2,3,4) - Making these jumps more like a cross would increase readability. I'm saying this 'cause these broke my sightread FC (fml) :c……cross a bit …… hard to layout
    03:55:397 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders seem unfitting. Might just be me tho.……
Hope it was helpful. If not, i'll stop modding forever. Camellia was really fun to play. :D
it's useful …… thx mod :D
Leiwa
[Cammelia]
01:14:297 (4,5) - Add NC on (4)? really hard to read
01:33:497 (4,5) - ^
01:42:797 (5,6) - ^

02:01:397 (1) - ctrl+G?

03:51:197 (3,4) -
I prefer this

[normal]

02:19:997 (2) - use (1) again?

03:26:597 (1) - put 115,208 stackstackstack
03:39:497 (4) - put 318,79 ^

[Easy]
02:09:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern looks too hard for easy diff because its shape angle.
How about this.
120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

nice map
good luck :)
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Urushi38 wrote:

[Cammelia]
01:14:297 (4,5) - Add NC on (4)? really hard to read
01:33:497 (4,5) - ^
01:42:797 (5,6) - ^

02:01:397 (1) - ctrl+G? …… look like same ……

03:51:197 (3,4) - …… all good follow a bit ordinary ……
I prefer this

[normal]

02:19:997 (2) - use (1) again?

03:26:597 (1) - put 115,208 stackstackstack
03:39:497 (4) - put 318,79 ^

[Easy]
02:09:797 (3,4,5,6,1) - This pattern looks too hard for easy diff because its shape angle.
How about this. …… i use it many times and other part hard than it' …… i think it's ok
120,48,129797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,143,130397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,165,130997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,84,131597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
350,31,132197,2,0,P|393:29|438:46,1,80

nice map
good luck :)
no replay = fix
thx mod ;w;
AhrixAhri
Camellia was really fun to sight read thanks for the awesome map!
Topic Starter
Narcissu
i'm happy if you like it xd
Zero__wind
NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
关掉两个mania diff的widescreen support
00:45:797 - 个人感觉这里开始的一段kiai没必要加 它和后面两个相同旋律的kiai段的强弱还是有一定差异 感觉这里并不算是高潮部分
3分半的图 Easy Normal都不给个break……其实是不太好的……也太勤劳

Easy
HP2? Easy用3感觉有点高
00:40:397 (5) - 故意没whistle的吗?因为我看你前面全部都加了 这里突然没有
01:09:797 (1,2) - 好像blanket不太好
01:14:597 (1) - 头上音效美丽
01:33:797 (1) - 掉了whistle
02:02:597 (1) - 这不finish的?
02:10:997 (5,6) - 都不加whistle吗 如果是觉得这里音乐变弱了我觉得可以只有6留空,5的那个钢琴音还是挺强的我觉得 可以whistle一下
02:30:797 (6) - 音效美丽
02:36:197 (1) - 鉴于你从这个滑条的尾巴上就开始改用clap了 所以考虑在02:36:197 (1,2) - 的头上都用normal sample?

Normal
01:07:397 (1) - 头上漏了whistle?因为我看你把sampleset都改成soft了但是什么都没加……
01:26:597 (1) - ^ 这里也没有 是因为音调低?
01:37:097 (2) - 挪到(472,152)会比较自然?
02:10:997 (3,4) - 嘛 这里和Easy的音效不太一样
02:28:997 (1) - 算不上是问题 或许和后面的2一样 用直滑条?
02:36:197 (1,3) - 和Easy一样, 加normal?

Camellia
00:34:097 (2,2) - 去掉whistle?感觉比一律都给加上表现力更强一些 像00:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - 这种强弱有区分的就挺好
00:42:347 (2,6) - 从前后的排版风格看来 我以为你会倾向于避免这种不完全的overlap
00:58:997 (1) - 不知道是不是有意的反正这个滑条看起来比别的1/2都要弯不少似的 看着有点不合群
01:16:097 (2,4) - 这两拍应该是不要whistle的吧……和前面相似的地方对比一下的话 比如01:06:197 (1,2) -
01:20:747 (2,4) - 这两拍没有whistle又觉得很奇怪 前面类似的地方都是全部都加了的 而且这两个钢琴音调很高呀 如果真要选择在01:20:597 (1,2,3,4) - 这种梗不全部whistle的话我觉得1和3不加2和4加会更合曲一些
01:23:597 (5,6) - 这里节奏突然慢下来 建议在5的地方加NC 类似01:42:797 (1) -
02:50:147 (2,3) - 我觉得像这里 2和3的尾巴上就可以不要whistle呀 和02:45:197 (3,4) - 差不多吧
03:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我打的时候觉得这里如果是个间距递增类型的梗会更爽 比较符合上升音阶的感觉吧
03:48:047 (8) - 感觉这种没什么音的可以把whistle去掉
03:50:447 (8,1) - blanket不太好的样子

就这些了
good luck
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Zero__wind wrote:

NM from my queue

Red: unrankable issues
Purple: highly recommend to fix

General
关掉两个mania diff的widescreen support …… 這個我等等gder
00:45:797 - 个人感觉这里开始的一段kiai没必要加 它和后面两个相同旋律的kiai段的强弱还是有一定差异 感觉这里并不算是高潮部分……一二段是完全一樣的 = =
3分半的图 Easy Normal都不给个break……其实是不太好的……也太勤劳

Easy
HP2? Easy用3感觉有点高
00:40:397 (5) - 故意没whistle的吗?因为我看你前面全部都加了 这里突然没有……這裡是因為……複製最高難度的但是重音在藍線上面所以就沒了……加了個
01:09:797 (1,2) - 好像blanket不太好
01:14:597 (1) - 头上音效美丽……這裡是因為……漏了
01:33:797 (1) - 掉了whistle
02:02:597 (1) - 这不finish的?
02:10:997 (5,6) - 都不加whistle吗 如果是觉得这里音乐变弱了我觉得可以只有6留空,5的那个钢琴音还是挺强的我觉得 可以whistle一下
02:30:797 (6) - 音效美丽
02:36:197 (1) - 鉴于你从这个滑条的尾巴上就开始改用clap了 所以考虑在02:36:197 (1,2) - 的头上都用normal sample?

Normal
01:07:397 (1) - 头上漏了whistle?因为我看你把sampleset都改成soft了但是什么都没加……是的
01:26:597 (1) - ^ 这里也没有 是因为音调低?
01:37:097 (2) - 挪到(472,152)会比较自然?……我覺得很挫……
02:10:997 (3,4) - 嘛 这里和Easy的音效不太一样
02:28:997 (1) - 算不上是问题 或许和后面的2一样 用直滑条?
02:36:197 (1,3) - 和Easy一样, 加normal?

Camellia
00:34:097 (2,2) - 去掉whistle?感觉比一律都给加上表现力更强一些 像00:30:197 (1,2,3,4) - 这种强弱有区分的就挺好 …… 這裡應該都是一樣的,我基本是……右手部分都加whistle
00:42:347 (2,6) - 从前后的排版风格看来 我以为你会倾向于避免这种不完全的overlap …… 我也覺得 = =
00:58:997 (1) - 不知道是不是有意的反正这个滑条看起来比别的1/2都要弯不少似的 看着有点不合群
01:16:097 (2,4) - 这两拍应该是不要whistle的吧……和前面相似的地方对比一下的话 比如01:06:197 (1,2) -
01:20:747 (2,4) - 这两拍没有whistle又觉得很奇怪 前面类似的地方都是全部都加了的 而且这两个钢琴音调很高呀 如果真要选择在01:20:597 (1,2,3,4) - 这种梗不全部whistle的话我觉得1和3不加2和4加会更合曲一些
01:23:597 (5,6) - 这里节奏突然慢下来 建议在5的地方加NC 类似01:42:797 (1) - ……這個也是……不知為何漏了
02:50:147 (2,3) - 我觉得像这里 2和3的尾巴上就可以不要whistle呀 和02:45:197 (3,4) - 差不多吧
03:16:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我打的时候觉得这里如果是个间距递增类型的梗会更爽 比较符合上升音阶的感觉吧……有點麻煩,我想想
03:48:047 (8) - 感觉这种没什么音的可以把whistle去掉
03:50:447 (8,1) - blanket不太好的样子

就这些了
good luck
no replay = fixxxxx

thx very much :)
Colourful
不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图()
玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Colourful wrote:

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图()
玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。
感覺空超過1/2會有點影響連貫……而且這邊是有個音的Orz,其他類似01:04:697 (2) - 都有加圈不過低難度沒有
Maxus
Hello Narcissu and star :D
Mod for mania mode here :3

[CS'Normal]
01:03:197 - add note here? you also add for crash at 02:00:797 -
01:05:747 (65747|3,65897|2,66047|1) - wrong snapped? i'm quite sure this is 1/12 below.. at 01:05:697 - 01:05:847 - 01:05:997 - i'm not really sure if the simplification is allowed here.
01:21:797 - Just my thinking a bit, but this is maybe a bit too taxing for left hand bcause of 01:19:997 (79997|0,79997|1,80597|1,80897|0,81797|0,82097|1,82397|0) - , maybe you could make it like: http://puu.sh/qlR7Y/3a817a08f1.png
02:10:397 (130397|1,130697|2,130997|3) - Ctrl+H here? for the pitch and better flow
02:14:897 - http://puu.sh/qlRWm/2c4077fb60.png well my suggestion, it should give more variation and flow here.
02:25:697 (145697|1,146297|2) - Ctrl+G this? to avoid a bit of 02:25:097 (145097|1,145397|0,145697|1,145997|0) -
02:29:597 (149597|2,149897|3) - also Ctrl+G D:
03:38:147 - don't ignore this D:
03:40:697 - hmm is this intentionally ignored to follow piano?
03:49:847 (229847|2,229997|1,230147|0) - well, i know you want to make constant stair here, but i think you can make this col 1-3-2 here. a bit mirroring 03:49:397 (229397|2,229547|1,229697|3) - ,should be flow better :3

[CS' Hard]
00:33:797 (33797|0,34097|0) - don't jack will be better bcause of pitch here, try: http://puu.sh/qlT0a/bd76fe59ea.png
00:44:897 (44897|2,45197|2,45497|2,46097|2,46397|2,46997|2,47297|2,47597|2) - aaaa please avoid ;w;
01:02:147 - i feel there's still sound of second piano sound that you follow here, connect the pattern maybe?
01:03:647 (63647|2,63797|3) - you can jack this since the secondary piano here actually same pitch.
01:24:947 (84947|2,85097|0,85247|1) - I'm quite sure you follow piano here right? if then, the snap must be at 1/6 below, mainly at 01:24:897 - 01:25:047 - 01:25:197 - (the current snap wrong i think)
02:10:547 - i think this can be change a bit so this won't be too left handed, bcause there's already 02:09:197 (129197|0,129197|1,129497|0,129497|1,129797|1,129797|0) - to begin with, how about try: http://puu.sh/qlYS8/a7625f55d4.png
02:14:147 (134147|1) - move to 1 here?
02:19:397 (139397|0) - you can turn this to LN imo,you did the same to 02:21:497 (141497|3) - , try: http://puu.sh/qlYYk/526583523c.png
03:48:197 (228197|1) - move to 4 here, i feel empty on right column here.
03:57:797 - awww this is the one that buttseck my 100% acc so hard D: maybe you can try this? http://puu.sh/qlZpD/e395fa2

Well, Nice song nice map here :D , great job
Good luck :3
Critical_Star

DixonBlackwing wrote:

Hello Narcissu and star :D
Mod for mania mode here :3

[CS'Normal]
01:03:197 - add note here? you also add for crash at 02:00:797 -
01:05:747 (65747|3,65897|2,66047|1) - wrong snapped? i'm quite sure this is 1/12 below.. at 01:05:697 - 01:05:847 - 01:05:997 - i'm not really sure if the simplification is allowed here.
01:21:797 - Just my thinking a bit, but this is maybe a bit too taxing for left hand bcause of 01:19:997 (79997|0,79997|1,80597|1,80897|0,81797|0,82097|1,82397|0) - , maybe you could make it like: http://puu.sh/qlR7Y/3a817a08f1.png
02:10:397 (130397|1,130697|2,130997|3) - Ctrl+H here? for the pitch and better flow
02:14:897 - http://puu.sh/qlRWm/2c4077fb60.png well my suggestion, it should give more variation and flow here. i think is fine here
02:25:697 (145697|1,146297|2) - Ctrl+G this? to avoid a bit of 02:25:097 (145097|1,145397|0,145697|1,145997|0) -
02:29:597 (149597|2,149897|3) - also Ctrl+G D: it flow nicely here, i think is fine
03:38:147 - don't ignore this D:
03:40:697 - hmm is this intentionally ignored to follow piano?
03:49:847 (229847|2,229997|1,230147|0) - well, i know you want to make constant stair here, but i think you can make this col 1-3-2 here. a bit mirroring 03:49:397 (229397|2,229547|1,229697|3) - ,should be flow better :3

[CS' Hard]
00:33:797 (33797|0,34097|0) - don't jack will be better bcause of pitch here, try: http://puu.sh/qlT0a/bd76fe59ea.png
00:44:897 (44897|2,45197|2,45497|2,46097|2,46397|2,46997|2,47297|2,47597|2) - aaaa please avoid ;w; it should'nt be a problem here since it flow nicely with the sound variation
01:02:147 - i feel there's still sound of second piano sound that you follow here, connect the pattern maybe? not really clear there so i guess can ignore that
01:03:647 (63647|2,63797|3) - you can jack this since the secondary piano here actually same pitch. hmm, i don;t think is the same ;w;
01:24:947 (84947|2,85097|0,85247|1) - I'm quite sure you follow piano here right? if then, the snap must be at 1/6 below, mainly at 01:24:897 - 01:25:047 - 01:25:197 - (the current snap wrong i think)
02:10:547 - i think this can be change a bit so this won't be too left handed, bcause there's already 02:09:197 (129197|0,129197|1,129497|0,129497|1,129797|1,129797|0) - to begin with, how about try: http://puu.sh/qlYS8/a7625f55d4.png
02:14:147 (134147|1) - move to 1 here?
02:19:397 (139397|0) - you can turn this to LN imo,you did the same to 02:21:497 (141497|3) - , try: http://puu.sh/qlYYk/526583523c.png
03:48:197 (228197|1) - move to 4 here, i feel empty on right column here.
03:57:797 - awww this is the one that buttseck my 100% acc so hard D: maybe you can try this? http://puu.sh/qlZpD/e395fa2 rip puush

Well, Nice song nice map here :D , great job thanks! ;) nice mod!
Good luck :3
no reply = fixed :)
Mint
我还不知道little的gd会怎么样,如果我自己的gd太难的话,我就会把有的1/4去掉.

can i copy your hitsounds =w=??
Topic Starter
Narcissu
我覺得只會太簡單lol

因為之後更新了mp3和音效文件,我幫你改了timing(雖然我不是很確定)和tag(我一開始寫了moe little moe)也按照我的難度加了音效,總之更新一下 :)

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應該是……我不知道little的gd会怎么样……
Adol Christin
不请自来,争取明后两天内摸掉迟到了两天。。。
一晚上上来连续刚了3pc的Camellia,3pc全部fail在了3分20秒后某处,手已经爆炸了。。。

General

  1. 蛋疼的钢琴曲timing: 00:33:797 - 到00:35:897 - 之间,感觉弹得有点随机,导致物件跟音乐偏差有点多。可以的话最好timing下,加点红线,免得被挑刺

Camellia

  1. 00:48:197 (1,2) - 这里,我没有在音乐中给这个大间距找到个合适的理由,感觉有些随机。这样放你意下如何?
  2. 00:56:597 (1) - 把这个折返,往下移动大约25个单位。这样在视觉的间距上显得更统一。
  3. 01:17:597 (2) - 我个人倾向这样的形状。这样跟前面的联系更紧密,跟后面的物件更疏离,感觉跟音乐更搭。
  4. 01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样改改吧。现在这个感觉5突然缩小了间距,有点一卡一卡的。
  5. 03:08:897 (2) - 你觉得把这个ctrl+g,然后略微上移怎么样?钢琴连续三个相同的音,用相同方向的滑条来强调,最后一个较高的音一反向,挺有意思的。
  6. 03:09:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 一样,感觉4,5太近,有些卡。

Nightcore看起来似乎是一样的,就懒得细看了。

appleeaterx

直到开始摸你的图,我才发现你的id是吃苹果的人。之前一直以为它是个生造的词语,或者是古语什么的。连字典都查不到。。。
  1. Consider raising the AR to 7.5-8. The distance in the last kiai is quite special, which is really, really tricky in AR7.
  2. 00:45:797 (1) - i feel it's not a good idea to follow the light piano sound in the main melody. (actually u didn't do that in the other sections) Change this into a 1/2 one. 00:50:597 (1) - the same
  3. 02:57:797 (1,2,3) - how about this? the current reverse has more than 1 turning point in a high-density area, which is really hard for newbies imo. also i rearrange the flow (especially 4,5,6), to make it more smooth.
  4. 03:25:697 (6,7) - 03:24:797 (3,4,5) - same distance for different rhythm without any hint. which is quite weird in this AR imo.

E和N不摸。这首似乎已经做了好久了。每次上线来看到水仙上线,基本都在搞这个。早日起飞咯。
sahuang

Colourful wrote:

不请自来。。只是看看水仙姥爷最近在做什么新图()
玩下来感觉00:55:097 (2) 这个note有点多余。。
ren?????????
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Adol Christin wrote:

不请自来,争取明后两天内摸掉迟到了两天。。。
一晚上上来连续刚了3pc的Camellia,3pc全部fail在了3分20秒后某处,手已经爆炸了。。。

General

  1. 蛋疼的钢琴曲timing: 00:33:797 - 到00:35:897 - 之间,感觉弹得有点随机,导致物件跟音乐偏差有点多。可以的话最好timing下,加点红线,免得被挑刺……這個我想了挺久還是覺得單紅打圖最單純……因為這個都是某一個音差很大不是那種均勻的= =

Camellia

  1. 00:48:197 (1,2) - 这里,我没有在音乐中给这个大间距找到个合适的理由,感觉有些随机。这样放你意下如何?……這樣後面的距離都一樣看上去……舒服點
  2. 00:56:597 (1) - 把这个折返,往下移动大约25个单位。这样在视觉的间距上显得更统一。
  3. 01:17:597 (2) - 我个人倾向这样的形状。这样跟前面的联系更紧密,跟后面的物件更疏离,感觉跟音乐更搭。……不不不包起來好看 :roll:
  4. 01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样改改吧。现在这个感觉5突然缩小了间距,有点一卡一卡的。
  5. 03:08:897 (2) - 你觉得把这个ctrl+g,然后略微上移怎么样?钢琴连续三个相同的音,用相同方向的滑条来强调,最后一个较高的音一反向,挺有意思的。
  6. 03:09:797 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟01:40:997 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 一样,感觉4,5太近,有些卡。

Nightcore看起来似乎是一样的,就懒得细看了。
大距離單點再接大距離滑條就很難了……現在雖然卡手但是難度都在其他大跳之下所以就這樣了

no reply = fix
Frostmourne
Gorgeous Camellia diff ToT

starred
Satellite
really great mapset

easy
02:43:397 (3) - do not ovelap more better http://puu.sh/qzER8/de89c65ffb.jpg
03:12:197 (5) - 1/1 spaming circle is danger so add nc for hpdrain.
03:48:197 (5) - same as above

apple's hard
00:35:597 (5) - looks fine. but i like 1/2 slider + circle pattern!
00:50:597 (1) - should be changed 1/2 slider because on ur pattern about 01:48:197 (1) -
01:04:397 (6) - same as 00:35:597 (5) -
01:07:997 (3) - changed 3/4 slider ? 1/2 slider is not bad. but i want to follow melody.
02:11:297 (4,5) - changed 1/1 slider more better good rhythm imo.
02:43:097 (7) - changed 1/4 slider ? on you are pattern about 02:47:897 (7,7,7) -
awesome awesome

Little's insane
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - big fun <3

camellia
03:12:796 (3) - unsnap slider end
nothing to say ~

general
should be check combo color all diff.
Please turn off the timing points (red line) which you do not use.

overall. awesome diffspread mapset!
other difficulty looks fine to me. if you are ready call me again!
Topic Starter
Narcissu

FrostxE wrote:

Gorgeous Camellia diff ToT

starred
::>_<::

================================

@Satellite

fix akkkkkllllll

except combo color …… i want to keep bule when every kiai start like 00:45:797 - 00:55:397 - 。but i can‘t add NC every bar so i add a new color, Normal & Easy need’t add NC every bar so need't 5 combo color …… if it's not unrankable i wish keep it

will fix other diff timing after GDer reply
kanor
[little的insane]
01:51:197 (3,4) -这两个滑条感觉ctrl+G一下感觉更舒服
03:01:397 (1) - ^ 反选一下感觉flow更舒服一点
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串知道思路,但是难度会不会有点太大了呀......就整个diff来说orz 实在要摆的话最好顺时针就统一顺时针?这样顺时针一个图形逆时针又一个图形感觉难度有些脱节了......最主要的感觉还是不合曲,这段钢琴感觉是从高到低十分流畅,这里连续三次逆flow感觉还是有些违和.....
[主难度]
00:39:797 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里直接用四个滑条不好嘛?这里的节奏不是很理解.....这么下也不是不行,自己做出节奏也可以但是音效不强调的话感觉还是不如直接用曲子的节奏......
01:05:597 (2,3,4,5) - 这个弧线的弧度再大一点厚不厚呀,再弯一点感觉flow更流畅一点
没了,GL :)
Topic Starter
Narcissu
弧度小一點好看

另外的重音在藍線上面所以就換了一下,雖然其他地方沒有換
Little

Satellite wrote:

Little's insane
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - big fun <3 <3

kanor wrote:

[little的insane]
01:51:197 (3,4) -这两个滑条感觉ctrl+G一下感觉更舒服 I think the current direction is fine, but I moved (3,4,1) to make the distance more comfortable.
03:01:397 (1) - ^ 反选一下感觉flow更舒服一点 This flow is fine. It's not supposed to be smooth, because I want to put accent on (1) and (3).
03:48:497 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 这一串知道思路,但是难度会不会有点太大了呀......就整个diff来说orz 实在要摆的话最好顺时针就统一顺时针?这样顺时针一个图形逆时针又一个图形感觉难度有些脱节了......最主要的感觉还是不合曲,这段钢琴感觉是从高到低十分流畅,这里连续三次逆flow感觉还是有些违和..... I think it's important to have special pattern for this part, since it's really the climax of the music. I think that the direction changes are not that hard to play, and have proper build-up to it with the previous patterns.
Thanks.
http://f.ttle.li/y0Sj.zip
Mint

Adol Christin wrote:

直到开始摸你的图,我才发现你的id是吃苹果的人。之前一直以为它是个生造的词语,或者是古语什么的。连字典都查不到。。。
  1. Consider raising the AR to 7.5-8. The distance in the last kiai is quite special, which is really, really tricky in AR7. :arrow: raise AR to 7.3, keep spread with little's & normal diff + mostly 1/1 mapping
  2. 00:45:797 (1) - i feel it's not a good idea to follow the light piano sound in the main melody. (actually u didn't do that in the other sections) Change this into a 1/2 one. 00:50:597 (1) - the same :arrow: fixed
  3. 02:57:797 (1,2,3) - how about this? the current reverse has more than 1 turning point in a high-density area, which is really hard for newbies imo. also i rearrange the flow (especially 4,5,6), to make it more smooth. :arrow: fixced
  4. 03:25:697 (6,7) - 03:24:797 (3,4,5) - same distance for different rhythm without any hint. which is quite weird in this AR imo. :arrow: fixed
[/notice]

Satellite wrote:

apple's hard
00:35:597 (5) - looks fine. but i like 1/2 slider + circle pattern! :arrow: timing is strange here... so want to have focus on 00:36:497 (1) - instead, maybe fix in later update if timing gets fixed
00:50:597 (1) - should be changed 1/2 slider because on ur pattern about 01:48:197 (1) - :arrow: fixed
01:04:397 (6) - same as 00:35:597 (5) -
01:07:997 (3) - changed 3/4 slider ? 1/2 slider is not bad. but i want to follow melody. :arrow: fixed
02:11:297 (4,5) - changed 1/1 slider more better good rhythm imo. :arrow: i feel the clap-like sound on (5) indicates how next section is going to be, so map to prepare player :3
02:43:097 (7) - changed 1/4 slider ? on you are pattern about 02:47:897 (7,7,7) - :idea: 777 lol, fixed
awesome awesome :arrow: satellite cutie w
thanks !!

apl
osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 103247
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SampleSet: Soft
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[Editor]
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Title:Flower Dance
TitleUnicode:Flower Dance
Artist:DJ OKAWARI
ArtistUnicode:DJ OKAWARI
Creator:Narcissu
Version:apple's Hard
Source:
Tags:a cup of coffee appleeaterx little cloudsplash16 Critical_Star
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Topic Starter
Narcissu
update 111

i delete all diff red line so your need update, i'm sorry for hurry to pull you reply mod ……
ZZHBOY
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  1. 00:36:497 (36497|0) - 之前都没有跟这个低音琴00:31:697 - 00:32:297 - 所以最好统一下 都不要去跟好了
  2. 00:41:897 - 00:43:097 - 低音琴不是很明显 还是建议就跟高音的好了
  3. 01:02:597 (62597|0,63197|0) - 音高不一样 后面一个音好像低点 01:02:597 (62597|0) - 把这个移到第二栏?
  4. 01:05:747 (65747|3,66047|1) - 这两个还是去了吧 没有snap好
  5. 01:24:947 (84947|0,85247|3) - ^
  6. 01:52:097 (112097|3) - 这个删掉吧 统一在clap那里2note
  7. 01:59:297 - 01:59:747 - 这里也有类似的琴音 建议还是不要空 或者都只跟1/2就好
  8. 02:01:697 (121697|0) - 同01:52:097 (112097|3) -
  9. 02:19:997 - 02:21:197 - 我觉得从这里开始就可以在clap的地方放点2note了 和后面统一点
  10. 02:49:097 (169097|1,169397|0) - swap column for pitch?
  11. 03:04:997 - 漏了一个note?
  12. 03:34:847 (214847|1) - 这里没明显琴音 去了吧
[CS' Hard]
  1. 00:29:447 - 00:30:047 - 这两个地方我觉得1note就可以了
  2. 00:41:297 - 00:41:597 - 这些地方可以再加一个note跟下低音的琴
如果改的话类似的地方注意保持统一下 其他地方都还好

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[CS' Normal]
  1. 00:36:497 (36497|0) - 之前都没有跟这个低音琴00:31:697 - 00:32:297 - 所以最好统一下 都不要去跟好了
  2. 00:41:897 - 00:43:097 - 低音琴不是很明显 还是建议就跟高音的好了
  3. 01:02:597 (62597|0,63197|0) - 音高不一样 后面一个音好像低点 01:02:597 (62597|0) - 把这个移到第二栏?
  4. 01:05:747 (65747|3,66047|1) - 这两个还是去了吧 没有snap好 好像是1/12 snap这儿,不过其他diff都用1/4snap,我觉得没问题吧
  5. 01:24:947 (84947|0,85247|3) - ^ ^
  6. 01:52:097 (112097|3) - 这个删掉吧 统一在clap那里2note 这个给kick一个note吧,感觉少了一个kick感觉
  7. 01:59:297 - 01:59:747 - 这里也有类似的琴音 建议还是不要空 或者都只跟1/2就好 01:59:297 - 这里是kick 01:59:747 - 这里音琴不是很明显,所以不加了
  8. 02:01:697 (121697|0) - 同01:52:097 (112097|3) - ^
  9. 02:19:997 - 02:21:197 - 我觉得从这里开始就可以在clap的地方放点2note了 和后面统一点
  10. 02:49:097 (169097|1,169397|0) - swap column for pitch?
  11. 03:04:997 - 漏了一个note?
  12. 03:34:847 (214847|1) - 这里没明显琴音 去了吧 我听到啊;w;
[CS' Hard]
  1. 00:29:447 - 00:30:047 - 这两个地方我觉得1note就可以了 这是给high pitch piano 的,我觉得很适合吧
  2. 00:41:297 - 00:41:597 - 这些地方可以再加一个note跟下低音的琴这里还是不跟低音的琴吧,感觉有点乱
如果改的话类似的地方注意保持统一下 其他地方都还好

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