Hantsuki wrote:

Hallo, M4M from ur Q


[Wanderer]

1. 00:00:000 - to 00:30:970 - Audio 70% -> 60%
2. 00:58:067 (1,2) - improve blanket Okay
3. 01:00:365 (2,3,5) - improve blanket Okay
4. from 01:17:422 - Audio 70% -> 50%

_IxApplePie_ wrote:

Hihi, NM req from my WQ

General
- Setting any combo colours?

Wanderer

1. Set up the AR, it seems quite slow to me Higher Ar would seem kinda silly on low BPM
2. 00:20:809 (5,1) - improve blanket Okay
3. 00:30:970 (1,2) - why not ctrl+g these two Because?
4. 00:52:261 (1,2) - improve blanket Okay
5. 00:54:680 (3) - nicer please What do you mean?
6. 00:58:067 (1,2) - improve blanket yes
7. 01:00:486 (3,5) - ^ yes

Hard

1. 00:45:970 - note? Okay
   

Norm

1. 00:41:615 (2) - curve it nicer Okay
2. same as Hard?
3. 01:05:809 (1) - red points put a little more to the center *optional Okay

Overall it's nice to play
Good luck ranking it~!

1. I think you can add Monstercat Release and progressive to the tags.
2. Modding assistant says that there's unsnapped timing lines in Easy and Normal.
   00:30:970 - here, 00:38:712 - here and 00:46:454 - here.

1. 00:17:422 (3) - I honestly don't like this slider's form. But idk how to make same blanket pattern with other shape, so I suggest this
   
   o3o

   
2. 00:32:906 (3,1,2) - aesthetically looks not this good as possible, make this curve up 00:34:841 (1) - . Or just place it straight horizontal.

1. 00:54:196 (1,2) - this pattern looks really inconsistent, you used this only once. Make 1/1 slider instead as you did here 01:09:680 (1,2,3) - .
2. 00:21:777 (2,3) - I really don't like this flow, maybe lower this slider's tail 00:22:502 (3) - .
   Something like that instead of 00:22:502 (3,1) - .
   
   owo

   
3. 00:30:970 (1,2) - compares to those 00:37:744 (2,3) - / 00:46:454 (1,2) - /00:53:228 (3,4) - and others, you should make those 00:30:970 (1,2) - similar.
   Great diff!

1. 00:49:841 (4) - maybe make it a bit curve?
2. 00:52:744 - seems like something is missing here.
3. 01:06:777 (3) - and 01:14:519 (3) - replace those with circles, now explanation:
   As I can hear 01:06:777 - and 01:07:019 - are too strong, stronger than 01:03:390 (4) - and 01:11:132 (4) - , so they should be emphasized.
4. 01:18:873 (5) - this way
   
   õwõ

   

1. 00:45:970 (1) - NC for the sake of emphasizing.
2. 01:07:744 (1,2,3) - this may be very sudden, because there's no such 1/4 patterns starting from here 00:46:454 - .
   Maybe stack the circle with 01:08:228 (3) - .

Namki wrote:

[Euny's Easy]

1. 00:17:422 (3) - I honestly don't like this slider's form. But idk how to make same blanket pattern with other shape, so I suggest this
   
   o3o

   
2. 00:32:906 (3,1,2) - aesthetically looks not this good as possible, make this curve up 00:34:841 (1) - . Or just place it straight horizontal.

Namki wrote:

Yo. Why is it cut ver? Full version is great as well.
[General]

1. I think you can add Monstercat Release and progressive to the tags.
2. Modding assistant says that there's unsnapped timing lines in Easy and Normal.
   00:30:970 - here, 00:38:712 - here and 00:46:454 - here.

[Normal]

1. 00:54:196 (1,2) - this pattern looks really inconsistent, you used this only once. Make 1/1 slider instead as you did here 01:09:680 (1,2,3) - . Okay
2. 00:21:777 (2,3) - I really don't like this flow, maybe lower this slider's tail 00:22:502 (3) - .
   Something like that instead of 00:22:502 (3,1) - . I like mine more, but thanks~
   
   owo

   
3. 00:30:970 (1,2) - compares to those 00:37:744 (2,3) - / 00:46:454 (1,2) - /00:53:228 (3,4) - and others, you should make those 00:30:970 (1,2) - similar. I dont think thats an actual issue
   Great diff! Thanks owo

[Hard]

1. 00:49:841 (4) - maybe make it a bit curve? I want it to be parallel with the slider before~
2. 00:52:744 - seems like something is missing here. Fixed
3. 01:06:777 (3) - and 01:14:519 (3) - replace those with circles, now explanation:
   As I can hear 01:06:777 - and 01:07:019 - are too strong, stronger than 01:03:390 (4) - and 01:11:132 (4) - , so they should be emphasized. You're right, but this is a Hard, not an Insane, its fine the way it is.
4. 01:18:873 (5) - this way Okay
   
   õwõ

   

[Insane]

1. 00:45:970 (1) - NC for the sake of emphasizing. Okay
2. 01:07:744 (1,2,3) - this may be very sudden, because there's no such 1/4 patterns starting from here 00:46:454 - .
   Maybe stack the circle with 01:08:228 (3) - . But it fits with the song

good luck, great mapset.

1. I think it is ready for ranking!

1. 00:19:357 (1) - I think this slider can be reduced to a bit of white. Or even replace it with two notes on the white bits.
2. 00:27:099 (1) - ^
3. 00:40:648 (1) - This slider is necessary to make it shorter. 00:41:373 (2) - Insert a note here. 00:42:583 (5) - And here. Or add a slider here. Like this:
   
4. 00:45:970 (1) - I think the end of the spinner should be here.
5. 00:48:390 (1) - I think that's better.
6. 00:56:132 (1) - ^
7. 01:19:357 (1,2,3) - It sounds a lot better.

1. 00:16:454 (6,7,8) - Stack them. More readable.
2. 00:37:744 (2) - I think to replace it with a slider and note. Or 2 sliders.
3. 01:08:712 (2) - ^
4. 00:42:583 (6) - Place a note here.
5. 00:48:390 (1) - You made it so that the notes do not sound.
6. 00:56:132 (1) - ^
7. 01:03:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - It sounds better.
8. 01:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
   
   Overlaps

   00:19:841 (2,1) -
   00:28:067 (3,2) -
   01:00:486 (2,4) -
   01:07:261 (4,2) -
   And perhaps more of them. reconsider itself.

1. 01:19:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds overmapped. That's better.
2. There are a lot of overlaps. reconsider map.
3. So little, because I can not play low bpm maps.

EvGem wrote:

M4M For what Map?
[Easy]

1. I think it is ready for ranking!

[Normal]

1. 00:19:357 (1) - I think this slider can be reduced to a bit of white. Or even replace it with two notes on the white bits. Okay
2. 00:27:099 (1) - ^ Okay
3. 00:40:648 (1) - This slider is necessary to make it shorter. 00:41:373 (2) - Insert a note here. 00:42:583 (5) - And here. Or add a slider here. Like this: Okay
   
4. 00:45:970 (1) - I think the end of the spinner should be here. I like mine more
5. 00:48:390 (1) - I think that's better. I'll fix it if more will point it out
6. 00:56:132 (1) - ^
7. 01:19:357 (1,2,3) - It sounds a lot better. Okay

[Hard]

1. 00:16:454 (6,7,8) - Stack them. More readable. I think its easy enough to read
2. 00:37:744 (2) - I think to replace it with a slider and note. Or 2 sliders. Why?
3. 01:08:712 (2) - ^
4. 00:42:583 (6) - Place a note here. Okay
5. 00:48:390 (1) - You made it so that the notes do not sound. Since I dont want to spam a Hard with 3/4
6. 00:56:132 (1) - ^
7. 01:03:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - It sounds better. I like mine more
8. 01:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
   
   Overlaps

   00:19:841 (2,1) -
   00:28:067 (3,2) -
   01:00:486 (2,4) -
   01:07:261 (4,2) -
   And perhaps more of them. reconsider itself. They are not noticeable anyway

[Wanderer]

1. 01:19:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds overmapped. That's better. It doesnt imo
2. There are a lot of overlaps. reconsider map. There are not, if there are , they are good.
3. So little, because I can not play low bpm maps.

Good luck!

Stjpa wrote:

[General]

1. Your metadata is incorrect. On SC the title is 'Nevada feat. Cozi Zuehlsdorff'. To make sure, you also have to add the ' and not only delete ( ). Yes it looks ugly, but I can't change that. I'll talk about this with you ingame
2. Do you mind to mirror the image so the girl is actually on the left side? Obviously not a problem, but it's boring if you only see a blurred image in the song selection instead of a cute little grill. Nice Idea wow

[Euny's Easy]

1. 00:32:906 (3) - Maybe add a whistle on the repeat and slidertail? The sound there isn't any different than the ones you mapped every object to. So it's missing some emphasis. Same goes for 00:40:648 (3) - even tho you used a whistle on the tail. Yes!
2. 00:43:551 (2,3,4) - Just a suggestion: maybe add additional green lines with lower volumes to make it fit the fade out in the music? The sliderslides are way too noticable here imo. I dont think thats a problem, I dont want this to be the only diff with lower volume.

[Normal]

1. 00:20:809 (4) - Maybe only use a circle here instead of a 1/1 slider that ends on a strong beat that deserveres a clickable object? That would also destroy the annoying 1/2 chain you usually don't have. Same goes for 00:20:809 (4) . You can also use a 1/2 slider if you really wanna emphasize this part, but please get rid of the tail on the downbeat. :v Alright!
2. 00:21:777 (2) - Kinda a similar issue. The sliderhead doesn't really give good feedback while the slidertail does. And since the sliderhead of (3) has a similar sound itself both should be clickable imo. Okay
3. 00:42:583 (1) - Add a green line at the end of the spinner with a fitting volume to the music? Okay
4. 00:48:390 (1,2) - This rhythm is really bad because you kinda switch the rhythm you mapped to, and even that was done wrong (probably sounds rude, sorry if so lol) because the main sounds are on blue ticks. Maybe use this rhythm instead? Ofc 3/4 pattern are hard for this kind of skill level, but the music is extremely good to understand what rhythm you are going to use and you also have a slider on the blue tick then which makes it really forgiving as well. Same goes for similar parts. Fixed them

[Hard]

1. Mind lowering the HP a bit? 6 looks really unforgiving to me. 0.5 would be enough I suppose. Okay
2. 00:37:744 (2) - Is there a specific reason you use this rhythm over two 1/2 sliders? Because it fits pretty good with the music. I can of course fix it if it bothers you too much of course
3. 01:04:599 (3,4,5) - I liked the rhythm you used before a lot more tbh. You have the strongest sound on the repeat of the slider which is really weird. Youre right, fixed them all

Wanderer looked fine, but I'd like to do the final check via IRC if possible.

Ayyri wrote:

Nice song and nice map.

1. AR of Easy should definitely be set to 3, kinda forgot about the spread when I suggested AR5 for Normal because of all the 1/2 pattern and especially the spinner, my bad
2. Euny isn't in the tags, don't forget to add her!
3. I asked KwaN about the metadata, I hope I will get an answer by tomorrow. I'll send you the proof of what should be used then @Ascendance.

Ascendance wrote:

Yo. A return for our M4M!

[General]

1. Difficulty Spread : The AR is kind of weird spread to me. Currently it's 2/5/7/8.2, maybe you could try AR 3 on the Easy? Okay
2. Background Size : Good
3. Unsnapped objects : Fine
4. Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : ]Good
5. Metadata Issues : Could you provide the source to me? Yes. I used the title from the Monstercat release Click since that is the official release of the track, and promoters will promote the song under that title. Thats why I prefer to use the one from Monstercat since it is the official release.
6. Timeline Issues : In the Easy and the Normal, the following timing lines are unsnapped. Please resnap them!
   - 00:30:975 - Fixed them all
   - 00:38:717 -
   - 00:46:459 -
7. Combo Colors : The really bright orange is kind of weird thematically but otherwise fine.
8. Unused hitsounds : Good!
9. Hitsounds Issues : Nice
10. Inaudible hitsounds : None!

[ Euny's Easy]

General

1. 01:01:938 (1,2,3) - Not a big fan of the flow here. Try maybe something like this? Okay
2. 01:06:777 (3,4) - Curve more for aesthetic purpose? Okay

[ Normal]

General

1. 00:19:357 (1) - super picky but I think that the curve can be improved Okay
2. 00:29:035 (1,2) - I think you can ctrl+g these rhythms, the extended slider here works much better with the rest of the vocals, placing more emphasis on the closing of "going" with the 1/2 slider. You think so? I think that the current one fits more since I've used a triplet there in Insane and a 1/2 Slider in Hard. So I really wanna keep a 1/2 Slider here aswell. I hope that it is not that big of a problem
3. 00:33:873 (3) - I'd consider shortening this to 1/1 and adding a circle at 00:34:599 - ? Okay
4. 00:54:196 (1,2) - Imo you're missing some important 1/2 rhythm here where you've previously emphasized it. I'd change this to the two 1/2 sliders also! I dont think thats necessary, and too much 1/2 Sliders in a row might not be a good idea for the spread

[ Hard]

General

1. 00:15:970 (3,4,5) - I dunno about leading off a hard with a triplet. Maybe for some variance (and some ease earlier on) you could change this to a repeat slider triplet? Okay
2. 01:00:486 (2,4) - idk weird overlap, maybe blanket these two instead? Stacked them
3. 01:04:357 (2,3,4) - Dunno how I feel about this flow. It seems like it's trying a bit too hard to be linear, but it doesn't look that nice in the process. Why not try this? Okay
4. 01:07:261 (4,2) - OCD overlap That overlap is not noticeable at all when you play the map, so its not a problem.

[ Wanderer]

General

1. 00:22:019 (3,1,2,3) - Kind of awkward flow imo. I'd ctrl+g the positions of 00:22:261 (1,2) - (except move 1 farther out to the right) to farther emphasize the sounds between 00:22:502 (2,3) - . Okay!

Uhh that's really it I guess. Nice set, you can call me back!