Hi!
M4M from my queue ~
Some clarifications:
Good luck!
M4M from my queue ~
Some clarifications:
- k = kat d = don K = big kat D = big don
- It's just suggestions/corrections, don't take it badly. You are free to accept them or not.
- If you accept my suggestions/corrections, apply also in similar parts for consistency
- If you don't accept my suggestions/corrections, clarify why you do not accept them.
[ General ]
- 01:16:484 (1) - Fix the spinner end, I suggest end in 01:18:101 - or 01:18:024 -
- It's optional, but you can make other diff beetwen Oni-Inner Oni to create a better spread
[ Kantan ]
- 00:11:640 (3,12) - You could remove those notes, there aren't a melody as to add a note. Is better if you follow the melody like 00:14:367 (8) -, is more noticeable and easy to play.
- 00:35:367 (16,16) - Change to kat, the pitch is similar than 00:33:185 (11) -
- 01:04:276 (37,39) - I think remove those notes, is some similar than you make in the beginning. Those notes can be confuse by the BPM changes
- 01:23:746 (12) - Change to don, the pitch is more low than 01:19:383 (3) -
- 01:32:201 (8) - Same as above
[ Futsuu ]
- 00:13:822 (17) - Change to don, the pitch is low as to set it in kat
- 00:15:458 (22) - Delete to make consistency with 00:11:095 -
- 00:18:185 (31) - Same as 00:13:822 (17) -
- 00:32:640 - 00:36:185 - Is some repetitive the patterns, I think you could vary a bit those.
- 00:58:276 (14) - Change to kat? Make consistency with 01:02:640 (22) -
[ Muzukashii ]
- 00:14:504 (32) - Change to kat? I think the pitch is more high than 00:12:322 -
- 00:12:322 - Change to kat if you accept above
- 00:40:413 (160) - Delete? Keep consistency with 00:31:685 -
- 01:02:367 (30,31) - Ctrl + G to consistency with 00:58:004 (18,19) - , have similar pitch
- 01:36:155 (45,51) - Delete those. To improve the gap with futsuu
[ Oni ]
- 00:11:231 (16) - Change to don? I think the pitch is low, like 00:15:595 (44) -
- 00:17:640 (57) - Change to don, same pitch than 00:15:458 (43) -
- 00:25:822 (113) - Change to kat? The pitch is more high than 00:24:731 (106) -
- 00:39:185 (210) - Remove finisher, it don't have a crash cymbal like 00:34:822 -
- 00:44:095 (4) - Add finisher? I listen a crash cymbal like 00:43:549 (244,9) -
- 01:08:290 (57) - Add finisher, a noticeable crash cymbal
[ Inner Oni ]
That's all, really good mapset. Take my stars~- 01:31:383 (33) - High pitch, would be kat
Too good for me~
Good luck!