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MARK FOR ET FOR ET AND ET IS ET SO I WILL ET THIS ET SOON ET
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Starry-

Fresh Chicken wrote:

MARK FOR ET FOR ET AND ET IS ET SO I WILL ET THIS ET SOON ET
You're so ET that you can't stop saying ET lmao
but thanks Chicken <3
Critical_Star
nyahalo Starru~

column 1 2 3 4

Normal
00:41:280 - 00:41:443 - actually u can have a note for kick here too, it doesn't really feel hard at all for normal diff. would suggest to add it since the kick are really obvious here


Another
00:47:524 - maybe add a note here like 00:47:686 (47686|2) - can't really see is there any difference of sound between them yea
00:50:037 (50037|2,50037|1,50037|3,50199|0,50199|1,50361|0,50361|3) - not sure if u intention only add a note at blue tick for some certain places, but i think all these part sound the same, maybe u should add a note at these blue tick line here too for consistency
00:52:632 (52632|2,52632|0,52632|1,52794|3,52794|2,52956|1,52956|0,52956|3) - like before if u agree ^
00:44:848 (44848|0,44848|3,44848|1,45010|2,45010|1,45172|2,45172|0) - ^


White Another
00:45:091 - 00:50:280 - should have a note something like 00:47:686 (47686|3) -
01:02:767 - how about add a note here to make a full stream? there is 1/4 sound here too, and i think is nice instead of a break here
01:23:686 (83686|0,83686|1) - i think single note is fine here, might as well to differentiate this sound with those double kick sound

no kud if it doesn't help
can't really find any issue here xD overall was really nice~ ;)

Fresh Chicken wrote:

MARK FOR ET FOR ET AND ET IS ET SO I WILL ET THIS ET SOON ET
ET map~ it looks great to me already~ :)
good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Starry-

Critical_Star wrote:

nyahalo Starru~

column 1 2 3 4

Normal
00:41:280 - 00:41:443 - actually u can have a note for kick here too, it doesn't really feel hard at all for normal diff. would suggest to add it since the kick are really obvious here I've tried, and it just makes layering the kicks around the LNs a nightmare early on, so I just decided to map to the snare here. (Also it increases star rating above 2.25)


Another
00:47:524 - maybe add a note here like 00:47:686 (47686|2) - can't really see is there any difference of sound between them yea
00:50:037 (50037|2,50037|1,50037|3,50199|0,50199|1,50361|0,50361|3) - not sure if u intention only add a note at blue tick for some certain places, but i think all these part sound the same, maybe u should add a note at these blue tick line here too for consistency
00:52:632 (52632|2,52632|0,52632|1,52794|3,52794|2,52956|1,52956|0,52956|3) - like before if u agree ^
00:44:848 (44848|0,44848|3,44848|1,45010|2,45010|1,45172|2,45172|0) - ^ I removed them all instead for consistency.


White Another
00:45:091 - 00:50:280 - should have a note something like 00:47:686 (47686|3) - I removed them all for consistency as well, even in this difficulty.
01:02:767 - how about add a note here to make a full stream? there is 1/4 sound here too, and i think is nice instead of a break here I only really mapped to strings and kicks here, the space is where none of the sounds appear.
01:23:686 (83686|0,83686|1) - i think single note is fine here, might as well to differentiate this sound with those double kick sound I had 2 notes for the melody, I know what you mean, but it will be inconsistent with my layering structure.

no kud if it doesn't help
can't really find any issue here xD overall was really nice~ ;)

Fresh Chicken wrote:

MARK FOR ET FOR ET AND ET IS ET SO I WILL ET THIS ET SOON ET
ET map~ it looks great to me already~ :)
good luck! :D
Thanks CS <3 Was helpful
Updated~
Akasha-
IRC
2016-07-18 18:50 Kuo Kyoka: oh guess you're online now i will do it now too
2016-07-18 18:51 Starry-: oh okii sure owo
2016-07-18 18:51 Starry-: thank you KK >3<
2016-07-18 18:52 Kuo Kyoka: what song anyways
2016-07-18 18:52 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2016-07-18 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: anyway
2016-07-18 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: do you want to make video like this
2016-07-18 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1028878 Kinjishi VS Kirin - Broken Sword]
2016-07-18 18:54 Starry-: lemme dl owo
2016-07-18 18:54 Starry-: haven't seen it
2016-07-18 18:58 Starry-: you can make video like that if you want, but i just worry it will be too much effort for you ;w;
2016-07-18 18:58 Starry-: you already helped me with bg xD
2016-07-18 18:58 Starry-: and to render a video like that it may take long for you
2016-07-18 18:58 Starry-: also I don't know what to use for bg image for video :z
2016-07-18 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: hmm idk how to do that tbh, but shana can
2016-07-18 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: let's me ask her for instruction
2016-07-18 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: i just knew she using sony vegas to did that
2016-07-18 19:01 Starry-: oki i returned
2016-07-18 19:51 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-07-18 19:51 Kuo Kyoka: maybe mod first?
2016-07-18 19:52 Starry-: oki
2016-07-18 19:52 Starry-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1018852 Rche - entelecheia [Beginner]]
2016-07-18 19:52 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1018852 Rche - entelecheia [Beginner]]
2016-07-18 19:52 Kuo Kyoka: ninja'd
2016-07-18 19:52 Starry-: xD
2016-07-18 19:53 Kuo Kyoka: 00:07:713 (7713|2) - i think should be on 00:07:551 -
2016-07-18 19:53 Kuo Kyoka: somehow better
2016-07-18 19:53 Kuo Kyoka: because if you did that 1/2, maybe on 00:10:145 (10145|0) - too
2016-07-18 19:53 Starry-: 2->3 or 3->2 can work fine
2016-07-18 19:53 Starry-: i will change it
2016-07-18 19:54 Starry-: oh
2016-07-18 19:54 Starry-: i misread
2016-07-18 19:54 Starry-: actually here i copied iidx layering
2016-07-18 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: oh
2016-07-18 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 19:54 Starry-: i try to find vid
2016-07-18 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: and jacks
2016-07-18 19:54 Starry-: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_lSsB8u0By4
2016-07-18 19:55 Kuo Kyoka: okay got it
2016-07-18 19:55 Starry-: simple 1/1 jacks are easy for player imo since they dont need to change column, much less reading required
2016-07-18 19:55 Starry-: it works with song here so ^-^
2016-07-18 19:55 Starry-: i just think putting random 1/1 pattern here will kinda be bad
2016-07-18 19:56 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 19:56 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:632 - on here how about this pattern http://puu.sh/q5KQ4/3785a3f1b9.jpg
2016-07-18 19:57 Kuo Kyoka: 01:05:280 (65280|2,65605|1) - maybe just merge them into one, somehow better, also it's almost same melody with 01:07:875 (67875|0) -
2016-07-18 19:58 Starry-: looks alright, but i organised via pitch, 00:47:443 - pitch here is different to pitch 00:47:118 - , so i'd like to keep that one
2016-07-18 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: 01:13:226 - missing a note for bass somehow weird for me
2016-07-18 19:58 Starry-: 01:05:280 (65280|2,65605|1) - hmm you think its ok to put as 1 ln?
2016-07-18 19:58 Starry-: actually i have no idea
2016-07-18 19:58 Kuo Kyoka: it's fine
2016-07-18 19:59 Starry-: hmmm
2016-07-18 19:59 Starry-: do you think i can put 2 normal note?
2016-07-18 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: if only normal note then it must be like http://puu.sh/q5KYD/f0609b6c31.jpg
2016-07-18 19:59 Starry-: http://puu.sh/q5KXS/32e65cdcce.jpg ?
2016-07-18 19:59 Starry-: just thinking of other ideas for here
2016-07-18 20:00 Kuo Kyoka: yeah
2016-07-18 20:00 Kuo Kyoka: but better long note 1/1
2016-07-18 20:01 Kuo Kyoka: it;s weird if there is a normal note on here
2016-07-18 20:01 Starry-: oh wow i could barely notice it
2016-07-18 20:01 Starry-: 01:05:767 (65767|2) - here is new pitch?
2016-07-18 20:01 Starry-: i thought it was echo sound but not sure
2016-07-18 20:01 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-07-18 20:01 Kuo Kyoka: yeah echo
2016-07-18 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: but you can keep
2016-07-18 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: i mean that 2 holds
2016-07-18 20:02 Starry-: i just wanted to keep those 2 holds since I map to the low pitch bass sound instead of string melody
2016-07-18 20:02 Starry-: in normal diff i map to string melody since it's more frequent sounds
2016-07-18 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: yeah okay
2016-07-18 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: 01:13:226 - on here?
2016-07-18 20:03 Starry-: actually avalon suggested the same thing on that point
2016-07-18 20:03 Starry-: to add note there
2016-07-18 20:03 Starry-: but i rejected before, since i only map to piano, but now im not sure
2016-07-18 20:04 Starry-: what do you think is good pattern to add note on that part
2016-07-18 20:04 Kuo Kyoka: if only piano
2016-07-18 20:04 Kuo Kyoka: it's fine
2016-07-18 20:04 Starry-: i guess, but avalon suggested too, so i think it might be issue
2016-07-18 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-07-18 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: if they can notice the piano well
2016-07-18 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: because piano is smaller than this bass
2016-07-18 20:05 Kuo Kyoka: so it's fine if you follow piano only
2016-07-18 20:06 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:145 - ending slider?
2016-07-18 20:06 Starry-: 01:46:064 - tick sound is here i think so i end there xD
2016-07-18 20:06 Starry-: hm
2016-07-18 20:06 Starry-: you think i can end on red tick instead? i think sound fades there
2016-07-18 20:07 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:145 - here
2016-07-18 20:07 Starry-: 01:45:983 - lead sound stops 01:46:064 - "tic" 01:46:145 - end of white line
2016-07-18 20:08 Starry-: i was just scared it might be weird for the player to hear tic sound but press off the LN 1/4 later, but i dont know
2016-07-18 20:08 Starry-: srsly why is this sound here
2016-07-18 20:09 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-07-18 20:09 Kuo Kyoka: #blamecomposer2016
2016-07-18 20:09 Kuo Kyoka: hhhh
2016-07-18 20:09 Starry-: #blamecomposer2016
2016-07-18 20:09 Starry-: #blamecomposer2016
2016-07-18 20:09 Starry-: #blamecomposer2016
2016-07-18 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-07-18 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: that iidx no ending lns too
2016-07-18 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: red line is okay
2016-07-18 20:10 Starry-: iidx almost never LNs though xd
2016-07-18 20:10 Starry-: i guess tic sound isn't meant to be there?
2016-07-18 20:11 Kuo Kyoka: maybe
2016-07-18 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: red line is fine
2016-07-18 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1018854 Rche - entelecheia [Normal]]
2016-07-18 20:12 Starry-: i guess.. i will ask chicken about it too
2016-07-18 20:12 Kuo Kyoka: nice intro patterns
2016-07-18 20:12 Starry-: so confusing @W@
2016-07-18 20:12 Starry-: lmao its so hard to map that part for normal diff
2016-07-18 20:13 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2016-07-18 20:13 Starry-: ;-;
2016-07-18 20:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:21:010 (21010|2,21334|3) - switch them
2016-07-18 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: somehow patterns might be better imo
2016-07-18 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: balance i guesss
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: hm i wanted handswap here
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: actuall
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: actually
2016-07-18 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:19:875 (19875|0,20037|3,20199|1,20361|2) -
2016-07-18 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: something like this
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: you think this can be better?
2016-07-18 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: oh okay
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: http://puu.sh/q5LFr/945f844bb9.jpg
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: oh
2016-07-18 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: yeah better
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: exactly what i did
2016-07-18 20:14 Starry-: lmao
2016-07-18 20:15 Kuo Kyoka: lmao
2016-07-18 20:15 Starry-: oki changed
2016-07-18 20:15 Starry-: 00:21:497 (21497|0) - i made my own hitsound
2016-07-18 20:15 Starry-: i didn't want to use SB
2016-07-18 20:15 Starry-: xD
2016-07-18 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: why
2016-07-18 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: SB is good
2016-07-18 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: SBSBSBSBSB
2016-07-18 20:16 Starry-: xDD SB bugs on my client sometimes
2016-07-18 20:16 Starry-: ;w;
2016-07-18 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: oh i see
2016-07-18 20:16 Starry-: also if you miss LN u will still hear hitsound
2016-07-18 20:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:39:983 (39983|3,40307|1,40307|0,40632|2,40956|0,40956|1) - yeah good but pitch is different than other 2
2016-07-18 20:17 Kuo Kyoka: lol, really?
2016-07-18 20:17 Starry-: oh oops
2016-07-18 20:18 Starry-: nice catch ill change it
2016-07-18 20:18 Starry-: http://puu.sh/q5LQ6/827807097c.jpg
2016-07-18 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: yeah better
2016-07-18 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: and osu website died again
2016-07-18 20:25 Kuo Kyoka: 00:55:226 (55226|2) - can be accecpt for a long note
2016-07-18 20:26 Kuo Kyoka: 00:57:821 (57821|1) - this too
2016-07-18 20:26 Kuo Kyoka: but well your choice
2016-07-18 20:27 Starry-: i will have to rearrange whole section then to make it LN, and i think note for kick is fine
2016-07-18 20:27 Starry-: let me show you something 1 sec puush ded Q_Q
2016-07-18 20:27 Kuo Kyoka: alright
2016-07-18 20:28 Starry-: 00:55:551 (55551|3,55713|2,56199|3,56361|2,56848|3,57010|2,57497|3,57659|2) - same for all
2016-07-18 20:28 Starry-: 00:58:145 (58145|1,58307|0,58794|1,58956|0,59443|1,59605|0,60091|1,60253|0) - same for all
2016-07-18 20:28 Starry-: etc.
2016-07-18 20:28 Starry-: but if i replace with LN i will get something ugly http://puu.sh/q5Mhf/37a1c0f3c4.jpg
2016-07-18 20:28 Starry-: oops i put 1/4 instead of 1/2
2016-07-18 20:29 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/q5MhW/c24ccb2a37.jpg 01:02:524 - somehow better for patterns and balance imo
2016-07-18 20:29 Starry-: but you can understand it
2016-07-18 20:29 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 20:29 Starry-: i wanted for that, 1/4 to be close to each other for reading
2016-07-18 20:29 Starry-: maybe i can rearrange still
2016-07-18 20:30 Starry-: http://puu.sh/q5Ml9/471bb61f58.jpg better? or http://puu.sh/q5MlL/1447daafa2.jpg ?
2016-07-18 20:30 Starry-: i just think close 1/4 will help reading otherwise new players may hit as 1/1 chord instead
2016-07-18 20:30 Starry-: but balance kinda off so maybe those pattern i linked maybe better
2016-07-18 20:31 Kuo Kyoka: but patterns seem bad to me
2016-07-18 20:31 Kuo Kyoka: but hmm
2016-07-18 20:31 Starry-: hmm
2016-07-18 20:31 Kuo Kyoka: 2 notes on same hand ppl will think it's on same timing
2016-07-18 20:31 Kuo Kyoka: and press 12
2016-07-18 20:31 Kuo Kyoka: oh ya forgot you changed 23
2016-07-18 20:31 Kuo Kyoka: then its fine if you choose so
2016-07-18 20:32 Starry-: do you have any suggestion with pattern like 2-3?
2016-07-18 20:32 Kuo Kyoka: 01:23:767 - add a note on 2 to present bass
2016-07-18 20:32 Kuo Kyoka: oh
2016-07-18 20:32 Kuo Kyoka: lets me try
2016-07-18 20:33 Kuo Kyoka: umm
2016-07-18 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: 12 23 34 pretty hard to think a pattern for me
2016-07-18 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: but you can keep if you want
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: i guess i will do something like http://puu.sh/q5MyC/1d2dedceb9.jpg then
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: 3-2 -> 4 maybe better, im just thinking, i will get some testplayers for this
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: anyways
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: 3-2 -> 4 maybe better, im just thinking, i will get some testplayers for this
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: oops
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: i press up key by accident
2016-07-18 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: http://puu.sh/q5MAH/09172e46bf.png
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: lmao
2016-07-18 20:36 Kuo Kyoka: lol
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: i like that pattern
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: i will use it
2016-07-18 20:36 Starry-: owo
2016-07-18 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: lol okay
2016-07-18 20:37 Kuo Kyoka: cuz it follow the pattern http://puu.sh/q5MD0/0203c8f029.jpg
2016-07-18 20:38 Starry-: yea o:
2016-07-18 20:38 Starry-: oh
2016-07-18 20:38 Starry-: 01:23:767 (83767|0) -
2016-07-18 20:38 Starry-: add note here?
2016-07-18 20:38 Starry-: done
2016-07-18 20:38 Kuo Kyoka: oya only them
2016-07-18 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: the last hold is same
2016-07-18 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: also lol the 2nd chorus is hard
2016-07-18 20:39 Starry-: oki
2016-07-18 20:39 Starry-: yea :/
2016-07-18 20:39 Starry-: i cant think of easier layering pattern for 2nd chorus
2016-07-18 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: /np
2016-07-18 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1018853 Rche - entelecheia [Hyper]]
2016-07-18 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: 00:16:470 (16470|2) - actually better if you move to 4 for patterns
2016-07-18 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: but leh nvm it
2016-07-18 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: and honestly
2016-07-18 20:41 Kuo Kyoka: that 2 mini jack is somehow weird for rhythm imo
2016-07-18 20:42 Starry-: i guess, but it's the only thing that is kinda smooth for playing
2016-07-18 20:42 Starry-: i tried it with 3 minijack and it's too hard
2016-07-18 20:42 Starry-: i used some #10ks to testplay
2016-07-18 20:42 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 20:42 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2016-07-18 20:42 Starry-: and u remember the old pattern, too ; -;
2016-07-18 20:43 Kuo Kyoka: old is good
2016-07-18 20:44 Kuo Kyoka: but well if you changed to that
2016-07-18 20:44 Starry-: http://puu.sh/q5MW2/3c4baab604.jpg something like this rhythm is too hard i guess
2016-07-18 20:44 Kuo Kyoka: anyway
2016-07-18 20:44 Kuo Kyoka: 00:37:794 - in here also piano
2016-07-18 20:44 Starry-: old one was too hard, even though musically correct, my friends all fail lmao
2016-07-18 20:44 Starry-: oh shit
2016-07-18 20:44 Starry-: i missed a piano note
2016-07-18 20:45 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 20:45 Kuo Kyoka: okay just keep it then
2016-07-18 20:45 Starry-: wat
2016-07-18 20:45 Starry-: oh
2016-07-18 20:45 Starry-: i thought you say "keep missing piano note" xD
2016-07-18 20:46 Starry-: i added note there
2016-07-18 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: oh not that
2016-07-18 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: hhhhh
2016-07-18 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: anyway
2016-07-18 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: no more problems found
2016-07-18 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: it's pretty good imo
2016-07-18 20:47 Kuo Kyoka: 01:33:253 (93253|2,93334|0,93415|2,93497|1,93578|3,93659|1,93740|3,93821|0,93902|2,93983|0,94064|2,94145|1,94226|3,94307|1,94388|3) - but maybe rearrange this?
2016-07-18 20:47 Starry-: if you can help me with suggestion i will be glad xD
2016-07-18 20:47 Starry-: originally i had [12][34][12][34]
2016-07-18 20:47 Starry-: but star rating go BOOM 3.7* ?_?
2016-07-18 20:50 Kuo Kyoka: boom sr
2016-07-18 20:50 Kuo Kyoka: maybe better http://puu.sh/q5NcR/e89e5c1975.jpg
2016-07-18 20:52 Starry-: done owo
2016-07-18 20:52 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1017820 Rche - entelecheia [Another]]
2016-07-18 20:53 Starry-: i missed same piano note in 37sec~
2016-07-18 20:53 Starry-: 00:37:794 - awawa yea
2016-07-18 20:53 Starry-: i will rearrange and add
2016-07-18 20:54 Starry-: fixed =w=
2016-07-18 20:54 Kuo Kyoka: is both 1/2 1/3 so bad?
2016-07-18 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: i mean good*
2016-07-18 20:55 Starry-: huh
2016-07-18 20:55 Starry-: where?
2016-07-18 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: 00:27:659 -
2016-07-18 20:55 Starry-: oh
2016-07-18 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: i think 1/3 only
2016-07-18 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: on last diff will be both
2016-07-18 20:56 Kuo Kyoka: 00:41:280 (41280|0,41361|1,41443|0,41524|1,41605|0,41686|1,41767|0,41848|1,41929|0) - nice pitch, i like this one
2016-07-18 20:57 Starry-: thank you owo
2016-07-18 20:57 Starry-: and oki, i removed polyrhythm, only 1/3 now
2016-07-18 20:58 Kuo Kyoka: anyway
2016-07-18 20:58 Kuo Kyoka: what is polyrhythm anywya
2016-07-18 20:58 Kuo Kyoka: my english so bad aaa
2016-07-18 20:59 Starry-: xD its fine
2016-07-18 20:59 Starry-: i didn't know it until mania
2016-07-18 20:59 Starry-: its mixture of 1/3 and 1/2
2016-07-18 20:59 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 20:59 Kuo Kyoka: oh that
2016-07-18 20:59 Starry-: or any snapping actually
2016-07-18 20:59 Starry-: mixture of 2 different snap
2016-07-18 20:59 Kuo Kyoka: oh that's how they call that
2016-07-18 20:59 Kuo Kyoka: learned
2016-07-18 20:59 Kuo Kyoka: anyway i found nothing more
2016-07-18 20:59 Kuo Kyoka: et
2016-07-18 21:00 Kuo Kyoka: ETETETET
2016-07-18 21:00 Starry-: http://puu.sh/q5NBI/103ba8d2e9.png 1/3 sound + 1/2 http://puu.sh/q5NDz/6de725e9e2.png = polyrhythm http://puu.sh/q5NEd/a9c0b0a96f.png
2016-07-18 21:00 Starry-: just to give example
2016-07-18 21:00 Starry-: xD
2016-07-18 21:00 Starry-: and no
2016-07-18 21:00 Starry-: U ET
2016-07-18 21:00 Starry-: ET ET ETET
2016-07-18 21:01 Kuo Kyoka: i can imagine that
2016-07-18 21:01 Kuo Kyoka: and ET
2016-07-18 21:01 Starry-: say ET if u are ET
2016-07-18 21:01 Starry-: wow u said ET
2016-07-18 21:02 Starry-: im immune, im never ET
2016-07-18 21:02 Starry-: but u are
2016-07-18 21:04 Kuo Kyoka: if KK don't said ET, Starry's ET
2016-07-18 21:04 Kuo Kyoka: ...
2016-07-18 21:04 Kuo Kyoka: no reply, Starry's ET
2016-07-18 21:05 Starry-: U ARE ET
2016-07-18 21:05 Starry-: 00:47:767 (47767|0,47929|0,48091|1,48091|0) - lmao i fucked up
2016-07-18 21:05 Starry-: 00:48:091 (48091|1,48253|1,48415|1,48578|1) - 4 note jack Q_Q
2016-07-18 21:05 Starry-: meant to be 3 note jack
2016-07-18 21:06 Starry-: i fixed
2016-07-18 21:06 Kuo Kyoka: move to 4?
2016-07-18 21:07 Starry-: yep and did some rearranging to balance
2016-07-18 21:07 Starry-: http://puu.sh/q5NZn/d18d435c97.jpg fine now
2016-07-18 21:07 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:713 - add note on 00:32:037 -
2016-07-18 21:08 Kuo Kyoka: because melody somehow same with 00:30:902 (30902|2,30902|3,31064|0,31064|2,31226|2,31226|3,31388|2,31388|0,31551|1,31551|3) -
2016-07-18 21:08 Kuo Kyoka: yeah better
2016-07-18 21:09 Starry-: i layered to harpischord noise + string noise, here doesn't have harpischord
2016-07-18 21:09 Kuo Kyoka: eh rip
2016-07-18 21:09 Starry-: hmm if you dont know what harpischord is, sounds like https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71iUAFFQ8ik
2016-07-18 21:09 Kuo Kyoka: tbh i can't understand harpischord string mean
2016-07-18 21:09 Starry-: string is melody sound
2016-07-18 21:09 Kuo Kyoka: oh
2016-07-18 21:10 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 21:10 Starry-: harpischord is background sound which sounds like that youtube
2016-07-18 21:10 Kuo Kyoka: nice thing
2016-07-18 21:10 Starry-: those are 2 main instruments here x3
2016-07-18 21:10 Starry-: (also i double checked my layering here with iidx, its exactly the same, so i think its ok xD)
2016-07-18 21:10 Kuo Kyoka: eh
2016-07-18 21:11 Kuo Kyoka: i just realize
2016-07-18 21:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:33:983 - 1/6
2016-07-18 21:11 Kuo Kyoka: i see
2016-07-18 21:11 Kuo Kyoka: so it's fine to me then
2016-07-18 21:11 Starry-: where is the 1/7
2016-07-18 21:11 Starry-: 1/6
2016-07-18 21:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:33:983 -
2016-07-18 21:12 Kuo Kyoka: oh
2016-07-18 21:12 Kuo Kyoka: i think 1/8
2016-07-18 21:12 Kuo Kyoka: confusing
2016-07-18 21:15 Starry-: im confused but i think it's fine as 1/4? o.o
2016-07-18 21:16 Starry-: i cant hear 1/8 or 1/6
2016-07-18 21:16 Kuo Kyoka: it's fine
2016-07-18 21:16 Kuo Kyoka: 01:23:686 (83686|1,83686|0) - hmm
2016-07-18 21:16 Kuo Kyoka: why 2 notes here?
2016-07-18 21:16 Kuo Kyoka: no bass on here
2016-07-18 21:16 Kuo Kyoka: oh wait
2016-07-18 21:16 Kuo Kyoka: have melody on here
2016-07-18 21:17 Kuo Kyoka: kek
2016-07-18 21:17 Kuo Kyoka: nvm it hhh
2016-07-18 21:17 Starry-: 01:23:199 (83199|3,83199|2) - same as
2016-07-18 21:17 Kuo Kyoka: then the rest is fine
2016-07-18 21:18 Starry-: wwww oki
2016-07-18 21:18 Starry-: i will talk to others about ending LN
2016-07-18 21:19 Kuo Kyoka: okay
2016-07-18 21:19 Kuo Kyoka: i will post irc
2016-07-18 21:19 Kuo Kyoka: after video done call me for bubble
2016-07-18 21:19 Starry-: okii
2016-07-18 21:21 Kuo Kyoka: hahaha
2016-07-18 21:21 Kuo Kyoka: ET
2016-07-18 21:24 Starry-: updated owo
2016-07-18 21:24 Starry-: post irc xD
Topic Starter
Starry-
Updated~
Thanks a lot KK you really helped <3
I'll search for a new video probably and I'll get some more opinions about the ending LN. Then everything should be ready to go.
Aruel
ET

[BETinner]

00:06:253 - ~ 00:11:443 - This ET sections are kinda ET awekard I think, how about to add some ET notes in 00:06:902 - 00:08:199 - 00:09:497 - 00:10:794 - these ETs? For remove something ET empty feeling.

Oh my god so ET difficulty so I can't catch much ET issues because it made by my ET <3

[Normal ET]

00:23:280 (23280|3,23443|3,23605|2,23767|2) - I think this ET pattern is kinda not structure ET pattern because it focuses on ET right hand so I'm recommending the pattern like this ET


You so ET

[Hyper ET]

ET difficulty.

[Another ET]

00:33:983 - I think you can add a note in here, for gap between Hyper and White Another ETs. Also it should be better to play imo

[White ET]

01:23:686 - Does it really need to be double? seems it's fine to me too but I'm pointing it because it may able to your mistake'd

Nothing to catch to be honest, it's even fine if you don't change anything. So you are daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn ET Starry

Really nice map to be honest, no repeatable patterns also structure patterns and keeping fun to play. ETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETET
Feerum

Fresh Chicken wrote:

MARK FOR ET FOR ET AND ET IS ET SO I WILL ET THIS ET SOON ET
Nice meme. Marking Maps insta after they got finished is a thing?


Actually i just wanted to post some random thing. I wonder of the artist wanted to call himself "Rache" and forgot the "a"
Rache is german for "revenge".
I noticed this already in the other Beatmap of this Artist, i think was "Todestrieb" what means "death instinct" in German :D
I wonder if the word "entelecheia" also comes from the german word "Entelechie"

Why so many asian composer use german words.. haha.
Anyways. Just some random things which doesn't really help here.

I just leave a Star here so the reading wasn't wasted!

Good luck with your Map :)
Topic Starter
Starry-
I'm probably going to keep my old video. After messing around a lot, I've decided that since my old bg is 4:3, the video will probably have to be 4:3 to match the bg. 4:3 video ontop of a 4:3 background honestly doesn't look that great.

Feerum wrote:

Fresh Chicken wrote:

MARK FOR ET FOR ET AND ET IS ET SO I WILL ET THIS ET SOON ET
Nice meme. Marking Maps insta after they got finished is a thing?


Actually i just wanted to post some random thing. I wonder of the artist wanted to call himself "Rache" and forgot the "a"
Rache is german for "revenge".
I noticed this already in the other Beatmap of this Artist, i think was "Todestrieb" what means "death instinct" in German :D
I wonder if the word "entelecheia" also comes from the german word "Entelechie"

Why so many asian composer use german words.. haha.
Anyways. Just some random things which doesn't really help here.

I just leave a Star here so the reading wasn't wasted!

Good luck with your Map :)
Dunno if I'd call 2 weeks "insta" ;) I had this map and the spread all finished roughly by the date of upload, and due to the dynamic of the song there really isn't too much that could go wrong.
Thanks for the star though! (What does entelechie mean in German? Goddamn I'm interested now. ;_; )

Fresh Chicken wrote:

ET

[BETinner]

00:06:253 - ~ 00:11:443 - This ET sections are kinda ET awekard I think, how about to add some ET notes in 00:06:902 - 00:08:199 - 00:09:497 - 00:10:794 - these ETs? For remove something ET empty feeling. Hmm maybe, I'll talk to KK about this. I'm kinda scared about inconsistency on white ticks.

Oh my god so ET difficulty so I can't catch much ET issues because it made by my ET <3

[Normal ET]

00:23:280 (23280|3,23443|3,23605|2,23767|2) - I think this ET pattern is kinda not structure ET pattern because it focuses on ET right hand so I'm recommending the pattern like this ET Sure, done.


You so ET

[Hyper ET]

ET difficulty.

[Another ET]

00:33:983 - I think you can add a note in here, for gap between Hyper and White Another ETs. Also it should be better to play imo I kinda wanna keep this, since I strictly only mapped to piano+snare here.

[White ET]

01:23:686 - Does it really need to be double? seems it's fine to me too but I'm pointing it because it may able to your mistake'd It was double because of the melody (I used 2 notes for melody in each stream part), but I can remove it if it feels weird.

Nothing to catch to be honest, it's even fine if you don't change anything. So you are daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn ET Starry

Really nice map to be honest, no repeatable patterns also structure patterns and keeping fun to play. ETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETETET

ur so ET that u can't stop saying ET
u literally spam ET because u are ET
u want the whole world to know u are ET
because its true
u are ET
fresh chicken is ET
100%
pure
ET
from mars
literal ET
Thanks a lot Chicken <3<3<3ET<3<3

I need to update the map description aaaaaaaaa
Updated~
Also I relayered the Normal diff, I think it's a bit easier than what it was before. (If I made it too easy, the spread would be too wide reaching up to Hyper. It still has 1/4.)
Kawawa
ET Fresh Starry =w=
shoot some star o/
Arzenvald
another ♂ stuff like Todestrieb? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Topic Starter
Starry-

Kawawa wrote:

ET Fresh Starry =w=
shoot some star o/
Whaaaa 5 stars thanks a lot Kawa <3 (GO TO SLEEP NOW WTF)

ajeemaniz wrote:

another ♂ stuff like Todestrieb? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
usagi lewd
when was Todestrieb ♂ ♂ ♂

Updated again after some IRC with Feerum about the Another diff~ (post the IRC plsplspls, self-reminder to doublecheck some parts with others.)
Feerum
i actually wanted to point out 1 think and it turned out in... 4? 5?
idk some stuff in another diff.

it wasn't actually much and idk if it was really helpful

IRC
23:53 Feerum: Starry, have a sec?
23:53 Feerum: And hi c:
23:55 Starry-: Ohi, sure
23:56 Feerum: i was just take a look into ya map
23:56 *Feerum is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1017820 Rche - entelecheia [Another]]
23:56 Feerum: this diff here
23:56 Starry-: o.o
23:56 *Starry- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1017820 Rche - entelecheia [Another]]
23:56 Feerum: nah just little things
23:56 Feerum: the diff itself is fine
23:57 Starry-: alright sure :o
23:57 Feerum: 00:13:713 (13713|3,13875|3,14037|3) - le only one 3 jack here. in the whole part
23:57 Feerum: really, the only one
23:57 Starry-: moved to 3
23:57 Starry-: x) nice catch
23:58 Feerum: my suggestion would be (to avoid repeating pattern)
23:58 Feerum: because the next chords are also 34, 23, 12
23:58 Starry-: yeah,I'll probably rearrange it all when I have some more time
23:58 Feerum: 00:14:037 (14037|3,14037|1) - one to da left and 00:14:361 (14361|0) - to 2
23:58 Feerum: avoids repeating and is cool eheh
23:59 Feerum: and who doesn't want to be cool
23:59 Feerum: even pattern have feelings
23:59 Feerum: And the other question would be
23:59 Feerum: 00:21:902 - i dun really get how you mapped your chords here
23:59 Starry-: owo
23:59 Starry-: trippy
23:59 Feerum: i mean i can hear that additional bell and maybe its this what you mapped?
00:00 Starry-: harpiscord+string
00:00 Feerum: first time read the word "harpiscord"
00:00 Starry-: i doublechecked the layering with the original iidx here so i think its fine x)
00:00 Feerum: xd
00:00 Starry-: xD
00:01 Starry-: errr
00:01 Feerum: 00:26:524 - isn't here then one missing?
00:01 Starry-: https://youtu.be/71iUAFFQ8ik?t=1m2s
00:01 Feerum: 00:26:524 - is louder than 00:26:361 -
00:01 Feerum: in my opinion
00:01 Feerum: OH ITS THIS
00:01 Feerum: i never knows how this is called LOL
00:02 Starry-: that was my personal mistake oups
00:03 Feerum: Ehehehe, Feerum finds everything
00:03 Feerum: Also 00:30:902 (30902|1,31064|1,31226|1,31388|1) - aaaaaaaa. I mean i clearly hear what you are follow here
00:03 Starry-: huh
00:03 Starry-: I think that's fine
00:03 Feerum: There is sound for 1/2 trill pattern and maybe i'm blind to see it that you did add them. actually it could be 2-1-2-1?
00:04 Starry-: I wanted it to jack because of the increased intensity there :p
00:04 Feerum: uh
00:04 Starry-: since full harpiscord
00:04 Feerum: you break my heart
00:04 Starry-: I guess you can map it as kinda 1/2 trill too
00:05 Starry-: ;_;
00:05 Feerum: 00:33:983 - missing note. I know it's not very audible but hihat and you still have a (kinda inaudible) Piano here D:
00:05 Feerum: its kinda like 00:37:551 -
00:05 Feerum: it's a 1/4 break
00:06 Starry-: i honestly can't hear the piano there at all :X
00:06 Feerum: 00:34:551 (34551|3) - but this one doesn't have a piano
00:06 Starry-: i can hear the piano there .w.
00:06 Starry-: but not on00:33:983 -
00:07 Feerum: i just hear the Piano from 00:34:470 -
00:07 Feerum: what makes an echo to 00:34:551 -
00:07 Starry-: mmmm idk I can hear the piano as it's seperate pitch at 00:34:551 (34551|3) -
00:08 Feerum: no mather how loud i turn my headphones and the volume, there is no piano for me xD
00:08 Feerum: a
00:08 Feerum: y
00:08 Starry-: a y
00:09 Starry-: I guess i'll ask a few others about it but honestly I can hear it there awawawa
00:09 Feerum: one more thing i just saw
00:09 Feerum: but this is now really nazi mod
00:09 Feerum: xD
00:09 Feerum: but i simply have to say it
00:09 Starry-: what is it oo
00:09 Feerum: 00:41:280 (41280|0) - this note has a different pitch than the notes you mapped on 2-1-2-1-2-1-2-1 here
00:10 Feerum: 00:41:605 (41605|0) - and this one too
00:10 Feerum: !
00:10 Feerum: but this is nazi mod
00:10 Feerum: and you don't have to change it, plays good how it is xD
00:11 Starry-: oh I know that already
00:11 Starry-: just did the trill for simplicity purposes haha
00:11 Feerum: play better i think
00:11 Starry-: it wouldn't have the same effect imo ;-;
00:11 Feerum: why your maps are often so hard to plaaay
00:12 Feerum: its so dense xD
00:12 Feerum: but cool!
00:12 Starry-: mindblocko
00:12 Feerum: yeah totally mindblocko here
00:12 Feerum: The beginning in the White Another is so mindblock lol
00:12 Starry-: my style of mapping usually never has 1-3 or 2-4 chords
00:12 Feerum: Your style, i see :P
00:13 Starry-: oohhhh yeah i did that on purpose xd
00:13 Starry-: well id hate to excuse something being a shitmap as "my style" but honestly, i really hate 1-3 or 2-4 chords unless intentional
00:14 Feerum: never said its a shitmap duu
00:14 Starry-: i hate all my maps xD so i think it's one
00:14 Starry-: owo
00:14 Starry-: anyways, updated
00:14 Starry-: thanks a lot for pointing out some stuff in another
00:14 Feerum: are you actually sure about the snapping at 00:27:659 - D:
00:14 Starry-: yep
00:15 Starry-: muh polyrhythm
00:15 Feerum: eh maybe its just me and its late
00:15 Feerum: and i had a long day
00:15 Starry-: you can post this log btw in thread
Aruel
Call me if you are ready for bubble, let's take a look in IRC too.
(well, I'm AFK in 23 July - 28 July lel)
Topic Starter
Starry-
Reminder for me to change HP from 7~9 to 7~8.5
Ibrahim
Shoot stars, good luck , nice map as usual <3
Akasha-
Aruel
Have IRC with Starry (Actually the half of chatlog is ET also actually he checked all himself so I didn't really do nothing)

Bubbled!


Good luck ET <3<3
Topic Starter
Starry-

Ibrahim wrote:

Shoot stars, good luck , nice map as usual <3
Thank you so much! <3

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

NO KK NO
o o
  O

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Have IRC with Starry (Actually the half of chatlog is ET also actually he checked all himself so I didn't really do nothing)

Bubbled!


Good luck ET <3<3
Thanks so much for the Bubble! And hey no, you helped me a lot with double checking everything! (But I agree, half the chatlog is ET ET ET. You are ET. owo)

Changes:
HP spread from 7-9 -> 7->8.6 (distributed evenly).
New video.
Changed hitsound volume in kiai parts on easier difficulties only. Beginner: 60%->80%. Normal: 60%->70%. This is to make up for the loudness in the song and the fact that in the main kiai sections, the kick snare hitsounds aren't used much.

I need to edit the map description before the qualifying checks. ;o;
Akasha-
Rche - entelecheia [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(Todestrieb)

Congratulations!

Topic Starter
Starry-

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Rche - entelecheia [OsuMania modding]


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Qualified
(Todestrieb)

Congratulations!

NICE IRC

Thanks a lot KK~ <3
We went through some small things and consistency checking in IRC before qualifying this - mainly the intro and endings of each map. We also went through the patterning of White Another a bit.

I'll write up the difficulty descriptions when I wake up tomorrow ;w; oops
SpectorDG
White Another ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Congratz Stawwy !@!#!# <3
Aruel
ET
Kawawa
ET
Kyousuke-
o yea the time has come!! ' w '
big grats to you starry! xD

#best4Kmap
-SoraGami-
Grats Starry <3
ZZHBOY
waw :)
Topic Starter
Starry-

SpectorDG wrote:

White Another ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Congratz Stawwy !@!#!# <3

Kyousuke- wrote:

o yea the time has come!! ' w '
big grats to you starry! xD

#best4Kmap

-SoraGami- wrote:

Grats Starry <3
Thank you all! Means a lot~

Fresh Chicken wrote:

ET

Kawawa wrote:

ET
You guys are describing yourselves o.o
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