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Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara

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ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello as asked
Sugestion,

Normal
  • Hitsound:
  1. 00:32:790 (3) - Missing clap for drum on slider tail di bluetic kali yah ketutup sama slider
  2. 00:45:713 (1) - Same, since you have clap on similiar rhythm on 00:49:406 (1) - fix
  3. 00:55:559 (2) - 00:57:559 (5) - 01:11:559 (2) - and 01:13:559 (5) - Use Normal sampleset on reverse for bass fix
  4. 01:10:559 (5) - Use auto sampleset instead? the Normal sampleset pretty contradictive with the clap imo, not sounds well oke

    Blizs if you use hitsound copier don't forget to apply on the rest of diffs as well, aku mager periksa diff lain soalnya eh yg pakein hitsound copier aku XD

    Gameplay:
  5. 00:07:636 (4,5,1) - The movement of the cursor is too sharp imo, I think you can move 00:08:790 (1) - to x:492 y:240 or you can follow a pattern like fixthis one https://puu.sh/qPbzE/5b7ea5b9d2.jpg to improve the flows there
  6. 00:11:098 (5) - I think better use 1/2 slider there to cover the vocal on 00:11:329 - consider dulu deh agak ane klo ane ubah jadi 1/2
  7. 00:21:713 (4) - You can try rotate that 20 degree, to produce a better flow between (3,4) fix
  8. 00:24:482 (2) - Move up a bit to x:188 y:184, to fix the spacing fix
  9. 01:03:809 (2,3) - Your stacking slightly off

    Nothing in particular, but since there is no Easy diff on this set, I think you should to reconsider reduce the stacking usage on this diff for the sake of gameplay for beginner
Hard
  1. 00:01:406 (1) - How about move to x:284 y:212 https://puu.sh/qPcHm/6a4b4c0f2f.jpg ? Because a sudden jump on the beginning of the song is somewhat odd in this case since you don't seems use any jump for the intro oke
  2. 00:10:406 (3) - Based on my testplay this morning, that extended slider not really play good, literally there is no reason to put it on the first place. My sugestion you can just simply use 1/1 slider for better hightlight on the vocal https://puu.sh/qPcyr/239d5381b2.jpg oke
  3. 00:23:098 (5,1,2) - Umm those pattern seems less organized imo, maybe you can try to readjust the placement into https://puu.sh/qPdih/e940df217c.png ? I think that will plays better oke
  4. 00:36:713 (2,3,4) - How about rearanged into something like https://puu.sh/qPdya/3b3d491e30.jpg ? they will plays more good oke
  5. 00:45:252 (5) - Move to x:160 y:180 to readjust the placement of the triplet oke
  6. 00:53:098 (6) - Forget to Add NC ahh :v
  7. 01:04:809 (6) - Better be replaced with a triplet imo, so at least the downbeat could be more clickable https://puu.sh/qOG3l/b1eedbeda1.png oke
  8. 01:06:309 (5) - Try not to stacked the triplet there, seems out of place so far compared on what you did on triplet, try something like https://puu.sh/qPdOW/8a54693e58.jpg oke
Insane
  1. 00:03:021 (5,6,1,2) - Like I said when testplay, that pattern too tricky to play because at glances this one 00:02:675 (4,5) - visually looks same as 1/2 beat but actually they are on 1/4 beat, aside from that, the placement itself not really neat and can make players hard to distinguish and hit the notes. My sugestion at least maybe you can try to make them neater, something like https://puu.sh/qPegj/7d452dfe63.jpg could work better imo fix
  2. 00:05:098 (1,2) - Imo better stacked them together, the momentum of the anti jump there not really emphsized well imo, unless 00:04:406 (3,4,5,1) - they have a little jump on them fix
  3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - Plays weiird during testplay, it is because the placement of 00:42:021 (1) - rather confusing to play if I say fix
  4. 00:51:482 (7,1) - Swap your nc, (7) is the one that should be nc'd oke
  5. 00:53:098 (5) - Also add nc to indicate the jump oke
Hope that help, kalo ga ngerti tanya lagi aja
Last edited by ekafjr , edited 1 time in total.
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
hie
[General]
add 'because tomorrow is good' in tags, its the song name in engrish

[Normal]
00:07:636 (4,5,1) - tweak a bit so that 4 actually points to 5 would flow better
00:22:867 - could map this tick lol, follow vocals and dat instrument drop thing
00:36:944 (4) - imo should be 2 circles cuz both sound on head and tail are strong
01:03:809 (2,3) - lol fix stack
01:23:559 (2,3) - fix blanket

[Hard]
this definitely needs a remap
sv is too high and it must be around 1.4 - 1.45 to keep proper spread between n- h - i
and when you change sv u probably need to remap ya
or just fix all slider lengths if youre determined enough to do so xd
(OR ADD ADVANCED DIFF TO SET ALSO WORKS)

[Insane]
00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - cool idea but with this ar it looks prety confusing maybe change so its more readable? xd
idk i think some patterns are weird and plays a bit bad try ask erectoz
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Deppyforce wrote:

hie
[General]
add 'because tomorrow is good' in tags, its the song name in engrish

[Normal]
00:07:636 (4,5,1) - tweak a bit so that 4 actually points to 5 would flow better already fix
00:22:867 - could map this tick lol, follow vocals and dat instrument drop thing fix
00:36:944 (4) - imo should be 2 circles cuz both sound on head and tail are strong consider it
01:03:809 (2,3) - lol fix stack fix
01:23:559 (2,3) - fix blanket fix

[Hard]
this definitely needs a remap
sv is too high and it must be around 1.4 - 1.45 to keep proper spread between n- h - i
and when you change sv u probably need to remap ya
or just fix all slider lengths if youre determined enough to do so xd
(OR ADD ADVANCED DIFF TO SET ALSO WORKS) Done

[Insane]
00:41:098 (3,4,5,1) - cool idea but with this ar it looks prety confusing maybe change so its more readable? xd
idk i think some patterns are weird and plays a bit bad try ask erectoz oke
Thanks for mod
Iceskulls
1,612 posts
Joined February 2012
Iceskulls
[normal]
  1. od 4 would be too much if you want to treat this as the easiest diff , od 3 just make thing a bit more fit for easiest diff
  2. 00:03:252 (3,4) - rhythm here plays pretty awkward imo prob becus the weird rhythm transition there which make 00:04:636 (4) - a bit hard to click it properly , I think this rhythm would make thing plays much more natuaral
    SPOILER
[hard]
  1. 00:02:329 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing are very similiar with 1/1 spacing here 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - , it will make the player a bit confuse here imo so try to make spacing a bit different from each others here like 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - , try increase spacing for 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - a bit ?
  2. 00:10:406 (3) - no nc here ? I thought you nc every big white tick here
  3. 00:12:944 (2) - I think if you make this slider a 1/1 slider instead it would make the rhythm here sound a bit better imo
    SPOILER
  4. 00:45:482 (6,1) - this fit for jumps more than 00:45:252 (5,6) - tbh lol so try to make jumps here 00:45:482 (6,1) - instead (move (6) to around x232 y124 ) ?
  5. 01:09:559 (2) - cymbal on sliderend , previously i see all you rhythm make the cymbal beat here clickable so this is like the only one place where the cymbal isn't clickable which will make the rhythm here play not really good compare with the preivous one so I think you can try this rhythm instead to make thing play a bit more natural
    SPOILER
[insane]
  1. 00:02:675 (4,5) - spacing seems a bit too much and inconsistent with 00:02:329 (3,4) - which make thing play not so good so consider lower spacing here a bit to something like 00:02:329 (3,4) -
  2. 00:10:175 (5) - this 1/4 slider doesn't fit the instrument here , the instrument here doesn't sound that sudden so using 1/4 slider make this feel really weird , i recommend you to use the triplet for this one instead it makes the rhythm play a lots better imo
  3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5) - minor but i think making the 00:41:675 (4,5) - head the same way as 00:41:098 (3) - would make the flow here a little better
  4. 00:43:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rhythm feel pretty out of place with the previou ones , previous rhythm you use some slider the emphasis the vocal but for this time it seems like you entirely ignore the vocal here which maek this really out of place so it would be better change some rhythm here to slider to emphasis some vocal here so that it make the rhythm here consistent with the previous one and make thing play more natural
  5. 00:45:482 (11,1) - this should have higher spacing than 00:45:251 (10,11) - since (1) sound a lots more emphasized than 00:45:482 (11) - so try this ? (can change (2) placement to your preference)
    SPOILER
  6. 00:56:309 (4,5) - doesn't this jumps a bit too much ? it make thing play weird imo , try to lower spacing a bit here so try move (5) to around x172 y128 ( might have to change next note placement too
  7. 01:12:309 (5,6) - similiar to above
spread from normal to hard can be improve a bit imo i think hard diff has too many 1/4 whiel normal is just only full of basic 1/1 and rhythm 1/2 so it would be better to remove some 1/4 element from hard to make spread a bit better , also the spread from hard to insane is not good too cus insane just full of jumpy pattern while hard has very low jumps pattern so basically what you should do here is
1.remove some 1/4 element on hard to fix spread from normal to hard
2.add more jumps on hard so spread from hard to insane will be better
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

CelsiusLK wrote:

[normal]
  1. od 4 would be too much if you want to treat this as the easiest diff , od 3 just make thing a bit more fit for easiest diff
  2. 00:03:252 (3,4) - rhythm here plays pretty awkward imo prob becus the weird rhythm transition there which make 00:04:636 (4) - a bit hard to click it properly , I think this rhythm would make thing plays much more natuaral Okay
    SPOILER
[hard]
  1. 00:02:329 (3,1) - 1/2 spacing are very similiar with 1/1 spacing here 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - , it will make the player a bit confuse here imo so try to make spacing a bit different from each others here like 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - , try increase spacing for 00:01:406 (1,2,3) - a bit ? increase spacing
  2. 00:10:406 (3) - no nc here ? I thought you nc every big white tick here oke
  3. 00:12:944 (2) - I think if you make this slider a 1/1 slider instead it would make the rhythm here sound a bit better imo
    SPOILER
    [img]http://puu.sh/qQegL/93c8fabc5a.jpg%20oke%20[/img]
  4. 00:45:482 (6,1) - this fit for jumps more than 00:45:252 (5,6) - tbh lol so try to make jumps here 00:45:482 (6,1) - instead (move (6) to around x232 y124 ) ? fix
  5. 01:09:559 (2) - cymbal on sliderend , previously i see all you rhythm make the cymbal beat here clickable so this is like the only one place where the cymbal isn't clickable which will make the rhythm here play not really good compare with the preivous one so I think you can try this rhythm instead to make thing play a bit more natural oke change to circle
    SPOILER
    all fix
[insane]
  1. 00:02:675 (4,5) - spacing seems a bit too much and inconsistent with 00:02:329 (3,4) - which make thing play not so good so consider lower spacing here a bit to something like 00:02:329 (3,4) - fixed
  2. 00:10:175 (5) - this 1/4 slider doesn't fit the instrument here , the instrument here doesn't sound that sudden so using 1/4 slider make this feel really weird , i recommend you to use the triplet for this one instead it makes the rhythm play a lots better imo i thinks its fine and playable but oke i change to triplet
  3. 00:41:098 (3,4,5) - minor but i think making the 00:41:675 (4,5) - head the same way as 00:41:098 (3) - would make the flow here a little better i not understand XD my engglish its bad
  4. 00:43:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rhythm feel pretty out of place with the previou ones , previous rhythm you use some slider the emphasis the vocal but for this time it seems like you entirely ignore the vocal here which maek this really out of place so it would be better change some rhythm here to slider to emphasis some vocal here so that it make the rhythm here consistent with the previous one and make thing play more natural oke
  5. 00:45:482 (11,1) - this should have higher spacing than 00:45:251 (10,11) - since (1) sound a lots more emphasized than 00:45:482 (11) - so try this ? (can change (2) placement to your preference)
    SPOILER
    [img]http://puu.sh/qQfqK/1cbded407e.jpgahh%20i%20see%20[/img]
  6. 00:56:309 (4,5) - doesn't this jumps a bit too much ? it make thing play weird imo , try to lower spacing a bit here so try move (5) to around x172 y128 ( might have to change next note placement too oke
  7. 01:12:309 (5,6) - similiar to above all fix
spread from normal to hard can be improve a bit imo i think hard diff has too many 1/4 whiel normal is just only full of basic 1/1 and rhythm 1/2 so it would be better to remove some 1/4 element from hard to make spread a bit better , also the spread from hard to insane is not good too cus insane just full of jumpy pattern while hard has very low jumps pattern so basically what you should do here is
1.remove some 1/4 element on hard to fix spread from normal to hard
2.add more jumps on hard so spread from hard to insane will be better hmm make more jump and remove 1/4 slider oke i will try
Thanks for mod :)
Doyak
osu! Alumni
2,621 posts
Joined November 2012
Doyak
small IRC mod
23:36 ekafjr: senpai :v
23:36 ekafjr: can i ask ?
23:37 Doyak: ofc
23:39 ekafjr: hmm i really woried about spread on my map :v
23:40 ekafjr: can you look my map
23:40 Doyak: Okay
23:40 *ekafjr is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016934 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
23:40 Doyak: loooool that song
23:40 ekafjr: ahh wkkwkw
23:41 Doyak: the song I gave my first bubble ever
23:41 Doyak: so what are you specifically worried about
23:41 ekafjr: spread from normal to hard :V
23:42 ekafjr: its realy dangerous :v
23:43 Doyak: http://puu.sh/qRqlU/773b495e67.jpg
23:44 Doyak: I considered watching this anime after bubbling that map
23:44 Doyak: but this score scared me
23:44 Doyak: so not yet watched xD
23:44 ekafjr: eehhh :V
23:44 ekafjr: you must watching this anime :v
23:45 ekafjr: score it bad but this anime its so fun lol
23:46 Doyak: I think the spread is fine
23:46 Doyak: But the lack of overall structure seems to be more of problem
23:46 ekafjr: really
23:47 Doyak: Yeah, Normal already uses enough 1/2s
23:47 Doyak: and Hard isn't like 1/2 jumps or anything
23:47 Doyak: so it's fine
23:48 ekafjr: yeah but on hard it so many 1/4 slider make but normal just use basic 1/2 slider and 1/1
23:49 ekafjr: its make problem spread from normal to hard by celciuslk lol
23:49 Doyak: 1/4 sliders? I see only few of them lol
23:49 Doyak: Some 1/4s is fine on this song
23:49 Doyak: The song is rather slow
23:50 Doyak: so it's not a weird thing to have some on a Hard diff
23:50 ekafjr: ohh
23:50 ekafjr: then how to make hard is better :v
23:51 ekafjr: maybe i will get modder again ahhaha
23:51 Doyak: Yeah get some modders :D
23:51 Doyak: 00:27:252 (1,2) - some jumps like this doesn't make sense imo
23:52 Doyak: 00:42:021 (1,2) - This should be 3/4slider + something as well
23:52 Doyak: like others
23:52 ekafjr: oke i will reduce it
23:52 Doyak: 00:44:790 (3,4,5) - You can ignore some 1/4s like this as it makes too long trains
23:53 Doyak: 00:46:636 (3,4,5,6) - 00:48:482 (3,4,5,6) - Consecutive circles are demanding so you can slightly reduce the difficulty by replacing some of them into sliders
23:53 ekafjr: oke
23:54 ekafjr: hmm oke
23:54 Doyak: 01:22:809 (6,7,1) - 01:23:809 (3,4,5) - This can be nerfed too if you want some nerf
23:54 Doyak: http://puu.sh/qRqTD/cce19738b3.jpg like this
23:56 Doyak: 00:15:252 (5) - 3/4 slider follows the music better
23:56 ekafjr: fixe
23:57 Doyak: And here's my small advice
23:57 Doyak: If you're mapping a slow song, don't hesitate to make an Easy diff
23:57 Doyak: especially on tv sizes
23:57 Doyak: NHI spread is always dangerous if you can't handle them perfectly
23:58 Doyak: By making an Easy, you can make Normal a bit harder
23:58 ekafjr: oke
23:58 Doyak: which will make it easier to make Hard as well without worrying about spread
23:59 ekafjr: haahah yeah but i cant make easy diff :v
23:59 ekafjr: btw thanks alot doyak :v
23:59 ekafjr: if you want kds you can post it
00:00 Doyak: Alright
00:00 Doyak: I needed some kudosu as well xD
Rizen
1,662 posts
Joined August 2013
Rizen
we talked about the normal in depth for over an hour x)
23:18 *ekafjr is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016935 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
23:18 ekafjr: some one tell me my spread on my map its very woried :v
23:19 ekafjr: but i not understand about it
23:23 Rizen: personally
23:23 Rizen: I find the spread fine
23:23 Rizen: did you reduce the number of 1/4's in hard recently?
23:24 ekafjr: hmm can you give me example :v
23:25 Rizen: I meant, did you recently modify the hard to remove some 1/4 rhythm?
23:26 Rizen: I can give a quick mod if you want
23:26 ekafjr: ohh oke
23:26 ekafjr: yeah i want mod :v
23:27 *Rizen is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016936 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara [Normal]]
23:27 *ekafjr is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016936 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara [Normal]]
23:28 Rizen: 00:11:098 (5) - would make it a 1/2 slider instead
23:28 Rizen: the beat at 00:11:329 - is more important than the one at 00:11:559 - 
23:28 Rizen: also at 00:11:559 - there isn't really an audible sound for an object
23:29 ekafjr: 00:11:098 (5) -if i change to 1/2 but it make rhythm its weird :v
23:30 Rizen: doesn't change the fact that ending the slider 00:11:559 - is weirder
23:30 ekafjr: ohh i see oke fix
23:30 ekafjr: oke
23:32 Rizen: same can be said at 00:13:867 (3) - 
23:33 Rizen: usually for songs, the large white tick has an audible sound that should have an object, but this song has its downbeats at 00:14:098 - 
23:33 Rizen: 1/2 earlier than the large white tick
23:35 ekafjr: oke fix
23:35 Rizen: 00:23:098 (5) - consider moving this back to 00:22:867 - and make it repeat once
23:35 Rizen: it would fit the rhythm better imo
23:36 Rizen: it would also remove the 3/2 rhythm gap at 00:21:713 (4,5) - 
23:37 ekafjr: fix
23:38 Rizen: 00:52:636 (6) - would move this a little bit more to the bottom right direction
23:39 Rizen: like [http://puu.sh/qTK5O/bbdf389428.jpg this]
23:39 Rizen: to have a little bit of consistency with 00:50:329 (2,3) - 
23:40 ekafjr: fix
23:41 Rizen: oh, I have an aesthetics idea
23:41 Rizen: you can totally relate the two slider shapes 00:52:636 (6,1) - 
23:41 Rizen: by reusing the slider shape at 00:54:320 (1) - , copying it then ctrl+h
23:41 Rizen: and replace the slider at 00:52:636 (6) - with it
23:42 Rizen: but for it to work (to keep DS the same), you'll have to move 00:51:713 (4,5) - a little more to the bottom left direction
23:42 Rizen: so it looks like [http://puu.sh/qTKm7/ba47be9627.jpg this] overall
23:43 ekafjr: oke
23:44 Rizen: 00:59:059 (1) - would be nice to bring this a little lower (with the distance snap thing enabled) so it appears to blanket the [http://puu.sh/qTKvd/07d1ed434c.jpg previous slider tail]
23:46 ekafjr: oke
23:47 Rizen: 01:01:059 (4,5,6) - imo, using the same rhythm at 00:57:059 (4,5,6) - would be more suitable
23:47 Rizen: it would then cover the audible beat at 01:01:934 - 
23:49 ekafjr: fix
23:50 Rizen: 01:17:059 (4,5,6) - can do the same thing
23:51 Rizen: 01:13:559 (5) - could blanket the slider head of 01:15:059 (1) -  better
23:52 ekafjr: fix
23:53 Rizen: 01:21:059 (4,5,6) - to be honest, you could probably reuse the structure at 01:19:059 (1,2,3) - and flip 180deg
23:53 Rizen: then rotate 15deg ACW
23:54 Rizen: and then move to somewhere like x:378 y:332
23:55 ekafjr: oke
23:56 Rizen: make sure to adjust the upcoming objects 01:23:059 (1,2,3) - as the DS would of changed
23:56 Rizen: as the spacing would of changed*
23:57 ekafjr: fix
23:59 Rizen: you currently have a file called soft-sliderslide.wav
23:59 Rizen: it only works if you set the hitsounds to Soft1
00:00 Rizen: but you have sections with Soft2 and the slider slide during those sections are audible
00:01 ekafjr: then soft-sliderslide it not used ?
00:01 Rizen: so you could try copying soft-sliderslide.wav and name the copy "soft-sliderslide2.wav"
00:01 Rizen: it is in use
00:02 ekafjr: oke
00:02 Rizen: listen to the sounds during the slider paths of 00:20:790 (3) - vs 00:23:559 (1) - 
00:02 Rizen: you can hear that there is a slider-slide sound for the first one but not the second
00:03 ekafjr: ehh :V
00:04 Rizen: so just duplicate "soft-sliderslide.wav" and call it "soft-sliderslide2.wav"
00:04 Rizen: that'll silence all slider slides in the difficulty
00:04 ekafjr: oke senpai :v
00:05 Rizen: 00:33:252 - missing a clap?
00:06 ekafjr: clap ?
00:06 ekafjr: clap on bluetic
00:07 ekafjr: on white tick just a vocal
00:07 Rizen: ah, yeah my bad
00:07 Rizen: my hearing isn't very good
00:09 ekafjr: ahahha its not problem some modder say that it clap :V
00:09 ekafjr: maybe they not use playback rate 25% :v
00:10 Rizen: 01:10:059 - consider moving this inherited timing point to 01:10:309 - 
00:10 Rizen: ends the kiai better imo
00:10 Rizen: doesn't really make sense at 01:10:059 - as there's no sounds there
00:11 Rizen: or even at 01:10:559 (5) - 
00:11 ekafjr: oke
00:11 Rizen: actually, yeah sounds better ending at 01:10:559 - 
00:13 ekafjr: hmm maybe it not big problem where i use end kiai
00:13 ekafjr: rizen can i ask
00:13 Rizen: not a problem as long as it doesn't end at 01:10:059 - 
00:14 ekafjr: about it 00:11:098 (5) -
00:14 ekafjr: you say use 1/2 slider :v
00:15 ekafjr: but it make long spacing on timeline
00:15 ekafjr: its make problem or not :v
00:16 ekafjr: yeah i know at here 00:13:867 (3) - spacing same with it
00:17 Rizen: may i suggest a different rhythm choice?
00:18 ekafjr: ahh which on is better ?
00:18 ekafjr: idk about it but some modder same with you hahaah
00:19 Rizen: you can add a circle at 00:11:790 (6) - for vocals
00:19 Rizen: would fit as you have mapped vocals like this earlier in the diff at 00:04:406 (4) - 
00:20 ekafjr: oke
00:22 Rizen: and i'll see if I can whip something up for 00:13:867 (3) - 
00:23 Rizen: 00:14:559 (4,5,6) - [http://puu.sh/qTMhD/c8780cf3af.jpg try this rhythm]
00:24 ekafjr: ah maybe i m prefer 1/1 slider for it
00:24 ekafjr: ahh but this sound 00:16:175 (1) - its so strong :v
00:25 Rizen: that's still clickable with the rhythm i suggested
00:28 ekafjr: oke
00:28 Rizen: yeah, that's all :P
00:29 ekafjr: ahh thanks :v
William K
694 posts
Joined January 2013
William K
Hi :3

[General]

Object isn't snapped at Insane diff, see Aimod.

[Insane]

  1. 00:05:098 (1,2) - I think you could try swapping NCs here. I think it'll be more matching if the NC is swapped.
  2. 00:13:636 (3) - I think there should be less emphasis than 00:13:867 (4) - since number 4 feels stronger, and making it simillar to this emphasis, 00:14:790 (2) - , will be a good thing to do too.
  3. In my opinion, this part, 00:01:406 - , is so calm. Try reducing the DS for jumps, maybe. (The sound is so cute XDDD)
  4. 00:35:790 (5) - How about increasing this spacing a bit more? Since there's cymbal in it.
  5. 00:36:252 (1,3) - These blanket seems off. (I think it's better to fix)
  6. 00:51:482 (1,2) - Same spacing? what about making number 2 has a bigger spacing? And emphasizing 01:05:559 (3) - will be better, I think.
That's all, I think. Good luck in ranking. Bye bye :3
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

William K wrote:

Hi :3

[General]

Object isn't snapped at Insane diff, see Aimod. fix XD

[Insane]

  1. 00:05:098 (1,2) - I think you could try swapping NCs here. I think it'll be more matching if the NC is swapped. i think consistance at big white tick it better
  2. 00:13:636 (3) - I think there should be less emphasis than 00:13:867 (4) - since number 4 feels stronger, and making it simillar to this emphasis, 00:14:790 (2) - , will be a good thing to do too. hmm consider still
  3. In my opinion, this part, 00:01:406 - , is so calm. Try reducing the DS for jumps, maybe. (The sound is so cute XDDD) why ?
  4. 00:35:790 (5) - How about increasing this spacing a bit more? Since there's cymbal in it. no before cymbal i have 00:35:444 (3,4) - it can be hard if i increasing spacing
  5. 00:36:252 (1,3) - These blanket seems off. (I think it's better to fix) oke
  6. 00:51:482 (1,2) - Same spacing? what about making number 2 has a bigger spacing? And emphasizing 01:05:559 (3) - will be better, I think.
That's all, I think. Good luck in ranking. Bye bye :3
thanks for mod
Zexous
713 posts
Joined July 2012
Zexous
Very quick lookover

SPOILER
2016-09-05 11:39 ekafjr: senpai
2016-09-05 11:39 ekafjr: can you give sugestion for my map please
2016-09-05 11:40 Zexous: ok
2016-09-05 11:40 ekafjr: aahh thnaks
2016-09-05 11:40 Zexous: do i know you btw
2016-09-05 11:40 ekafjr: this my map
2016-09-05 11:40 ekafjr: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016935 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara]
2016-09-05 11:41 ekafjr: ehh you know me Xd
2016-09-05 11:42 ekafjr: gratz fc first try :v
2016-09-05 11:43 Zexous: 00:01:867 (2) - you might want to try spacing this note farther
2016-09-05 11:43 Zexous: because with the current spacing it's easy to confuse these 00:02:329 (3,4,5) - as 1/2 gap
2016-09-05 11:44 ekafjr: hmm oke
2016-09-05 11:45 Zexous: regarding these patterns 00:38:329 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 
2016-09-05 11:45 Zexous: i know they're spaced the same if you look at the raw numbers, but
2016-09-05 11:45 Zexous: 00:39:252 (3,4) - because these are blanketed on the slider body
2016-09-05 11:45 Zexous: it makes it look like the sliders are a lot closer than these 00:38:329 (1,2) - 00:40:175 (1,2) - 
2016-09-05 11:45 Zexous: do you understand?
2016-09-05 11:47 Zexous: also some blanket fixes 00:40:175 (1,2) - here00:43:867 (1,2) - and here
2016-09-05 11:47 ekafjr: ahh maybe this closer because them re blanket right :v
2016-09-05 11:47 Zexous: yea
2016-09-05 11:47 ekafjr: yeah
2016-09-05 11:47 Zexous: they look closer cause they're blanketed really tightly on each other
2016-09-05 11:47 Zexous: the DS indicator only tells you the differences between the slider end/head
2016-09-05 11:47 Zexous: but if a player were playing through this
2016-09-05 11:48 ekafjr: ohh incresecing spacing maybe will be better :v
2016-09-05 11:48 Zexous: yea
2016-09-05 11:48 Zexous: or arranging the sliders so they're not so closely blanketed on each other
2016-09-05 11:48 ekafjr: oke
2016-09-05 11:49 Zexous: ok that should be all
2016-09-05 11:49 Zexous: gl with map
2016-09-05 11:49 ekafjr: how about it http://puu.sh/r10hl.jpg
2016-09-05 11:49 ekafjr: ahh XD
2016-09-05 11:49 Zexous: that's better
2016-09-05 11:50 ekafjr: oke thanks senpai
2016-09-05 11:51 ekafjr: btw if you want kds you can post it
2016-09-05 11:53 Zexous: nah i barely suggested anything, this doesn't deserve kd lol
2016-09-05 11:55 ekafjr: ahh but this mod i reallly apperiated for it :v
2016-09-05 11:55 Zexous: haha alright
Left
2,156 posts
Joined October 2014
Left
yeah

What I want to say is, making Easy diff is far more helpful to be ranked. I got some opinion from another person, he says this map's normal diff isn't enough to be an easiest diff of this map, cuz so many 1/2 is here :)

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392495 my first ranked map was also 3 diff map, but this map's normal has few 1/2, almost with 1/1 rhythm. so It's enought to be lowest diff. If it wasn't low bpm song, maybe it would be a big issue.

[Normal]
00:08:329 (5,1,2) - can you make it more linear for better look?
00:13:175 (2) - no sound in head, so how about this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6028623
01:17:059 (4) - remove clap in tail

[Hard]
00:42:021 (1,2) - inconsistent rhythm. 00:42:944 (4,5) - like this pls
01:26:059 (3,1) - bad blanket and actually I don't think this slider is nice.

[Insane]
00:35:098 (2,3,4) - nazi thing, but make DS same pls
00:52:636 (4,5,6) - ^
00:42:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - make rhythm consistent with 00:38:329 (1,2,3,4) -

good luck!
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
yaho~

[Normal]

00:13:175 (2) - change to a note at 00:13:636 -

00:17:098 (3,4) - better to flow like this


[Hard]

00:20:559 (2,3,4,5) - do you like this
SPOILER

00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:17:098 (3,4) - use silder
SPOILER

00:20:329 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about pentagon
SPOILER

00:45:944 (2) - how about put(248,80)

01:04:809 (6,7,1,2,3) - maybe
SPOILER
Misure
951 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
from in-game
hello :D
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:675 (4,5,6,1,2) - - since the slider (and flow) is not straight, maybe placing circles like this better for flow
  2. 00:06:713 (5,1) - a little far and sudden compared with things around, maybe a maxinum of 2.0x
  3. 00:07:175 (2,4) - place 4 under 2 rather than right maybe better for flow of 2-3-4
  4. 00:12:944 (2) - 312|28 to make a blanket or something?
  5. 00:26:790 (5,6,1) - the flow not fit here, I mean reverse flow like this
  6. 00:28:867 (6,1) - the same like 00:06:713 (5,1), distance like this fit better imo
  7. 00:30:482 (6,7) - since the slider is like this, placing them on 0|184 could flow better imo
  8. 00:49:867 (3,4) - flow maybe be better if it's something like this
  9. 01:16:059 - NC like this to emphazise the change of rhythm?
  10. 00:09:252 - unused inherited point
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - kinda awkward since distance not matched with rhythm. I can accept 3-1 but plz place 2 farther cautz it makes a bad feeling imo, just as your 1.4x is ok
  2. 00:20:790 (3,4) - ctrl+G better imo. It makes 4 to 5 father but you can have a better flow
  3. 00:21:713 (1,2,3) - better like this for flow
  4. 00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - may be tidier like this, then you have to replace the slider followed
  5. 00:36:021 (5,1) - no need to increase the distance here imo, cautz the slider starts at red kick which may be kinda sudden
  6. 01:06:809 (1) - 248|348 to have a better flow as 3-4-1
  7. 01:16:559 (4) - make it straight to emphazise the increased distance better
  8. 00:09:252 - 01:16:559 - unused inherited points
[Normal]
  1. 00:46:636 (2,3,4,5,1) - maybe you can try this, which is tidier imo
  2. also check the unused inherited points plz
Just suggestions
In fact no important things from me, the mapset is nice
Good luck! :)
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Left wrote:

yeah

What I want to say is, making Easy diff is far more helpful to be ranked. I got some opinion from another person, he says this map's normal diff isn't enough to be an easiest diff of this map, cuz so many 1/2 is here :)

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/392495 my first ranked map was also 3 diff map, but this map's normal has few 1/2, almost with 1/1 rhythm. so It's enought to be lowest diff. If it wasn't low bpm song, maybe it would be a big issue.

[Normal]
00:08:329 (5,1,2) - can you make it more linear for better look? oke
00:13:175 (2) - no sound in head, so how about this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6028623
01:17:059 (4) - remove clap in tail

[Hard]
00:42:021 (1,2) - inconsistent rhythm. 00:42:944 (4,5) - like this pls oke
01:26:059 (3,1) - bad blanket and actually I don't think this slider is nice. change it

[Insane]
00:35:098 (2,3,4) - nazi thing, but make DS same pls fix
00:52:636 (4,5,6) - ^ fix
00:42:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - make rhythm consistent with 00:38:329 (1,2,3,4) - oke

good luck!

moonlightleaf wrote:

yaho~

[Normal]

00:13:175 (2) - change to a note at 00:13:636 - change rtythm

00:17:098 (3,4) - better to flow like this oke


[Hard]

00:20:559 (2,3,4,5) - do you like this ahh i like it
SPOILER


00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this chnge little
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:17:098 (3,4) - use silder nope i prefer circle
SPOILER

00:20:329 (2,3,4,5,6) - how about pentagon no
SPOILER

00:45:944 (2) - how about put(248,80)

01:04:809 (6,7,1,2,3) - maybe
SPOILER

Thanks for mod :)
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Misure wrote:

from in-game
hello :D
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:675 (4,5,6,1,2) - - since the slider (and flow) is not straight, maybe placing circles like this better for flow change a little
  2. 00:06:713 (5,1) - a little far and sudden compared with things around, maybe a maxinum of 2.0x oke
  3. 00:07:175 (2,4) - place 4 under 2 rather than right maybe better for flow of 2-3-4 change a pattern
  4. 00:12:944 (2) - 312|28 to make a blanket or something? no
  5. 00:26:790 (5,6,1) - the flow not fit here, I mean reverse flow like this ?
  6. 00:28:867 (6,1) - the same like 00:06:713 (5,1), distance like this fit better imo oke
  7. 00:30:482 (6,7) - since the slider is like this, placing them on 0|184 could flow better imo hmm consider still maybe
  8. 00:49:867 (3,4) - flow maybe be better if it's something like this oke
  9. 01:16:059 - NC like this to emphazise the change of rhythm? no nc on cymbal its better
  10. 00:09:252 - unused inherited point fix
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:329 (3,1,2) - kinda awkward since distance not matched with rhythm. I can accept 3-1 but plz place 2 farther cautz it makes a bad feeling imo, just as your 1.4x is ok fix
  2. 00:20:790 (3,4) - ctrl+G better imo. It makes 4 to 5 father but you can have a better flow oke
  3. 00:21:713 (1,2,3) - better like this for flow oke
  4. 00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - may be tidier like this, then you have to replace the slider followed change a little
  5. 00:36:021 (5,1) - no need to increase the distance here imo, cautz the slider starts at red kick which may be kinda sudden oke
  6. 01:06:809 (1) - 248|348 to have a better flow as 3-4-1 fix
  7. 01:16:559 (4) - make it straight to emphazise the increased distance better oke
  8. 00:09:252 - 01:16:559 - unused inherited points oke
[Normal]
  1. 00:46:636 (2,3,4,5,1) - maybe you can try this, which is tidier imo fix
  2. also check the unused inherited points plz oke
Just suggestions
In fact no important things from me, the mapset is nice
Good luck! :)
thanks for mod
Last edited by ekafjr , edited 2 times in total.
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr
Update!! Added easy diff from Mako Sakata :)
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
M4M from Mako Sakata's queue
[ Mako's Easy ]
00:59:059 (1,2) - This distance is a little large
nice diff!

[ Normal ]
00:02:329 (2,4) - i think this overlap not really good
00:12:482 - i think when there is a strong beat on the big white line prefer not to keep it with a slider tail.So..how about make this place clickable?
00:17:790 (4) - ↑
nice diff~

[ Hard ]
00:06:021 (3,1) - overlap on the arrow is not good
00:27:713 (2) - there is a strong beat on the line but this slider is a little close to the previous~
00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Though there are no problems but i think its not really a nice pattern
00:46:636 (3,4,5,6) - this flow seems not good?

[ Insane ]
00:12:944 (2) -
try this
00:39:252 (3,4) - this distance is different from the other parts,like00:38:329 (1,2) - 00:40:175 (1,2) -
00:55:559 (2,3,4) - why 2and3 is differnt from 3and4 when they are the same rhythm?
CodeS
1,142 posts
Joined September 2011
CodeS


Hey! M4M Request from your Q!

Here's my mod!





00:10:406 (3) - This should be curved to the other side to make it flow better to the next slider http://i.imgur.com/pwWfw6X.png and while yes, it might seem kinda pointless for an experienced player, remember, this is an easy we're talking about.

00:16:175 (1,2) - Try curving them a bit so they don't look so "off", as most sliders in this part were curve these 2 being straight lines feels weird. http://i.imgur.com/b524YAJ.png

00:21:713 (3) - Lower it to be more in line with 00:20:790 (2) - so it can flow better, it feels off with (3) being so up when you were starting an oval flow from the past 2 sliders. http://i.imgur.com/wiDC3jr.png

01:05:809 (4) - Dangerously out of grid, nothing serious, but again, this is an easy, I would avoid this, especially because is annoying for low resolutions

01:13:059 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/Cpz2tiC.png maybe?

01:19:059 (1) - same as 01:05:809 (4) , actually, I would just move it to the upper area, that way you can avoid the ugly overlap happening with 01:17:059 (4) - , you could even try a blanket, point is, there's no reason for this to be in such an awkward position almost out of grid in the lower area.
SPOILER


Cute and clean diff






OD+1 I mean, why does this diff have the same OD as the easy?
CS: + 0.5 Some patterns look really crowded because of the CS, also, is the same as easy, this would bring closer the gap to the Hard and keep a nice spread.

00:06:944 (3) - Small suggestion to improve flow, move it a bit up to follow the curve of 00:06:021 (2) - better http://i.imgur.com/tnAUzVy.png

00:05:098 (1) - A bit of nazi here, move the third anchor to X:320 Y:68 to make a perfect blanket

http://i.imgur.com/EeOZa5K.png >>>> http://i.imgur.com/DthOP4A.png (I CTR G the 4 for reference)

00:20:790 (3) - Blanket with 00:21:713 (4) - ? http://i.imgur.com/wntncWc.png a straight line and then going up for a curve feels really weird, a blanket could improve the flow

01:20:059 (3) - same suggestion as before, try curving this in direction to 01:21:059 (4) - to improve the flow

Nothing much to say here, as the diff is already very clean.



Pure optional:

AR +0.5 mostly because AR6 does feel kinda... slow? I would preffer AR 7 but that's putting the spread on risk, I believe 6.5 AR would fit better and would still keep it close to the Insane and not so far from the normal, but still, if you wanna keep the NM 4 HR 6 IN 8 is fine too. this is just personal preference


00:29:098 (1,2,3,4) - i see what you're trying to do, but in the way it plays feels... awkward? , try making these note spam a bit more "triangle like"

00:35:329 - The start of this reverse is overmapped, there's literally NOTHING here to click as a beat, this is where the voice ends, but ends in a faint vol, if anything, 00:35:098 (2) - this should be a 1/2 slider, because it makes more sense for a slider to end in 00:35:329 -
00:42:483 (2) - Curve it like you did with 00:40:636 (2) - , curve it in direction of 00:42:944 (3) - (also, this blanket could be improved by moving the third anchor a bit up) http://i.imgur.com/dss9kVB.png


00:51:944 (4) - Nothing too important, but this ALMOST touches the ingame overlay, I would put it a bit higher just to be safe,. http://i.imgur.com/6HMH5af.jpg

Very good diff!




Nothing to say!
This diff is ready to go in my honest opinion, feels good to play

As extra, I would search for someone to double check the Offset, it feels late in some parts

As in all, this is a very clean and awesome map, so there's not much to say here!
Go for ranked!

Sorry if an imgur link doesn't work or a timeline copypaste doesn't fit.

kanor
924 posts
Joined August 2013
kanor
[easy]
01:00:059 (2,3) - DS warning in the Aimod
00:51:252 (3,1) - blanket can be better
01:17:059 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]
how about cs3.2 ? maybe cs3 is a little big and similar with easy and cs3.2 may have a better cs spread for the whole mapset><

GOOD SONG AND NICE MAP! >W<
Shoot !
Hope it can rank! :)
Ryuusei Aika
Elite Mapper
1,085 posts
Joined January 2016
Ryuusei Aika
hi from mako's q~

Mako's Easy
  • 00:03:252 (3) - blanket can be improved
    00:51:252 (3) - ^
    01:17:059 (4) - ^ but here im not sure if u mean to not make a blanket lol
    00:47:559 (3) - stack?
Normal
  • 00:10:406 (4) - try nc here?
    00:12:021 (7) - blanket can be improved
    00:27:252 (1) - ^ just move its tail a little bit down
Hard
  • 00:02:329 (3) - also blanket
    00:28:175 (3) - ^
    01:26:059 (3) - ^
    00:30:252 (5) - since here is a different part with the previous, try to set nc here to avoid probable reading problems would be better
couldnt really find any problems in insane, its good enough imo

overall a nice map! if u would like to fix some aesthetical problems, those low diffs would be better!

gl for rank~
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr
Abhor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

M4M from Mako Sakata's queue

[ Normal ]
00:02:329 (2,4) - i think this overlap not really good fixed
00:12:482 - i think when there is a strong beat on the big white line prefer not to keep it with a slider tail.So..how about make this place clickable?
00:17:790 (4) - ↑ hmm i will consider it
nice diff~

[ Hard ]
00:06:021 (3,1) - overlap on the arrow is not good oke
00:27:713 (2) - there is a strong beat on the line but this slider is a little close to the previous~
00:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Though there are no problems but i think its not really a nice pattern XD maybe if you not like this pattern please give suggestion XD
00:46:636 (3,4,5,6) - this flow seems not good? nope seem fine for me

[ Insane ]
00:12:944 (2) - nope
00:39:252 (3,4) - this distance is different from the other parts,like00:38:329 (1,2) - 00:40:175 (1,2) - oke
00:55:559 (2,3,4) - why 2and3 is differnt from 3and4 when they are the same rhythm? i m not understand senpai XD

kanor

kanor wrote:

[Normal]
how about cs3.2 ? maybe cs3 is a little big and similar with easy and cs3.2 may have a better cs spread for the whole mapset>< oke

GOOD SONG AND NICE MAP! >W<
Shoot !
Hope it can rank! :)


Neanmoins

Neanmoins wrote:

hi from mako's q~

Normal
  • 00:10:406 (4) - try nc here? nope
    00:12:021 (7) - blanket can be improved fixed
    00:27:252 (1) - ^ just move its tail a little bit downalready blanket


Hard
  • 00:02:329 (3) - also blanket already blanket
    00:28:175 (3) - ^ fixed
    01:26:059 (3) - ^ already blanket
    00:30:252 (5) - since here is a different part with the previous, try to set nc here to avoid probable reading problems would be better
couldnt really find any problems in insane, its good enough imo

overall a nice map! if u would like to fix some aesthetical problems, those low diffs would be better!

gl for rank~

Thanks for mod
Zaphkael
289 posts
Joined October 2014
Zaphkael
Also from mako's queue xd

mako ez
00:38:329 (1) - wouldnt these fit better as 1/2 returns? its going to be hard to hit so many notes in a row correctly

this mod is worthless so i dont blame you if you dont mod back
nice one

normal
00:09:252 (2) - could you move this one a bit to the left and play around with some stuff to make ds fit? it looks off to me because 00:08:329 (5,1,2) - i dont like straight lines in maps

00:10:175 (3,4) - is there a reason you stack these but not 00:11:790 (6,7) - these?

00:15:252 (4) - I think this fits the music better but its up to you (just the rhythm, not the mapping itself)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183788

nice

hard
00:17:098 (3,4,5) - this doesnt really follow the music imo, you have the..what is it, synth? that plays the double note

01:16:559 (4) - you could do a little jump here to emphasise it even more

insane
00:09:944 (4) - this note feels out of place since there is nothing to support it

00:15:482 (5,6,7,8,9) - where does this come from?

00:17:098 (3,4,5,6) - there is that nice background rhythm that you ignore to place 1/2 stuff...why?

really good map, good luck!
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Zaphkael wrote:

Also from mako's queue xd

normal
00:09:252 (2) - could you move this one a bit to the left and play around with some stuff to make ds fit? it looks off to me because ehh really but it not looks off for me
00:08:329 (5,1,2) - i dont like straight lines in maps but i like this

00:10:175 (3,4) - is there a reason you stack these but not 00:11:790 (6,7) - these? hmm it just my style

00:15:252 (4) - I think this fits the music better but its up to you (just the rhythm, not the mapping itself)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183788

nice

hard
00:17:098 (3,4,5) - this doesnt really follow the music imo, you have the..what is it, synth? that plays the double note fine for me

01:16:559 (4) - you could do a little jump here to emphasise it even more already emphasize

insane
00:09:944 (4) - this note feels out of place since there is nothing to support it

00:15:482 (5,6,7,8,9) - where does this come from? drum

00:17:098 (3,4,5,6) - there is that nice background rhythm that you ignore to place 1/2 stuff...why? i prefer circle

really good map, good luck!
O-Moei
O-Moei
Filthy modder appeared :3
SPOILER
19:07 ekafjr: om stuff artinya apaan sih
19:07 O-Moei: barang2
19:07 O-Moei: alat2
19:08 O-Moei: gimana kalimatnya ?
19:09 ekafjr: there is that nice background rhythm that you ignore to place 1/2 stuff...why?
19:09 O-Moei: ada ritme belakang yg kau lewatkan untuk menempatkan 1/2 (ritme tadi)...kenapa ?
19:09 O-Moei: xd
19:10 *O-Moei jadi google translator
19:11 ekafjr: gak ngerti ane om wkwkkw
19:12 O-Moei: mngkin ada cara ngemap yg ga sama
19:12 O-Moei: entah
19:13 ekafjr: enggak sih kyaknya itu emng maunya tu modder
19:14 O-Moei: oh ntu modder wkwk
19:15 ekafjr: iya bang wkkwkw
19:19 ekafjr: om
19:19 O-Moei: uy
19:20 ekafjr: ane mau konsultasi wkwkkww
19:20 O-Moei: njer wkwk
19:20 O-Moei: ke spa?
19:21 ekafjr: ehh
19:21 ekafjr: ke lu lah :v
19:24 ekafjr: ayolah om
19:24 O-Moei: aku melihat kok  V:
19:33 ekafjr: wkwkw ayo dah om
19:34 O-Moei: mana
19:34 ekafjr: check map ane yg normal
19:34 O-Moei: ngomong juga kagak
19:34 ekafjr: kwkwkw
19:34 *ekafjr is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016936 Happy Clover - Ashita de Ii kara [Normal]]
19:35 O-Moei: solat dlu bntar
19:35 O-Moei: ane lagi spek org
19:35 ekafjr: oke lagi solat sambil ngespek orang ? wkwkkww
19:38 O-Moei: bukan
19:38 O-Moei: ane solat skalian ni ditinggal nge spek orang, bisi curiga  >:V
19:39 O-Moei: wait
19:39 O-Moei: masih dl njerr  >:V
19:39 ekafjr: jwjwjwjwj
19:39 ekafjr: lama bner njer :v
19:46 O-Moei: done  :3
19:47 O-Moei: diapain ni?
19:47 ekafjr: bntar ya om
19:47 O-Moei: ah tae  >:V
19:49 ekafjr: sok om wkwkkw
19:49 ekafjr: ini si blizs nannya mulu kwkwkw
19:49 O-Moei: okei
19:49 O-Moei: xd
19:51 O-Moei: ummm
19:51 ekafjr: 00:15:252 (4,5) -  aneh gak bang
19:51 O-Moei: tes tes 1 2 3
19:51 ekafjr: rrhythmnya
19:51 ekafjr: dc dc wwwkkw
19:51 O-Moei: enggak
19:51 ekafjr: 00:15:252 (4,5) - ane gak rhythmnya
19:52 ekafjr: klo ane jadiin gini gmna 00:15:252 (4,5) -
19:52 ekafjr: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6183788
19:52 O-Moei: hmm wait
19:53 O-Moei: LOL aku baru mau nyaranin itu  XDXD
19:53 O-Moei: iya, gitu lebih pas, kyk ada beat di biru gitu soalnya
19:54 ekafjr: wkwkwk
19:54 ekafjr: oke
19:54 ekafjr: sekarang hard om
19:54 O-Moei: 00:31:867 (2) -  mirip ini jadinya
19:54 O-Moei: okei
19:55 O-Moei: what's the problem(s) sir ?  :3
19:56 ekafjr: 00:17:098 (3,4,5) - aneh kah
19:56 O-Moei: kalo diliat dari cara eka ngemap sih ga masalah
19:57 O-Moei: wait
19:57 O-Moei: 00:25:406 (1,2,3,4) -  kan mirip ini gap nya
19:59 O-Moei: yep, ga masalah, emng beatnya gitu wktu ane denger didelete juga
19:59 ekafjr: sip dah
20:00 O-Moei: adalagi
20:00 O-Moei: ?
20:00 ekafjr: insane sekarang om
20:00 O-Moei: biarkutebak
20:00 O-Moei: pasti masih sekitar itu
20:01 ekafjr: this note feels out of place since there is nothing to support it
20:01 ekafjr: 00:09:944 (4) -  ane gak ngerti maksudnya apaan wkwkw
20:01 O-Moei: yg mana ?
20:02 ekafjr: 00:09:944 (4) - ini
20:02 O-Moei: nothing to suppport? biasanya maksudnya delete
20:03 O-Moei: oooh ane ngerti
20:03 ekafjr: jadi maksudenya gmana tuh om
20:03 O-Moei: coba periksa di tiap diff
20:03 O-Moei: insane  00:09:944 (4) - 
20:04 O-Moei: Hard 00:09:944  - 
20:04 O-Moei: normal 00:09:944  - 
20:04 O-Moei: di diff normal dan hard ga ada circle, cuma di insane yg ada, brarti note (4) di insane itu termasuk "extra note"
20:05 O-Moei: note yg tidak diperlukan
20:05 O-Moei: but wait
20:06 ekafjr: duh malah off wkwkwk
20:07 O-Moei: jadi maksud dia mah, biar konsisten aja
20:07 O-Moei: dc tadi  XDXD
20:07 ekafjr: di apus gitu
20:07 ekafjr: biar konsisten sama diff lain maksudnya
20:08 O-Moei: ya, kecuali paling enggak hard diisi juga disitu, prasaa ane denger sesuatu disitu
20:08 O-Moei: prasaan
20:09 ekafjr: aneh pdahal dah konsisten ane selalu jadiin circle tiap suara itu keluar
20:09 ekafjr: 00:09:944 (4,4,4) -
20:09 ekafjr: 00:10:290 (6) -
20:09 ekafjr: 00:12:136 (6) -
20:10 O-Moei: 00:10:175 (5,6,1) -  ini bener kyk gini ?
20:10 ekafjr: ya bener
20:10 O-Moei: prasaan sama kyk ini 00:17:559 (5,6,1) -  suaranya
20:10 ekafjr: beda bang
20:11 O-Moei: 00:10:406  - ga denger apa2 disini wktu didelete
20:11 ekafjr: suara drum emng sama
20:11 ekafjr: cuman disini 00:10:406 (1) -  ada vocal
20:11 O-Moei: okei, leh uga
20:11 ekafjr: klo ane ignore gak enak wkwkkw
20:12 ekafjr: dah bereskan yah :v
20:12 O-Moei: okei fine  
20:12 O-Moei: XDXD
20:12 ekafjr: sip
20:12 O-Moei: i need reward kyknya  :V
20:13 ekafjr: terus ini 00:10:406 (1) -
20:13 ekafjr: eh salah ini 00:15:482 (5,6,7,8,9) -
20:13 O-Moei: wait
20:13 ekafjr: where does this come from? kan kampret klo nanya gini
20:13 O-Moei: 01:26:809 (5) -  ga di overlap aja ama 01:26:434 (4) - 
20:14 ekafjr: oke
20:14 O-Moei: 00:15:482 (5,6,7,8,9) -  biarin aja, ini overmapnya pas kok
20:14 O-Moei: gila ntu org  :V
20:15 ekafjr: itu suara kenceng gitu padahal kwkwkw
20:15 O-Moei: yeah absolutely  :V
20:15 ekafjr: sama ini om
20:15 ekafjr: 00:17:098 (3,4,5,6) -
20:15 ekafjr: there is that nice background rhythm that you ignore to place 1/2 stuff...why? ane gak ngerti dah
20:16 O-Moei: yg tadi wkwkw
20:16 ekafjr: eh udah wkwkwkw
20:16 O-Moei: apa ya, mksudnya jga kurang ngerti
20:16 O-Moei: bukannya udh fixing tadi ?
20:17 ekafjr: ohh iya
20:17 ekafjr: balk lagi ke normal om wkwk
20:17 O-Moei: lah  XDXD
20:17 ekafjr: wkwkwk
20:17 ekafjr: ane masih bimbang sama yg ini 00:15:252 (4,5,1) -  wkwkkw
20:18 O-Moei: wait, masih insane 01:18:934  - mayan add circle buat overmap, overmapnya udh kebanyakan lagian
20:18 O-Moei: wkwkw
20:18 O-Moei: oke normal
20:19 ekafjr: gak ada suara disitu wkwkwk
20:19 O-Moei: ya namanya juga overmap, dimana2 udh banyak mayan biar keche  :V
20:21 O-Moei: normal : 01:26:059 (5,1) -  swap nc
20:21 ekafjr: wkwkwk jangan dah om :v
20:21 O-Moei: klo normal ga perlu nc last note buat penutupan soalnya
20:21 ekafjr: swap itu di tuker apa gmana sih wkwkw
20:21 O-Moei: ya
20:22 O-Moei: percaya deh  :VV ane terlalu berpengalaman ngemodding NC  :VV
20:22 ekafjr: ehh beneran
20:22 ekafjr: ane malah itu di saranin sama mako
20:22 ekafjr: jadi ane harus percaya yg mana wkwkkw
20:23 O-Moei: nc mah bisa variasi sih
20:24 O-Moei: bisa ngikut 2 measure, klo ane biasanya variasi
20:24 ekafjr: ohh pantes ane pusing gitu wkwk
20:24 O-Moei: oh ente ngikut 2 measure njerrr
20:24 O-Moei: ywdah ga usah wkwk
20:25 O-Moei: kirain ane variasi wkwk
20:25 ekafjr: jadi ini gmana om 00:15:252 (4,5,1) -  wkwkwk
20:25 ekafjr: lah baru nyadar lu kwkwkw
20:25 *O-Moei kebingungan  XDXD
20:25 ekafjr: jadi gmana nih 00:15:252 (4,5,1) -  wkwkkw
20:26 O-Moei: iya sih rasanya jadi aneh klo pake reverse gitu
20:27 O-Moei: klo kata ane sih tetep aja
20:27 ekafjr: coba deh bayangin klo ane ubah itu jadi reverse
20:27 ekafjr: blue tick jadi ke map
20:27 O-Moei: ga usah dibayangin, udh ane coba  :V
20:28 ekafjr: wkwkwkw ntar kesananya ana juga harus map itu suara :v
20:28 O-Moei: ga usah di reverse dah
20:28 ekafjr: sipp dahh
20:28 O-Moei: jadi umm
20:29 O-Moei: apa yg berubah ?
20:29 ekafjr: dah beres ane ignore semua mod wkwkkwkw
20:29 O-Moei: ane jadi merasa ga ngapa2in  >:'V
20:29 ekafjr: enggak kok ngebantu bnget om wkkwkww
20:30 O-Moei: oke np
20:31 O-Moei: ane cuma ngebantu b inggris doang prasaan wkwk
20:32 ekafjr: enggak om wkwkkw
20:32 ekafjr: makasih dah om :v
Mir
osu! Alumni
2,151 posts
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Mir
From my queue!

Let's get into it.~

Hard

Beats and Notes

  1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

  1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:04:406 (2,3) – Blanket!
  2. 00:06:944 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:09:713 (2,1) - ^
  4. 00:46:175 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:48:021 (2,3) – This isn’t linear.~
  6. 01:26:059 (3,1) – I think if you blanketed this like https://puu.sh/ryEMc/74dfc4bb6b.png it would look better.

Insane

Beats and Notes

  1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

  1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:14:098 (1,3) – Blanket!
  2. 00:24:482 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:25:752 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:38:329 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:43:867 (1,2) - ^
  6. I'd recommend a blanket check.
Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
1,145 posts
Joined January 2015
Agatsu
qqqqqqq

  • Insane

  1. 00:17:675 (6) - if you uncurve this slider a bit, i think it will look better :)
  2. 00:47:559 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:21:713 (1,2) - you could blanket these two
  4. 00:39:252 (3,4) - blanket could be better owo

    Normal

  5. 00:40:175 (3) - make this slider similiar to 00:38:329 (1,2) -
  6. 00:42:021 (1) - ctrl+j?
  7. 00:52:636 (1) - ^

so sorry that was a short mod :[[[[
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Miryle wrote:

From my queue!

Let's get into it.~

Hard

Beats and Notes

  1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

  1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:04:406 (2,3) – Blanket! fix
  2. 00:06:944 (1,2) - ^ not for blanket
  3. 00:09:713 (2,1) - ^ fix
  4. 00:46:175 (2,3) - ^already blanket
  5. 00:48:021 (2,3) – This isn’t linear.~ fix
  6. 01:26:059 (3,1) – I think if you blanketed this like https://puu.sh/ryEMc/74dfc4bb6b.png it would look better. [color=#808000]whoaa nice :v[/color]

Insane

Beats and Notes

  1. All good!

Flow and Gameplay

  1. All good!

Aesthetics and Hitsounding

  1. 00:14:098 (1,3) – Blanket! not for blanket
  2. 00:24:482 (3,4) - ^ fix
  3. 00:25:752 (2,3) - ^ already blanket
  4. 00:38:329 (1,2) - ^ ^
  5. 00:43:867 (1,2) - ^ fix
  6. I'd recommend a blanket check.
Thanks for mod
ekafjr
146 posts
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Topic Starter
ekafjr

Agatsu wrote:

qqqqqqq

  • Insane

  1. 00:17:675 (6) - if you uncurve this slider a bit, i think it will look better :) oke
  2. 00:47:559 (1,2) - ^ nope
  3. 00:21:713 (1,2) - you could blanket these two ^
  4. 00:39:252 (3,4) - blanket could be better owo ^

    Normal

  5. 00:40:175 (3) - make this slider similiar to 00:38:329 (1,2) - hmm change a little
  6. 00:42:021 (1) - ctrl+j? oke
  7. 00:52:636 (1) - ^ nope

so sorry that was a short mod :[[[[
thanks for mod
Kyouren
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Joined October 2012
Kyouren
As request! :3



Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT
[General]
  1. Inconsistent values in video! (Check Mako's Easy diff because in her diff, the video offset is 0 but other diff is 420)
[Easy]
  1. 00:51:252 (3,1) - Maybe you can fix a bit that blanket (karena blanketnya agak miring sedikit).
  2. 01:17:059 (4,5) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:406 (4,1) - Same in Easy diff, blanketnya agak miring sedikit.
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:867 (2,3,1) - Same in Easy diff! blanketnya agak miring sedikit.
  2. 00:04:406 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:05:559 (4,5) - ^
  4. 00:08:790 (1,2) - For me, this flow is confused :(
  5. 00:22:867 (2,3) - Mungkin ini juga digeser ke kanan sedikit agar blanket terlihat bagus.
  6. 00:50:329 (3) - Bagaimana kalau slider ini juga ikut lurus seperti slider yang 1 dan 2.
  7. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Blanketnya diperbaiki, (slider 2 itu digeser ke atas sedikit).
  8. 00:57:559 (2,3) - Blanketnya agar miring sedikit.
  9. 01:07:559 (3,4) - ^
  10. 01:11:559 (2,3) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:867 (1,2) - Spacing is too far and not good for player with doubletime mod.
  2. 00:36:252 (1,3) - Blanket
  3. 00:38:329 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:40:175 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:42:021 (1,2) - ^
  6. 00:43:867 (1,2) - Click Here!
  7. 00:48:482 (3) - Circlenya hampir kena slider head (1), gimana kalau biar jarak sedikit?
  8. 00:49:175 (6) - Flownya gak terlalu bagus. Coba taruh ditengah circle (3,4,5), nanti hasilnya jadi triangle flow.
Overall is good, mungkin hanya perlu diperbaiki blanketnya di hard diff :3

No Kudosu if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
melon boy
278 posts
Joined August 2013
melon boy
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This is spacing ends up about the same as the spacing you use in the kiai. I'd suggest reducing it here to make the chorus stand out more. Also, just generally reducing the spacing (and note density?) of this first calm part.
  2. 00:22:867 (1) - NC could fit here.
  3. 00:44:329 (2) - You may want to make this slider go through the middle of (1)?
  4. 01:26:059 (1) - NC here could also be nice.
  5. 01:27:059 (1) - Playing a bit more with the slidershape could make it look nicer. Suggestion
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:944 (4) - NC
  2. Looks good. Not much to say at all
Lastly, OD3 and HP3 on an easy of this low star rating is unusually high and I suggest reducing them to 2 instead. Additionally, since the normal has a low sr as well, you might want to reduce some of those settings as well. Though I think reducing the HP to 3 should be fine.

Sorry I'm late. Here's the mod ^^
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

KittyAdventure wrote:

As request! :3



Legend:
Black: Not to Important
Red: Is Unrankable
Blue: If not change, I'm ask with other BN and QAT
[General]
  1. Inconsistent values in video! (Check Mako's Easy diff because in her diff, the video offset is 0 but other diff is 420) fix
[Easy]
  1. 00:51:252 (3,1) - Maybe you can fix a bit that blanket (karena blanketnya agak miring sedikit).
  2. 01:17:059 (4,5) - ^
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:406 (4,1) - Same in Easy diff, blanketnya agak miring sedikit fix.
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:867 (2,3,1) - Same in Easy diff! blanketnya agak miring sedikit. dah pas ini om
  2. 00:04:406 (2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 00:05:559 (4,5) - ^ ^
  4. 00:08:790 (1,2) - For me, this flow is confused :( keep aja deh masih enak kok flownya
  5. 00:22:867 (2,3) - Mungkin ini juga digeser ke kanan sedikit agar blanket terlihat bagus. blanketnya ini udah pas om
  6. 00:50:329 (3) - Bagaimana kalau slider ini juga ikut lurus seperti slider yang 1 dan 2. ini dah lurus
  7. 00:55:059 (1,2) - Blanketnya diperbaiki, (slider 2 itu digeser ke atas sedikit).fix
  8. 00:57:559 (2,3) - Blanketnya agar miring sedikit. dah pas
  9. 01:07:559 (3,4) - ^ fix
  10. 01:11:559 (2,3) - ^ keep
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:867 (1,2) - Spacing is too far and not good for player with doubletime mod. keep fine for dt player i am test it
  2. 00:36:252 (1,3) - Blanket yeah its blanket
  3. 00:38:329 (1,2) - ^ fix
  4. 00:40:175 (1,2) - ^ dah blanket
  5. 00:42:021 (1,2) - ^ ^
  6. 00:43:867 (1,2) - Click Here!
  7. 00:48:482 (3) - Circlenya hampir kena slider head (1), gimana kalau biar jarak sedikit? fix
  8. 00:49:175 (6) - Flownya gak terlalu bagus. Coba taruh ditengah circle (3,4,5), nanti hasilnya jadi triangle flow .
Overall is good, mungkin hanya perlu diperbaiki blanketnya di hard diff :3

No Kudosu if my mod is not fixed all!

Good Luck~
Makasih modnya bang
ekafjr
146 posts
Joined July 2015
Topic Starter
ekafjr

Fuccho wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - This is spacing ends up about the same as the spacing you use in the kiai. I'd suggest reducing it here to make the chorus stand out more. Also, just generally reducing the spacing (and note density?) of this first calm part. oke
  2. 00:22:867 (1) - NC could fit here. oke
  3. 00:44:329 (2) - You may want to make this slider go through the middle of (1)? yeah
  4. 01:26:059 (1) - NC here could also be nice. oke
  5. 01:27:059 (1) - Playing a bit more with the slidershape could make it look nicer. Suggestion oke
[Hard]
  1. 00:51:944 (4) - NC oke
  2. Looks good. Not much to say at all
Lastly, OD3 and HP3 on an easy of this low star rating is unusually high and I suggest reducing them to 2 instead. Additionally, since the normal has a low sr as well, you might want to reduce some of those settings as well. Though I think reducing the HP to 3 should be fine.

Sorry I'm late. Here's the mod ^^
All fix thanks for mod :)
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