Aqours - Kimi no Kokoro wa Kagayaiteru kai? · forum

Momochikun

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2016-07-01T00:19:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 6, 2016 at 10:47:06 PM

Artist: Aqours
Title: Kimi no Kokoro wa Kagayaiteru kai?
Source: ラブライブ！サンシャイン!!
Tags: Lovelive! School Idol Project: Sunshine!! xinely no_gu tv size school idol project Inami Anju 伊波杏樹 Aida Rikako 逢田梨香子 Suwa Nanaka 諏訪ななか Komiya Arisa 小宮有紗 Saito Shuka 斉藤朱夏 Kobayashi Aika 小林愛香 Takatsuki Kanako 高槻かなこ Suzuki Aina 鈴木愛奈 Furihata Ai 降幡愛 Takami Chika 高海千歌 Sakurauchi Riko 桜内梨子 Matsuura Kanan 松浦果南 Kurosawa Dia 黒澤ダイヤ Watanabe You 渡辺曜 Tsushima Yoshiko 津島善子 Kunikida Hanamaru 国木田花丸 Ohara Mari 小原鞠莉 Kurosawa Ruby 黒澤ルビィ
BPM: 182
Filesize: 4275kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:

Aqua (4.87 stars, 397 notes)
Gu's Hard (3.26 stars, 264 notes)
Nely's Easy (1.62 stars, 117 notes)
Normal (2.09 stars, 207 notes)

Download: Aqours - Kimi no Kokoro wa Kagayaiteru kai?
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#47ラブライブ！サンシャイン!!

Aqours' 1st Single
- 君のこころは輝いてるかい？ -

Hard - No_Gu
Easy - Xinely
Thanks !!

Last edited by Momochikun 2016-12-11T03:22:44+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-07-02T15:29:45+00:00

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Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2016-07-03T06:35:46+00:00

<3 nice map

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-07-08T10:16:32+00:00

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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2016-07-15T16:44:17+00:00

mantab

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-07-19T14:21:09+00:00

M4M here

[General]
add CVs' names into tags?

[Nely's Easy]
00:12:245 (3) - moving the end point some grids left may look better
00:13:399 (1) - since you're folloing the tune in bgm,it's not good to miss 00:13:729
00:16:036 (1,2) - same as above.I think 00:16:531 is better for a hit than 00:16:696
00:43:234 - worth a note here I think
00:45:047 (1,2) - tooo loose..your easy diff is not an easy "easy" diff imo.so the rhythm here makes a little weird
01:08:454 - better to add a note
01:14:389 (2) - forgot a clap in the end
01:17:356 (2) - ^
01:31:860 (3,1) - making them a line may be better
01:31:860 (3,1) - make it a little more curved to fit 01:34:498 (1) -
01:37:630 (1) - yes I can hear both clap&finish sound in the end.but to be honest they sound bad here.remove any one of them is ok.I personally think finish is better here
01:48:344 (1) - maybe add whistle to the reserve sounds better.and I don't think the shape of the slider make sense

[Normal]
00:23:289 (6) - hmmm finish sounds a little noisy
01:01:531 (2) - whistle?
01:18:179 - you shouldn't miss this strong beat..and it's ok to add a note here in normal
01:24:608 (1) - I feel weird to start here..start at the time point like easy or just map the break may better imo

[Gu's Hard]
01:16:696 (1) - help me add a clap
01:50:981 (1,1) - help me add some green lines to change the volume as your diff

[Insane]
I feel AR is a little high.maybe 8 fits better,or if you think 8 is low,at least turn it down a little
00:07:053 (4) - add a note?
00:30:377 (1,2) - feel the flow here is a little bad
00:38:784 (2,3,4) - 2,3 is near but 3,4 is too far... maybe move 3 right a little and move 4 left a little
00:43:893 (1,2,3) - average spacing may be better
00:57:245 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why not make a stream directly?
01:01:201 (2) - move it down a bit feels better for me
01:06:146 (1,2,3,4) - jumps here make me feel a little confused

[Aqua]
00:07:053 (4) - same with Insane
00:13:069 (5,6) -
00:14:553 (1) - ctrl+g for a better flow imo
00:22:465 (1) - why not follow the drums? since it's the hardest diff I think it's better to cover more notes
01:09:360 (5) - err...the music don't have such snares..and imo it doesn't fit this song either
01:16:366 (5,6,1) - feel a little stuck here..

Last edited by No_Gu 2016-07-21T06:24:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-07-20T15:55:57+00:00

No_Gu wrote:
M4M here

[General]
add CVs' names into tags?

[Nelu's Easy]
我叫Nely啊不是Nelu ;_;
00:12:245 (3) - moving the end point some grids left may look better
00:13:399 (1) - since you're folloing the tune in bgm,it's not good to miss 00:13:729
00:16:036 (1,2) - same as above.I think 00:16:531 is better for a hit than 00:16:696 yep but 00:17:190 - is stronger and i have to map it with 3/2 slider, just ignore that sound to keep make easy rhythm w/o 1/2 gap
00:43:234 - worth a note here I think
00:45:047 (1,2) - tooo loose..your easy diff is not an easy "easy" diff imo.so the rhythm here makes a little weird i guess yes but i dont know what sound i can follow there, all are weak. which i can follow only vocal but i just follow pitch vocal
01:08:454 - better to add a note
01:14:389 (2) - forgot a clap in the end
01:17:356 (2) - ^
01:31:860 (3,1) - making them a line may be better
01:31:860 (3,1) - make it a little more curved to fit 01:34:498 (1) -
01:37:630 (1) - yes I can hear both clap&finish sound in the end.but to be honest they sound bad here.remove any one of them is ok.I personally think finish is better here
01:48:344 (1) - maybe add whistle to the reserve sounds better.and I don't think the shape of the slider make sense

no reply means fixed thank you no gu ~

@mochi : 01:52:300 - mulai dari sini gw merasakan hawa2 bpm changes btw, pianonya ga pas sama whitetick

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sahuang

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Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-07-21T04:19:41+00:00

As promised <3

[Nelu's Easy]

00:27:245 (2,3) - rip blanket
00:33:839 (3,4) - better use a slider imo, in Easy try to avoid 3 circles in a row
00:49:168 (2,3) - DS
01:03:839 (2,3) - blanket
01:03:839 (2,4) - i doubt if this is rankable in Easy? ppl always tell me to avoid such kind of stack in Easy...4's slider head appears before 2's disappear so yeah,quite confusing for newbies to read and click
01:41:751 - add sth here?feels empty cuz gap rule is fine
Finally i noticed that in other diffs they all use 2 spinners to end the song,so for consistency might do that as well?

[Normal]

OD4

00:51:641 (4,5) - i dont quite like this pattern,you know the flow is going the other way round when 4's slider tail is higher than 5's start. i'd rather move 5 up a bit or curve 4 or 5.
01:28:399 (4,5,6) - quite a straight flow,adjust a bit?

[Hard]

00:11:751 (4,1) - the ds is too far away imo.
00:18:179 (4,1) - bl
00:43:564 (1,1) - can have a better shape here
01:08:701 - i think a note here is better for transition.
01:09:278 (2,3,4) - this makes little sense to me,vocal 01:09:443 - is even louder than 01:09:773 - but big jump 01:09:443 (3,4) - is weird...imo just same ds 01:08:784 (1,2,3,4) -
01:28:069 (2,1) - bl
01:54:113 - spinner ends here?

[Insane]

00:15:707 (5,6,1) - the flow kek
http://puu.sh/q8Won/d4af9f1790.jpg try this !
00:45:047 (1) - ctrl+G
Very solid diff

[Aqua]

I remember that i played this before cuz nely recommended to me <3

00:51:311 (5,1) - bl
01:05:487 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i'd like to see a bigger jump here,literally the ds here shouldnt be even smaller than rest part
should be sth like 01:16:696 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
Nice diff

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-07-21T06:25:31+00:00

@Xinely : sorry for my wrong typing :p

Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-07-22T15:17:06+00:00

as requested

[general]
01:59:058 - should end the spinner around here since it's still quite audible
I feel like some whistles or anything would work great on the bells in the intro like 00:04:003 - 00:09:278 - ...
normal hitclap has 3ms of silence at the start http://i.imgur.com/OYmnuez.jpg
=> fixed version: https://puu.sh/qaBpL/d9a447f2d1.wav

[aqua]
00:06:311 - you make all vocals for the intro clickable except this, so it feels off a bit. sth like http://i.imgur.com/UyC3Kys.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/w1Bi5bp.jpg would fit visually and work well.
00:07:795 (7) - sound on the red tick is a bit too strong to ingore it with 3/4, especially since the slider also doesnt really feel like it follows vocals because they start on 00:07:300 (6) - => would use 1/2 slider here
00:09:937 (3) - with how 00:09:113 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - makes such a circular flow, it would feel much nicer if this slider supported it better by leading movement into the next object. currently it's like http://i.imgur.com/HodqoNR.jpg, I'd try sth more like http://i.imgur.com/0dyT67P.jpg it works much better with overall movement (you can basically just rotate this slider 30°)
00:12:740 (4) - how about ctrlg on this? gives the vocal a nice jump/angle and doesnt effect the patterns after. stack feels a bit unfitting here
00:21:806 (3) - the whole section uses rather big spacing, sop this feels a bit out of place since it's not weaker musically or anything, could use more spacing.
00:28:564 (4) - yes it follow the vocals fine, but skips such an audible drum which makes it feel weird to play to me
00:32:190 (2) - making this into 2 circles would fit better with all those vocals
00:33:839 (4) - 1/2 slider would still fit the vocal and not ingnore drum. could also maybe nc this for emphasis if you want I think. or make both sliders since you usually do that for those vocals..
00:42:410 (1) - how baout this comboing to follow vocals? http://i.imgur.com/lJjVyyl.jpg
00:43:893 (1,2,3) - this plays so awkward since you increase spacing to jump onto a really slow slider making for weird mommentum changes. even spacing would play much nicer
00:51:311 (5) - would look so nice if you rotated it like -10° lol
01:07:135 (1) - wouldnt placing it like http://i.imgur.com/F99Ingi.jpg follow the pattern better ?
01:14:718 (3,4) - why the sudden low spacing? it seems more like your 3/4 slider spacing. see no reason to lower it here with the clap and all
01:16:696 (1) - even if the angle already gives soem emphasis, spacing feel way too low for such a vocal, you could fo sth like http://i.imgur.com/jXu7MuF.jpg
01:18:674 (4,5,6) - now this could really use bit less spacing since the 1/4 spacing is so much higher than all the others you used

[insane]
00:20:981 (4) - how about sth like http://i.imgur.com/3wjS7RN.jpg to give it a bit more spacing to fit overall spacing here and guitar better?
00:21:806 (3,4) - higher spacing should be on 3, not 4. that works nicer with the guitar . sth like http://i.imgur.com/Sb0TcF8.jpg
00:32:190 (2) - rhythm thing like on extra
00:34:993 (2,3) - ctrlg on this rhythm still works with the drums but follows vocals so much better
00:37:053 (2) - why is this mapped? I can't hear anything on it and you didnt even map it on extra lol
00:41:009 - ^similar, even though I guess there might be some minor sound here. still makes me question why it's not done on extra, which is supposed to be harder then too :d
00:47:520 (6) - no idea why this suddenly gets higher spacing. if you want that, then it would work better on 5 due to kick/whistle, or just use even spacing
00:53:619 (3,4) - rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/slEyAxW.jpg works nicer with clicking vocals
00:54:773 (3,1) - this rhythm seems weird in general with how it suddenly puts the strongest things on sliderends. at least 00:55:597 - should be clickable with cymbal+vocal
00:57:575 (1,2) - no 1/4 sliders to follow that noise? seems weird cause you mapped it on 00:57:245 (2) -
01:54:113 (1) - ends 1/4 earlier than all other diffs lol

[gu]
just a personal thing: I really dislike perfectly stacked 1/1 on hards since I think it impacts readability a bit. I understand it'S for visuals, but I just think it doesn'T work that well for this level of difficulty, on spots like 00:38:289 (4,1) - etc.
00:28:893 (4,1) - i dont understand why 4 gets rather huge spacing, but 1 doesnt, feels a bit unfitting with how strong 1 is in comparison. how about sth like http://i.imgur.com/qfYJqcC.jpg // similar for 01:32:190 (4) -
00:34:168 (5) - even if it's just a sliderjump, it feels a bit huge compared to the whole section. you could do sth like http://i.imgur.com/cIYgcvl.jpg which keeps the strcuture but has more reasonable spacing
00:48:344 (2) - could make this a 1/4 repeat since the drums are quite strong
01:08:454 (4) - similar. I think utilizing a few more 1/4 rhythms would be much better for the spread
01:54:278 (1) - could mute the end of thise / 5% volume
really like the way this is structured!

[normal]
00:48:344 (2,3,4,5,6) - i feel like this rhythm can be reduced a bit, it's so much harder than than the other parts of this sectuib. simply making 00:48:344 (2) - a 1/2 reverse would already be nice http://i.imgur.com/m7vkHB5.jpg
01:19:333 (1) - 01:21:970 - could add a spinner here. it follow the held vocal and makes it less empty
seems fine

[nely]
00:12:245 (3) - is this really needed? only 1/2 slider in the whole diff ; /
01:19:333 (1) - same spinner suggestion as normal
01:50:981 (1,2,3) - how about arranging this so 3 is in the center of the screen= would be great for this last circle of the map
guess diff is fine but I relly dislike that single 1/2 slider lol

gl

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-07-28T15:21:05+00:00

sahuang wrote:
As promised <3

[Nelu's Easy]
fuckhuang
00:27:245 (2,3) - rip blanket
00:33:839 (3,4) - better use a slider imo, in Easy try to avoid 3 circles in a row consider it first, imo those musics are strong so i need circle
00:49:168 (2,3) - DS
01:03:839 (2,3) - blanket
01:03:839 (2,4) - i doubt if this is rankable in Easy? ppl always tell me to avoid such kind of stack in Easy...4's slider head appears before 2's disappear so yeah,quite confusing for newbies to read and click its fine slider's head isnt something that showing combo at that place and insta dissapear when you arrive to the tail
01:41:751 - add sth here?feels empty cuz gap rule is fine spinner recovery rules
Finally i noticed that in other diffs they all use 2 spinners to end the song,so for consistency might do that as well?

Lasse wrote:
[nely]
00:12:245 (3) - is this really needed? only 1/2 slider in the whole diff ; / music forces me to do 8(
01:19:333 (1) - same spinner suggestion as normal ah but i prefer break since this song is a bit longer than tv size length, newbie might feel tired in this time
01:50:981 (1,2,3) - how about arranging this so 3 is in the center of the screen= would be great for this last circle of the map already changed to spinner xD
guess diff is fine but I relly dislike that single 1/2 slider lol

gl

thanks

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-07-29T06:14:52+00:00

ecks dee

[General]
hm so with metadata i think ur correct about kagayaiterukai being one word but there shouldn't be a space before the question mark
http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/LACM-14400
also add gders to tags :v
not sure where u got this mp3 from but i can hear a very obvious cutting error in the music. the section 01:19:333 (1) - 01:24:608 (2) - gets repeated twice 01:24:608 (2) - 01:29:882 (3) - and you can really tell its cut when playing it ;w;
heres an example if u dont believe me https://youtu.be/FIpgc-pI5mM?t=1m25s u can hear the section doesnt get repeated
maybe you could find someone that knows how to cut mp3s to remove this 01:19:333 (1) - 01:24:608 (2) - section for u :p

[Aqua]
00:02:850 (1,2) - can u reduce distance here? feels really awkward to jump to. plus u have 00:05:981 (2,3) - with much less distance
00:11:586 (2,1) - spacing here is really small in comparison
00:21:641 (2,3) - personally i think this deserves more distance since you are emphasising the guitar
00:29:223 (1,3) - fix blanket
00:34:992 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm here so vocals and kick drum dont start on a slider end
00:39:113 (4,5) - this should be 3/4 if u want to be consistent. like 00:28:564 (4,5)
00:39:773 (1,2) - use of extended slider is a little awkward here since theres nothing really to emphasise with it. plus i also expected it here 00:41:091 (1,2,3) - except you use 1/2 rhythm here
00:51:311 (5,1) - blanket?
00:56:586 (3) - nc this too?
00:57:245 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole stream feels really forced becos there is nothing supporting it in the music. like eg there are no drum beats except for 00:57:904 (1) - and the slider here 00:57:410 (3) - is pretty much mapped to nothing 1/4 worthy
00:59:388 (1) - 01:00:871 (3) - just my opinion but beats like these dont deserve finishes. in comparison to a beat like 01:02:025 (1) - where there is actually a big accent in the music
01:06:146 (1,2,2,2,3,1) - shouldnt you be using whistles to represent the vocals here? i find using finishes to do this quite jarring
01:19:663 (2,3) - reduce distance here and increase here 01:19:992 (3,4) - so that clap doesn't have smallest ds. or you could even it out
01:27:080 (7,2) - fix blanket
01:54:113 (1) - u should extend this spinner to 01:54:113 (1) - as it is the more important beat to have a hitsound for and move 01:54:113 (1) - forward 1/4 tick

[Insane]
00:15:707 (5,6,1) - flow is somewhat linear here, can you try avoid this?
00:31:531 (4) - rotate by -70 degrees? makes flow nicer and also gives the clap some extra ds http://puu.sh/qikLR/799606ae75.jpg
01:06:146 (1) - should use whistles instead of finishes imo
01:37:630 (1,3) - blanket
01:51:064 (1) - same thing with the spinners as what i wrote for extra

im lazy w
hope this helped tho. gl!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2016-07-29T08:19:13+00:00

i found this mp3 somewhere on the youtube (i forgot) and i thought it was a cut ver so i just use it for my map as i didn't cut it myself. re-cutting the mp3 could cause a quite significant change on the song so i wouldn't rather do it as it would bother the gd'er for remapping. also it's already fine by now imo
also thanks for the metadata confirmation, i will remove the space before the question mark after the next update, together with the tags ~~that was so much im fkin lazy omg xD~~

~~i'll check and edit this with the reply of mod soon, thanks before !~~

edit : still not finished

sahuang wrote:
As promised <3

[Normal]

OD4
00:51:641 (4,5) - i dont quite like this pattern,you know the flow is going the other way round when 4's slider tail is higher than 5's start. i'd rather move 5 up a bit or curve 4 or 5.
01:28:399 (4,5,6) - quite a straight flow,adjust a bit?

[Insane]
00:15:707 (5,6,1) - the flow kek it's fine imo xD
http://puu.sh/q8Won/d4af9f1790.jpg try this !
00:45:047 (1) - ctrl+G nope,
Very solid diff

[Aqua]

I remember that i played this before cuz nely recommended to me <3
00:51:311 (5,1) - bl ok
01:05:487 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i'd like to see a bigger jump here,literally the ds here shouldnt be even smaller than rest part okk
should be sth like 01:16:696 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
Nice diff

No_Gu wrote:
M4M here

[General]
add CVs' names into tags?

[Normal]
00:23:289 (6) - hmmm finish sounds a little noisy
01:01:531 (2) - whistle?
01:18:179 - you shouldn't miss this strong beat..and it's ok to add a note here in normal
01:24:608 (1) - I feel weird to start here..start at the time point like easy or just map the break may better imo

[Insane]
I feel AR is a little high.maybe 8 fits better,or if you think 8 is low,at least turn it down a little used 8.7
00:07:053 (4) - add a note?
00:30:377 (1,2) - feel the flow here is a little bad
00:38:784 (2,3,4) - 2,3 is near but 3,4 is too far... maybe move 3 right a little and move 4 left a little since there're fnish at 4
00:43:893 (1,2,3) - average spacing may be better
00:57:245 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why not make a stream directly?
01:01:201 (2) - move it down a bit feels better for me okay
01:06:146 (1,2,3,4) - jumps here make me feel a little confused

[Aqua]
00:07:053 (4) - same with Insane doesnt need it imo
00:13:069 (5,6) -
00:14:553 (1) - ctrl+g for a better flow imo ok
00:22:465 (1) - why not follow the drums? since it's the hardest diff I think it's better to cover more notes i want to follow instruments here
01:09:360 (5) - err...the music don't have such snares..and imo it doesn't fit this song either idk i just like it xD
01:16:366 (5,6,1) - feel a little stuck here.. changed

Lasse wrote:
as requested

[general]
01:59:058 - should end the spinner around here since it's still quite audible i find the timing on the end is still complicated so i'll delay this until oi got fixed timing
I feel like some whistles or anything would work great on the bells in the intro like 00:04:003 - 00:09:278 - ... i dislike finish + whistle tbh
normal hitclap has 3ms of silence at the start http://i.imgur.com/OYmnuez.jpg
=> fixed version: https://puu.sh/qaBpL/d9a447f2d1.wav thanks !

[aqua]
00:06:311 - you make all vocals for the intro clickable except this, so it feels off a bit. sth like http://i.imgur.com/UyC3Kys.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/w1Bi5bp.jpg would fit visually and work well. i want to keep it 1/1 break so the next one will be on slider start
00:07:795 (7) - sound on the red tick is a bit too strong to ingore it with 3/4, especially since the slider also doesnt really feel like it follows vocals because they start on 00:07:300 (6) - => would use 1/2 slider here i cant hear anything at the redtick so i think 3/4 is acceptable here
00:09:937 (3) - with how 00:09:113 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - makes such a circular flow, it would feel much nicer if this slider supported it better by leading movement into the next object. currently it's like http://i.imgur.com/HodqoNR.jpg, I'd try sth more like http://i.imgur.com/0dyT67P.jpg it works much better with overall movement (you can basically just rotate this slider 30°) fixed, good idea
00:12:740 (4) - how about ctrlg on this? gives the vocal a nice jump/angle and doesnt effect the patterns after. stack feels a bit unfitting here it flows weird imo
00:21:806 (3) - the whole section uses rather big spacing, sop this feels a bit out of place since it's not weaker musically or anything, could use more spacing. it made square pattern with 3 4 5
00:28:564 (4) - yes it follow the vocals fine, but skips such an audible drum which makes it feel weird to play to me lul
00:32:190 (2) - making this into 2 circles would fit better with all those vocals 1/2 slider is better imo
00:33:839 (4) - 1/2 slider would still fit the vocal and not ingnore drum. could also maybe nc this for emphasis if you want I think. or make both sliders since you usually do that for those vocals.. idk i want to keep these as notes different with the others
00:42:410 (1) - how baout this comboing to follow vocals? http://i.imgur.com/lJjVyyl.jpg nope, i'd like to separate them per 3 notes
00:43:893 (1,2,3) - this plays so awkward since you increase spacing to jump onto a really slow slider making for weird mommentum changes. even spacing would play much nicer am i the only one who think it's plays cool.. idk
00:51:311 (5) - would look so nice if you rotated it like -10° lol
01:07:135 (1) - wouldnt placing it like http://i.imgur.com/F99Ingi.jpg follow the pattern better ? changed this one
01:14:718 (3,4) - why the sudden low spacing? it seems more like your 3/4 slider spacing. see no reason to lower it here with the clap and all what do you mean ? it's already pretty far o.o
01:16:696 (1) - even if the angle already gives soem emphasis, spacing feel way too low for such a vocal, you could fo sth like http://i.imgur.com/jXu7MuF.jpg yea fixed this one
01:18:674 (4,5,6) - now this could really use bit less spacing since the 1/4 spacing is so much higher than all the others you used fixed

[insane]
00:20:981 (4) - how about sth like http://i.imgur.com/3wjS7RN.jpg to give it a bit more spacing to fit overall spacing here and guitar better?
00:21:806 (3,4) - higher spacing should be on 3, not 4. that works nicer with the guitar . sth like http://i.imgur.com/Sb0TcF8.jpg
00:32:190 (2) - rhythm thing like on extra
00:34:993 (2,3) - ctrlg on this rhythm still works with the drums but follows vocals so much better
00:37:053 (2) - why is this mapped? I can't hear anything on it and you didnt even map it on extra lol
00:41:009 - ^similar, even though I guess there might be some minor sound here. still makes me question why it's not done on extra, which is supposed to be harder then too :d
00:47:520 (6) - no idea why this suddenly gets higher spacing. if you want that, then it would work better on 5 due to kick/whistle, or just use even spacing
00:53:619 (3,4) - rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/slEyAxW.jpg works nicer with clicking vocals
00:54:773 (3,1) - this rhythm seems weird in general with how it suddenly puts the strongest things on sliderends. at least 00:55:597 - should be clickable with cymbal+vocal
00:57:575 (1,2) - no 1/4 sliders to follow that noise? seems weird cause you mapped it on 00:57:245 (2) -
01:54:113 (1) - ends 1/4 earlier than all other diffs lol

[normal]
00:48:344 (2,3,4,5,6) - i feel like this rhythm can be reduced a bit, it's so much harder than than the other parts of this sectuib. simply making 00:48:344 (2) - a 1/2 reverse would already be nice http://i.imgur.com/m7vkHB5.jpg
01:19:333 (1) - 01:21:970 - could add a spinner here. it follow the held vocal and makes it less empty
seems fine

gl

Pentori wrote:
ecks dee

[General]
hm so with metadata i think ur correct about kagayaiterukai being one word but there shouldn't be a space before the question mark
http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/product/LACM-14400
also add gders to tags :v
not sure where u got this mp3 from but i can hear a very obvious cutting error in the music. the section 01:19:333 (1) - 01:24:608 (2) - gets repeated twice 01:24:608 (2) - 01:29:882 (3) - and you can really tell its cut when playing it ;w;
heres an example if u dont believe me https://youtu.be/FIpgc-pI5mM?t=1m25s u can hear the section doesnt get repeated
maybe you could find someone that knows how to cut mp3s to remove this 01:19:333 (1) - 01:24:608 (2) - section for u :p

[Aqua]
00:02:850 (1,2) - can u reduce distance here? feels really awkward to jump to. plus u have 00:05:981 (2,3) - with much less distance k
00:11:586 (2,1) - spacing here is really small in comparison it's fine imo
00:21:641 (2,3) - personally i think this deserves more distance since you are emphasising the guitar doesnt make difference
00:29:223 (1,3) - fix blanket fixed
00:34:992 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm here so vocals and kick drum dont start on a slider end good idea
00:39:113 (4,5) - this should be 3/4 if u want to be consistent. like 00:28:564 (4,5) nope
00:39:773 (1,2) - use of extended slider is a little awkward here since theres nothing really to emphasise with it. plus i also expected it here 00:41:091 (1,2,3) - except you use 1/2 rhythm here idk just feel like it tbh, since 1/1 seems too long for this part
00:51:311 (5,1) - blanket?
00:56:586 (3) - nc this too? nope, it has same vocals as before
00:57:245 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole stream feels really forced becos there is nothing supporting it in the music. like eg there are no drum beats except for 00:57:904 (1) - and the slider here 00:57:410 (3) - is pretty much mapped to nothing 1/4 worthy b..but is extra ><, will consider it
00:59:388 (1) - 01:00:871 (3) - just my opinion but beats like these dont deserve finishes. in comparison to a beat like 01:02:025 (1) - where there is actually a big accent in the music it's fit imo
01:06:146 (1,2,2,2,3,1) - shouldnt you be using whistles to represent the vocals here? i find using finishes to do this quite jarring
01:19:663 (2,3) - reduce distance here and increase here 01:19:992 (3,4) - so that clap doesn't have smallest ds. or you could even it out i u se small distance there to emphasize jump
01:27:080 (7,2) - fix blanket
01:54:113 (1) - u should extend this spinner to 01:54:113 (1) - as it is the more important beat to have a hitsound for and move 01:54:113 (1) - forward 1/4 tick

[Insane]
00:15:707 (5,6,1) - flow is somewhat linear here, can you try avoid this? changed this a bit
00:31:531 (4) - rotate by -70 degrees? makes flow nicer and also gives the clap some extra ds http://puu.sh/qikLR/799606ae75.jpg i copied from before lul
01:06:146 (1) - should use whistles instead of finishes imo
01:37:630 (1,3) - blanket okay
01:51:064 (1) - same thing with the spinners as what i wrote for extra will consider since the timing isn't final yet

im lazy w
hope this helped tho. gl!

still editing..

Kibbleru

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5,844 posts

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Kibbleru 2016-08-11T01:47:11+00:00

choked at kiai

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Danii

250 posts

Joined September 2015

Danii 2016-08-21T18:38:52+00:00

hi with pleb help with timing from modreqs
Imo in the end of song timing should be something like

this

I'm not sure only the last section, because the last bit (on which have to finish the last spinner) is not so much to define exactly what BPM needs here. Anyway, there must be somewhere 151-152 BPM
I'm so sorry if this "help" will not helped you by nothing
good luck!

Momochikun

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Topic Starter

Momochikun 2016-08-23T13:56:57+00:00

I'm not exactly using the same timing as you do, but i do use it as reference and at last now it's already fine for playing imo.
thankyou very much !

also kibb thanks for playing :3

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-08-23T15:07:01+00:00

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Mint

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Joined February 2013

Mint 2016-08-26T17:48:44+00:00

[General]

add tag lolololol (up to you) 高海千歌(CV.伊波杏樹) , 桜内梨子(CV.逢田梨香子) ,
松浦果南(CV.諏訪ななか) , 黒澤ダイヤ(CV.小宮有紗) ,
渡辺曜(CV.斉藤朱夏) , 津島善子(CV.小林愛香) ,
国木田花丸(CV.高槻かなこ) , 小原鞠莉(CV.鈴木愛奈) ,
黒澤ルビィ(CV.降幡愛)
Please confirm the metadata. The title/artist/source look fine to me, but I cannot find anything official regarding romanization. Since I do not have any Japanese language skills, please consult a native Japanese staff member on this topic.

[Nely's Easy]

00:12:245 (3) - 1/2 sliders are usually discouraged from using, to the point being unrankable when paired with low SV. I feel that this is the case here, especially the way you set it up, with 00:12:245 (3,4,1) - being quite difficult to read for the easiest difficulty of the set. I hope you reconsider the rhythm usage here.
00:14:058 (2,3) - Visually, look awfully close due to the slider body being really close to (2). If you prefer, you could bend the curve a little more to avoid this.
01:14:389 (2,3) - Strange to skip the cymbal in between these two? You used 3/2 so much to emphasize the circles, yet completely skipping this. Slightly confusing to me D:
I found the density a bit imbalanced in this difficulty. Especially in calmer parts and the beginning, quite a bit of 1/1 was used in one go, however when I switch to the KIAI, I can only find 3/2 and 1/1 slider spam with only occasional 1/1 circles popping through. This leaves parts like 01:03:839 (2,3,4) - under emphasized, due the instruments and the vocal being important.
A bit same as the Normal difficulty, the break feels too long for my taste... ~~cut songs shouldnt have these type of break at all imo but w/e lolololol~~

[Normal]

To be frankly honest, I didn't feel the break was needed at all. Not only does this create an inconsistency throughout your own difficulties, I simply do not find the need seeing the songs' length (cut version).
01:31:036 (3) - Finish.

[Gu]

The jumps do fit the spread, but feel inappropriate for a Hard difficulties at some times, I would prefer a nerf on the following jumps. You may keep some of them, with sufficient explanation. 00:11:421 (3,4,1,2,3) - (not even kiai uses so many jump in one row, due to overlap hard to read too) // 00:23:289 (2,3,4) - (suggest scaling down pattern to 2.1~2.3x) // 00:33:839 (4,5) - (still a calmer part of the song and spacing feels exaggerated for this part in general) // 00:48:839 (1,2,3) - (same feeling, while player can profit from slider leniency, due to player still needing to move quite a bit up to actually catch slider, making (2) a bit far imo)
Rest of the jumps look fine, but the placement seems rather inconsistent. The first half of the map contains quite a number of jumps, while the second half of the map (including KIAI time) only features little to no jumps at all. The other parts are amazing though, as usual.
01:31:036 (3) - Finish.
01:39:113 (1,1,1,1) - While it's probably more your style, having some sort of movement between this will make it more consistent with the beginning pattern and the pattern right after this (01:46:860 (1,1,1) - ).

[Insane]

00:54:773 (3,1) - Object placement is rather deceiving, read this as 3/4 instead, especially since some 3/4s are spaced in this difficulty. Not sure what to feel about having that finish offbeat either, it really affects the build-up D:
01:02:850 (1,2) - These kind of 1/4 spacing is not even used in the Extra difficulty. I hope you can make this a bit more doable.

[Extra]

When I compare the difficulty settings, I found that the OD setting is pretty low compared to the rest? You use quite a high amount of HP and the AR9.3 is also used. If you decide to change this, don't forget to change the other difficulties accordingly.
00:11:091 (1,2,1,2) - I assume you are following the intensity increase in the song itself, therefore I expected every (1,2)-sequence to gradually increase in spacing. This is currently not the case and I don't really see what else you could follow with these.
00:14:223 (4,5) - Kinda expected this jump to be bigger than (3,4)? The snare on (5) seems more prominent than the two kicks.
00:17:850 (1,2) - Not sure why these suddenly have an SV decrease, while stuff like 00:28:564 (4,5) - remain untouched? (also if you decide to change this, it might also cause a NC inconsistency)
00:42:410 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - According to the song, a 1234 or 1212 pattern fits much more, considering both vocal & instrument track. You might want to consider redesigning these patterns, or changing NC style.
00:50:157 (7,1) - 01:49:003 (3,4) - Interesting to ignore the actual 1/4s here, while some are overmapped like 00:15:954 (2) - 01:09:360 (4) - . You might also want to reconsider these overmaps - they work for emphasis and you are free to keep them with a good explanation.
00:55:597 (1,2,1,2) - I feel that these could use a tiny nerf, since the instruments aren't that loud at all for that distance? 00:56:256 (1,2,3,4) - after this seems fine though.
01:06:146 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Didn't find the jumps here too intuative either. The pattern should reset at the finish, which is currently at 01:06:641 (2) - .
01:11:091 (6,1) - I would really prefer if you moved these closer, especially seeing every other 3/4 pattern in this difficulty. Some of the 1/2 jumps even use this spacing.
01:13:234 (3,4) - The idea of putting an extended slider here works fine, but I would consider changing (4) into two sliders instead. A new vocal syllable, including a snare, can be found on the slider end. Having these sounds offbeat might not be the best decision here.
After testplaying I found that quite a lot of the patterns were heavily based on the right-side of the screen (if you cannot see this from play point of view, try to do CTRL+A in the editor). Even with so many jumps and flow changes I feel that it can get a bit repetitious if you only use one side of the screen. I really hope you can change this, because I know you have the skills to do so.
Interesting to see you mapping Expert difficulties now. Even though I cannot fully agree with the mapping meta right now, I think it's good to step out of your comfort zone every now and then. Your style kinda reminds me of Fycho!

I would prefer if you got a few more mods before attempting to call me back.
Good luck for now!

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2016-09-13T09:22:17+00:00

appleeaterx wrote:
[Gu]
00:11:421 (3,4,1,2,3) - 1,2,3,4 is a process of being more and more strong,and next part they have strong finish sound so I placed such patterns.but as you say that,make them closer
00:23:289 (2,3,4) - ok
00:33:839 (4,5) - both heads have strong sound so I did this,anyway make a little change
00:48:839 (1,3) - these are both strong finish sounds,so I think it's ok to make jumps.if you think 00:48:839 (1,2) - is big,it's ok to move 2 to 1's blanket,but I think it will break the flow for 2&3
Rest of the jumps look fine, but the placement seems rather inconsistent. The first half of the map contains quite a number of jumps, while the second half of the map (including KIAI time) only features little to no jumps at all. The other parts are amazing though, as usual.hmm...after reseeing it,I think only the first seconds in kiai may be more jumps,other jumps are fine in hard imo..
01:31:036 (3) - Finish.hmm I personally it's not strong enough to have a finish so I placed a whistle before
01:39:113 (1,1,1,1) - While it's probably more your style, having some sort of movement between this will make it more consistent with the beginning pattern and the pattern right after this (01:46:860 (1,1,1) - ).k

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Thank you for mod!

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2016-09-24T12:43:09+00:00

After some consideration, i remove the extra diff and renamed my insane to aqua to indicate the highest difficulties. Since in the start i feel the diff itself was overdone and i dont feel like moving it to the ranking section after all. I hope you understand

Also for the break on the normal diff, i think it's just to fit the easy diff as xinely add a break on her diff. so the lower diffs will have a break for consistency, i can map it if she did map hers after all.

other stuffs were fixed except finish in normal, i'll call you back after getting some mods. thanks :3

updated my diff and gu's

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-09-24T13:33:32+00:00

fixed all. thanks apple

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Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2016-10-07T01:54:50+00:00

http://image.prntscr.com/image/e02fd916 ... 82fb4a.png
There is no way her skirt goes through the... "middle section". And if those are her panties, totally bad style XDD anyways I'm from modreqs

General

Apparently, one or more of the diff's tags is inconsistent, so you need to check what is. I can't find it in modding assistant.

Aqua

00:04:003 (3,1) - These two notes sound exactly the same in the song, but 3 doesn't have any jump, 1 does. And no, the 1.7xDS between 2 and 3 isn't really a jump since 2 is a slider and the player will just leave the slider a little earlier so, you probably should move the three more out in my opinion.

00:10:267 (4,5) - I see how you mapped a jump because the slider on 5 has vocals vs 4, but you don't put jumps on vocals usually most of the time, and the pitch is relatively the same and there's nothing else I see that would allow for a jump.

00:11:421 (1,2,3) - Would prefer to distance the two more from the 1 and 3 more from the 2 because it makes it makes more sense considering the spacing is gradually getting bigger, I think it makes sense.

00:14:388 (4) - I think this deserves a slider rather than 00:14:553 (1) , it just doesn't make sense to me. Plus the jump between 4 and 1 is a lot for no reason that I can see right now.

00:15:047 (2,3) - Since the two slider is dropoff flow, the spacing between 2 and 3 is really small.

00:15:377 (3,4) - From what I see, there's no reason to have a jump here, other than the fact that other things would be either ugly or it wouldn't work with flow, but I still think it's worth it to change.

00:23:454 (6,7) - Jump is big compared to how similar 6 and 7 are. 0.8 spacing difference is a lot, I'm not saying make them same distance, but I would say maybe 0.3-0.4 DS difference would be better fitting.

00:29:223 (1,3) - Doesn't look like a true blanket try x:182, Y:252

00:32:850 (4,1) - Again, distance is a little too big for what the song says. I think it deserves a jump but not so big. http://prntscr.com/cqrmxp

00:40:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - This comboing is weird and pattern is weird too, I don't know why you chose to do it this way. Could you explain it a little bit please?

00:43:893 (1,2,3) - Distance is low for how much energy is there, SV is fine imo.

01:44:718 (4,5) - Don't see a very good reason for this jump here, it's a calm section of the song. The pitch doesn't allow for that much of a jump, perhaps reduce it please?

Gu's Hard

00:06:641 (1,1) - This seems like a big distance for a hard, it's 2.2 DS, and it's a little big imo. Maybe reduce a little please?

00:09:278 (3,4) - The distance from 3 to 4 seems like too much and no reason behind it... 2-3 deserves this I think, but not 3-4.

01:09:773 (4,1) - This is more than some of the jumps in the insane... this is really big jump for a hard. Reducing would be best.

Normal

I didn't see anything wrong here!

Nely's Easy

Big problem here. The deal is, with how much 1/2 in normal, that's fine for normal. But that means easy needs to have a little bit of it, and you have basically no 1/2 in the easy (I know you have 1 or 2, but that's not enough). So, I would recommend adding some 1/2 to the easy, specifically during the chorus would be the best.

Other than that, great map!~

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-10-07T03:01:05+00:00

Easy.
01:15:212 - It was a little awkward to get this rhythm ignored. Mind changing your rhythms here to make it expresssed?

Normal.
00:13:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The whistle hitsounds feel a little bit abused this section. While the usage was relatively consistent, there are some difference of the pitch of the sound you expressed. Those all being expressed as a single normal-whistle was a bit less interesting. Maybe you can remove some of them at places such as 00:14:388 - 00:15:047 - 00:16:366 (1) - 00:17:520 - which isn't that high than other spots.

Hard.
01:09:773 (4,1) - This jump feels a little too agressive considering the overall level of this diff, and the intensity of that part of the song.

Aqua.
01:03:179 (2,3,1) - 01:04:498 (2,3,1) - Check the overlaps of these patterns. The first (2,3) has no overlap while the later one has. The first (3,1) has an overlap while the later one doesn't. While the overall concept of these patterns was similar, that inconsistency felt low in completeness.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-10-07T11:33:35+00:00

sonnyc : blame mochi, i already mapped that lol

Osuology : we cant add 1/2 in easy for high bpm

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Osuology

528 posts

Joined February 2014

Osuology 2016-10-07T15:55:39+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Osuology : we cant add 1/2 in easy for high bpm

OK, I didn't think about that. Sorry!

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-10-08T09:20:01+00:00

Osuology wrote:
Gu's Hard
00:06:641 (1,1) - This seems like a big distance for a hard, it's 2.2 DS, and it's a little big imo. Maybe reduce a little please?it's 1/1,fine for me

00:09:278 (3,4) - The distance from 3 to 4 seems like too much and no reason behind it... 2-3 deserves this I think, but not 3-4.yes you're right

01:09:773 (4,1) - This is more than some of the jumps in the insane... this is really big jump for a hard. Reducing would be best.reduced the spacing

Sonnyc wrote:
Hard.
01:09:773 (4,1) - This jump feels a little too agressive considering the overall level of this diff, and the intensity of that part of the song.reduced the spacing

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Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2016-10-09T10:00:47+00:00

Osuology wrote:
http://image.prntscr.com/image/e02fd916d8624ed49ddd5f15d482fb4a.png
There is no way her skirt goes through the... "middle section". And if those are her panties, totally bad style XDD anyways I'm from modreqs lol

General
Apparently, one or more of the diff's tags is inconsistent, so you need to check what is. I can't find it in modding assistant. fixed

Aqua
00:04:003 (3,1) - These two notes sound exactly the same in the song, but 3 doesn't have any jump, 1 does. And no, the 1.7xDS between 2 and 3 isn't really a jump since 2 is a slider and the player will just leave the slider a little earlier so, you probably should move the three more out in my opinion. it's already fine imo, players cant recognize that one

00:10:267 (4,5) - I see how you mapped a jump because the slider on 5 has vocals vs 4, but you don't put jumps on vocals usually most of the time, and the pitch is relatively the same and there's nothing else I see that would allow for a jump.

00:11:421 (1,2,3) - Would prefer to distance the two more from the 1 and 3 more from the 2 because it makes it makes more sense considering the spacing is gradually getting bigger, I think it makes sense. remapped both

00:14:388 (4) - I think this deserves a slider rather than 00:14:553 (1) , it just doesn't make sense to me. Plus the jump between 4 and 1 is a lot for no reason that I can see right now. it's makes sense as there're high sound

00:15:047 (2,3) - Since the two slider is dropoff flow, the spacing between 2 and 3 is really small. not really

00:15:377 (3,4) - From what I see, there's no reason to have a jump here, other than the fact that other things would be either ugly or it wouldn't work with flow, but I still think it's worth it to change.

00:23:454 (6,7) - Jump is big compared to how similar 6 and 7 are. 0.8 spacing difference is a lot, I'm not saying make them same distance, but I would say maybe 0.3-0.4 DS difference would be better fitting. i use bigger jump for emphasizing the sound

00:29:223 (1,3) - Doesn't look like a true blanket try x:182, Y:252 done

00:32:850 (4,1) - Again, distance is a little too big for what the song says. I think it deserves a jump but not so big. http://prntscr.com/cqrmxp

00:40:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - This comboing is weird and pattern is weird too, I don't know why you chose to do it this way. Could you explain it a little bit please? tbh i just feel like doing it this way lol xD

00:43:893 (1,2,3) - Distance is low for how much energy is there, SV is fine imo. added jump

01:44:718 (4,5) - Don't see a very good reason for this jump here, it's a calm section of the song. The pitch doesn't allow for that much of a jump, perhaps reduce it please? keeping for now

Other than that, great map!~

Sonnyc wrote:
Normal.
00:13:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - The whistle hitsounds feel a little bit abused this section. While the usage was relatively consistent, there are some difference of the pitch of the sound you expressed. Those all being expressed as a single normal-whistle was a bit less interesting. Maybe you can remove some of them at places such as 00:14:388 - 00:15:047 - 00:16:366 (1) - 00:17:520 - which isn't that high than other spots. actually i copy it from insane so.. idk xD

Aqua.
01:03:179 (2,3,1) - 01:04:498 (2,3,1) - Check the overlaps of these patterns. The first (2,3) has no overlap while the later one has. The first (3,1) has an overlap while the later one doesn't. While the overall concept of these patterns was similar, that inconsistency felt low in completeness. got it, i'll make them consistent then

Thanks guys !
also changed title's romanization to fit current qualified map, updated :3

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2016-11-16T16:25:01+00:00

[Nely's Easy]

01:54:134 (1) - Seems this spinner unsnapped? Move to it a bit imo.

[Normal]

01:54:134 (1) - Same

[Gu's Hard]

00:11:751 (4,2) - 這兩個note在Hard diff裡跳的稍遠了，而且又有遮蓋，建議還是拉近點。
00:49:333 (2) - 雖然知道減速了，但這個距離..
01:01:201 (2) - 移到397 89左右附近位置使跳的小一點。
01:54:139 (1) - Same

[Aqua]

01:54:139 (1) - Same

Nothing to say that, cool set looks good.

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

Momochikun 2016-11-17T00:00:14+00:00

Fixed my diffs, waiting for others

thanks sb !

Yuii-

2,503 posts

Joined July 2013

Yuii- 2016-11-17T00:01:57+00:00

Poke me once it's bubbled, Momo! I owed you a mod anyway~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2016-11-17T01:12:49+00:00

mochi benerno ae iku mek spinner

thanks xiao chuan

No_Gu

2,954 posts

Joined January 2011

No_Gu 2016-11-17T12:45:31+00:00

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smallboat

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smallboat 2016-11-20T04:03:42+00:00

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Yuii-

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Yuii- 2016-11-21T16:49:52+00:00

Hi there! Popping because of rhythm issues on Gu's Hard. Overall, the map is very well done but the objects are not following the music properly.

Easy

polarity in the very beginning on the map is quite hard to judge and it can be very misleading to some newbie players, the fact that you are mapping so many different snaps altogether in only one section ends up in something very tricky for them. i would kindly ask you to replace some rhythms with sliders/denser sections so it becomes more intuitive.

01:06:146 - section feels quite awkward with the current rhythm as there are many things that are not being represented properly as well as having (2) placed in a rather questionable spot and not following the vocals/beats correctly. could you work on this little section a little bit?
same happens to 01:14:718 (2) - but not in the same way, since there's something map right after (2). something else could be added before it, though.
01:46:366 (2) - and here you have a similar problem to what i mentioned before too. you use this same rhythm many times throughout the map and it doesn't feel correct because the main part of the vocals gets completely ignored, so it feels like the main melody isn't getting properly mapped.
01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - add a circle there instead of the spinners and then move the spinner 1/2 later. that way clickable stuff gets to be represented!

Normal

00:43:069 (2) - not sure what you are trying to map with this slider, i feel like it should be moved to 00:42:904 - in order to follow the vocals better and then adding a circle on 00:43:399 - as there's a really strong sound on that beat that marks a nice build-up in the music.
01:03:509 (1,3) - felt pretty weird to have these with the tail unmapped when you are using 1/2 sliders later on, i guess you didn't map 1/2 slider+circle for the sake of vocals, right?
01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - same as Easy!

Really glad to see a Normal difficulty being mapped this way, I like it a lot.

Hard

00:06:641 (1,1) - jump feels unnecessary, to be honest. the 1/1 transition across the screen is rather unpredictable for players after that intro.
01:04:168 (4,5) - throughout the whole map, stacked are being used as a way of telling players there's a 1/1 break within them. same with 01:08:454 (4,1) - it loses all way of emphasis whatsoever. consider unstack and go with the overlap as every other 3/4 pattern.
01:14:882 (2) - what is this slider representing? sounds kind of weird, to be fair. have you tried that instead? follows the song in a more accurate way.
01:16:696 (1) - spinner ends at a very peculiar spot, i'd say. 01:17:850 - that seems like a better timestamp to end it and then adding a 2-circles-jump at 01:18:179 - or rather one slider in order to represent the music better.
01:18:839 - once again, map picks up at a random spot, this section as a whole needs a slight remap in terms of rhythm. if you did the suggestion stated above, i'd highly recommend you to actually apply them.
01:30:707 (3,4,1) - once again rhythm issue. vocals píck up at 01:31:036 - and the slider is placed on the downbeat where is nothing really landing there. there are many ways of representing this section but the current one just feels like misplaced, consider something similar to this; you can also try to change my (2) purple to two circles so "doki-doki" in vocals gets more protagonism.
01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - add a circle there instead of the spinners and then move the spinner 1/4 later. that way clickable stuff gets to be represented!

Map is actually very nice, but rhythm feels quite random on some spots, could you work on that?

Insane

00:03:509 (2,3) - weird to see them spaced like this when the emphasis put on (3) is considerably high. i'd have preferred a ctrl+g on (3) or at least more spacing between them
00:08:784 (3,4,1) - angle here is pretty sharp and it doesn't flow good, unfortunately. it also creates an anti-jump on (1) and the shape of the slider doesn't help either. i feel like this whole pattern could be changed in order to improve the overall flow. re-arranging things here would be appreciated
00:12:245 - are you sure about this extended slider?
00:32:190 (2,3) - making this more readable would be very nice, you are using very similar 1/2 slider+slider patterns that it could be so easily misread.
00:36:476 (4,5) - there should be a slider here for consistency. besides, the stack makes it kind of hard to read as you have been placing only stacked triplets so far that makes it tedious to play. even though i would prefer a slider for both vocals, symmetry and consistency, if you want to keep the circles consider unstacking them.
00:38:784 (2,3,4) - being picky over here, but i think it's worth mentioning two things. first one being overall emphasis you might want to check that, i really think (2,3) should be the ones spaced out rather than (1,2); and second is the nazi one: why does (2) have the same slidershape as the other two sliders when it has a completely different connotation in the bgm?
00:55:597 (1,2,3) - waaaay too snap-y. transition plays quite poor due to the unexpect linear transition, breaks with the flow way too much. would consider a different way of representing this pattern, such as this for example.
01:54:139 - should be clickable!

Kiai felt pretty cool for the most part.

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Call me back for the rebubble! Really cool mapset, hope this gets ranked asap.

Xinely

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Xinely 2016-11-23T04:41:05+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
Hi there! Popping because of rhythm issues on Gu's Hard. Overall, the map is very well done but the objects are not following the music properly.

Easy

polarity in the very beginning on the map is quite hard to judge and it can be very misleading to some newbie players, the fact that you are mapping so many different snaps altogether in only one section ends up in something very tricky for them. i would kindly ask you to replace some rhythms with sliders/denser sections so it becomes more intuitive. if you can mention them it would be great since i feel they are fine here as following main sounds only

01:06:146 - section feels quite awkward with the current rhythm as there are many things that are not being represented properly as well as having (2) placed in a rather questionable spot and not following the vocals/beats correctly. could you work on this little section a little bit?
same happens to 01:14:718 (2) - but not in the same way, since there's something map right after (2). something else could be added before it, though.
01:46:366 (2) - and here you have a similar problem to what i mentioned before too. you use this same rhythm many times throughout the map and it doesn't feel correct because the main part of the vocals gets completely ignored, so it feels like the main melody isn't getting properly mapped. if you have some ideas to work them then sure. my main point in here is on redtick i mapped on slider's tail because i dont want make 3/2 gap anymore so i use 3/2 slider repeat to keep the gap snapping is 1/1
01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - add a circle there instead of the spinners and then move the spinner 1/2 later. that way clickable stuff gets to be represented! basically i follow mochi's normal diff and the insane diff itself mapped with slider's tail which isnt clickable. if mochi fixed this then i do :3

thanks yuii ~

@mochi : eh lek misal e spinner diakhir iku kon kasih circle sek yo fixed diff ku sisan

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2016-11-26T10:18:07+00:00

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Momochikun

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Momochikun 2016-11-27T10:10:12+00:00

Yuii- wrote:
Hi there! Popping because of rhythm issues on Gu's Hard. Overall, the map is very well done but the objects are not following the music properly.

Normal

00:43:069 (2) - not sure what you are trying to map with this slider, i feel like it should be moved to 00:42:904 - in order to follow the vocals better and then adding a circle on 00:43:399 - as there's a really strong sound on that beat that marks a nice build-up in the music. i map the 1/1 snare section
01:03:509 (1,3) - felt pretty weird to have these with the tail unmapped when you are using 1/2 sliders later on, i guess you didn't map 1/2 slider+circle for the sake of vocals, right? yes, it gives the triplet feeling somehow
01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - same as Easy! same reason, i dont want to add it because the timing is weird, prefer to make it consistent across the diffs
Really glad to see a Normal difficulty being mapped this way, I like it a lot.

Hard

00:06:641 (1,1) - jump feels unnecessary, to be honest. the 1/1 transition across the screen is rather unpredictable for players after that intro.
01:04:168 (4,5) - throughout the whole map, stacked are being used as a way of telling players there's a 1/1 break within them. same with 01:08:454 (4,1) - it loses all way of emphasis whatsoever. consider unstack and go with the overlap as every other 3/4 pattern.
01:14:882 (2) - what is this slider representing? sounds kind of weird, to be fair. have you tried that instead? follows the song in a more accurate way. drums, its fine with slider imo
01:16:696 (1) - spinner ends at a very peculiar spot, i'd say. 01:17:850 - that seems like a better timestamp to end it and then adding a 2-circles-jump at 01:18:179 - or rather one slider in order to represent the music better.
01:18:839 - once again, map picks up at a random spot, this section as a whole needs a slight remap in terms of rhythm. if you did the suggestion stated above, i'd highly recommend you to actually apply them. he want to actually covering the drum here so its fine imo
01:30:707 (3,4,1) - once again rhythm issue. vocals píck up at 01:31:036 - and the slider is placed on the downbeat where is nothing really landing there. there are many ways of representing this section but the current one just feels like misplaced, consider something similar to this; you can also try to change my (2) purple to two circles so "doki-doki" in vocals gets more protagonism.
01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - add a circle there instead of the spinners and then move the spinner 1/4 later. that way clickable stuff gets to be represented!
Map is actually very nice, but rhythm feels quite random on some spots, could you work on that?

Insane

00:03:509 (2,3) - weird to see them spaced like this when the emphasis put on (3) is considerably high. i'd have preferred a ctrl+g on (3) or at least more spacing between them not a big problem, of course the spacing is different coz one is 1/1 when the other is 1/2 ?
00:08:784 (3,4,1) - angle here is pretty sharp and it doesn't flow good, unfortunately. it also creates an anti-jump on (1) and the shape of the slider doesn't help either. i feel like this whole pattern could be changed in order to improve the overall flow. re-arranging things here would be appreciated the angle things here is fine tbh, i feel orz
00:12:245 - are you sure about this extended slider? yes
00:32:190 (2,3) - making this more readable would be very nice, you are using very similar 1/2 slider+slider patterns that it could be so easily misread. its not hard to read considering the ar imo
00:36:476 (4,5) - there should be a slider here for consistency. besides, the stack makes it kind of hard to read as you have been placing only stacked triplets so far that makes it tedious to play. even though i would prefer a slider for both vocals, symmetry and consistency, if you want to keep the circles consider unstacking them. unstacked
00:38:784 (2,3,4) - being picky over here, but i think it's worth mentioning two things. first one being overall emphasis you might want to check that, i really think (2,3) should be the ones spaced out rather than (1,2); and second is the nazi one: why does (2) have the same slidershape as the other two sliders when it has a completely different connotation in the bgm? they did on purpose actually, somehow i want the snare with higher spacing
00:55:597 (1,2,3) - waaaay too snap-y. transition plays quite poor due to the unexpect linear transition, breaks with the flow way too much. would consider a different way of representing this pattern, such as this for example. nice idea !
01:54:139 - should be clickable! i prefer no because the timing is weird
Kiai felt pretty cool for the most part.

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Yuii-

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Yuii- 2016-12-02T13:06:56+00:00

Hi again! Excuse me for the super long wait, I was having some issues with my computer. Really, really sorry about this.

Xinely wrote:
Easy

polarity in the very beginning on the map is quite hard to judge and it can be very misleading to some newbie players, the fact that you are mapping so many different snaps altogether in only one section ends up in something very tricky for them. i would kindly ask you to replace some rhythms with sliders/denser sections so it becomes more intuitive. if you can mention them it would be great since i feel they are fine here as following main sounds only - Let me try to reword it differently so you can understand it to why it is confusing on this type of difficulty. It all comes down to the amount of different snaps you have during the first section of the map (that's from 00:02:190 - to 00:10:762 - ). It's beyond acceptable and it's about visuals and rhythm. But not the rhythm about "not following what it's important in the song, you actually did a great job on that.. basically, how hard is to notice certain notes in time. Instead of all these snaps, you can try to replace circles with longer sliders/or rather a more dense rhythm. It might look way more complex if you analyze the map in the Editor, but it will play way more easily for newbie players. Here's an idea http://i.imgur.com/Bxzy1Ti.jpg . It's all about rhythm simplification and trying to be as nice as possible when it comes to polarity on low difficulties.

01:06:146 - section feels quite awkward with the current rhythm as there are many things that are not being represented properly as well as having (2) placed in a rather questionable spot and not following the vocals/beats correctly. could you work on this little section a little bit?
same happens to 01:14:718 (2) - but not in the same way, since there's something map right after (2). something else could be added before it, though.
01:46:366 (2) - and here you have a similar problem to what i mentioned before too. you use this same rhythm many times throughout the map and it doesn't feel correct because the main part of the vocals gets completely ignored, so it feels like the main melody isn't getting properly mapped. if you have some ideas to work them then sure. my main point in here is on redtick i mapped on slider's tail because i dont want make 3/2 gap anymore so i use 3/2 slider repeat to keep the gap snapping is 1/1 - There is really no reason to do 3/2 gaps anymore. to be honest, I am not expecting you to create more complexity to the map when it comes to rhythm because that would contradict to what i said abotu the beginning of the difficulty. for example, for section like 01:06:146 - instead of having that slider snapped to... what is it snapped to? It's a very weird rhythm and that's the reason why i HAD to mention it; because it just feels very out of place. anyway, for the section i mentioned, you could try to make 2 sliders, one from 01:06:476 - to 01:06:970 - and the other one from 01:07:300 - to 01:07:795 - . even though you would still be ignoring 01:08:124 - it'd make more sense as you would be giving newer players a little break. I think this is a rather "global" problem with the difficulty. some sliders not following the music properly that result in a huge mislead in terms of rhythm. try to fix this if possible :3
01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - add a circle there instead of the spinners and then move the spinner 1/2 later. that way clickable stuff gets to be represented! basically i follow mochi's normal diff and the insane diff itself mapped with slider's tail which isnt clickable. if mochi fixed this then i do :3 - I will talk to her about these.

Momochikun wrote:
Hard

00:06:641 (1,1) - jump feels unnecessary, to be honest. the 1/1 transition across the screen is rather unpredictable for players after that intro. - this still remains as unsolved. just drag 00:02:850 (1,1,1,1) - that whole pattern to the right by a considerable amount of pixels and that should solve it. that way the distance/jump is way more achievable.
01:14:882 (2) - what is this slider representing? sounds kind of weird, to be fair. have you tried that instead? follows the song in a more accurate way. drums, its fine with slider imo - agree but at the same time i disagree on this one. it's like, that tail has a lot of potential of being a clickable object and it's being overshadowed by the slider because of a very, very weak drum sound on its head. consider this point again, or rather, picking up a new rhythm from the one i proposed.
Map is actually very nice, but rhythm feels quite random on some spots, could you work on that?

Insane

00:03:509 (2,3) - weird to see them spaced like this when the emphasis put on (3) is considerably high. i'd have preferred a ctrl+g on (3) or at least more spacing between them not a big problem, of course the spacing is different coz one is 1/1 when the other is 1/2 ? - that is not what i wanted to say, to be honest. I do understand the visual aspect of making 1/1 and 1/2 different, that's perfectly fine and i agree with you! what i meant was that emphasis could be added to (3) someway. i proposed a ctrl+g because it maintains a similar structure. but let me explain you why i recommended this: 00:05:157 (5,1) - and 00:07:795 (7,1) - have the same musical connotation and they are being emphasised in the map, so why not doing that for 00:03:509 (2,3) - either?
00:12:245 - are you sure about this extended slider? yes - why, though? you are not doing that anywhere else on this first section.
00:32:190 (2,3) - making this more readable would be very nice, you are using very similar 1/2 slider+slider patterns that it could be so easily misread. its not hard to read considering the ar imo - hey, it is not about a problem with the approach rate but rather with how things are being mapped after this pattern, just look at how similar it is compared to everything else after a slider, right? yes, they all look very, very similar, let me give you some examples: 00:34:498 (1,2) - 00:35:157 (4,5) - and more. i think what you did on the kiai is way more accurate and fun to play than this pattern in particular when it comes to reading 1/4 patterns. so yeah, something different would be appreciated.

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[General]

01:50:981 - 01:54:139 - nope, timing isn't weird at all, if timing would be weird you wouldn't have placed those spinners because they'd be mistimed. it also feels very awkward to have a double spinner without anything else in the lower difficulties. maybe for the insane is ""acceptable"", but still it gives a false security on the lower ones. either place a circle or make the first spinner a slider.

[Easy]

00:20:322 (4,1) - rhythm here could be imrpoved, slider (1) is holding a lot of distinct sounds in the background music that should be represented.
01:30:212 (1) - since there's no audio before this circle, it's easy to get a 100. It's usually a good idea to start with a slider for stuff like this. Try to start mapping a little earlier that this beat.

[Normal]

01:18:344 - can we please make this clickable? i wanted to click it when i testplayed it!!
01:34:168 (4,5) - rhythm is a bit tricky here, especially with the amount of loud hitsounds audible in this section. would you consider changing (5) to only one circle in 01:34:828 - ?

[Hard]

00:09:278 (3,4,5,6) - hitsounds here are way too overdone/loud for no apparent reason, would be nice if you keep it calm as the other difficulties are doing it!
00:22:795 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2) saying "hey, this is a 1/2 pattern" and then you go straight up to the jumps when those weren't introduced earlier in the map is actually huge, would consider a decrease in spacing, like http://i.imgur.com/RCNLtJQ.jpg that for example, just move (3)!
00:28:564 (3,4,1) - spacing here is weird, would appreciate if you actually emphasise 00:29:223 (1) - instead of (4). yes, the emphasis on vocals isn't bad, but it takes out way too much protagonism to (1) later on. same happens to 00:59:882 (2,3) - , try reducing it.
01:03:674 (1,2,3) - consistency would be very appreciated on 01:04:828 (1,2) - . it'd be an acceptable case of "overmapping" if you want to call it like that.

[Insane]

00:08:784 (3,4,1) - let me re-explain myself better. angle isn't weird, actually, i don't know why i mentioned it, my bad completely. but i still htink you could try to add a lot of emphasis as there's a big change in the background music presented onto (1), build-up is starting there so more spacing is nice to properly represent what's in the song, right? so what about something like http://i.imgur.com/u0E3DYw.jpg that?
00:45:047 (1,3) - overlap stands out way too much, it might look even ugly, would recommend if you would separate them.
00:55:597 (1,2,3) - pattern remains unchanged, please fix!
01:14:882 (2,1) - i don't tend to go full nazi on blankets, but this pattern in particular would play very, very good as a blanket-ed pattern.

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