1. Calm (1,38 stars, 85 notes)
2. Shmik's Serenity (2,01 stars, 108 notes)

Stamby wrote:

Hi, M4M

General

Easiest diff must have "Easy" on its name to make it rankable (Ranking Criteria § Mapset)

Guest mappers's names must be added to the tags (Ranking Criteria)

Kiai is too short, it should last from 00:25:421 to 01:14:267 to match the music better

Timing sounds ok

Skin was well chosen, I liked it

Consider adding song-related tags so people will be able to find the map easily in the listings (e. g. Lee Hee-ah 이희아 - name of the pianist; "piano", etc) added

I would set the volume lower at the end of the map to match the song's audio level

Imakuri: Shmik's diff is the highest level in the mapset, so unless you have created the skin yourself or made some work on the mp3, mapset must be submit by the one who put 'the most effort' on every set. You should try making another difficulty or else ask Shmik to add it to their pending list to make it rankable.

Calm

Not much to say here, it's quite well mapped thanks

01:35:613 (1) - This spinner feels off the song no

Shmik's Serenity

01:36:190 - Why not place a circle here instead of a slider? It feels overmapped no it's rankable


Well, sorry for not going into detail with this map but it seemed good overall, besides metadata and diff levels. Hitsounds are well placed too.

Cya, good luck

Stamby wrote:

Imakuri: Shmik's diff is the highest level in the mapset, so unless you have created the skin yourself or made some work on the mp3, mapset must be submit by the one who put 'the most effort' on every set. You should try making another difficulty or else ask Shmik to add it to their pending list to make it rankable.

Shmiklak wrote:

Stamby wrote:

Imakuri: Shmik's diff is the highest level in the mapset, so unless you have created the skin yourself or made some work on the mp3, mapset must be submit by the one who put 'the most effort' on every set. You should try making another difficulty or else ask Shmik to add it to their pending list to make it rankable.

It's fine, I did only my diff. And btw Ima why did you reply for me? :/

Shmiklak wrote:

I told about this 01:36;190 - :v

Synk1337 wrote:

Easy mod (Calm) :

01:35:805 (1) - I personally don't like the spinner... fixé à contre coeur

00:25:421 (1) - Kiai for 1sec ? looks weird pas besoin de changer c'est rankable

00:49:267 (4) - You should put first combo on this note, same for 01:13:882 (7) - fixé

Nothing much to say your map is pretty good mapped

Parachute wrote:

Hey, heres a mod :3

Calm
Some things i found weird in this diff:
00:34:652 (3) - This slider is honestly weird XD, I think you should make the last red point a normal sliderpoint and make the slider overall more beautiful. Fixed
But also i would kinda like to let the slider end at 00:35:805 - and make another circle at 00:36:190 - to map the piano right there. No, it's pretty fine for me
00:42:729 (3) - This slider maybe make it look straigt to the right? I think it looks better with the next slider (better blanket and flow) ofc, fixed !
01:20:805 (1,2,3) - Another thing that was kinda weird imo. You rarely use hitsounds and then here soooo much. I would remove the claps on the reverses fixed
01:36:190 (3) - Here i would do a clap at the end of this slider to make a nice ending sound You're right, so, fixed !
Also i would like to suggest making whistles on following sliderstarts:
00:24:652 (4) -
00:49:267 (4) -
01:13:882 (4) -
Because of this "Finish sound" that plays in the song. I think it fits on these sliders, and you didnt use whistle at all. Fixed all, thanks !

Thats it for this diff, pretty good already

Well thats it, already pretty nice diffs, so gl to get it ranked ^^Big thanks to you !

Parachute wrote:

Hey, heres a mod :3

Normal
First: I'd suggest the whistles at the same points as i wrote them in the "Calm diff" i'm lazy to do hs, imakuri, pls do them xd Same to all hs suggestions
00:06:959 (1) - You should really rotate this slider a bit so it looks like this for better flow: Screenshot I prefer my flow.
00:02:729 (4) - For this diff i would do claps on sounds like this sliders reversepoint.
So for example also here: 00:05:805 (3) - At this sliderend.
Maybe even on sounds like 00:01:959 (3) - These red points? It fits but its already okay like you did it, juts suggesting this.
00:11:575 (3,4) - Here you should really add claps at the sliderbeginnings because it fits for the music and if theres nothing while you did so many hitsounds before this section it feels kinda weird imo.
01:36:190 (1) - This finish at the end doesnt really fit at all for the ending. I'd do whistle at least or, preferably just no hitsound at the end of this slider.


Well thats it, already pretty nice diffs, so gl to get it ranked ^^

Ovoui wrote:

slt slt grosse merde

[calm]

je trouve que le hitsound finish est beaucoup trop fort par rapport à la musique , tu devrais le changer imo FAIS HAHAHA
00:42:729 (3) - tu pourrais faire un blanket avec la pointe du slider suivant ta race c'est bien, mais bon j'ai changé
00:51:959 (3) - fais plutôt un slider un droit, après cette courbe on s'attend plutot a jouer en bas à droite or le sliderr suivant est au dessus fixé

1. Try to Add more tags: Insrumental Korean SFX Flower Dance
2. Unnecesary tag: song of soul

1. 00:10:036 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
2. 00:25:421 (1) - I think that you must do an entire kiai time from here 00:25:421 (1) - to here 00:48:498 (4) - , i think that its better.
3. 00:27:344 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:27:729 (4) - .
4. 00:30:421 (3) - Delete this slider and add a 1/2 slider here 00:30:805 (4) - .
5. 00:39:652 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:40:036 (4) - .
6. 00:42:729 (3) - ^ here 00:43:113 (4) - .
7. 00:46:190 (2) - Replace this with a singletap.
8. 00:51:959 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:52:344 (4) - .
9. 01:07:344 (3) - ^ here 01:07:729 (4) - .
10. 01:10:805 (2) - Replace this slider with a single tap.
11. 01:13:882 (4) - ^.
12. 01:36:190 (3) - Overlaps ARE NOT permited on easy diffs.

1. 00:01:959 (3,4) - Try to evade the stacks on Normal diffs, can confuse the players, remember that the normal diff players aren't that experienced.
2. 00:05:036 (2,3) - ^.
3. 00:16:190 (1,2) - Fix flow.
4. 00:19:267 (1,2) - ^.
5. 00:31:575 (1) - Ctlr+G, for a better flow.
6. 00:31:575 (1,2) - This is a jump?, the jumps ARE NOT permited on Normal/Easy diffs.
7. 00:35:805 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff.
8. 00:45:421 (2,1) - Fix flow.
9. 00:49:652 (3,2) - Try to evade this overlap.
10. 00:56:190 (1) - Ctrl+G?, for a better flow.
11. 01:00:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff.
12. 01:10:036 (2,1) - Fix flow.
13. 01:11:574 (1,2) - ^.
14. 01:14:267 (3,2) - Try to evade this overlap.
15. 01:20:806 (1) - Ctrl+G?, for a better flow.
16. 01:25:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff.
17. 01:34:652 (2,1) - Fix flow.
    
    I think that this diff is completly Copy+Paste, is repetitive and can be boring after a while of playing it because it's all the same, please try to be more creative and create more fun patterns for the players.

+1 Star!

Zyl wrote:

From my Queue! hi

Dat skin ♥

General

1. Try to Add more tags: Insrumental Korean SFX Flower Dance
2. Unnecesary tag: song of soul

Calm

1. 00:10:036 (3,4) - Fix blanket.huh, done
2. 00:25:421 (1) - I think that you must do an entire kiai time from here 00:25:421 (1) - to here 00:48:498 (4) - , i think that its better. kiai removed cause fuck
3. 00:27:344 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:27:729 (4) - . no pretty fine for me
4. 00:30:421 (3) - Delete this slider and add a 1/2 slider here 00:30:805 (4) - . no pretty fine for me
5. 00:39:652 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:40:036 (4) - . no pretty fine for me
6. 00:42:729 (3) - ^ here 00:43:113 (4) - . no pretty fine for me
7. 00:46:190 (2) - Replace this with a singletap. no pretty fine for me
8. 00:51:959 (3) - Remove this slider and add a note here 00:52:344 (4) - . no pretty fine for me
9. 01:07:344 (3) - ^ here 01:07:729 (4) - . no pretty fine for me
10. 01:10:805 (2) - Replace this slider with a single tap. no pretty fine for me
11. 01:13:882 (4) - ^. no pretty fine for me
12. 01:36:190 (3) - Overlaps ARE NOT permited on easy diffs. Where the fuck is your overlap, do you know what it is tho ?

Seaweed wrote:

[General]
Pls make kiai longer. removed kiai cause fuck
I reccomend making more difficulties or getting more GDs. no, it's pretty fine like that
Since it's a slow song ill just mod to aesthetics

[Calm]
Ar is too low. There's too many objects on the screen. I'd say make it ar 3 or 3.5 alright, fixed
00:01:959 (2) - turn this into a circle and put another circle at the next red tick. This just looks nicer than having a slider. pretty fine for me
00:40:805 (1) - I think this would be better moved to the left instead of blanket pretty fine for me
00:53:113 (1) - make this parallel to previous slider. Looks better pretty fine for me
01:33:113 (1,2) - Pls remove finish noooo, it's great like that

Good luck!

1. Are you sure about the soft-hitfinish? Imo, the hitsound doesn't really match the song.. It gives off this very abrupt feeling, which doesn't go too well with the calmness of the song I think, consider replacing it with something that doesn't feel like it interrupts the song maybe?
2. also, you could tweak your combo colours a bit, the bright pink and blue tones are completely different from the background..? O: (I'd suggest some light brown/green or mabye blue colours - http://puu.sh/qiIRa.png -)
3. followpoint feels a bit out of place, it's looking so up to date compared to the circle and slider elements.. maybe you could exchange it with something that looks like a brushstroke? Or just change the colour to white so it's not as distracting as it is atm (imo!)

1. 00:34:652 (3,4,5) - can you re-arange this slightly, so the movement path is more obvious? Since this is the easiet diff (5) shouldn't be closer to (3) than (4) if all objects are visible at the same time.
2. 00:59:267 (3,4,5) - rhythm here feels slightly off, because of the strong sound at 01:00:421 - , how about http://puu.sh/qiMiI.jpg instead?

Squichu wrote:

Hi there! c:

General

1. Are you sure about the soft-hitfinish? Imo, the hitsound doesn't really match the song.. It gives off this very abrupt feeling, which doesn't go too well with the calmness of the song I think, consider replacing it with something that doesn't feel like it interrupts the song maybe? yeah ofc, fiwed
2. also, you could tweak your combo colours a bit, the bright pink and blue tones are completely different from the background..? O: (I'd suggest some light brown/green or mabye blue colours - http://puu.sh/qiIRa.png -) fixed too
3. followpoint feels a bit out of place, it's looking so up to date compared to the circle and slider elements.. maybe you could exchange it with something that looks like a brushstroke? Or just change the colour to white so it's not as distracting as it is atm (imo!)I think it's pretty fine for me sorry ^^'

Calm

1. 00:34:652 (3,4,5) - can you re-arange this slightly, so the movement path is more obvious? Since this is the easiet diff (5) shouldn't be closer to (3) than (4) if all objects are visible at the same time. sure, fixed
2. 00:59:267 (3,4,5) - rhythm here feels slightly off, because of the strong sound at 01:00:421 - , how about http://puu.sh/qiMiI.jpg instead? yup, fixed !

otherwise really clean diff :3 thanks o3o

Ya, since Shmiklak didn't reply to previous mods yet, please do that and then call me back. Doesn't make much sense to mod a diff that's missing changes. >:
I'll try to contact him... If he don't reply, I think I will update it for him, he asked me to do this.

edit
forgot about the very first object in Shmik's diff - it's placed before the first timing point which afaik isn't allowed, so if you keep it you'll need another timing point done

Squichu wrote:

Hi there! c:

edit
forgot about the very first object in Shmik's diff - it's placed before the first timing point which afaik isn't allowed, so if you keep it you'll need another timing point!

Zyl wrote:

Shmik's Serenity

1. 00:01:959 (3,4) - Try to evade the stacks on Normal diffs, can confuse the players, remember that the normal diff players aren't that experienced. hey dude, it's a 72BPM song rofl
2. 00:05:036 (2,3) - ^. ^
3. 00:16:190 (1,2) - Fix flow. fixed
4. 00:19:267 (1,2) - ^. fixed
5. 00:31:575 (1) - Ctlr+G, for a better flow. wtf, no it's good
6. 00:31:575 (1,2) - This is a jump?, the jumps ARE NOT permited on Normal/Easy diffs. ...
7. 00:35:805 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff. dude, 72BPM. I saw it before in other maps
8. 00:45:421 (2,1) - Fix flow. no pretty good, it's his mapping style and it's correct.
9. 00:49:652 (3,2) - Try to evade this overlap. i think it's fine
10. 00:56:190 (1) - Ctrl+G?, for a better flow. it's good
11. 01:00:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff. dude, 72BPM. I saw it before in other maps
12. 01:10:036 (2,1) - Fix flow. nope, good like that
13. 01:11:574 (1,2) - ^. ^
14. 01:14:267 (3,2) - Try to evade this overlap. i think it's fine too
15. 01:20:806 (1) - Ctrl+G?, for a better flow. no :c
16. 01:25:036 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too much single taps for a Normal diff. dude, 72BPM. I saw it before in other maps
17. 01:34:652 (2,1) - Fix flow. no :c

+1 Star!

Really good map and skin!

Seaweed wrote:

[General]
Pls make kiai longer.
I reccomend making more difficulties or getting more GDs.
Since it's a slow song ill just mod to aesthetics

[Shmik's Serenity]
00:05:036 (2) - make these in line. no, like i said, it's pretty fine, and it fits with the song
00:15:805 (6) - line this up with 00:16:190 (1) - nah
00:16:190 (1) - ctrl + g, I feel like it's too far apart messes up the flow a little. nah, fixed with the previous mod
00:16:190 (1) - reverse the arc so it can blanket 00:17:344 (2) ^
00:31:575 (1) - overlap
00:37:344 (6) - fix the star pls, it's not perfectly made fixed a bit
00:35:805 (2,3,4,5,6) - also, i think since it's a star you can raise the ds a little. Makes it look nicer imo it's fine
01:00:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:33:113 (1,2,1) - Pls remove finish from these. The song is too quiet and imo it just doesn't fit I changed the finish
Good luck!

1. Forgot this last time, the skin's missing lighting.png, even if it's only used for a split second it's still needed for a complete set.
2. And sliderpoint10/30 aren't used anymore, slidercsorepoint is sufficient, so you can safely remove the other two.
3. Also, remove followpoint.png, it doesn't work with the other followpoint images because it's missing the number. (If it's needed turn this into 0 and change the others accordingly)

1. Don't forget that timing has to be consistent, so Calm diff needs the other red line, too! (and green line in Shmik's diff is unnecessary, cause no changes, but that's minor)
   @Shmik - You're right, I might have misinterpreted RC there. Because objects have to be snapped perfectly and there might be some issues with that at some point I assumed that there has to be a red line before/on the first hitobject (spinners excluded). Then again, because of this reason, why not make sure that there's never going to be any problem with that by adding one little red line? (Yes, it's highly unlikely that's ever going to get messed up, but still o: )
2. Oh, and combo colours in Shmiks diff should be changed too, no? Or does he want to keep them?
3. How about adding another Kiai fountain at 00:50:036 - ? Because that's where the song starts repeating itself

1. 00:10:036 (1) - can you avoid the overlap with the score? You could just rotate it by 180°, it's still symmetrcial to (3). Would look much better, especially in 4:3
   similar for 00:37:729 (1) - 01:26:960 (1) -
2. 00:13:113 (1,2,3) - I think 1/1 slider + circle would match better here, so it's consistent with previous and following identical rhythms. (Variety is fine, but you change this rhythm up after 00:25:421 - anyway, so atm it just feels random.)
   If you want to have this one different 100%, consider ctrl+g for this, the slider first and then two circles, because there is one on-going sound at 00:13:113 - and then two seperate sounds at 00:13:882 - and 00:14:267 - , so would match better that way.
3. 00:34:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:59:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:23:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I agree with previous modders that the overlap looks really untidy and I don't understand why you don't just flip it to avoid that? It plays almost the same, while it's less confusing and better looking. example: http://puu.sh/qjOnl.jpg -(5) appears way later than (4), so the overlap of (1,5) isn't visible whily playing.
   --
   Now otherwise the diff is technically good to go, but the copypasted stuff.. is it necessary? I mean starting 00:50:036 - with copypaste#1.. I don't like it at all tbh, but it's acceptable. I won't complain about that. But then copypaste#2 at 01:02:344 - really.... this is the exact same as the first time. Is there even a single change?
   This is -to be quite frank here- the most lazily mapped diff I've ever seen. There are so many possibilities to map this, especially the last part.. since the song becomes really quiet at the end you could work sooo damn well with SV changes, but you don't map it at all but just copypaste previous objects..