Meggumilen wrote:

sedikit mod dari saia :3

Kolom
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

GRAVITY

00:01:984 - ilangin note 2
00:02:632 - add note
00:03:929 - add note
00:05:232 - add note
00:07:821 - add note
00:09:119 - add note
00:10:416 - add note
00:15:038 - ilangin note 1
00:16:254 - ilangin note 4
00:16:740 - 00:17:389 - knp gk dijadiin LN?
00:17:875 - ilangin note 4
0018:524 - ilangin note 1
00:19:173 - ilangin note 4
00:19:821 - ilangin note 1
00:20:470 - ilangin note 4 sama 1, tambah note di 2

^ 00:15:038 - 00:16 254 - 00:17:875 - 00:18:524 - 00:19:173 - 00:19:821 - 00:20:470 suaranya beda sama triple notenya

00:32:470 - 3 pindah ke 1
00:32:632 - ilangin note 1
00:32:956 - 00:33:443 - http://puu.sh/q6LIF/e6fb7fef00.jpg
00:33:605 - 00:34:092 - http://puu.sh/q6LJH/96a506a79c.jpg
00:43:497 - 00:44:470 - http://puu.sh/q6LQy/a5ec2d7c25.jpg
00:44:794 - 00:45:443 - knp gk 1 aja LNnya? supaya note biasanya bisa 2
00:45:443 - 00:45:767 - disini ada LN kecil Kayak gini.. kenapa gk ditambahin?
00:45:659 - 00:46:416 - gimana kalo bagian ini Kayak gini aja? supaya 00:46:578 gak nge jack
00:47:389 - LNnya 1 aja
00:47:713 - gk ngerti ini bisa kayak gini ._. http://puu.sh/q6M8R/34ecca023e.jpg
00:48:686 - 00:49:281 - mending yg 1/6 nya 1 note smua.. disitu ada 2 notenya
00:49:335 - mending 1 LN aja, biar yg lainnya bisa nyambung LNnya
00:51:443 - tambahin 1 note
00:52:092 - ^
00:52:578 - kurangin 1 note
00:53:227 - kurangin 2 note
00:53:551 - ilangin note 2
00:55:173 - LNnya 1 aja
00:56:956 - knp disini ada 2 LN? sebelumnya bukannya ada 1
01:01:308 - 01:02:308 - gimana kalo gini aja http://puu.sh/q6Mzd/118ece56fc.jpg ? kalo gak gini aja http://puu.sh/q6MAW/68ff501307.jpg.. pokoknya jgn LN + note biasa
01:02:632 - kalo mau tambah SV xD
01:16:254 - tambahin note di note 4
00:37:983 - LN dimulai dari sini
01:38:308 - add note
01:38:956 - ilangin note 2
01:38:470 - add note
01:40:173 - 1 pindah ke 3 - 01:40:254 - add note di 1 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6N1p/e5a9599367.jpg
01:41:551 - add note di 1 - 01:41:632 - 1 pindah ke 2 - 01:41:713 - 2 pindah ke 1 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6N58/ace049dfcb.jpg
01:42:362 - add note
01:42:767 - 4 pindah ke 1 - 01:42:848 - tambah note di 4 sama 2, ilangin note 1 - 01:43:011 - 1 pindah ke 4 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6NfC/78aee0fd16.jpg emang keliatannya jelek wkwk
01:44:956 - tambahin note
01:46:254 - 01:46:740 - harusnya gini http://puu.sh/q6Nlp/efee4b3fce.jpg ._.
01:46:740 - tambah note di 4
01:46:902 - 4 ke 3, 3 ke 4
01:51:929 - 01:53:227 - jumpstreamnya kurang enak ._.

Linde vs. BANGKE's EXHAUST

00:46:578 - knp ada 2 note biasa disitu?
00:51:767 - ^
00:56:794 - ^
00:59:065 - 00:59:713 - disitu jumpstream bisa
01:01:659 - tambahin 1 note
01:37:01 - 01:37:983 - jadiin note biasa aja
01:39:038 - 01:39:281 - ^
01:41:146 - 01:41:551 - ^
01:42:929 - 01:43:173 - ^
01:44:227 - 01:44:470 - ^
01:48:119 - 01:48:362 - ^
01:49:416 - 01:49:659 - ^
01:50:713 - 01:50:956 - ^
01:51:443 - 01:51:929 - ^
01:53:308 - 01:53:551 - ^
01:54:605 - 01:54:848 - ^
//^^^ LN nya fine imo, lagian cuma buat pembeda suara pitch synth nya, 01:11:794 (71794|1,71875|0,71956|3) - ini pitch rada rendah / rada kecil, 01:37:659 (97659|3,97740|2,97821|1,97902|0) - rada keras
^ kalo gak turunin ODnya.. 8 ketinggian bwt LN sekecil itu //OD 8 its fine for exhaust, adv aja od hp 8 :p

1 jam setengah wkwkw gak nyangka bakal ngabisin smua diff

Muu-chan wrote:

M4M ~
Everything just a suggestion
1|2|3|4
Pardon my bad English

General

* Turn off widescreen support at ADVANCED and GRAVITY

ADVANCED

* 00:06:524 - How about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5607000 ?
* 00:11:794 - ~ 00:12:281 - I suggest to keep the stream here. Feels kinda blank with suddenly cut the stream.
* 00:18:200 - I suggest to make a same column at the 2 first doubles for the kick and same with the other. Ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5607034
* 00:27:605 (27605|1,27767|3,27929|0) - Those 3 LNs should be placed from 00:27:443 - and the last LN stop at 00:28:254 - . In case, don't forget the kick here 00:27:929 - Ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5607057
* 00:33:281 - You should cut the LN here and add a new one until 00:33:443 - because you put 00:33:443 (33443|0) - too. Same sound, different pitch.
* 01:25:011 - I suggest something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5607124 somehow let the stream start from column 3 which is empty from 2 columns before and the pattern to follow the pitch.
* 01:37:740 - You might add notes for the electric sound same with 01:38:875 -
* 01:38:875 - I suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5607140 to follow the pitch

So that's from me :3 since i just modded a diff, you could modded a diff too in my map.
Thanks and good luck~
Nice map :9

Meggumilen wrote:

sedikit mod dari saia :3

Kolom
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

GRAVITY

00:01:984 - ilangin note 2 no
00:02:632 - add note applied owo
00:03:929 - add note ^
00:05:232 - add note ^
00:07:821 - add note ^
00:09:119 - add note ^
00:10:416 - add note ga balance ;-;
00:15:038 - ilangin note 1 itu pas kok ;-;
00:16:254 - ilangin note 4 applied
00:16:740 - 00:17:389 - knp gk dijadiin LN? ada rada denger LN sih, thanks for suggestion
00:17:875 - ilangin note 4 ga balance ;-;
0018:524 - ilangin note 1 ^
00:19:173 - ilangin note 4 ^
00:19:821 - ilangin note 1 ^
00:20:470 - ilangin note 4 sama 1, tambah note di 2 applied

^ 00:15:038 - 00:16 254 - 00:17:875 - 00:18:524 - 00:19:173 - 00:19:821 - 00:20:470 suaranya beda sama triple notenya sama kok, dibedain gitu pattern nya biar enak aja ;-;

00:32:470 - 3 pindah ke 1 applied
00:32:632 - ilangin note 1 ^
00:32:956 - 00:33:443 - http://puu.sh/q6LIF/e6fb7fef00.jpg oke, sip, udah agak mending LN nya
00:33:605 - 00:34:092 - http://puu.sh/q6LJH/96a506a79c.jpg ^
00:43:497 - 00:44:470 - http://puu.sh/q6LQy/a5ec2d7c25.jpg ^
00:44:794 - 00:45:443 - knp gk 1 aja LNnya? supaya note biasanya bisa 2 udah enak kok gitu pattern nya, reject sorry ;-;
00:45:443 - 00:45:767 - disini ada LN kecil Kayak gini.. kenapa gk ditambahin? udh dicobain kok gitu, tapi ga telalu bagus ;-;
00:45:659 - 00:46:416 - gimana kalo bagian ini Kayak gini aja? supaya 00:46:578 gak nge jack applied
00:47:389 - LNnya 1 aja suara LN nya besar kok
00:47:713 - gk ngerti ini bisa kayak gini ._. http://puu.sh/q6M8R/34ecca023e.jpg itu jack, suaranya nampak juga
00:48:686 - 00:49:281 - mending yg 1/6 nya 1 note smua.. disitu ada 2 notenya ada bass nya disana :>
00:49:335 - mending 1 LN aja, biar yg lainnya bisa nyambung LNnya gak balance ;-;
00:51:443 - tambahin 1 note gada suara apapun
00:52:092 - ^ ^ ;-;
00:52:578 - kurangin 1 note itu didepannya lagi 3, masa 2
00:53:227 - kurangin 2 note *buzz* ada suaranya
00:53:551 - ilangin note 2 applied
00:55:173 - LNnya 1 aja
00:56:956 - knp disini ada 2 LN? sebelumnya bukannya ada 1
01:01:308 - 01:02:308 - gimana kalo gini aja http://puu.sh/q6Mzd/118ece56fc.jpg ? kalo gak gini aja http://puu.sh/q6MAW/68ff501307.jpg.. pokoknya jgn LN + note biasa
01:02:632 - kalo mau tambah SV xD
01:16:254 - tambahin note di note 4
00:37:983 - LN dimulai dari sini
01:38:308 - add note
01:38:956 - ilangin note 2
01:38:470 - add note
01:40:173 - 1 pindah ke 3 - 01:40:254 - add note di 1 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6N1p/e5a9599367.jpg
01:41:551 - add note di 1 - 01:41:632 - 1 pindah ke 2 - 01:41:713 - 2 pindah ke 1 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6N58/ace049dfcb.jpg
01:42:362 - add note
01:42:767 - 4 pindah ke 1 - 01:42:848 - tambah note di 4 sama 2, ilangin note 1 - 01:43:011 - 1 pindah ke 4 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6NfC/78aee0fd16.jpg emang keliatannya jelek wkwk
01:44:956 - tambahin note
01:46:254 - 01:46:740 - harusnya gini http://puu.sh/q6Nlp/efee4b3fce.jpg ._.
01:46:740 - tambah note di 4
01:46:902 - 4 ke 3, 3 ke 4
01:51:929 - 01:53:227 - jumpstreamnya kurang enak ._.

ADVANCE

00:28:578 - 4 pindah ke 1 reject ;-;
01:22:092 - 3 pindah ke 4 ^[/color]
pattern kayak gini gak seharusnya dapet 3* doang xD

Meggumi wrote:

sedikit mod dari saia :3

Kolom
1 | 2 | 3 | 4

GRAVITY

00:01:984 - ilangin note 2
00:02:632 - add note
00:03:929 - add note
00:05:232 - add note
00:07:821 - add note
00:09:119 - add note
00:10:416 - add note
00:15:038 - ilangin note 1
00:16:254 - ilangin note 4
00:16:740 - 00:17:389 - knp gk dijadiin LN?
00:17:875 - ilangin note 4
0018:524 - ilangin note 1
00:19:173 - ilangin note 4
00:19:821 - ilangin note 1
00:20:470 - ilangin note 4 sama 1, tambah note di 2

^ 00:15:038 - 00:16 254 - 00:17:875 - 00:18:524 - 00:19:173 - 00:19:821 - 00:20:470 suaranya beda sama triple notenya

00:32:470 - 3 pindah ke 1
00:32:632 - ilangin note 1
00:32:956 - 00:33:443 - http://puu.sh/q6LIF/e6fb7fef00.jpg
00:33:605 - 00:34:092 - http://puu.sh/q6LJH/96a506a79c.jpg
00:43:497 - 00:44:470 - http://puu.sh/q6LQy/a5ec2d7c25.jpg
00:44:794 - 00:45:443 - knp gk 1 aja LNnya? supaya note biasanya bisa 2
00:45:443 - 00:45:767 - disini ada LN kecil Kayak gini.. kenapa gk ditambahin?
00:45:659 - 00:46:416 - gimana kalo bagian ini Kayak gini aja? supaya 00:46:578 gak nge jack
00:47:389 - LNnya 1 aja
00:47:713 - gk ngerti ini bisa kayak gini ._. http://puu.sh/q6M8R/34ecca023e.jpg
00:48:686 - 00:49:281 - mending yg 1/6 nya 1 note smua.. disitu ada 2 notenya
00:49:335 - mending 1 LN aja, biar yg lainnya bisa nyambung LNnya
00:51:443 - tambahin 1 note
00:52:092 - ^
00:52:578 - kurangin 1 note
00:53:227 - kurangin 2 note
00:53:551 - ilangin note 2
00:55:173 - LNnya 1 aja
00:56:956 - knp disini ada 2 LN? sebelumnya bukannya ada 1
01:01:308 - 01:02:308 - gimana kalo gini aja http://puu.sh/q6Mzd/118ece56fc.jpg ? kalo gak gini aja http://puu.sh/q6MAW/68ff501307.jpg.. pokoknya jgn LN + note biasa
01:02:632 - kalo mau tambah SV xD
01:16:254 - tambahin note di note 4
00:37:983 - LN dimulai dari sini
01:38:308 - add note
01:38:956 - ilangin note 2
01:38:470 - add note
01:40:173 - 1 pindah ke 3 - 01:40:254 - add note di 1 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6N1p/e5a9599367.jpg
01:41:551 - add note di 1 - 01:41:632 - 1 pindah ke 2 - 01:41:713 - 2 pindah ke 1 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6N58/ace049dfcb.jpg
01:42:362 - add note
01:42:767 - 4 pindah ke 1 - 01:42:848 - tambah note di 4 sama 2, ilangin note 1 - 01:43:011 - 1 pindah ke 4 jadi gini http://puu.sh/q6NfC/78aee0fd16.jpg emang keliatannya jelek wkwk
01:44:956 - tambahin note
01:46:254 - 01:46:740 - harusnya gini http://puu.sh/q6Nlp/efee4b3fce.jpg ._.
01:46:740 - tambah note di 4
01:46:902 - 4 ke 3, 3 ke 4
01:51:929 - 01:53:227 - jumpstreamnya kurang enak ._.

Linde vs. BANGKE's EXHAUST

00:46:578 - knp ada 2 note biasa disitu?
00:51:767 - ^
00:56:794 - ^
00:59:065 - 00:59:713 - disitu jumpstream bisa
01:01:659 - tambahin 1 note
01:37:01 - 01:37:983 - jadiin note biasa aja
01:39:038 - 01:39:281 - ^
01:41:146 - 01:41:551 - ^
01:42:929 - 01:43:173 - ^
01:44:227 - 01:44:470 - ^
01:48:119 - 01:48:362 - ^
01:49:416 - 01:49:659 - ^
01:50:713 - 01:50:956 - ^
01:51:443 - 01:51:929 - ^
01:53:308 - 01:53:551 - ^
01:54:605 - 01:54:848 - ^

^ kalo gak turunin ODnya.. 8 ketinggian bwt LN sekecil itu

ADVANCE

00:28:578 - 4 pindah ke 1
01:22:092 - 3 pindah ke 4
pattern kayak gini gak seharusnya dapet 3* doang xD

Raedi's NOVICE

kebanyakan single notenya.. coba tambahin double notenya

1 jam setengah wkwkw gak nyangka bakal ngabisin smua diff

• 
  [General]

1. All fine, juga metadata nya oke https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/sdvx/iii/p ... list_id=55
2. GRAVITY nya kok nggk ada SV nya, sementara EXHAUST nya ada SV nya di akhiran . . . yg GRAVITY copy aja lah SV nya di EXHAUST, sama aja kok jenis patternnya
   
   [Raedi's NOVICE]
3. 00:45:767 (45767|0,45929|1) - bagusan diganti sama LN ini buat mengekspresikan 1/4 effect sound nya . . . sama kayak dibagian sini 00:50:956 (50956|0) -
4. 00:56:145 (56145|0) - sama ^
5. 01:03:604 - tambah satu note lah buat penutup LN nya + emphasize kick dan vocal
6. 01:44:145 (104145|3,104307|1,104469|2,104631|0,104794|3,104956|1,105118|2) - coba di re-arrange lagi lah, karena mereka beda suara/pitch . . . jadi mungkin sebaiknya penempatan nya pun juga lebih baik pada kolom yang berbeda
7. Oke
   
   [ADVANCED]
8. 00:04:902 (4902|3) - pindahin snapnya ke sini aja lah 00:05:064 - buat ekspresikan suara gitarnya
9. 00:07:496 (7496|2) - pindah ke sini 00:07:658 - sama alasannya seperti diatas ^
10. 00:10:091 (10091|1) - wkwkwk ini juga cuk :v b
11. 00:18:361 (18361|0,18361|1) - ya helah, pindahin aja ke kolom 3 4 soalnya sama impactnya kayak dipart lain seperti 00:17:550 (17550|1,17550|3,17713|3,17713|1) -
12. 00:27:929 (27929|2,28577|3) - ini sebaiknya pindahkan ke kolom 4 1 aja biar lebih balance sama LN nya
13. 00:40:091 (40091|3,40253|1) - Ctrl G aja lah . . . soalnya udah kebanyakan note di kolom 3 4 00:39:442 (39442|3,39604|2,39767|3,39929|2) -
14. 00:41:713 - coba ini aja http://puu.sh/qJQ8K/ef5588497c.jpg biar lebih smooth pattern flows nya . . . lalu 00:44:469 (44469|1) - geser ke kolom 1 cuk
15. 00:57:118 - http://puu.sh/qJQfu/84df5a0bf2.jpg
16. 00:59:550 (59550|2) - oy apaan ini wkwkwk ganti jadi single not aja laah . . . habis itu 01:00:361 - coba pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/qJQnp/e9853fbb21.jpg soalnya di EXHAUST aja nggk pke shield pattern
17. 01:21:929 (81929|2,82091|2,82253|2,82415|2) - eyy mampus ini wkwk . . . coba lah lebih balance lagi seperti ini http://puu.sh/qJQtz/248ebd0f4b.jpg
18. 01:26:307 - waduh bagian ini perlu penyesuaian dikit
    01:27:037 (87037|0) - 01:27:685 (87685|1) - 01:28:334 (88334|2) - 01:28:983 (88983|2) - 01:29:631 (89631|3) - 01:30:280 (90280|0) - 01:30:929 (90929|1) - delete aja itu 1/4 note nya . . . mungkin akan lebih baik jika kamu ngikutin loud piano aja disini dan jangan lupa setelah di delete, disesuaikan lagi posisi note nya supaya pas dimainkan
19. 01:33:442 - http://puu.sh/qJQLj/15a4b80a4d.jpg
20. 01:37:658 - http://puu.sh/qJQPZ/bdc8722281.jpg males ah ngejelasin
21. 01:40:091 (100091|1,100253|1,100415|1,100577|1) - i'm so dead . . . try this shit http://puu.sh/qJQU6/19578fac1d.jpg
22. 01:48:361 - eyy note nya mana ini cuk ? http://puu.sh/qJQX1/ff799a5d8b.jpg
23. yha panjang amat mod nya hehehe
    
    [Linde::BANGKE's EXHAUST]
24. 01:39:037 (99037|1,99118|2,99199|3) - kenapa kamu baru pke mini LN disini ? sementara disini masih single note 01:38:794 (98794|1,98875|2) - jenis instrumen mereka sama, jadi ya sesuaikan aja laah
25. 01:42:929 (102929|0,103010|1,103091|2) - 01:44:226 (104226|1,104307|3,104388|0) - daaaan seterusnya . . . perhatikan lagi isu diatas ^
26. 01:57:442 (117442|3) - delete aja please, memang klo bagian ini lebih cocok ke fase break habis loud 1/4 kick sound . . . contohnya kek di GRAVITY
    
    [GRAVITY]
27. 00:25:658 - sampai dengan sini 00:43:496 - ada baiknya kamu ngikut LN snap di EXHAUST saja vroh :v biar gak konflik
28. 00:45:442 (45442|1,45604|1) - kasih mini LN lah, sama kayak di diff ADV dan EXH
29. 00:48:361 - coba saja ini http://puu.sh/qJRy5/018a33c9d6.jpg saya rasa lebih JOSS pattern flows nya
30. 01:06:523 - untuk disini, kurangin aja jumlah note nya kek part lain . . . contoh http://puu.sh/qJRDf/3b05d1e75b.jpg
31. 01:07:821 (67821|2) - hapus aja, alasannya sama kek diatas ^
32. 01:10:577 - tambah note di kolom 1 buat extra kick sound nya
33. 01:30:685 (90685|2,90767|1,91010|2) - coba pindahin ke kolom 1 3 4 lebih mudah ditangkap letak patternnya
34. well, nice jumpstream for now . . . you've really work hard for that, i appreciate it so much

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

alamak udah berapa lama ku gantung map kau wkwkwk
dan w baru bisa post sekarang, shit internet :'u

• 
  [General]

1. All fine, juga metadata nya oke https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/sdvx/iii/p ... list_id=55
2. GRAVITY nya kok nggk ada SV nya, sementara EXHAUST nya ada SV nya di akhiran . . . yg GRAVITY copy aja lah SV nya di EXHAUST, sama aja kok jenis patternnya
   
   [Raedi's NOVICE]
3. 00:45:767 (45767|0,45929|1) - bagusan diganti sama LN ini buat mengekspresikan 1/4 effect sound nya . . . sama kayak dibagian sini 00:50:956 (50956|0) -
4. 00:56:145 (56145|0) - sama ^
5. 01:03:604 - tambah satu note lah buat penutup LN nya + emphasize kick dan vocal
6. 01:44:145 (104145|3,104307|1,104469|2,104631|0,104794|3,104956|1,105118|2) - coba di re-arrange lagi lah, karena mereka beda suara/pitch . . . jadi mungkin sebaiknya penempatan nya pun juga lebih baik pada kolom yang berbeda
7. Oke
   
   [ADVANCED]
8. 00:04:902 (4902|3) - pindahin snapnya ke sini aja lah 00:05:064 - buat ekspresikan suara gitarnya
9. 00:07:496 (7496|2) - pindah ke sini 00:07:658 - sama alasannya seperti diatas ^
10. 00:10:091 (10091|1) - wkwkwk ini juga cuk :v b
11. 00:18:361 (18361|0,18361|1) - ya helah, pindahin aja ke kolom 3 4 soalnya sama impactnya kayak dipart lain seperti 00:17:550 (17550|1,17550|3,17713|3,17713|1) -
12. 00:27:929 (27929|2,28577|3) - ini sebaiknya pindahkan ke kolom 4 1 aja biar lebih balance sama LN nya
13. 00:40:091 (40091|3,40253|1) - Ctrl G aja lah . . . soalnya udah kebanyakan note di kolom 3 4 00:39:442 (39442|3,39604|2,39767|3,39929|2) -
14. 00:41:713 - coba ini aja http://puu.sh/qJQ8K/ef5588497c.jpg biar lebih smooth pattern flows nya . . . lalu 00:44:469 (44469|1) - geser ke kolom 1 cuk
15. 00:57:118 - http://puu.sh/qJQfu/84df5a0bf2.jpg
16. 00:59:550 (59550|2) - oy apaan ini wkwkwk ganti jadi single not aja laah . . . habis itu 01:00:361 - coba pke pattern ini http://puu.sh/qJQnp/e9853fbb21.jpg soalnya di EXHAUST aja nggk pke shield pattern
17. 01:21:929 (81929|2,82091|2,82253|2,82415|2) - eyy mampus ini wkwk . . . coba lah lebih balance lagi seperti ini http://puu.sh/qJQtz/248ebd0f4b.jpg
18. 01:26:307 - waduh bagian ini perlu penyesuaian dikit
    01:27:037 (87037|0) - 01:27:685 (87685|1) - 01:28:334 (88334|2) - 01:28:983 (88983|2) - 01:29:631 (89631|3) - 01:30:280 (90280|0) - 01:30:929 (90929|1) - delete aja itu 1/4 note nya . . . mungkin akan lebih baik jika kamu ngikutin loud piano aja disini dan jangan lupa setelah di delete, disesuaikan lagi posisi note nya supaya pas dimainkan
19. 01:33:442 - http://puu.sh/qJQLj/15a4b80a4d.jpg
20. 01:37:658 - http://puu.sh/qJQPZ/bdc8722281.jpg males ah ngejelasin
21. 01:40:091 (100091|1,100253|1,100415|1,100577|1) - i'm so dead . . . try this shit http://puu.sh/qJQU6/19578fac1d.jpg
22. 01:48:361 - eyy note nya mana ini cuk ? http://puu.sh/qJQX1/ff799a5d8b.jpg
23. yha panjang amat mod nya hehehe
    
    [Linde::BANGKE's EXHAUST]
24. 01:39:037 (99037|1,99118|2,99199|3) - kenapa kamu baru pke mini LN disini ? sementara disini masih single note 01:38:794 (98794|1,98875|2) - jenis instrumen mereka sama, jadi ya sesuaikan aja laah
25. 01:42:929 (102929|0,103010|1,103091|2) - 01:44:226 (104226|1,104307|3,104388|0) - daaaan seterusnya . . . perhatikan lagi isu diatas ^
26. 01:57:442 (117442|3) - delete aja please, memang klo bagian ini lebih cocok ke fase break habis loud 1/4 kick sound . . . contohnya kek di GRAVITY
    
    [GRAVITY]
27. 00:25:658 - sampai dengan sini 00:43:496 - ada baiknya kamu ngikut LN snap di EXHAUST saja vroh :v biar gak konflik
28. 00:45:442 (45442|1,45604|1) - kasih mini LN lah, sama kayak di diff ADV dan EXH
29. 00:48:361 - coba saja ini http://puu.sh/qJRy5/018a33c9d6.jpg saya rasa lebih JOSS pattern flows nya
30. 01:06:523 - untuk disini, kurangin aja jumlah note nya kek part lain . . . contoh http://puu.sh/qJRDf/3b05d1e75b.jpg
31. 01:07:821 (67821|2) - hapus aja, alasannya sama kek diatas ^
32. 01:10:577 - tambah note di kolom 1 buat extra kick sound nya
33. 01:30:685 (90685|2,90767|1,91010|2) - coba pindahin ke kolom 1 3 4 lebih mudah ditangkap letak patternnya
34. well, nice jumpstream for now . . . you've really work hard for that, i appreciate it so much

Call me when done ~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

inet gw kek bgsd
bubbled gratz !

GAMI wrote:

"butuh" ulun uwu

GAMI wrote:

"butuh" ulun uwu

Exaria-sama wrote:

Butuh Kajung

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Here I am

Pretty similar with my 7K mapset

[Raedi's NOVICE]

00:39:280 (39280|2,39442|1) - It would be great if you make it to jack for kick // okay

01:41:550 (101550|2,101713|0) - ^ // okay

01:56:145 (116145|2,116145|3,116307|1,116469|0,116631|2,116794|1,116956|0,117118|2) - it should be finish on 01:57:361 - here, just give something different on clap part // I make different pattern on that which I think is more fit, what do you think?

Fresh Chicken wrote:

00:01:983 - timing point apa ngini, asaku baik hapus ja

01:57:442 - timing point nyawa te double, hapus sebuting

01:57:523 - asaku sv nya ni kada nyaman dibaca, coba pakai sv ini:

01:57:523 - 1.5

01:57:645 - 0.5

01:57:767 - 1.5

01:57:888 - 0.5

01:58:010 - 1.5

01:58:131 - 0.5

01:58:253 - 2.0

01:58:334 - 0.5

[GRAVITY]

00:09:118 - 00:10:415 - asaku jaka add note lagi di setiap timing tu nah, mirip soalnya

00:12:199 (12199|2,12199|3) - bagusnya diulah 4-3 mini stair, 00:12:280 - disini nyata banar ada suara

00:27:442 - 00:28:091 - add satu not lagi di setiap timing, asa aneh disitu

00:36:604 (36604|3) - Ghost note

00:48:361 - kyapa munnya diulah LN disini sampai 00:48:523 - ? nyaman dimaini

01:08:469 - kada usah dua note, kayanya ikam memberi penekanan ke suara snare, tapi snare nang lain ikam ulah satu note + satu LN ja

01:20:226 - add note sebuting

01:21:199 - ^

01:41:713 - bagusnya add sebuting lagi not

01:52:334 - disengaja kah ini?

[Linde::BANGKE's EXHAUST]

01:15:929 - ~01:16:253 - I think making small trill is more fit to this part

Pretty good, just make sure SV with that I suggested on above

[ADVANCED]

01:15:929 - kdpp mun ikam meulah 1/4 disini

asaku ada masalah pang secara umum, hubungi nda minggu ne. Munnya aku kd on osu hubungi di line, munnya ikam kdd line pm ja gksguswhd12

Fresh Chicken wrote:

Here I am

Pretty similar with my 7K mapset

00:01:983 - What is this timing point? I think better to remove. Deleted

01:57:442 - Double timing point, remove one ^

01:57:523 - imo this is pretty unreadable SV, let me suggest for it Yes, i change the SV

01:57:523 - 1.5

01:57:645 - 0.5

01:57:767 - 1.5

01:57:888 - 0.5

01:58:010 - 1.5

01:58:131 - 0.5

01:58:253 - 2.0

01:58:334 - 0.5

Thanks for this section.

[GRAVITY]

00:09:118 - 00:10:415 - I think you should add one more note each timings, here's same part Added

00:12:199 (12199|2,12199|3) - Better to be 4-3 mini stairs, Changed 00:12:280 - definitely has a sound Yeah, and i hear that, *why i can't hear this sound before it ahahah sorry

00:27:442 - 00:28:091 - Better to add a one more note each others, feels awkward. Yup, added

00:36:604 (36604|3) - Ghost note Deleted

00:48:361 - How about to make LN? and finish that on 00:48:523 - here, feels good to play Yes, i change the double note to LN and Add hitsound there

01:08:469 - Doesn't need two normal notes, seems you've emphasis'd snare sound but other snare has only one note + one LN Okay

01:20:226 - Add a note Added

01:21:199 - ^

01:41:713 - Better to add a one more note, Added

01:52:334 - Is this intended? I Think no

[ADVANCED]

01:15:929 - It's fine even if you add 1/4 in here Yes, i added one more note, thanks


I think it should have some problem in general, please contect me in this week. Please contect on line if I'm not in osu. I may go out tomorrow. Or if you don't have line ID, just leave forum PM. gksguswhd12 Done

Fresh Chicken wrote:

no kds for this

[GRAVITY]

01:57:442 - Still double timing points, remove one Fixed

Also SVs, 0.5x should 1/8 that I posted above.

[Raedi's NOVICE]

00:01:983 - remove this timing point, it's for nothing also start offset has 30% volume which different with other difficulties. please adjust it to 50% Fixed

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

GG petarunxx
congratz !

Surono wrote:

pas online, ini sudah di extrak... finale graztooo we_boss!1!!

erlinadewi- wrote:

gratz ya wan! first ranked