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Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>

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Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined December 2014
Nao Tomori
[requiem]
00:02:203 (1,3) - unrankable

00:05:762 - ending slider here and click at 00:05:889 - could convey the 3 vocal pitch change better

00:17:457 (1,2,3,1) - why 2 nc? compare 00:16:059 (2,3,4) -

00:30:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ignoring this EXTREMELY OBVIOUS 3/4 piano melody is very boring, it would be much more engaging to map it differently for the player since 1/2 based rhythm spam is really not a good representation of the song

00:36:016 (3,4,5,6,7) - why is this one so much different from the previous 3? its the exact same sound being repeated.

00:47:965 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i dont think these direction changes follow the most obvious divisions in the song...

00:53:813 (4) - i've explained repeatedly why this should be deleted, along with this one: 00:55:846 (4) - . they don't fit the melodic structure at all. even if there is a random drum beat there, mapping it detracts from the main melody significantly and you get a much better effect by not mapping it.

01:06:269 (1,2,3) - current rhythm doesn't line up with the claps very well, i think that would be better. there isnt really a melody change on the white ticks so this is subpar imo

01:11:862 (4,5) - would b nicer as a slider to focus on the melody more

[smoothie]
00:24:957 (1,2) - i think the melody changes at 00:25:084 - so kickslider + 1/2 slider works better than this.

00:25:783 (2,3) - this completely kills the blue tick based melody that you highlighted earlier 00:23:495 (1) - ...

00:30:677 (1,2,3) - 3/4 clicking plz ..01:30:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same

00:47:965 (1,2) - these both completely destroy the rotational movements but the song isnt even changing that much. no reason to put kicksliders here imo.

00:53:813 (4) - see kroytz's diff

01:08:938 (2) - imo delete or make this passive, it kind of screws up the rhythm based on clicking on the melody notes.
[toybot]
00:23:050 (1,2,1,2,3) - imo nc on the white tick since thats where the melody phrase change happens

00:24:957 (1) - 3/4 imo..

00:59:152 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - wtf is this direction change on lol, its super sharp but nothing in the song supports it
01:18:726 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same

01:08:938 (2,3) - meh having 2 melody notes on the same slider and a click on a random drum is subpar imo, just remove 2 and make 3 2 circles

01:33:598 (1) - remove nc , its in same musical phrase as previous 2

[alheak]
od 8.5, current is weirdly low for 6.5 sr

none of the other diff names are in all caps for gder name so this 1 looks weird lo

00:22:796 (2,4) - stack mod

00:24:957 (3) - if u acknowledge the blue tick melody you might as well just actually map with a double...
[exhaust]
od 8 imo, its 5.5 sr and has decently dense rhythm

00:25:211 (4,5,6) - what is this rhythm dude. u completely cover up the melody on 00:25:338 - 00:25:465 - that you were focusing and focus right after.

00:34:745 (1,2,3,4) - melody plz..

01:09:065 (3) - 2 circlez
01:25:463 (3,4) - i think 1/1 works better here to show how the guitar is extended compared to 01:24:446 (3) -

[pono]
od 7

00:12:372 (2,3) - these follow nothing, slider plz.
01:31:691 (1) - remove nc imo
01:54:064 (3) - add nc imo

[fizz]
00:38:813 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is a mess, the music is divided into 3/2 sections of 3 1/2 notes each. please reflect that with your patterning and rhythm choice somehow

01:53:301 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - same


01:11:989 (5,6) - imo delete 5 and make 6 2 circles to follow the melody better

[ametrin]
too dense imo. raise the ar, 6.5 or 7 is better. this will help with the more 1/2 sspammy parts since noobs will have trouble reading consecutive 1/2 sliders if there are a lot of them on the screen.

01:07:794 (3,4,5,6,1) - this is like, weirdly dense for how calm the part is. long sliders are still quite challenging as well. imo delete 6

01:15:167 - imo fill this one in, i know theres no vocal but the 2/1 break feels relly awkward

01:36:268 (6) - nc

[battle]
i think you could raise ar to 5 or 5.5 too, theres some parts of the kiai with like 4 objects on screen aat the same time, pretty meh imo

00:39:830 (1,2) - coming in in the middle of this secction seems so out of place lol. better to either remove the spinner and start at the beginning of it or just delete these

01:12:370 (1,1) - manual stack this plz

01:45:929 (3,1) - same

yes i know theyre rankable but its still a bit confusing imo

01:52:538 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is a bit bad cuz the song structure is 3/2 based. try a 3/2 repeat instead i think.
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak

Naotoshi wrote:

[alheak]
od 8.5, current is weirdly low for 6.5 sr ok

none of the other diff names are in all caps for gder name so this 1 looks weird lo they're the ones in the wrong tbh

00:22:796 (2,4) - stack mod ok

00:24:957 (3) - if u acknowledge the blue tick melody you might as well just actually map with a double... too much autism, doesn't play that great
thank

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Ametrin
717 posts
Joined May 2012
Ametrin

Naotoshi wrote:

[ametrin]
too dense imo. raise the ar, 6.5 or 7 is better. this will help with the more 1/2 sspammy parts since noobs will have trouble reading consecutive 1/2 sliders if there are a lot of them on the screen.

01:07:794 (3,4,5,6,1) - this is like, weirdly dense for how calm the part is. long sliders are still quite challenging as well. imo delete 6

01:15:167 - imo fill this one in, i know theres no vocal but the 2/1 break feels relly awkward

01:36:268 (6) - nc
all fixed

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osu file format v14

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Title:Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>
TitleUnicode:Lachryma《Re:Queen'M》
Artist:Kaneko Chiharu
ArtistUnicode:かねこちはる
Creator:Kroytz
Version:Ametrin's NOVICE
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:SDVX Grace The 5th KAC Original Song Contest KONAMI BEMANI Battle Ametrin Fizz Ponoyoshi Alheak toybot Smoothie World
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Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz

Naotoshi wrote:

[fizz]
00:38:813 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is a mess, the music is divided into 3/2 sections of 3 1/2 notes each. please reflect that with your patterning and rhythm choice somehow i dont entirely agree with you here but i instead made the rhythm consistent with what i already have which is 3/3/2 notes per measure

01:53:301 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - same


01:11:989 (5,6) - imo delete 5 and make 6 2 circles to follow the melody better kept 6 as a slider but removed 5
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Lachryma《Re:Queen'M》
Artist:Kaneko Chiharu
ArtistUnicode:かねこちはる
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Version:Fizz's ADVANCED
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:SDVX Grace The 5th KAC Original Song Contest KONAMI BEMANI Battle Ametrin Fizz Ponoyoshi Alheak toybot Smoothie World
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toybot
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Joined June 2013
toybot

Naotoshi wrote:

[toybot]
00:23:050 (1,2,1,2,3) - imo nc on the white tick since thats where the melody phrase change happens

00:24:957 (1) - 3/4 imo..

00:59:152 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - wtf is this direction change on lol, its super sharp but nothing in the song supports it // i would see what u mean if this was like straight streams but this is all in the same circular motion, imo it would be worse to change it to be more accurate
01:18:726 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same

01:08:938 (2,3) - meh having 2 melody notes on the same slider and a click on a random drum is subpar imo, just remove 2 and make 3 2 circles

01:33:598 (1) - remove nc , its in same musical phrase as previous 2
thank u https://0paste.com/18641.txt
Kroytz
703 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Kroytz

Naotoshi wrote:

[requiem]
00:02:203 (1,3) - unrankable how is this unrankable exactly? nobody i talk to say this is unrankable wut

00:05:762 - ending slider here and click at 00:05:889 - could convey the 3 vocal pitch change better Sure changed

00:17:457 (1,2,3,1) - why 2 nc? compare 00:16:059 (2,3,4) - Fixed

00:30:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ignoring this EXTREMELY OBVIOUS 3/4 piano melody is very boring, it would be much more engaging to map it differently for the player since 1/2 based rhythm spam is really not a good representation of the song It's because this is higher diff and more object count in general. I think some lower diffs represent it more accurate but it's less dense. There are beats on red whites and piano 3/4 blues so this is the way I can capture all of the beats without missing them, despite it not being much exciting :T

00:36:016 (3,4,5,6,7) - why is this one so much different from the previous 3? its the exact same sound being repeated. Okay changed

00:47:965 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i dont think these direction changes follow the most obvious divisions in the song... I'm hearing low->high arpeggios here o,o

00:53:813 (4) - i've explained repeatedly why this should be deleted, along with this one: 00:55:846 (4) - . they don't fit the melodic structure at all. even if there is a random drum beat there, mapping it detracts from the main melody significantly and you get a much better effect by not mapping it. I remember saying about how I wanted to capture as many beats here that I can. Undermapping it feels too weak, sort of like huh?
where did all the zippity zoo go? I know its softer section but its weaker in it's own way too, not always having to be less dense.

01:06:269 (1,2,3) - current rhythm doesn't line up with the claps very well, i think that would be better. there isnt really a melody change on the white ticks so this is subpar imo Rhythm gets kinda fucky here. I actually just simplified the rhythm only because the music isn't so consistent with it's claps and stuff. There's weak whites and off reds, idk. I find this to be more comfortable to the melody versus the awkward drums.

01:11:862 (4,5) - would b nicer as a slider to focus on the melody more Okay change


[exhaust]
od 8 imo, its 5.5 sr and has decently dense rhythm Okay

00:25:211 (4,5,6) - what is this rhythm dude. u completely cover up the melody on 00:25:338 - 00:25:465 - that you were focusing and focus right after. Changed to be a bit better

00:34:745 (1,2,3,4) - melody plz.. This one rather focusing on drums here :S

01:09:065 (3) - 2 circlez Okay
01:25:463 (3,4) - i think 1/1 works better here to show how the guitar is extended compared to 01:24:446 (3) - But then it'd feel too weak and I'd have to change a lot of similar sections for it too, it wouldn't be good idea imo.
Kroytz
703 posts
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Topic Starter
Kroytz
Smoothie World gave me permission to answer for him.

Naotoshi wrote:

smoothie
00:24:957 (1,2) - i think the melody changes at 00:25:084 - so kickslider + 1/2 slider works better than this. It's a consistent rhythm used throughout the map so, I don't believe it'd be best to change this (personally I think SW rhythm is used okay here anyways).

00:25:783 (2,3) - this completely kills the blue tick based melody that you highlighted earlier 00:23:495 (1) - ... Not sure I understand what you're saying here when the music, mainly the guitar, is functioning different in both measures. Rhythm is also okay here.

00:30:677 (1,2,3) - 3/4 clicking plz ..01:30:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same 3/4 ignores some of the white drums :/ His rhythm is almost similar to mine in terms of which beats are being hit here and I suppose it's for good reason. Yknow, undermapping the beats make the high treble pianos feel too weak when in the song they are very strong.

00:47:965 (1,2) - these both completely destroy the rotational movements but the song isnt even changing that much. no reason to put kicksliders here imo. I'd agree that kick sliders aren't necessary here but they aren't used wrongly either - it's the 4th measure of the phrase and so separate it from the next phrase, either making it stronger or weaker follows a general principle of music theory, so long as it isn't the same as previous 3 measures.

00:53:813 (4) - see kroytz's diff Same response xp

01:08:938 (2) - imo delete or make this passive, it kind of screws up the rhythm based on clicking on the melody notes. Makes sense, deleted.
tyty nao~
PoNo
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PoNo
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256,352,118131,5,4,3:0:0:0:

Fixed everything btw
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Kroytz
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Kroytz
battle also let me reply for him...

Naotoshi wrote:

[battle]
i think you could raise ar to 5 or 5.5 too, theres some parts of the kiai with like 4 objects on screen aat the same time, pretty meh imo Ok raised to 5.5

00:39:830 (1,2) - coming in in the middle of this secction seems so out of place lol. better to either remove the spinner and start at the beginning of it or just delete these I agree these are kind of out of place. removed

01:12:370 (1,1) - manual stack this plz Fixed

01:45:929 (3,1) - same Fixed

yes i know theyre rankable but its still a bit confusing imo

01:52:538 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is a bit bad cuz the song structure is 3/2 based. try a 3/2 repeat instead i think. Changed to something more reasonable.
Kroytz
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Kroytz
Okay literally everything has been updated whew

Ready to go~ :)
Nao Tomori
Nomination Assessment Team
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Nao Tomori
basic
01:52:538 (1,2) - this is still a bit not so good since the song is 3/2 - try this: http://puu.sh/yTojR/d578edfeaf.jpg

fizz:
00:39:575 (5,1) - ctrl g this, the song structure places more importance on 00:39:957 - but atm it's a slider end

figure out if you want all the diffs to be caps for lower case cuz atm alheaks is inconsistent for no reason
Battle
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Battle
fix for me kroytz pls
Kroytz
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applied all
Fizz
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Fizz
@naotoshi

but 00:39:957 (2) - isnt a sliderend and doesnt have anything to do with 00:39:575 (5,1) -
unless you didnt have the latest version? i made some changes to that section last time so iunno
Nao Tomori
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Nao Tomori
ok reblub since some random unsnap happened i guess
Weber
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Weber
Re:Meme'M
Mir
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Mir
lachrymeme



















:^)
Izzywing
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Izzywing
That guy does not deserve to map this beautiful song. That was the lamest thing I have ever seen. Like, Sotarks remapping Daidai levels of lame. Why would you ever touch the editor if you have that mentality? How could you have any pride when you put forth a map like that? A disgrace to osu, a disgrace to mapping, a disgrace to the community.
Lince Cosmico
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Lince Cosmico
that was the fastest double check that i've seen on my life
banter
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banter
01:36:268 (1) - this doesn't blanket properly reeee https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9963610

also the first slider node isn't centred with the red anchor
Enon
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Greatz!!
Mir
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Mir

banter wrote:

01:36:268 (1) - this doesn't blanket properly reeee https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9963610

also the first slider node isn't centred with the red anchor
you're complaining about that and im here like



Kroytz
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me_irl

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