1. 00:25:699 (1,3) - it's very annoying to play, try to avoid this kind of random stacks unless you make them consistent
2. 01:55:172 (4,5,6,7) - overmapping in a slow part is not recommended
3. 02:32:014 - hmm i can't get why you don't unable the kiai here, there's only a spinner (for all diffs)

1. 01:34:295 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is hard to handle for new players, try to make 01:35:172 (3) - this a slider or something
2. 01:36:576 (2,1) - ugly overlap

Karen wrote:

Insane

1. 00:25:699 (1,3) - it's very annoying to play, try to avoid this kind of random stacks unless you make them consistent I don't really understand what's wrong with them. I usually stack for neatness reasons to avoid ugly overlaps with other objects
2. 01:55:172 (4,5,6,7) - overmapping in a slow part is not recommended Yeah, did something else
3. 02:32:014 - hmm i can't get why you don't unable the kiai here, there's only a spinner (for all diffs) Fixed

Hard

1. 01:34:295 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is hard to handle for new players, try to make 01:35:172 (3) - this a slider or something I don't think you are necessarily a new player if you play a Hard diff and I doubt this is too hard. I've seen other Hards with long streams
2. 01:36:576 (2,1) - ugly overlap Made a curved slider instead.

well, simple set me cry, call me back for bubble

Karen wrote:

"simple set" doesnt mean its bad lol
osu needs more pretty songs, bubbled.

Kisses wrote:

Insane

1. 00:05:348 (1) - Hitsound this slider? I firmly believe all heavily emphasized objects should be hitsounded in someway so maybe a whistle? Nothing really supports a whistle sound here and I like that it's a quiet slider cause it supports the music imo
2. 00:25:172 (3,1) - when you enable stacking in the editor you can see the blanket is off https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6638752 So turn on stacking to fix the blanket Fixed
3. 01:44:997 (3) - personally I think it would flow and look better if you used ctrl +h I feel the current placement is better
4. 02:14:997 (7,8,1) - it feels like higher spacing is needed to give this the emphasis it deserves, how about moving it down/right a bit? when you enable stacking you can see it doesn't go on top of 02:14:295 (3) anyways so it doesn't break the visual structure (when playing) Ok, followed your suggestion

Hard

1. 00:05:172 (6,7) - stacking these would play well imo and I do feel that this pattern would need something a bit different to it than the rest of the pattern in the beginning rather just a curve. Also if you add a hitsound like I suggested in the Insane diff make sure to remember to add it here Ok
2. 00:28:506 (1,2) - personally I think it would look better to blanket these (1) over (2) especially since 00:29:207 (3) is blanketed. It would just make for better structure imo Current pattern is fine as well
3. 00:53:769 (1) - I try not to impose my ideas too much on someone else's map but how about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6638918 Because these are really strong beats as well as starting on the downbeat I feel like you have to break away from the triangular flow from 00:53:243 (3,4,5) . I also don't believe a curved slider fits the music but that's just me :v Followed your suggestion
4. 01:07:102 (1,2,3,4) - The linear flow is really, really hard to play especially when using mods like DT or HR (I know that you should map for mods but I still think it's worth mentioning). I think a step pattern or something similar would be ideal but this would of course require you to move things around a bit I feel the linear flow looks neater and imo it's easier to play, lol
5. 01:40:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this one either more because of how it feels forced to fit to the music to me ^
6. 02:30:786 (2,3,4,5) - I think a more circular pattern like what you did at 01:29:558 (4,5,6,7) would look better Yeah, ok

Normal

1. 01:34:997 (4) - how about this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6639060 it matches the vocals better as well as making the drum snare at 01:35:172 cliackable Followed your suggestion
2. 01:38:681 (1,2) - blanket could be a bit better Tried something
3. 02:06:050 (5) - I think ending this 1/4 of a beat earlier would give 02:06:751 (1) a much better emphasis Ok, done

Easy

1. 01:05:699 - I don't agree with skipping this finish, it just creates such an empty feeling for me. You've mapped all the other finishes in the song so I don't see a reason to skip this one out Yeah, mapped it out
2. 01:48:506 (3) - a bit nazi but blanket could do with a small fix Done
3. 02:24:295 (2) - imo very small overlaps like these don't look pretty. Either increase the amount of overlap or get rid of it Fixed
4. Looking at the SB this appears to be a collab, if so rename the diff to collab easy? Our names are combined and that's fine. I'll just add "collab" in tags.

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Good map, if you're mapping something in the future let me know pls so I can gd or mod it :v Will do that. I already have 2 pending maps, another one pending soon

GL!
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edit: wow this got bubbled when I was in the middle of modding it, I feel kinda silly now ;; No worries~ Any help is welcome

Kaitjuh wrote:

you misspelled my name xD, but I think someone else can change the tags without dq right?
at least I think something like that happened before.

Congrats though!

JBHyperion wrote:

re-q

KittyAdventure wrote:

Gratzz, -Nya- >w</