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Camellia - Chirality [OsuMania]

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eyes
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Meiju
Сделай оффсет 923

Я вообще не понял как ты мапал лны во всех диффах, на какой звук, разберись с ними

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00:06:744 (6744|1) - продли этот лн до 00:07:192

00:07:192 (7192|0) - а этот продли до 00:07:789

00:16:744 (16744|3) - до 00:17:042

00:18:833 (18833|2) - до 00:19:132

00:20:811 (20811|1) - передвинь 00:20:774 - сюда

00:21:035 (21035|2) - передвинь 00:21:072 - сюда

00:21:221 - добавь ноту

00:21:818 - ^

00:23:386 (23386|1) - передвинь 00:23:460 - сюда

00:23:609 - добавь ноту

00:25:624 (25624|2) - передвинь 00:25:550 - сюда

00:25:997 - добавь ноту

00:27:789 - закончи лн здесь

00:28:012 (28012|2,28187|3,28386|2,28983|0) - удали

00:28:087 - добавь

00:33:908 (33908|0,34206|1) - сделай обычными нотами

00:34:580 (34580|3) - удали

00:37:540 (37540|3) - это и последующие что вообще такое? Сделай обычными нотами
Hard
Я не буду снова писать обо всех лнах, окей?

00:10:027 (10027|0) - удали

00:20:811 (20811|1,20886|3,20886|2,21035|2,21109|0,21109|1) - разберись с этим

00:22:117 (22117|3) - удали

00:26:594 - добавь еще ноту

00:27:565 (27565|2,27639|1,27714|0) - удали

00:27:639 - добавь ноту

00:27:789 - добавь еще одну ноту

00:37:042 - добавь ноту

00:37:341 - добавь

00:37:639 - ^
Insane
00:33:758 - добавь ноту

00:34:579 - зачем здесь 3 ноты? Оставь одну

00:35:251 - добавь ноту
EYA-
"NA OTJEBIS" MOD

я всего лишь немного поправлю твои паттерны, ибо все х*ево
Insane
00:04:803 - http://puu.sh/pWEsj/9383b762b0.jpg
00:07:340 - http://puu.sh/pWEw4/e77a8d0ca9.jpg
00:09:430 - http://puu.sh/pWECy/2a7173d860.jpg
00:14:505 - http://puu.sh/pWEEM/1f3f19b8bc.jpg
00:14:952 - добавь ноту
00:16:743 - удали сингл ноту
00:17:042 - http://puu.sh/pWEID/99bda3637c.jpg
00:19:281 (19281|2) - не нужна
00:19:878 - добавь ноту
00:20:624 - здесь тоже
00:20:997 (20997|2,20997|3,21072|1,21072|0) - ctrl+J
00:21:818 - ноту сюда
00:23:012 - и сюда
00:23:460 - сюда можно вставить лн
00:25:773 (25773|1,25773|0,25848|2,25848|3) - ctrl+J
00:27:937 (27937|2,28012|1) - здесь должно быть 2 дабла
00:29:131 - вместо ноты лн
00:30:549 (30549|0,30549|3,30624|2,30624|1) - ctrl+J
00:31:370 - http://puu.sh/pWEV6/ae53840b1a.jpg

ну и так далее, просмотри всю диффу, и внимательно проверь паттерны, одинаковые звуки= одинаковые паттерны.
Soul Evans
insane
00:34:355 (34355|3,34355|2,34355|0,34579|1) - reverse that Ctrl H
00:37:490 (37490|2) - Move to 3
00:50:549 (50549|3,50624|1,50699|0,50773|2,50922|3,51072|2,51072|3) - I'd suggest doing like this
00:55:251 (55251|2,55325|3) - Hmmm... maybe reverse this Ctrl H
01:16:445 (76445|0,76445|3,76520|1,76520|2,76594|3,76594|0) - I think this would be better like this
01:17:340 (77340|3,77490|2,77639|0,77639|1) - Maybe try do use this pattern
01:17:788 (77788|0,77863|1,77937|0,77937|3) - Try reversing this Ctrl H
01:24:579 (84579|0,84654|1) - Reverse those two LN's from 1,2 to 2,1
01:24:803 (84803|0) - Move to 1
AlisceaSparku

Hello, eyes-san~
Aliscea here, from TechNoir's Neo-Plaza Mania Modding Queue! :)
NM Mod as requested!
Sorry for late mod ;w;

*Please note that the mod inside this spoilerbox are only my suggestions and you are free to reject them. Just explain the reason why you rejected them so that I can learn more about your mapping style :)

*I also tend to give wrong screenshots, so kindly inform me if I did send a wrong screenshot xD

*If I suggested something like ctrl+g, please remember to take care of the hitsounds :p

*If something is not clear for you, feel free to ask me :)
Columns: 1/2/3/4


[Normal]
p.s i'm not sure about this, but I think the star rating of the easiest difficulty should be less than 2*. I had the exact same issue when I was trying to get my map ranked lol.

okay so my first impression of this map is that the map is good. The mapping style really fits with the type of soundtrack that is mapped. It's really fun for players at this level of skill.

00:04:803 - maybe perhaps you can make this stream the counterpart of the stream at 00:02:564 - , like using ctrl+h , for variation and pattern also.

00:12:863 (12863|1) - do not jack this note with 00:13:460 (13460|1) - because they follow a different sound that is very audible. I recommend rearranging it a bit.

00:20:027 - 00:39:131 - to be honest, i find this part really, really hard to map, because there are a lot of very audible sounds that feels very important to be mapped. However, considering that this is a normal difficulty it should be easy as possible. You missed out the sounds like in 00:23:236 - and 00:23:385 - , which is the same sound mapped in the 4-note stream in 00:22:714 - , etc. However, I have a suggestion
> The highlighted LN is for the 4-note stream. In my opinion this one will be good for a normal difficulty because a 4 note stream may be too -harsh- for players in that skill level.
> The first non-highlighted LN from the bottom is for the prolonged pitch that can be found there. However, feel free to not it a LN to make the LN after it be more emphasized.
> The first highlighted note from the bottom is for the snare and;
> The next highlighted notes, you should know now xD
> You can also apply this to the other parts if you find this idea worth putting.

00:51:072 (51072|1) - move this to 3 or maybe 4, since there is too much pressure on the left hand, considering that the 2 sliders before it are for the left hand.

01:07:788 - 01:24:505 - maybe add some LNs inbetween for some extra spice? xD

[Hard]
00:02:564 - this is a small problem ( http://puu.sh/q6Scb/1a216d7bc8.jpg ), but this part in the normal difficulty ( the left ) is easier compared to the right ( easy diff ). imo you should make it the same / harder so the gradual increase in difficulty can be more felt. There are other issues like this, so take note of this.

i think others are okay

[Insane]
00:10:325 (10325|2,10512|2) - im not really sure about this lol maybe ease it up a bit?

for the kiai time, i think some parts are inconsistent? like how 01:11:967 - has 3 notes and at 01:21:221 - has 3 notes also, but one has a lower pitch than the other. Maybe you're mapping in a way that i'm blind to see, but yea xD

nothing else~ fun map actually especially those SVs

Hope these help ;w;
Good luck with this map :D
Topic Starter
eyes

AlisceaSparku wrote:


Hello, eyes-san~
Aliscea here, from TechNoir's Neo-Plaza Mania Modding Queue! :)
NM Mod as requested!
Sorry for late mod ;w;

*Please note that the mod inside this spoilerbox are only my suggestions and you are free to reject them. Just explain the reason why you rejected them so that I can learn more about your mapping style :)

*I also tend to give wrong screenshots, so kindly inform me if I did send a wrong screenshot xD

*If I suggested something like ctrl+g, please remember to take care of the hitsounds :p

*If something is not clear for you, feel free to ask me :)
Columns: 1/2/3/4


[Normal]
p.s i'm not sure about this, but I think the star rating of the easiest difficulty should be less than 2*. I had the exact same issue when I was trying to get my map ranked lol.

okay so my first impression of this map is that the map is good. The mapping style really fits with the type of soundtrack that is mapped. It's really fun for players at this level of skill.

00:04:803 - maybe perhaps you can make this stream the counterpart of the stream at 00:02:564 - , like using ctrl+h , for variation and pattern also.

00:12:863 (12863|1) - do not jack this note with 00:13:460 (13460|1) - because they follow a different sound that is very audible. I recommend rearranging it a bit.

00:20:027 - 00:39:131 - to be honest, i find this part really, really hard to map, because there are a lot of very audible sounds that feels very important to be mapped. However, considering that this is a normal difficulty it should be easy as possible. You missed out the sounds like in 00:23:236 - and 00:23:385 - , which is the same sound mapped in the 4-note stream in 00:22:714 - , etc. However, I have a suggestion
> The highlighted LN is for the 4-note stream. In my opinion this one will be good for a normal difficulty because a 4 note stream may be too -harsh- for players in that skill level.
> The first non-highlighted LN from the bottom is for the prolonged pitch that can be found there. However, feel free to not it a LN to make the LN after it be more emphasized.
> The first highlighted note from the bottom is for the snare and;
> The next highlighted notes, you should know now xD
> You can also apply this to the other parts if you find this idea worth putting.

00:51:072 (51072|1) - move this to 3 or maybe 4, since there is too much pressure on the left hand, considering that the 2 sliders before it are for the left hand.

01:07:788 - 01:24:505 - maybe add some LNs inbetween for some extra spice? xD

[Hard]
00:02:564 - this is a small problem ( http://puu.sh/q6Scb/1a216d7bc8.jpg ), but this part in the normal difficulty ( the left ) is easier compared to the right ( easy diff ). imo you should make it the same / harder so the gradual increase in difficulty can be more felt. There are other issues like this, so take note of this.

i think others are okay

[Insane]
00:10:325 (10325|2,10512|2) - im not really sure about this lol maybe ease it up a bit?

for the kiai time, i think some parts are inconsistent? like how 01:11:967 - has 3 notes and at 01:21:221 - has 3 notes also, but one has a lower pitch than the other. Maybe you're mapping in a way that i'm blind to see, but yea xD

nothing else~ fun map actually especially those SVs

Hope these help ;w;
Good luck with this map :D

Big Thanks!
Topic Starter
eyes
:)
Niks
NICE BG
- Ly0572 -
Hi~
Req from my sh♥ty queue

NM | M4M

1|2|3|4


ez
00:28:087 (28087|0) - move to 2 maybe.. to make it comfy
00:28:385 (28385|3) - i thought youre following the heavy sound? y not move it here 00:28:534 -
00:32:266 (32266|0,32564|2) - ctrl+j better flow
00:33:161 (33161|3) - Ln should end here imo 00:33:758 -
if u change that Ln then move this 00:33:609 (33609|0) - note here 00:33:758 - aswell
00:33:908 (33908|1) - move here 00:34:057 -
00:36:146 (36146|0) - delete, i dont here same sound as this 00:36:146 (36146|0) -
00:35:997 - add note to 1
00:36:146 - ^ 3
00:36:445 (36445|2) - can keep it, but i suggedt to change it to an LN in col. 2 or 1.. ends here 00:36:743 -
00:38:684 - add note to 2
00:39:878 (39878|2) - should be here i think 00:39:728 -
00:40:027 - add note to 4
00:40:773 (40773|2) - should be here 00:40:624 - col. 2
00:40:922 - missed a note
00:41:072 - from here, i suggest http://puu.sh/q9Z8x/d049868a2d.png
00:51:818 (51818|0) - delete
00:51:669 - add to 1
00:51:967 - ^ 4
00:52:714 (52714|2) - ln starts here 00:52:863 -
00:52:564 - add to 2
00:54:057 - ^ 4
00:54:206 (54206|2) - delete
00:54:355 - add to 3
00:54:952 - ^ 1
00:55:400 (55400|2) - move to 00:55:251 -
01:24:505 (84505|3) - change to LN ends here 01:24:803 -
01:25:102 (85102|2) - ^ ends here 01:25:400 - col. 1
01:25:400 (85400|0,85699|3) - ctrl+h
01:28:684 - missed a note
01:37:714 - add to 4, same sound as 01:37:490 (97490|3) -

nm
00:06:445 (6445|1,6594|0) - move one col. to right
00:10:176 (10176|3,10325|0) - kinda hard for nm diff. maybe change it to a single LN, ends here 00:10:475 -
00:26:743 (26743|1) - move to 4
01:07:191 (67191|3,67340|2,67490|1,67639|0) - kinda hard too, change to an LN, ends here 01:07:788 -
01:26:818 (86818|0) - should be here imo 01:26:893 -
01:32:415 (92415|0,92564|1,92714|2) - change to an LN also, ends here 01:32:863 -

hd
00:05:624 (5624|3) - delete
00:14:803 (14803|3) - move to 2
00:37:117 (37117|0,37191|2) - delete
01:02:266 (62266|0,62340|1,62415|2,62490|3) - ctrl+c this and ctrl+v here 01:02:564 -
now delete this 01:02:714 (62714|0,62788|3,62825|1,63012|3) -
01:02:714 - add LN to 4 , ends here 01:03:012 -
01:37:714 (97714|3) - move to 1.... same sound as this 01:37:490 (97490|0) -
Topic Starter
eyes

- Ly0572 - wrote:

Hi~
Req from my sh♥ty queue

NM | M4M

1|2|3|4


ez
00:28:087 (28087|0) - move to 2 maybe.. to make it comfy
00:28:385 (28385|3) - i thought youre following the heavy sound? y not move it here 00:28:534 -
00:32:266 (32266|0,32564|2) - ctrl+j better flow
00:33:161 (33161|3) - Ln should end here imo 00:33:758 -
if u change that Ln then move this 00:33:609 (33609|0) - note here 00:33:758 - aswell
00:33:908 (33908|1) - move here 00:34:057 -
00:36:146 (36146|0) - delete, i dont here same sound as this 00:36:146 (36146|0) -
00:35:997 - add note to 1
00:36:146 - ^ 3
00:36:445 (36445|2) - can keep it, but i suggedt to change it to an LN in col. 2 or 1.. ends here 00:36:743 -
00:38:684 - add note to 2
00:39:878 (39878|2) - should be here i think 00:39:728 -
00:40:027 - add note to 4
00:40:773 (40773|2) - should be here 00:40:624 - col. 2
00:40:922 - missed a note
00:41:072 - from here, i suggest http://puu.sh/q9Z8x/d049868a2d.png
00:51:818 (51818|0) - delete
00:51:669 - add to 1
00:51:967 - ^ 4
00:52:714 (52714|2) - ln starts here 00:52:863 -
00:52:564 - add to 2
00:54:057 - ^ 4
00:54:206 (54206|2) - delete
00:54:355 - add to 3
00:54:952 - ^ 1
00:55:400 (55400|2) - move to 00:55:251 -
01:24:505 (84505|3) - change to LN ends here 01:24:803 -
01:25:102 (85102|2) - ^ ends here 01:25:400 - col. 1
01:25:400 (85400|0,85699|3) - ctrl+h
01:28:684 - missed a note
01:37:714 - add to 4, same sound as 01:37:490 (97490|3) -

nm
00:06:445 (6445|1,6594|0) - move one col. to right
00:10:176 (10176|3,10325|0) - kinda hard for nm diff. maybe change it to a single LN, ends here 00:10:475 -
00:26:743 (26743|1) - move to 4
01:07:191 (67191|3,67340|2,67490|1,67639|0) - kinda hard too, change to an LN, ends here 01:07:788 -
01:26:818 (86818|0) - should be here imo 01:26:893 -
01:32:415 (92415|0,92564|1,92714|2) - change to an LN also, ends here 01:32:863 -

hd
00:05:624 (5624|3) - delete
00:14:803 (14803|3) - move to 2
00:37:117 (37117|0,37191|2) - delete
01:02:266 (62266|0,62340|1,62415|2,62490|3) - ctrl+c this and ctrl+v here 01:02:564 -
now delete this 01:02:714 (62714|0,62788|3,62825|1,63012|3) -
01:02:714 - add LN to 4 , ends here 01:03:012 -
01:37:714 (97714|3) - move to 1.... same sound as this 01:37:490 (97490|0) -
Thanks :)
erlinadewi-
mark for mod

Hello! >w<)/

as your request from VirElin's Queue

4K 1|2|3|4



[general]
  1. Background must be 1366x768
  2. Please add "REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!" (without ") in the source
  3. OD & HP Suggest > EZ = 6 & 7 or 6.5 & 6.5 > HD = 7.5 & 7.5


    [EZ]
  4. 00:15:251 (15251|3) - move to col 3 for balance
  5. 00:18:833 (18833|0) - col 2 for balance
  6. 00:37:937 (37937|3,38236|1,38534|3,38684|1,39131|3,39281|1) - wow 2 4 intensifies* maybe you can re-pattern those note for variation
  7. 00:41:967 (41967|3) - col 3 for balance
  8. 00:56:296 (56296|3) - col 3 more balance, if you acc that 00:56:743 (56743|1,56893|3) - pls ctrl j these note for more balance

    [MX]
  9. 00:01:669 (1669|3) - col 3 more balance
  10. 00:08:087 (8087|1) - col 3 for pitch
  11. 00:09:094 (9094|0) - unsnapped note. should be in blue tick 00:09:057 - here
  12. 00:11:221 (11221|2) - i think better you add in col 4 since have same pitch with 00:11:520 -
  13. 00:13:609 - maybe this part too ^
  14. 00:43:161 (43161|3) - 2 LN + 1 note is good enough
  15. 01:11:520 (71520|3) - col 2 avoid jack
  16. 01:24:803 (84803|3) - should end 01:24:952 - in here. and you can make new LN from 01:24:952 - until 01:25:102 - because different pitch
  17. 01:31:669 - why this snare have 3 notes but 01:31:967 - here have 2 notes. maybe you can remove 1 note in here 01:31:669 -

Feel free to reject ~ Goodluck Guys >w<)b
Topic Starter
eyes

erlinadewi- wrote:

mark for mod

Hello! >w<)/

as your request from VirElin's Queue

4K 1|2|3|4



[general]
  1. Background must be 1366x768
  2. Please add "REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!" (without ") in the source
  3. OD & HP Suggest > EZ = 6 & 7 or 6.5 & 6.5 > HD = 7.5 & 7.5


    [EZ]
  4. 00:15:251 (15251|3) - move to col 3 for balance
  5. 00:18:833 (18833|0) - col 2 for balance
  6. 00:37:937 (37937|3,38236|1,38534|3,38684|1,39131|3,39281|1) - wow 2 4 intensifies* maybe you can re-pattern those note for variation
  7. 00:41:967 (41967|3) - col 3 for balance
  8. 00:56:296 (56296|3) - col 3 more balance, if you acc that 00:56:743 (56743|1,56893|3) - pls ctrl j these note for more balance

    [MX]
  9. 00:01:669 (1669|3) - col 3 more balance
  10. 00:08:087 (8087|1) - col 3 for pitch
  11. 00:09:094 (9094|0) - unsnapped note. should be in blue tick 00:09:057 - here
  12. 00:11:221 (11221|2) - i think better you add in col 4 since have same pitch with 00:11:520 -
  13. 00:13:609 - maybe this part too ^
  14. 00:43:161 (43161|3) - 2 LN + 1 note is good enough
  15. 01:11:520 (71520|3) - col 2 avoid jack
  16. 01:24:803 (84803|3) - should end 01:24:952 - in here. and you can make new LN from 01:24:952 - until 01:25:102 - because different pitch
  17. 01:31:669 - why this snare have 3 notes but 01:31:967 - here have 2 notes. maybe you can remove 1 note in here 01:31:669 -

Feel free to reject ~ Goodluck Guys >w<)b

Thanks! :)
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