Yoshino Nanjo - Kimi o Sagashi ni [CatchTheBeat|Osu] · forum

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-11T17:32:18+00:00

:3 don't forget adding my name to tags (and use hitsound copier /runs)

2016-06-30 17:44 Ascendance: 00:08:595 (3,1) -  weird spinner distance
2016-06-30 17:44 Shad0w1and: I cant really play these
2016-06-30 17:44 Shad0w1and: oh ok
2016-06-30 17:44 Shad0w1and: what would be good for ctb
2016-06-30 17:45 Ascendance: 1/2 distance is fine
2016-06-30 17:45 Shad0w1and: ok
2016-06-30 17:45 Ascendance: 00:11:166 (2) - x:224 maybe
2016-06-30 17:45 Shad0w1and: ok
2016-06-30 17:45 Ascendance: 00:12:366 (1,2) - x:240?
2016-06-30 17:46 Shad0w1and: k
2016-06-30 17:46 Ascendance: 00:13:738 (1) - x:112 this one as well
2016-06-30 17:46 Ascendance: 00:14:938 (1,1) - you want this to be hyper?
2016-06-30 17:47 Shad0w1and: idk lol
2016-06-30 17:47 Ascendance: lolol
2016-06-30 17:47 Shad0w1and: all my experience was gained by watch replays
2016-06-30 17:47 Ascendance: 00:15:452 (1,2,3,4) - x:192 then
2016-06-30 17:47 Ascendance: ah
2016-06-30 17:47 Ascendance: well if you need
2016-06-30 17:47 Ascendance: I can help with making ctb diffs
2016-06-30 17:48 Shad0w1and: yeah if you have time :D
2016-06-30 17:48 Ascendance: sure:3
2016-06-30 17:48 Ascendance: which diff do you want?
2016-06-30 17:49 Shad0w1and: actually do you think this diff could be overdose?
2016-06-30 17:49 Shad0w1and: because in std, 00:56:029 - starting this part is really intense
2016-06-30 17:50 Ascendance: oh my
2016-06-30 17:50 Ascendance: in theory, yes
2016-06-30 17:50 Ascendance: but it may need some work on some spacing things
2016-06-30 17:51 Shad0w1and: then I want a rain if you dont mind? :D
2016-06-30 17:51 Ascendance: sure~
2016-06-30 17:51 Shad0w1and: I am autoplay mapper I watch auto play my maps Xd
2016-06-30 17:51 Ascendance: lolol
2016-06-30 17:51 Shad0w1and: want hype
2016-06-30 17:53 Shad0w1and: uhm now I need more BGs lol
2016-06-30 17:53 Ascendance: gimme moe bg
2016-06-30 17:53 Shad0w1and: will try find some Xd
2016-06-30 17:53 Shad0w1and: eroge not much moe though
2016-06-30 18:00 Shad0w1and: oh another question, can I use custom diff naming for ctb diff in my set?
2016-06-30 18:00 Ascendance: only in highest diff
2016-06-30 18:00 Ascendance: yes
2016-06-30 18:00 Shad0w1and: yeah
2016-06-30 18:00 Shad0w1and: good XD
2016-07-01 00:27 Shad0w1and: Hi its me again, I just done my overdose and may I get some your thoughts about it? if you have time ;w;
2016-07-01 00:27 Shad0w1and: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016871 Nanjo Yoshino - Kimi o Sagashi ni [Motomeru]]
2016-07-01 00:28 Ascendance: sure~
2016-07-01 00:30 Shad0w1and: overdone?
2016-07-01 00:30 Ascendance: mm just some hard spacings
2016-07-01 00:33 Ascendance: yeah
2016-07-01 00:33 Ascendance: the rhythm is fine
2016-07-01 00:33 Ascendance: just some distance need to be adjusted
2016-07-01 00:33 Shad0w1and: yeah pretty sure I got a lot problems Xd
2016-07-01 00:34 Shad0w1and: 00:48:529 - before here is ok right?
2016-07-01 00:34 Shad0w1and: spacing
2016-07-01 00:35 Ascendance: lets see~
2016-07-01 00:35 Ascendance: 00:17:681 (3) - x:288
2016-07-01 00:36 Shad0w1and: k
2016-07-01 00:36 Ascendance: 00:44:252 (2) - x:240
2016-07-01 00:36 Shad0w1and: oh
2016-07-01 00:37 Ascendance: 00:46:309 (2) - x:224
2016-07-01 00:37 Shad0w1and: k
2016-07-01 00:37 Ascendance: 00:49:052 (3,1) - x:112
2016-07-01 00:38 Ascendance: 00:50:081 (1,3) - x:240
2016-07-01 00:38 Ascendance: 00:51:452 (1) - x:304
2016-07-01 00:39 Ascendance: 00:52:995 (1) - x:416
2016-07-01 00:39 Ascendance: 00:54:195 (1) - x:32
2016-07-01 00:39 Ascendance: 00:54:366 (2) - x:176
2016-07-01 00:39 Ascendance: 00:54:538 (3) - x:32
2016-07-01 00:40 Ascendance: 00:55:052 (1) - x:16
2016-07-01 00:40 Ascendance: 00:55:738 (2) - x:144
2016-07-01 00:40 Shad0w1and: oh, to differentiate downbeat more
2016-07-01 00:41 Shad0w1and: ctb is interesting
2016-07-01 00:41 Ascendance: :D
2016-07-01 00:41 Ascendance: 00:59:166 (2) - x:256
2016-07-01 00:42 Ascendance: 00:59:852 (5) - 128
2016-07-01 00:42 Ascendance: 01:00:024 (6) - 432
2016-07-01 00:43 Ascendance: 01:00:881 (3) - 224
2016-07-01 00:43 Ascendance: 01:01:224 (5) - 288
2016-07-01 00:43 Ascendance: 01:01:395 (6) - 176
2016-07-01 00:44 Ascendance: 01:02:766 (6) - 208
2016-07-01 00:44 Ascendance: 01:02:938 (1) - 496
2016-07-01 00:44 Ascendance: 01:03:966 (5) - 160
2016-07-01 00:44 Ascendance: 01:04:824 (2) - 272
2016-07-01 00:45 Shad0w1and: k
2016-07-01 00:45 Ascendance: 01:06:366 (2) - 144
2016-07-01 00:45 Ascendance: 01:06:538 (3) - 320
2016-07-01 00:45 Ascendance: 01:06:709 (4) - 176
2016-07-01 00:45 Ascendance: aaaa 
2016-07-01 00:45 Shad0w1and: you said 01:00:024 (6) - 432, so 01:00:195 (1) - 4.42x DS is ok?
2016-07-01 00:46 Ascendance: yep
2016-07-01 00:46 Ascendance: it makes a hyperdash
2016-07-01 00:46 Shad0w1and: lol
2016-07-01 00:46 Ascendance: (the red fruit)
2016-07-01 00:46 Ascendance: its used to create emphasis just like a jump would in standard
2016-07-01 00:47 Ascendance: sleepy so, I'll fix rest tomorrow:3

Rain

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304,240,66366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,66538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,176,68938,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,176,69452,2,0,L|144:176,1,113.399996539307
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160,176,70309,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,152,75109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,160,75966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,288,80766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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24,208,83681,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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144,320,86766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,312,86938,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2016-07-11T20:13:09+00:00

[Dynamix's Extra]

理論上還沒到X標，所以我覺得叫Insane就可以了
00:02:938 (6,7) - 這兩個可是隔了一個空拍啊，放的太近了，我建議把6放下一點，像這樣
SPOILER
00:05:681 (6,7) - 這兩個相對來說就隔太遠了，把00:06:538 (7,8) - 往左邊放
00:08:081 (1) - 轉盤在00:07:566 - 開始比較好吧
00:47:595 (2) - 變速加個NC
00:50:595 (6) - NC
00:58:824 (1,2) - 這可是1/4啊，這麼大的間距會讓人誤認是1/2，要縮小間距
00:59:509 (4,5) - 同樣要縮小間距
01:00:195 (1,2) - 01:02:938 (1,2) - 01:04:309 (1,2) - 這幾個都是要改
01:08:938 (7,1) - 你這個間距太大了，直接看這個梗可能沒什麼感覺，但是你看看前面的01:06:881 (6,1) - 是隔了一拍的，而你這個看起來同樣間距的卻是1/2，所以玩家打起來就會很不自然
01:09:795 (3,4) - 前面說到的1/4間距問題，對比一下01:09:452 (2,3) - 就知道很這樣很不好
01:09:795 (3) - 這個也可以NC一下
前面的部分看起來還可以，但是去到kiai開始排列就不太行了，整個圖難度都壓在了kiai和kiai後面的地方，分佈不平均。舉個例子，00:10:995 - 到00:23:338 - 還有01:20:938 - 到01:26:938 - 是同樣的段落，但是前者的排列看只是像hard一樣，而後者卻全都是Extra大跳，這說明了這個難度的不平均。想要提升整個圖的質量，難度分佈要合理。
其次在間距處理方面不是很好，從上面的摸也能看出大部分都是間距問題，1/1 1/2還有1/4的間距分別不夠明顯，主要就是大間距和小間距用的很混亂而且不合曲，最明顯就是01:06:881 (6,1) - 和01:08:938 (7,1) - 。
這裡給你個意見，在處理1/1空拍的時候不一定只要想著把物件放到很遠，大多數人處理空拍的方法反而是把物件疊一起，比如說01:04:824 (3,4) - 和01:05:509 (6,1) - 這兩個地方，打起來很奇怪，如果你把34疊一起，然後61也疊一起，這樣空拍打起來會更適合。然而在你這個難度裡面我幾乎看不見有任何地方的空拍是用堆疊處理，全都是放到遠處，所以圖就會有間距不明顯的問題了。
我再指出一些用堆疊更適合的地方讓你修改：
00:15:966 (7,8) -
00:22:995 (4,5) - 這個也不一定要疊，但是如果不疊的話5要再放遠很多的地方
01:06:881 (6,1) -
01:24:195 (4,5) -
總體來說這個難度還需要一點質量上的提升，期待你的進步。

[Mitsuketa]

00:05:681 (1) - 放在00:05:166 (2) - 上面好打點
00:10:566 (4,1) - 這個轉折的地方有點難看
00:47:509 (1,3) - 沒疊好

EijiKuinbii

331 posts

Joined April 2015

EijiKuinbii 2016-07-11T20:32:15+00:00

nice map

Last edited by EijiKuinbii 2016-12-05T14:08:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

pw384

2,286 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2016-07-12T08:47:56+00:00

空降水摸大师

modding format information:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[Mitsuketa]

00:24:709 (1) - The curve is too huge, breaking the atmosphere here and felt out of place, since the song itself is calm here.
00:36:709 (3) - A 1/2 slider here is better imo
00:40:309 (2) - What about reversing the slider?
00:56:081 (1) - This slider seems to be randomly placed and can be improved. I suggest the following one:
Picture
00:57:281 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing should be incremental
01:26:595 (1,2,3) - Make them linear plz

[Dynamix's Extra]

00:02:938 (6,7) - The spacing seems strange to some extent. What about adding a note at 00:03:452 - ?
00:47:595 (2) - New combo.
00:49:909 (4,5,6,7) - I don't know why you stack 1/2s here, since you already stack 1/4s at 00:48:709 (3) - , 00:49:566 (2) - , 00:55:224 (2,3) - 00:56:424 (2) - . They feel a bit weird, just saying.
00:53:852 (2,3) - Kencho has already mentioned it.
01:13:738 (10,11) - I think a 1/4 slider fits better.
00:47:852 to 00:56:424 - And again, you need to think over the stacks during this part, especially this 00:49:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - . The stacks here turn out to be sudden pauses of movement, but players tend to anticipate a jump at 00:49:909 (4,5) - . And also, 00:49:224 (1,2,3) - are narrowly placed, making the flow 2->3->4 relatively weird.

[Little's Insane]

00:54:709 (1) - Reversing the slider will make it more fun to play imo.

[Misure's Hard]

01:09:452 - Why not end the kiai here just like other difficulties? I find a switch-off here quite interesting.
Yeah nice.

[Normal]

00:21:795 (1,2) - You can make a blanket here.
01:02:766 (4) - Somehow difficult to read as a stack in Normal.
I feel a bit concerned about the spacing changes (I mean, absolute spacing) in Normal. Although they are okay in my opinion, I just find 00:21:795 (1,2,3,4) - a little confusing. Maybe you need to think it over.

[Narcissu's Easy]

01:02:424 (2,3) - How about making them parallel?
01:26:595 (5) - New combo.

Yeah I know nothing about ctb mapping so I skip them. Good luck!

Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2016-07-12T13:41:50+00:00

[主难度]

01:19:566 (1,2,3) - 能不能给尾巴静音啊听着好明显强迫症要疯了

[Dynamix]

00:02:938 (6,7) - 稍微远点吧，这样实际ds不对视觉ds更不对
00:15:966 (7,8) - 这里乐器声音很连续，空着不如换成滑条
本来就不到2分钟的歌break这么一大段稍微有点不合适的感觉，考虑低sv跟一下钢琴吧
00:47:595 (2) - 变速nc。另外，即使nc了我觉得也是unreadable，考虑不要变速这么多，可以用非常弯的滑条来达到打起来其实慢了但读起来很明白的效果
00:51:109 (7,8) - 可以远点
01:13:224 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 感觉强行用连打跟乐器音不合适，那个音量很小而且没有明确的节奏，一直在跟鼓和vocal这里感觉不太自然

别的难度懒看

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-13T04:04:47+00:00

dynamix's diff all fixed and changed to collab diff ex

Pata-Mon wrote:
[主难度]
01:19:566 (1,2,3) - 能不能给尾巴静音啊听着好明显强迫症要疯了

384059043 wrote:
空降水摸大师

modding format information:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.

[Mitsuketa]
00:24:709 (1) - The curve is too huge, breaking the atmosphere here and felt out of place, since the song itself is calm here.

00:36:709 (3) - A 1/2 slider here is better imo

00:40:309 (2) - What about reversing the slider?

00:56:081 (1) - This slider seems to be randomly placed and can be improved. I suggest the following one:
Picture

00:57:281 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing should be incremental

01:26:595 (1,2,3) - Make them linear plz

[Normal]
00:21:795 (1,2) - You can make a blanket here.

01:02:766 (4) - Somehow difficult to read as a stack in Normal.

I feel a bit concerned about the spacing changes (I mean, absolute spacing) in Normal. Although they are okay in my opinion, I just find 00:21:795 (1,2,3,4) - a little confusing. Maybe you need to think it over.

Kencho wrote:
[Mitsuketa]
00:05:681 (1) - 放在00:05:166 (2) - 上面好打點
00:10:566 (4,1) - 這個轉折的地方有點難看
00:47:509 (1,3) - 沒疊好

zeborg wrote:
Hello, M4M from your queue

[General]

[Normal]
00:00:366 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - in this section I feel there's no need of NC every 2-3 objects, try keep keeping it 1,2,3,1,2,3 or something that's consistent with the rhythm
00:17:509 (3,4) - try to keep them equally straight
00:21:795 (1) - would be better if improved (preferably convert into blanket unless it's just style)
00:56:081 (1,2) - will look proper if 1's corner sets in the centre of 2's head
01:01:224 (5,6) - looks a little odd blanket, I think equidistant gap from the right side / lowering 5's tail a little might do the magic stcking veiw you will see
01:08:766 - I hear a beat there not for normal

[Mitsuketa]
00:16:309 (1,2) - I don't feel the need to NC here
00:36:709 (3) - it's the only blue tick in this part, which feels odd and doesn't really suit the beat in the background added another, thx for reminding
01:18:709 (3,1) - that's a long gap, try to increase the distance like you've done in 01:18:195 (1,2) - to avoid rhythm confusion NC is enough for a hint
01:19:909 (2,3) - slider bow looks a little weird, maybe experiment a little more on that

[/size] [/centre][/notice]

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-13T06:30:09+00:00

@384059043
I think the current direction of the slider is better.
Thanks.

YukaRei

201 posts

Joined May 2014

YukaRei 2016-07-13T07:05:07+00:00

Hi, here my ctb mod ewe

Ascendance's Rain

I'm not sure at all, but now the max fruits on a combo is 8 right? if it so, you need a new combo in these parts in my opinion: 00:01:395 (1,2,3,4) - 00:06:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:13:738 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:21:281 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:47:338 (1,2,3,4) - 01:01:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 01:18:195 (1,2,3,4) -

00:12:709 (2) - Move it to the left, put it near to 00:12:366 (1) -

00:13:738 (1) - Same here, I think the Hdash on 00:13:566 (5) - is a little hard, a 3,50 - 4,20 distance feels good

00:14:938 (4) - Same, move it near to 00:14:766 (3) -

00:17:852 (1) - Try to reduce the distance of the slider's notes

00:19:052 (4,1,2,3,4) - Move it 1 point to the right

00:20:252 (5) - Move this to the right, it's a bit far to 00:20:424 (1) -

00:22:995 (5) - Try to reduce the distance of the slider's notes to reduce the distance between 00:22:995 (5,1) -

00:27:109 (3,4) - Reduce the distance

00:28:652 (3) - x:112, I think feels good on left

00:29:852 (3,1) - Reduce the distance

00:31:224 (3,4) - ^

00:31:566 (1) - ctrl+g and x:376

00:34:138 (2) - x:216

00:34:824 (2) - ctrl+h and x:296

00:35:338 (3) - x:344

00:35:681 (1,2) - ctrl+h, x:192 on 00:35:681 (1) - and x:184 on 00:36:195 (2) -

00:36:709 (3) - x:240

00:38:424 (1,2) - Reduce the distance

00:40:995 (4,1) - ^

00:42:366 (4) - x:160

00:42:538 (1,2) - Move 3 points to the left

00:45:281 (1) - x:16

00:53:338 (1) - x:440

00:54:195 (3) - x:368

00:54:366 (4) - x:304

00:57:452 (5) - x:344

00:58:309 (3) - Reduce the distance of the slider's notes

01:13:738 (4,1) - Reduce the distance

01:26:252 (3,4,5) - Reduce the distance of the Hdashes

Motomeru

New Combo: 00:10:995 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:32:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 01:16:652 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -

00:15:794 (1,2) - Reduce the distance

00:16:652 (2,3) - ^

00:19:052 (5,1) - ^

00:20:424 (5,1) - ^

00:25:395 (3,1) - ^

00:27:795 (2,1) - ^

00:31:738 (2,3,4,5) - Reduce the distance between all notes

00:43:224 (4,5) - Reduce the distance

00:45:795 (2,1) - ^

00:46:309 (2,3) - ^

00:47:509 (1,1) - ^

00:55:052 (1,2) - ^

00:58:824 (1) - ctrl+g

00:59:166 (2,3) - Reduce the distance

01:00:024 (6,1) - Hdash is ok, but the distance is long, reduce it a bit

01:06:881 (5,1) - Reduce the distance

01:18:024 (7,1) - ^

01:25:738 (2,3) - ^

01:26:766 (2,3) - ^

That's all I can do for the moment, all are suggestions, I hope it will be help to you

Have success Ranking it c:

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-07-13T07:05:35+00:00

All fixed, thanks for modding, zeborg and 状元384

顺便修了一些细节

Codesu

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57881
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Kimi o Sagashi ni
TitleUnicode:きみを探しに
Artist:Nanjo Yoshino
ArtistUnicode:南條愛乃
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Misure's Hard
Source:グリザイアの楽園
Tags:Grisaia no Rakuen - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA - fripSide Nanjou Dynamix Little CloudSplash16 Misure Narcissu Ascendance
BeatmapID:1016417
BeatmapSetID:474696

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.8
SliderMultiplier:1.35
SliderTickRate:1

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129,116,86767,1,10,0:1:0:0:
97,312,86939,1,14,0:0:0:0:

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-13T10:26:48+00:00

ctb my diff all fixed

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-07-13T11:57:44+00:00

hi

Normal
00:34:309 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I don't like this at all. This would be extremely hard for players at this level to do, couldnt you use reverse sliders instead?
01:04:309 (1) - DS, and make the blanket a bit bigger, it would look better
[]
Little
00:31:395 (10,1) - The stack here halts the flow for me
[]
Extra
00:16:995 (3) - blanket
01:07:224 (1) - ^
00:56:081 (1) to 00:57:795 (1) - have multiple timing points to increase volume over time? would match the music and its also more noticeable ehre than other diffs as it's all circles here
[]
Sukebe
01:25:395 (2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - The spacing seems underdone here (sounds wrong but I purposely wanted to emphasize the opposite of overdone). Basically the spacing seems quite low for a 5*+ diff especially the last 3 circles
[]
gl

Underdogs

820 posts

Joined July 2014

Underdogs 2016-07-13T12:10:11+00:00

...

Narcissus EZ

00:14:938 (3) - add a circle before this slider might be good
01:12:024 (4,1) - i think this one is a bit ugly

Normal

Increase CS?
00:34:309 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think these parts are a bit confusing (i think, especially 00:36:709 (3,1) - /00:35:338 (3,1) - since the circles are originally meant to be a 1/2 beat
00:57:966 (1,2) - better to make a 1/2 slider for flow xd
01:14:595 (6,2) - this one plays pretty neat. But I mention this out just in case BNs disqualify coz of overlap

Hard

00:27:796 (4,1) - if these are mirror sliders, it'll spice the flow more (example :

sry das it ;_:

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-13T13:24:41+00:00

@Kisses, that part feels fine to me. It also makes sense because the same pitch is played twice there.

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-13T13:27:25+00:00

wait sukebe? Who? LoL
updated HS, fixed missing clap

Plus4j

Beatmap Nominator

1,069 posts

Joined March 2014

Plus4j 2016-07-14T07:06:25+00:00

Nice map

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-07-15T00:51:47+00:00

fix all, but i don't how to change “look like ugly” lol

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57881
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Kimi o Sagashi ni
TitleUnicode:きみを探しに
Artist:Nanjo Yoshino
ArtistUnicode:南條愛乃
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Narcissu's Easy
Source:グリザイアの楽園
Tags:Grisaia no Rakuen - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA - fripSide Nanjou Dynamix Little CloudSplash16 Misure Narcissu Ascendance
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Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-07-15T07:40:04+00:00

@Underdogs: not a problem imo, thanks for your modding!

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2016-07-15T13:45:36+00:00

[Mitsuketa]
開頭我覺得00:01:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 跟00:03:795 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - 太overmap了... 那麼calm的部份就放這樣的1/4 circle不太適合lol，不如放些1/1的節奏
00:15:966 (2,3) - 個人認為這樣的1/1 gap不應該放開，建議stack (覺得這首歌不太適合把1/1空的拍子放開)
00:22:481 (1,1) - remove nc
00:27:452 (1) - remove nc
00:45:795 (2,1) - 建議stack，原因如上
01:00:195 (1) - 這個跳得太遠...
01:01:395 (6,1) - 這個跳非常卡手，因為是從01:00:709 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這個十字跳突然轉右aim，玩起來感覺很差；我覺得把那個slider ctrl+g然後微調比現在那個好多了；不過如果你有其他方法也無所謂
01:18:538 (2) - nc

[Extra]
00:27:452 (4) - nc
00:28:824 (1) - remove nc
覺得把這些逐一ctrl g flow感覺順暢點 00:33:966 (3) - 00:34:309 (1) - 00:34:824 (2) -
00:58:138 (1) - 建議放x47 y233現在的放置好像有點遠
01:00:195 (1) - 不如ctrl g，有點遠

個人比較喜歡這個diff...主難度印象不好

其他diff找不出有什麼問題了都挺好的orz
gl!

(btw 能幫忙摸摸我rezero death跟wmw的難度嗎謝謝!)

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-15T17:25:10+00:00

只改了一点NC，逆flow都是故意的，不好打的地方问题都不大

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-07-16T06:34:12+00:00

Hi

[General]

Video is missing in Narcissu's Easy.

[Narcissu's Easy]

00:31:566 (1,2) - The flow here is quite complicated for Easy, how about rotate the tail of 00:31:566 (1) to the right and make it pararell with 00:30:195 (2) ?
00:37:052 (1,2) - Use a 3/2 repeat slider instead of this? You missed a strong sound on 00:37:566 though. Same applies to 00:39:795 (1,2) .

[Normal]

00:39:795 (1,2) - 00:41:166 (1,2) - Any reason for hitsounding these differently on sliderheads? To me 00:39:795 - 00:41:166 are the same sound, so as 00:40:309 - 00:41:681 .
00:55:738 (6,1,2,3,4) - How about something similar to this? This way you can avoid an overlap on 00:56:081 (1,2) which is a bit hard to read, also this way you got a chance to stack 00:57:281 (4) under 00:54:709 (4) for aesthetic reasons.
01:08:424 (3) - Shorten this to 01:08:766 and then add a circle on 01:08:938 ? Because the sound you're trying to emphasize with 01:08:424 (3) faded out on 01:08:766 so there's nothing to be supported with a slider after that point.

[Misure's Hard]

00:08:939 (3) - If you're following the same sound as 00:09:453 (1) then this should be a 1/1 slider, also the sound is not that prominent so I suggest using a smaller spacing on 00:08:596 (2,3) . Maybe move 00:08:939 (3) down a bit?
00:15:796 (3,4) - The rhythm could have been ctrl+g'd or sth because a strong sound on 00:15:966 turned out to be a slider tail and then you made a weaker sound clickable with 00:16:139 (4) .
00:47:510 (6) - Optional but a circle instead of this would give a nice pause for a change in rhythm as well.
01:04:824 (2,3,4) - How about something like this? You can avoid an awkward overlap 01:04:310 (1,2) and you're able to maintain the same spacing this way.

[Little's Insane]

00:16:224 - There's no sound here so how about removing 00:16:224 (6) and change 00:15:966 (4,5) to a slider to support a strong sound there?
00:19:738 (3,4,1) - Use a consistent spacing like what you did on 00:14:252 (3,4,1) ? Also it's a bit off since 00:20:252 (4,1) has a smaller spacing than 00:19:738 (3,4) while there's a cymbal on 00:20:424 .

Hope this helps and good luck~

Maboyu

373 posts

Joined November 2011

Maboyu 2016-07-16T11:52:22+00:00

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Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-16T12:44:18+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi

[General]

[Normal]

00:39:795 (1,2) - 00:41:166 (1,2) - Any reason for hitsounding these differently on sliderheads? To me 00:39:795 - 00:41:166 are the same sound, so as 00:40:309 - 00:41:681 .
00:55:738 (6,1,2,3,4) - How about something similar to this? This way you can avoid an overlap on 00:56:081 (1,2) which is a bit hard to read, also this way you got a chance to stack 00:57:281 (4) under 00:54:709 (4) for aesthetic reasons.
01:08:424 (3) - Shorten this to 01:08:766 and then add a circle on 01:08:938 ? Because the sound you're trying to emphasize with 01:08:424 (3) faded out on 01:08:766 so there's nothing to be supported with a slider after that point.

for rejected ones I feel they does not matter and I like my original ideas.

Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-07-16T15:30:10+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Hi

[Misure's Hard]

00:08:939 (3) - If you're following the same sound as 00:09:453 (1) then this should be a 1/1 slider, also the sound is not that prominent so I suggest using a smaller spacing on 00:08:596 (2,3) . Maybe move 00:08:939 (3) down a bit? um... I know what to follow herem, but just want to make it smooth for this part lol
00:15:796 (3,4) - The rhythm could have been ctrl+g'd or sth because a strong sound on 00:15:966 turned out to be a slider tail and then you made a weaker sound clickable with 00:16:139 (4) . yeah you're right, though I'd like to keep it for an easier play imo
00:47:510 (6) - Optional but a circle instead of this would give a nice pause for a change in rhythm as well. I just noticed the 'biu' here and want to make it slight here
01:04:824 (2,3,4) - How about something like this? You can avoid an awkward overlap 01:04:310 (1,2) and you're able to maintain the same spacing this way. ok ^ ^
Hope this helps and good luck~

Thanks for your modding!
Also fix some minor things

Codesu

osu file format v14

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Title:Kimi o Sagashi ni
TitleUnicode:きみを探しに
Artist:Nanjo Yoshino
ArtistUnicode:南條愛乃
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Misure's Hard
Source:グリザイアの楽園
Tags:Grisaia no Rakuen - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA - fripSide Nanjou Dynamix Little CloudSplash16 Misure Narcissu Ascendance
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Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-16T16:58:53+00:00

Electoz

Electoz wrote:
[Little's Insane]

00:16:224 - There's no sound here so how about removing 00:16:224 (6) and change 00:15:966 (4,5) to a slider to support a strong sound there? I like my current pattern.
00:19:738 (3,4,1) - Use a consistent spacing like what you did on 00:14:252 (3,4,1) ? Also it's a bit off since 00:20:252 (4,1) has a smaller spacing than 00:19:738 (3,4) while there's a cymbal on 00:20:424 . Increased the distance.

Thanks.
http://f.ttle.li/KK5b.zip

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,787 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2016-07-16T18:31:37+00:00

Just wanted to note that I'm probably not going to mod this by request, but remove fripSide from the tags because this is Nanjo's solo work, not a part of fripSide's discography

~~don't mind me I'm just being a jerk Nanjolno fan~~

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-16T21:54:22+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
Just wanted to note that I'm probably not going to mod this by request, but remove fripSide from the tags because this is Nanjo's solo work, not a part of fripSide's discography

~~don't mind me I'm just being a jerk Nanjolno fan~~

does not matter :p
tags I will keep for more people to get to this map, because I know people like to search for fripSide's songs

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-07-17T06:45:43+00:00

I can't understand, if Extra is mapped by both you and Dynamix, then why not call it Collab Extra?
I find it not respectful to just name it as Extra tbh... Cuz it seems like u ignored Dynamix(tho he is afk atm lo

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-17T15:26:56+00:00

sahuang wrote:
I can't understand, if Extra is mapped by both you and Dynamix, then why not call it Collab Extra?
I find it not respectful to just name it as Extra tbh... Cuz it seems like u ignored Dynamix(tho he is afk atm lo

I completely remapped EX, it's 90% my piece now, if I decide to delete two patterns from him, it will become 100% my work, because I and other modder find his EX need a remap to get ranked but he decided to afk atm.
It will be easier to delete his diff tbh, but I spent 5 hours to remap his 2 hours speed mapped GD. If you would call this collab, I would rather to just delete his tag and patterns to make this my own piece.

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-07-17T23:01:13+00:00

Ok then, quite misleading that you wrote Extra: me & Dynamix in description but anyways...zzz

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-17T23:41:59+00:00

Honestly, I'd be offended if someone re-mapped my map and called it a "Collab".

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-07-18T00:41:27+00:00

Little wrote:
Honestly, I'd be offended if someone re-mapped my map and called it a "Collab".

let me know, i will add he to blacklist

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-18T01:11:54+00:00

this is not a collab in theory, most rhythm errors & unmapped sections & spacing errors are all fixed during my remapping and mod fixing.
but I do respect some of his ideas as they made this Extra more fun than my main diff.
so I still write his name in CW and keep him in the tag. I am not happy with the fact that he spent in total 3 hours to make a Diff then decide to afk and do not fix anything.
what did I keep during the remapping:
01:07:738 (1,2,3) - inspired by original idea(not the same)
01:14:595 (4,5,6) - keep
01:18:195 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - inspired by original idea(not the same)
00:53:338 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - this is the only part I did not fix any rhythm errors, and worked well. (remapped patterns)

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-23T00:37:05+00:00

Fixed some things from mods and on my own. Thank you! And sorry for late:3

rain

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:きみを探しに
Artist:Nanjo Yoshino
ArtistUnicode:南條愛乃
Creator:Shad0w1and
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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2016-07-24T08:53:09+00:00

Hello from my Modding Queue

[Motomeru]

00:06:709 (1,3) - Reduce the sliders. it should curve or anything for better. Ex.
00:10:824 (3,4) - How about (3) - x:80 , (4) - x:48.
00:10:995 (1,2,3) - I think 1/2 is better than 1/4. Delete (2) and Reduce slider (1) to 1/2 and move (3) to x:160
00:15:966 (2) - move to x:336
00:16:138 - Add circle on x:176, 00:16:309 (1,2) - move this part to x:320 for Hdash between 00:16:395 (2,1) -, Delete 00:16:652 (2) - and Reduce 00:16:481 (1) - to 1/2
00:23:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is too easy. Can you change? >>> 00:23:852 (2) - move to x:272, 00:24:538 (4) - move to x:240, 00:24:709 (1) - change to curve left, 00:25:224 (2) - move to x:192
00:30:024 (4) - move to x:352
00:57:109 (4,1,2) - This part I think it's hard because 00:57:281 (1,2) - is far. Can you change? >>> 00:57:109 (4) - move to x:128, 00:57:281 (1) - move to x:384 and 00:57:452 (2) - move to x:480
00:58:824 (1) - Reduce this slider to near 00:58:481 (3) - it's hard to catch it.

[Ascendance's Rain]

01:09:109 (3) - move to x:416
01:11:852 (3) - move to x:392

Overall looks Ok

Good luck

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-24T17:31:04+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hello from my Modding Queue

[Motomeru]
00:06:709 (1,3) - Reduce the sliders. it should curve or anything for better. Ex.
00:10:824 (3,4) - How about (3) - x:80 , (4) - x:48.
00:10:995 (1,2,3) - I think 1/2 is better than 1/4. Delete (2) and Reduce slider (1) to 1/2 and move (3) to x:160
00:15:966 (2) - move to x:336
00:16:138 - Add circle on x:176, 00:16:309 (1,2) - move this part to x:320 for Hdash between 00:16:395 (2,1) -, Delete 00:16:652 (2) - and Reduce 00:16:481 (1) - to 1/2
00:23:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is too easy. Can you change? >>> 00:23:852 (2) - move to x:272, 00:24:538 (4) - move to x:240, 00:24:709 (1) - change to curve left, 00:25:224 (2) - move to x:192
00:30:024 (4) - move to x:352
00:57:109 (4,1,2) - This part I think it's hard because 00:57:281 (1,2) - is far. Can you change? >>> 00:57:109 (4) - move to x:128, 00:57:281 (1) - move to x:384 and 00:57:452 (2) - move to x:480 nerfed 00:56:766 (2,4,2) - should be fine now
00:58:824 (1) - Reduce this slider to near 00:58:481 (3) - it's hard to catch it.
[/list]

Good luck

thx for mod

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-07-24T23:57:50+00:00

[Mitsuketa]

00:01:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Idk why you're putting s many circles in a row already in the intro, especially since the piano is quite off sync with the music... I can't justify like half of these circles tbh xP Timing seems off here too
00:10:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This sounds so off xP. The stream begins before the song actually starts the 1/4's. Like, I think it begins on 00:10:424 - on 1/6's...
00:27:109 (2) - Can't really hear anything here either. I would just put two 1/1 sliders here instead, with 1/2 gaps in between.
01:09:366 (2) - Sounds overmapped too... I think its just a 5 note sttream xP.
01:19:909 (2,3,4) - Keep this less cluttered. 2 and 4 shouldn't overlap.

[Extra]

00:32:081 (4,5,1) - This spacing is just confusing because of how big you made the jump from 4>5. it resembles the spacing for 5>1. Can you make them more different pls.
00:33:966 (3,1) - Relating to the above, why isn't there a jump here? When you put it on 4>5 from above? I think spacing concept could be improved between these two sections.

[Misure's Hard]

00:38:082 (4,1,2) - This is quite confusing imo cuz of the stacks xP. Can you spread the circles apart and not stack everything here? cuz its annoying having to play a 1/1 and then a 1/2 stack. It's really easy to misread here xP

[Normal]

00:17:509 (3,4) - Better to use a parallel arrangement here. I think Ctrl+H arrangement is hard to see when the sliders are different lengths, and it ends up looking a bit messy.
00:22:995 (4,1) - This should be spacing a bit farther apart. It shows as 1.20x, but the SV's are different. I'd use 1.50x spacing here. Basically, get it to resemblet he spacing of 00:21:452 (5,1) - visually, not based on DS.
01:01:224 (6,3) - The arrangement of 01:00:195 (5,6) - with the blanket could be nicer.
01:21:452 (2,4) - Blanket can be better.

[Medium]

Why isnt the intro mapped :S.
I'd rename this to Normal, and your current normal can be renamed to Advanced.

[]

Set looks good, but please get someone to check the timing for that point I mentioned, before calling me back.

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,416 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2016-07-25T00:22:28+00:00

00:08:081 (1,2) - are off (too early).

00:10:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) is supposedly this (5 × 1/3rd notes), note the first circle omitted (captured slider for clarity):

SPOILER

There's also a regular 1/4th beat triplet starting at 00:10:824 - :

SPOILER

As for 00:01:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5), last five notes are properly snapped, but 00:01:566 (2,3,4) are not, because piano sounds are unstable.

*shrug*

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-25T01:46:53+00:00

Listened to the part at 00:10:309 a bunch.
It sounds closest to 1/3 beats.

If you listen carefully, you'll hear that the note that seems to start at 00:10:424 is a B-flat (makes sense—this song is in F major), and
the pitch that occurs at 00:10:995 is an A.
The run definitely sounds diatonic, but the instrumentalist fudges the end of the run by compressing the last three notes (because his 7-note run doesn't fit in 6 notes).
You can hear the run B-flat, C, D, E, F, (G), A where the G is kind of skipped over because it doesn't fit.

So yeah, this is actually 1/3 starting at 00:10:424

Fixed my diff: http://f.ttle.li/Wttm.zip

My lame excuse for 00:08:081 (5) is (unless Shad0w1and decides to re-time the map,) that the grace note falls close enough to the red tick.

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2016-07-25T03:05:20+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
[Mitsuketa]

00:01:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Idk why you're putting s many circles in a row already in the intro, especially since the piano is quite off sync with the music... I can't justify like half of these circles tbh xP Timing seems off here too not off to me tbh, but I nerfed the jumps, now is much easier
00:10:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This sounds so off xP. The stream begins before the song actually starts the 1/4's. Like, I think it begins on 00:10:424 - on 1/6's...
00:27:109 (2) - Can't really hear anything here either. I would just put two 1/1 sliders here instead, with 1/2 gaps in between.
01:09:366 (2) - Sounds overmapped too... I think its just a 5 note sttream xP. It is overmapped to highlight the strings, not really for any drum beats snapping.
01:19:909 (2,3,4) - Keep this less cluttered. 2 and 4 shouldn't overlap.

[Extra]

00:32:081 (4,5,1) - This spacing is just confusing because of how big you made the jump from 4>5. it resembles the spacing for 5>1. Can you make them more different pls. due to NC its not that hard to play, but I adjusted a bit (3.5x-2.0x to 3.4x-2.2x)
00:33:966 (3,1) - Relating to the above, why isn't there a jump here? When you put it on 4>5 from above? I think spacing concept could be improved between these two sections. I would say that spacing for downbeat does not have to be increased every time, the EX diff I am aiming for better structure since people always call my map shit because I do not structure at all Xd. NC will help a lot on readings, so I think its fine.

[Normal]

00:17:509 (3,4) - Better to use a parallel arrangement here. I think Ctrl+H arrangement is hard to see when the sliders are different lengths, and it ends up looking a bit messy. I personally do not like to have parallel arrangement when spacing is close.
00:22:995 (4,1) - This should be spacing a bit farther apart. It shows as 1.20x, but the SV's are different. I'd use 1.50x spacing here. Basically, get it to resemblet he spacing of 00:21:452 (5,1) - visually, not based on DS. arrangement I looked at my green lines,
I think the SV change is noticeable, and because the sv also decreased on 00:22:995 - , which makes the 00:22:995 (4) - overlaped to (3), that should make sense to players that SV is changing (normally they should be separate in kiai)
01:01:224 (6,3) - The arrangement of 01:00:195 (5,6) - with the blanket could be nicer.
01:21:452 (2,4) - Blanket can be better.

[Medium]

Why isnt the intro mapped :S.
I'd rename this to Normal, and your current normal can be renamed to Advanced.
I will keep current mapping and Naming

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Set looks good, but please get someone to check the timing for that point I mentioned, before calling me back.

Misure，这里改成1/3snap 00:10:482 (3) -

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Little 2016-07-25T03:46:15+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Why isnt the intro mapped :S.

Shad0w1and wrote:
I will keep current mapping

He asked you a question...

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