1. Extra (5.84 stars, 617 notes)

Joezapy wrote:

Can't really point out much because I suck at playing and modding but here's what I did notice.
First off, don't map the laser gun sound at the beginning unless you want to do some timing shenanigans because only having only one timing there probably wouldn't suffice. Not to say you shouldn't map it, but you'll either have to redo the beginning to follow the drums or do some timing checks. I mean, it does seem like it's offbeat when I play it. It should already be timed perfectly (altho I am questioning this) since cYsmix provided the timing. Not sure if I could rank it with different timing, but we'll see with the BNs.

00:05:777 (4) - Add a circle here. Assuming you do, I think two doubles would fit 00:05:684 (3,4,5,6) - the best based on the music, not the stack you currently have. Ah I didn't notice the note there. I don't think two doubles quite fits tho, but I'm gonna remap the bursts of this to be more consistent with the chorus of the map so ye.

00:10:277 (6) - Add a circle here. Done.

I think whatever slider velocities you use at 00:12:059 (9,10) - should be more obvious, as is they look almost the same I just took down the 1.3 one back to 1.0, don't know why I did that

00:24:434 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For this part, try mapping some of the drums to make it more complicated I'm kinda going with the most significant rhythm for everything in this map. If it's requested more, then maybe I would do this.

01:08:215 (2) - Try 1/6 snap instead of 1/4 Yep, I did this for all three.

01:08:590 (4) - ^^

01:08:965 (6) - ^^

I'd like to request a timing point at 01:09:996 because 1/16 notes are gross to look at Once again, I question whether I could rank it with different timing sections than specified for the tournament but again. I'll wait for BNs and QATs to comment on this.

01:09:996 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move these later by 1/16 That sounds off to me.

01:10:746 (1,2,3,4) - ^^ This actually sounds right to me. Weird.

I'd like to request another timing point at 01:12:059 because it looks like it goes back to normal then Yea as I said before.

01:13:559 (5,6,7,8,1) - Maybe have the spacing increase with the rising pitch, then lower again as the pitch falls? Going to reject this one for now, I will definitely keep in mind tho. It's a very low volume burst so I kinda wanted to keep to a "low volume" pattern if you will

01:13:934 (1) - This should at least be a 1/4 repeating slider to follow what you followed for the rest of the pattern above ah I didn't notice this either.

Add notches in 01:16:746 (4,5) - on the white ticks for the sounds there, like this.
gonna keep with what I have since it is more significant.

01:53:684 (3) - Why this instead of the 1/4 stream you used before? if you want to keep the slider maybe make it repeat every 1/4 instead of 1/2 I will replace it with a full stream I guess.

01:45:809 (2) - This slider goes offscreen, which is unrankable. Fixed

Move the end of the kiai to 02:01:746, its too long as is and the section following isn't as powerful as the other parts were. Yes, as long as the PP section is kiai also I think.

02:10:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Are you sure about this pattern? Don't see what's wrong with it, it's a snappy pattern just like the other ones.

02:21:434 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Gross, this doesn't fit the rest of the song or this part of the song at all. People who are playing a technical map like this probably aren't looking for the pp from it anyways.
Yes it's true, but I think perhaps it should be there. I think it should be nerfed the only deal is, kibbleru said it was fine as is. I'll do more consulting with other people.

caned wrote:

Rhythm for first 12 seconds is weird. Some of it fits, some of it 00:04:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - doesn't Well, if you listen closely enough, there are 1/4 notes there.
00:33:434 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - stream is kinda ugly try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5502470 (just an example) While that does look way more pretty, I will decline for now since it doesn't match musically.
00:35:121 (2,3,4) - why is 2 here different slider speed? either new combo for new slider speed or i'd reccommend making them all the same speed as they're mapped to the same sound The different SVs are for the ascending pitch of the rhythm. It's not really a risk to the player, and I haven't seen testplayers break on it yet.
00:45:434 (1,2,3,4) - Could have more interesting slider shapes here I will try to do something with this.
01:00:059 (5,6,1) - These jumps feel a bit overdone considering it's not really any more intense than what's playing in the song for the previous couple secs It's to keep consistent with the notes jumping over the sliders.
01:03:059 (5) - would be nice as NC, not urgent tho I don't see much of a reason to do this, but I'll keep it in mind.
01:10:277 (8,9,10,11,1) - weird... Ye I know but there's not really much of an option considering the rhythm, but I'll try to come up with something.
01:53:684 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Could be blanketed better if that's what you're goin for Yea, but oh well.
02:08:871 (1,2,3) - weird again ^^ It's more consistent with the map to do this.
the end jump section is cool

Overall pretty interesting map I can see what you're going for and it was a fun play :---)

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  00:02:590 (5,6) - ctrl+g on these
  00:09:809 (4) - end this slider @ red tick
  00:23:496 (2) - why not move this slider to x:244 y:144}? it looks better imo
  00:28:184 (3) - move this a bit up and to the left
  01:11:426 (3) - stack its end with 01:10:769 (1) - and 01:11:707 (4) - stack its end with 01:10:582 (11) - ??
  01:16:184 (1,4) - avoid overlapping these
  01:30:809 (2) - stack with 01:29:684 (1) -
  01:46:559 (4,5) - this should be the long jump, not these 01:48:059 (2,3) - , because here 01:46:559 (4,5) - the music is more stronger than 01:48:059 (2,3) - so.. these jumps should be decreasing instead of increasing
  02:08:871 (1,2,3) - pls avoid overlapping these with 02:08:496 (2) - and 02:09:246 (1) -
  02:17:684 (3,2) - stackthese
  02:21:059 (6,7) - make them closer, 02:21:434 (1) - new sound starts here, the jump should be here