Eclipse

1. Intro uses 2 different nc patterns, 1 measure than 2 measure, for no real reason?
2. 00:23:312 (2,3) - Cursor motions are really restrictive here, I want to play out the kick slider but I'm forced into making the right angle motion. An arrange more like this makes the kicks more satisfying to play.
3. 00:44:007 (3) - Using 2 1/2 sliders would be nicer, there are synths to map on those red ticks, and it would match better with the earlier 00:41:761 (4,1) - effect.
4. 02:28:766 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Did you change this part? Or am I only remembering the first kiai.. Well, the first kiai's layout is much more fun because it uses obtuse angles instead of these boring right angles. It makes the cursor feel dancier, just use the same thing for every kiai owo
5. 02:40:156 (6) - 3/4 slider seems to fit here
6. I would ctrl+g 02:56:520 (1) - and 02:57:162 (1) - , it draws the most attention to the pitch of the guitar this way :3
7. 04:17:857 (1) - Maybe stack under 04:17:536 (4) - instead of finished the hexagon, I think it fits better?

Eclipse~~

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  ~00:20:584 - to 00:22:830 - maybe insert break?
  ~00:55:237 (1) - I don't think this is good. because it takes away the value of 00:54:916 (1) - (because nobody is going to finish the slider)so maybe put the circle below this slider, and because the player has to hold the whole slider(motion wise) and then hit the circle.
  ~00:40:638 (5,1,2) - I think this would be better rhythm choice. because rn the player skips at least one strong note relative to the section. http://puu.sh/qk2iV/fa7ab60482.jpg
  ~00:43:205 - similar comment http://puu.sh/qk2pm/b81e43a906.jpg
  ~ 00:46:092 (1) - again feel like this slider end is strong and should be clickable
  ~02:13:365 - idk man, kind of scary fast man idk -- this is an isolated slider having a slider change whereas before you had your sliders that change velocity do something like 02:11:921 (1,1) -
  ~02:25:076 (1) - love it
  ~03:01:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - if you are going to have this long of a stream, you need to make the following part a bit more streamy as well, either that or cut this stream apart somewhat because although it follows guitar it always follows synth and synth keeps going
  ~03:01:012 - to 03:06:146 - is what ^ is about
  ~03:30:531 (1) - I feel like this slider end is super strong for this section especially with that hard "k" sound
  ~03:31:814 (1) - spacing?
  ~03:57:483 (1) - this isn't stacked? intentional?