hello
00:33:617 (5,6,1,2) - your flow sucks here due to copypasting patterns, could solve it by doing something like
http://i.imgur.com/vLfHdH0.jpg and adusting 00:35:072 (1,2) - after
00:42:163 (2) - starting sliders on weaker beats than they end on suck most of the time 00:42:163 (2,3) - ctrl + g rhythm wise is better
02:05:617 (4,5,6) - alright so I notice you do this often but spacing 1/4 gaps and 1/2 gaps the same can get really misleading, either 02:05:617 (4,5) - should be much closer or 02:05:981 (5,6) - should be further away or do both.
examples of good 02:06:708 (1,2,3) - 02:13:254 (1,2,3) - 02:14:345 (4,5,6) - etc.
examples of bad: 02:40:163 (3,4,5,6) - 02:50:345 (1,2,3,4,5) - 04:59:072 (1,2,3) - 05:00:163 (4,5,6) - etc. you should take a closer look at these throughout the map and make sure spacing indication is set up more consistently.
the rest is ok