yehoo, im here!
my main concerns is mainly related to polishing, so here we go.
01:12:526 (2,3) - u could try copy pasting the sliders here.
03:49:254 (1,3) - ^
01:13:254 (4) - try making it more symmetrical?
01:40:526 (1) - ^
02:30:708 (1) - ^
01:16:526 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can make this pattern alot neater if you used the rotate tool (ctrl shift r) and rotating each slider u copy by 120
01:25:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:43:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:072 (8) - give a bit more space, 320|170 or something
03:39:435 (6,1) - try to avoid overlapping
03:39:799 (7) - small suggestion but i think the pattern looks smoother this way (just added a small curve)
04:03:799 (7) - imo it flows a little better like this
04:17:072 (5,6) - try to arrange it more evenly
04:31:799 (3,4,5) - i think it would play better if u put the triplet on the next red tick instead
04:44:890 (3) - move it up a bit for the blanket with 2
05:02:891 (1) - u never use a NC here elsewhere, remove or make it the same as the other places (refer to 03:35:618 (8) - )
05:07:436 (1) - same 03:40:163 (8) -
05:20:708 (3,1,2,1) - although its probably just me, but i really dislike stacking it like this, try stacking it instead. (i also changed the 2nd slider to make it look more connected to the first one)
maybe you should get some tips on hitsounding as well.. although i dont really dislike the current way it's hitsounded, but some parts just feel a bit empty since u don't hitsound some of the weaker percussions.
we'll see how this goes.