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Ji Zhou - Theresa's teriteri Circulation [OsuMania]

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ExNeko
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ExNeko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 星期四 2017年1月26日 at 16:13:17

Artist: Ji Zhou
Title: Theresa's teriteri Circulation
Source: 崩坏学园2
Tags: Linear Slope Plus Houkai Gakuen 德丽莎 阿波卡利斯 Theresa Apocalypse 田村ゆかり Tamura Yukari bilibili douga miHoYo
BPM: 144
Filesize: 11251kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4K EZ - 4Key (1.46 stars, 282 notes)
  2. 4K HD - 4Key (2.96 stars, 617 notes)
  3. 4K NM - 4Key (2.16 stars, 419 notes)
  4. 7K EZ - 7Key (1.38 stars, 282 notes)
  5. 7K HD - 7Key (2.86 stars, 629 notes)
  6. 7K NM - 7Key (2.02 stars, 420 notes)
Download: Ji Zhou - Theresa's teriteri Circulation
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【崩坏学园2】德丽莎的teriteri循环（语音mad cv：田村ゆかり）

Mods
Amiichii
_Stan
Yoyupond
-[Apple]-
kaythen
Regraz
Valentrixe
FastYoshi
jukkaduei
Kuro Izaya
AchsanLovers
Etsu
JooF12
Rivals_7
Critical_Star
Last edited by ExNeko , edited 62 times in total.
Amiichii
719 posts
Joined November 2016
Amiichii
Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

mod
  • [4K NM]
  1. 00:20:096 - ~ 00:27:387 (27387|3) - and 00:46:762 - ~ 00:59:991 - nerve it pls. NM diff should be have SR under 2.25* or if no easy diff should be NM diff have SR under 2.00*. maybe make it like as 00:00:096 - ~ 00:06:762 - ?

    [4K HD]
  2. 00:11:450 - missing note?
  3. 00:14:783 - 00:16:658 - 00:18:116 - missing note?
  4. 00:28:741 (28741|0) - no sound?
  5. 00:28:950 - missing?
  6. 00:34:783 - 00:36:658 - 00:38:116 - 00:41:450 - 00:44:783 - 00:52:491 - 00:55:616 - 00:57:283 - 00:58:325 - 00:58:741 - 00:59:158 - missing?
  7. 00:58:533 (58533|1) - no sound?

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Amiichii wrote:

Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

mod
  • [4K NM]
  1. 00:20:096 - ~ 00:27:387 (27387|3) - and 00:46:762 - ~ 00:59:991 - nerve it pls. NM diff should be have SR under 2.25* or if no easy diff should be NM diff have SR under 2.00*. maybe make it like as
    I have uploaded the new "4k EZ 7k EZ" difficulty

    00:00:096 - ~ 00:06:762 - ?
    I reduced some notes


    [4K HD]
  2. 00:11:450 - missing note?
  3. 00:14:783 - 00:16:658 - 00:18:116 - missing note?
  4. 00:28:741 (28741|0) - no sound?
  5. 00:28:950 - missing?
  6. 00:34:783 - 00:36:658 - 00:38:116 - 00:41:450 - 00:44:783 - 00:52:491 - 00:55:616 - 00:57:283 - 00:58:325 - 00:58:741 - 00:59:158 - missing?
  7. 00:58:533 (58533|1) - no sound?

    Thank you, great help :)

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)

Updated!
_Stan
Beatmap Nominator
767 posts
Joined June 2012
_Stan
exdalao wolaile

1|2|3|4

4K EZ
  1. 00:22:179 (22179|3,22283|1) - 不太好 00:22:179 (22179|3) - to 3 然后00:21:971 (21971|2) - to 4 避免连击 / 你其他的地方类似的节奏都是挨着一起的比如00:23:846 - 00:24:158 -
  2. 00:28:429 (28429|1) - to 1 不然col1真的好空...
神图找不出东西来，我射星把... :? :? :? :?
ExNeko
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Topic Starter
ExNeko

_Stan wrote:

exdalao wolaile

1|2|3|4

4K EZ
  1. 00:22:179 (22179|3,22283|1) - 不太好 00:22:179 (22179|3) - to 3 然后00:21:971 (21971|2) - to 4 避免连击 / 你其他的地方类似的节奏都是挨着一起的比如00:23:846 - 00:24:158 -
  2. 00:28:429 (28429|1) - to 1 不然col1真的好空...
神图找不出东西来，我射星把... :? :? :? :?
好……



Updated!
Yoyupond
22 posts
Joined November 2013
Yoyupond
水摸一发，7K only
7K NM
00:05:096 (5096|0) - 这个往右挪到4号键右边，跟音高
00:07:804 (7804|1,7908|2) - 这里音高反了吧应该是从右到左
00:16:658 这里少音了
00:22:283 (22283|5) - 往左挪同时00:22:387 这里接一个音
00:53:325 (53325|0,53325|2) - 这里不建议两个音，删一个吧
00:53:846 (53846|2,53950|3,54054|4,54158|5) - 这四个音音高完全跟反了吧hhhh，反过来放

讲道理，音高跟的略惨啊，还有几个地方就不举出来了，建议通篇检查一下
7K Apocalypse
00:25:825 少音了
00:29:887 (29887|1,29991|0) - 这里你可以考虑加上这两个音（滑稽
00:34:783 和00:34:991 都少音了
00:45:929 (45929|4) - 建议改到00:45:929 (45929|3) -
00:47:387 少音
00:49:054 少音

简单难度音高差，困难难度总少音，ExNeko喵一叫，招来人把图摸到
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Yoyupond wrote:

水摸一发，7K only
7K NM
00:05:096 (5096|0) - 这个往右挪到4号键右边，跟音高
00:07:804 (7804|1,7908|2) - 这里音高反了吧应该是从右到左
00:16:658 这里少音了
00:22:283 (22283|5) - 往左挪同时00:22:387 这里接一个音
00:53:325 (53325|0,53325|2) - 这里不建议两个音，删一个吧
00:53:846 (53846|2,53950|3,54054|4,54158|5) - 这四个音音高完全跟反了吧hhhh，反过来放

讲道理，音高跟的略惨啊，还有几个地方就不举出来了，建议通篇检查一下

其实我当时铺的时候就没想过要跟音
7K Apocalypse
00:25:825 少音了
00:29:887 (29887|1,29991|0) - 这里你可以考虑加上这两个音（滑稽
00:34:783 和00:34:991 都少音了
00:45:929 (45929|4) - 建议改到00:45:929 (45929|3) -
00:47:387 少音
00:49:054 少音


好的

简单难度音高差，困难难度总少音，ExNeko喵一叫，招来人把图摸到
噫……

Updated!
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_Zenith
326 posts
Joined June 2015
_Zenith
Hi, there's teriteriteriteri you've requested.

[General]
  1. MP3的码率高于192kbps。考虑重新编码成CBR 192kbps或者VBR 1.0左右。 - 你也许应该要压成192kbps的才对。
  2. 4K NM: 建议OD 7.5, HP 7.5
  3. 4K HD: 建议OD 8, HP 8

[4K EZ]
  1. 00:05:096 (5096|3) - 这里建议你主要还是跟主旋律比较好，毕竟是easy，所以这里删掉一个。
  2. 00:20:512 (20512|0,20616|1) - 对于 Easy 难度来说，我个人还是不推荐在这里抓钢琴，因为用到了1/4，而且如果你抓钢琴，出于 Easy 难度的考虑你还不能全部抓，所以可能会被挑，建议这里改一下；后面有类似的问题，我就不挑出来说了

[4K NM]
  1. 00:08:116 - 00:11:450 - 00:14:783 - 00:18:776 - 00:25:825 - 漏钢琴音？
  2. 00:28:950 - ^
  3. 00:32:075 - 漏电子音
  4. 00:38:116 - 00:44:783 - 漏琴音

[4K HD]
  1. 00:00:096 (96|2,96|0,304|1,512|2,512|0) - 这种排列的话有点奇怪，建议稍微rearrange一下
  2. 00:01:137 - 00:02:804 - 00:04:471 - 建议hithat补上，故意空一个感觉有点破坏那种感觉
  3. 00:05:096 (5096|3,5096|2) - 感觉这里最好不要用triple，个人觉得这里一个note就够了
  4. 00:06:658 - 漏音？这里有一个明显的drum你没有跟，如果跟了的话 00:06:554 (6554|1) - 可以和这个一起搞一下jack
  5. 00:08:116 - 漏琴音？
  6. 00:27:075 - 漏电子音？
  7. 00:31:450 - 00:31:658 - 漏音
  8. 00:32:075 - 00:32:491 - 漏音

好，就以上 水一下
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

-[Apple]- wrote:

Hi, there's teriteriteriteri you've requested.

[General]
  1. MP3的码率高于192kbps。考虑重新编码成CBR 192kbps或者VBR 1.0左右。 - 你也许应该要压成192kbps的才对。
  2. 4K NM: 建议OD 7.5, HP 7.5
  3. 4K HD: 建议OD 8, HP 8
好


[4K EZ]
  1. 00:05:096 (5096|3) - 这里建议你主要还是跟主旋律比较好，毕竟是easy，所以这里删掉一个。
    好
  2. 00:20:512 (20512|0,20616|1) - 对于 Easy 难度来说，我个人还是不推荐在这里抓钢琴，因为用到了1/4，而且如果你抓钢琴，出于 Easy 难度的考虑你还不能全部抓，所以可能会被挑，建议这里改一下；后面有类似的问题，我就不挑出来说了
我也想过、但是这段总要放点不一样的摆设、算了等以后再有人挑我再改

[4K NM]
  1. 00:08:116 - 00:11:450 - 00:14:783 - 00:18:776 - 00:25:825 - 漏钢琴音？
  2. 00:28:950 - ^
    确实
  3. 00:32:075 - 漏电子音
    不、这一节我跟人声
  4. 00:38:116 - 00:44:783 - 漏琴音
好

[4K HD]
  1. 00:00:096 (96|2,96|0,304|1,512|2,512|0) - 这种排列的话有点奇怪，建议稍微rearrange一下
    不
  2. 00:01:137 - 00:02:804 - 00:04:471 - 建议hithat补上，故意空一个感觉有点破坏那种感觉
    不
  3. 00:05:096 (5096|3,5096|2) - 感觉这里最好不要用triple，个人觉得这里一个note就够了
    好
  4. 00:06:658 - 漏音？这里有一个明显的drum你没有跟，如果跟了的话 00:06:554 (6554|1) - 可以和这个一起搞一下jack
  5. 00:08:116 - 漏琴音？

    好
  6. 00:27:075 - 漏电子音？
    同上
  7. 00:31:450 - 00:31:658 - 漏音
  8. 00:32:075 - 00:32:491 - 漏音
    好

好，就以上 水一下
感谢 :)


Update!
kaythen
205 posts
Joined January 2015
kaythen
Hello! Thanks for asking me to mod your map.
If this mod sucks, I apologise in advance.

7K EZ:

Has to be below 1.5stars for easy difficulty so what I'd suggest is making all the 3 note chords into 2 note chords and making 2 note chords into single notes.
00:59:887 (59887|4,59991|3) - Shift over 1 lane to the right so it's not on the spacebar

7K NM:

Double stairs are too hard for a normal difficulty, so I'd remove 00:19:887 (19887|3,19991|4) - or alternatively, remove 1 note between the stairs (just like what you have going on here 00:53:221 (53221|5,53221|3,53325|2,53429|0,53429|4,53429|1) - )
00:46:554 (46554|4,46658|5) - Same as above^^

The other two difficulties are really nice, so there is nothing I can suggest for those ones.
I hope this mod helps, sorry I couldn't find much. The map is pretty damn good!
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

kaythen wrote:

Hello! Thanks for asking me to mod your map.
If this mod sucks, I apologise in advance.

7K EZ:

Has to be below 1.5stars for easy difficulty so what I'd suggest is making all the 3 note chords into 2 note chords and making 2 note chords into single notes.
Of course, I modified them(4k and 7k EZ)
00:59:887 (59887|4,59991|3) - Shift over 1 lane to the right so it's not on the spacebar
OK


7K NM:

Double stairs are too hard for a normal difficulty, so I'd remove 00:19:887 (19887|3,19991|4) - or alternatively, remove 1 note between the stairs (just like what you have going on here 00:53:221 (53221|5,53221|3,53325|2,53429|0,53429|4,53429|1) - )
00:46:554 (46554|4,46658|5) - Same as above^^
OK


The other two difficulties are really nice, so there is nothing I can suggest for those ones.
I hope this mod helps, sorry I couldn't find much. The map is pretty damn good!

Thank you for your help :)




Update!
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
M4M!
我先占个位置
|0|1|2|3|

[4K EZ]
00:08:221 (8221|3) - Move to 0 for the symmetry of vocal?
00:15:512 (15512|0,15721|3) - change to 00:15:512 (15512|2,15721|0) - ? For the same reason mentioned above.
00:16:762 (16762|1,17179|2,17596|1,17804|3,18012|2,18221|1,18429|2) - Use repetitive patterns? Since the vocal and rhythm are quite repetitive here.

[4K NM]
00:07:804 (7804|3,7908|2,8012|0,8012|1,8116|3,8221|2) - Why not keep consistent with 00:14:471 (14471|2,14575|1,14679|3,14679|0,14783|1,14887|2) - ? The melody sounds the same.

Quite decent! Good luck!
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Valentrixe
463 posts
Joined June 2013
Valentrixe
hi
from my modding queue

Mod Inside
[7K EZ]
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|3) - delete this, i assume that you follow the synth by giving a space between 00:02:596 (2596|6,3012|5) - , there's no synth in there (only bass)
  2. 00:06:137 (6137|4,6346|0) - jack them perhaps? it's okay i think to have 1/2 jack in here
  3. 00:20:616 (20616|2) - i don't know what're you trying to follow with these 1/4 , delete it. if you're trying to follow the piano, you should've add the 1/4 in 00:20:408 - instead. and delete 00:20:304 (20304|5) - to follow the consistency with 00:20:825 (20825|5,20929|3) - . same apply to 00:22:075 - , etc.
  4. 00:28:429 (28429|5,28637|4) - you can jack these too, since they have the same pitch
  5. 00:47:075 - same as 00:20:408 - .
  6. 00:55:096 (55096|4,55304|3) - same pitch.
  7. 00:57:596 (57596|3,57804|5) - ^
  8. 00:58:429 (58429|6,58637|3) - ^ , you can jack these.

[7K NM]
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|2) - same with the one that i mentioned in easy difficulty
  2. 00:06:658 - add note? to follow the kick, since you use 1/4 in 00:07:804 - i think it's okay to use 1/4 in here too.
  3. 00:20:616 (20616|3) - too low to follow i guess, delete it. it's not the main piano anyway, more like echo to me. same apply to 00:21:450 (21450|4) - , 00:22:283 (22283|1) - , etc.
  4. 00:25:825 - missing note, you can still following the piano up until here.
  5. 00:47:283 (47283|5) - same as before. etc.

[7K HD]
  1. 00:01:137 - you can follow the bass since this is the hard difficulty, add note in here, and in 00:02:804 - , etc.
  2. 00:05:096 (5096|5,5096|0,5096|1) - there's no clap in here, use double is enough
  3. 00:06:137 (6137|5,6137|1,6346|0,6346|6) - make them triple
  4. 00:06:658 - same with the one that i mentioned in normal difficulty
  5. 00:13:429 (13429|3,13429|0,13429|6) - only kick. no need to use triple
  6. 00:20:096 (20096|1,20096|0,20096|4,20096|6) - triple is enough, like you did in 00:33:429 (33429|6,33429|0,33429|3)
  7. 00:58:533 (58533|5,58533|1) - ghost note, delete them
  8. 00:58:429 (58429|2,58429|4,58637|6,58637|0) - same pitch

[7K Apocalypse]

  • the diffname seems pretty scary for such a cute song. change it to 7K Circulation perhaps?
  1. 00:00:096 (96|5,96|4,96|0) - no need to use triple. you can use triple only on snare like you did in 00:00:512 - , same apply to 00:00:929 (929|0,929|4) - , etc.
  2. 00:00:096 - you can follow the bass by using jacks pattern in here. example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6612737 , same apply to 00:00:929
  3. 00:04:887 (4887|3,4887|2) - why using double? if you trying to follow the piano, you only use single note on 00:01:554 (1554|1) - , 00:02:387 (2387|5) - , etc. you need to make them consistent
  4. 00:05:096 (5096|4,5096|0,5096|6) - no need to use triple, no snare. same apply to 00:05:929 (5929|6,5929|3,5929|1)
  5. 00:06:137 (6137|2,6137|5,6346|4,6346|6,6346|1) - you can jack them. and add note in 00:06:137 - since there are snare in it.
  6. 00:06:658 - missing note
  7. 00:07:596 (7596|3,7596|6,7596|1) - same like previous, no snare in it. use double is enough. same apply to 00:08:429 (8429|4,8429|2,8429|0) - , etc.
  8. 00:20:512 - missing note for snare, same apply to 00:21:346 - , etc.
  9. 00:21:762 (21762|5,21762|3,21762|1) - should be double, no snare. 00:23:429 (23429|0,23429|6,23429|3) - this one too. etc.
  10. 00:32:387 (32387|6,32387|4,32387|5,32596|2,32596|1,32596|0,32700|6,32700|5,32700|4,32908|3,32908|5,32908|6) - what're you trying to follow? the vocal? seems overmapped to me
  11. 00:59:991 (59991|0) - delete this. no need to use 4 notes in here.

okay that's all
pretty solid already, nice map

good luck! don't forget to vote :P
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Regraz wrote:

M4M!
我先占个位置
|0|1|2|3|

[4K EZ]
00:08:221 (8221|3) - Move to 0 for the symmetry of vocal?
00:15:512 (15512|0,15721|3) - change to 00:15:512 (15512|2,15721|0) - ? For the same reason mentioned above.
00:16:762 (16762|1,17179|2,17596|1,17804|3,18012|2,18221|1,18429|2) - Use repetitive patterns? Since the vocal and rhythm are quite repetitive here.

可以

[4K NM]
00:07:804 (7804|3,7908|2,8012|0,8012|1,8116|3,8221|2) - Why not keep consistent with 00:14:471 (14471|2,14575|1,14679|3,14679|0,14783|1,14887|2) - ? The melody sounds the same.

不

可以、这简直干脆利落(
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Valentrixe wrote:

hi
from my modding queue

Mod Inside
[7K EZ]
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|3) - delete this, i assume that you follow the synth by giving a space between 00:02:596 (2596|6,3012|5) - , there's no synth in there (only bass)
  2. 00:06:137 (6137|4,6346|0) - jack them perhaps? it's okay i think to have 1/2 jack in here
  3. 00:20:616 (20616|2) - i don't know what're you trying to follow with these 1/4 , delete it. if you're trying to follow the piano, you should've add the 1/4 in 00:20:408 - instead. and delete 00:20:304 (20304|5) - to follow the consistency with 00:20:825 (20825|5,20929|3) - . same apply to 00:22:075 - , etc.
  4. 00:28:429 (28429|5,28637|4) - you can jack these too, since they have the same pitch
  5. 00:47:075 - same as 00:20:408 - .
  6. 00:55:096 (55096|4,55304|3) - same pitch.
  7. 00:57:596 (57596|3,57804|5) - ^
  8. 00:58:429 (58429|6,58637|3) - ^ , you can jack these.

some things changes in Kiai time I also need to think about it、I agree with other changes


[7K NM]
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|2) - same with the one that i mentioned in easy difficulty
  2. 00:06:658 - add note? to follow the kick, since you use 1/4 in 00:07:804 - i think it's okay to use 1/4 in here too.
  3. 00:20:616 (20616|3) - too low to follow i guess, delete it. it's not the main piano anyway, more like echo to me. same apply to 00:21:450 (21450|4) - , 00:22:283 (22283|1) - , etc.
    NO
  4. 00:25:825 - missing note, you can still following the piano up until here.
  5. 00:47:283 (47283|5) - same as before. etc.
    ^

[7K HD]
  1. 00:01:137 - you can follow the bass since this is the hard difficulty, add note in here, and in 00:02:804 - , etc.
  2. 00:05:096 (5096|5,5096|0,5096|1) - there's no clap in here, use double is enough
  3. 00:06:137 (6137|5,6137|1,6346|0,6346|6) - make them triple
  4. 00:06:658 - same with the one that i mentioned in normal difficulty
    I do not want to change it
  5. 00:13:429 (13429|3,13429|0,13429|6) - only kick. no need to use triple
  6. 00:20:096 (20096|1,20096|0,20096|4,20096|6) - triple is enough, like you did in 00:33:429 (33429|6,33429|0,33429|3)
  7. 00:58:533 (58533|5,58533|1) - ghost note, delete them
  8. 00:58:429 (58429|2,58429|4,58637|6,58637|0) - same pitch

[7K Apocalypse]

  • the diffname seems pretty scary for such a cute song. change it to 7K Circulation perhaps?


    This word used here is not has this meaning, because the Character's name is "Theresa Apocalypse"

     :shock:
  1. 00:00:096 (96|5,96|4,96|0) - no need to use triple. you can use triple only on snare like you did in 00:00:512 - , same apply to 00:00:929 (929|0,929|4) - , etc.
  2. 00:00:096 - you can follow the bass by using jacks pattern in here. example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6612737 , same apply to 00:00:929
  3. 00:04:887 (4887|3,4887|2) - why using double? if you trying to follow the piano, you only use single note on 00:01:554 (1554|1) - , 00:02:387 (2387|5) - , etc. you need to make them consistent
  4. 00:05:096 (5096|4,5096|0,5096|6) - no need to use triple, no snare. same apply to 00:05:929 (5929|6,5929|3,5929|1)
  5. 00:06:137 (6137|2,6137|5,6346|4,6346|6,6346|1) - you can jack them. and add note in 00:06:137 - since there are snare in it.
  6. 00:06:658 - missing note
  7. 00:07:596 (7596|3,7596|6,7596|1) - same like previous, no snare in it. use double is enough. same apply to 00:08:429 (8429|4,8429|2,8429|0) - , etc.
  8. 00:20:512 - missing note for snare, same apply to 00:21:346 - , etc.
  9. 00:21:762 (21762|5,21762|3,21762|1) - should be double, no snare. 00:23:429 (23429|0,23429|6,23429|3) - this one too. etc.
  10. 00:32:387 (32387|6,32387|4,32387|5,32596|2,32596|1,32596|0,32700|6,32700|5,32700|4,32908|3,32908|5,32908|6) - what're you trying to follow? the vocal? seems overmapped to me
  11. 00:59:991 (59991|0) - delete this. no need to use 4 notes in here.
Most of them ... ah ...
I do not like to use jack in 7k unless they are necessary to exist

okay that's all
pretty solid already, nice map

good luck! don't forget to vote :P
Thank you for your advice, although there are many places I do not agree with your views, but still thank you :)





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Unlucky_w
312 posts
Joined August 2014
Unlucky_w
hi
from modding queue
I can't say I'm late since you ask a NM when my queue was close...

mod
EZ
00:00:096 (96|2) - Move to 4, it starts well at the beginning. (My opinion)
00:17:596 (17596|1,17804|0) - Ctrl+G, to sound more like 00:16:762 (16762|0,16971|1) - .
00:20:512 (20512|0,20616|1,20825|3,20929|2) - Don't put these notes too close, it sounds so confusing, and for newbies too. 00:22:179 (22179|2,22283|0,22491|1,22596|3) - If you want to keep this idea, at least make it obvious when you need to press faster. (00:23:846 (23846|1,23950|3) - same over here)
00:47:179 (47179|1,47283|0,47491|3,47596|2) - 00:48:846 (48846|2,48950|1,49158|3,49262|0) - 00:50:512 (50512|3,50616|0,50825|1,50929|2) - still don't like this idea.
00:56:137 (56137|1,56346|2) - Ctrl+G, different pattern please.

NM
00:17:908 (17908|1,18012|2) - Ctrl+G, better flow
00:51:137 (51137|3,51346|2) - Ctrl+G, sounds better, then move 00:51:554 (51554|3) - to 3.

HD
00:00:096 (96|2) - 00:00:304 (304|1) - 00:00:512 (512|2) - Move them all to the right.
00:03:846 (3846|2) - 00:04:054 (4054|1) - Move them all to the right again.
00:26:658 (26658|3,26762|2) - Ctrl+G, better flow (same thing over here: 00:53:316 - )
I'm not pretty sure about the rest in kiais, but that's all from me.


Anyways good luck. :3
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

FastYoshi wrote:

hi
from modding queue
I can't say I'm late since you ask a NM when my queue was close...

mod
EZ
00:00:096 (96|2) - Move to 4, it starts well at the beginning. (My opinion)
00:17:596 (17596|1,17804|0) - Ctrl+G, to sound more like 00:16:762 (16762|0,16971|1) - .
00:20:512 (20512|0,20616|1,20825|3,20929|2) - Don't put these notes too close, it sounds so confusing, and for newbies too. 00:22:179 (22179|2,22283|0,22491|1,22596|3) - If you want to keep this idea, at least make it obvious when you need to press faster. (00:23:846 (23846|1,23950|3) - same over here)
00:47:179 (47179|1,47283|0,47491|3,47596|2) - 00:48:846 (48846|2,48950|1,49158|3,49262|0) - 00:50:512 (50512|3,50616|0,50825|1,50929|2) - still don't like this idea.
00:56:137 (56137|1,56346|2) - Ctrl+G, different pattern please.

NM
00:17:908 (17908|1,18012|2) - Ctrl+G, better flow
00:51:137 (51137|3,51346|2) - Ctrl+G, sounds better, then move 00:51:554 (51554|3) - to 3.

HD
00:00:096 (96|2) - 00:00:304 (304|1) - 00:00:512 (512|2) - Move them all to the right.
00:03:846 (3846|2) - 00:04:054 (4054|1) - Move them all to the right again.
00:26:658 (26658|3,26762|2) - Ctrl+G, better flow (same thing over here: 00:53:316 - )
I'm not pretty sure about the rest in kiais, but that's all from me.


Anyways good luck. :3
I feel no substantive changes, just change location? :?:
Anyway, counted as a mod ... ...





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Unlucky_w
312 posts
Joined August 2014
Unlucky_w

ExNeko wrote:

FastYoshi wrote:

hi
from modding queue
I can't say I'm late since you ask a NM when my queue was close...

mod
EZ
00:00:096 (96|2) - Move to 4, it starts well at the beginning. (My opinion)
00:17:596 (17596|1,17804|0) - Ctrl+G, to sound more like 00:16:762 (16762|0,16971|1) - .
00:20:512 (20512|0,20616|1,20825|3,20929|2) - Don't put these notes too close, it sounds so confusing, and for newbies too. 00:22:179 (22179|2,22283|0,22491|1,22596|3) - If you want to keep this idea, at least make it obvious when you need to press faster. (00:23:846 (23846|1,23950|3) - same over here)
00:47:179 (47179|1,47283|0,47491|3,47596|2) - 00:48:846 (48846|2,48950|1,49158|3,49262|0) - 00:50:512 (50512|3,50616|0,50825|1,50929|2) - still don't like this idea.
00:56:137 (56137|1,56346|2) - Ctrl+G, different pattern please.

NM
00:17:908 (17908|1,18012|2) - Ctrl+G, better flow
00:51:137 (51137|3,51346|2) - Ctrl+G, sounds better, then move 00:51:554 (51554|3) - to 3.

HD
00:00:096 (96|2) - 00:00:304 (304|1) - 00:00:512 (512|2) - Move them all to the right.
00:03:846 (3846|2) - 00:04:054 (4054|1) - Move them all to the right again.
00:26:658 (26658|3,26762|2) - Ctrl+G, better flow (same thing over here: 00:53:316 - )
I'm not pretty sure about the rest in kiais, but that's all from me.


Anyways good luck. :3
I feel no substantive changes, just change location? :?:
Anyway, counted as a mod ... ...





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changing locations = changing patterns and making good flow, so it is counted as a mod. Also, some changes are consistencies with the sound.

Futur FastYoshi here: If you ever read this edit, ignore what the past FastYoshi said. thx
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ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

FastYoshi wrote:

Just for you know, changing locations = changing patterns and making good flow, so it is counted as a mod, no hesitation. Also, some changes are consistencies with the sound.
Oh, I do not mean that your mod is not good, Just feel that compared to other mapper given the advice, your views some monotonous?,in fact, There are many places I do as you say :)
jukkaduei
393 posts
Joined April 2015
jukkaduei
Hello. From my M4M queue.

4K : |0|1|2|3|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

7K EZ
00:01:346 (1346|6,1554|4,1762|2,1971|0,2179|2,2387|4,2596|6) - Rearrange them. They're repeatable
00:05:512 (5512|2) - Move to 3
00:21:137 (21137|1) - Move to 6 for balancing
00:26:971 (26971|4) - Move to 1
00:27:596 (27596|0) - Move to 6
00:28:637 (28637|5) - Move to 1
00:31:137 (31137|1) - Move to 2
00:33:846 (33846|2) - Move to 5
00:20:825 (20825|5,53637|2,53846|4,54054|1) - ctrl+g
00:54:471 (54471|1) - Move to 3
00:55:304 (55304|4) - Move to 0
00:57:804 (57804|5) - Move to 3
00:58:637 (58637|5) - Move to 4
00:59:054 (59054|1) - Move to 0

Here are all the problems I found.

I hope this will help you

GL :D
ExNeko
626 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
ExNeko

jukkaduei wrote:

Hello. From my M4M queue.

4K : |0|1|2|3|
7K : |0|1|2|3|4|5|6|

7K EZ
00:01:346 (1346|6,1554|4,1762|2,1971|0,2179|2,2387|4,2596|6) - Rearrange them. They're repeatable
00:05:512 (5512|2) - Move to 3
00:21:137 (21137|1) - Move to 6 for balancing
00:26:971 (26971|4) - Move to 1
00:27:596 (27596|0) - Move to 6
00:28:637 (28637|5) - Move to 1
00:31:137 (31137|1) - Move to 2
00:33:846 (33846|2) - Move to 5
00:20:825 (20825|5,53637|2,53846|4,54054|1) - ctrl+g
00:54:471 (54471|1) - Move to 3
00:55:304 (55304|4) - Move to 0
00:57:804 (57804|5) - Move to 3
00:58:637 (58637|5) - Move to 4
00:59:054 (59054|1) - Move to 0

Here are all the problems I found.

I hope this will help you

GL :D
thx


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