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karstgalvis
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 17, 2018 at 2:49:36 PM

Artist: Muzzy
Title: Children of Hell
Tags: monstercat ep release drum and bass dnb kick wub woosh
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6616kb
Play Time: 05:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Childish (6.1 stars, 1501 notes)
Download: Muzzy - Children of Hell
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iiSaturnz
All I have to say is that many of the combos where to long. The rest of the map was well made
Topic Starter
karstgalvis

Tankerm wrote:

All I have to say is that many of the combos where to long. The rest of the map was well made
idk about combos, feels alright to me, but when i rewatch it, not sure about them..
Wyatt
SPOILER
00:06:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Im not sure why you take the slider off this drum sound here (00:06:599 (3) - )
00:07:628 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:17:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ When choosing what rythems to follow its very important that you stay consistent. From the start you have the slider on that drum sound and there is not reason in the music why that changes. This isnt bad but you need to be able to explain why you took the slider off that drum sound. Because if you can't the player won't be able to realize why either.

00:30:770 (3,4) - , 00:34:885 (3,4) - These are great. Just not very readable. Have them placed in such a way that its clear they stream together. (00:32:142 (3,4) - ) like you did here.

00:55:285 (2,3) - This could be problematic. But if no play tester has mentioned it then its fine. But I would change this if others bring it up.

01:03:685 (5,6,7) - The single in the pattern is crazy far. Id bring it closer if its going to stream into the sliders.
01:05:056 (3,4,5) - ^
01:06:428 (3,4,5) - ^

01:15:513 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is pretty cool.

01:52:542 (6,7) - All your angular sliders look nice, but these ones have a weird shape. Id maybe just consider making them straight if others also think they look weird.

01:52:542 (6,7,8,9) - This part sounds a little off to me. I'm not sure why.

01:53:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This whole section feels like you are trying to follow both the vocals and the beat. feels weird especially the fact that a strong beat lands at the end of 01:55:970 (9) -

02:06:942 (7) - Again right here a strong beat lands on the end of the slider.

02:22:370 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can do more with these sliders based on the music. Unusual shapes might and could be appropriate here.
02:44:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ same goes for all sections that have this sound.

03:31:628 (5,1) - I'm not sure about this. Its not that its bad it just feels out of place because you have nothing similar to it.

03:48:599 (2,3,4) - This looks great.

03:49:628 (5,6,7,8,9) - Have these be sliders as well. The music didn't change I don't think this jump section is called for.

03:50:485 (10) - A sliders here is great. Id have them be 4 ticks personally. The reason for that is because this single 03:50:828 (1) - doesn't fall on a sound that sound is happening on the blue tick not the white tick. Same goes for all the sliders that the of those sections.

04:07:285 (1) - This slider fits the song but kinda come out of nowhere since that same beat you have been following is still present. If others mention it I would change it.

Overall your map is good. I know I complained about a lot but its only because I'd love to see this go further and make improvements. The one thing that you can change across the whole map is consistency. Do not change what rhythm you are following at random, always pick spots that are obvious to the player. If you have a long section that is the same rhythm try to make it interesting through patterns and not just following what is the loudest sound at any given time. This will lead to map that read/play better.
Topic Starter
karstgalvis

Wyatt wrote:

SPOILER
00:06:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Im not sure why you take the slider off this drum sound here (00:06:599 (3) - )
00:07:628 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:17:913 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ When choosing what rythems to follow its very important that you stay consistent. From the start you have the slider on that drum sound and there is not reason in the music why that changes. This isnt bad but you need to be able to explain why you took the slider off that drum sound. Because if you can't the player won't be able to realize why either. hmm, did something, pretty sure i messed up the whole thing, but welp, got your point..

00:30:770 (3,4) - , 00:34:885 (3,4) - These are great. Just not very readable. Have them placed in such a way that its clear they stream together. (00:32:142 (3,4) - ) like you did here. did

00:55:285 (2,3) - This could be problematic. But if no play tester has mentioned it then its fine. But I would change this if others bring it up. not really, it's fine

01:03:685 (5,6,7) - The single in the pattern is crazy far. Id bring it closer if its going to stream into the sliders. wops
01:05:056 (3,4,5) - ^ wops
01:06:428 (3,4,5) - ^ wops

01:15:513 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is pretty cool. thanks :D

01:52:542 (6,7) - All your angular sliders look nice, but these ones have a weird shape. Id maybe just consider making them straight if others also think they look weird. uhm, thanks and moved the thing a bit up, so makes these sliders a bit prettier.

01:52:542 (6,7,8,9) - This part sounds a little off to me. I'm not sure why. it's fine

01:53:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This whole section feels like you are trying to follow both the vocals and the beat. feels weird especially the fact that a strong beat lands at the end of 01:55:970 (9) - hmmm

02:06:942 (7) - Again right here a strong beat lands on the end of the slider. true, somehow did something

02:22:370 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you can do more with these sliders based on the music. Unusual shapes might and could be appropriate here. brr, sounds boring for such an change of the beat
02:44:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ same goes for all sections that have this sound. same ^

03:31:628 (5,1) - I'm not sure about this. Its not that its bad it just feels out of place because you have nothing similar to it. yeah, well, i'll change if anyone else asks for it

03:48:599 (2,3,4) - This looks great. :P

03:49:628 (5,6,7,8,9) - Have these be sliders as well. The music didn't change I don't think this jump section is called for. i'm doing it constantly over there as you can see, seems fine to me.. will think about it if anyone else points it out

03:50:485 (10) - A sliders here is great. Id have them be 4 ticks personally. The reason for that is because this single 03:50:828 (1) - doesn't fall on a sound that sound is happening on the blue tick not the white tick. Same goes for all the sliders that the of those sections. positive

04:07:285 (1) - This slider fits the song but kinda come out of nowhere since that same beat you have been following is still present. If others mention it I would change it. welp, you answered in my place :D

Overall your map is good. I know I complained about a lot but its only because I'd love to see this go further and make improvements. The one thing that you can change across the whole map is consistency. Do not change what rhythm you are following at random, always pick spots that are obvious to the player. If you have a long section that is the same rhythm try to make it interesting through patterns and not just following what is the loudest sound at any given time. This will lead to map that read/play better.
thank you for good words and the mod! good luck :D
ItashaS13
Hi :D



  • add kiai times

    00:20:999 (3) - fix this blanket
    00:08:313 (1) - add two circles? Hmmm if you don't want to keep using 2 circles - 1 slider like this whole part, I recommend adding more slider like this so.. you got a balanced combination with sliders and circles, because, in the whole section, this is the only part that have 3 sliders consecutively
    00:19:628 (3) - fix blanket
    00:24:256 (6,7) - ctrl+g on these
    00:27:513 (1,2) - this overlap doesnt look good, move them avoiding overlap with these 00:26:999 (6,7) -
    00:28:885 (1) - fix blanket
    00:31:456 (7,1) - fix blanket
    00:32:828 (7) - fix blanket
    00:35:399 (6) - ctrl+g
    00:54:942 (1) - move this a bit to the left
    01:02:485 (5) - move this a bt closer, and use the same shape of this 01:02:828 (6) -
    01:11:399 (1) - this slider shape doesnt look good... use just one anchor, like this http://prntscr.com/boa6uc ?
    01:14:828 (6,7) - move 01:14:999 (7) - further
    01:48:770 (1) - oii fix this shape too
    01:56:142 (7,8) - fix ds here
    01:59:056 (8,3) - avoid overlaping these
    02:05:913 (4) - ctrl+h this and move to its actual position
    02:11:399 - this should be clickable
    02:23:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part doesnt fit to the music imo, I think its more like http://prntscr.com/boac7a or.. idk, don't change if you feel its good atm
    02:38:313 (8) - move this down a bit
    02:38:656 (9,2) - stack these
    03:15:685 (3,6) - stack the head of these
    03:24:599 (3) - make this into two circles
    03:24:085 (1,5) - stack head of these
    03:29:913 (8,4) - stack these (move the 4)
    03:30:599 (3,1) - stack these (move the 3)
    04:34:028 (6) - NC
    04:40:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and again, this part doesnt fit for me, i think its more like 1/6 somehow
    05:26:828 (2) - NC (because sv change)
    05:30:770 (1,1) - remove nc
    05:33:170 (1,1,1) - ^
    05:55:628 (2) - o.o this.. move to the withe tick
Gl !
Topic Starter
karstgalvis

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi :D



  • add kiai times idk how to kiai :( teach me! :D

    00:20:999 (3) - fix this blanket done
    00:08:313 (1) - add two circles? Hmmm if you don't want to keep using 2 circles - 1 slider like this whole part, I recommend adding more slider like this so.. you got a balanced combination with sliders and circles, because, in the whole section, this is the only part that have 3 sliders consecutively hmm, did that..
    00:19:628 (3) - fix blanket ;>
    00:24:256 (6,7) - ctrl+g on these did, changed the placing too
    00:27:513 (1,2) - this overlap doesnt look good, move them avoiding overlap with these 00:26:999 (6,7) - done
    00:28:885 (1) - fix blanket after fixing, no blanket there :D
    00:31:456 (7,1) - fix blanket
    00:32:828 (7) - fix blanket
    00:35:399 (6) - ctrl+g positive
    00:54:942 (1) - move this a bit to the left how much tho? re-did so it's more natural
    01:02:485 (5) - move this a bt closer, and use the same shape of this 01:02:828 (6) - did it :D
    01:11:399 (1) - this slider shape doesnt look good... use just one anchor, like this http://prntscr.com/boa6uc ? fixed
    01:14:828 (6,7) - move 01:14:999 (7) - further done
    01:48:770 (1) - oii fix this shape too welp, made it simpler
    01:56:142 (7,8) - fix ds here oops..
    01:59:056 (8,3) - avoid overlaping these fuck that part is tricky to map without overlaping xd i try/tried my best tho
    02:05:913 (4) - ctrl+h this and move to its actual position. fixed
    02:11:399 - this should be clickable hmm!
    02:23:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part doesnt fit to the music imo, I think its more like http://prntscr.com/boac7a or.. idk, don't change if you feel its good atm i feel pretty confident about this place..
    02:38:313 (8) - move this down a bit
    02:38:656 (9,2) - stack these nah, it's fine!
    03:15:685 (3,6) - stack the head of these done
    03:24:599 (3) - make this into two circles done!
    03:24:085 (1,5) - stack head of these you messed up a little ^ :D
    03:29:913 (8,4) - stack these (move the 4) fixed!
    03:30:599 (3,1) - stack these (move the 3) ^
    04:34:028 (6) - NC
    04:40:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and again, this part doesnt fit for me, i think its more like 1/6 somehow i avoid changing snap divisors..
    05:26:828 (2) - NC (because sv change)
    05:30:770 (1,1) - remove nc
    05:33:170 (1,1,1) - ^
    05:55:628 (2) - o.o this.. move to the withe tick
Gl ! thanks! :D
ItashaS13
Topic Starter
karstgalvis
there's the points where i should put them too? :D
waywern2012
Welp took some time to mod it and give suggestions n stuff... even had to stream for 2 hours xd Gl with the map! And remember the kiai, hitsounds, combos, overlaps and especially patterns...

Mod Stream: Here (nice quality Kappa)
Chat log
2016-07-06 19:29 waywern2012: nu ko
2016-07-06 19:30 waywern2012: nazi mod is here
2016-07-06 19:30 waywern2012: daudz ko mainisim tavaa mapee vne
2016-07-06 19:30 waywern2012: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1012036 Muzzy - Children of Hell [Childish]]
2016-07-06 19:30 snoopeh: kads nazi mod
2016-07-06 19:30 snoopeh: ko
2016-07-06 19:30 waywern2012: es modoshu
2016-07-06 19:31 waywern2012: negribas taisit forum post jo var vnk caur shejieni
2016-07-06 19:31 snoopeh: pec tam kip ieliksi irc? :D
2016-07-06 19:31 waywern2012: njam
2016-07-06 19:31 waywern2012: daudz mainisim
2016-07-06 19:31 waywern2012: bus ko stradat :D
2016-07-06 19:32 snoopeh: kaa taa izdomaji
2016-07-06 19:32 snoopeh: nazi modot
2016-07-06 19:32 waywern2012: skatos tev daudz modi jau bijushi tpc meginasim
2016-07-06 19:32 waywern2012: tev vajag daudz vairak patternus
2016-07-06 19:33 snoopeh: es meginaju patternus
2016-07-06 19:33 waywern2012: yammm
2016-07-06 19:33 snoopeh: viskkadus
2016-07-06 19:33 snoopeh: neiet kopa ar dziesmu
2016-07-06 19:33 waywern2012: nu tad lets go
2016-07-06 19:33 snoopeh: lezzgo
2016-07-06 19:33 waywern2012: pirmais ko izdari vari nonjemt no grida visu :D
2016-07-06 19:34 waywern2012: bet ja velies atstaj
2016-07-06 19:34 snoopeh: you mean
2016-07-06 19:34 waywern2012: un bik liels tas grid ir
2016-07-06 19:34 snoopeh: bookmarkus?
2016-07-06 19:34 waywern2012: ne
2016-07-06 19:34 snoopeh: vai ari inherited?
2016-07-06 19:34 waywern2012: ar G burtu kad uzspiezh nomaina gridu
2016-07-06 19:34 snoopeh: aaaa
2016-07-06 19:34 snoopeh: grid
2016-07-06 19:34 waywern2012: par cik mape high diff, vajadzetu lielaku dont you think :D
2016-07-06 19:35 snoopeh: 3 deres?
2016-07-06 19:35 snoopeh: maybe ;D
2016-07-06 19:35 waywern2012: bus ok
2016-07-06 19:35 waywern2012: tak
2016-07-06 19:35 waywern2012: 00:04:542 (3) -
2016-07-06 19:35 waywern2012: ja visi pirms tam slideri ir ar sarkanu punktinju mosh varetu ari sho
2016-07-06 19:36 waywern2012: un vel talak esoshos
2016-07-06 19:36 snoopeh: vini jaukti
2016-07-06 19:36 snoopeh: tur ir gan sarkani
2016-07-06 19:36 snoopeh: gan parasti
2016-07-06 19:36 waywern2012: nu vo
2016-07-06 19:36 waywern2012: varetu 4 sarkanos, 4 pelekos
2016-07-06 19:36 waywern2012: vai ari pa 2
2016-07-06 19:36 waywern2012: bet nevis random
2016-07-06 19:36 waywern2012: un combo neliec tik biezhi
2016-07-06 19:37 waywern2012: jauns combo -> pariet no peleka uz sarkanu maybe
2016-07-06 19:37 waywern2012: un otradak
2016-07-06 19:37 snoopeh: es njemu pa 4
2016-07-06 19:37 snoopeh: tatad taa nebuus
2016-07-06 19:37 waywern2012: kad sakas jauns combo, uzliec distance snap lielaku
2016-07-06 19:37 snoopeh: parak ilgi bus
2016-07-06 19:37 waywern2012: 12 notis not bad
2016-07-06 19:37 waywern2012: 16 vel varetu padomat
2016-07-06 19:38 waywern2012: un neliec visu laiku 2 apljus un 1 slider no sakuma...
2016-07-06 19:38 snoopeh: tas jau ir liels darbs
2016-07-06 19:38 waywern2012: zinu :D
2016-07-06 19:38 snoopeh: tbh
2016-07-06 19:38 waywern2012: varetu vel 4 apljus ielikt starpaas, kur pariet no peleka uz sarkanu
2016-07-06 19:38 waywern2012: ta slider vietaa 2 apljus
2016-07-06 19:38 waywern2012: i mean
2016-07-06 19:39 waywern2012: ja tev combo iet pa 3, tad sheit iet bik vairak 00:06:942 (4) -
2016-07-06 19:39 waywern2012: nc vajadzetu ja tu turpini pa 3 likt
2016-07-06 19:39 snoopeh: es ta dariju
2016-07-06 19:39 snoopeh: man teica
2016-07-06 19:39 snoopeh: ja saku taisit taa
2016-07-06 19:39 snoopeh: tad lai pabeidzu
2016-07-06 19:39 waywern2012: mhm
2016-07-06 19:40 waywern2012: tas bija sakums xD
2016-07-06 19:40 waywern2012: great
2016-07-06 19:40 waywern2012: hitsoundus maki likt?
2016-07-06 19:41 snoopeh: es visu soft liku
2016-07-06 19:41 waywern2012: ammm
2016-07-06 19:41 waywern2012: nuu pashus hitsounds
2016-07-06 19:41 snoopeh: bet es labprat dabutu cilveku kurs man hitsoundotu visu
2016-07-06 19:41 snoopeh: ta ka
2016-07-06 19:41 waywern2012: mmm
2016-07-06 19:41 waywern2012: nu es varu meginat
2016-07-06 19:41 waywern2012: bet par to kudosu lkm nedod xd
2016-07-06 19:42 waywern2012: oi un vel patterni
2016-07-06 19:42 snoopeh: hitsounding?
2016-07-06 19:42 waywern2012: mhm
2016-07-06 19:42 snoopeh: es sameklesu kadu
2016-07-06 19:42 waywern2012: uzspied uz nots +w/e/r
2016-07-06 19:42 waywern2012: nu es varu
2016-07-06 19:43 waywern2012: hitsoundod
2016-07-06 19:43 waywern2012: first try but lets go xD
2016-07-06 19:43 waywern2012: zinko es streamoshu un tu vari skatities
2016-07-06 19:43 waywern2012: jo patterni bus gruti paradit
2016-07-06 19:43 waywern2012: patternus*
2016-07-06 19:44 snoopeh: nu skatities
2016-07-06 19:44 snoopeh: un darit es ari nevaru
2016-07-06 19:47 waywern2012: nuu
2016-07-06 19:47 waywern2012: es doshu vairak idejas
2016-07-06 19:47 waywern2012: nevis kaa pa savam
2016-07-06 19:47 waywern2012: quality nebus labaka :D
2016-07-06 19:48 snoopeh: es stradaju pie sakuma :P
2016-07-06 19:54 snoopeh: tu to sakumu vari neskatities
2016-07-06 19:54 snoopeh: es vinu parveidoju pilniba
2016-07-06 20:03 snoopeh: nevari vnk seit pls xd
2016-07-06 20:03 snoopeh: es censos stradat
2016-07-06 20:03 snoopeh: :D
2016-07-06 21:41 waywern2012: cerams palidzeju bik
William K
Hi, M4M :3

[General]

  1. Set a preview point :D It's up to you though.
[Childish]

Kay, let's make this fast :3

  1. 00:03:170 (3) - This slider isn't good enough, (for me only I think). But it's a bit awkward for sure, you may make a curve slider like... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5663248 or something else. Oh yeah, make it the same as others, emphasis.
  2. 00:03:856 (6) - You mau make this one a curve too if you want, (blanket) :D But it's up to you.
  3. 00:06:256 (7,8) - CTRL+G-ing this is better I guess.
  4. 00:06:599 (9) - For this slider, you can think of anything as long as the flow's acceptable.
  5. 00:07:970 (6,9,3,6,9) - You don't want to emphasize these?
  6. 00:10:028 (6) - Fix this, blanket.
  7. 00:10:713 (9) - Blanket's off.
  8. 00:12:085 (6) - It's awkward, make curve is better.
  9. 00:24:428 (7) - It's awkward. :3
  10. 00:25:285 (3,4,5) - Place this on another place is better.
  11. 01:24:428 (4,5) - Emphasis. Make the space longer than 5-6.
  12. 01:26:142 (6) - Blanket's off, fix it.
  13. 01:26:828 (2,1) - You may stack these if you want.
  14. 01:28:199 (3,7,9,11,13,15) - NCs will be good.
  15. 01:48:770 (7) - NC
  16. 01:52:542 (6,7) - Fix this slider since flow is not good enough.
  17. 02:07:970 (11) - NC.
  18. 02:10:713 (12) - NC.
  19. 02:13:456 (8) - ^
  20. 02:16:713 (7,9) - You may blanket these. It's awkward imo.
  21. 02:30:599 (7) - You may NC this.
  22. 02:27:856 (7) - ^
  23. 02:40:370 (8) - ^
  24. 02:41:913 (1) - Blanket's off (Or you purposely don't blanket it.) But I must say it's better with blanket :3
  25. 02:43:113 (8) - NC.
  26. 02:48:599 (7) - ^
  27. 02:51:342 (7) - ^
  28. 02:54:085 (7) - ^
  29. 02:56:485 (4) - It's better with a curve imo.
  30. 02:57:170 (3,5,7) - NC these.
  31. 03:00:770 (11) - NC.
  32. 03:29:228 (5) - ^
  33. 03:39:170 (5) - Blanket's off.
  34. 03:39:513 (6) - ^
  35. 03:39:856 (1) - You may blanket this.
  36. 03:41:056 (3,3,5) - NCs.
  37. 03:48:599 (2,3,4) - Fix these, they're not good enough.
  38. 04:19:113 (3) - NC.
  39. 04:20:656 (13) - NC.
  40. 04:20:913 (1) - Take off NC.
  41. 04:25:799 (7) - Hmm... It's acceptable though. But you may improve the pattern.
  42. 04:38:999 (5) - Blanket's off.
  43. 04:39:513 (7) - Fix this. You may put the red point in the middle.
  44. 04:56:313 (1) - Fix blanket.
  45. 05:09:170 (6) - Fix the slider, it's awkward for me
  46. 05:17:399 (3) - Blanket's off.
  47. 05:17:913 (2) - Just make it straight. I think it's not a problem.
  48. 05:36:428 (3,5,7) - NCs.
  49. 05:58:370 (3,5,7) - ^
I think that's all from me :3 GL~
Topic Starter
karstgalvis

William K wrote:

Hi, M4M :3

[General]

  1. Set a preview point :D It's up to you though.
[Childish]

Kay, let's make this fast :3

  1. 00:03:170 (3) - This slider isn't good enough, (for me only I think). But it's a bit awkward for sure, you may make a curve slider like... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5663248 or something else. Oh yeah, make it the same as others, emphasis.
  2. 00:03:856 (6) - You mau make this one a curve too if you want, (blanket) :D But it's up to you.
  3. 00:06:256 (7,8) - CTRL+G-ing this is better I guess.
  4. 00:06:599 (9) - For this slider, you can think of anything as long as the flow's acceptable.
  5. 00:07:970 (6,9,3,6,9) - You don't want to emphasize these?
  6. 00:10:028 (6) - Fix this, blanket.
  7. 00:10:713 (9) - Blanket's off.
  8. 00:12:085 (6) - It's awkward, make curve is better.
  9. 00:24:428 (7) - It's awkward. :3
  10. 00:25:285 (3,4,5) - Place this on another place is better.
  11. 01:24:428 (4,5) - Emphasis. Make the space longer than 5-6.
  12. 01:26:142 (6) - Blanket's off, fix it.
  13. 01:26:828 (2,1) - You may stack these if you want.
  14. 01:28:199 (3,7,9,11,13,15) - NCs will be good.
  15. 01:48:770 (7) - NC
  16. 01:52:542 (6,7) - Fix this slider since flow is not good enough.
  17. 02:07:970 (11) - NC.
  18. 02:10:713 (12) - NC.
  19. 02:13:456 (8) - ^
  20. 02:16:713 (7,9) - You may blanket these. It's awkward imo.
  21. 02:30:599 (7) - You may NC this.
  22. 02:27:856 (7) - ^
  23. 02:40:370 (8) - ^
  24. 02:41:913 (1) - Blanket's off (Or you purposely don't blanket it.) But I must say it's better with blanket :3
  25. 02:43:113 (8) - NC.
  26. 02:48:599 (7) - ^
  27. 02:51:342 (7) - ^
  28. 02:54:085 (7) - ^
  29. 02:56:485 (4) - It's better with a curve imo.
  30. 02:57:170 (3,5,7) - NC these.
  31. 03:00:770 (11) - NC.
  32. 03:29:228 (5) - ^
  33. 03:39:170 (5) - Blanket's off.
  34. 03:39:513 (6) - ^
  35. 03:39:856 (1) - You may blanket this.
  36. 03:41:056 (3,3,5) - NCs.
  37. 03:48:599 (2,3,4) - Fix these, they're not good enough.
  38. 04:19:113 (3) - NC.
  39. 04:20:656 (13) - NC.
  40. 04:20:913 (1) - Take off NC.
  41. 04:25:799 (7) - Hmm... It's acceptable though. But you may improve the pattern.
  42. 04:38:999 (5) - Blanket's off.
  43. 04:39:513 (7) - Fix this. You may put the red point in the middle.
  44. 04:56:313 (1) - Fix blanket.
  45. 05:09:170 (6) - Fix the slider, it's awkward for me
  46. 05:17:399 (3) - Blanket's off.
  47. 05:17:913 (2) - Just make it straight. I think it's not a problem.
  48. 05:36:428 (3,5,7) - NCs.
  49. 05:58:370 (3,5,7) - ^
I think that's all from me :3 GL~
thanks for the mod, and thanks!
Lami
hello, from queue. i just advice about general thing.

a) About hitsounding :
example, 00:03:856 (6) - clap is really loud, despite of relax part on this music,
and this song don't include any clap sounds.
i recommend to use custom-hitsounds, you can find it in ranked maps.
also, consider to reduce volume, too. as music is small, so just follow volume tho.

b) About mood :
same example, 00:03:170 (3) -
if music is relax in here, then you can consider to use slow SV(slider speed) in here.
it maybe will fit on music mood, i think.

c) About rhythm choice :
00:02:827 - ~ 00:23:056 - just only repeat same rhythm, two circles + one slider.
it may be occured on boring for player.
you can consider (4 circles) or (2 sliders) or (one slider + two circles/oppsited with previous)
it can make more free style on this map.

it doesn't include everything on improvement. i wish you can practice on mapping skill.
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