RogueGamer17 wrote:

Spaced streams are a bit too far apart I think ? maybe it's just me

Yup I'm having a hard time with those placements

Updated!

Just some suggestions:
00:16:056 (12) - change the slider velocity to 1.00 to make it more rounded
00:19:039 (1) - same as above
01:22:022 (3) - 01:24:303 (1) - insert a break
03:50:708 (1) - to 03:52:024 (1) - don't have too but add a spinner to map the ending vocal
all suggestions you don't have to follow them <3

MicMck101 wrote:

Just some suggestions:
00:16:056 (12) - change the slider velocity to 1.00 to make it more rounded
00:19:039 (1) - same as above
01:22:022 (3) - 01:24:303 (1) - insert a break
03:50:708 (1) - don't have too but add a spinner to map the ending vocal to 03:52:024 (1) -
all suggestions you don't have to follow them <3

Thanks a lot for the tips <3
they gave me so good ideas ^^

Katsumito wrote:

MicMck101 wrote:

Just some suggestions:
00:16:056 (12) - change the slider velocity to 1.00 to make it more rounded
00:19:039 (1) - same as above
01:22:022 (3) - 01:24:303 (1) - insert a break
03:50:708 (1) - don't have too but add a spinner to map the ending vocal to 03:52:024 (1) -
all suggestions you don't have to follow them <3

Thanks a lot for the tips <3
they gave me so good ideas ^^

your very welcome \owo/

Hello again <3
just some more suggestions:
01:14:653 - start a new combo
01:16:583 - new combo
01:18:689 - 01:20:092 - can be one combo
02:12:198 - new combo
02:14:128 - new combo
02:15:531 - new combo
02:16:409 - 02:16:584 - can be a combo with 02:15:531 -
02:20:619 - new combo
02:23:426 - new combo
02:25:356 - new combo
02:26:760 - new combo
02:27:637 - 02:27:812 - can be a combo with 02:26:760 -

That is all i found when i played the map again. If this did help you you do NOT have to give me kudosu for it since it was things i forgot to put in my other one <3
Keep up the good work my friend :3

MicMck101 wrote:

Hello again <3
just some more suggestions:
01:14:653 - start a new combo
01:16:583 - new combo
01:18:689 - 01:20:092 - can be one combo
02:12:198 - new combo
02:14:128 - new combo
02:15:531 - new combo
02:16:409 - 02:16:584 - can be a combo with 02:15:531 -
02:20:619 - new combo
02:23:426 - new combo
02:25:356 - new combo
02:26:760 - new combo
02:27:637 - 02:27:812 - can be a combo with 02:26:760 -

That is all i found when i played the map again. If this did help you you do NOT have to give me kudosu for it since it was things i forgot to put in my other one <3
Keep up the good work my friend :3

I changed the song a bit so all those timings are different xD sorry about that, but i made the combo changes before updating everything so it should all be alright now

Some really clear beat issues that I am here to highly suggest that you fix

01:21:496 (1,2,3) - Is not 1/4 its 1/3 and should be placed as such :
02:19:040 (4,5,6) - Same here should be placed such as :
02:50:619 (2) - Try to emphasize this strong beat abit more
03:39:041 (1,2,3) - The beat issue again it should be placed :

Aside from those beats, the sliderpatterns you have made are really fun to play, excited to see the end result.

GL and cheers!//Vea

-vEa- wrote:

Some really clear beat issues that I am here to highly suggest that you fix

01:21:496 (1,2,3) - Is not 1/4 its 1/3 and should be placed as such :
02:19:040 (4,5,6) - Same here should be placed such as :
02:50:619 (2) - Try to emphasize this strong beat abit more
03:39:041 (1,2,3) - The beat issue again it should be placed :

Aside from those beats, the sliderpatterns you have made are really fun to play, excited to see the end result.

GL and cheers!//Vea

Fixed those, Thanks for the great help mate!

Are you done with this beatmap? And if so I would love if it could become ranked/loved.

Asoreand wrote:

Are you done with this beatmap? And if so I would love if it could become ranked/loved.

The "Shattered" Difficulty is done, however for it to be ranked it requires 2 difficulties. That means i still need to map 1 more difficulty

Can I made maybe insane diff?

LosPedros wrote:

Can I made maybe insane diff?

This was a project that I kinda gave up on since I'm not a great mapper.
However if you're willing to help I don't mind getting back to it

everything done done it will be Insane diff.
I realy want a ranked map of this song and I have hope to get it maybe in the future.
(my english su** sr)
PS:change ar (Shattered diff) to maybe 9,5

LosPedros wrote:

64% done it will be Insane diff.
I realy want a ranked map of this song and I have hope to get it maybe in the future.
(my english su** sr)
PS:change ar (Shattered diff) to maybe 9,5

Will do so, and thanks for the help !!

dude do you have disscord? because I dont realy know how to send this map to you.
What is funny is that I found this map in this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wWH6nyYL_M&t=313s and I remembered that I was looking for this song in osu for such a long time.
(bad english I know) ;

LosPedros wrote:

dude do you have disscord? because I dont realy know how to send this map to you.
What is funny is that I found this map in this video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wWH6nyYL_M&t=313s and I remembered that I was looking for this song in osu for such a long time.
(bad english I know) ;

Holy crap my shit map made it to youtube; ^) feelsgreatman.

Also yeah I got discord I'll send you a pm

xd

01:03:425 (1,2,3) - stream near perfect but it will be even better if u make it from a sliders like those https://i.imgur.com/1sClBU0.jpg
01:01:846 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - /\
00:59:741 (1) - change the shape of this slider and make it faster maybe 1,5 green line like in insane diff
01:02:548 (5) - /\
01:10:969 (1) - /\
01:13:776 (5) - /\
01:00:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - change it to something like this https://i.imgur.com/1A1K3w7.jpg
01:03:425 (1,2,3) - /\
01:11:846 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - /\
01:14:653 (1,2,3) - /\
01:05:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - use better flow and make this circle in streams* overlap eachother
01:24:829 (4,5,6,7,8) - this can be a tripple and than 1/2 beat after a circle or 3 1/2 beat circles instead of stream
01:26:233 (5,6,7,8) - /\
01:27:636 (4,5,6,7) - /\
01:34:478 (2,3,4,5) - /\
01:21:496 (1,2,3) - to make it easier to a player can be changed to a reversed slider
01:21:145 (1) - stack this circle to 01:20:618 (2) and manualy make it a stack (ctrl+arrow keys[stack are 3 or 4 down and right arrows])
01:25:355 (1,2,3,4) - there u can create 3 1 beat long 1/4reverse slider
01:36:584 (2,3,4,5) - /\ (but 2 sliders this time)
01:29:040 (5,6,7) - sound sugest to use a 1/6 reverse slider and after it 1/2 or 1/1 beat slider
01:30:619 (6,7,8) - change to 1/2 or 1/1 slider
01:32:373 (3) - make this a 1/4 slider and then make 1/8 6 times reverse slider
01:35:882 (4,5,6,7,8) - 3 1/2 circles will be better
01:37:285 (5,6,7,8,9) - make it 3 1/2 circles
01:39:040 (3,4,5,6,1) - make it 1 beat long slider and 1/2 beat after a tripple
01:40:268 (4,5,6,7,8) - tripple and 1/2 beat after a circle
01:41:145 (1,2) - there's can be a tripple
01:41:847 (6,7,8,1) - circle then the tripple
01:42:899 (3,1,2,3) - 4 times reversed 1/3 slider
01:43:426 (4,5) - change it to a tripple
01:43:777 (6) - just a circle
01:43:952 (1) - 4 times 1/4 reversed slider
01:44:303 - after /\ 1 beat long 1/6 reversed slider
01:44:654 - there u can see an insane diff and try to recreate this part
- the same in the seconf big break
01:55:882 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - totaly remake this part
the whole second section of kiai the same as first
02:30:268 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - last second of KiAi, there should be 4 times reversed slider 2 tick of 1/3 long
02:42:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2 full beats

00:39:916 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the strong sound is on the white ticks not on the red ones, you should move it by 1/2 forward
00:46:758 (4) - this should be place like this two sliders 00:45:881 (1,2)
00:46:583 (3,4,5) - this sliders could make an triangel
something like this https://i.imgur.com/gpwni9I.jpg /\ /\
00:56:934 (9) - use new combo here, the circle shouldn't have more than 8, like 24 is a little too big number https://i.imgur.com/VKy0eo6.jpg
00:53:074 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you want geometric jumps you can take an idea from other maps, like this 00:54:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) this could expand and be more geometric than normal left right left etc.
00:55:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can be a stream, sound supports more circle than sliders, something like this shape is good for that (maybe sacled to 1,2 https://i.imgur.com/RXiPLaH.jpg but remember if you makeing a slider with red sharp angles use them on sliders ticks https://i.imgur.com/M6Rq93j.jpg)
in streams use new combo colour on the 5th or 9th circle https://i.imgur.com/3T8dQSS.jpg

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