Adot wrote:

m4m

general

the end ln in 01:56:674 - isn't same with each difficulties. try to form them to same time wkakak fixed

novice

1. 00:12:574 - add 1 note for transition to this impact 00:12:724 - keep, emphasizing da impact
2. 00:22:474 - add 1, sampe impact with 00:12:724 - focusing the pianos
3. 00:16:174 (16174|1,16474|3) - i suggest to delete them, since the doubles in 00:16:024 - 00:16:324 - 00:16:624 - are enough to fit the sound.. and the atmosphere is more sorely. try to rearrange the next pattern if you find the same thing (if you accept this) keep, still want to layering the piano
4. 00:49:474 - double please, same impact like 00:39:874 - okiii
5. 00:53:524 - add 1 note for piano thing there and end this ln? 00:51:424 (51424|3) - . i feel a little void when i played in that time hmmm aight applied
6. 01:40:774 (100774|3,100774|2) - i thought it wasn't impact there. so i think it's better to not make them double and focus on drum like the back then. suggest 01:40:774 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6257294 applied with lil rearrangement
7. 01:42:174 (102174|2,102574|1,102974|0,103374|2,103774|3) - i feel uneasy with this note after double. i think it will be more comfort if you delete them. a single in 1/6 snap is a little weird for me. just consider the double representing cymbal in between. i think it's fine

advenced

1. 00:22:474 - oh man, it should be double, for a snare sound and i think it's thick so it suits if you add 1 single note again there oh man, added
2. 01:44:374 (104374|1) - i think it's easier than the novice diff. try to rearrange. change the LN to a stream in that time it's intended, forgot to put SV there teehee
3. 01:47:224 - add 1 for snare sound, like novice diff? wow how did i miss this one. nice catch. fixed
4. 01:53:674 - here too keep, emphasize the second impact with cymbal

esaus

1. 00:23:074 - i think the downbeat is same strong as 00:22:924 - and 00:23:224 - . i suggest make it double then. it's for kick man, no change
2. 00:23:374 - make it triple bcs it has snare sound like 00:23:524 - the triple is intended for high pitch piano, it's just same like what i did in INF
3. 00:25:624 - 00:25:924 - you can make it triple to fit the snare's beat with 00:26:224 - . apply this with the next pattern that same with this in the next. it will increase the star rating slightly, but i'll consider it
4. 00:29:224 (29224|1,29224|2) - man the sound is particulary cant be heard slightly. i suggest to remove, or make it single note i can clearly heard it's same kick sound as the following kick sound
5. 00:35:074 - double for fit the snare sound? and i think it can be thicker bcs of the snare sound added
6. 01:44:374 - until 01:44:674 - there are piano sounds there, y u didn't layer it? you layered it with LN in ADVANCED diff, and with some notes in NOVICE this. be wise with the difficult's stars aight aight added LN hehe
7. 01:50:824 - same issue like 00:29:224 iykwim

ok that's all from me.. thenks

Rizqy wrote:

astaga baru 3 mods

- Ly0572 - wrote:

Hi
req from our queue

|1|2|3|4|

BASIC

00:15:424 - missed a note here
00:25:024 - here also^
00:45:424 (45424|0) - move to |4|
00:53:974 (53974|1,54274|0) - switch col~
00:58:924 - add to |1|
01:02:374 - Suggestion here

01:28:774 (88774|3) - delete maybe i dont hear sound tho
01:33:874 - add note here |4| will do
01:34:174 - add to |3|
01:36:574 (96574|3) - delete
01:37:324 - add also
01:37:774 (97774|0) - u can move this to |3| to create mini jack since it has the same sound
01:40:924 (100924|0,101074|1) - maybe change this to a long note starting from 01:40:774 - ends here 01:41:224 -
01:49:474 - missed a note
01:49:924 - ^^
01:50:374 - ^^

most of them are applied~ thanks. basic now has better flow

NOVICE

00:08:224 - missed a note added
00:12:574 - from here~ try this no thx, the current flow is fit already

00:19:174 - add note here added
00:19:249 - here also keep, the layering seems confusing for player. but i add note here 01:40:849 - for difficulty spike
00:41:674 (41674|1) - move to |4| nope, keep it for pitch
01:28:774 (88774|1,88924|0,88924|3) - i hear same sound as 01:29:224 - so why is that area empty? it's different. the first timing section did you mention first has cymbal sound
01:49:024 - add here added

ADVANCE

00:10:174 (10174|1,10399|2) - switch col~ keep, i want to alternating between those alternate(?) lmao
00:10:474 (10474|1,10549|3) - ^^ ^
00:15:949 (15949|1) - delete :3 i can hear the synth
00:24:274 (24274|1,24424|0) - switch col~ hmm i would like to keep
00:35:224 - make this double okiii

[-No One-] wrote:

HELLO!

NOTE: These are just my opinions and its up to you if you would apply them hehe.
I'm from Ly and Sya's Queue. :>

BASIC

01:03:274 (63274|2) and 01:03:574 (63574|3) : If you would like, you can change it into this pattern:

to amplify the effect of the sound, also to make the patterns consistent since the next part also has that pattern. :>

The rest are already fine (for me). I didnt notice any ghost notes or wrong snaps so yeah.

NOVICE

00:05:974 (5974|0,5974|1) : Again, I think it would be better to separate the two notes from each other. If you would like it, you can change it into this:

since it would make the sound to have an intense effect for the player (idk what I'm saying but thats what I feel HAHAHHA) applied

01:08:374 (68374|2,68374|1) : Change the pattern into this:

since the previous notes also has that pattern. keep

01:08:674 (68674|0,68974|3,69274|0) : Maybe change these notes into:

keep, the current is balance enough

01:29:224 (89224|0,89224|3) : If you would like, you can apply these notes:

the sound is not mapable in NOVICE

Anddd the rest are already fine (for me). I guess there are no ghost notes and wrong snaps in here, also. Noice noice! thanks

ADVANCED

00:39:199 (39199|1) : If you want, you may add a note there because there's a beat ;o;

i can hear it but it's inaudible. players will not notice that sound
01:28:024 (88024|0,88024|1) : Change into this, if you want:

changed into [13]
01:33:349 (93349|2,93424|1) : There is a beat in between, maybe apply this if you want:

current flow is better. will not add burst into advanced
01:40:474 (100474|1) : Change it into this since it has a different and more intense beat:

it will make this map unrankable bcs it's ghost note

EXHAUST

00:16:174 (16174|3,16174|0) : No beat here?
00:25:774 (25774|0,25774|2) : No beat here too?
^ synth pls
00:35:524 (35524|2,35524|3,35674|1,35824|2,35824|0) : If you want, you can change this part into:

since there is a beat in the middle. every white tick at this part has beat, but i'm not going to layer all instrument
00:53:974 (53974|2,53974|1,53974|3) : Delete one note here? Perhaps the middle? Ehehe. triplets in EXHAUST diff is reasonable. not going to remove it
01:01:474 (61474|2) : Delete this since the sound isnt that loud? kick
01:01:774 (61774|2) : Move this to the blue line below it? double = kick

01:17:524 (77524|2) : Theres a beat there hehe. Add a note? i think i already added LN there...
01:22:324 (82324|1) & 01:22:474 (82474|2) : There are beatsssss. Maybe do this? there's no beat on red tick and also one LN is enough

01:27:274 (87274|0,87274|3,87274|1,87349|2,87424|3,87424|0,87499|1) : Are you sure about the notes there? yes There are loud beats in there wajuu. If you want, you may change it into:

no, it's really uncomfortable
01:39:199 (99199|1,99274|2,99274|3,99574|3,99574|0,99574|1) : This part, you can change it into this, if you want:

lol it's my previous pattern xD will consider it. thanks~
01:39:499 (99499|0) : Ah, there is a beat here hehe. added and rearranged

I'm not really sure about the parts w/o beats. I dunno. I might be deaf but I just, I dunno. HAHAHAH.

INFINITE

00:39:874 (39874|1) : Would you like to add a long note here? I dunno ahhaa.

keep, the flow isn't good enough
00:49:174 (49174|1) : There is a beat here hehe. yes but not going to layer that beat

Idk what to say anymore HAHAHA.

OVERALL

The song is good . I think a lot of players will enjoy it. Also, can you make the OD and HP the same for the rest of the difficulties? 7.5 or 8 would do. The map is fun to play, especially the long notes! Good luck and I hope that your map will get ranked hehe.
HP OD is fit to each difficulties imo. will ask others opinions. thanks for pointing out this

P.S.: I'm just a noob modder.
dont sad. just keep practicing, knowing how mappers put the notes, what sound mappers layering. you will become good modder. cheer up

puxtu wrote:

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04:32 puxtu: -INFINITE-
04:34 puxtu: 00:05:374 (5374|0) - bisa nambah note 1 lagi habis ini (hint: red line) emphasizing long synth di kolom 4
04:38 puxtu: 00:10:774 (10774|0,10774|1) - tuker posisinya, single note sembunyi di belakang ln agak susah dibaca sama aja deh perasaan..
04:38 puxtu: buat dia lebih visible
04:39 puxtu: 00:11:974 (11974|0,12124|1) - keknya kurang 1 note lg deh snare 3, kick 2. begitu
04:41 puxtu: 00:20:824 (20824|0,21124|2) - bisa diganti jadi 1/4s sengaja pake LN. emphasize synth nya. bosen kick mulu
04:41 puxtu: 00:21:424 (21424|0,21424|1) - nothing to emphasize 00:21:424 (21424|1,21424|0,21574|1,21574|2) - same sound actually
04:45 puxtu: 00:33:424 (33424|2,33424|1,33424|0,33499|3,33574|1,33574|2,33574|0) - hm agak maksain untuk terlihat beda iya juga sih, rearranged
04:46 puxtu: dibandingin dengan note yg sebelumnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:49:099 (49099|0) - gw yakin ini kurang 1 note lg di atasnya intended
04:48 puxtu: 00:53:974 (53974|2) - mungkin kiai cocok disini not going to put any kiais
04:49 puxtu: 00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - gw ga yakin sama ini gw yakin sama lu<3
04:50 puxtu: 01:11:674 (71674|2,71824|2,71974|3) - coba ganti mini ln 2 of them are changed
04:52 puxtu: 01:21:274 (81274|0) - bukannya seharusnya ada stream disini ya? fokus ke synth, bukan piano
04:52 puxtu: 01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - lo bisa ganti ini jadi burst yes i can. but keep
04:53 puxtu: 01:24:799 (84799|1,85099|0) - completely ghosts 01:25:099 - yg ini agak ghost, soalnya low pitch. tapi kalo dihapus jd nanggung gitu mainnya. keep btw
04:54 puxtu: 01:27:574 (87574|3) - gw bingung knp streamnya berhenti disini? masih wip ya? lo belum kelar ngemap bagian ini? sengaja. fokus ke kick yg ada synth nya itu

puxtu wrote:

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04:32 puxtu: -INFINITE-
04:34 puxtu: 00:05:374 (5374|0) - bisa nambah note 1 lagi habis ini (hint: red line)
04:38 puxtu: 00:10:774 (10774|0,10774|1) - tuker posisinya, single note sembunyi di belakang ln agak susah dibaca
04:38 puxtu: buat dia lebih visible
04:39 puxtu: 00:11:974 (11974|0,12124|1) - keknya kurang 1 note lg deh
04:41 puxtu: 00:20:824 (20824|0,21124|2) - bisa diganti jadi 1/4s
04:41 puxtu: 00:21:424 (21424|0,21424|1) - nothing to emphasize
04:45 puxtu: 00:33:424 (33424|2,33424|1,33424|0,33499|3,33574|1,33574|2,33574|0) - hm agak maksain untuk terlihat beda
04:46 puxtu: dibandingin dengan note yg sebelumnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:49:099 (49099|0) - gw yakin ini kurang 1 note lg di atasnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:53:974 (53974|2) - mungkin kiai cocok disini
04:49 puxtu: 00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - gw ga yakin sama ini
04:50 puxtu: 01:11:674 (71674|2,71824|2,71974|3) - coba ganti mini ln
04:52 puxtu: 01:21:274 (81274|0) - bukannya seharusnya ada stream disini ya?
04:52 puxtu: 01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - lo bisa ganti ini jadi burst
04:53 puxtu: 01:24:799 (84799|1,85099|0) - completely ghosts
04:54 puxtu: 01:27:574 (87574|3) - gw bingung knp streamnya berhenti disini? masih wip ya? lo belum kelar ngemap bagian ini?

Aras25 wrote:

00:03 Rido: FIAT LUX MANA
00:03 Rido: 2 hari tydac nongol di thread
00:04 Aras25: !!!!!
00:04 Aras25: thanks
00:04 Aras25: sibuk gua hari ini =w=
00:04 Rido: map lu udh siap di mod belum
00:04 Aras25: udah =w=
00:05 Aras25: tapi lo liat mod gua di map sabun ntar aja dlu
00:05 Rido: okeh
00:05 Rido: liat apa lagi
00:06 Rido: mau irc apa forum
00:06 Aras25: tunggu gua mod aja di sabun
00:06 Aras25: baru lo ke oppai gua
00:06 Aras25: =w=
00:06 Aras25: gua prefer irc sih, lebih cep[at
00:06 Rido: oke
00:06 Aras25: tapi bebas lah
00:07 Rido: yaudah yuk irc
00:07 Aras25: kuy
00:07 Aras25: ntar gua play ADV dulu
00:09 Rido: it's easier now:))
00:09 Aras25: are you chicken?
00:09 Rido: wat
00:09 Aras25: are
00:09 Aras25: you
00:10 Aras25: chicken?
00:10 Rido: no
00:10 Aras25: susah bet ADV nya
00:10 Aras25: atau gua yang ccdas =w=
00:10 Rido: lah udh gw gampangin barusan
00:11 Aras25: =w=
00:12 Aras25: 00:10:249 (10249|3,10324|0,10399|2,10474|1,10549|3,10624|0,10699|2) - 
00:12 Aras25: gua saran 34 12 34 12 aja deh
00:12 Aras25: gampangan
00:13 Aras25: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506636
00:14 Rido: gw pake alternate buat ngecover kick itu
00:14 Rido: kalo flow yg enteng2 kyk gitu gw pake buat piano roll
00:14 Aras25: gak kebalik?
00:14 Aras25: piano roll aja yang basa begini imo
00:14 Aras25: sekalian pitching lebih masuk
00:15 Rido: lah kick mana ada pitchnya =w=
00:15 Aras25: pianonya maksud gua =w=
00:16 Rido: ya piano di awal2 stairnya gw kasih gampang
00:16 Rido: yg lu mention td gw bikin alternate
00:16 Rido: supaya player bisa paham mana yg gw layer
00:16 Rido: begitchu
00:17 Aras25: hooo
00:17 Aras25: GG
00:17 Aras25: okok
00:18 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|0,20674|2,20749|3) - 
00:18 Aras25: stairnya gak arah kiri aja dok?
00:18 Rido: kiri gimana
00:18 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|0) -  di jack sama antara 00:20:374 (20374|2,20374|3) - 
00:18 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|0,20674|2,20749|3) - 
00:18 Aras25: jadi 321 atau 432
00:18 Aras25: dkk
00:19 Rido: kalo 432 nabrak sm LN dong
00:19 Aras25: ya di re arr. lah
00:19 Aras25: ntah ctrl H biar gampang =w=
00:20 Rido: gw ganti 123 aja ya
00:20 Rido: :D
00:21 Aras25: maksud gua tadi biar arah stairsnya gak sama kayak
00:21 Aras25: 00:20:224 (20224|0,20299|1,20374|2,20374|3) - 
00:21 Rido: oalah
00:21 Rido: ngomong anjer
00:21 Rido: nice catch
00:22 Rido: bntr
00:22 Aras25: grogi gua u.u
00:22 Aras25: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506704
00:22 Aras25: saran
00:23 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|2) -  gak gua bikin di 4 biar gak numpuk sama 00:20:149 (20149|3,20374|3) - 
00:24 Rido: good
00:24 Rido: applied
00:24 Aras25: 00:27:124 (27124|1,27174|3,27224|2,27274|0) - 
00:24 Aras25: hmmm menurut gua ok aja sih
00:25 Aras25: tapi gaktau yang lain, kemaren gua ada bikin begituan di ADV
00:25 Aras25: pada di protes
00:26 Rido: 1/6 emg agak rawan kalo di ADV
00:26 Rido: kalo diganti LN doang gaenak
00:26 Aras25: di simplein aja gimana do?
00:27 Aras25: 1234
00:27 Aras25: 4321
00:27 Aras25: 1243
00:27 Aras25: 2134
00:28 Rido: rearranged
00:28 Rido: bntr
00:28 Rido: dah
00:28 Rido: ganti 4312
00:28 Rido: eh
00:28 Aras25: 00:29:374 - [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506761 suggestion]
00:28 Rido: 4321
00:28 Aras25: nice
00:29 Rido: good
00:29 Rido: applied
00:29 Rido: pitch nya lebih dapet
00:29 Rido: tengs
00:29 Aras25: =w=)b
00:29 Aras25: all hail pitch
00:29 Aras25: w8
00:29 Aras25: gua cari lagi
00:31 Aras25: 00:32:524 -
00:32 Rido: awkwk
00:32 Rido: diapain
00:32 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506792
00:32 Aras25: how? =w=
00:32 Aras25: 00:32:149 (32149|2,32524|2) - gpp se column imo
00:34 Rido: applied
00:34 Rido: tp tunggu
00:34 Rido: rearrange setelahnya
00:35 Aras25: ok
00:35 Aras25: nice
00:35 Aras25: baru mau gua bilang
00:36 Rido: dah
00:36 Rido: lanjut
00:39 Aras25:  00:54:574
00:39 Aras25: 00:54:574 -
00:39 Rido: itu yg susah ya?:)))))
00:39 Aras25: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506839 less strain imo]
00:39 Aras25: iya itu =w=
00:40 Rido: kalo gw ganti jadi 123 234 123
00:40 Rido: comfortable gak?
00:40 Aras25: comfortable sih
00:41 Aras25: lebih gak straining
00:41 Aras25: tapi mainstream =-=
00:41 Rido: iya ras hmm
00:41 Rido: mainstream bgt
00:42 Aras25: yang gua saranin aj =w=
00:42 Aras25: jangan 134 134 killer
00:42 Rido: tapi emg pitchnya gitu:(
00:43 Aras25: yasudahlah mari kita pindah ke point selanjutnya =w=
00:43 Rido: awkwkwk
00:43 Aras25: yang penting jangan 123 234
00:43 Rido: oke:))
00:43 Aras25: mainstream bet
00:43 Rido: oke
00:43 Rido: ntar gw minta opini org2
00:44 Aras25: 00:58:024 (58024|1) - ke 1 dok?
00:44 Aras25: kosong tuh
00:44 Aras25: trus pitchnya juga udah beda sama 00:57:574 (57574|1,57799|1) - 
00:44 Rido: 00:57:574 (57574|1,57649|2,57724|3,57799|1,57874|2,57949|3,58024|1,58099|3) - ini satu kesatuan
00:44 Rido: pitchnya bolak balik 3 itu
00:44 Rido: jd gamau lepas dari 3 kolom
00:45 Aras25: beda pitch imo
00:45 Aras25: hmm coba gua dengerin lagi
00:45 Aras25: w8
00:45 Rido: 00:57:649 (57649|2,57874|2,58024|1) - actually same
00:45 Rido: tp masa gw taruh di 3
00:45 Aras25: oh iya sama
00:45 Aras25: cuman lebih pelan aja
00:46 Rido: 00:57:874 (57874|2,57949|3,58024|1,58099|3) - sebenernya bisa 34 34 tapi terlalu kejam
00:46 Rido: karena pitchnya sama
00:46 Rido: makanya gw taruh di 2
00:46 Aras25: 00:58:024 (58024|1,58099|3) - 1 4 aja sih =w=
00:46 Aras25: tapi ok dah
00:46 Rido: udh pas ituuu
00:47 Aras25: ntaps souls
00:47 Aras25: 00:59:149 (59149|0,59224|2,59299|3,59374|0,59449|2,59524|3,59599|0,59674|2,59749|3,59824|0,59899|2,59974|3) - 
00:47 Aras25: 124 124 124
00:47 Rido: AKWKWKWKW
00:47 Rido: dan terjadi lagi~
00:47 Aras25: ini gila banget =w=
00:48 Rido: gw bingung sumpahhh
00:48 Rido: piano rollnya gituuu
00:48 Aras25: tapi susah dok bua6t 3*
00:48 Aras25: tinggal lo yang nentuin
00:49 Rido: iyaaa gw awalnya juga mikir
00:49 Rido: ini 200 BPM gw kasih stair repetitive
00:49 Aras25: lebih prefer comfort atau realisasi pitch
00:49 Rido: painful
00:49 Aras25: makanya
00:49 Aras25: ban xi
00:49 Rido: BAN XI
00:49 Rido: WKWKWK
00:49 Aras25: :V
00:49 Aras25: next nih?
00:50 Rido: next deh
00:50 Rido: masih bingung digimanain
00:50 Aras25: ok
00:50 Aras25: take your time
00:52 Aras25: 01:11:974 (71974|3,72049|2,72124|1,72199|0,72274|3,72349|2,72424|1,72499|0) - 
00:52 Aras25: kalau gua lebih prefer 4324 1231
00:53 Rido: pitchnya
00:53 Rido: ke bawah
00:53 Rido: ke rendah
00:53 Rido: keep
00:53 Rido: ehh
00:53 Rido: salah deng
00:53 Rido: awkkwk
00:54 Aras25: kalau udah bilang =w=)b
00:54 Rido: udah
00:54 Rido: applied
00:55 Aras25: 01:19:924 (79924|2,80224|1) - swap column?
00:55 Aras25: PR
00:57 Rido: udh bener PRnya
00:57 Rido: dengerin lagi
00:57 Rido: 01:19:924 (79924|2) - sebenernya ngecover 1/6 itu
00:57 Rido: liat diff EXH sm INF
00:57 Aras25: hoo cover 1/6
00:57 Aras25: ok fine then
00:58 Rido: 01:20:224 (80224|1,81424|1) - yg ini
00:58 Rido: beda pitch ya?
00:58 Rido: semua diff bagian sini sama semua soalnya wkwk
00:58 Aras25: beda =w=
00:59 Rido: hampir sama sih bukan sama persis
00:59 Aras25: tapi kalaupun salah gak bakal jadi masalah lah
00:59 Aras25: hanya simple LN lagian
00:59 Rido: iya sih
00:59 Rido: skip aja
01:00 Aras25: 01:24:049 (84049|3) - oh dem 1/4
01:00 Aras25: tapi gpp kalau alasan lo mau keep ini
01:00 Aras25: 01:23:974 (83974|0,84049|3,84124|2,84199|1,84274|3,84349|0,84424|1,84499|2) - 
01:01 Rido: yes it's intended
01:01 Aras25: 01:27:274 (87274|3,87274|2,87349|0,87349|1,87424|3,87424|2,87499|1,87499|0,87574|3,87574|2) - 
01:01 Aras25: 200 bpm 1/4 trill di 3* =w=
01:01 Rido: HEHEHE
01:01 Aras25: hhe
01:01 Rido: ganti ya
01:02 Rido: tp modder2 sebelumnya gaada yg komentar
01:02 Aras25: kalau gua pribadi ganti
01:02 Aras25: not a big problem sih imo
01:02 Aras25: 01:35:824 (95824|3,96274|3) - 
01:02 Aras25: ini ==
01:02 Rido: sebenernya buat memperkenalkan spamming aja sih
01:03 Aras25: ya gapapa lah kalau gitu
01:03 Rido: yaudah turun ke red tick
01:03 Aras25: ga mesti turun LN nya
01:03 Aras25: maksud gua jangan shield 1/4 gitu :V
01:03 Rido: udah gw turunin end nya -__
01:04 Aras25: -__-
01:04 Aras25: ok lah
01:07 Aras25: dah
01:07 Aras25: done =w=)b
01:07 Rido: ntappp
01:07 Rido: ehh
01:07 Rido: bntr
01:07 Aras25: 01:50:974 (110974|2,110974|0,111174|3,111174|0,111374|3,111374|1,111574|3,111574|2) - 
01:07 Aras25: sex pitch
01:08 Rido: 01:54:124 - part sini kan sama kyk sini 00:32:524 -
01:08 Rido: tp gw bikin diff spike
01:09 Aras25: gpp lah
01:09 Aras25: lagian udah dekat akhir kok
01:09 Aras25: tapi repeat pattern yang di awal juga gpp imo
01:09 Aras25: kalau mau main aman
01:10 Rido: okey
01:10 Rido: diff spike at its finest
01:11 Aras25: BAN XI
01:11 Aras25: 1 DIFF AJA ?
01:11 Aras25: rip caps
01:11 Rido: eh serah kamu ras
01:12 Rido: tbh gw udh capek
01:12 Rido: awkwk
01:12 Aras25: yodah 1 diff :v
01:12 Aras25: mod gua di 4 sampe 5 juga jelek btw
01:12 Rido: wokeh
01:12 Aras25: cuman jago 1-2-3 =w=
01:13 Rido: edit tuh double post
01:13 Aras25: w9 wa post

IRC sabun merek BAN XI =w=)

Rido wrote:

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Leonita wrote:

Rido wrote:

Background and banner by Leonita♥

dapet apa nih aqo?:^)

puxtu wrote:

mod edisi males bolak balik browser

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04:32 puxtu: -INFINITE-
04:34 puxtu: 00:05:374 (5374|0) - bisa nambah note 1 lagi habis ini (hint: red line)
04:38 puxtu: 00:10:774 (10774|0,10774|1) - tuker posisinya, single note sembunyi di belakang ln agak susah dibaca
04:38 puxtu: buat dia lebih visible
04:39 puxtu: 00:11:974 (11974|0,12124|1) - keknya kurang 1 note lg deh
04:41 puxtu: 00:20:824 (20824|0,21124|2) - bisa diganti jadi 1/4s
04:41 puxtu: 00:21:424 (21424|0,21424|1) - nothing to emphasize
04:45 puxtu: 00:33:424 (33424|2,33424|1,33424|0,33499|3,33574|1,33574|2,33574|0) - hm agak maksain untuk terlihat beda
04:46 puxtu: dibandingin dengan note yg sebelumnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:49:099 (49099|0) - gw yakin ini kurang 1 note lg di atasnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:53:974 (53974|2) - mungkin kiai cocok disini
04:49 puxtu: 00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - gw ga yakin sama ini
04:50 puxtu: 01:11:674 (71674|2,71824|2,71974|3) - coba ganti mini ln
04:52 puxtu: 01:21:274 (81274|0) - bukannya seharusnya ada stream disini ya?
04:52 puxtu: 01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - lo bisa ganti ini jadi burst
04:53 puxtu: 01:24:799 (84799|1,85099|0) - completely ghosts
04:54 puxtu: 01:27:574 (87574|3) - gw bingung knp streamnya berhenti disini? masih wip ya? lo belum kelar ngemap bagian ini?

Valentrixe wrote:

sabun mandi

Mod Inside

etc. mean there are similar issues in further, you should check them yourself
[INFINITE]

1. 00:02:374 (2374|2) - double? like you did in 00:04:774 (4774|0,4774|2) - , etc. double that you mention there is representating the high pitch melody. meanwhile the part that you mention need double, has no high pitch synth
2. 00:05:374 (5374|3) - end at 00:05:674 - ? or will be better if you change it to single note instead i keep the hold consistency even if the length isn't same
3. 00:05:524 - missing note. i don't like the way you follow these sounds tbh. they're to low yes. it's too low for this timing. keep it empty
4. 00:07:024 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574371 , 4 notes anchor, twice, in the same column. re-arrange pls rearranged
5. 00:07:774 (7774|0,7924|0,8074|0,8224|0,8374|0) - 5 notes anchor, try to avoid this pls. etc. rearranged
6. 00:08:674 (8674|0,8674|3,8674|2,8824|2,8824|1,8824|0) - um why triple? use triple only on cymbal is better imo. etc. i use triplet here because your mod below V uses quad as for representate cymbal. i know this is kinda unacceptable, but let's try to overmapping little bit:^)
7. 00:08:974 (8974|2,8974|0,8974|1,8974|3) - why quad? :/ ^
8. 00:12:274 (12274|0,12274|1,12274|3) - ?? it have the same sound as 00:12:574 (12574|3,12574|0) one note has been removed
9. 00:10:774 (10774|1) - should've ended in 00:12:574 - , suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574431 keep. the flow goes better on current pattern. not going to layer both of instrument. it'll bias each other
10. 00:13:324 (13324|1,13324|2,13474|2,13474|0,13474|1,13549|3,13624|0,13624|1,13774|2,13774|0,13774|3,13924|0,13924|2,13924|3,13924|1) - i don't know what're you trying to follow with this layer. seems overmapped to me actually i mapped instrument which is inaudible, but i able to hear it on 25% playback rate. yes i slightly agree that these patterns are kinda overmapped. but let's try to overmapping little bit:^) (2)
11. 00:13:699 - add note, same sound as 00:13:399 (13399|3) - . suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574452 keep. imo it just echo
12. 00:14:824 - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574486 , to avoid jack also to make it easier to recognize the pattern ( [14][23] [14][23] ) the jack is intended
13. 00:15:799 (15799|1) - ghost? i'm hearing the sound in 00:15:649 - instead keep. the current synth's flow is better. meanwhile i keep the flow's consistent as well
14. 00:15:574 (15574|2,15724|2,15874|2,16024|2,16174|2) - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574529 keep. moved one note in between those 1/2 jack
15. 00:17:574 (17574|0,17624|3) - you shouldn't separate them, since you'll break the grace effect. etc. it's actually the same two pitch alternating, so.. yeah i make it alternating
16. 00:16:924 (16924|3,16924|1,16924|2,17224|0,17224|3,17224|1) - why triple? if you trying to follow the synth, you can do this simple chordtrill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574695 wes tak jelasno nang irc:U
17. 00:17:899 - add note? added
18. 00:19:924 (19924|1,19924|2) - this should be triple while 00:20:074 (20074|1,20074|3,20074|0) - is double those LN representating 1/4 synth. that's why it's triplet. kick (double) + synth (single) = triplet
19. 00:21:874 (21874|0,22174|3) - why LN? there are piano in blue line, suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574876 what i hear is 1/4 kick there. i focus on layering synth which is slightly catchy
20. 00:32:224 - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574927 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574934 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574938 wes tak jelasno nang irc:U

wes ah aku mager

good luck ya senpai sand pie <3

DoNotMess wrote:

m4m :3
inf
00:12:499 - there is kick here it's intended to leave that sound. biar flownya lebih kerasa di snare
00:17:524 (17524|3,17574|0,17624|3,17674|0) - dri lagunya sih hrusnya effectnya kek stair daripada jack itu repetitive pitch, jadi gw kasih alternate. tp kesannya jd kyk jack ya kwwk
00:20:899 - and 00:21:199 - karna diff plng susah, ini hrusnya di map harusnya. tp gw fokus ke synth
00:22:324 - https://puu.sh/sEDLV/c61b1a7dd8.png saran biar sesuai ama pitchnya ntap anjg
00:24:724 (24724|0) - ??? mnding map kicknya aja keep
00:31:774 (31774|3) - ? itu buat layering synth. sama kyk ini 00:29:974 (29974|0,31774|3,32224|1,32224|3) -
00:34:174 - bisa di spice up https://puu.sh/sEDUv/efc974bdeb.png saran doang keep. ga pengen terlalu byk burst
00:35:674 - missing? skip. itu echo dr kick awal. inaudible buat player. tp gw jg baru notice hahaha
01:03:424 (63424|0) - 1/8 please nooo please
01:33:324 - kek yg exh mendingan di exh layering kick 1/8, di inf layering 1/6 pianos
01:56:674 (116674|1,116674|2) - gnti jdi note biasa buat represent crash aja + piano di blkng kgk awkward too easy *slapped

exh
00:12:499 -
01:02:824 (62824|1,62899|2,62974|1,63049|2,63124|1,63199|2,63274|1,63349|2) - maybe rearrange? rearranged
01:12:974 (72974|2,73024|1,73074|3,73124|2) - make it different from inf diff?? keep
01:55:774 (115774|1,115774|0,115974|2,115974|3,116174|2,116174|1) - bkin jdi 3 note buat bedain kick ama cymbal diakhir nice catch. changed

i love the exhaust diff <3 ily <3
moga" ranked biar bsa di farming XD

ajeemaniz wrote:

FIX KUDU GW MOD GK MAU TAU

ajeemaniz wrote:

1/2/3/4


[fat inf]
00:20:524 (20524|2,20599|0) - no piano melody, better to remove ada cuy
00:22:474 (22474|3) - add 1 and make LN in 4th, big clap i put ln in 1 and note in 4 instead. fixed anyway
00:24:724 (24724|3) - 1/8? skip
00:29:224 (29224|1) - remove, 1 is enough for kick, then emphasize next beat instead aaa ok

00:53:524 (53524|0,53524|3,53524|2,53524|1) - aaa its impossible to get both 300g here, give more spacing on previous LN at least 1/4 keep. intended to make shield more tightly to make intense effect idk how to say ugh

00:59:149 (59149|1) - move to 1, hand balance rearranged the whole segment

01:08:224 (68224|2) - anchor woy, move to 4, trus 01:08:299 (68299|1,68374|2,68449|1) - ctrl + h hehe

01:41:974 (101974|3) - sv zzz added the whole staccato
01:46:324 (106324|1) - 1/8? skip [2]

01:48:724 (108724|2,108724|1,108774|3,108774|0,108824|1,108824|2,108874|3,108874|0) - bisa lebih kanker dari ini? rearranged

[exh]
00:12:724 (12724|0,12874|1,13024|2) - LN ya

00:14:824 (14824|0,15124|1,15124|2,15424|3) - daripada ini LN, mendingan 00:14:974 (14974|3,15124|2,15274|0,15424|3) - di bikin LN 4321, follow le synth
00:24:424 (24424|2,24724|0,24724|3,25024|1) - ^ no

00:42:274 - missing hihat? skip

01:12:974 (72974|2,73024|1,73074|3,73124|2) - bikin beda dgn INF thx no thx

01:50:824 (110824|1) - same as INF, remove ok

[ADV]
00:23:824 (23824|2,23824|0) - 21 ok
00:35:524 (35524|3,35524|2,35824|0,35824|1) - 42 31 ok
00:36:124 (36124|2,36274|3,36424|1) - 123 atau 234 234

01:01:474 (61474|3,61549|2,61699|0,61774|1,61924|3,61999|2) - jack hhh pls no :<, 01:02:074 (62074|0) - remove? removed
01:07:924 - & 01:08:224 - add? let it empty
01:09:874 (69874|1,70174|2,70474|0) - ^

01:22:024 (82024|3) - stop at 01:22:699 - diperpanjang

01:33:574 - LN for loud piano D: added

[NOV]
fix openingnya bland, banyak note yg bisa di add tanpa ningkatin tingkat kesulitannya padahal :C tryin hard to do
00:10:474 - add
00:53:974 - 01:01:174 - gk coba variasi pake 1/2 daripada chain double 1/1? hmm ok

SV in nov.. mad man bct

[General]
00:53:974 - 01:12:424 - add kiai thx
01:44:674 - 01:56:674 - ^ no

Abraxos wrote:

fiat lux is a nice song

your mp3 quality however is another thing mp3 has been changed

inf

inf

00:02:974 - pretty sure theres a synth here the same tone as 00:02:824 - i hear nothing

00:08:374 - SVs dont seem to sync up with the beats here my bad hehe. removed anyway

00:17:524 (17524|3,17574|0,17624|3,17674|0) - right now these notes play like jacks and i dont think that reflects the piano well - you can do a [34]23[14] here if you want on 1/6s. applies to similar sections alright. trying to ignore PR, rearranged

00:20:224 (20224|0,20299|1) - maybe invert these - mini LNs are really hard to handle so better to simplify them imma keep them:>

00:21:424 (21424|1,21424|0) - are you sure this warrants a double yes. it's kick

00:21:724 (21724|2,21724|0,21799|1,21799|3,21874|2,21874|0) - would be better if you could have a less awkward pattern here - something like [12][34] or [14][23] keep. uncommon patterns are the best *slapped

00:24:724 - not sure if it bares to ignore the drum beats here by overwhelming the player with LNs but your call hehe

00:26:224 (26224|0) - why force a shield for this LN? what if it doesn't use shield? i can't make two doubles afterward 00:26:224 (26224|0,26224|3,26449|3,26449|2,26524|0,26524|1) -

00:27:724 (27724|1,27774|0,27874|1) - this bunch isnt as smooth as 00:18:124 - whatever you did here so id suggest having a variant of what you did at the 18 second mark here ikr. let's see what i can

00:30:124 (30124|1) - dont think theres a noticeable sound here hihat

00:33:124 (33124|1,33124|3,33199|2,33199|0,33274|3,33274|1) - again, dont really recommend split oh jumptrills keep
00:33:199 - also i dont think this beat really warrants a double too those are kick

00:35:824 (35824|0,36124|0) - same columns? moved

00:37:024 (37024|1) - a fallback of these minilns is how you tend to miss out on the pitch changes - this one is the most obvious one, pitch changes pretty clearly at 00:37:324 - yes. i noticed. but i really confused how to layer those instruments; synth and the jarring one 00:37:474 (37474|2,37924|2) - thanks. noted

00:38:374 - a light hihat here - which i guess is what youre following for these 00:37:774 (37774|0,38524|2) - notes it's covered with previous instrument which is not hearable enough, imo

00:39:574 (39574|2,39574|3,39674|1,39674|2,39774|0,39774|1,39874|0) - dont think jacks represent the csk csk sound well - if anything you should be using LNs for this part i don't think so. it'll easier if i use LN, probably. and it's not csk csk imo, it's wub wub lmao

00:41:074 (41074|3) - not sure what this miniln is following since 00:40:324 (40324|0,40474|3) - other sections seem to show something else yes, it's show something else as well

00:46:774 - you werent consistent with the jacks though - see 00:39:574 - if i use ctrl + h it'll make no variant
just noticed you have SVs for these sections -are you certain you want to do that since there are on different snappings those are on same snappings based on my opinion, let's see what others says. thanks

00:52:624 (52624|0,52624|1,52699|2,52699|3,52774|1,52774|0,52849|2,52849|3) - the drum beat doesnt only gets prominent only past 00:52:924 - so its odd how you chose to represent 00:52:774 - beats like these with the same intensity as 00:53:149 - beats like these really nice catch. rearranged

00:53:524 (53524|3,53524|2,53524|0,53524|1,53974|3,53974|0,53974|2,53974|1) - maybe make the gap a little wider keep. intended to make shield more tightly to make intense effect idk how to say ugh (2)

00:55:474 (55474|3,55624|3,55774|3) - i kinda see a format/structure you were trying to do here but comparing it to other sections like 00:56:299 - the effect seems to be lost on me - another nice catch, rearranged

00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - really really dont recommend breaking the flow of the piano streams here with jacks keep

01:01:624 (61624|1,61849|2) - would recommend to delete these notes to put further focus on the piano here - which in this case is the jacks okay

01:07:174 (67174|0,67249|1,67324|0,67474|1,67549|0,67624|1) - these arent really tasteful to play rearranged

01:13:074 (73074|3,73174|3) - dont sacrifice playbility just to have a hand here - jack is jarring to hit after all those jumptrills and 1/6s i'll apply this on exh. thanks

01:17:224 - to 01:17:674 - why ignore the piano sounds here focusing on synth

01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - 1/8s here though aight

01:22:699 (82699|1,82774|0,82849|1,82999|0,83074|1,83149|0,83299|1,83374|0,83449|1,83524|0) - 01:25:399 (85399|3,85474|2,85549|3,85699|2,85774|3,85849|2,85924|3) - dont see why you couldnt make similar patterns but on both hands here for variety(?)

01:24:724 (84724|2,84724|3,84874|2,84874|3) - better to use different columns - they have different pitches and also theres 01:24:574 (84574|2,84724|2,84874|2,85024|2,85174|2) rearranged

01:26:174 (86174|1,86224|0,86274|3,86474|0,86524|3,86574|1) - i didnt even know these were 1/6s in the editor until i gave it a closer look - why spread these out so much until their snaps are unrecognizable? changed the whole section

01:27:274 - why didnt you use a jumptrill here then rearranged based your previous mod

01:31:624 (91624|2,91774|2,91924|2,92074|2,92224|2,92374|2,92524|2,92674|2,92824|2,92974|2,93124|2,93274|2,93387|2,93537|2) - not sure if you noticed this puppy uwu. rearranged anyway
01:32:974 (92974|3,92974|2,93049|1,93049|0,93124|3,93124|2,93199|0,93199|1,93274|2,93274|3,93349|1,93349|0) - dont get why youre suddenly resorting to doubles for piano sounds here those are kick
01:33:349 (93349|0,93462|0,93574|0) - jumptrill does not accommodate for this keep
01:29:824 (89824|0) - not sure why you want to limit yorself to 3k here even when the music is a drum bass boom thing that should follow with chord spams uncommon patterns are the best *slapper (2)

01:34:474 - why did you ignore the pitch shift here there is no pitch shift, just like intro

01:36:349 - suddenly an LN wall? LNs are pretty restrictive in their nature and you chose to have a [13][24] thing 01:36:724 (96724|2,96724|0,96874|1,96874|3,97024|2,97024|0) - here which is pretty ehh i'm not going to give players rest time on this part

01:44:524 - 01:44:599 - how about these beats? focusing on wub wub

01:48:724 (108724|2,108724|1,108774|0,108774|3,108824|2,108824|1) - these are far from comfortable there is no jacking like you've said before, i think it's fine - also why the sudden change in layering representation? little difficulty spike at the end hehe

01:56:674 (116674|1,116674|2,117799|1,117874|2) - this is the kind of LN play i can get behind oops

man ill have to come back later, you can choose to give kds now or later

will have to mod 2 other diffs <-- mark this

edit: heres the other parts

exh

exh

00:02:974 - same as before

00:03:574 - no double here but 00:04:774 - 00:05:374 - doubles here?

00:07:024 (7024|3,7174|3,7324|3) - 00:07:624 (7624|2,7774|2,7924|2) - pretty sure these werent in inf too

00:13:774 (13774|1,13774|2,13924|0,13924|3,13924|1) - not really sure how you choose to chord things so ill leave layering out of this mod

00:21:424 (21424|2,21424|1) - i mean its a bit hard not to point out layering sometimes - this beat here is pretty weak
you know what ill put all the layering things into one paragraph:
00:15:424 - 00:25:024 - theres a drum beat here
00:17:824 - 00:27:424 - id understand if you dont want to double this but im leaving it here for you to decide
00:26:449 (26449|2,26449|3) - dont think this warrants a double
00:28:924 - could have double here but up to you
00:29:224 (29224|2,29224|1) - sound is pretty eh for it to be a double
00:33:424 (33424|2,33424|1,33499|0,33574|1,33574|2,33574|3) - id argue the drum beats here for each tick is much more pronounced than the 00:33:124 (33124|0,33124|3,33199|1,33199|2,33274|3,33274|0) - drum beats here on each tick yet the former is a jump single hand thing whilst the latter is a jumptrill
00:37:249 - pretty sure theres a drum beat here
00:38:524 - you followed hihat here yet at 00:37:774 - 00:36:574 - 00:38:374 - there arent any notes even though hihat is present
00:41:074 (41074|3) - would highly suggest you to just use LNs for the high pitched synths only since this becomes an anomaly amongst all the high pitch LN representation
00:40:924 - pretty sure you might want to double this
00:49:174 - theres a sound here
yeah i got lost halfway - think this should be enough to spur something

00:22:374 (22374|0,22474|0) - please dont lead jacks into LNs

00:27:724 (27724|0,27874|0,28024|0) - 00:28:174 (28174|3,28324|3,28474|3) - dont see why you cant actively avoid this stack since you have much more space now

00:31:774 (31774|0,31849|3) - crtl-g if you are looking for a smoother stream here

00:39:574 (39574|3,39674|2,39774|1) - 00:46:774 (46774|2,46874|1,46974|0) - you could make these trilly to represent the music better

00:43:474 - think a chord spam here conveys the piano beats better but its up to you

00:56:224 (56224|3,56299|1,56374|0,56374|3,56449|1,56524|0) - not sure what these trills are suppose to convey
00:55:174 (55174|2,55249|0,55324|2,55399|0) - this one too

00:55:174 (55174|2,55249|0,55324|2,55399|0,61624|1,61849|1) - same as before, think that the emphasis on the jacks is much more important than the continuation of the stream

00:55:174 (55174|2,55249|0,55324|2,55399|0,61624|1,61849|1) - pretty sure theres much more going on in the music than just jumptrills

01:13:074 (73074|3,73174|3) - is exh just a nerfed version of inf
01:13:074 (73074|3,73174|3) - ^^

01:38:224 (98224|3,98824|3) - not sure why you chose the stack these

ending seems alright, aside from some of the repeated stuff - i didnt bother to mention them since id expect you to comb through the chart thoroughly yourself yeah

adv

advanced

00:02:974 - mmm
00:03:574 - no double but 00:04:774 - double

actually ill just leave everything ive mentioned before out - think these charts are just the derivatives of the highest chart brought down anyway so it shouldnt be hard to edit things across difficulties

00:05:374 (5374|3) - maybe end the LN 00:05:674 - here (also i think you should check these LN heads across difficulties)

00:06:349 (6349|2,6424|1,6499|2,6724|1,6799|2,6874|1) - dont really see the intention in these trills -nothing in the music there thats out of place to warrant these (specifically, there are sections in which the switch of the pitch of the piano is very obvious, yet these trills seem to not fall on them)

00:09:274 (9274|2,9424|2) - not sure if you want to lead the chords into the stream like this

00:14:824 (14824|3,14974|3) - why are these stacked?

00:18:349 - 00:18:799 - 00:19:249 - ìs ignoring these intentional?

really think you shouldve charted this much more percussion wise but oh well

00:32:674 - maybe double this - this section looks so barren even though the music is pretty intense

00:52:624 (52624|0,52699|2,52774|0,52849|2) - very sure the bass beats dont start till 00:52:924 - so these trills seem extraneous

00:54:574 (54574|0,54649|1,54724|3,54799|0,54874|1,54949|3,55024|0,55099|1,55174|3) - these are the kinds of stream manipulation im talking about

01:01:474 (61474|3,61549|2,61699|0,61774|1,61924|3,61999|2) - dont think it hurts too badly to make these jacks

01:02:674 (62674|2,62674|3,62824|1,62899|2,62974|0,62974|1,63199|1,63274|2,63274|3) - why not just make these the same as 01:05:074 (65074|3,65074|2,65374|1,65374|0,65674|3,65674|2) -

01:23:374 (83374|2,83524|2) - 01:23:899 (83899|3,84049|3) - 01:24:499 (84499|2,84574|3,84649|2) - notice these are on the same hand

01:28:024 (88024|0,88024|2,88474|3,88624|1,88774|0,88774|3,88924|1,88924|2) - not really sure whats going on with the layering here

01:48:049 (108049|2,108124|1,108199|2,108274|1,108349|2) - think this is the first time you represented the piano with such a long trill
01:55:174 - this is the part where id understand if you put a long trill

ending words

your layering is pretty inconsistent - that shouldnt be too hard to fix since i tried to point out pretty much all of them (esp. in inf)(actually only in inf)

but yeah i guess the charts fine - im ignoring the SVs completely though

hope my mod helped

good luck with rank0s