1. ADVANCED - 4Key (3.29 stars, 1068 notes)
2. BASIC - 4Key (1.46 stars, 390 notes)
3. EXHAUST - 4Key (4.38 stars, 1478 notes)
4. INFINITE - 4Key (5.07 stars, 1664 notes)
5. NOVICE - 4Key (2.13 stars, 661 notes)

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Another Lie wrote:

Rido amet
Marked for mod

BASIC

00:24:387 (24387|3) - missed snapping / salah penempatan note? bukan nya di red line ini suara? 00:24:424 - i was mabuk. ty
just saran, 00:01:174 - sampai sini 00:05:374 - coba jadiin LN part (disana kedengeran nya long pitch) imo single note is okay bcs this is the first part of song in basic. jadi emg "basic" banget gitu
00:37:024 (37024|0) - mungkin lebih enak jadi LN :3 (long pitch)
00:40:624 (40624|0) - ^
00:41:824 (41824|0) - ^
00:42:424 (42424|3,43024|2) - ^
00:46:324 (46324|3) - ^
00:50:224 (50224|2) - ^
01:13:174 - knp ga ditambah LN di kolom 1? end line nya disini 01:17:374 -
01:19:024 (79024|2) - make LN maybe (long pitch)
01:20:224 (80224|1) - ^
01:20:824 (80824|3) - ^
01:21:424 (81424|2) - ^
01:33:574 (93574|1) - ^ end di sini 01:34:174 -
01:44:374 - add note (medium pitch)

hmm those unanswered is rejected. jadi gini, gw emg sengaja taruh banyak single note soalnya gw gamau kalo bbrp part, notenya campur (single note & slider) soalnya ini basic. jd gw pisah biar player baru bisa belajar

NOVICE

00:09:724 - add note kolom 3 (reference from RC's map)
00:09:874 - ^
00:10:024 - ^
00:10:324 - add note kolom 2
00:10:474 - ^
00:10:624 - ^
^ buat apa semua anjay. diff novice ini. jgn layering semua instrumen. di situ gw ngasih slider buat ngegantiin kick2 itu
00:53:524 - add note? no thx. utk diff novice, dua slider dgn end yg beda udh lumayan susah. imo kesusahan kalo disuruh mencet 1 note lg
01:02:674 - part sini sampai 01:03:424 - lebih konsisten please, sementara part ini sama suaranya 01:05:074 - 01:05:974 - layering kick. skip melodynya
01:09:874 - ga konsisten sampai sini 01:10:474 - itu yg disini 01:05:074 - 01:05:974 - pada chords, kok yg 01:09:874 - ini ga chord? setelah gw layering kick di awal (mod di atas td) skrg gantian layering melody (gw kasih chord) trs mulai sini 01:09:574 - itu crashnya jaraknya cuman 1 bar, dan di antaranya ada melody. kalo gw kasih chord semua ntar player bingung. jadi gw chord cmn di crash, di antara crash, melodynya gw kasih 1 aja udh cukup
01:38:524 (98524|2,98599|3,98674|0,98749|1,98824|2) - jadiin 1 LN aja, lah suara yg sama aja pakai 1 LN + 1 note mulai sini 01:34:774 - di bagian ini gw mau emphasize piano2 nya. kalo lu perhatiin, di part lain gw layering double, tp pianonya gw nerf. contohnya kyk ini 00:13:174 (13174|3,13174|0,13324|1,13474|2,13624|0,13774|3,13774|2,13924|0,13924|1) - itu kan gw layering kick, tanpa menghapus piano dr layering gw. tp notesnya gw nerf supaya seimbang antara kick sm pianonya
01:44:524 (104524|3,104599|2) - jgn semua suara dibuat note, lah yg part ini suaranya sama tapi ga dibuat note 01:46:849 - di bagian situ yg paling kedengeran pianonya. semacam bridge antar part song. jd layer semua piano deh. untuk part yg lu mention, udh gw jelasin di atas
01:56:674 (116674|1,116674|0,117724|2,117799|3) - ga kebalik kah penempatan nya? suara ticknya kan lebih kecil daripada LN nya, swap place suara tick apa ya? btw pitchnya jg lebih rendah yg "jreeeng" makanya yg suara "tring" gw taruh di kanan

ADVANCED

00:09:499 - add note? added and rearranged the previous double notes
00:53:524 (53524|3) - coba end nya di blue line atas (dengernya sih gitu end nya) keep. consistency with EXH and INF
01:11:974 (71974|0) - remove, biar lebih longgar itu note sebelahnya ok and rearranged the stairs
01:35:824 (95824|3) - -_- kok serem yah ini note, move ke kolom 1 + diperpendek sampai blue line bawah (nyeremin kalo dibuat play) keep. consistency with EXH INF

Done, GL for rank

1|2|3|4

-[Apple]- wrote:

Hi there. M4M request in my queue.
SHK - Identity Part 5

1|2|3|4

[General]

1. Widescreen support: Turn off didn't see that coming. fixed

[NOVICE]

1. 00:10:774 Add a note here? To keep consistent with 00:09:574 (9574|2,9574|3) - and 00:10:174 (10174|0,10174|1) - those normal notes representing the cymbal. the last part did you mention doesn't have cymbal sound
2. 00:17:524 (17524|1,17674|2) - I'd prefer to replace them with a ln to reduce the difficult. What do you think? i'm layering the kick, not the melody
3. 00:20:074 (20074|1,20224|0) - Replace them with a ln from here to 00:20:374, To follow the piano sound. always 1/2 is boring for player.. i think it's kinda weird if i put LN for long melody around this part, and suddenly i layering 1/4 with LN
4. 00:43:024 (43024|0,44374|2,44374|3) - I think there is not necessary to triple notes here.. Delete one to reduce diff. Because you followed cymbal with double notes at before LN removed
5. 00:48:124 (48124|1) - Might want to move 4 for better flow, also for the pitch. moved and also little rearrange for the next notes
6. 00:53:974 - 00:58:324 Try to catch piano sound with 1/2 is better for me. hmmm will consider it
7. 01:32:374 (92374|3,92674|2,92974|1,93274|0,93574|2,93574|3) - Ctrl+H, for the pitch fixed and rearranged previous notes
8. 01:34:324 Add one more note here for the cymbal sound and it's enough loud to follow :3 added
9. 01:57:799 (117799|2,117874|3) - Actually you can ignore them by intentional. It's seems too hard in NOVICE. it's intended lol it's supposed to be trickiest notes

[INFINITE]

1. 00:05:374 (5374|3,5899|3) - Seems uncomfortable to play. imo it's fine
2. 00:08:374 - 00:09:574 I think most of the sound just use two notes to follow, As what you pattern on EXHAUST. I think this part is a little bit overmap. So Please take a look of this part. is it overmapped when heavy instrument mapped in triplets? i'll keep this anyway
3. 00:13:774 (13774|2,13924|1) - Those two sounds seems is same loud. 00:13:924 (13924|2) - So reduce one note here to jack with 00:13:774 (13774|2) - the pitch is higher, and i'm emphasizing the staccato
4. 00:16:624 (16624|0,16924|3,16924|2,16924|1) - Why four notes here? I think there is not any cymbal sound to follow and it's not loud enough to use 4 notes to follow. the first column is releasing the hold, it's not counted 4 notes
5. 00:17:224 (17224|1,17574|1) - Take a look of that. It's really uncomfortable to release a key then press again. And it's high bpm. So you may need rearrange. rearranged this and the other
6. 00:20:074 (20074|1) - I think here is two notes enough. Same as EXHAUST. keep, for pattern sake hehe
7. 00:24:724 (24724|2,24874|2) - I'd prefer to use a ln here to cover the 1/8 kick sound. And you can make a small ln sea here. added. actually i was thinking like that before but i afraid to break the vary of LN
8. 00:26:824 (26824|2,27174|2) - Same reason as i said above. Rearrange here? Really uncomfortable. fixed:b
9. 00:32:974 (32974|3) - Do not overmap. I think there just three notes enough. four notes representing for cymbal between those triplets
10. 00:34:174 - 00:34:774 You can make a 1/6 stream here to replace Triple notes. Triple notes is really boring actually. Especially this part only have the triple notes. keep. i'm minimizing burst usage
11. 00:36:424 (36424|2,36424|1) - I think just keep those notes enough. wat
12. 01:03:574 (63574|2,63724|2) - As I said above...wat (2) did you mean the reverse shield?
13. 01:31:024 (91024|2,91099|3,91174|2,95824|3,96274|3,96574|3) - Just use one ln to replace those. I think those sounds are following the same sound. So why don't you replace? i got what do you mean, but i'm layering different melody. and using vary LN usage hehe

Thats all! Feel free to reject if i break your mapping style.
And Sorry I just mod 2 diffs, So you can just mod my map 2 diffs, But I want to let you check CS' SHD and MX. :3
Good luck !

Adot wrote:

m4m

general

the end ln in 01:56:674 - isn't same with each difficulties. try to form them to same time wkakak fixed

novice

1. 00:12:574 - add 1 note for transition to this impact 00:12:724 - keep, emphasizing da impact
2. 00:22:474 - add 1, sampe impact with 00:12:724 - focusing the pianos
3. 00:16:174 (16174|1,16474|3) - i suggest to delete them, since the doubles in 00:16:024 - 00:16:324 - 00:16:624 - are enough to fit the sound.. and the atmosphere is more sorely. try to rearrange the next pattern if you find the same thing (if you accept this) keep, still want to layering the piano
4. 00:49:474 - double please, same impact like 00:39:874 - okiii
5. 00:53:524 - add 1 note for piano thing there and end this ln? 00:51:424 (51424|3) - . i feel a little void when i played in that time hmmm aight applied
6. 01:40:774 (100774|3,100774|2) - i thought it wasn't impact there. so i think it's better to not make them double and focus on drum like the back then. suggest 01:40:774 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6257294 applied with lil rearrangement
7. 01:42:174 (102174|2,102574|1,102974|0,103374|2,103774|3) - i feel uneasy with this note after double. i think it will be more comfort if you delete them. a single in 1/6 snap is a little weird for me. just consider the double representing cymbal in between. i think it's fine

advenced

1. 00:22:474 - oh man, it should be double, for a snare sound and i think it's thick so it suits if you add 1 single note again there oh man, added
2. 01:44:374 (104374|1) - i think it's easier than the novice diff. try to rearrange. change the LN to a stream in that time it's intended, forgot to put SV there teehee
3. 01:47:224 - add 1 for snare sound, like novice diff? wow how did i miss this one. nice catch. fixed
4. 01:53:674 - here too keep, emphasize the second impact with cymbal

esaus

1. 00:23:074 - i think the downbeat is same strong as 00:22:924 - and 00:23:224 - . i suggest make it double then. it's for kick man, no change
2. 00:23:374 - make it triple bcs it has snare sound like 00:23:524 - the triple is intended for high pitch piano, it's just same like what i did in INF
3. 00:25:624 - 00:25:924 - you can make it triple to fit the snare's beat with 00:26:224 - . apply this with the next pattern that same with this in the next. it will increase the star rating slightly, but i'll consider it
4. 00:29:224 (29224|1,29224|2) - man the sound is particulary cant be heard slightly. i suggest to remove, or make it single note i can clearly heard it's same kick sound as the following kick sound
5. 00:35:074 - double for fit the snare sound? and i think it can be thicker bcs of the snare sound added
6. 01:44:374 - until 01:44:674 - there are piano sounds there, y u didn't layer it? you layered it with LN in ADVANCED diff, and with some notes in NOVICE this. be wise with the difficult's stars aight aight added LN hehe
7. 01:50:824 - same issue like 00:29:224 iykwim

ok that's all from me.. thenks

Rizqy wrote:

astaga baru 3 mods

- Ly0572 - wrote:

Hi
req from our queue

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BASIC

00:15:424 - missed a note here
00:25:024 - here also^
00:45:424 (45424|0) - move to |4|
00:53:974 (53974|1,54274|0) - switch col~
00:58:924 - add to |1|
01:02:374 - Suggestion here

01:28:774 (88774|3) - delete maybe i dont hear sound tho
01:33:874 - add note here |4| will do
01:34:174 - add to |3|
01:36:574 (96574|3) - delete
01:37:324 - add also
01:37:774 (97774|0) - u can move this to |3| to create mini jack since it has the same sound
01:40:924 (100924|0,101074|1) - maybe change this to a long note starting from 01:40:774 - ends here 01:41:224 -
01:49:474 - missed a note
01:49:924 - ^^
01:50:374 - ^^

most of them are applied~ thanks. basic now has better flow

NOVICE

00:08:224 - missed a note added
00:12:574 - from here~ try this no thx, the current flow is fit already

00:19:174 - add note here added
00:19:249 - here also keep, the layering seems confusing for player. but i add note here 01:40:849 - for difficulty spike
00:41:674 (41674|1) - move to |4| nope, keep it for pitch
01:28:774 (88774|1,88924|0,88924|3) - i hear same sound as 01:29:224 - so why is that area empty? it's different. the first timing section did you mention first has cymbal sound
01:49:024 - add here added

ADVANCE

00:10:174 (10174|1,10399|2) - switch col~ keep, i want to alternating between those alternate(?) lmao
00:10:474 (10474|1,10549|3) - ^^ ^
00:15:949 (15949|1) - delete :3 i can hear the synth
00:24:274 (24274|1,24424|0) - switch col~ hmm i would like to keep
00:35:224 - make this double okiii

[-No One-] wrote:

HELLO!

NOTE: These are just my opinions and its up to you if you would apply them hehe.
I'm from Ly and Sya's Queue. :>

BASIC

01:03:274 (63274|2) and 01:03:574 (63574|3) : If you would like, you can change it into this pattern:

to amplify the effect of the sound, also to make the patterns consistent since the next part also has that pattern. :>

The rest are already fine (for me). I didnt notice any ghost notes or wrong snaps so yeah.

NOVICE

00:05:974 (5974|0,5974|1) : Again, I think it would be better to separate the two notes from each other. If you would like it, you can change it into this:

since it would make the sound to have an intense effect for the player (idk what I'm saying but thats what I feel HAHAHHA) applied

01:08:374 (68374|2,68374|1) : Change the pattern into this:

since the previous notes also has that pattern. keep

01:08:674 (68674|0,68974|3,69274|0) : Maybe change these notes into:

keep, the current is balance enough

01:29:224 (89224|0,89224|3) : If you would like, you can apply these notes:

the sound is not mapable in NOVICE

Anddd the rest are already fine (for me). I guess there are no ghost notes and wrong snaps in here, also. Noice noice! thanks

ADVANCED

00:39:199 (39199|1) : If you want, you may add a note there because there's a beat ;o;

i can hear it but it's inaudible. players will not notice that sound
01:28:024 (88024|0,88024|1) : Change into this, if you want:

changed into [13]
01:33:349 (93349|2,93424|1) : There is a beat in between, maybe apply this if you want:

current flow is better. will not add burst into advanced
01:40:474 (100474|1) : Change it into this since it has a different and more intense beat:

it will make this map unrankable bcs it's ghost note

EXHAUST

00:16:174 (16174|3,16174|0) : No beat here?
00:25:774 (25774|0,25774|2) : No beat here too?
^ synth pls
00:35:524 (35524|2,35524|3,35674|1,35824|2,35824|0) : If you want, you can change this part into:

since there is a beat in the middle. every white tick at this part has beat, but i'm not going to layer all instrument
00:53:974 (53974|2,53974|1,53974|3) : Delete one note here? Perhaps the middle? Ehehe. triplets in EXHAUST diff is reasonable. not going to remove it
01:01:474 (61474|2) : Delete this since the sound isnt that loud? kick
01:01:774 (61774|2) : Move this to the blue line below it? double = kick

01:17:524 (77524|2) : Theres a beat there hehe. Add a note? i think i already added LN there...
01:22:324 (82324|1) & 01:22:474 (82474|2) : There are beatsssss. Maybe do this? there's no beat on red tick and also one LN is enough

01:27:274 (87274|0,87274|3,87274|1,87349|2,87424|3,87424|0,87499|1) : Are you sure about the notes there? yes There are loud beats in there wajuu. If you want, you may change it into:

no, it's really uncomfortable
01:39:199 (99199|1,99274|2,99274|3,99574|3,99574|0,99574|1) : This part, you can change it into this, if you want:

lol it's my previous pattern xD will consider it. thanks~
01:39:499 (99499|0) : Ah, there is a beat here hehe. added and rearranged

I'm not really sure about the parts w/o beats. I dunno. I might be deaf but I just, I dunno. HAHAHAH.

INFINITE

00:39:874 (39874|1) : Would you like to add a long note here? I dunno ahhaa.

keep, the flow isn't good enough
00:49:174 (49174|1) : There is a beat here hehe. yes but not going to layer that beat

Idk what to say anymore HAHAHA.

OVERALL

The song is good . I think a lot of players will enjoy it. Also, can you make the OD and HP the same for the rest of the difficulties? 7.5 or 8 would do. The map is fun to play, especially the long notes! Good luck and I hope that your map will get ranked hehe.
HP OD is fit to each difficulties imo. will ask others opinions. thanks for pointing out this

P.S.: I'm just a noob modder.
dont sad. just keep practicing, knowing how mappers put the notes, what sound mappers layering. you will become good modder. cheer up

puxtu wrote:

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04:32 puxtu: -INFINITE-
04:34 puxtu: 00:05:374 (5374|0) - bisa nambah note 1 lagi habis ini (hint: red line) emphasizing long synth di kolom 4
04:38 puxtu: 00:10:774 (10774|0,10774|1) - tuker posisinya, single note sembunyi di belakang ln agak susah dibaca sama aja deh perasaan..
04:38 puxtu: buat dia lebih visible
04:39 puxtu: 00:11:974 (11974|0,12124|1) - keknya kurang 1 note lg deh snare 3, kick 2. begitu
04:41 puxtu: 00:20:824 (20824|0,21124|2) - bisa diganti jadi 1/4s sengaja pake LN. emphasize synth nya. bosen kick mulu
04:41 puxtu: 00:21:424 (21424|0,21424|1) - nothing to emphasize 00:21:424 (21424|1,21424|0,21574|1,21574|2) - same sound actually
04:45 puxtu: 00:33:424 (33424|2,33424|1,33424|0,33499|3,33574|1,33574|2,33574|0) - hm agak maksain untuk terlihat beda iya juga sih, rearranged
04:46 puxtu: dibandingin dengan note yg sebelumnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:49:099 (49099|0) - gw yakin ini kurang 1 note lg di atasnya intended
04:48 puxtu: 00:53:974 (53974|2) - mungkin kiai cocok disini not going to put any kiais
04:49 puxtu: 00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - gw ga yakin sama ini gw yakin sama lu<3
04:50 puxtu: 01:11:674 (71674|2,71824|2,71974|3) - coba ganti mini ln 2 of them are changed
04:52 puxtu: 01:21:274 (81274|0) - bukannya seharusnya ada stream disini ya? fokus ke synth, bukan piano
04:52 puxtu: 01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - lo bisa ganti ini jadi burst yes i can. but keep
04:53 puxtu: 01:24:799 (84799|1,85099|0) - completely ghosts 01:25:099 - yg ini agak ghost, soalnya low pitch. tapi kalo dihapus jd nanggung gitu mainnya. keep btw
04:54 puxtu: 01:27:574 (87574|3) - gw bingung knp streamnya berhenti disini? masih wip ya? lo belum kelar ngemap bagian ini? sengaja. fokus ke kick yg ada synth nya itu

puxtu wrote:

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04:32 puxtu: -INFINITE-
04:34 puxtu: 00:05:374 (5374|0) - bisa nambah note 1 lagi habis ini (hint: red line)
04:38 puxtu: 00:10:774 (10774|0,10774|1) - tuker posisinya, single note sembunyi di belakang ln agak susah dibaca
04:38 puxtu: buat dia lebih visible
04:39 puxtu: 00:11:974 (11974|0,12124|1) - keknya kurang 1 note lg deh
04:41 puxtu: 00:20:824 (20824|0,21124|2) - bisa diganti jadi 1/4s
04:41 puxtu: 00:21:424 (21424|0,21424|1) - nothing to emphasize
04:45 puxtu: 00:33:424 (33424|2,33424|1,33424|0,33499|3,33574|1,33574|2,33574|0) - hm agak maksain untuk terlihat beda
04:46 puxtu: dibandingin dengan note yg sebelumnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:49:099 (49099|0) - gw yakin ini kurang 1 note lg di atasnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:53:974 (53974|2) - mungkin kiai cocok disini
04:49 puxtu: 00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - gw ga yakin sama ini
04:50 puxtu: 01:11:674 (71674|2,71824|2,71974|3) - coba ganti mini ln
04:52 puxtu: 01:21:274 (81274|0) - bukannya seharusnya ada stream disini ya?
04:52 puxtu: 01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - lo bisa ganti ini jadi burst
04:53 puxtu: 01:24:799 (84799|1,85099|0) - completely ghosts
04:54 puxtu: 01:27:574 (87574|3) - gw bingung knp streamnya berhenti disini? masih wip ya? lo belum kelar ngemap bagian ini?

Aras25 wrote:

00:03 Rido: FIAT LUX MANA
00:03 Rido: 2 hari tydac nongol di thread
00:04 Aras25: !!!!!
00:04 Aras25: thanks
00:04 Aras25: sibuk gua hari ini =w=
00:04 Rido: map lu udh siap di mod belum
00:04 Aras25: udah =w=
00:05 Aras25: tapi lo liat mod gua di map sabun ntar aja dlu
00:05 Rido: okeh
00:05 Rido: liat apa lagi
00:06 Rido: mau irc apa forum
00:06 Aras25: tunggu gua mod aja di sabun
00:06 Aras25: baru lo ke oppai gua
00:06 Aras25: =w=
00:06 Aras25: gua prefer irc sih, lebih cep[at
00:06 Rido: oke
00:06 Aras25: tapi bebas lah
00:07 Rido: yaudah yuk irc
00:07 Aras25: kuy
00:07 Aras25: ntar gua play ADV dulu
00:09 Rido: it's easier now:))
00:09 Aras25: are you chicken?
00:09 Rido: wat
00:09 Aras25: are
00:09 Aras25: you
00:10 Aras25: chicken?
00:10 Rido: no
00:10 Aras25: susah bet ADV nya
00:10 Aras25: atau gua yang ccdas =w=
00:10 Rido: lah udh gw gampangin barusan
00:11 Aras25: =w=
00:12 Aras25: 00:10:249 (10249|3,10324|0,10399|2,10474|1,10549|3,10624|0,10699|2) - 
00:12 Aras25: gua saran 34 12 34 12 aja deh
00:12 Aras25: gampangan
00:13 Aras25: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506636
00:14 Rido: gw pake alternate buat ngecover kick itu
00:14 Rido: kalo flow yg enteng2 kyk gitu gw pake buat piano roll
00:14 Aras25: gak kebalik?
00:14 Aras25: piano roll aja yang basa begini imo
00:14 Aras25: sekalian pitching lebih masuk
00:15 Rido: lah kick mana ada pitchnya =w=
00:15 Aras25: pianonya maksud gua =w=
00:16 Rido: ya piano di awal2 stairnya gw kasih gampang
00:16 Rido: yg lu mention td gw bikin alternate
00:16 Rido: supaya player bisa paham mana yg gw layer
00:16 Rido: begitchu
00:17 Aras25: hooo
00:17 Aras25: GG
00:17 Aras25: okok
00:18 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|0,20674|2,20749|3) - 
00:18 Aras25: stairnya gak arah kiri aja dok?
00:18 Rido: kiri gimana
00:18 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|0) -  di jack sama antara 00:20:374 (20374|2,20374|3) - 
00:18 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|0,20674|2,20749|3) - 
00:18 Aras25: jadi 321 atau 432
00:18 Aras25: dkk
00:19 Rido: kalo 432 nabrak sm LN dong
00:19 Aras25: ya di re arr. lah
00:19 Aras25: ntah ctrl H biar gampang =w=
00:20 Rido: gw ganti 123 aja ya
00:20 Rido: :D
00:21 Aras25: maksud gua tadi biar arah stairsnya gak sama kayak
00:21 Aras25: 00:20:224 (20224|0,20299|1,20374|2,20374|3) - 
00:21 Rido: oalah
00:21 Rido: ngomong anjer
00:21 Rido: nice catch
00:22 Rido: bntr
00:22 Aras25: grogi gua u.u
00:22 Aras25: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506704
00:22 Aras25: saran
00:23 Aras25: 00:20:599 (20599|2) -  gak gua bikin di 4 biar gak numpuk sama 00:20:149 (20149|3,20374|3) - 
00:24 Rido: good
00:24 Rido: applied
00:24 Aras25: 00:27:124 (27124|1,27174|3,27224|2,27274|0) - 
00:24 Aras25: hmmm menurut gua ok aja sih
00:25 Aras25: tapi gaktau yang lain, kemaren gua ada bikin begituan di ADV
00:25 Aras25: pada di protes
00:26 Rido: 1/6 emg agak rawan kalo di ADV
00:26 Rido: kalo diganti LN doang gaenak
00:26 Aras25: di simplein aja gimana do?
00:27 Aras25: 1234
00:27 Aras25: 4321
00:27 Aras25: 1243
00:27 Aras25: 2134
00:28 Rido: rearranged
00:28 Rido: bntr
00:28 Rido: dah
00:28 Rido: ganti 4312
00:28 Rido: eh
00:28 Aras25: 00:29:374 - [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506761 suggestion]
00:28 Rido: 4321
00:28 Aras25: nice
00:29 Rido: good
00:29 Rido: applied
00:29 Rido: pitch nya lebih dapet
00:29 Rido: tengs
00:29 Aras25: =w=)b
00:29 Aras25: all hail pitch
00:29 Aras25: w8
00:29 Aras25: gua cari lagi
00:31 Aras25: 00:32:524 -
00:32 Rido: awkwk
00:32 Rido: diapain
00:32 Aras25: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506792
00:32 Aras25: how? =w=
00:32 Aras25: 00:32:149 (32149|2,32524|2) - gpp se column imo
00:34 Rido: applied
00:34 Rido: tp tunggu
00:34 Rido: rearrange setelahnya
00:35 Aras25: ok
00:35 Aras25: nice
00:35 Aras25: baru mau gua bilang
00:36 Rido: dah
00:36 Rido: lanjut
00:39 Aras25:  00:54:574
00:39 Aras25: 00:54:574 -
00:39 Rido: itu yg susah ya?:)))))
00:39 Aras25: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6506839 less strain imo]
00:39 Aras25: iya itu =w=
00:40 Rido: kalo gw ganti jadi 123 234 123
00:40 Rido: comfortable gak?
00:40 Aras25: comfortable sih
00:41 Aras25: lebih gak straining
00:41 Aras25: tapi mainstream =-=
00:41 Rido: iya ras hmm
00:41 Rido: mainstream bgt
00:42 Aras25: yang gua saranin aj =w=
00:42 Aras25: jangan 134 134 killer
00:42 Rido: tapi emg pitchnya gitu:(
00:43 Aras25: yasudahlah mari kita pindah ke point selanjutnya =w=
00:43 Rido: awkwkwk
00:43 Aras25: yang penting jangan 123 234
00:43 Rido: oke:))
00:43 Aras25: mainstream bet
00:43 Rido: oke
00:43 Rido: ntar gw minta opini org2
00:44 Aras25: 00:58:024 (58024|1) - ke 1 dok?
00:44 Aras25: kosong tuh
00:44 Aras25: trus pitchnya juga udah beda sama 00:57:574 (57574|1,57799|1) - 
00:44 Rido: 00:57:574 (57574|1,57649|2,57724|3,57799|1,57874|2,57949|3,58024|1,58099|3) - ini satu kesatuan
00:44 Rido: pitchnya bolak balik 3 itu
00:44 Rido: jd gamau lepas dari 3 kolom
00:45 Aras25: beda pitch imo
00:45 Aras25: hmm coba gua dengerin lagi
00:45 Aras25: w8
00:45 Rido: 00:57:649 (57649|2,57874|2,58024|1) - actually same
00:45 Rido: tp masa gw taruh di 3
00:45 Aras25: oh iya sama
00:45 Aras25: cuman lebih pelan aja
00:46 Rido: 00:57:874 (57874|2,57949|3,58024|1,58099|3) - sebenernya bisa 34 34 tapi terlalu kejam
00:46 Rido: karena pitchnya sama
00:46 Rido: makanya gw taruh di 2
00:46 Aras25: 00:58:024 (58024|1,58099|3) - 1 4 aja sih =w=
00:46 Aras25: tapi ok dah
00:46 Rido: udh pas ituuu
00:47 Aras25: ntaps souls
00:47 Aras25: 00:59:149 (59149|0,59224|2,59299|3,59374|0,59449|2,59524|3,59599|0,59674|2,59749|3,59824|0,59899|2,59974|3) - 
00:47 Aras25: 124 124 124
00:47 Rido: AKWKWKWKW
00:47 Rido: dan terjadi lagi~
00:47 Aras25: ini gila banget =w=
00:48 Rido: gw bingung sumpahhh
00:48 Rido: piano rollnya gituuu
00:48 Aras25: tapi susah dok bua6t 3*
00:48 Aras25: tinggal lo yang nentuin
00:49 Rido: iyaaa gw awalnya juga mikir
00:49 Rido: ini 200 BPM gw kasih stair repetitive
00:49 Aras25: lebih prefer comfort atau realisasi pitch
00:49 Rido: painful
00:49 Aras25: makanya
00:49 Aras25: ban xi
00:49 Rido: BAN XI
00:49 Rido: WKWKWK
00:49 Aras25: :V
00:49 Aras25: next nih?
00:50 Rido: next deh
00:50 Rido: masih bingung digimanain
00:50 Aras25: ok
00:50 Aras25: take your time
00:52 Aras25: 01:11:974 (71974|3,72049|2,72124|1,72199|0,72274|3,72349|2,72424|1,72499|0) - 
00:52 Aras25: kalau gua lebih prefer 4324 1231
00:53 Rido: pitchnya
00:53 Rido: ke bawah
00:53 Rido: ke rendah
00:53 Rido: keep
00:53 Rido: ehh
00:53 Rido: salah deng
00:53 Rido: awkkwk
00:54 Aras25: kalau udah bilang =w=)b
00:54 Rido: udah
00:54 Rido: applied
00:55 Aras25: 01:19:924 (79924|2,80224|1) - swap column?
00:55 Aras25: PR
00:57 Rido: udh bener PRnya
00:57 Rido: dengerin lagi
00:57 Rido: 01:19:924 (79924|2) - sebenernya ngecover 1/6 itu
00:57 Rido: liat diff EXH sm INF
00:57 Aras25: hoo cover 1/6
00:57 Aras25: ok fine then
00:58 Rido: 01:20:224 (80224|1,81424|1) - yg ini
00:58 Rido: beda pitch ya?
00:58 Rido: semua diff bagian sini sama semua soalnya wkwk
00:58 Aras25: beda =w=
00:59 Rido: hampir sama sih bukan sama persis
00:59 Aras25: tapi kalaupun salah gak bakal jadi masalah lah
00:59 Aras25: hanya simple LN lagian
00:59 Rido: iya sih
00:59 Rido: skip aja
01:00 Aras25: 01:24:049 (84049|3) - oh dem 1/4
01:00 Aras25: tapi gpp kalau alasan lo mau keep ini
01:00 Aras25: 01:23:974 (83974|0,84049|3,84124|2,84199|1,84274|3,84349|0,84424|1,84499|2) - 
01:01 Rido: yes it's intended
01:01 Aras25: 01:27:274 (87274|3,87274|2,87349|0,87349|1,87424|3,87424|2,87499|1,87499|0,87574|3,87574|2) - 
01:01 Aras25: 200 bpm 1/4 trill di 3* =w=
01:01 Rido: HEHEHE
01:01 Aras25: hhe
01:01 Rido: ganti ya
01:02 Rido: tp modder2 sebelumnya gaada yg komentar
01:02 Aras25: kalau gua pribadi ganti
01:02 Aras25: not a big problem sih imo
01:02 Aras25: 01:35:824 (95824|3,96274|3) - 
01:02 Aras25: ini ==
01:02 Rido: sebenernya buat memperkenalkan spamming aja sih
01:03 Aras25: ya gapapa lah kalau gitu
01:03 Rido: yaudah turun ke red tick
01:03 Aras25: ga mesti turun LN nya
01:03 Aras25: maksud gua jangan shield 1/4 gitu :V
01:03 Rido: udah gw turunin end nya -__
01:04 Aras25: -__-
01:04 Aras25: ok lah
01:07 Aras25: dah
01:07 Aras25: done =w=)b
01:07 Rido: ntappp
01:07 Rido: ehh
01:07 Rido: bntr
01:07 Aras25: 01:50:974 (110974|2,110974|0,111174|3,111174|0,111374|3,111374|1,111574|3,111574|2) - 
01:07 Aras25: sex pitch
01:08 Rido: 01:54:124 - part sini kan sama kyk sini 00:32:524 -
01:08 Rido: tp gw bikin diff spike
01:09 Aras25: gpp lah
01:09 Aras25: lagian udah dekat akhir kok
01:09 Aras25: tapi repeat pattern yang di awal juga gpp imo
01:09 Aras25: kalau mau main aman
01:10 Rido: okey
01:10 Rido: diff spike at its finest
01:11 Aras25: BAN XI
01:11 Aras25: 1 DIFF AJA ?
01:11 Aras25: rip caps
01:11 Rido: eh serah kamu ras
01:12 Rido: tbh gw udh capek
01:12 Rido: awkwk
01:12 Aras25: yodah 1 diff :v
01:12 Aras25: mod gua di 4 sampe 5 juga jelek btw
01:12 Rido: wokeh
01:12 Aras25: cuman jago 1-2-3 =w=
01:13 Rido: edit tuh double post
01:13 Aras25: w9 wa post

IRC sabun merek BAN XI =w=)

Rido wrote:

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Leonita wrote:

Rido wrote:

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dapet apa nih aqo?:^)

puxtu wrote:

mod edisi males bolak balik browser

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04:32 puxtu: -INFINITE-
04:34 puxtu: 00:05:374 (5374|0) - bisa nambah note 1 lagi habis ini (hint: red line)
04:38 puxtu: 00:10:774 (10774|0,10774|1) - tuker posisinya, single note sembunyi di belakang ln agak susah dibaca
04:38 puxtu: buat dia lebih visible
04:39 puxtu: 00:11:974 (11974|0,12124|1) - keknya kurang 1 note lg deh
04:41 puxtu: 00:20:824 (20824|0,21124|2) - bisa diganti jadi 1/4s
04:41 puxtu: 00:21:424 (21424|0,21424|1) - nothing to emphasize
04:45 puxtu: 00:33:424 (33424|2,33424|1,33424|0,33499|3,33574|1,33574|2,33574|0) - hm agak maksain untuk terlihat beda
04:46 puxtu: dibandingin dengan note yg sebelumnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:49:099 (49099|0) - gw yakin ini kurang 1 note lg di atasnya
04:48 puxtu: 00:53:974 (53974|2) - mungkin kiai cocok disini
04:49 puxtu: 00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - gw ga yakin sama ini
04:50 puxtu: 01:11:674 (71674|2,71824|2,71974|3) - coba ganti mini ln
04:52 puxtu: 01:21:274 (81274|0) - bukannya seharusnya ada stream disini ya?
04:52 puxtu: 01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - lo bisa ganti ini jadi burst
04:53 puxtu: 01:24:799 (84799|1,85099|0) - completely ghosts
04:54 puxtu: 01:27:574 (87574|3) - gw bingung knp streamnya berhenti disini? masih wip ya? lo belum kelar ngemap bagian ini?

Valentrixe wrote:

sabun mandi

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etc. mean there are similar issues in further, you should check them yourself
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1. 00:02:374 (2374|2) - double? like you did in 00:04:774 (4774|0,4774|2) - , etc. double that you mention there is representating the high pitch melody. meanwhile the part that you mention need double, has no high pitch synth
2. 00:05:374 (5374|3) - end at 00:05:674 - ? or will be better if you change it to single note instead i keep the hold consistency even if the length isn't same
3. 00:05:524 - missing note. i don't like the way you follow these sounds tbh. they're to low yes. it's too low for this timing. keep it empty
4. 00:07:024 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574371 , 4 notes anchor, twice, in the same column. re-arrange pls rearranged
5. 00:07:774 (7774|0,7924|0,8074|0,8224|0,8374|0) - 5 notes anchor, try to avoid this pls. etc. rearranged
6. 00:08:674 (8674|0,8674|3,8674|2,8824|2,8824|1,8824|0) - um why triple? use triple only on cymbal is better imo. etc. i use triplet here because your mod below V uses quad as for representate cymbal. i know this is kinda unacceptable, but let's try to overmapping little bit:^)
7. 00:08:974 (8974|2,8974|0,8974|1,8974|3) - why quad? :/ ^
8. 00:12:274 (12274|0,12274|1,12274|3) - ?? it have the same sound as 00:12:574 (12574|3,12574|0) one note has been removed
9. 00:10:774 (10774|1) - should've ended in 00:12:574 - , suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574431 keep. the flow goes better on current pattern. not going to layer both of instrument. it'll bias each other
10. 00:13:324 (13324|1,13324|2,13474|2,13474|0,13474|1,13549|3,13624|0,13624|1,13774|2,13774|0,13774|3,13924|0,13924|2,13924|3,13924|1) - i don't know what're you trying to follow with this layer. seems overmapped to me actually i mapped instrument which is inaudible, but i able to hear it on 25% playback rate. yes i slightly agree that these patterns are kinda overmapped. but let's try to overmapping little bit:^) (2)
11. 00:13:699 - add note, same sound as 00:13:399 (13399|3) - . suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574452 keep. imo it just echo
12. 00:14:824 - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574486 , to avoid jack also to make it easier to recognize the pattern ( [14][23] [14][23] ) the jack is intended
13. 00:15:799 (15799|1) - ghost? i'm hearing the sound in 00:15:649 - instead keep. the current synth's flow is better. meanwhile i keep the flow's consistent as well
14. 00:15:574 (15574|2,15724|2,15874|2,16024|2,16174|2) - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574529 keep. moved one note in between those 1/2 jack
15. 00:17:574 (17574|0,17624|3) - you shouldn't separate them, since you'll break the grace effect. etc. it's actually the same two pitch alternating, so.. yeah i make it alternating
16. 00:16:924 (16924|3,16924|1,16924|2,17224|0,17224|3,17224|1) - why triple? if you trying to follow the synth, you can do this simple chordtrill: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574695 wes tak jelasno nang irc:U
17. 00:17:899 - add note? added
18. 00:19:924 (19924|1,19924|2) - this should be triple while 00:20:074 (20074|1,20074|3,20074|0) - is double those LN representating 1/4 synth. that's why it's triplet. kick (double) + synth (single) = triplet
19. 00:21:874 (21874|0,22174|3) - why LN? there are piano in blue line, suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574876 what i hear is 1/4 kick there. i focus on layering synth which is slightly catchy
20. 00:32:224 - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574927 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574934 , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6574938 wes tak jelasno nang irc:U

wes ah aku mager

good luck ya senpai sand pie <3