Mika Kobayashi - Through My Blood · forum

Gloria Guard

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2016-07-21T11:14:22+00:00

Hello From my queue.

[General]

■ You should be the check difficulty setting AR and OD. it's a really unbalance setting it.

■ This is map the offset a little slow. I think the offset 11820 is better.

[Easy]

■ 00:15:579 (1) - The slider is a little strange shape, I recommend to slider second point move to x:300 y:136 is good shape and flow imo.
■ 01:18:391 (2) - You are missing the slider head finish sound.
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The slider end rhythm a little short imo, The electronic guitar end point is 01:26:360 here. I think the slider end point to move 01:26:360 is better.

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[Normal]

■ 00:26:829 ~ 00:34:250 - The part is a really quiet here. but you used 60% volume sound. I think the decrease volume is 40% is better.
and 00:41:829 ~ 00:55:579 the same.
■ 01:26:360 - Add note here? The same easy diff suggestion here.

[Hard]

■ 00:55:579 (2) - Hmm, The note spacing is your intention? It is not a good spacing. I think the distance should be constant here.
■ 01:55:891 (3) - Add NC here.
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The same suggestion Easy and normal diff this point.

[Akitoshi's Insane]

■ 00:39:954 ~ 00:41:672 - I'm a really confused this part break time. The break time is really short and suddenly. I don't need the break time here and add note is better imo.
■ 01:11:672 (3) - Remove the sampleset drum sound. It's really loud. also You put the other finish sound here, It is not suitable.
■ 01:56:672 (4) - I don't understand the slider end point rhythm. I think the slider end point rhythm don't need rhythm. because the slider end point is empty and quiet. remove the slider and add note is better.

[Misery]

■ 00:31:516 (1) - I don't know the 3/4 rhythm intention. it's simple a 1/1 rhythm. so You should be replaced with the 1/1 rhythm.
■ 01:26:360 - You already know this part to suggestion.

Good mapset :3. Good luck for ranking this mapset !

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-21T12:38:22+00:00

~~Changed something tnx~~

Garden wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
01:56:516 (3) - stack on 01:55:735 (4) - maybe cuz overlap here doesn't look that neat to me and drawing a large triangle like 01:56:047 (6,1,2,3) - plays a bit forced imo stacked on 01:55:266 (2) - instead

Dailycare wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
It might be better if you used more faster SV at kiai time its fine imo
*00:12:766 (1) - Did you intend this NC?
*00:38:079 (1) - How about making this slider to finish at 00:40:579 - or 00:40:891 - ?
*00:57:766 (4) - 01:00:579 (3) - Add NC
*01:11:672 (3) - What about removing the whistle? Because the symbol sound is weaker than 01:11:829 -

Gloria Guard wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]

■ 00:39:954 ~ 00:41:672 - I'm a really confused this part break time. The break time is really short and suddenly. I don't need the break time here and add note is better imo.
■ 01:11:672 (3) - Remove the sampleset drum sound. It's really loud. also You put the other finish sound here, It is not suitable.
■ 01:56:672 (4) - I don't understand the slider end point rhythm. I think the slider end point rhythm don't need rhythm. because the slider end point is empty and quiet. remove the slider and add note is better. that's sth echo thingy for the instru, no need to put additional circle imo.

no comment = fixed thanks!
sorry for late reply naligaw ako sa mall :v

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Title:Through My Blood
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Artist:Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi
ArtistUnicode:澤野弘之 feat. 小林未郁
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Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2016-07-21T22:11:09+00:00

DON'T GIVE KUDOSU !

Here's my mod with late due to holidays.

Easy

00:27:766 (2,3,4) - This pattern seems really basic. You can change this to something like that :

2 screens inside.

Without that, your diff is pretty good, but that's really repetitive

2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo
2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo .... You need probably to change a bit these patterns

Normal

00:19:329 (1) - Move to x = 400 and y = 52 for a blanket with (4)

00:31:516 (2) - Move to x = 120 and y = 60 for a blanket

Sorry, I usually mod hards but I don't have time

so I will stop here.

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-07-22T00:56:26+00:00

Placeholding, sorry for long wait

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-22T08:17:05+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hello From my queue.

[General]

■ You should be the check difficulty setting AR and OD. it's a really unbalance setting it. It's fine imo

■ This is map the offset a little slow. I think the offset 11820 is better. well it's fine for me, I'll wait opinions tho

[Easy]

■ 00:15:579 (1) - The slider is a little strange shape, I recommend to slider second point move to x:300 y:136 is good shape and flow imo. I like this shape ;w;
■ 01:18:391 (2) - You are missing the slider head finish sound. there are already a finish sound
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The slider end rhythm a little short imo, The electronic guitar end point is 01:26:360 here. I think the slider end point to move 01:26:360 is better.
SPOILER
Your right but that fading sound doesn't really important to me and 1/1 is pretty ok with it

[Normal]

■ 00:26:829 ~ 00:34:250 - The part is a really quiet here. but you used 60% volume sound. I think the decrease volume is 40% is better.
and 00:41:829 ~ 00:55:579 the same. sure, also applied in all diffs
■ 01:26:360 - Add note here? The same easy diff suggestion here. ^^^

[Hard]

■ 00:55:579 (2) - Hmm, The note spacing is your intention? It is not a good spacing. I think the distance should be constant here. they are using different SV so I think it's okay
■ 01:55:891 (3) - Add NC here. even the drums are strong, i wouldn't liek to put NC here because i want to be consistent xD
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The same suggestion Easy and normal diff this point.

[Misery]

■ 00:31:516 (1) - I don't know the 3/4 rhythm intention. it's simple a 1/1 rhythm. so You should be replaced with the 1/1 rhythm. but I want that drum to be clickable xD
■ 01:26:360 - You already know this part to suggestion. ^^^

Good mapset :3. Good luck for ranking this mapset !

Lexis wrote:
DON'T GIVE KUDOSU !

Here's my mod with late due to holidays.

Easy

00:27:766 (2,3,4) - This pattern seems really basic. You can change this to something like that : Basic patterns for beginners ;w;
2 screens inside.

Without that, your diff is pretty good, but that's really repetitive

2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo
2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo .... You need probably to change a bit these patterns I will try

Normal

00:19:329 (1) - Move to x = 400 and y = 52 for a blanket with (4)

00:31:516 (2) - Move to x = 120 and y = 60 for a blanket These things we're intended

Sorry, I usually mod hards but I don't have time so I will stop here.

Sorry for denying most all of your suggestions xD thanks for the mod guys ;w;

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-07-22T23:05:51+00:00

E

00:13:704 (1,2) - blanket?
00:27:766 (2,3,4) - to be honest this pattern is very monotonous, try something different

N

fine

H

00:42:766 (4) - do this more curvered
01:18:391 (6) - new combo

You requested me to skip the highest difficulties so yeah, i'll do
gl!

Janpai

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Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-23T00:05:31+00:00

I was nerfing my easy when you dropped your mod xD No fixes for easy because I already nerf it xD and for the NC at Hard, I will consider, will see for more opinions, thanks for modding anyway!sorry but no kds xDD

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-07-23T03:01:51+00:00

rip m4m thingy

Asonate

507 posts

Joined July 2013

Asonate 2016-07-25T17:35:28+00:00

NM from queue

[Mis(t)ery]

00:23:547 (3,1) - naziblanket burning my eyes. ok, its not THAT bad, but still adjust a little xD
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - if youre intention for these 3 was a perfect triangle, youre gonna need to adjust 5 a bit (or 3 respectively) to make 3,5 the same distance as 3,4 and 4,5
apart from that, i cant really say much. Jumps flow well, some felt forced to me, but o well (id have probably mapped this a whole lot differently as well) thats probably just me. Song is awesome and the map in itself plays really well too.
01:51:204 (1,2,3) - almost missed those, they are way weaker in the song than 01:50:266 (1,2,3) - , yet you give them more spacing. if you want to emphasise the songs intensity properly, consider nerfing ds a bit for these

[Akitoshi]

00:55:891 (1,2) - consider increasing DS between those 2 even more, you have the kiai coming up :3
01:19:016 - maybe make that hittable? I personally dislike the idea of having such a strong beat passive on a sliderend, but its up to you ofc
Love the diff! Low SV, awesome song. almost the same feeling as AlieZ (same composer duh lol)

[Hard]

01:55:891 (3,4,5,6,7) - consider incorporating the sliderend of 3 into the curve 4,5,6,7 create.
Wonderful diff!

[Normal]

00:18:704 (4,1) - consider blanketing 1 with 4
00:32:141 (3) - Maybe make this slider a horizontal one, just as the one before it? Looks a bit off with them facing slightly different directions
01:45:579 (3,4) - consider making 4 a slider extension of 3, pretty much moving it a bit up left should do the trick.

[Easy]

00:12:766 (2,1) - gonna start with blanketnaziing straight away: 1 isnt perfectly blanketed by the sides of 2
00:51:204 (1,2) - please for my ocd make this the same positioning as 00:50:266 (2,3) -

O god this song. cant get that out of my head now WE WALK PAST THE BORDERLANDS (which is probably wrong lyrics lol)
all diffs played nicely, with akitoshis low SV diff being my favourite

I wish you the best of luck and leave you with a star

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-26T08:58:41+00:00

Asonate wrote:
NM from queue

[Mis(t)ery]
00:23:547 (3,1) - naziblanket burning my eyes. ok, its not THAT bad, but still adjust a little xD okie fixed
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - if youre intention for these 3 was a perfect triangle, youre gonna need to adjust 5 a bit (or 3 respectively) to make 3,5 the same distance as 3,4 and 4,5 I hope i did right ;w; fixed
apart from that, i cant really say much. Jumps flow well, some felt forced to me, but o well (id have probably mapped this a whole lot differently as well) thats probably just me. Song is awesome and the map in itself plays really well too.
01:51:204 (1,2,3) - almost missed those, they are way weaker in the song than 01:50:266 (1,2,3) - , yet you give them more spacing. if you want to emphasise the songs intensity properly, consider nerfing ds a bit for these reduced the DS
[Hard]
01:55:891 (3,4,5,6,7) - consider incorporating the sliderend of 3 into the curve 4,5,6,7 create. made it like heptagon
Wonderful diff!
[Normal]
00:18:704 (4,1) - consider blanketing 1 with 4 intended not to blanket xD
00:32:141 (3) - Maybe make this slider a horizontal one, just as the one before it? Looks a bit off with them facing slightly different directions I like the angled one ;w;
01:45:579 (3,4) - consider making 4 a slider extension of 3, pretty much moving it a bit up left should do the trick. sure
[Easy]
00:12:766 (2,1) - gonna start with blanketnaziing straight away: 1 isnt perfectly blanketed by the sides of 2 there are no blanket here
00:51:204 (1,2) - please for my ocd make this the same positioning as 00:50:266 (2,3) - some objects might go overscreen xD
O god this song. cant get that out of my head now WE WALK PAST THE BORDERLANDS (which is probably wrong lyrics lol) CAN'T TOUCH NOTHING BOUT THE WORLD
all diffs played nicely, with akitoshis low SV diff being my favourite
I wish you the best of luck and leave you with a star

Many thanks for the mod

Natteke desu

2,487 posts

Joined August 2012

Natteke desu 2016-07-27T13:46:14+00:00

[Misery]
00:11:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - some kind of pattern suggestion because current one triggers me feel free to skip
00:16:829 - you can hear intensive guitar strings here which could be emphazised by jump and some more clickable objects
00:18:860 (2,3) - pretty much the same with previous, but in this case there is no real need in changing rhythm, but only adding jump
firstly i wanted to suggest extending 00:19:016 (3) - to make it 3/4 because of guitar, but i don't think i ever saw this in your map so i skipped it, but well, if you got interested you could do something like this <if you liked this idea, you can apply this for every same guitar parts in the song on this diff
00:23:704 (4,5) - didn't really got spacing of this one, i'd say you better move it a bit closer
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - personally i'd go with jump, but this work as well, you just could gave this more emphazis by using something like this
00:40:579 (3,4,5,6) - as far i can see this main idea was emphasisng guitar, but because you added some objects on hi-hats here all emphazise on guitar screwed, try to go with something like this
00:41:829 (1) - might be personal, but whole this part seemd overdone spacing-wice for me, i can agree that increasing spacing was right decision here because song became more intense, but i think it should be nerfed a bit, because it looks same with more intense part, what i can't understand
01:16:516 (1,2,3) - moving these like this might be more interesting to play
01:25:891 (1) - what about giving this slider something about 0.5 sv and moving it even further from previous circle? This could give a nice emphazise on this moment
01:36:985 (3) - didn't really got why this is stacked with slider, it feels more like having a balanced spacing between them, but oh well

[Akitoshi's Insane]
dude nice, have my love

[Hard]
00:18:860 (5,6) - pretty much same with moment mentoined on extra, but in this case, since it's hard and you can't really add meaty jumps, you could give it better emphazise by replacing slider by circles
00:26:516 (6) - could be emphazised as circles as well
00:34:329 (1) - break is dull

01:48:391 (1,2,3) - it's a bit too harsh for this kind of hard, so i'd say this should be nerfed a bit (just slighty decrease spacing between them)

that's all and you people did pretty good! Only one my real complain is these breaks on easier diffs. Hope this helped and good luck with ranking!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-27T13:49:49+00:00

Asonate wrote:
[Akitoshi]
00:55:891 (1,2) - consider increasing DS between those 2 even more, you have the kiai coming up :3 That was my intention to make this slide very slow to give more emphasis to 00:56:829 (1) -
01:19:016 - maybe make that hittable? I personally dislike the idea of having such a strong beat passive on a sliderend, but its up to you ofc idk if i made it right but yeah now hittable lo
Love the diff! Low SV, awesome song. almost the same feeling as AlieZ (same composer duh lol) slow SV was just meme thingy lmao, glad that this worked fine xd

thank you!

janpai big fan

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Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-27T13:51:42+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
dude nice, have my love

♥♥♥ EvilElvis big fan

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-27T22:50:38+00:00

Akitoshi fig ban
~~will reply soon or later and edit this post xD~~ kkkk

EvilElvis wrote:
[Misery]
00:11:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - some kind of pattern suggestion because current one triggers me feel free to skip I think my current pattern emphasize the clap more than that xD
00:16:829 - you can hear intensive guitar strings here which could be emphazised by jump and some more clickable objects will consider cuz most in the intro have that intensive guitar you say xD
00:18:860 (2,3) - pretty much the same with previous, but in this case there is no real need in changing rhythm, but only adding jump
firstly i wanted to suggest extending 00:19:016 (3) - to make it 3/4 because of guitar, but i don't think i ever saw this in your map so i skipped it, but well, if you got interested you could do something like this <if you liked this idea, you can apply this for every same guitar parts in the song on this diff just put a jump
00:23:704 (4,5) - didn't really got spacing of this one, i'd say you better move it a bit closer stacked with the (3) circle on the violet combo
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - personally i'd go with jump, but this work as well, you just could gave this more emphazis by using something like this In the first place I really intended it to be close because i feel that this pattern will work nice for the guitars and also touched by the experienced of playing other maps xD
00:40:579 (3,4,5,6) - as far i can see this main idea was emphasisng guitar, but because you added some objects on hi-hats here all emphazise on guitar screwed, try to go with something like this nice idea fixed ^0^
00:41:829 (1) - might be personal, but whole this part seemd overdone spacing-wice for me, i can agree that increasing spacing was right decision here because song became more intense, but i think it should be nerfed a bit, because it looks same with more intense part, what i can't understand ok i nerfedsome patterns
01:16:516 (1,2,3) - moving these like this might be more interesting to play looks a bit overdone for me, I just adjusted (5) more so clap would have emphasis
01:25:891 (1) - what about giving this slider something about 0.5 sv and moving it even further from previous circle? This could give a nice emphazise on this moment sure but i didn't end it like the one you like
01:36:985 (3) - didn't really got why this is stacked with slider, it feels more like having a balanced spacing between them, but oh well I really intend to stack and idk why it is not stacked properly xD

[Hard]
00:18:860 (5,6) - pretty much same with moment mentoined on extra, but in this case, since it's hard and you can't really add meaty jumps, you could give it better emphazise by replacing slider by circles will see for more opinions xD
00:26:516 (6) - could be emphazised as circles as well sure
00:34:329 (1) - break is dull idk but the break is pretty ideal for me
01:48:391 (1,2,3) - it's a bit too harsh for this kind of hard, so i'd say this should be nerfed a bit (just slighty decrease spacing between them) okie i hope i did right xD

that's all and you people did pretty good! Only one my real complain is these breaks on easier diffs. Hope this helped and good luck with ranking!

Thank you so much for a nice mod!

Lami

1,756 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-08-01T18:28:26+00:00

H

00:59:172 (2,3) - i think make jump here instead of 00:58:704 (1,2) -
if they have same DS, it's okay.
but if they have oppsite DS with each other.
feel little weird.

I

01:25:891 (1,1) - not stacked lol

X

00:42:610 (5,1) - feel so small jump despite of emphasis sound.
because you already use jump at strong beat. but not here.
01:55:891 (1,3) - swap NC?

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-02T10:57:50+00:00

Lami wrote:
H

00:59:172 (2,3) - i think make jump here instead of 00:58:704 (1,2) -
if they have same DS, it's okay.
but if they have oppsite DS with each other. Ik but the reason behind these is I personally intended to put jumps on that sounds instead of clap because I feel that having emphasize that clap all the time would be boring so I did an alternating jump at clap and at the whistles
feel little weird.

X

00:42:610 (5,1) - feel so small jump despite of emphasis sound.
because you already use jump at strong beat. but not here. Adjusted a bit
01:55:891 (1,3) - swap NC? it's fine

Thanks for the mod

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-08-02T11:27:55+00:00

hoi janpoi just few suggestions

hard
should you not decrease a bit all your timing/inheriting section it seems me too loud imo D:
00:11:829 (1) - it's too curve imo, you should try to copy/paste 00:12:766 (4) - and replace it instead it would make more preti
00:12:297 (2,3) - DS ;_;
00:20:266 (4) - okay what I'm going to say it's just a preferance, maybe you'll agree with me or not at all, but I want you to get noticed
so you could try to put this slider upward instead downward I think it would play better since (4) is a bit offscreen, a bit like that
but I understand if you want to keep this absolutely, it'll make a kind of consistency with 00:12:454 (3,4) - xd
01:30:266 (5,3) - bad overlap D:
seems good to me tho

normal
00:54:954 (1,2) - seems good also to stop your slider at 00:55:266 (5) - as you did at 00:50:579 (4,5,1) -
01:35:891 (3,1) - blanket here would be nice! ~~so nazi sorry~~

misery
00:19:329 (1,4,6) - what about symmetry to avoid overlap ?
01:08:391 (2,3) - dont know if you should stack them but you didn't stack 2 circles before, I think it's better to unstack imo
What about make 01:40:891 (1,3,5) - symmetrical to 01:41:047 (2,4,6) - ? : o

[]
that's all for me, have a star and good luck!
moar sawano on osu! pls

no kds if no change

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-08-03T05:53:52+00:00

heya

[Misery]
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - this triangle is slightly off
00:34:329 (1,2,3) - imo this felt weird when playing because your only holding half the vocal then switching to the guitar. i'd probably choose to map the guitar here
00:36:204 (1) - not a big fan of the zigzag slider
00:38:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - i found this section a little awkward because of the 1/1 spaces and inconsistencies between your selection of beats. a lot of the circles you have can be translated to a 1/2 slider to avoid the 1/1 gaps and plays more smoothly imo. heres the rhythm i came up with http://puu.sh/qo4VK/46d2a69580.jpg which i really think you should try build and see what you think of it before brushing my opinion aside. i basically turned circles like 00:38:860 (4) - into 1/2 sliders since you did this here 00:39:172 (5) . and i broke 00:40:579 (3) - into 2 clickable objects to stay consistent with what you did here 00:38:704 (3,4) .
01:36:672 (2,3) - kind of an anomaly. u normally had circle + slider not slider + circle
01:56:672 (1) - probably dont need the nc here? as it isn't a finish. but i guess its up to you

[Akitoshi]
01:11:204 (3,1) - i feel this distance is too big for an insane plus its bigger than 01:11:672 (3,1) - which has a finish
01:19:016 (4,5) - an anti-jump would be nice here to emphasise the double clap
01:32:610 (2) - any reason why this is a vocal slider when 01:30:579 (1,2,3) - isnt? i think it'd be much better to have the kick drum at 01:32:922 - clickable

[Hard]
00:55:579 (2) - maybe improve the placement of this a little. introducing an angle would help. http://puu.sh/qo623/eb217e3f8f.jpg

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-05T23:59:28+00:00

MugiwaraSekai wrote:
hoi janpoi just few suggestions

hard
should you not decrease a bit all your timing/inheriting section it seems me too loud imo D: will see for more opinions xD
00:11:829 (1) - it's too curve imo, you should try to copy/paste 00:12:766 (4) - and replace it instead it would make more preti sure
00:12:297 (2,3) - DS ;_; oops fixed
00:20:266 (4) - okay what I'm going to say it's just a preferance, maybe you'll agree with me or not at all, but I want you to get noticed
so you could try to put this slider upward instead downward I think it would play better since (4) is a bit offscreen, a bit like that
but I understand if you want to keep this absolutely, it'll make a kind of consistency with 00:12:454 (3,4) - xd But I like this one xD
01:30:266 (5,3) - bad overlap D: fixed
seems good to me tho

normal
00:54:954 (1,2) - seems good also to stop your slider at 00:55:266 (5) - as you did at 00:50:579 (4,5,1) - I don't understand what you mean here xD
01:35:891 (3,1) - blanket here would be nice! ~~so nazi sorry~~ it's the perfect blanket I guess since DS is kinda meh xD

misery
00:19:329 (1,4,6) - what about symmetry to avoid overlap ? sure
01:08:391 (2,3) - dont know if you should stack them but you didn't stack 2 circles before, I think it's better to unstack imo If someone will still says that I should unstack then okay, will keep for now
What about make 01:40:891 (1,3,5) - symmetrical to 01:41:047 (2,4,6) - ? : o I guess it's fine

[]
that's all for me, have a star and good luck!
moar sawano on osu! pls

no kds if no change

Pentori wrote:
heya

[Misery]
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - this triangle is slightly off I thinks it's already fine, not feeling any OCD here xD
00:34:329 (1,2,3) - imo this felt weird when playing because your only holding half the vocal then switching to the guitar. i'd probably choose to map the guitar here There's an alternation of vocals and guitar so i think it's pretty okay
00:36:204 (1) - not a big fan of the zigzag slider no ideas for slider arts atm xD
00:38:079 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - i found this section a little awkward because of the 1/1 spaces and inconsistencies between your selection of beats. a lot of the circles you have can be translated to a 1/2 slider to avoid the 1/1 gaps and plays more smoothly imo. heres the rhythm i came up with http://puu.sh/qo4VK/46d2a69580.jpg which i really think you should try build and see what you think of it before brushing my opinion aside. i basically turned circles like 00:38:860 (4) - into 1/2 sliders since you did this here 00:39:172 (5) . and i broke 00:40:579 (3) - into 2 clickable objects to stay consistent with what you did here 00:38:704 (3,4) . It's kinda awkward for me to play because the start is a slider art that expresses the calm part then suddenly 1/2 spams appear, I think mapping only those important drums is pretty ideal for the previous objects, well I still changed the (3) slider to circles for consistency
01:36:672 (2,3) - kind of an anomaly. u normally had circle + slider not slider + circle oops fixed
01:56:672 (1) - probably dont need the nc here? as it isn't a finish. but i guess its up to you Intended to do an NC

[Hard]
00:55:579 (2) - maybe improve the placement of this a little. introducing an angle would help. http://puu.sh/qo623/eb217e3f8f.jpg sure blame DS :v

Thanks for modding guys!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-08-06T14:06:01+00:00

Pentori wrote:
[Akitoshi]
01:11:204 (3,1) - i feel this distance is too big for an insane plus its bigger than 01:11:672 (3,1) - which has a finish
01:19:016 (4,5) - an anti-jump would be nice here to emphasise the double clap no thnx
01:32:610 (2) - any reason why this is a vocal slider when 01:30:579 (1,2,3) - isnt? i think it'd be much better to have the kick drum at 01:32:922 - clickable vocal's pitch, and for variation.

no comment = fixed, thank you!

janpoi gib naf

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Rapthorn

234 posts

Joined October 2014

Rapthorn 2016-08-08T22:03:40+00:00

General

Very simple map so there's not a lot to comment on
I feel like the jumps could look a bit better sometimes, some parts look ugly for no reason, where fixing it wouldnt affect gameplay in the slightest
all good

Singletap simulator

00:17:454 (1,3,4) - lining these up wouldnt be too much of a hassle, would it
00:19:485 (2,4,5) - No reason to line up but equal spacing between the three would be nice
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - can confirm with the last mod you got that this triangle is off
01:04:797 (3) - This could be made into a slider to fit better with the vocals, and increasing the spacing on 01:04:641 (2,5) - a lot after could still keep about the same intensity as it is now, while actually giving some more variety than slider-jump jump jump jump slider
01:18:235 (6,1) - you're given the chance to actually add some rhythmical variety here but you instead choose to map the triple as a short slider, simply making it more singletaps. I feel like switching things around here to make a triple would make the map more interesting.
01:30:891 (2,3,4) - I understand that you dont have a lot of space to work with here but isnt this a bit too easy if you compare it to the combo's afterward 01:31:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:32:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? They share about the same intensity, yet this barely requires you to move the cursor. I feel like moving 01:31:047 (3) - and 01:31:204 (4) - a bit away from each other to create some more difficulty would fit better.
01:38:079 (1,2,3,4) - ^ its not that big of an issue though but still worth mentioning imo
01:42:297 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The song is still pretty intense at this point, yet the mapping is very tame. Buff it a bit?
01:56:360 (4,5,1) - The last section is still pretty easy compared to the jumps shortly after the chorus, even though its supposed to be the finale/climax of the map, increasing the spacing of these last 3 jumps could even it out a bit.

testplay

Not proud of this mod, its hard to find things to comment on in a map like this, because there's not too much music to follow, and it flows well. I still think you need to work a bit on how your jumps look, but its not a big problem, just something to work on. Good luck with rank ^^

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-10T00:11:13+00:00

Rapthorn wrote:
General
Very simple map so there's not a lot to comment on
I feel like the jumps could look a bit better sometimes, some parts look ugly for no reason, where fixing it wouldnt affect gameplay in the slightest
all good
Singletap simulator
00:17:454 (1,3,4) - lining these up wouldnt be too much of a hassle, would it I tried xD
00:19:485 (2,4,5) - No reason to line up but equal spacing between the three would be nice but 00:19:641 (3) - guitar pitch is kinda high than the two notes before
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - can confirm with the last mod you got that this triangle is off Lmao I even use dS on this why off? If you observe properly, it was a slanted triangle not a perfect one.
01:04:797 (3) - This could be made into a slider to fit better with the vocals, and increasing the spacing on 01:04:641 (2,5) - a lot after could still keep about the same intensity as it is now, while actually giving some more variety than slider-jump jump jump jump slider sure
01:18:235 (6,1) - you're given the chance to actually add some rhythmical variety here but you instead choose to map the triple as a short slider, simply making it more singletaps. I feel like switching things around here to make a triple would make the map more interesting. okie
01:30:891 (2,3,4) - I understand that you dont have a lot of space to work with here but isnt this a bit too easy if you compare it to the combo's afterward 01:31:516 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:32:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? They share about the same intensity, yet this barely requires you to move the cursor. I feel like moving 01:31:047 (3) - and 01:31:204 (4) - a bit away from each other to create some more difficulty would fit better. I just increased the spacing :v
01:38:079 (1,2,3,4) - ^ its not that big of an issue though but still worth mentioning imo ^^
01:42:297 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - The song is still pretty intense at this point, yet the mapping is very tame. Buff it a bit? Idk if I did it right
01:56:360 (4,5,1) - The last section is still pretty easy compared to the jumps shortly after the chorus, even though its supposed to be the finale/climax of the map, increasing the spacing of these last 3 jumps could even it out a bit. okay
testplay

Not proud of this mod, its hard to find things to comment on in a map like this, because there's not too much music to follow, and it flows well. I still think you need to work a bit on how your jumps look, but its not a big problem, just something to work on. Good luck with rank ^^

Thanks for the nice mod! Omy my 666th post ;w;

Pinguino

47 posts

Joined February 2011

Pinguino 2016-08-11T02:47:40+00:00

Don't really have much to add pretty well mapped and modded, I think is already good to go .

Insane

00:13:079 All the first round of jumps I would reduce the spacing a little bit I find it annoying having to start jumps so quickly like to get "in" the song before, they do make sense so trying to be "impartial" they are fine just preference.
00:27:766 This jump I am not sure it should be that big yes its already half of the other ones still feels to so unnecessarily large I would reduce it to 2x spacing and to the left side of the (2) in way to the 4
00:41:829 I would map all the vocals coming from the white tick in the middle of this slider as you start mapping them 1 beat later while also technically the sound never ending
01:10:579 I don't feel this slider is needed having some silence helps set the mood, not everything has to be map, this is for me the thing i'll make the case more for.
01:10:813 Probably awkward to map but the vocals start here a double would be terrible just leave it like that anyways,

As i said overall is already good to go in my book and eh you don't really have to change anything or why explain you didn't.

PS I do dislike also the slow sliders but it's fine just a few are easy to sliderbreak

Hard

00:34:329 This goes I guess for all low diffs I think it should be mapped
01:41:516 To much for a hard to continue with HC instead of a slider?

I really don't have anything to add , sorry ):(good thing!)

Only one thing to add, I would put an orange combo color but hopefully it get ranked soon sorry for the low modding just to hard for me to find stuff!, Good luck!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-11T10:26:45+00:00

Those things are purely intentional but I've gave you kds because it was a nice idea to have a orange combo color, many thanks for that!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-08-14T09:55:14+00:00

Pinguino wrote:
Insane
00:13:079 All the first round of jumps I would reduce the spacing a little bit I find it annoying having to start jumps so quickly like to get "in" the song before, they do make sense so trying to be "impartial" they are fine just preference. instruments are obviously strong enough to get those jumps.
00:27:766 This jump I am not sure it should be that big yes its already half of the other ones still feels to so unnecessarily large I would reduce it to 2x spacing and to the left side of the (2) in way to the 4 how it'd big? it's 1/1.
00:41:829 I would map all the vocals coming from the white tick in the middle of this slider as you start mapping them 1 beat later while also technically the sound never ending guitar
01:10:579 I don't feel this slider is needed having some silence helps set the mood, not everything has to be map, this is for me the thing i'll make the case more for. k added drum sample then
01:10:813 Probably awkward to map but the vocals start here a double would be terrible just leave it like that anyways, yes it's awkward so no.

As i said overall is already good to go in my book and eh you don't really have to change anything or why explain you didn't. as a mapper and modder i will explain how I will deny them.

PS I do dislike also the slow sliders but it's fine just a few are easy to sliderbreak Bleh haters gonna hate

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_DT3

1,403 posts

Joined October 2015

_DT3 2016-08-15T15:04:35+00:00

Time for some late modding after your request o/

[Easy]

00:28:704 (3,4) - I feel like these should be different from 00:27:766 (2) - Cause the music sounds different there, since it currently plays the same, I feel like changing it so that gameplay matches up with the music
00:42:766 (2,3) - I think these should be switched up cause the vocals here 00:42:766 - 00:43:079 sound connected and should be represented with a slider imo. Additionally, starting a slider on a downbeat might be a bit confusing for a new player, even if this placement was intentional
00:46:516 (2,3) - ^
00:52:766 (4) - It is offscreen in 4:3 I think
00:58:704 (1,2,3,1,2) - I don't really like seeing so many straight sliders close to another, even if it's really slow, plus, 01:00:579 (1) - Imo, this slider should be shaped in some way cause of the 'important' vocals
01:10:891 (2,3) - Same as 00:42:766 (2,3)

[Normal]

I felt like the start was a bit inconsistent for a start, say 00:11:829 (1,2,3) - 00:15:579 (1,2,3,4) - are the same rhythm but completely different patterns, and yes, while 00:19:329 (1,2,3) - Was again the same, I felt like 00:15:579 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:19:329 (1,2,3) - should have been switched for a like AABB pattern (With 00:19:329 (1,2,3) - like patterns being A and 00:15:579 (1,2,3,4) - like patterns being B). Sorry if it's a bit confusing, I tried to get it out as clearly as possible xD
00:57:766 (2) - Curve this maybe? I feel like it's a bit too edgy right now
Otherwise, great diff ^^

Ehh, can't mod the other diffs, either too good or out of my playing range. Sorry Aki-senpai for not modding Insane >.<
Hope it helped, of not, don't give kudosu.
GL!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-16T03:47:08+00:00

_DT3 wrote:

Time for some late modding after your request o/

[Easy]
00:28:704 (3,4) - I feel like these should be different from 00:27:766 (2) - Cause the music sounds different there, since it currently plays the same, I feel like changing it so that gameplay matches up with the music but I was following the vocal here
00:42:766 (2,3) - I think these should be switched up cause the vocals here 00:42:766 - 00:43:079 sound connected and should be represented with a slider imo. Additionally, starting a slider on a downbeat might be a bit confusing for a new player, even if this placement was intentional I agree fixed
00:46:516 (2,3) - ^ I would say no for here cuz 00:46:516 (2,3) - have their own beats to emphasize and they're not connected at all
00:52:766 (4) - It is offscreen in 4:3 I think Okay I adjusted
00:58:704 (1,2,3,1,2) - I don't really like seeing so many straight sliders close to another, even if it's really slow, plus, 01:00:579 (1) - Imo, this slider should be shaped in some way cause of the 'important' vocals just put curve at 00:59:641 (2) - cuz of vocal pitch, well it's more stronger than 01:00:579 (1) - and it's pretty hard to fix atm ;w;
01:10:891 (2,3) - Same as 00:42:766 (2,3) sure

[Normal]
I felt like the start was a bit inconsistent for a start, say 00:11:829 (1,2,3) - 00:15:579 (1,2,3,4) - are the same rhythm but completely different patterns, and yes, while 00:19:329 (1,2,3) - Was again the same, I felt like 00:15:579 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:19:329 (1,2,3) - should have been switched for a like AABB pattern (With 00:19:329 (1,2,3) - like patterns being A and 00:15:579 (1,2,3,4) - like patterns being B). Sorry if it's a bit confusing, I tried to get it out as clearly as possible xD If you listen carefully 00:11:829 (1) - don't have any drums but only a guitar riff while 00:15:579 (1,2,3,4) - has drums so yeah, same for the following, I think it's consistent
00:57:766 (2) - Curve this maybe? I feel like it's a bit too edgy right now sure
Otherwise, great diff ^^

Ehh, can't mod the other diffs, either too good or out of my playing range. Sorry Aki-senpai for not modding Insane >.<
Hope it helped, of not, don't give kudosu.
GL!

Thank you very much for the mod

When will I make that kind of cool banner D:

awesometonychen

41 posts

Joined October 2014

awesometonychen 2016-08-17T22:41:24+00:00

Here is your mod

Easy

SPOILER

00:58:704 (1) - consider angling this slider more to the right it looks off to me
01:35:266 (2,3,1) - I guess you can try straightening this out so it looks neater

Normal

SPOILER

I think maybe slider tick rate = 2 suits this diff better?
00:59:641 (3,4) - maybe have this part look more like this:

01:08:391 (2,3,4,1,2) - if the circles were meant to be a straight line, it's off

Hard: nothing much I could find

Akitoshi's Insane:

SPOILER

00:18:391 (4,5,6,7) - this looks a bit weirdly placed to me
01:54:016 (6) - i think moving this closer to complete the star looks better

Misery

SPOILER

00:39:172 (5,6) - try putting the note before the slider I think it better suits the map and the music
00:38:704 (3) - 00:40:266 (2) - i don't think these circles fit into the music

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-18T04:02:26+00:00

awesometonychen wrote:
Here is your mod

Easy
SPOILER
00:58:704 (1) - consider angling this slider more to the right it looks off to me okay
01:35:266 (2,3,1) - I guess you can try straightening this out so it looks neater fixed

Normal
SPOILER
I think maybe slider tick rate = 2 suits this diff better? I think 1 is fine ;w;
00:59:641 (3,4) - maybe have this part look more like this: I guess it's fine as it is

01:08:391 (2,3,4,1,2) - if the circles were meant to be a straight line, it's off nope they were not meant to be a straight

Misery
SPOILER
00:39:172 (5,6) - try putting the note before the slider I think it better suits the map and the music I don't understand xD
00:38:704 (3) - 00:40:266 (2) - i don't think these circles fit into the music why? it shows the pitch of the guitar

Thanks for the mod!

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2016-08-19T06:36:41+00:00

hi
I didn't pick this map in my queue. but I just boring and found something. lol

[Akitoshi]

01:05:266 (5) - 01:04:797 (3) - The narrow distance between the two looks like messy. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5881336
01:25:891 (1) - this slider should be cut at 01:26:360 - here not 01:26:516 - here
01:48:391 (4) - 01:46:516 (5) - 01:50:266 (5) - these are a relatively narrow distance. for example) 01:42:766 (4) - 01:44:641 (6) - I want to recommend distance reunification of all.

[Misery]

00:33:391 (1) - is this really your best? nah. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5881350

that's all. always solid map

gl

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-19T06:44:45+00:00

I fixed that slider, thanks for the mod! will update when Aki is going to update his diff too ;w;

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-08-20T11:25:34+00:00

when rank janpai

Janpai

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Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-20T11:55:38+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
when rank janpai

idk xD when some BN would like to ;w;

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-08-21T05:24:22+00:00

Beomsan wrote:
[Akitoshi]
01:05:266 (5) - 01:04:797 (3) - The narrow distance between the two looks like messy. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5881336 i moved that a bit
01:25:891 (1) - this slider should be cut at 01:26:360 - here not 01:26:516 - here Elec Guitar actually ends there.
01:48:391 (4) - 01:46:516 (5) - 01:50:266 (5) - these are a relatively narrow distance. for example) 01:42:766 (4) - 01:44:641 (6) - I want to recommend distance reunification of all. they aren't overlapping so i think it will be fine imo

thank you~

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Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 2016-08-28T06:22:33+00:00

Hi-yo. From my queue. Hope this helps.

[Misery]

Map looks like a ranked map

00:31:516 (1) – Try making this a ½ slider instead since a ¾ slider makes this a bit intense when the section is overall calm and imo there's no need to emphasize anything when it takes the player out of the calm rhythm of this section.

00:39:172 (5,6) – Consider making this a jump instead?

00:39:954 (1,2) - try deleting (2) and just make (1) end there. Having this much note density feels too intense for the music. A slider end on this part of the music helps calm it down.

00:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) – This section of the music isn't that much stronger than before. I agree with the general feel of the pattern, but could you nerf the spacing by like 80 or 90%? The increased rhythm is good enough for a more intense section. Applies to every other jump part like this like 00:43:079 (2,3,4,5) - etc

01:55:579 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) – I would have done something like this: http://puu.sh/qR53I/9ebdb0fa65.jpg . The point is that (3) is a strong note since this is where the guitar hits, so I think you should change the flow here to make the new instrument feel new instead of repeating what you just did.

[Normal]

00:28:391 (3) – Have you tried this as just a circle? Relaxing the rhythm a bit could make this section a bit calmer with might have nicer pacing. Same applies to most of the ½ sliders in this section: 00:29:329 (2) - , 00:32:141 (3) - , etc

00:34:329 (1) – Imo, this doesn't feel right to have this as a break. The music isn't significantly weaker than what comes before it for me to want to stop playing. I suggest you map this and go with the guitar if you don't want to go with the singer.

01:03:860 (5,2) – These objects are really close/cramped. Either don't blanket 01:04:329 (1,2) – or set up (1) better to give these a bit of distance.

[Hard]

00:34:329 (1) – Same as Normal

01:01:985 (6,7) – Try making this one reverse slider. This part feels just a little too note dense.
01:15:110 (4,5) – Similarly, try deleting (5) and make (4) into a 1/1 slider. Goes kind of nicely with the singer and lowering the note density is good to set up the higher note density at 01:15:579 (1,2) -

01:25:891 (1) – hmmmm. I'm probably crazy, but try making this end at 01:26:438 - , sounds like the guitar ends here instead.

[Insane]

SV is really low. I'm not a fan.

00:38:079 (1) – There's rhythm in here. Might want to map it.

01:49:797 (3) – and 01:50:735 (7) – and 01:51:672 (3) – I like this rhythm a lot. I really think you nailed what the singer is doing with having these sliders being on the “tam's.” But then you break this pattern at 01:53:547 (3) - . It just feels like you're betraying what you're trying to do by not having this be a slider.

Overall nice mapset. Have a star. Good luck!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-28T06:58:35+00:00

pinataman wrote:
Hi-yo. From my queue. Hope this helps.

[Misery]

Map looks like a ranked map

00:31:516 (1) – Try making this a ½ slider instead since a ¾ slider makes this a bit intense when the section is overall calm and imo there's no need to emphasize anything when it takes the player out of the calm rhythm of this section. sure

00:39:172 (5,6) – Consider making this a jump instead? just unstacked and make it a little bit further

00:39:954 (1,2) - try deleting (2) and just make (1) end there. Having this much note density feels too intense for the music. A slider end on this part of the music helps calm it down. fixed

00:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) – This section of the music isn't that much stronger than before. I agree with the general feel of the pattern, but could you nerf the spacing by like 80 or 90%? The increased rhythm is good enough for a more intense section. Applies to every other jump part like this like 00:43:079 (2,3,4,5) - etc I hope I did right

01:55:579 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) – I would have done something like this: http://puu.sh/qR53I/9ebdb0fa65.jpg . The point is that (3) is a strong note since this is where the guitar hits, so I think you should change the flow here to make the new instrument feel new instead of repeating what you just did. I personally like the current pattern but I will gather more opinions

[Normal]

00:28:391 (3) – Have you tried this as just a circle? Relaxing the rhythm a bit could make this section a bit calmer with might have nicer pacing. Same applies to most of the ½ sliders in this section: 00:29:329 (2) - , 00:32:141 (3) - , etc sure fixed

00:34:329 (1) – Imo, this doesn't feel right to have this as a break. The music isn't significantly weaker than what comes before it for me to want to stop playing. I suggest you map this and go with the guitar if you don't want to go with the singer. I really intended to do a break here, yes maybe you're right that it isn't that weaker than previous sound but sounds kinda ideal to have a break here for me

01:03:860 (5,2) – These objects are really close/cramped. Either don't blanket 01:04:329 (1,2) – or set up (1) better to give these a bit of distance. did sth

[Hard]

00:34:329 (1) – Same as Normal ^^

01:01:985 (6,7) – Try making this one reverse slider. This part feels just a little too note dense. okay
01:15:110 (4,5) – Similarly, try deleting (5) and make (4) into a 1/1 slider. Goes kind of nicely with the singer and lowering the note density is good to set up the higher note density at 01:15:579 (1,2) - okie

01:25:891 (1) – hmmmm. I'm probably crazy, but try making this end at 01:26:438 - , sounds like the guitar ends here instead. that sound is really weak imo i guess it's fine

Overall nice mapset. Have a star. Good luck!

Thank you very much for the mod and star

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-08-30T10:08:46+00:00

recheck (as a bn this time!)

[Easy]
i think you can use ar 3 here. most rhythms are 2/1 and there are no potential overlaps
00:34:329 - unused timing point

[Normal]
and probably ar 5 here. again, there are no situations where patterns fade in before others fade out and most rhythms are spaced out
00:34:329 - unused timing point
00:40:657 - break is weirdly snapped here, just get rid of the blue bit
01:40:891 (4,5,6) - this plays the same as 01:55:891 (3,4,5) - yet there are more claps on 01:40:891 (4,5,6) . i assume you're not using the extra clap on 01:41:047 - to lower density. but tbh, i think its ok to do here to indicate a difference in rhythm because this diff is already quite low density

[Hard]
00:34:329 - timing point doesn't really do anything either
00:59:172 (2) - would be nice to change this to circle + 1/2 slider since the vocal starts in the middle of the slider
01:05:891 (5,1,2) - whats with spacing :/ clap on 01:07:141 (3) - seems to have the least amount
01:14:172 (2) - circle + 1/2 slider
01:56:204 (4,5,6,7) - hm freehand placement kinda looks sloppy. i think a pentagon (or hexagon if you want less curve) would look better

[Akitoshi's Insane]
hey your map is next in line
this could use od 8. with lack of triplets and a mostly jump map its pretty easy to acc
00:29:641 (4) - i assume ur using drum samplesets for the cymbals like on 00:28:391 (4) . if so, there should be one here 00:30:110
00:33:860 - 00:45:110 - 00:50:891 - ^
01:10:891 (1,3) - nazi: restack this since its a pixel off
01:17:454 (3) - 01:20:266 (4) - 01:22:141 (4) - you nc'ed every downbeat in ur kiai except in these places. is there a specific reason? (the one on 01:24:016 (4) - is fine)

[Misery]
perhaps you could use od 9. with similar reasoning i gave to akitoshi, this song is pretty much single tap so acc is easy, and making it od 9 is appropriate for 5.4 stars
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - this triangle still triggers me tbh
00:36:204 (1) - perhaps you could use a neater slider shape. this map uses mostly neat and simple sliders, yet this one feels out of place because of the wiggle. aesthetically i feel it could look better, but its up to you
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the jumps play very intuitively, nice work here!

call me back!

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-08-30T10:34:27+00:00

Pentori wrote:
recheck (as a bn this time!)

[Easy]
i think you can use ar 3 here. most rhythms are 2/1 and there are no potential overlaps
00:34:329 - unused timing point fixed all

[Normal]
and probably ar 5 here. again, there are no situations where patterns fade in before others fade out and most rhythms are spaced out okieee
00:34:329 - unused timing point fixed
00:40:657 - break is weirdly snapped here, just get rid of the blue bit but how xD idk where this came from xD
01:40:891 (4,5,6) - this plays the same as 01:55:891 (3,4,5) - yet there are more claps on 01:40:891 (4,5,6) . i assume you're not using the extra clap on 01:41:047 - to lower density. but tbh, i think its ok to do here to indicate a difference in rhythm because this diff is already quite low density okay fixed

[Hard]
00:34:329 - timing point doesn't really do anything either fixed xD
00:59:172 (2) - would be nice to change this to circle + 1/2 slider since the vocal starts in the middle of the slider sure
01:05:891 (5,1,2) - whats with spacing :/ clap on 01:07:141 (3) - seems to have the least amount yeah but the vocals seems kinda low down there and I alternated the emphasis of clap and drums
01:14:172 (2) - circle + 1/2 slider okay
01:56:204 (4,5,6,7) - hm freehand placement kinda looks sloppy. i think a pentagon (or hexagon if you want less curve) would look better idk if I did right but fixed xD

[Akitoshi's Insane]
hey your map is next in line
this could use od 8. with lack of triplets and a mostly jump map its pretty easy to acc
00:29:641 (4) - i assume ur using drum samplesets for the cymbals like on 00:28:391 (4) . if so, there should be one here 00:30:110
00:33:860 - 00:45:110 - 00:50:891 - ^
01:10:891 (1,3) - nazi: restack this since its a pixel off
01:17:454 (3) - 01:20:266 (4) - 01:22:141 (4) - you nc'ed every downbeat in ur kiai except in these places. is there a specific reason? (the one on 01:24:016 (4) - is fine)

[Misery]
perhaps you could use od 9. with similar reasoning i gave to akitoshi, this song is pretty much single tap so acc is easy, and making it od 9 is appropriate for 5.4 stars but if Aki's diff would be 8 seems like it's a pretty big jump from hard with OD 6
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - this triangle still triggers me tbh
00:36:204 (1) - perhaps you could use a neater slider shape. this map uses mostly neat and simple sliders, yet this one feels out of place because of the wiggle. aesthetically i feel it could look better, but its up to you fixed all xD
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the jumps play very intuitively, nice work here!

call me back!

Thank you very much! will call akitoshi :v btw should I give kds? xD

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-08-30T10:44:56+00:00

no kds haha

~~about od, i agree with you that 7.5 is ok for aki's insane, but could you make misery at least 8.7 or 8.8?~~
well since he did od 8 you can do 9 tbh, see what the next bn thinks

and with the pentagon in hard, delete what you have and use this

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just copy paste it in to the last line of your .osu file

Last edited by Pentori 2016-08-30T11:00:20+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-08-30T10:46:59+00:00

pinataman wrote:
[Insane]

SV is really low. I'm not a fan. hahahaha

00:38:079 (1) – There's rhythm in here. Might want to map it. Emphasized vocal

01:49:797 (3) – and 01:50:735 (7) – and 01:51:672 (3) – I like this rhythm a lot. I really think you nailed what the singer is doing with having these sliders being on the “tam's.” But then you break this pattern at 01:53:547 (3) - . It just feels like you're betraying what you're trying to do by not having this be a slider. changed to slider.

Pentori wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
hey your map is next in line :^)
this could use od 8. with lack of triplets and a mostly jump map its pretty easy to acc ok sure
00:29:641 (4) - i assume ur using drum samplesets for the cymbals like on 00:28:391 (4) . if so, there should be one here 00:30:110
00:33:860 - 00:45:110 - 00:50:891 - ^ nice
01:10:891 (1,3) - nazi: restack this since its a pixel off w
01:17:454 (3) - 01:20:266 (4) - 01:22:141 (4) - you nc'ed every downbeat in ur kiai except in these places. is there a specific reason? (the one on 01:24:016 (4) - is fine) oops

thanks guys~

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