Renard - PIZZZZZZZZ

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DeRandom Otaku
Updated Nino's diff =w=
VINXIS
isnt ths song haram lo :dddddddddddddddddddd
[Crz]Makii
from my queue
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:578 (1) - surely it's outscreen..last point is y392 overthan 384 limit,it's unrankable
  2. 00:56:578 (1) - unnecessary NC imo.

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:578 (1,2,3,4) - ahhh...maybe is too hard for beginners...
  2. ar5 maybe better?

[Adv]
  1. looks good,only one thing I think 00:31:378 (1) - stacking is a little strange...

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:778 (1,2) - increasing some distance,now looks like a 1/1 jump not 2/1

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:078 (4) - ctrl+G?看起来比现在好一点
  2. 00:56:578 (1) - 这个。。出界了啊

[Hao]
  1. 00:10:678 (4,5,6) - 00:11:878 (4,5,6) - why they are different in stacking or not...same rhythm better to use same patterns
  2. 00:21:778 (1) - outscreen
  3. 01:15:478 (6,7,8,9,1) - hmmm...flow's suddenly changed maybe make players can't catch this small stream.

I'm a stupid hao
GL! :)
meii18

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Byby's Advanced]
  1. 01:09:778 (1,3) - The angle is really sharp here and this do not look well when they are overlapping oops i don't know what happened here o.o fixed qwq
  2. Nice
Thanks Chaos!

[Crz]Sword wrote:

  1. looks good,only one thing I think 00:31:378 (1) - stacking is a little strange... it's not in my opinion.The music stops a bit here and I wanted to stack them :D
Thanks!

osu file format v14

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PreviewTime: 19078
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:PIZZZZZZZZ
TitleUnicode:PIZZZZZZZZ
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:DeRandom Otaku
Version:ByBy's Advanced
Source:
Tags:LAPFOX TRAX full techno jackass gabba breakcore nicki minaj stupid hoe Hardcore
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[Difficulty]
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Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

[Crz]Sword wrote:

from my queue
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:578 (1) - surely it's outscreen..last point is y392 overthan 384 limit,it's unrankable the slider ends on 381
  2. 00:56:578 (1) - unnecessary NC imo. its necessary

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:578 (1,2,3,4) - ahhh...maybe is too hard for beginners... its fine
  2. ar5 maybe better? considering the SR , AR 4 seems okay . maybe i will bump it later

[Hard]
  1. 00:45:778 (1,2) - increasing some distance,now looks like a 1/1 jump not 2/1 ok sure :3

[Hao]
  1. 00:10:678 (4,5,6) - 00:11:878 (4,5,6) - why they are different in stacking or not...same rhythm better to use same patterns eh , because theres no restriction about doing those lol
  2. 00:21:778 (1) - outscreen cool catch
  3. 01:15:478 (6,7,8,9,1) - hmmm...flow's suddenly changed maybe make players can't catch this small stream. its not hard to get it .. its easy owo

I'm a stupid hao
GL! :)
Thank you!~ c:
SnowNiNo_

[Crz]Sword wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:078 (4) - ctrl+G?看起来比现在好一点 故意這樣擺的XD
  2. 00:56:578 (1) - 这个。。出界了啊你看F5 還是打的到
thanks for mod
no fixed
Foxy Grandpa
Hi, sorry for the super late mod :c


  • [Otaku]
    Uastupidhao

  1. 00:13:078 (4) - It's sorta weird that you mapped ever other of the sorta triplet sound in the background but this one, just seems out of place a little bit. I think this should be a triplet just to be consistent with them
  2. 00:27:778 - Kind of an odd stop for a small break considering there's still stuff going on, and its the hardest diff. I tried adding something to it and that sounded pretty good, its not too hard of a pattern in that poart if you don't space out 6,7,8,9 out too much to keep the intensity of that part.

    Rest looks good, I like this diff a lot :)

    U a U a stupid ho :^)
    Hard
  3. 00:35:578 (3,4) - I think these should mirror 00:34:378 (3,4) - this is more for aesthetic purposes but i think it would look nicer :)
  4. 01:06:178 (1,2,1,2) - Ctrl + G'ing these would give it more variety than the same pattern as before.
  • [NiNo]
  1. 00:09:178 (1) - Maybe Ctrl + G this slider so it can lead into the next one

    All I could find :/, map is fun asfk tho :)


Couldn't find anything in the lower diffs, sorry for the short mod ):

Looks awesome, good luck ranking :D
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hi, sorry for the super late mod :c


  • [Otaku]
    Uastupidhao

  1. 00:13:078 (4) - It's sorta weird that you mapped ever other of the sorta triplet sound in the background but this one, just seems out of place a little bit. I think this should be a triplet just to be consistent with them Sounds cool
  2. 00:27:778 - Kind of an odd stop for a small break considering there's still stuff going on, and its the hardest diff. I tried adding something to it and i didnt map that part in all of my diffs and thats how i want it to be that sounded pretty good, its not too hard of a pattern in that poart if you don't space out 6,7,8,9 out too much to keep the intensity of that part.

    Rest looks good, I like this diff a lot :)

    U a U a stupid ho :^) d
    Hard
  3. 00:35:578 (3,4) - I think these should mirror 00:34:378 (3,4) - this is more for aesthetic purposes but i think it would look nicer :)nehh. different pattern here cuz reasons
  4. 01:06:178 (1,2,1,2) - Ctrl + G'ing these would give it more variety than the same pattern as before. That would ruin my concept D:


All I could find :/, map is fun asfk tho :)

Couldn't find anything in the lower diffs, sorry for the short mod ):

Looks awesome, good luck ranking :D
Thank you very much owo~
SnowNiNo_
@FoxyGrandpa : i think both would works, and i prefer mine more =w=
- Frontier -

From my queue



[EZ]
00:09:778 (1) - maybe move to 176|96 for the perfectly blanket
00:12:178 (3) - If I were you, I'll ctrl+g this D:

[NM]
Some notes like 00:46:978 (1,2,3,4) - I think they're too hard D: IMO making 2 1/1 sliders are better :v

Nothing to check anymore :D Looks like it's great! Shoot the stars!
Good luck!
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
=w= i dont even remember asking in ur queue

- Frontier - wrote:

From my queue



[EZ]
00:09:778 (1) - maybe move to 176|96 for the perfectly blanket That makes the blanket worse imo
00:12:178 (3) - If I were you, I'll ctrl+g this D: i like my pattern more D:

[NM]
Some notes like 00:46:978 (1,2,3,4) - I think they're too hard D: IMO making 2 1/1 sliders are better :v actually its not that hard , and its not easy diff aswell , its normal =w=

Nothing to check anymore :D Looks like it's great! Shoot the stars!
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod and star! <3
Chaoslitz
recheck

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:978 (1) - 00:56:578 (1) - 01:06:178 (1) - You don't need this NC


[Normal]
  1. 00:27:778 (1) - Del NC

call me back
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku

Chaoslitz wrote:

recheck

[Easy]
  1. 00:46:978 (1) - 00:56:578 (1) - 01:06:178 (1) - You don't need this NC removed all


[Normal]
  1. 00:27:778 (1) - Del NC i kinda want it here tbh =w= Theres an nc here in all my diffs including easy .. and i want it this way

call me back
Thank you so much!~ <3
Chaoslitz
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ima kms bye o/
Chalwa
GO GO GO RANKED GO GO GO :DD
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
Thank you so much chaos <3

and thank u all \w/
Bara-
[General]
For the Hard+ diffs, please add the following timing points, for the first notes to increase in volume (the 1/4)
9253,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0
9328,-100,4,2,0,42,0,0
9403,-100,4,2,0,48,0,0
9478,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
9553,-100,4,2,0,61,0,0
9628,-100,4,2,0,67,0,0
9703,-100,4,2,0,74,0,0

[Easy]
01:12:778 (2,1) - Only one complaint in this whole diff, this overlap is noticable (albeit it really small)

[Normal]
00:21:178 (5,6,1) - Why not make this a perfect triangle? (You don't need to worry about it being hard to read due to the distances being the same, since the final note has an NC
00:27:178 (2,3,1) - ^^
00:33:328 (5) - Whistle to the start?
00:56:578 (4) - NC? Kiai stopped here
01:15:178 (2,3) - This is, besides 00:33:328 (5) - the only 1/2 gap in the whole map. 00:33:328 (5) - has a reverse and then a note of impact, so the player doesn't need to move fast/react quickly (since it's like a 1/1 slider), but here the player needs te be faster than in any other part of the map

[ByBy]
00:16:978 (1) - Make it a circle and start the spinner 1/2 later for more emphasis please, Also, it seems to me that the spinner can better stop at 00:18:178 instead
00:23:878 (3,2) - Overlap is quite visible in gameplay
00:25:078 (3,6) - ^^
00:25:378 (4) - NC, you have a Nc every downbeat, except here
00:27:778 (4) - NC, kiai stopped here (and you did NC 00:56:578 (1) - )
00:33:028 (2,3) - Please use the same rhythm as 00:31:828 (2,3) - (but (3) can also be a circle
00:51:778 (1,2) - Blanket is quite off (reference)

[NiNo]
00:13:078 (4) - As (1,3) blanket in this combo, why not make (2,4) blanket as well?
00:19:828 (3,4,5,6) - This sounds absolutely overmapped. I beg you, please give all these sliderends a soft sampleset. It'll sound sooo much better
00:21:028 (3,4,5,6) - 00:22:228 (3,4,5,6) - 00:23:428 (3,4,5) - 00:24:628 (3,4,5,6) - 00:25:828 (3,4,5,6) - 00:27:028 (3,4,5,6) - ^^
00:37:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is a huge diffcurve, please tone it down a bit. Deleting this patterns made it go down to 4.6*, which is a decrease of 0.2*

[Stupid ***]
Nice diff, I'm only a bit worried about the fact that NiNo's diff is harder in the first kiai due to all the 1/4 sliders, while you have 1/2 sliders and small jumps
Anyways, it can be just your mappingstyles, so I don't bother about it too much

Well, call me back ^_^
Topic Starter
DeRandom Otaku
Fixed Pretty much everything except the whistle in normal we talked about in game owo

Thank you so much <3
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