Renard - PIZZZZZZZZ · forum

DeRandom Otaku

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-09T12:34:43+00:00

Come[Back]Home wrote:
Normal

00:25:078 (3) - You sure about letting that slider repeat on a downbeat? i dont -w- i kinda mapped it randomly .. i will change pattern when i come up with a good pattern

I dont really like this diff, looks so fast made without a second thought on visuals or quality. ;w;

Thats it, good luck :3

everything else in my diffs was fixed \w/ ~ Thanks !~

Marianna

1,392 posts

Joined July 2015

Marianna 2016-07-10T15:09:09+00:00

lol

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2016-07-10T21:45:37+00:00

@Flower: Fixed the issue with patterns thanks!
@CBH: Fixed only the issue with the strong beat.These sliders are not really weird in my opinion.Thanks for mod by the way!

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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2016-07-11T07:24:42+00:00

hmmm...

[baka]

no

[rabbit jumping style]

no

[hard]

no

have a 3 kudos instead since i can't find anything =w=/

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-11T09:44:10+00:00

Wyatt wrote:
Nino

00:20:428 (6,1) - This stream jump might be too hard. nah 1 need more emphaiszed so it wont be hard lol
00:22:828 (6,1) - ^
00:25:228 (6,1) - ^

Flower wrote:
[NiNo's Insane]
00:17:878 (4) - move a bit higher to 60,152 for better flow
00:20:428 (6) - the flow is a bit absurd. try this? i prefer curved
SPOILER
00:24:928 (4,5,6) - because it is not in the center, the "symmetric in a very-not-symmetric" pattern may have bad flow. give 5 a bit curve may give a better feel: keeping the shape
SPOILER
00:31:378 (1,2) - increase space between them nope consist the spacing at this part

Come[Back]Home wrote:
NiNo's Insane

00:19:828 (3) - This doesnt really fit with the song, and is weird to play. How about you let it end on the redtick and just place a circle one the head of 00:20:278 (4) - ? Same goes for the whole part, its really weird. lol is pretty fit to me tho, the kickslider are for expressing the strong sound (idk wat sound are they =w=, and it plays well either
01:09:328 (4,6) - Those being so close to each other looks kinda cramped, maybe increase the distance between those a bit?

lit120 wrote:
[rabbit jumping style]
no
haha xd

thanks for mod

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6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-07-11T10:04:57+00:00

No kudosu

[Advanced]
00:12:178 (1) - The dropoff makes it a bit unpredictable. There's no real reason to make it longer than other sliders so it might confuse the player. Please move (2).
00:16:978 (1) - That spinner is a bit too much lol, I advise to remove it. It fits better with the spread and is way easier to play.
00:27:778 (2) - NC or change its shape, it sounds really less powerful than the previous slider
00:29:428 - Stack leniency 0 is a bit harsh in such an easy diff tbh but it's up to you...
00:34:378 (3) - Its end is way more loud than its beginning. Plus, the 2 sounds are rather independant. Having a slider here is not a solution imo, what about an 1/2 reverse at 00:34:528 - ?
01:04:978 (1,2,3) - Having that 1.40x huge DS with an almost-linear flow makes it super hard to play for nothing and feel like jumps.

[Insane]
00:33:328 (3,4) - I guess you wanted to emphasize them by suddenly changing the direction here 00:33:328 - so imo (4) deserves more spacing to fit with that idea.
I don't really agree with the 1/4 sliders at 1st kiai but cool diff.

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-11T10:40:00+00:00

Marianna wrote:
lol

c:

lit120 wrote:
hmmm...

[baka]
no
[rabbit jumping style]
no
[hard]
no
have a 3 kudos instead since i can't find anything =w=/

ouo thanks :3

lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2016-07-12T06:25:12+00:00

Hey from my modding queue for NM!

Easy:
00:20:578 (3,1) - curve 1 a little less, it'll make the flow better imo
00:21:778 (1,2,3) - also here lower 2 a little maybe for flow purposes too
01:08:578 (3) - I feel like a straight or a slighty curves slider would look better here

Nice map ^^

Normal:
00:47:878 (4,1) - alignment isn't perfect
01:07:978 (2,3) - imperfect blanket, but it's slight
01:11:578 (6,1) - and here too
01:15:178 (2,3) - why u no align

I like this map as well

ByBy's Advanced:
00:12:778 (3,4) - this is probably on purpose, but my brain tells me alignment is wrong here
00:19:378 (1,2) - I'd change these so the red tick would be in the middle, looks a little weird like this
00:34:378 (3,4) - I'm maybe a bit picky on alignment :p
00:37:978 (3,1) - align 1 with end of 3 a little better maybe
01:10:228 (2,3) - rotate 3 for alignment maybe
If you don't want to align the parts I mentionned, do them maybe more like 01:13:378 (1,2) - this looks a lot nicer than barely not aligned ones. I prefer it either totally aligned or not at all

Great diff too :p

Hard:
00:27:478 (4,5,1) - stacks weird, maybe make it a linear singletap

I mean that's all I found

great diff

NiNo's Insane:
00:13:378 (1,2,3,4) - this looks nicer if you take 3,4 and scale by 1.2 or rotate by 20 degrees in any direction

SPOILER

liek dis or more than 1.2 for scaling

00:14:278 (6) - missed opportunity for triplet
00:15:478 (4) - same
00:16:678 (4) - same

Lots of fun playing this one ^^

Great mapset overall, all diffs have nice flow and rythm, they're also really fun to play because the music has such a unique rythmical pattern. Good luck ranking this!

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-12T09:09:11+00:00

lazyboy007 wrote:
Hey from my modding queue for NM!

Easy:
00:20:578 (3,1) - curve 1 a little less, it'll make the flow better imo tbh its fine currently as well
00:21:778 (1,2,3) - also here lower 2 a little maybe for flow purposes too Newbies also have a brain and eyes
01:08:578 (3) - I feel like a straight or a slighty curves slider would look better here umm nope =w=

Nice map ^^

Normal:
00:47:878 (4,1) - alignment isn't perfect ok fixed
01:07:978 (2,3) - imperfect blanket, but it's slight i tried
01:11:578 (6,1) - and here too did my best
01:15:178 (2,3) - why u no align not my kind of thing tbh

I like this map as well

Hard:
00:27:478 (4,5,1) - stacks weird, maybe make it a linear singletap eeee nope . i made it like that on purpose

I mean that's all I found great diff

Great mapset overall, all diffs have nice flow and rythm, they're also really fun to play because the music has such a unique rythmical pattern. Good luck ranking this!

thanks alot for mod and star c;

Ayya Novak

121 posts

Joined February 2015

Ayya Novak 2016-07-12T12:07:56+00:00

Hey.

STUPID HAO

00:16:078 (2,3,4,5) - idk, kick hits pretty hard here but those jumps are really low-spaced and that makes them feel weak in some way, maybe make them harder?
00:20:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - i would make this part look like that, but that's just my opinion.
00:24:178 (1,3) - i generally don't like overlaps but maybe this would be a solution?
00:29:578 (3,4,5) - - how about stacking (5) with the upcoming slider and inreasing spacing between (4) and (5)? idk
00:33:478 (3,4) - i feel like you should increase spacing here because music becomes more intense and those two notes do a transition between less and more intense parts.
00:37:678 - there's a 1/8 distorted kick playing so you should put a triple here.
01:14:278 (6,7) - move that (7) a little bit lower so the end of (6) points at it. Looks more aesthetically pleasing.

this is it - diff is really great.

NiNo's Insane

00:13:078 (4) - i know this is probably intentional, but i suggest turning this slider upside down.
00:14:278 (6) - triple here maybe
00:19:378 (1,2,3) - my solution
00:26:578 (1) - this slider doesn't work well with 00:27:028 (3) this one. try experimenting with it's shape so transition becomes more natural and good looking.
00:36:478 (2) - move it closer to (1), but not too much
00:37:678 (3) - once again, should be a triple here
00:40:828 (1) - there definitely should be a note + slider, as there are two syllables.
00:52:678 (5) - yeah, triple please
01:09:628 (6) - move this one further up

nice diff overall

Hard

00:50:278 (5) - maybe put a reverse slider here?
01:09:778 (1) - it points down, so the flow suffers a bit - try to bend it down, not up
i don't really have much to say, this map is just perfect imo

ByBy's Advanced

00:27:778 (2) - maybe rotate it by 15 degrees? and also put it slightly higher
00:30:628 (2) - this is what i would do here - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591965 - there's a strong beat and you miss it.
00:33:178 (2) - same here
00:45:778 (1,2,3) - spacing seems a bit too extreme tbh

everything else is fine, gj

i also don't think i should mod Easy or Normal, they're fine as well
so that's it :>
GL ranking this mapset.

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-12T12:33:24+00:00

avalanche wrote:
Hey.

STUPID HAO
00:16:078 (2,3,4,5) - idk, kick hits pretty hard here but those jumps are really low-spaced and that makes them feel weak in some way, maybe make them harder? ok spaced them more
00:20:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - i would make this part look like that, but that's just my opinion. i prefer my pattern here
00:24:178 (1,3) - i generally don't like overlaps but maybe this would be a solution? i prefer my pattern here
00:29:578 (3,4,5) - - how about stacking (5) with the upcoming slider and inreasing spacing between (4) and (5)? idk i m not sure what u r trying to say here
00:33:478 (3,4) - i feel like you should increase spacing here because music becomes more intense and those two notes do a transition between less and more intense parts. ok did something here
00:37:678 - there's a 1/8 distorted kick playing so you should put a triple here. not necessary
01:14:278 (6,7) - move that (7) a little bit lower so the end of (6) points at it. Looks more aesthetically pleasing. flow is better now

this is it - diff is really great.

Hard
00:50:278 (5) - maybe put a reverse slider here? umm nope
01:09:778 (1) - it points down, so the flow suffers a bit - try to bend it down, not up its not really important to make easy flows everywhere
i don't really have much to say, this map is just perfect imo

i also don't think i should mod Easy or Normal, they're fine as well
so that's it :>
GL ranking this mapset.

Thank you!~

Strategas

1,378 posts

Joined July 2013

Strategas 2016-07-13T16:33:04+00:00

[hao]

00:10:378 (3,4,5,6) - weird flow

00:17:278 (1,1,1) - nc spam is not necessary imo

00:26:578 (1) - this doesn't look good lol

00:32:578 (1,2) - you could improve visuals here http://image.prntscr.com/image/0c90e697 ... 79363e.png

[NiNo]

00:13:078 (4) - ctrl g? flow

00:25:678 (2,3,5) - this doesn't look good dood

00:38:578 (1,2) - flow

uhh a lot of bad looking overlaps that you could avoid

[hard]

00:16:078 (2,3) - this transition so weird into 3. 00:19:978 (3,4) - 00:21:178 (3,4) - much better

00:20:578 (1) - this shape again lol, it doesn't even blanket 00:21:178 (3) -

00:27:178 (3) - just make it straight or smth, it just breaks flow now into 00:27:478 (4) -

00:35:578 (3,4) - also weird transitioning

01:13:378 (1) - o boy

[ByBy]

00:14:578 (1,2) - poor blanket
00:51:778 (1,2) -

normal and easy seem fine

gl

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-14T06:14:14+00:00

lazyboy007 wrote:
NiNo's Insane:
00:13:378 (1,2,3,4) - this looks nicer if you take 3,4 and scale by 1.2 or rotate by 20 degrees in any direction i want them to stack.
SPOILER
liek dis or more than 1.2 for scaling
00:14:278 (6) - missed opportunity for triplet is fine tho it's an insane
00:15:478 (4) - same
00:16:678 (4) - same

Lots of fun playing this one ^^

avalanche wrote:
NiNo's Insane
00:13:078 (4) - i know this is probably intentional, but i suggest turning this slider upside down. nope
00:14:278 (6) - triple here maybe nope
00:19:378 (1,2,3) - my solution keeping the shape
00:26:578 (1) - this slider doesn't work well with 00:27:028 (3) this one. try experimenting with it's shape so transition becomes more natural and good looking. the flow is gd tho
00:36:478 (2) - move it closer to (1), but not too much nah consist the spacing
00:37:678 (3) - once again, should be a triple here just mapping the intense beat here
00:40:828 (1) - there definitely should be a note + slider, as there are two syllables. mainly vocal
00:52:678 (5) - yeah, triple please same
01:09:628 (6) - move this one further up ...

nice diff overall

Strategas wrote:
[NiNo]

00:13:078 (4) - ctrl g? flow for intentional

00:25:678 (2,3,5) - this doesn't look good dood lol k

00:38:578 (1,2) - flow is g to me =w=

uhh a lot of bad looking overlaps that you could avoid =w= but i want to keep the structure tho

thanks for mod

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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-14T08:37:11+00:00

Strategas wrote:
[hao]

00:10:378 (3,4,5,6) - weird flow its an extra diff xd

00:17:278 (1,1,1) - nc spam is not necessary imo ok did something here

00:26:578 (1) - this doesn't look good lol adjusted slider a bit uwu

00:32:578 (1,2) - you could improve visuals here http://image.prntscr.com/image/0c90e697 ... 79363e.png sure

[hard]

00:16:078 (2,3) - this transition so weird into 3. 00:19:978 (3,4) - 00:21:178 (3,4) - much better fixed

00:20:578 (1) - this shape again lol, it doesn't even blanket 00:21:178 (3) - is it important to blanie? D: adjusted shape tho

00:27:178 (3) - just make it straight or smth, it just breaks flow now into 00:27:478 (4) - aa nope i like the current pattern more here

00:35:578 (3,4) - also weird transitioning i like it :3

01:13:378 (1) - o boy ;w;

normal and easy seem fine

gl

Thanks!!~

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2016-07-14T21:29:31+00:00

=w=/

General

looks fine, but idk, maybe those lyrics are a bit vulgar and need a warning in description maybe.

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Stupid Hao

00:10:678 (4,5,6) - move these guys a little up to make an equal visual distance from both next and previous slider? Like this

00:14:878 (2,3,4,5) - seeing this makes me feel like the spacing is too short in general here. Not long ago you used a larger one on less strong notes at 00:13:678 (2,3,4) - for example. Spread them more.
00:16:078 (2,3,4,5) - same for these guys too, the rhythm is building up after all.

00:22:228 (2,3) - ctrl+g? It makes a nice flow imo and a good drop on 00:22:678 (5) -

00:30:178 (1) - the flow to this is a bit forced and not really predictable. What about something like thist instead?

00:35:278 (2,3,4) - as my first suggestion, giving an equal visual distance would make the map more polished, like this
00:34:978 (1,5) - blanket could be improved btw

00:49:378 (1) - move to around x58 y210? The emphasis should be kept on this circle and not on the next slider imo

01:10:378 (3) - ctrl+g?

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NiNo's Insane

00:13:078 (4) - ctrl+g to keep same flow as 00:12:178 (1,2) - ?

00:19:678 (2) - to avoid confusing this pattern with a 1/4 jump you use a lot, like 00:20:128 (4,5,6) - , I suggest stacking it on the next slider.
Same goes for all the similar patterns ahead. (it's consistent, but it's just for the sake of readability even more)

00:36:178 (1) - ctrl+g?

overall clean diff

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Hard

00:49:678 (3,4) - this movement doesn't convince me tbh so in the end I ended up using a repeat slider like this to get rid of the forced movement on that part, like this

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ByBy's Advanced

00:24:178 (1,2,1,2) - partea asta se poate mapa divers, e prea liniștită pentru a fi o Advanced diff. Încearcă sa pui mai multe 1/2 unde e posibil.

00:30:628 - prea gol, și ignori o notă importantă. 00:30:778 (2) - Mișcă asta 1/2 mai devreme
00:33:028 - la fel

Restu-l e bun așa cum este.

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Normal

00:31:378 (1,2,3) - I guess it's easy to play anyway, but I'd rather avoid it on Normal diffs tbh...

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Easy

cool diff

that's all =w=/

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-15T11:31:43+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
=w=/

General

looks fine, but idk, maybe those lyrics are a bit vulgar and need a warning in description maybe.

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Stupid Hao

00:10:678 (4,5,6) - move these guys a little up to make an equal visual distance from both next and previous slider? Like this

00:14:878 (2,3,4,5) - seeing this makes me feel like the spacing is too short in general here. Not long ago you used a larger one on less strong notes at 00:13:678 (2,3,4) - for example. Spread them more.
00:16:078 (2,3,4,5) - same for these guys too, the rhythm is building up after all.

00:22:228 (2,3) - ctrl+g? It makes a nice flow imo and a good drop on 00:22:678 (5) -

00:30:178 (1) - the flow to this is a bit forced and not really predictable. What about something like thist instead?

00:35:278 (2,3,4) - as my first suggestion, giving an equal visual distance would make the map more polished, like this
00:34:978 (1,5) - blanket could be improved btw

00:49:378 (1) - move to around x58 y210? The emphasis should be kept on this circle and not on the next slider imo

01:10:378 (3) - ctrl+g? i want my current pattern here uwu

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Hard

00:49:678 (3,4) - this movement doesn't convince me tbh so in the end I ended up using a repeat slider like this to get rid of the forced movement on that part, like this

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Normal

00:31:378 (1,2,3) - I guess it's easy to play anyway, but I'd rather avoid it on Normal diffs tbh... its oki =3=

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Easy

cool diff

that's all =w=/

Thank you very much!~

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2016-07-15T14:45:17+00:00

6th wrote:
No kudosu

[Advanced]
00:12:178 (1) - The dropoff makes it a bit unpredictable. There's no real reason to make it longer than other sliders so it might confuse the player. Please move (2). did in another way
00:16:978 (1) - That spinner is a bit too much lol, I advise to remove it. It fits better with the spread and is way easier to play. no it's not really long.I placed a spinner to take a bit break from 'clicking the objects'
00:27:778 (2) - NC or change its shape, it sounds really less powerful than the previous slider changed the shape.The NC doesn't fit here
00:29:428 - Stack leniency 0 is a bit harsh in such an easy diff tbh but it's up to you... it's not really harsh.That slider is for following the drum from music background
00:34:378 (3) - Its end is way more loud than its beginning. Plus, the 2 sounds are rather independant. Having a slider here is not a solution imo, what about an 1/2 reverse at 00:34:528 - ? sounds a bit awful to add another circle plus an 1/2 slider reverse.I prefer to keep the current one
01:04:978 (1,2,3) - Having that 1.40x huge DS with an almost-linear flow makes it super hard to play for nothing and feel like jumps. it's not really hard to play it.I testplayed it and it seems like it's easy to play it and aim (2)-

lazyboy007 wrote:
ByBy's Advanced:
00:12:778 (3,4) - this is probably on purpose, but my brain tells me alignment is wrong here actually it's on purpose
00:19:378 (1,2) - I'd change these so the red tick would be in the middle, looks a little weird like this should be fine now.fixed
00:34:378 (3,4) - I'm maybe a bit picky on alignment :p the alignment seems fine to me here o.o
00:37:978 (3,1) - align 1 with end of 3 a little better maybe fixed
01:10:228 (2,3) - rotate 3 for alignment maybe just moved (3)- a bit to right
If you don't want to align the parts I mentionned, do them maybe more like 01:13:378 (1,2) - this looks a lot nicer than barely not aligned ones. I prefer it either totally aligned or not at all

Great diff too :p Thanks! ^^

avalanche wrote:
ByBy's Advanced
00:27:778 (2) - maybe rotate it by 15 degrees? and also put it slightly higher i changed the slidershape as metioned in 6th's modding post
00:30:628 (2) - this is what i would do here - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5591965 - there's a strong beat and you miss it. uguu fixed
00:33:178 (2) - same here ^
00:45:778 (1,2,3) - spacing seems a bit too extreme tbh the spacing is not really extreme.I am still using 1.40x ds but the spacing is modifying here a bit because as you can see in timeline, there are some 'free' beats and the spacing comes to be a bit big as you expected

Strategas wrote:
[ByBy]

00:14:578 (1,2) - poor blanket the blanket seems to be fine here in my opinion
00:51:778 (1,2) - ^

MrSergio wrote:
ByBy's Advanced

00:24:178 (1,2,1,2) - partea asta se poate mapa divers, e prea liniștită pentru a fi o Advanced diff. Încearcă sa pui mai multe 1/2 unde e posibil. oops greseala mea fixat xD

00:30:628 - prea gol, și ignori o notă importantă. 00:30:778 (2) - Mișcă asta 1/2 mai devreme deja am fixat intr-un mod anterior dar buna sugestie
00:33:028 - la fel^
Restu-l e bun așa cum este. Multumesc mult si este 'restul' nu 'restu-l'

Thanks all!

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Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,307 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-07-16T05:44:01+00:00

M4MMMMMMMMM

[Normal]

00:25:378 - This is a downbeat, try something clickable in order to emphasize?

[Byby's Advanced]

01:09:778 (1,3) - The angle is really sharp here and this do not look well when they are overlapping
Nice

[Nino's Insane]

00:14:278 (6,1) - The spacing here just contradict with the downbeat

[Stupid Hao]

00:34:228 (2,3,4) - They shouldn't have the same spacing, try to move 00:34:528 (4) closer to 00:34:378 (3)

Couldn't find much thing here.
Actually you don't need to use whistle in every single object in Easy and Normal diff, in my opinion you can also reduce the use of whistle in the third kiai, just follow what you have done for the 4th, having whistle in all beat is pretty noisy

Good Luck

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-16T08:33:46+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
M4MMMMMMMMM
Couldn't find much thing here.
Actually you don't need to use whistle in every single object in Easy and Normal diff, in my opinion you can also reduce the use of whistle in the third kiai, just follow what you have done for the 4th, having whistle in all beat is pretty noisy
Good Luck

Well .. the third kiai has a kick sound on every 1/2 beat , thats why i spammed whistle so much ;;

Fixed both in stuff in normal and extra btw .. Thank you :>

Waiting for Nino and Byby =w=

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-17T07:55:36+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
NiNo's Insane

00:13:078 (4) - ctrl+g to keep same flow as 00:12:178 (1,2) - ? nah is for intentional xd

00:19:678 (2) - to avoid confusing this pattern with a 1/4 jump you use a lot, like 00:20:128 (4,5,6) - , I suggest stacking it on the next slider.
Same goes for all the similar patterns ahead. (it's consistent, but it's just for the sake of readability even more) well i dont prefer stack in kiai, cuz stack usually used in calm part not in intense part excpet there are some sound that could used stack to express, but the sound here isnt good to used stack to express imo

00:36:178 (1) - ctrl+g? nah i want them to have the same direction xd
overall clean diff owob

Chaoslitz wrote:
[Nino's Insane]
00:14:278 (6,1) - The spacing here just contradict with the downbeat increased the spacing

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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-17T13:55:01+00:00

Updated Nino's diff =w=

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,161 posts

Joined April 2014

VINXIS 2016-07-18T01:46:24+00:00

isnt ths song haram lo :dddddddddddddddddddd

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

[Crz]Makii 2016-07-18T04:05:22+00:00

from my queue
[Easy]

00:14:578 (1) - surely it's outscreen..last point is y392 overthan 384 limit,it's unrankable
00:56:578 (1) - unnecessary NC imo.

[Normal]

00:14:578 (1,2,3,4) - ahhh...maybe is too hard for beginners...
ar5 maybe better?

[Adv]

looks good,only one thing I think 00:31:378 (1) - stacking is a little strange...

[Hard]

00:45:778 (1,2) - increasing some distance,now looks like a 1/1 jump not 2/1

[Insane]

00:13:078 (4) - ctrl+G?看起来比现在好一点
00:56:578 (1) - 这个。。出界了啊

[Hao]

00:10:678 (4,5,6) - 00:11:878 (4,5,6) - why they are different in stacking or not...same rhythm better to use same patterns
00:21:778 (1) - outscreen
01:15:478 (6,7,8,9,1) - hmmm...flow's suddenly changed maybe make players can't catch this small stream.

~~I'm a stupid hao~~
GL!

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2016-07-18T08:02:57+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
[Byby's Advanced]
01:09:778 (1,3) - The angle is really sharp here and this do not look well when they are overlapping oops i don't know what happened here o.o fixed qwq
Nice

Thanks Chaos!

[Crz]Sword wrote:
looks good,only one thing I think 00:31:378 (1) - stacking is a little strange... it's not in my opinion.The music stops a bit here and I wanted to stack them

Thanks!

Updated!

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.4
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GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:PIZZZZZZZZ
TitleUnicode:PIZZZZZZZZ
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:DeRandom Otaku
Version:ByBy's Advanced
Source:
Tags:LAPFOX TRAX full techno jackass gabba breakcore nicki minaj stupid hoe Hardcore
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-18T08:13:37+00:00

[Crz]Sword wrote:
from my queue
[Easy]
00:14:578 (1) - surely it's outscreen..last point is y392 overthan 384 limit,it's unrankable the slider ends on 381
00:56:578 (1) - unnecessary NC imo. its necessary
[Normal]
00:14:578 (1,2,3,4) - ahhh...maybe is too hard for beginners... its fine
ar5 maybe better? considering the SR , AR 4 seems okay . maybe i will bump it later
[Hard]
00:45:778 (1,2) - increasing some distance,now looks like a 1/1 jump not 2/1 ok sure :3
[Hao]
00:10:678 (4,5,6) - 00:11:878 (4,5,6) - why they are different in stacking or not...same rhythm better to use same patterns eh , because theres no restriction about doing those lol
00:21:778 (1) - outscreen cool catch
01:15:478 (6,7,8,9,1) - hmmm...flow's suddenly changed maybe make players can't catch this small stream. its not hard to get it .. its easy owo
~~I'm a stupid hao~~
GL!

Thank you!~ c:

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-18T18:36:35+00:00

[Crz]Sword wrote:
[Insane]
00:13:078 (4) - ctrl+G?看起来比现在好一点故意這樣擺的XD
00:56:578 (1) - 这个。。出界了啊你看F5 還是打的到

thanks for mod
no fixed

Foxy Grandpa

709 posts

Joined January 2015

Foxy Grandpa 2016-07-19T03:59:10+00:00

Hi, sorry for the super late mod :c

[Otaku]
Uastupidhao

00:13:078 (4) - It's sorta weird that you mapped ever other of the sorta triplet sound in the background but this one, just seems out of place a little bit. I think this should be a triplet just to be consistent with them
00:27:778 - Kind of an odd stop for a small break considering there's still stuff going on, and its the hardest diff. I tried adding something to it and that sounded pretty good, its not too hard of a pattern in that poart if you don't space out 6,7,8,9 out too much to keep the intensity of that part.

Rest looks good, I like this diff a lot

U a U a stupid ho :^)
Hard
00:35:578 (3,4) - I think these should mirror 00:34:378 (3,4) - this is more for aesthetic purposes but i think it would look nicer
01:06:178 (1,2,1,2) - Ctrl + G'ing these would give it more variety than the same pattern as before.

[NiNo]

00:09:178 (1) - Maybe Ctrl + G this slider so it can lead into the next one

All I could find :/, map is fun asfk tho

Couldn't find anything in the lower diffs, sorry for the short mod ):

Looks awesome, good luck ranking

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-19T08:30:38+00:00

FoxyGrandpa wrote:
Hi, sorry for the super late mod :c

[Otaku]
Uastupidhao
00:13:078 (4) - It's sorta weird that you mapped ever other of the sorta triplet sound in the background but this one, just seems out of place a little bit. I think this should be a triplet just to be consistent with them Sounds cool
00:27:778 - Kind of an odd stop for a small break considering there's still stuff going on, and its the hardest diff. I tried adding something to it and i didnt map that part in all of my diffs and thats how i want it to be that sounded pretty good, its not too hard of a pattern in that poart if you don't space out 6,7,8,9 out too much to keep the intensity of that part.

Rest looks good, I like this diff a lot

U a U a stupid ho :^) d
Hard
00:35:578 (3,4) - I think these should mirror 00:34:378 (3,4) - this is more for aesthetic purposes but i think it would look nicer nehh. different pattern here cuz reasons
01:06:178 (1,2,1,2) - Ctrl + G'ing these would give it more variety than the same pattern as before. That would ruin my concept D:
All I could find :/, map is fun asfk tho

Couldn't find anything in the lower diffs, sorry for the short mod ):

Looks awesome, good luck ranking

Thank you very much owo~

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-20T06:31:41+00:00

@FoxyGrandpa : i think both would works, and i prefer mine more =w=

- Frontier -

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- Frontier - 2016-07-20T12:50:27+00:00

From my queue

[EZ]
00:09:778 (1) - maybe move to 176|96 for the perfectly blanket
00:12:178 (3) - If I were you, I'll ctrl+g this D:

[NM]
Some notes like 00:46:978 (1,2,3,4) - I think they're too hard D: IMO making 2 1/1 sliders are better :v

Nothing to check anymore

Looks like it's great! Shoot the stars!
Good luck!

DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-20T16:16:53+00:00

=w= i dont even remember asking in ur queue

- Frontier - wrote:
From my queue

[EZ]
00:09:778 (1) - maybe move to 176|96 for the perfectly blanket That makes the blanket worse imo
00:12:178 (3) - If I were you, I'll ctrl+g this D: i like my pattern more D:

[NM]
Some notes like 00:46:978 (1,2,3,4) - I think they're too hard D: IMO making 2 1/1 sliders are better :v actually its not that hard , and its not easy diff aswell , its normal =w=

Nothing to check anymore Looks like it's great! Shoot the stars!
Good luck!

Thanks for the mod and star! <3

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

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Chaoslitz 2016-07-26T10:59:57+00:00

recheck

[Easy]

00:46:978 (1) - 00:56:578 (1) - 01:06:178 (1) - You don't need this NC

[Normal]

00:27:778 (1) - Del NC

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DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-26T11:30:01+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
recheck

[Easy]
00:46:978 (1) - 00:56:578 (1) - 01:06:178 (1) - You don't need this NC removed all
[Normal]
00:27:778 (1) - Del NC i kinda want it here tbh =w= Theres an nc here in all my diffs including easy .. and i want it this way

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Thank you so much!~ <3

Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2016-07-26T12:15:48+00:00

Bubbled

worst fl player

worst fl player 2016-07-26T12:20:05+00:00

\:3/

Yukiyo

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Yukiyo 2016-07-26T12:21:09+00:00

Gratz

ima kms bye o/

Chalwa

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Chalwa 2016-07-26T12:21:09+00:00

GO GO GO RANKED GO GO GO

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DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-26T12:38:24+00:00

Thank you so much chaos <3

and thank u all \w/

Bara-

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Bara- 2016-07-27T12:28:18+00:00

[General]
For the Hard+ diffs, please add the following timing points, for the first notes to increase in volume (the 1/4)

9253,-100,4,2,0,36,0,0
9328,-100,4,2,0,42,0,0
9403,-100,4,2,0,48,0,0
9478,-100,4,2,0,55,0,0
9553,-100,4,2,0,61,0,0
9628,-100,4,2,0,67,0,0
9703,-100,4,2,0,74,0,0

[Easy]
01:12:778 (2,1) - Only one complaint in this whole diff, this overlap is noticable (albeit it really small)

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:21:178 (5,6,1) - Why not make this a perfect triangle? (You don't need to worry about it being hard to read due to the distances being the same, since the final note has an NC
00:27:178 (2,3,1) - ^^
00:33:328 (5) - Whistle to the start?
00:56:578 (4) - NC? Kiai stopped here
01:15:178 (2,3) - This is, besides 00:33:328 (5) - the only 1/2 gap in the whole map. 00:33:328 (5) - has a reverse and then a note of impact, so the player doesn't need to move fast/react quickly (since it's like a 1/1 slider), but here the player needs te be faster than in any other part of the map

[ByBy]
00:16:978 (1) - Make it a circle and start the spinner 1/2 later for more emphasis please, Also, it seems to me that the spinner can better stop at 00:18:178 instead
00:23:878 (3,2) - Overlap is quite visible in gameplay
00:25:078 (3,6) - ^^
00:25:378 (4) - NC, you have a Nc every downbeat, except here
00:27:778 (4) - NC, kiai stopped here (and you did NC 00:56:578 (1) - )
00:33:028 (2,3) - Please use the same rhythm as 00:31:828 (2,3) - (but (3) can also be a circle
00:51:778 (1,2) - Blanket is quite off (reference)

[NiNo]
00:13:078 (4) - As (1,3) blanket in this combo, why not make (2,4) blanket as well?
00:19:828 (3,4,5,6) - This sounds absolutely overmapped. I beg you, please give all these sliderends a soft sampleset. It'll sound sooo much better
00:21:028 (3,4,5,6) - 00:22:228 (3,4,5,6) - 00:23:428 (3,4,5) - 00:24:628 (3,4,5,6) - 00:25:828 (3,4,5,6) - 00:27:028 (3,4,5,6) - ^^
00:37:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is a huge diffcurve, please tone it down a bit. Deleting this patterns made it go down to 4.6*, which is a decrease of 0.2*

SPOILER

[Stupid ***]
Nice diff, I'm only a bit worried about the fact that NiNo's diff is harder in the first kiai due to all the 1/4 sliders, while you have 1/2 sliders and small jumps
Anyways, it can be just your mappingstyles, so I don't bother about it too much

Well, call me back ^_^

DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2016-07-27T12:44:40+00:00

Fixed Pretty much everything except the whistle in normal we talked about in game owo

Thank you so much <3

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