ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION - rewrite · forum

Irohas

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-24T09:11:10+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
ehh about the title why you wrote "rewrite"? i think "Rewrite" is correct
Source : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rewrite_(song)

I've already had a confirmation from KwaN with that!

IamKwaN wrote:
Sure thing!

Unicode Title: リライト
Romanised Title: rewrite
Artist: ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
Source: 鋼の錬金術師

References:
http://puu.sh/pOMwM/bdf040a8e2.png from http://www.asiankung-fu.com/disco/archive/?KSCL-925
http://puu.sh/pOMEy/5f19508aee.jpg from http://www.asiankung-fu.com/eng/disco/KSCL-925.html

Good luck!

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-07-25T13:05:15+00:00

Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[General]

Soft-sliderslide2 is not used.

[pkhg's Easy]
Check AiMod, there's a lot of unsnapped timing lines

00:01:381 - 00:11:437 - etc... sometimes, doing stuff like these can be considered as unrankable. i know some issue like this a year ago in teichan aka lavender's map. he used a lot of custom slidertick to replace it as clap/drum sound. you might want to reduce some stuff like these, oh yea. you do the slidertick stuff only after this part 00:03:437 - then you started again from 00:11:437 - which is inconsistent while 00:07:460 - has that drum sound too, so... yeah
00:04:109 (2,3) - Nazi, blanket. actually its not noticable at all but consider fixing it
00:20:198 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, you can see it from the difference between follow points on 00:19:862 - to 00:20:197 - .
00:21:204 (4,2) - avoidable overlap imo because they doesnt look tidy at all
00:59:433 (1) - just a suggestion, i believe the tail can be stacked with 00:57:422 (2) - 's tail so it'll look more tidy
01:10:159 (1) - i believe its posibble to cover up the red node edge here by adjusting those curves
01:14:852 (3,1) - is this intended to be like this? not blanketed?

Pretty cool diff. tho i still dont understand why are you doing those slidertick stuff its rare nowadays that people use it

[Normal]

00:09:471 (3) - maybe you can move this to 260|237 so it will create a nice triangular pattern with 00:08:465 (1,2) -
00:18:856 (3,1) - nazi, blanket
00:21:370 (2,3) - the stack you made here caused the spacing inconsistent from 00:20:532 (1) - to 00:21:370 (2,3) - . probably manually move them would help or moving it too 371|302 can cover up the issue oh actually, there's a few objects in this diff that has the same issue, consider to fix them
00:23:884 (2,3,1) - same thing like above
00:44:014 (2,1) - nazi, the blanket is a bit off lol
00:59:433 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing
01:00:774 (1) - personally, i didnt like most design of this kind of slider. perhaps you can change them into a wave one would help
01:00:774 (1,2,1) - is the inconsistent spacing here intentional?
01:05:802 (3,1) - avoidable overlap with 01:06:137 (1) - . i do adjust 01:06:137 (1) - this a bit so it both tails wont be overlapped
01:07:478 (1) - is the last red node is intended? it seems necessary to me...
01:08:483 (2,1) - blanket xd
01:09:824 (4,3,1) - avoidable overlap too imo..
01:17:366 (2,3) - same issue with those stack stuff. but this should be moved to 345|213 so (2) wont touched with (1)'s tail
01:19:545 (3) - hmm just a warning. sometimes, wiggle sliders aren't allowed to use due to their slider design that can slower the sliderspeed. consider to change this into something more smoother
01:30:941 (2,1) - ah... should be a 1.40x imo so the emphasize here won't be break

Its rare to see spaced 1/2 sliders in Normal, thats so unique!

[Hazu's Hard]

00:21:035 (2,3,4,5) - ok jumps on intro isnt comfortable to play. you might want to replace 00:21:203 (4) - with a 1/2 slider instead and remove 00:21:370 -
00:25:895 (1) - the wave could be better imo
00:33:772 (1) - same thing
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you reduce the spacing on 00:58:260 (2,3,4) - ? this is still a hard diff, no need to make jumps with spacing like that xd
01:09:908 - i believe this 1/4 tick can be mapped. you should consider to change the whole part of 01:09:824 - to 01:10:075 - into a 1/4 repeated sliders
SPOILER

Pretty nice diff tho i still wanted you to reduce the big jumps there keep up the good work~

[Insane]

00:52:562 (5,1) - can you try a different angle from (5)>(1)? i tested it and the jumps plays weird and a bit confusing since most of the jumps in this diff are moving to leftwards if you understand what i mean
00:55:244 (5,1) - this too, but this leftwards plays different. you suddenly have to move your cursor into upwards which is weird. consider to change the angle of this jump too

actually... i didnt found any issue on this diff LOL i mod insanes and upper based on my playing skill so.. pardon if its not helpful at all ><

[Rewrite]
Can you use another diffname rather using the song title as diffname? xd There's a 3 Choice. Dignity, Fantasy or Freedom. everything is taken from the lyric but for personal. i'd pick Dignity as Diffname because it sounds cool

00:10:979 (6) - can you ctrl+g this? i'd recommend you to ctrl+g tho. current cursor movement is weird, sometimes kicksliders to kicksliders usually have jump between it, so why dont you make it a jump? so there'll be a better emphasize to on 00:10:979 (6,1) -
00:17:180 (3,4) - ctrl+g manually? i find it plays better when you ctrl+g them manually means ctrl+g them one by one. it will plays like this which is a lot better and can made a better emphasize too for 00:17:515 (4,1) -
SPOILER
00:37:460 (3,4) - please, put a jump gap there :c i mean, put a jump so players can play it more fun. uh, a bit hard to explain lol. most mappers mostly put jumps when there's a sliderkick > streams, but the jump isnt that big. you can made the jump looks standard, on your own. so consider to put a little jump there
01:04:462 (6) - you may want to move this to 120|233 so there'll be a jump that can make player's cursor movement to downwards instead rightwards
01:09:908 - ahhh this should be mapped :c its the highest diff anyway ;c
01:32:786 (1,2) - intended blanket? or it shouldnt be like that

Nice jumpy diff!

[]
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand!
Good Luck!

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-25T15:32:08+00:00

Haruto wrote:
Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[General]
Soft-sliderslide2 is not used.
[Normal]
00:09:471 (3) - maybe you can move this to 260|237 so it will create a nice triangular pattern with 00:08:465 (1,2) - good eye!
00:18:856 (3,1) - nazi, blanket okay
00:21:370 (2,3) - the stack you made here caused the spacing inconsistent from 00:20:532 (1) - to 00:21:370 (2,3) - . probably manually move them would help or moving it too 371|302 can cover up the issue oh actually, there's a few objects in this diff that has the same issue, consider to fix them because of DS D: but yeah fixed
00:23:884 (2,3,1) - same thing like above okay
00:44:014 (2,1) - nazi, the blanket is a bit off lol fixed
00:59:433 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing oops
01:00:774 (1) - personally, i didnt like most design of this kind of slider. perhaps you can change them into a wave one would help okay removed all of these
01:00:774 (1,2,1) - is the inconsistent spacing here intentional? already fixed when I applied ^
01:05:802 (3,1) - avoidable overlap with 01:06:137 (1) - . i do adjust 01:06:137 (1) - this a bit so it both tails wont be overlapped overlap here looks cool imo
01:07:478 (1) - is the last red node is intended? it seems necessary to me... fixed
01:08:483 (2,1) - blanket xd okay
01:09:824 (4,3,1) - avoidable overlap too imo.. we don't see it when playing
01:17:366 (2,3) - same issue with those stack stuff. but this should be moved to 345|213 so (2) wont touched with (1)'s tail okay okay applied this
01:19:545 (3) - hmm just a warning. sometimes, wiggle sliders aren't allowed to use due to their slider design that can slower the sliderspeed. consider to change this into something more smoother okay changed it D:
01:30:941 (2,1) - ah... should be a 1.40x imo so the emphasize here won't be break okay fixed!

Its rare to see spaced 1/2 sliders in Normal, thats so unique! Yes, I know but it looks cool to me
[Insane]
00:52:562 (5,1) - can you try a different angle from (5)>(1)? i tested it and the jumps plays weird and a bit confusing since most of the jumps in this diff are moving to leftwards if you understand what i mean Maybe but, actually I don't really know how to make this differently as my main pattern is the star, but I think it's not really bad to play, but sure I'll keep in mind this to try making this differently D:
00:55:244 (5,1) - this too, but this leftwards plays different. you suddenly have to move your cursor into upwards which is weird. consider to change the angle of this jump too I think change of direction would show more emphasis imo

actually... i didnt found any issue on this diff LOL i mod insanes and upper based on my playing skill so.. pardon if its not helpful at all >< Don't worry, It was really helpful!
[Rewrite]
Can you use another diffname rather using the song title as diffname? xd There's a 3 Choice. Dignity, Fantasy or Freedom. everything is taken from the lyric but for personal. i'd pick Dignity as Diffname because it sounds cool Hmm yeah maybe, okay I'll try!
00:10:979 (6) - can you ctrl+g this? i'd recommend you to ctrl+g tho. current cursor movement is weird, sometimes kicksliders to kicksliders usually have jump between it, so why dont you make it a jump? so there'll be a better emphasize to on 00:10:979 (6,1) - okay okay sure, why not
00:17:180 (3,4) - ctrl+g manually? i find it plays better when you ctrl+g them manually means ctrl+g them one by one. it will plays like this which is a lot better and can made a better emphasize too for 00:17:515 (4,1) -
SPOILER
ooh yes it'll surely looks better, okay!
00:37:460 (3,4) - please, put a jump gap there :c i mean, put a jump so players can play it more fun. uh, a bit hard to explain lol. most mappers mostly put jumps when there's a sliderkick > streams, but the jump isnt that big. you can made the jump looks standard, on your own. so consider to put a little jump there okay increased a bit spacing and moved it a bit down, I think it'll play well now !
01:04:462 (6) - you may want to move this to 120|233 so there'll be a jump that can make player's cursor movement to downwards instead rightwards okay fixed this
01:09:908 - ahhh this should be mapped :c its the highest diff anyway ;c oops totally forgot, nice D:
01:32:786 (1,2) - intended blanket? or it shouldnt be like that yes a bad blanket...

Nice jumpy diff! Thank you
[]
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand! I understood everything, and thank you your mod was helpful !
Good Luck!

Thanks !

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-07-25T21:11:30+00:00

Haruto wrote:
Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[Hazu's Hard]
00:21:035 (2,3,4,5) - ok jumps on intro isnt comfortable to play. you might want to replace 00:21:203 (4) - with a 1/2 slider instead and remove 00:21:370 -
00:25:895 (1) - the wave could be better imo
00:33:772 (1) - same thing
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - can you reduce the spacing on 00:58:260 (2,3,4) - ? this is still a hard diff, no need to make jumps with spacing like that xd
01:09:908 - i believe this 1/4 tick can be mapped. you should consider to change the whole part of 01:09:824 - to 01:10:075 - into a 1/4 repeated sliders
SPOILER

Pretty nice diff tho i still wanted you to reduce the big jumps there keep up the good work~ Thanks ;w;
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand!
Good Luck!

No complaints, all fixed, Thanks~

Poi

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iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2016-07-27T18:47:56+00:00

Hi Mugiwara! Just passing by to leave some thoughts, just a random mod xd fma <3

[General]

idk but why does pkhg's diff only have a different bg? maybe for hazu too? no problem though but i wanted to mention it xd
maybe low hp of insane to 6? so it scales like 5-6-7 in the hardest diffs

[Dignidad]
00:03:772 (3,4,5) - The actual transition from 4 to 5 and then from 5 to 6 seems to be a bit unnatural to follow, I guess it'd be better if you make some horizontal movements so it flows better imo. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/qgpUH/645dd83f6d.jpg
00:04:275 (5) - NC here? and also 00:05:784 (3) - make the NC here since the downbeat is more intuitive for a nc i guess.
00:10:812 (5,6,1) - This transition over here I really don't like it... it feels too crowded with those overlaps and low distance from each other sliders. I would suggest to make the 2nd stream more curvish and maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/qgqtf/fc820bca2e.jpg ? I think the pattern would play smoother~ Btw... if you do so, maybe try this linear flow for 00:10:141 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/qgqBI/cc6750db7b.jpg The actual one seems to be a bad blanket I guess which is not bad but idk xd
00:13:828 (1,3) - idk if you care about blankets, but maybe fix that?
00:25:895 (1,3) - ^
00:29:918 (1,2,3,4) - I guess this is some good stuff, however I find it pretty boring and monotonous to play because you use it 5 times incluiding 00:29:247 (3) - Also I'd suggest to make 00:30:588 (3) - into 2 circles because there are two downbeats that would be better if you make them clickable.
Therefore I'd suggest something like this http://puu.sh/qgrQ7/97df9b0f5f.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgrRK/7064a7f6ea.jpg ?
00:37:460 (3) - make it a bit curvish so it flows better to the stream?
00:48:708 (1) - delete the last grey node? just a detail xd
00:48:708 (1,2,3) - The flow here feels a bit awkward in my opinion, mainly because 00:48:708 (1) - doesn't follow the curvature of the stream and also because of 00:49:043 (2,3) - this jump that feels too forced i guess. Maybe you can build a better flow with a pattern like http://puu.sh/qgsjo/d2bcfae50a.jpg ?
00:58:261 (2,3) - Add a bit more distance here to make the jumps more consistent? Maybe a symetrical star would work for this.
00:59:099 (1,1) - Maybe http://puu.sh/qgsr5/0301355104.jpg for better flow?
01:19:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For the first stream I think you can curve it a bit so the flow is smoother. Also I don't really like this overlap of both streams. I guess i'd suggest you something like this: http://puu.sh/qgsOr/a1ec74e8e7.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgsRQ/ee28572d20.jpg (where 01:21:556 (3,5) - is a blanket)
01:33:959 (5,6,1) - why the distance? would be better if you stack them with 0,5x I guess~
01:34:797 (1,2) - idk but since the intensity of the music here is the same for 01:35:300 (3,4) - this, i'd suggest to add some more distance for 01:34:797 (1,2) - maybe.
01:35:300 (1) - maybe NC?

[Insane]
00:23:884 (3,4) - this stack seems to be the only one in all this section so it's a bit weird when playing, consider unstack.
00:53:400 (3,4,3,4) - These double stack are totally fine.. it's just that you could've made them more consistent troughout the section. e.g 00:53:400 (3,4) - these is cool stuf because both are strong beats, however 00:54:909 (3,4) - here is not the case, where 00:55:075 - gives less emphasis for a stack. Just my opinion btw~
The rest seems to be ok, nice diff

[Hazu]
Hola... de nuevo xdd
00:09:136 (3,4) - Quizás hacer que tengan el mismo "shape"? no sé como decirlo en español xd forma?
00:39:321 (1,4) - La verdad el único "problema" que veo a primera vista es este overlap, en donde llega a ser muy notorio mientras se juega y se ve un poquito mal xd
00:16:426 - 00:21:789 - 00:27:152 - 00:43:260 - 00:53:986 - Bueno como te podrás fijar algunas de esas partes tienen sliders 3/4 y otras no, por lo que te sugiero que seas consistente con eso. Personalmente me gustaría que fueran todos 3/4.
00:56:081 (3,4) - blanket?
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - No sé si quieres mantener la distancia todo el rato igual, pero aquí podrías agregar un poquito más de distancia para simular la fuerte intensidad de la canción~ aunque sea una diff de bajo sr, un poquito no haría mal o si? 1,7x tal vez? xd
Anyway~ buena diff como siempre

[Normal]
01:07:478 (1) - nice

[pkhg]
omg those bookmarks and green lines
01:10:159 (1) - Quizás podrías mover el tick rojo un poquito más a la izquierda para que no se vea tan recta esa parte? o no sé pero dejarlo menos recto porque creo que en el blanket se nota un poquito xd 01:08:818 (3,1) -

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!!

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit

Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~

Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-07-27T20:22:09+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi Mugiwara! Just passing by to leave some thoughts, just a random mod xd fma <3 what a surprise : o

[General]
idk but why does pkhg's diff only have a different bg? maybe for hazu too? no problem though but i wanted to mention it xd it was my previous BG and pkhg wanna keep this
maybe low hp of insane to 6? so it scales like 5-6-7 in the hardest diffs okay

[Dignidad] it means dignity maybe my spanish is too bad : (
00:03:772 (3,4,5) - The actual transition from 4 to 5 and then from 5 to 6 seems to be a bit unnatural to follow, I guess it'd be better if you make some horizontal movements so it flows better imo. Maybe try this: http://puu.sh/qgpUH/645dd83f6d.jpg okay yeah it makes a really good pattern, fixed
00:04:275 (5) - NC here? and also 00:05:784 (3) - make the NC here since the downbeat is more intuitive for a nc i guess. I think it's more logical to put a NC at 00:05:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - as they're strong and loud sounds who start here and also at 00:05:616 (1,2,3) -
00:10:812 (5,6,1) - This transition over here I really don't like it... it feels too crowded with those overlaps and low distance from each other sliders. I would suggest to make the 2nd stream more curvish and maybe do something like this: http://puu.sh/qgqtf/fc820bca2e.jpg ? I think the pattern would play smoother~ Btw... if you do so, maybe try this linear flow for 00:10:141 (5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/qgqBI/cc6750db7b.jpg The actual one seems to be a bad blanket I guess which is not bad but idk xd hmm.. I think It will make a weird movement for the player imo, he expects to a circular movement with this curves slider imo
00:13:828 (1,3) - idk if you care about blankets, but maybe fix that? blanket is shiet but fixed!
00:25:895 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:29:918 (1,2,3,4) - I guess this is some good stuff, however I find it pretty boring and monotonous to play because you use it 5 times incluiding 00:29:247 (3) - Also I'd suggest to make 00:30:588 (3) - into 2 circles because there are two downbeats that would be better if you make them clickable.
Therefore I'd suggest something like this http://puu.sh/qgrQ7/97df9b0f5f.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgrRK/7064a7f6ea.jpg ? actually, I know you're right for this point, but I don't really know how to make this, although your pattern is well, but it will bother the player if I change suddenly this imo but I'll surely keep in mind this to try to make it differently
00:37:460 (3) - make it a bit curvish so it flows better to the stream? yeah sure, sure
00:48:708 (1) - delete the last grey node? just a detail xd made the last two closer D:
00:48:708 (1,2,3) - The flow here feels a bit awkward in my opinion, mainly because 00:48:708 (1) - doesn't follow the curvature of the stream and also because of 00:49:043 (2,3) - this jump that feels too forced i guess. Maybe you can build a better flow with a pattern like http://puu.sh/qgsjo/d2bcfae50a.jpg ? hmm yes! sure!
00:58:261 (2,3) - Add a bit more distance here to make the jumps more consistent? Maybe a symetrical star would work for this. sure, improved
00:59:099 (1,1) - Maybe http://puu.sh/qgsr5/0301355104.jpg for better flow? I wanted to make a kind of "linear flow"
01:19:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - For the first stream I think you can curve it a bit so the flow is smoother. Also I don't really like this overlap of both streams. I guess i'd suggest you something like this: http://puu.sh/qgsOr/a1ec74e8e7.jpg + http://puu.sh/qgsRQ/ee28572d20.jpg (where 01:21:556 (3,5) - is a blanket) It looks cool, I'll try this ! But I think overlap is not really bad so I'll only keep this D:
01:33:959 (5,6,1) - why the distance? would be better if you stack them with 0,5x I guess~ it's fine imo D:
01:34:797 (1,2) - idk but since the intensity of the music here is the same for 01:35:300 (3,4) - this, i'd suggest to add some more distance for 01:34:797 (1,2) - maybe. consistency with 01:32:115 (1,2) - I tried to make nearly the same DS
01:35:300 (1) - maybe NC? sure

[Insane]
00:23:884 (3,4) - this stack seems to be the only one in all this section so it's a bit weird when playing, consider unstack. It's fine I think It'll bother not that much D:
00:53:400 (3,4,3,4) - These double stack are totally fine.. it's just that you could've made them more consistent troughout the section. e.g 00:53:400 (3,4) - these is cool stuf because both are strong beats, however 00:54:909 (3,4) - here is not the case, where 00:55:075 - gives less emphasis for a stack. Just my opinion btw~ yes, totally, unstacked nice catch ; )
The rest seems to be ok, nice diff thank you o/

[Normal]
01:07:478 (1) - nice thanks c:

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!! don't worry and thank you for taking time to this shietty diff iYiyo and all other !

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit it helps me alot, one of the best mod i've received for a while !
Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~ thank you

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Thanks !

Hazu-

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Hazu- 2016-07-30T17:49:25+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi Mugiwara! Just passing by to leave some thoughts, just a random mod xd fma <3

[Hazu]
Hola... de nuevo xdd asadsadsa estás en todos lados... ¿O yo estoy en todos? xD
00:09:136 (3,4) - Quizás hacer que tengan el mismo "shape"? no sé como decirlo en español xd forma? Fixed.
00:39:321 (1,4) - La verdad el único "problema" que veo a primera vista es este overlap, en donde llega a ser muy notorio mientras se juega y se ve un poquito mal xd Fixed.
00:16:426 - 00:21:789 - 00:27:152 - 00:43:260 - 00:53:986 - Bueno como te podrás fijar algunas de esas partes tienen sliders 3/4 y otras no, por lo que te sugiero que seas consistente con eso. Personalmente me gustaría que fueran todos 3/4. En realidad son diferentes sonidos, en los 2/4 no se escucha el platillo mientras que en los 3/4 se escucha un sonido de platillo extendido hasta el siguiente tick blanco, por eso son distintos, si surgen otras sugerencias respecto a esto lo cambiaré.
00:56:081 (3,4) - blanket? Es una copia del anterior con un giro de 90º.
00:58:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - No sé si quieres mantener la distancia todo el rato igual, pero aquí podrías agregar un poquito más de distancia para simular la fuerte intensidad de la canción~ aunque sea una diff de bajo sr, un poquito no haría mal o si? 1,7x tal vez? xd Antes tenían una distancia distinta, sin embargo surgieron muchas dudas respecto a esto, al final decidí dejarlo así xD
Anyway~ buena diff como siempre Gracias >w<

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!!

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit
Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~

Gracias~

Poi

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-31T05:30:44+00:00

Haruto wrote:
Hello! as requested, sorry for the delay >.<

[General]
Soft-sliderslide2 is not used.
[pkhg's Easy]
Check AiMod, there's a lot of unsnapped timing lines fixd
00:01:381 - 00:11:437 - etc... sometimes, doing stuff like these can be considered as unrankable. i know some issue like this a year ago in teichan aka lavender's map. he used a lot of custom slidertick to replace it as clap/drum sound. you might want to reduce some stuff like these, oh yea. you do the slidertick stuff only after this part 00:03:437 - then you started again from 00:11:437 - which is inconsistent while 00:07:460 - has that drum sound too, so... yeah isnt inconsistent, i just forgot it thanks xd
00:04:109 (2,3) - Nazi, blanket. actually its not noticable at all but consider fixing it too cuved sliders looks liek sht
00:20:198 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, you can see it from the difference between follow points on 00:19:862 - to 00:20:197 - . 0.02
00:21:204 (4,2) - avoidable overlap imo because they doesnt look tidy at all u cant see it while playing
00:59:433 (1) - just a suggestion, i believe the tail can be stacked with 00:57:422 (2) - 's tail so it'll look more tidy triangles http://puu.sh/qkvn9/14a4617ee0.jpg
01:10:159 (1) - i believe its posibble to cover up the red node edge here by adjusting those curves too hard
01:14:852 (3,1) - is this intended to be like this? not blanketed? ya

Pretty cool diff. tho i still dont understand why are you doing those slidertick stuff its rare nowadays that people use it cuz sounds dumb without them
Sorry if my mod wasn't helpful at all >.< i tried already ;;. tell me or write your reply if there's a words that you cant understand!
Good Luck!

iYiyo wrote:
[pkhg]
omg those bookmarks and green lines xd
[*]01:10:159 (1) - Quizás podrías mover el tick rojo un poquito más a la izquierda para que no se vea tan recta esa parte? o no sé pero dejarlo menos recto porque creo que en el blanket se nota un poquito xd 01:08:818 (3,1) - hice lo que pude [/list][/notice]

srry for pointing too much stuffs in dignity but I truly believe you can improve it!!

Okay that's all! I hope it helps a bit
Good mapset, I hope you can rank it soon >.< star~

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-10-15T14:51:36+00:00

[pkhg]

00:08:465 - to 00:11:147 - are the clap sound on this section intentional or not ? feel weird with the song imo
00:59:433 (1,2) - small spacing error
01:14:852 (3,1) - uhh make blanket looks better ? lol

[normal]

00:01:426 (3,1) - ending (3) sliderend on emphasized redtick make rhythm transition there awkward imo , yo can try this
SPOILER
00:47:366 (1,2) -00:48:371 (3,1) - spacing error
01:14:182 (4) - forget to nc ?
01:19:545 (3) - nc to stay consistent with nc pattern ( you nc every downbeat ) lol ?

not really like how you make the overall so big like that for normal , i think it make spread from easy to normal large , it would be better to make spread more balance imo so can you do something with like 99% of the spacing here like lower them ?

[hazu]

00:40:662 (1,2) - kinda unexpected to see you use jumps here when you didn't do it here 00:39:321 (1,2) - 00:37:981 (1,2) - and i don't think the jumps there work very well there so maybe don't jumps there , i think the downbeat would be the better choice for jumps

try to add some jumps in this diff to make the spread from hard to insane better ? most of the downbeat is a good choice for jumps tho

[insane]

00:13:158 (3,4) - why the sudden spacing decrease on this , that make this plays pretty awkward imo , try move 00:13:493 (4) - to around x208 y248
00:19:191 (1,2) - mm why is this spaced different from 00:16:510 (1,2) - 00:17:851 (1,2) - which suppose to sound the same , imo make the spacing somehow consistent to each other would make thing play more smooth
00:24:555 (1,2) - similiar to the above this is low spacing but 00:23:214 (1,2) - 00:21:873 (1,2) - high spacing
00:32:096 (3,4,5) - i think the curve on this stream can be improved a bit , this looks better i think lol idk
SPOILER
00:48:661 - what this timing line snap to ?
01:03:456 (1,2) - sound similiar to 01:00:775 (1,2) - but why different spacing ?
01:18:540 (2,3) - a bit weird to stop using jumps for emphasis cymbal here i think would flow better if you keep continue to jumps to emphasis cymbal
00:45:356 (3,4) - would be better if the spacing here is a bit bigger to emphasis the snare on (4) better imo , try to move (4) to around x264 y276
01:22:898 (3,4) - aaa no symmetry ? I think that would make this looks better

my main concern is some inconsistent in spacing for some notes after the slider , try to recheck them and make them consistent and correlate with the song

[diginity]

00:34:778 (4,5) - i find that this should have higher spacing than 00:34:610 (3,4) - cus the snare there sound more impact than the kick imo , try move (4) to around x368 y224 ?
01:19:545 (1,2,3,4) - the curve feel off here for some reason
01:20:718 (5,6,1) - same as above
01:33:959 (5,6,1,2) - rhythm play a bit awkward for me , was expect it to be like 01:31:277 (6,1,2) - but it's not , maybe try to make the rhythm there consistent to make it play better ? i don't think 1/4 there is need to be map lol

same as insane about the spacing for some notes after the slider

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2016-10-15T15:30:09+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[hazu]
00:40:662 (1,2) - kinda unexpected to see you use jumps here when you didn't do it here 00:39:321 (1,2) - 00:37:981 (1,2) - and i don't think the jumps there work very well there so maybe don't jumps there , i think the downbeat would be the better choice for jumps DS error ;w; Fixed.

try to add some jumps in this diff to make the spread from hard to insane better ? most of the downbeat is a good choice for jumps tho Sure.

Thanks =w=/

Poi

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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Topic Starter

Irohas 2016-10-15T15:40:44+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[normal]
00:01:426 (3,1) - ending (3) sliderend on emphasized redtick make rhythm transition there awkward imo , yo can try this
SPOILER
consistency with 00:03:772 (2,3,1) -
00:47:366 (1,2) -00:48:371 (3,1) - spacing error fixed
01:14:182 (4) - forget to nc ? fixed
01:19:545 (3) - nc to stay consistent with nc pattern ( you nc every downbeat ) lol ? and fixed

not really like how you make the overall so big like that for normal , i think it make spread from easy to normal large , it would be better to make spread more balance imo so can you do something with like 99% of the spacing here like lower them ? used 1.2x instead of 1.4x
[insane]
00:13:158 (3,4) - why the sudden spacing decrease on this , that make this plays pretty awkward imo , try move 00:13:493 (4) - to around x208 y248 okay
00:19:191 (1,2) - mm why is this spaced different from 00:16:510 (1,2) - 00:17:851 (1,2) - which suppose to sound the same , imo make the spacing somehow consistent to each other would make thing play more smooth oops, applied
00:24:555 (1,2) - similiar to the above this is low spacing but 00:23:214 (1,2) - 00:21:873 (1,2) - high spacing okay wtf
00:32:096 (3,4,5) - i think the curve on this stream can be improved a bit , this looks better i think lol idk
SPOILER
mmh i think it's not as worth as it
00:48:661 - what this timing line snap to ? removed
01:03:456 (1,2) - sound similiar to 01:00:775 (1,2) - but why different spacing ? dunno lol
01:18:540 (2,3) - a bit weird to stop using jumps for emphasis cymbal here i think would flow better if you keep continue to jumps to emphasis cymbal fixed
00:45:356 (3,4) - would be better if the spacing here is a bit bigger to emphasis the snare on (4) better imo , try to move (4) to around x264 y276 rather emphasized vocal increasing the spacing between (4) and (5)
01:22:898 (3,4) - aaa no symmetry ? I think that would make this looks better oops

my main concern is some inconsistent in spacing for some notes after the slider , try to recheck them and make them consistent and correlate with the song it looks good now i think
[diginity]
00:34:778 (4,5) - i find that this should have higher spacing than 00:34:610 (3,4) - cus the snare there sound more impact than the kick imo , try move (4) to around x368 y224 ? mmh okay it looks cool
01:19:545 (1,2,3,4) - the curve feel off here for some reason fixed
01:20:718 (5,6,1) - same as above ^
01:33:959 (5,6,1,2) - rhythm play a bit awkward for me , was expect it to be like 01:31:277 (6,1,2) - but it's not , maybe try to make the rhythm there consistent to make it play better ? i don't think 1/4 there is need to be map lol okay lol

same as insane about the spacing for some notes after the slider same

thanks!

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-10-19T07:12:21+00:00

fixed all

osu file format v14

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iYiyo

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iYiyo 2017-09-03T19:42:19+00:00

ranked when :eyes:

pkhg

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pkhg 2017-09-05T01:34:02+00:00

fixed all

Kalibe

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Kalibe 2018-04-25T18:26:36+00:00

it's alive

Kyuukai

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Kyuukai 2018-04-27T19:10:03+00:00

change ton OD sur la topdiff sinan j'te monte en l'air

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-04-28T10:27:35+00:00

ok did

iYiyo

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iYiyo 2018-04-28T17:18:32+00:00

2 years ago wow

hype

~~1000th forum post o:~~

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-04-28T18:04:43+00:00

metadata:

IamKwaN wrote:
Sure thing!

Unicode Title: リライト
Romanised Title: rewrite
Artist: ASIAN KUNG-FU GENERATION
Source: 鋼の錬金術師

References:
http://puu.sh/pOMwM/bdf040a8e2.png from http://www.asiankung-fu.com/disco/archive/?KSCL-925
http://puu.sh/pOMEy/5f19508aee.jpg from http://www.asiankung-fu.com/eng/disco/KSCL-925.html

Good luck!

Kalibe

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Kalibe 2018-04-30T14:17:29+00:00

woke

pkhg

- as i don't really agree with your 1/2 usage in the whole diff, i'd rather to name it normal instead of easy, it might be edgy movement to keep those rhythms and say its easy difficulty lol. perhaps make ar like 4 for this
- 00:42:576 (7,8) - stack is kinda broken lol

normal

- 00:32:184 (3) - 2 circles instead would be better for emphasis that strong crash on 00:32:519 -
- 01:26:151 (4,5) - little nazi spacing error
- 01:33:525 - skipping snare is not cool though..
- 01:36:207 (6) - perhaps, maybe do something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10839592 it will fit better with emphasising guitar

hazu

- 00:10:396 (4) - 00:11:234 (3) - 01:12:073 (4) - 01:33:525 (4) - missed clap
- 00:14:754 (1,2,3) - i feel like this is too dense compared to rhythms you've done later, so i think 1/1 slider + circle would works better imo
- 00:43:916 (4) - 00:22:464 (5) - are for hold vocals, so maybe silence ends?
- 00:54:978 (1) - missed finish on head and clap on repeat
- 01:10:732 (4) - there are no sounds on blue ticks, probably two circles would work nicer tbh

insane

- 00:09:056 (1) - 00:52:799 (1) - not really nessesary nc though
- 01:21:458 (1) - don't really feel like 1/4 fits here, since stronger sound is actually on blue tick, i'd go with 4 circles instead for 01:21:458 (1,2) -

dignity

- 00:01:346 (1) - slider could be more curvy due to nice guitar start in music
- 00:13:413 (1,2,3) - seems like a really low spacing compare to whole section, i'd increase it a bit
- 00:38:721 (1) - follows two snares, so it would be cute having this with faster sv setting
- 00:40:397 (2,3) - can you make this spacing similar to 00:41:066 (5,6) - to get the snare emphasised properly?
- 00:43:413 (1) - don't really like the idea of being drum on sliderend, 2 circles would be cooler
- 00:47:436 (2,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10839746 might be neater w
- 00:57:324 (3) - try maybe ctrl h ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10839757 flows cooler imo

that's all i think, nice ww

Reillia

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Joined August 2014

Reillia 2018-05-01T10:06:15+00:00

[pkhg]
i can't understand why u use 1/2 on 179 bpm. have 1/2 on slider + slider like 00:04:698 (2,3) - is understandable but 00:15:760 (7,8) - circle + slider and 01:02:184 (1,2) - circle + circle is quite overwhelming for newbies.

[normal]
01:06:374 (2) - this is a little bit close with hp bar

[hazu]
00:18:777 (1,4,1) - why did u avoid stacking this? i feel weird from it.
00:54:978 (1) - where is hitsounds..?
01:10:731 (4) - same thing with kalibe

[insane]
00:09:056 (1) - i think this nc is unnecessary

_Hou

391 posts

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_Hou 2018-05-01T11:30:22+00:00

[dignity]
00:21:961 (3,4,1) - may be better to do regular stack, or at least put those in a straight line, looks a bit crooked
00:23:302 (3,2) - mby blanket
00:30:341 (4,5) - ^
01:08:888 (2,1) - ^
01:20:955 - this spot literally seems to be empty, whereas you start another kickslider, mby rhythm like that will be more suitable https://puu.sh/AdTNl.png
dunno if you mind that, but those parts seems the same to me but has diffrent rhythmics 00:18:776 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - 00:13:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

[Insane]
01:03:022 (1,2) - 1/1 slider + circle instead for consistency with 01:00:341 (1,2) -
01:28:162 (4,5) - considered to be stacked, like here 01:17:771 (1,2) - and here 01:07:045 (1,2) -
01:30:173 (2,1) - ctrl+G to fit the vocals, mby
I dont think this note really exists 01:36:542 (1) - suggesting to remove it for all diifs

[hazu's hard]
00:21:961 (2,3,4) - there is no triple actually
00:26:822 (1,3) - blanket if possible
00:06:038 (4,5,6,7,1) - I'd reconsider using the only triple here, since you never do it again in a map, and use two repeating 1/4 sliders instead

[normal]
01:08:385 (1,2,3,4) - a little awkward rhythm to me, mby smth like that https://puu.sh/AdUed.png
01:33:525 - add circle here since you 've put it there 01:35:201 (4,5) -

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-05-01T13:08:02+00:00

did most of u said, thx guys!

pkhg

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pkhg 2018-05-01T19:28:23+00:00

im just trying to follow the song properly instead of making a nosensical chain of 1/1 objects
there are a lot of 1/1 and longer gaps and the 1/2 usage isnt heavy as most normal diffs so renaming it to normal wouldnt be a good idea
ar3.5
fixed stack

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-05-01T19:44:17+00:00

fixed for hazu since he's kinda ded

Kagetsu

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Kagetsu 2018-05-02T21:42:08+00:00

is it just me or the mp3 sounds like it was treble boosted hmmm

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-05-02T22:00:01+00:00

thx FLAC ver

Kyuukai

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Kyuukai 2018-05-02T23:39:49+00:00

ur dad is bald

General

drum-hitwhistle.wav is unrankable because it has a +5ms delay. (Check this link)
Here is a fixed version of the hitsound : https://puu.sh/AeUG7/a5376b8123.wav

Easy

00:03:357 (3) - Whistle is missing
00:15:927 (8) - I think hitfinish doesn't fit because there's nothing in the song that supports this hitsound. Maybe you could set the sampleset to Normal & Additions to Soft and add a Whistle instead ? So it follows 00:21:123 (8) - this which has a similar sounding. Also applies to 00:26:654 (8) - 00:42:743 (8) - 00:52:296 (1) - 00:53:469 (3) -
00:52:296 (1) - Replace the sliderhead hitsound to a whistle instead, similar sound as 00:50:955 (4) -
00:56:318 (4) - ^
00:57:659 (1) - ^

Normal

00:06:709 (1) - Remove hitfinish on slidertail, sounds alot better. Applies to 00:33:525 (1) - 01:21:793 (1) -
01:21:458 (6) - Normal additions whistle ? Follows the instrumental better

Hard

00:02:351 (4,1) - Spacing should be x1.4ds and that one 00:05:034 (4,1) - should have a higher spacing since the guitar's intensity is alot stronger compared to the other one.
00:11:235 (3,4) - fix ds
00:11:402 (4,5) - ^
00:12:576 (2) - Sometimes you whistles on similar sounds like 00:17:939 (2) - 00:28:665 (2) - 00:30:006 (2) - but sometimes you don't like 00:13:916 (2) - 00:15:257 (2) - 00:16:598 (2) - 00:19:279 (2) - so maybe you could choose if u wanna add whistles or not xd
00:14:754 (1) - Sampleset Drum/Additions Normal on sliderhead ? Applies to 00:23:469 (3) - 00:24:810 (3) - 00:25:480 (1) - (slidertail) 00:30:173 (3) -
00:38:218 (4,5) - fix ds
01:20:788 (2,3,4,1) - ^

Insane

OD 8 because OD 7 is reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

01:20:704 (1,2,1,2) - spacing is a bit too high between thoses 2 note+slider, maybe you could reduce it a bit ?
01:35:201 (4,1) - rip blanket

Dignity

00:48:944 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -

I think you should recheck the hitsounding on every diff, some things actually are missing (check hard diff suggestions)

call me back bro

pkhg

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pkhg 2018-05-03T00:40:58+00:00

Kyuukai wrote:
ur dad is bald

Easy
00:03:357 (3) - Whistle is missingim using whistles for guitar so no
00:15:927 (8) - I think hitfinish doesn't fit because there's nothing in the song that supports this hitsound. Maybe you could set the sampleset to Normal & Additions to Soft and add a Whistle instead ? So it follows 00:21:123 (8) - this which has a similar sounding. Also applies to 00:26:654 (8) - 00:42:743 (8) - 00:52:296 (1) - 00:53:469 (3) - less volume
00:52:296 (1) - Replace the sliderhead hitsound to a whistle instead, similar sound as 00:50:955 (4) -
00:56:318 (4) - ^
00:57:659 (1) - ^ i think finishes are nice cuz voices intensity

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-05-03T08:35:35+00:00

Kyuukai wrote:
ur dad is bald

General
drum-hitwhistle.wav is unrankable because it has a +5ms delay. (Check this link)
Here is a fixed version of the hitsound : https://puu.sh/AeUG7/a5376b8123.wav ok replaced by this one

Normal
00:06:709 (1) - Remove hitfinish on slidertail, sounds alot better. Applies to 00:33:525 (1) - 01:21:793 (1) - did
01:21:458 (6) - Normal additions whistle ? Follows the instrumental better did in some way

Hard
00:02:351 (4,1) - Spacing should be x1.4ds and that one 00:05:034 (4,1) - should have a higher spacing since the guitar's intensity is alot stronger compared to the other one. did
00:11:235 (3,4) - fix ds did
00:11:402 (4,5) - ^ ^
00:12:576 (2) - Sometimes you whistles on similar sounds like 00:17:939 (2) - 00:28:665 (2) - 00:30:006 (2) - but sometimes you don't like 00:13:916 (2) - 00:15:257 (2) - 00:16:598 (2) - 00:19:279 (2) - so maybe you could choose if u wanna add whistles or not xd ya added whistle sounds
00:14:754 (1) - Sampleset Drum/Additions Normal on sliderhead ? Applies to 00:23:469 (3) - 00:24:810 (3) - 00:25:480 (1) - (slidertail) 00:30:173 (3) - sure
00:38:218 (4,5) - fix ds did
01:20:788 (2,3,4,1) - ^ ^

Insane
OD 8 because OD 7 is reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ^^
01:20:704 (1,2,1,2) - spacing is a bit too high between thoses 2 note+slider, maybe you could reduce it a bit ? okay
01:35:201 (4,1) - rip blanket ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Dignity
00:48:944 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ;)
I think you should recheck the hitsounding on every diff, some things actually are missing (check hard diff suggestions) fixd

call me back bro

Kyuukai

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Kyuukai 2018-05-03T11:08:27+00:00

aaaa

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-05-03T11:27:29+00:00

converted the bg to .jpg as kyuukai asked

Kyuukai

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Kyuukai 2018-05-03T11:29:23+00:00

im -8000 IQ, rebubbled xdddd

Kalibe

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Kalibe 2018-05-05T22:15:00+00:00

od 7,5 on insane is better uwu

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-05-06T10:11:03+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
od 7,5 on insane is better uwu

i'll fix in the next mod!!

Kyuukai

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Kyuukai 2018-05-06T14:58:30+00:00

Irohas wrote:
Kalibe wrote:
od 7,5 on insane is better uwu
i'll fix in the next mod!!

ur dad big shaq

Irohas

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Irohas 2018-05-06T15:12:34+00:00

Kyuukai wrote:
ur dad big shaq

ur dad is ur mom

pkhg

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pkhg 2018-05-09T22:28:57+00:00

rank when

Hazu-

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Hazu- 2018-05-10T00:44:26+00:00

pls don't play this shit owo

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iYiyo

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iYiyo 2018-05-11T15:46:29+00:00

I remember when we both started mapping/modding around 3 years ago! Thanks for still being here ^^

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