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ESTi - HELIX (Edit ver.)

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[Mahua]

Minakami Yuki wrote:

beat burst mahua
被打死 :o
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

ak74 wrote:

来摸了
[General]
有些没用的绿线好像是得去掉的
EZ难度的00:43:888 - 这里有kiai然而其它没有,我觉得这个应该没事吧


[IN'']
00:24:003 (4) - 按照前面的,这个可以NC 后面就不好看了
02:10:974 (1,2) - 这个离前面是不是太近了
02:13:803 - 这个绿线位置有点诡异啊。。。虽然好像没啥大碍 那就不改

[BE'']
00:33:431 (2) - 这个音效有点突兀的 喘息
01:19:203 - 这条绿线好像也没用。。。 00:43:888 (1) - 这根不知道有没有用啊,去掉好像也没事 可以
00:57:946 (2) - 滑条结尾这里的音并不明显,在这停顿我是觉得没啥问题,但是后面白线再加个circle也许会更爽吧(也更普通),后面还有几个类似的地方也一样
这其实可以直接找狗rank了,我是摸不出啥了



水摸完毕
Good luck!~ :)
IamKwaN
@vinxis, you didn't update?!?!
@hw, 還好 有幾處還用了1/2接滑條 就當是diff spike
@ak, fixed

3Q
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Flower

-N a n a k o- wrote:

[HD'']
00:09:603 (3) - 感覺這條滑條太斜了 改了点
00:24:346 (5,6,1) - 怎不把00:24:346 (5) - 也疊在一起, 個人覺得這樣才比較配合音樂 叠在了5上
00:52:117 (2,1) - 我找不出來要疊的原因OAO 我的理解是音乐这里有个急停
00:53:488 (1) - 既然之前是用1.7x, 怎麼突然要轉DS啊 因为单点比滑条难
01:50:403 (2) - 個人覺得這條用回01:49:717 (1) - 這條長條的pattern比較美觀 ???不是很懂
02:04:803 (3) - 感覺這裏DS跳得太突然了 个人觉得还好

VINXIS wrote:

hd

  1. 00:24:346 (5,6) - ctrlg wud b bettr 2 emphasise the slidr fixed by stacking 5 6
  2. 00:43:546 (1) - th rhythm is weird esp. consdiering the sliderend is ona big whit tik :L this is a sudden brake at the big white tick by my feeling, which is expressed better
  3. 00:52:117 (2) - y isnt the nc here i kno what im doing here. nc is for readability isn;t it?
  4. 01:49:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - rip combo consistncy.. take the nc off of 01:54:346 (1) -

it kills me when trying to recognize my part from the non-wysiwyg editor

Hollow Wings wrote:

[notice]
[notice]

HD''

  1. 00:31:717 (1) - 反向更好些。 这里强调一个减速的概念,所以反对
  2. 00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里可能就需要体现一个节奏对称的概念了,这个节奏实在是undermap了太多,导致之后的部分节奏丰富就显得呼应不足。。。最好再来一组相同节奏的来平衡一下,不然是有点难受的特别是对于这种动次打次曲。 我要是做太鼓谱这里肯定就会放一个小节的空白了。不过要是你这么说的话我就稍微改一点。在00:55:717 - 加了note跟随鼓点

ak74 wrote:

[HD'']
01:05:831 - 和 01:16:803 - 这两根绿线好像没用啊 ok
00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏比后面的类似地方的节奏要简单,感觉有点怪,我推荐和01:08:574 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 01:14:060 (1,2,3) - 啥的保持一致 看了hw的摸略做了修改
thanks to all

update
http://puu.sh/qiBy2/1b87152391.txt
Zweib

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

NM''

  1. 00:13:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 如今的社区对N难度出现这种复杂节奏是表示不给过的态度的,建议简化节奏,也就是说不要gap不同的节奏混杂在一起。01:16:803 (1) - 开始同理。01:53:488 (2,3) - 这种也是。
  2. 你这N的break比E还多啊,估计会被挑。
好像不知道怎么改,再等等看别人怎么说吧
Mafumafu
Hi!
[General]
似乎没有用到 drum-hitwhistle7.wav

normal-hitwhistle.wav 28.46ms
soft-hitwhistle3.wav 28.46ms
现在规定音效文件必须有100ms长

drum-hitclap7.wav
drum-hitfinish.wav
drum-hitfinish2.wav
drum-hitfinish7.wav
drum-hitwhistle3.wav
drum-hitwhistle7.wav
normal-hitfinish12.wav
soft-hitfinish7.wav
这些音效文件的开头可能存在大于5ms的空白,根据rank图规则需要剪掉。
[EZ]
00:44:231 (1) - 有点太靠下了 建议调整一下整体布局
00:49:717 (2) - 这种形状最好不要出现在EZ难度里

[NM]
看起来更像一个Advanced而不是NM
00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 对于NM来说有点太难了,更像是Advanced的节奏和pattern
中间不要放那么多Break
01:19:203 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么难的节奏现在应该不让用在NM了
01:29:831 (5,6,7) - NM不要叠这么多 01:29:831 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 整个节奏应该不适合NM
还有很多就不写出来了现在应该不让用这么复杂的节奏了

建议整体改一下或者改名叫Advanced
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抱歉我不太会摸这种图风。
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Regraz wrote:

Hi!
[General]
似乎没有用到 drum-hitwhistle7.wav 用了的

normal-hitwhistle.wav 28.46ms
soft-hitwhistle3.wav 28.46ms
现在规定音效文件必须有100ms长 改了

drum-hitclap7.wav
drum-hitfinish.wav
drum-hitfinish2.wav
drum-hitfinish7.wav
drum-hitwhistle3.wav 改了
drum-hitwhistle7.wav 改了
normal-hitfinish12.wav 改了
soft-hitfinish7.wav 改了
这些音效文件的开头可能存在大于5ms的空白,根据rank图规则需要剪掉。

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抱歉我不太会摸这种图风。
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - drum-hitwhistle3.wav
    - drum-hitwhistle7.wav
    - drum-hitclap3.wav


NM"
  1. 01:43:374 (3) - 感觉拆成一个note和一个1/1滑条更好
  2. 01:54:346 (3) - ^


IN"
  1. 02:12:860 (2) - 要么nc下?我第一次打的时候直接误读1/2,毕竟这里1/2的音也很清晰


BE"
  1. 00:33:431 (2) - 结尾那个音效……听上去有点怪
  2. 01:43:546 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这段感觉你狂塞1/4,和其他部分差别太大了,没啥必要吧
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - drum-hitwhistle3.wav
    be难度00:32:746 -
    - drum-hitwhistle7.wav00:32:746 -
    - drum-hitclap3.wavbe难度的00:33:260 -


IN"
  1. 02:12:860 (2) - 要么nc下?我第一次打的时候直接误读1/2,毕竟这里1/2的音也很清晰 ok


BE"
  1. 00:33:431 (2) - 结尾那个音效……听上去有点怪
  2. 01:43:546 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这段感觉你狂塞1/4,和其他部分差别太大了,没啥必要吧 这一段基本都是solo的感觉啊 而且前面有这么一段01:40:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 如果不可以的话我再想想
IamKwaN
瓜子第一條改了 第二條是為了配合這set其他難度的jb 233
謝啦
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Zweib
热瓜子书得对,我也觉得有点难了,几个地方都稍微nerf了一点不知道行不行

yuki: 感觉拆了就更难了,只一根滑条的话感觉新手可能打起来会有点意外但应该不会吃屎

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Koiyuki
不知道为什么把你的绿线往前移了一格就不报unused hitsounds了……
估计有不知道怎么回事的毫秒误差,最好移动一下绿线
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Minakami Yuki wrote:

不知道为什么把你的绿线往前移了一格就不报unused hitsounds了……
估计有不知道怎么回事的毫秒误差,最好移动一下绿线
好 改了
Koiyuki
bubbled
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Koiyuki wrote:

bubbled
thx~
Rizia
be"
00:03:688 - 總覺得這一聲好奇怪 後面如是
00:57:946 (2) - 停在3/4故意的嗎 還是漏了circle
01:03:431 (2) - same

其他可以了
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Rizia wrote:

be"
00:03:688 - 總覺得這一聲好奇怪 後面如是 打起来还好 如果真的要改那我改
00:57:946 (2) - 停在3/4故意的嗎 還是漏了circle 故意的
01:03:431 (2) - same故意的

其他可以了
Rizia
qualified
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Rizia wrote:

qualified
哦哦哦哦谢谢柚子 :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Ovoui
hey congratz dude, the map is pretty cool but some stuff bothers while playing the BE" diff

the BG resolution is too low, the background is ugly, you should take the BG of this set https://osu.ppy.sh/b/462700
02:10:631 (1,2,1,2) - maybe those jump are a too much large, especially this one 02:10:974 (1,2) -
00:19:203 (1) - this slider should finish here 00:19:374 - because the sound here 00:19:460 - is insignificant compared to the sound here 00:19:374 -
00:05:317 - i think it's overmapped
000:04:688 - you forgot a sound here!
01:56:917 (2,1) - this overlap looks a bit messy
btw nice hitsounds!
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