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DJMax
m4m
EZ
01:54:346 - 这地方感觉漏掉不太好
NM
00:03:431 (2) - 前后ds怎么差了0.1
00:06:174 (2) - ↑
00:30:174 (1) - 弯的不好看,建议后面的弯曲和前面的角度一致
00:57:603 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段的难度太低了,建议稍微填满一点
HD
00:09:603 (3) - 不用ds不太好
00:11:660 (2) - 这种和后面的容易对玩家造成误读
00:17:488 (4) - ds
00:18:174 (2) - ds
00:21:603 (4) - 这个太明显不是同样的间距,不过对称挺好看,不知道别人会不会说
感觉你这个难度可以当insane了,很多ds都没定

就这样吧,HD难度很多ds都没跟,到底是不是hard啊
Flower

Dynamix wrote:

HD
00:09:603 (3) - 不用ds不太好
00:11:660 (2) - 这种和后面的容易对玩家造成误读
00:17:488 (4) - ds
00:18:174 (2) - ds
00:21:603 (4) - 这个太明显不是同样的间距,不过对称挺好看,不知道别人会不会说
感觉你这个难度可以当insane了,很多ds都没定

就这样吧,HD难度很多ds都没跟,到底是不是hard啊
麻花说我说话太臭了,我改一下
看了一下似乎没有特意为了spread改难度和spacing的必要,而这些距离变化都在目前玩hard的人的能力范围内,也足够读懂,同时相比之下这些跳比后面的连续1/2单点容易得多。所以我决定不改。
Hakurei Yoru
这音效 吓得我腿都软了
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Flower wrote:

Dynamix wrote:

HD
00:09:603 (3) - 不用ds不太好
00:11:660 (2) - 这种和后面的容易对玩家造成误读
00:17:488 (4) - ds
00:18:174 (2) - ds
00:21:603 (4) - 这个太明显不是同样的间距,不过对称挺好看,不知道别人会不会说
感觉你这个难度可以当insane了,很多ds都没定

就这样吧,HD难度很多ds都没跟,到底是不是hard啊
light insane现在都叫hard了,本来星数限制在3.75以下就可以符合rank标准了,我这个可是2012年标准的hard,那时候的hard单点都有瞎几把跳的了,我这都只是滑条跳一跳。AR7.5下面preview之前的那段读起来还是比较容易的,别的就更不用说了
仔细玩一下就能发现实际上最难的部分是滑条上叠note,这对玩家来说类似一种急停再急行,这种看起来跳的当1/1打就行了
麻花原来的normal还有瞎几把1/3呢,看来我是不是应该也加一点
话说的可能比较冲,先说声对不住,不过核心论点就是难度比较符合当前的大势所趋
我草泥马怎么把我之前那个有瞎几把1/3说出去了 能不能不剧透
-N a n a k o-
尖叫的hitsound有夠可怕, 特別是在晚上的時候聽到這htisound, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[BE'']
00:11:888 (1,1) - 挺想知道這裏為何要疊著
00:43:717 (2,1) - 這裏疊著好像有點怪怪的
00:47:831 (2,2) - 藍2長條頭不疊著紅2長條尾?
00:56:060 (1,1) - 特意不疊著?
02:05:317 (2,2) - ^
01:24:003 (2,3) - 這裏距離突然減少了, 玩得不太舒服

[IN'']
00:52:803 - 這裏可以多放一個Note, 而且玩的時候也玩得怪怪的, 因為之前都是沒漏拍子
01:27:431 (8) - 這滑條尾沒對好前面的連打

[HD'']
00:09:603 (3) - 感覺這條滑條太斜了
00:24:346 (5,6,1) - 怎不把00:24:346 (5) - 也疊在一起, 個人覺得這樣才比較配合音樂
00:52:117 (2,1) - 我找不出來要疊的原因OAO
00:53:488 (1) - 既然之前是用1.7x, 怎麼突然要轉DS啊
01:50:403 (2) - 個人覺得這條用回01:49:717 (1) - 這條長條的pattern比較美觀
02:04:803 (3) - 感覺這裏DS跳得太突然了

[NM'']
00:19:031 (6) - 不弄成水平線?
00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不太建議圈圈內的數字超過6
01:20:403 (3,4) - 特意的?
01:59:317 (3) - Normal的Reverse不可以超過1個 (某BN說的)

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

-N a n a k o- wrote:

尖叫的hitsound有夠可怕, 特別是在晚上的時候聽到這htisound, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[BE'']
00:11:888 (1,1) - 挺想知道這裏為何要疊著 因为没空间了
00:43:717 (2,1) - 這裏疊著好像有點怪怪的 不改
00:47:831 (2,2) - 藍2長條頭不疊著紅2長條尾?
00:56:060 (1,1) - 特意不疊著?
02:05:317 (2,2) - ^ fix
01:24:003 (2,3) - 這裏距離突然減少了, 玩得不太舒服 那就不舒服

[IN'']
00:52:803 - 這裏可以多放一個Note, 而且玩的時候也玩得怪怪的, 因為之前都是沒漏拍子 有个东西叫synth
01:27:431 (8) - 這滑條尾沒對好前面的連打 ok


Good Luck!
Zero__wind
骏马
00:35:317 (3,1) - flow不太舒服吧 最好把1调一下形状?
00:57:603 (1) - 尾巴不要那么高?撞血条不太好看

猪师傅
00:28:974 (6) - 建议把这个删掉然后从00:29:146 - 起个1/2 slider 现在这段节奏太长了有点难
00:53:146 (3) - 有点难 建议换成circle
01:30:003 (6) - 建议删掉这个circle然后unstack 还有01:32:746 (6) -
01:59:317 (3) - 连续折返的1/2也是低难度不推荐的 最好换一下
00:10 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1027412 ESTi - HELIX [HD'']]
00:10 Zero__wind: 00:27:431 (1) - 头上需要个finish吧
00:12 Zero__wind: 00:33:431 (2,2) - 为什么不平行
00:13 Zero__wind: 00:45:603 (6) - 和前面00:44:746 (2,3,5) - 对比的话 尾巴上应该加个soft whistle
00:14 Zero__wind: 后面00:48:517 (7) - 类似的都同理
00:18 Zero__wind: 因为01:40:631 (4,5,6) - 这个三连的关系 考虑在01:51:603 - 这里也起三连
00:19 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1029043 ESTi - HELIX [IN'']]
00:19 Zero__wind: 00:08:917 (1,1,1) - 这都没变速为什么要那么多NC
00:20 Zero__wind: 00:12:003 (1) - 和00:12:688 (1,1) - 这些NC我觉得也没必要
00:37 [Mahua]: 大概是适应bediff的梗
00:38 Zero__wind: 感觉不变速加一堆NC不太必要
00:38 Zero__wind: 反而让人觉得是不是要变速了
00:38 [Mahua]: 反正没打算让他们只打一遍(
00:39 Zero__wind: 00:17:660 (6,1) - 这里 1上面有finish的 离这么近 感觉很不舒服
00:39 Zero__wind: 放远点吧
00:39 Zero__wind: 后面有几个类似的
00:39 [Mahua]: 好
00:40 Zero__wind: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗 感觉突然比前面的难了好多 建议别离那么远
00:40 Zero__wind: 往中间靠拢一点 的意思
00:41 [Mahua]: 那就不用改那个离得近的梗了 感觉重复好多地方应该很多人都能打
00:41 Zero__wind: 哦哦
00:42 Zero__wind: 00:51:431 (1,2) - 不是很明白这个是怎么摆的 反正从各种意义上看着都很歪
00:42 [Mahua]: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个不黑可以打啊 他鼠标还有一点抽风的问题
00:42 [Mahua]: 00:51:431 (1) - 直接按ds来的(
00:42 Zero__wind: 反正感觉不太好看
00:43 [Mahua]: 别的地方一开ez打就很不清楚啊
00:43 Zero__wind: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个我不是说它本身很难 主要是和前面00:34:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:37:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音乐没什么变化的情况下 突然变得有点难 感觉有点奇怪
00:44 [Mahua]: 那我想想怎么改
00:47 [Mahua]: http://puu.sh/qcQ5h/04ee69c0ef.jpg
00:47 [Mahua]: ok?
00:47 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/qcQ6m/4a016dd095.jpg
00:47 Zero__wind: 我想的是这样的
00:48 Zero__wind: 就是1 3 5是个1.0x的等边三角形
00:48 [Mahua]: 有点不太干净的感觉……
00:49 Zero__wind: 只是示意图= =
00:49 Zero__wind: 反正你看着改吧
00:50 Zero__wind: 01:05:831 (1) - 头上音效美丽
00:51 Zero__wind: 大概加个finish吧
00:52 Zero__wind: 01:36:688 (5) - 这个肯定应该1/4啊
00:52 [Mahua]: 我好像be那个diff这里就没加……
00:52 Zero__wind: 01:05:831 (1) - 我觉得头上可以soft finish
00:52 Zero__wind: normal的也可以 好歹是4个小节一个
00:52 [Mahua]: http://puu.sh/qcQm8/f3cf4772f9.jpg
00:52 [Mahua]: ok?
00:52 Zero__wind: 靠谱
00:53 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) - 这里我跟的是synth啊……
00:53 [Mahua]: 明显不想跟鼓……
00:54 Zero__wind: 那不是1/2吗
00:54 Zero__wind: 我怎么都听不出1/3
00:54 Zero__wind: 不过我耳机比较辣鸡
00:54 Zero__wind: 仅供参考
00:55 [Mahua]: 算了还是1/4
00:55 [Mahua]: 我感觉应该是后面是1/3
00:55 Zero__wind: 02:12:517 (4) - 这里节奏突然放缓了 考虑NC一个
00:55 Zero__wind: 然后还有看aimod 有两个unsnap
00:56 [Mahua]: 可以
00:59 Zero__wind: 01:28:117 (2,3,4) - 这个地方 感觉flow有点别扭 3的位置比较奇怪
01:00 [Mahua]: 打起来还可以
01:02 Zero__wind: 试试弄成类似这样?http://puu.sh/qcQNT/0f3db82e95.jpg
01:02 Zero__wind: 感觉现在2到3的那个角度还是有点卡
01:02 Zero__wind: 不过我也没想出什么很好的办法
01:02 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) - 这里前面是1/2 后面是1/3
01:03 Zero__wind: 哦
01:04 [Mahua]: 01:28:460 (4,5,6) - 这个位置应该和前面几个小节同时选中算比较干净的一个位置了吧
01:05 Zero__wind: 嗯还可以
01:05 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) -
01:05 [Mahua]: 这里想不出办法了
01:07 [Mahua]: 跟synth大概就要拆成两个
01:07 [Mahua]: 断了……
01:08 Zero__wind: 那样的话是要拆
01:08 Zero__wind: 打了一遍BE呗音效炸哭了
01:08 [Mahua]: 算了跟鼓1/4
01:09 [Mahua]: 那个是故意的(
01:12 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1009768 ESTi - HELIX [BE'']]
01:12 Zero__wind: 00:36:174 (2,3) - 不是很懂这个二连 感觉很random
01:13 [Mahua]: 强调作用
01:13 [Mahua]: 也是想和前面的那个part有区别
01:14 Zero__wind: 或许可以考虑在别的哪个地方再用一次
01:14 Zero__wind: 因为那边好像就一个 有点奇怪
01:15 [Mahua]: 00:29:146 (2,3) -
01:15 [Mahua]: 嗯(
01:16 Zero__wind: 00:56:060 (1,1) - 这个故意不叠好?
01:16 [Mahua]: 对
01:16 [Mahua]: 这个怕有读图问题
01:17 Zero__wind: 00:58:288 - 不加个circle?
01:17 [Mahua]: 后面有两个这样的节奏啊
01:18 Zero__wind: 嗯 看到了
01:18 Zero__wind: 就是觉得有点怪
01:18 Zero__wind: 也不是什么大问题
01:18 [Mahua]: 感觉那个bass跟起来很有感觉(就是能不能听到就是另一回事了
01:20 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这个就让他1/6吧 反正最高难度就当表上弦的声音了(
01:21 Zero__wind: 01:25:374 (2) - 这个就实在是有点不对劲
01:21 Zero__wind: 完全就串了轨
01:21 [Mahua]: (
01:22 [Mahua]: 转下一part了嘛(心虚
01:22 Zero__wind: 并没有到转的时候啊orz
01:23 Zero__wind: 感觉还是像前面几个小节一样继续跟
01:23 Zero__wind: 01:43:888 (7,8) - 这个应该是有问题了 听一下应该是1/3
01:28 [Mahua]: 有点纠结
01:28 Zero__wind: 02:10:288 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这个梗实在是……好嗨远
01:28 Zero__wind: 刚才打的时候感觉自己他妈飞了起来
01:28 [Mahua]: 这里要是跟1/3就是跟了 但是1/4就有点自创鼓的感觉
01:29 Zero__wind: 嗯反正那一段里 别的地方听过去 都还比较令人信服 就那一个地方怪怪的
01:29 [Mahua]: 02:10:288 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里之前我自己是能打的
01:30 [Mahua]: 萨米打的时候也说可以
01:30 Zero__wind: 尾杀感人
01:30 Zero__wind: 02:12:517 (1,1,1) - 这个NC我比较懵逼
01:30 [Mahua]: (
01:30 Zero__wind: 我觉得02:12:517 (1) - 和02:12:860 (1) - 还是不加
01:30 [Mahua]: 让他们背图去
01:31 [Mahua]: 最后这几个nc是回血用的(
01:31 Zero__wind: 然后也没什么了吧
01:32 Zero__wind: 好了我去po了
01:32 [Mahua]: 好
IamKwaN
Dynamix:
01:54:346 - 这地方感觉漏掉不太好 沒辦法啊 1/2圓圈接滑條對於EZ來說太難了

01:
00:35:317 (3,1) - flow不太舒服吧 最好把1调一下形状? hao
00:57:603 (1) - 尾巴不要那么高?撞血条不太好看 好吧

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310,171,31717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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136,284,35660,6,0,P|78:320|16:301,2,137.69999579773,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,370,38060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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511,73,56231,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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488,151,83660,2,0,B|451:117|415:121|415:121|425:19,1,183.599994396973,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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384,296,100117,2,0,P|386:258|394:216,1,81.6,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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149,168,104231,5,4,0:0:0:0:
225,197,104574,2,0,P|266:185|306:186,1,81.6,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,266,105260,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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355,240,108003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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101,266,117945,6,0,B|133:281|172:261|172:261|170:312|214:340,1,163.2,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,267,118974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,267,121031,6,0,B|259:202|312:182|312:182|348:173|383:189|383:189|408:183,2,204,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,338,122746,2,0,P|176:303|172:253,1,102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,172,123431,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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VINXIS

geenral

  1. ez nm hd all hav an unsnappd objec t
  2. u sud clean up ur hitsoundz,
  3. hitsounds wit delay, under 100ms length, unused hitsoundz, not .wav hitsoundz etc + ther making ur osz big,
  4. is it allowd 2 hav sv variety in ez/nm diffz? / / ?

EZ

  1. 01:19:546 (1,2) - BRE%TGFLESRGSC this blanket, , , ,

nm

  1. 01:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - id use the rhythm at 01:16:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instead because then the rhythm alternates evry nc Xd

hd

  1. 00:24:346 (5,6) - ctrlg wud b bettr 2 emphasise the slidr
  2. 00:43:546 (1) - th rhythm is weird esp. consdiering the sliderend is ona big whit tik :L
  3. 00:52:117 (2) - y isnt the nc here
  4. 01:49:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - rip combo consistncy.. take the nc off of 01:54:346 (1) -

ins

  1. 00:04:803 (1,2) - the circle is off from slidertail direction
  2. 00:11:660 (1,1) - id raise sv for these so they visually look bigger than the 1/4 sliders
  3. 00:45:431 (2,3,4) - u sud give much mor space between 2 and 3 cuz of the htisound and snare emphasis : /
  4. 00:51:946 (3,2) - sud do a custom stak (try moving 00:52:460 (2) - to x:213 y:280)
  5. 00:54:860 - ur 1/2 stacks and 1/4 stacks that start on blu tiks r REALLY bad for playing.. u sud change them visually so ppl can tel which r 1/4 and which r 1/2 + possibly changing the rhythm in general (i think if u do 01:00:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - before 00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - , tht wud be better for the player :0)
  6. 01:58:974 (4,1) - stacking wud play better cuz of 1/1 spacing
  7. 02:10:631 (3,4,1) - ????????????????? the spacing ebtwen 3 and 4 is huge but 4 and 1 is rlly small,, 1 is also a very emphasized note :/
  8. 02:11:660 (1) - rip fix slider length plz,.

bE

  1. 00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - wud recommend ncing evry 5th note so its lik 1234123412341234
  2. 00:31:546 (1) - nc this it plays/reads much better :/
  3. 00:42:431 (1,2) - WTF BLUE TIK NC switch ncs plz -_
  4. 00:47:831 (2,2) - overlap looks kind of messy, ,
  5. 00:58:288 - sud add a circle here :L
  6. 01:03:774 - here 2.. and in any other place like this :-0
  7. 01:12:603 (1,2) - blue tick nc............. plz fix.
  8. 01:26:317 (1) - tbh remove nc,, add circle at 01:26:231 - and nc 01:26:403 (2) - cuz ur missing the sound at the red tick and blue tick ncs r bad,.
  9. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the star/5 note pattern sud start where 01:36:803 (1) - is cuz of the overlap..
  10. 01:48:346 (1,1) - this is the only time u stak..
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Topic Starter
[Mahua]

VINXIS wrote:

geenral

  1. ez nm hd all hav an unsnappd objec t
  2. u sud clean up ur hitsoundz, ok
  3. hitsounds wit delay, under 100ms length, unused hitsoundz, not .wav hitsoundz etc + ther making ur osz big, ok
  4. is it allowd 2 hav sv variety in ez/nm diffz? / / ?

ins

  1. 00:04:803 (1,2) - the circle is off from slidertail direction ok
  2. 00:11:660 (1,1) - id raise sv for these so they visually look bigger than the 1/4 sliders cuz look well
  3. 00:45:431 (2,3,4) - u sud give much mor space between 2 and 3 cuz of the htisound and snare emphasis : / have same part
  4. 00:51:946 (3,2) - sud do a custom stak (try moving 00:52:460 (2) - to x:213 y:280) 00:49:031 (2) - i stak it
  5. 00:54:860 - ur 1/2 stacks and 1/4 stacks that start on blu tiks r REALLY bad for playing.. u sud change them visually so ppl can tel which r 1/4 and which r 1/2 + possibly changing the rhythm in general (i think if u do 01:00:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - before 00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - , tht wud be better for the player :0) i dont think so
  6. 01:58:974 (4,1) - stacking wud play better cuz of 1/1 spacing slow to go to kiai(
  7. 02:10:631 (3,4,1) - ????????????????? the spacing ebtwen 3 and 4 is huge but 4 and 1 is rlly small,, 1 is also a very emphasized note :/ have same part
  8. 02:11:660 (1) - rip fix slider length plz,. ok

bE

  1. 00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - wud recommend ncing evry 5th note so its lik 1234123412341234 dont want change
  2. 00:31:546 (1) - nc this it plays/reads much better :/ look bad
  3. 00:42:431 (1,2) - WTF BLUE TIK NC switch ncs plz -_ ok
  4. 00:47:831 (2,2) - overlap looks kind of messy, , ez to move
  5. 00:58:288 - sud add a circle here :L synth track
  6. 01:03:774 - here 2.. and in any other place like this :-0 ^
  7. 01:12:603 (1,2) - blue tick nc............. plz fix. ok
  8. 01:26:317 (1) - tbh remove nc,, add circle at 01:26:231 - and nc 01:26:403 (2) - cuz ur missing the sound at the red tick and blue tick ncs r bad,. look bad than now
  9. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the star/5 note pattern sud start where 01:36:803 (1) - is cuz of the overlap.. no change
  10. 01:48:346 (1,1) - this is the only time u stak.. yes only this time

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Zweib
[NM'']
  1. 01:43:374 加note slider 往後拉少一拍
    不拉
  2. 02:10:631 確定這個重音就這樣略過嗎? 你前面都有跟的說 看看别人怎么说
<NM>
01:43:374 (3) - 这个地方是你故意摆成这个节奏的吗?比较难预料 都是滑条应该还好吧
01:54:346 (3) - ^
nm
  1. 01:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - id use the rhythm at 01:16:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instead because then the rhythm alternates evry nc Xd seems it doesn't make much difference lol
NM
00:03:431 (2) - 前后ds怎么差了0.1 没有啊 0.01
00:06:174 (2) - ↑
00:30:174 (1) - 弯的不好看,建议后面的弯曲和前面的角度一致 是说不对称吗,修了一下
00:57:603 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段的难度太低了,建议稍微填满一点 不改了
[NM'']
00:19:031 (6) - 不弄成水平線? 修了
00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不太建議圈圈內的數字超過6 我是觉得没到二位数就不影响美观吧
01:20:403 (3,4) - 特意的? fix
01:59:317 (3) - Normal的Reverse不可以超過1個 (某BN說的) 改了
猪师傅
00:28:974 (6) - 建议把这个删掉然后从00:29:146 - 起个1/2 slider 现在这段节奏太长了有点难 全stack了,再说难打你哦
00:53:146 (3) - 有点难 建议换成circle 滑条更好混吧 感觉区别不大
01:30:003 (6) - 建议删掉这个circle然后unstack 还有01:32:746 (6) - 不太想改
01:59:317 (3) - 连续折返的1/2也是低难度不推荐的 最好换一下 改了
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Hollow Wings
m4m

BE''

  1. 00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - 突然小跳感觉好憋屈,顺序改2413好了。
  2. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段没有明显snap的音,估计会被挑。
  3. 01:51:431 (2) - 跳太大了,反向吧。
  4. 整个图的1/4连打,三连就不说了,有些长串也是基本上啥都没跟。有些wub音其实是随机的,用1/4混过去感觉不太好。。。我为什么用lks的remix就是为了避免这个问题。。。其他么,类似于第一条mod的ds憋屈的地方貌似还有挺多,虽然不影响打击感就是了。。。

IN''

  1. 00:57:603 (1,2,3) - 对于这个梗,我个人认为把00:57:946 (2) - stack在00:57:603 (1) - 更能够配合00:56:488 (2,3,4) - 的感觉一点。。。不知道为何,你看着办吧,后同。
  2. 02:12:174 (3) - 这个也是同理,感觉stack在02:12:517 (1) - 上比较有感觉。
  3. 排成这种类型的图感觉就很不错了。。。

HD''

  1. 00:31:717 (1) - 反向更好些。
  2. 00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里可能就需要体现一个节奏对称的概念了,这个节奏实在是undermap了太多,导致之后的部分节奏丰富就显得呼应不足。。。最好再来一组相同节奏的来平衡一下,不然是有点难受的特别是对于这种动次打次曲。

NM''

  1. 00:13:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 如今的社区对N难度出现这种复杂节奏是表示不给过的态度的,建议简化节奏,也就是说不要gap不同的节奏混杂在一起。01:16:803 (1) - 开始同理。01:53:488 (2,3) - 这种也是。
  2. 你这N的break比E还多啊,估计会被挑。

EZ''

  1. 00:18:860 (5) - E难度还是尽量不要搞1/2折返。
全diff set的1/4和最高难度建议一样。。。总之我是不太推荐各种形式的overmap,自己拿捏好了。。。

good luck
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

BE''

  1. 00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - 突然小跳感觉好憋屈,顺序改2413好了。 就让他沉稳的移动吧 这里我个人感觉是应该这种排列
  2. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段没有明显snap的音,估计会被挑。当后面的chain音(
  3. 01:51:431 (2) - 跳太大了,反向吧。 ok
  4. 整个图的1/4连打,三连就不说了,有些长串也是基本上啥都没跟。有些wub音其实是随机的,用1/4混过去感觉不太好。。。我为什么用lks的remix就是为了避免这个问题。。。其他么,类似于第一条mod的ds憋屈的地方貌似还有挺多,虽然不影响打击感就是了。。。

    我想做出有故事性的效果啊 开始就是吸血鬼第一次出现 第一次惊慌 逃脱 喘息 更小心的逃脱 后面的尖叫代表了被发现的心情 最后的kiai是第二次袭击 大概这种感觉
    这毕竟是sin的续作啊 总要有点故事性的对吧

IN''

  1. 00:57:603 (1,2,3) - 对于这个梗,我个人认为把00:57:946 (2) - stack在00:57:603 (1) - 更能够配合00:56:488 (2,3,4) - 的感觉一点。。。不知道为何,你看着办吧,后同。 ok
  2. 02:12:174 (3) - 这个也是同理,感觉stack在02:12:517 (1) - 上比较有感觉。 ok
  3. 排成这种类型的图感觉就很不错了。。。
全diff set的1/4和最高难度建议一样。。。总之我是不太推荐各种形式的overmap,自己拿捏好了。。。

good luck
ak74
来摸了
[General]
有些没用的绿线好像是得去掉的
EZ难度的00:43:888 - 这里有kiai然而其它没有,我觉得这个应该没事吧

[EZ'']
首先点开Aimod
01:57:259 (5) - 物件结尾没对齐

[NM'']


[HD'']
01:05:831 - 和 01:16:803 - 这两根绿线好像没用啊
00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏比后面的类似地方的节奏要简单,感觉有点怪,我推荐和01:08:574 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 01:14:060 (1,2,3) - 啥的保持一致

[IN'']
00:24:003 (4) - 按照前面的,这个可以NC
02:10:974 (1,2) - 这个离前面是不是太近了
02:13:803 - 这个绿线位置有点诡异啊。。。虽然好像没啥大碍

[BE'']
00:33:431 (2) - 这个音效有点突兀的
01:19:203 - 这条绿线好像也没用。。。 00:43:888 (1) - 这根不知道有没有用啊,去掉好像也没事
00:57:946 (2) - 滑条结尾这里的音并不明显,在这停顿我是觉得没啥问题,但是后面白线再加个circle也许会更爽吧(也更普通),后面还有几个类似的地方也一样
这其实可以直接找狗rank了,我是摸不出啥了



水摸完毕
Good luck!~ :)
VINXIS
anime
Koiyuki
beat burst mahua
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Minakami Yuki wrote:

beat burst mahua
被打死 :o
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

ak74 wrote:

来摸了
[General]
有些没用的绿线好像是得去掉的
EZ难度的00:43:888 - 这里有kiai然而其它没有,我觉得这个应该没事吧


[IN'']
00:24:003 (4) - 按照前面的,这个可以NC 后面就不好看了
02:10:974 (1,2) - 这个离前面是不是太近了
02:13:803 - 这个绿线位置有点诡异啊。。。虽然好像没啥大碍 那就不改

[BE'']
00:33:431 (2) - 这个音效有点突兀的 喘息
01:19:203 - 这条绿线好像也没用。。。 00:43:888 (1) - 这根不知道有没有用啊,去掉好像也没事 可以
00:57:946 (2) - 滑条结尾这里的音并不明显,在这停顿我是觉得没啥问题,但是后面白线再加个circle也许会更爽吧(也更普通),后面还有几个类似的地方也一样
这其实可以直接找狗rank了,我是摸不出啥了



水摸完毕
Good luck!~ :)
IamKwaN
@vinxis, you didn't update?!?!
@hw, 還好 有幾處還用了1/2接滑條 就當是diff spike
@ak, fixed

3Q
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Flower

-N a n a k o- wrote:

[HD'']
00:09:603 (3) - 感覺這條滑條太斜了 改了点
00:24:346 (5,6,1) - 怎不把00:24:346 (5) - 也疊在一起, 個人覺得這樣才比較配合音樂 叠在了5上
00:52:117 (2,1) - 我找不出來要疊的原因OAO 我的理解是音乐这里有个急停
00:53:488 (1) - 既然之前是用1.7x, 怎麼突然要轉DS啊 因为单点比滑条难
01:50:403 (2) - 個人覺得這條用回01:49:717 (1) - 這條長條的pattern比較美觀 ???不是很懂
02:04:803 (3) - 感覺這裏DS跳得太突然了 个人觉得还好

VINXIS wrote:

hd

  1. 00:24:346 (5,6) - ctrlg wud b bettr 2 emphasise the slidr fixed by stacking 5 6
  2. 00:43:546 (1) - th rhythm is weird esp. consdiering the sliderend is ona big whit tik :L this is a sudden brake at the big white tick by my feeling, which is expressed better
  3. 00:52:117 (2) - y isnt the nc here i kno what im doing here. nc is for readability isn;t it?
  4. 01:49:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - rip combo consistncy.. take the nc off of 01:54:346 (1) -

it kills me when trying to recognize my part from the non-wysiwyg editor

Hollow Wings wrote:

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HD''

  1. 00:31:717 (1) - 反向更好些。 这里强调一个减速的概念,所以反对
  2. 00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里可能就需要体现一个节奏对称的概念了,这个节奏实在是undermap了太多,导致之后的部分节奏丰富就显得呼应不足。。。最好再来一组相同节奏的来平衡一下,不然是有点难受的特别是对于这种动次打次曲。 我要是做太鼓谱这里肯定就会放一个小节的空白了。不过要是你这么说的话我就稍微改一点。在00:55:717 - 加了note跟随鼓点

ak74 wrote:

[HD'']
01:05:831 - 和 01:16:803 - 这两根绿线好像没用啊 ok
00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏比后面的类似地方的节奏要简单,感觉有点怪,我推荐和01:08:574 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 01:14:060 (1,2,3) - 啥的保持一致 看了hw的摸略做了修改
thanks to all

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