M4M from my queue
Goodluck! Here's my map: t/523076
Easy
00:15:733 (2,1) - Bad overlap, not super serious, but consider fixing
00:23:058 (1,2) - Blanket just slightly off
00:37:361 (2,3) - ^
00:43:814 (2) - I would make this a 1/1 slider
00:44:338 (3,1) - Make more parallel
00:58:465 (3) - Start this half a beat earlier at the white tick? It's more emphasized with both kick drum and vocals
01:07:710 (1,2,3) - 2 is just slightly off center between these two. I think if you just curve 1 slightly more you can make it directly in the middle and fix the blanket between 1 and 2. Two birds with one stone
01:11:198 (2,1) - 1/2 might not be allowed for easy, although you should double check
01:22:012 (2,3) - ^
01:52:361 (1,2) - Looks a bit off
02:07:710 (3) - Curve this a bit more to make it look smoother?
02:10:500 (3,1) - Slightly off
02:21:663 (2,1) - Not the end of the world, but could confuse beginners a bit
02:29:338 (2,1) - Double check the 1/2
04:03:524 (1,2) - Slightly off
04:29:861 (2,3) - Looks off
Sorry for all the blanket mods, there wasn't much wrong with it besides the nitpicky stuff >.<
00:23:058 (1,2) - Blanket just slightly off
00:37:361 (2,3) - ^
00:43:814 (2) - I would make this a 1/1 slider
00:44:338 (3,1) - Make more parallel
00:58:465 (3) - Start this half a beat earlier at the white tick? It's more emphasized with both kick drum and vocals
01:07:710 (1,2,3) - 2 is just slightly off center between these two. I think if you just curve 1 slightly more you can make it directly in the middle and fix the blanket between 1 and 2. Two birds with one stone
01:11:198 (2,1) - 1/2 might not be allowed for easy, although you should double check
01:22:012 (2,3) - ^
01:52:361 (1,2) - Looks a bit off
02:07:710 (3) - Curve this a bit more to make it look smoother?
02:10:500 (3,1) - Slightly off
02:21:663 (2,1) - Not the end of the world, but could confuse beginners a bit
02:29:338 (2,1) - Double check the 1/2
04:03:524 (1,2) - Slightly off
04:29:861 (2,3) - Looks off
Sorry for all the blanket mods, there wasn't much wrong with it besides the nitpicky stuff >.<
Normal
00:30:733 (5,1) - Tilt 5 so it blankets better
01:16:082 (1) - It might fit better to have a spinner that ends 01:18:524 (1) - here
01:39:803 (4) - NC?
02:48:000 (7,2) - Maybe double check this overlap
02:58:117 (4) - Maybe rotate this like 30 degrees so it doesn't look so awkward with 02:58:640 (5) -
03:11:198 (3) - ^
Good diff
01:16:082 (1) - It might fit better to have a spinner that ends 01:18:524 (1) - here
01:39:803 (4) - NC?
02:48:000 (7,2) - Maybe double check this overlap
02:58:117 (4) - Maybe rotate this like 30 degrees so it doesn't look so awkward with 02:58:640 (5) -
03:11:198 (3) - ^
Good diff
Hard
00:15:210 (2,5) - Make 2 stack a bit better with the bend
00:37:710 (3) - Maybe make this repeating slider and place closer to 00:38:233 (4) -
00:43:291 (4,5) - Blanket
01:00:907 (5) - NC
01:18:524 (5) - NC?
02:03:175 (10) - 10 combo seems a bit long
02:20:093 (10,1) - Fix blanket
02:25:849 (1,2,3) - Equalize distance
02:32:826 (6) - NC
02:42:593 (1,3) - Fix blanket
02:50:965 (1) - Flow is a little bad. Rotate this a few degrees so its more vertical
03:48:698 (1,2) - Maybe make into a repeating 1/4 slider
03:57:245 (5,6,7) - Make same distance
00:37:710 (3) - Maybe make this repeating slider and place closer to 00:38:233 (4) -
00:43:291 (4,5) - Blanket
01:00:907 (5) - NC
01:18:524 (5) - NC?
02:03:175 (10) - 10 combo seems a bit long
02:20:093 (10,1) - Fix blanket
02:25:849 (1,2,3) - Equalize distance
02:32:826 (6) - NC
02:42:593 (1,3) - Fix blanket
02:50:965 (1) - Flow is a little bad. Rotate this a few degrees so its more vertical
03:48:698 (1,2) - Maybe make into a repeating 1/4 slider
03:57:245 (5,6,7) - Make same distance
Reunion of Goodbye
00:07:710 (1) - Would be better if ctrl g
00:21:663 (1) - I see why you ended it here, but I still think it would be better if you ended it at 00:22:535 - where she does the whisper thing
00:55:849 (6) - NC
01:10:500 (1,2,3) - Maybe increase distance because it's emphasized
01:15:558 (2,3,4,1) - Maybe make into perfect parallelogram?
01:30:384 (2) - I would end this on blue tick and make sliderend clickable because there is strong emphasis there
01:45:907 (1,2) - NC off
01:46:082 (3) - NC
02:29:686 (5,1) - This linear jump sort of lacks emphasis. It would be better if it were ctrl j or something
02:35:617 (1) - make into 2 circles? I feel all three sounds are equally important
03:26:024 (2,3) - Flow is kind of weird. Maybe ctrl g 3?
03:28:117 (6,8) - Separate these two just a bit, doesn't look good
03:37:884 (6) - I feel that this should be placed somewhere around x:448 y:244 because the obtuse jump angle kind of ruins the emphasis imo. If you do this, make sure you place the slider somewhere else too
04:11:198 (3,4,5,6) - Place so it makes a square?
04:19:570 (5) - NC for emphasis
04:19:919 (7) - NC for emphasis.The 1-2-1-2 jumps always spice things up a bit
04:22:361 (3,4) - Since the vocals get very different, maybe change the pattern to be more exciting as well
00:21:663 (1) - I see why you ended it here, but I still think it would be better if you ended it at 00:22:535 - where she does the whisper thing
00:55:849 (6) - NC
01:10:500 (1,2,3) - Maybe increase distance because it's emphasized
01:15:558 (2,3,4,1) - Maybe make into perfect parallelogram?
01:30:384 (2) - I would end this on blue tick and make sliderend clickable because there is strong emphasis there
01:45:907 (1,2) - NC off
01:46:082 (3) - NC
02:29:686 (5,1) - This linear jump sort of lacks emphasis. It would be better if it were ctrl j or something
02:35:617 (1) - make into 2 circles? I feel all three sounds are equally important
03:26:024 (2,3) - Flow is kind of weird. Maybe ctrl g 3?
03:28:117 (6,8) - Separate these two just a bit, doesn't look good
03:37:884 (6) - I feel that this should be placed somewhere around x:448 y:244 because the obtuse jump angle kind of ruins the emphasis imo. If you do this, make sure you place the slider somewhere else too
04:11:198 (3,4,5,6) - Place so it makes a square?
04:19:570 (5) - NC for emphasis
04:19:919 (7) - NC for emphasis.The 1-2-1-2 jumps always spice things up a bit
04:22:361 (3,4) - Since the vocals get very different, maybe change the pattern to be more exciting as well
Goodluck! Here's my map: t/523076