AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu [OsuMania] · forum

ZZHBOY

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2016-06-22T03:08:46+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月5日 at 23:18:44

Artist: AKITO
Title: Sakura Kagetsu
Source: BMS
Tags: JP-SPIRITUAL POP BJ CUP 5th
BPM: 138
Filesize: 19558kb
Play Time: 02:06
Difficulties Available:

HD - 4Key (2.7 stars, 815 notes)
MX - 4Key (3.58 stars, 1218 notes)
NM - 4Key (1.54 stars, 500 notes)

Download: AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th
hope you can enjoy those key sounds :3

Last edited by ZZHBOY 2016-08-05T15:24:43+00:00, edited 26 times in total.

Ayachi-

2,261 posts

Joined November 2013

Ayachi- 2016-07-12T18:56:41+00:00

zzb阿不要怕人找碴誰來找碴我就噴死誰可以改的就改吧

MeowPaz

499 posts

Joined March 2012

MeowPaz 2016-07-12T19:47:42+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
zzb阿不要怕人找碴誰來找碴我就噴死誰可以改的就改吧

来找碴，不服喷我

Yahalo.ZZHBOY
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
[NM]
00:19:180 (19180|2,19397|1,19615|0) - Ctrl+G，比较符合音高
00:20:049 (20049|3) - 移到4
00:20:919 (20919|2) - Cymbal。两键，摆1和4
00:22:223 (22223|1) - 移到1 00:22:658 (22658|0) - 移到3 kick不顺序放手感会好点
00:34:832 - 到00:41:789 - 太单调。这段抓笛子做LN。不要管别的音。笛子的1/6音可以省略
00:40:919 - 接上面这条。这里的音可以这么接：http://puu.sh/q0bAW/9df1a87120.jpg
00:48:310 - 这里同上，可以用LN

[HD]
00:27:006 - 这里转变用1234 1234 楼梯
00:54:506 - 00:54:832 - 这么明显不要漏了

[MX]
00:40:919 - 这里用面海，左右拍根本没用。参考：http://puu.sh/q0e1t/e993cc0c95.jpg
00:40:810 (40810|2,40810|3) - 这个怎么是两个
00:42:115 (42115|1,42332|3) - 这些连点不必要，手感差。换掉吧
00:48:310 - 这里就不要点了，根本体现不了。用1/4LN写：http://puu.sh/q0dSU/546f207039.jpg
后面的同上
00:58:745 - 这里用长的LN
01:42:658 - 这里三连也是，手感好就最好这么抓，参考http://puu.sh/q0e9Y/f3dac8c8c4.jpg

Last edited by MeowPaz 2016-07-13T15:02:00+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Sandalphon

1,470 posts

Joined May 2013

Sandalphon 2016-07-13T03:30:54+00:00

MeowPaz wrote:
[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
zzb阿不要怕人找碴誰來找碴我就噴死誰可以改的就改吧
明天来找碴，不服喷我

diao a

_Zenith

326 posts

Joined June 2015

_Zenith 2016-07-13T03:56:36+00:00

ACCEPTED MOD
AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu
1|2|3|4
[General]
Tags: NO
Widescreen support: Turn Off
Hitsound: NO
[NM]
01:51:136 也许你可以在这里加一个ln 感觉更好一点
00:12:658 (12658|0) - 这一段其实压根没有声音。。感觉这里加一个ln怪怪的
00:51:789 (51789|3,52006|2) - 这两个中间其实还有一个音
[HD]
00:12:658 (12658|0,13310|1,13963|2,13963|3) - 这里其实没有必要这样做你可以删掉一个note
00:13:310 (13310|1,14071|1) - 然后这里打起来很别扭。 00:13:963 (13963|2) - 可以把这个删掉然后把00:14:071 (14071|1) - 移到3
01:08:528 (68528|3,68636|2,68745|3) - 这三个其实是一个音建议jack
01:10:267 (70267|0,70376|1,70484|0) - ^
01:46:136 - 01:47:876 兄弟你这一段排列重复三次辣建议换一下排列
[MX]
00:35:267 - 00:40:702 这里的jack感觉用太多了且没有必要用
00:40:810 - 00:41:789 这里拍砖感觉真的没有必要建议你只要在kick的时候用一下就好了
01:42:767 (102767|2,103202|2,103528|2,103636|3,103963|2,104071|3,104180|2,104289|1) - 我没听到这些ln跟的是啥..

Good luck

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2016-07-13T07:02:18+00:00

-[Apple]- wrote:
ACCEPTED MOD
AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu
1|2|3|4
[General]
Tags: NO
Widescreen support: Turn Off 好去了
Hitsound: NO
[NM]
01:51:136 也许你可以在这里加一个ln 感觉更好一点
00:12:658 (12658|0) - 这一段其实压根没有声音。。感觉这里加一个ln怪怪的
00:51:789 (51789|3,52006|2) - 这两个中间其实还有一个音
[HD]
00:12:658 (12658|0,13310|1,13963|2,13963|3) - 这里其实没有必要这样做你可以删掉一个note
00:13:310 (13310|1,14071|1) - 然后这里打起来很别扭。 00:13:963 (13963|2) - 可以把这个删掉然后把00:14:071 (14071|1) - 移到3
01:08:528 (68528|3,68636|2,68745|3) - 这三个其实是一个音建议jack
01:10:267 (70267|0,70376|1,70484|0) - ^
01:46:136 - 01:47:876 兄弟你这一段排列重复三次辣建议换一下排列好改了点
[MX]
00:35:267 - 00:40:702 这里的jack感觉用太多了且没有必要用
00:40:810 - 00:41:789 这里拍砖感觉真的没有必要建议你只要在kick的时候用一下就好了
01:42:767 (102767|2,103202|2,103528|2,103636|3,103963|2,104071|3,104180|2,104289|1) - 我没听到这些ln跟的是啥.. 我也觉得改了改
Good luck

感谢摸得

[Crz]Makii

450 posts

Joined November 2014

[Crz]Makii 2016-07-13T08:09:26+00:00

m4m
这个贼贼爱去
0 1 2 3
[NM]

00:13:310 (13310|1) - 建议移右边去新手的指头反应不过来一边不同时下来俩面条的
00:20:919 - 双键啊参考00:13:963 -
01:14:832 - 也双键，之前都这么放的
01:18:310 - 01:20:049 - 01:21:789 - 01:25:267 - 01:27:006 - 01:28:745 - 01:32:223 - 01:33:963 - 01:35:702 - ^
made 01:09:615 - 01:16:571 - 这两块节奏一样的吧你怎么有一块放双键一块不放的...
都N标了感觉不要怕塞双键塞爆

[HD]

00:43:528 - 双键
00:45:267 - ^
好像还有几个这里每个大白线上扔个双键效果不错
01:51:354 (111354|0) - 有点长了再说后面一个LN都没有了这里抓的音就没意义了删了改单点吧
~~哦草后面怎么还有个1/6~~

[MX]

00:03:528 - 这双键吧音重了点
00:10:484 - ^ 结尾好像你复制的？如果agree别忘改
00:13:310 (13310|3,13383|1,13455|3,13528|1,13636|0,13745|1,13854|0,13963|3,13963|2,13963|1,14071|0,14180|0) - 我觉得你最好再找个3000pp左右的问这卡不卡手......
00:23:310 - 这里放jack啊你前面后面都是这么放的
00:23:636 - ^
01:42:658 (102658|1,102767|1,102876|1,103093|2,103202|2,103310|2,103528|0,103636|0,103745|0) - 吉安帕
吉安帕

美丽给你个小星星

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2016-07-13T09:33:19+00:00

[Crz]Sword wrote:
m4m
这个贼贼爱去
0 1 2 3
[NM]
00:13:310 (13310|1) - 建议移右边去新手的指头反应不过来一边不同时下来俩面条的
00:20:919 - 双键啊参考00:13:963 -
01:14:832 - 也双键，之前都这么放的
01:18:310 - 01:20:049 - 01:21:789 - 01:25:267 - 01:27:006 - 01:28:745 - 01:32:223 - 01:33:963 - 01:35:702 - ^
made 01:09:615 - 01:16:571 - 这两块节奏一样的吧你怎么有一块放双键一块不放的...
都N标了感觉不要怕塞双键塞爆
[HD]
00:43:528 - 双键
00:45:267 - ^
好像还有几个这里每个大白线上扔个双键效果不错
01:51:354 (111354|0) - 有点长了再说后面一个LN都没有了这里抓的音就没意义了删了改单点吧
~~哦草后面怎么还有个1/6~~
[MX]
00:03:528 - 这双键吧音重了点
00:10:484 - ^ 结尾好像你复制的？如果agree别忘改
00:13:310 (13310|3,13383|1,13455|3,13528|1,13636|0,13745|1,13854|0,13963|3,13963|2,13963|1,14071|0,14180|0) - 我觉得你最好再找个3000pp左右的问这卡不卡手......
00:23:310 - 这里放jack啊你前面后面都是这么放的
00:23:636 - ^
01:42:658 (102658|1,102767|1,102876|1,103093|2,103202|2,103310|2,103528|0,103636|0,103745|0) - 吉安帕
吉安帕
美丽给你个小星星

除了hd的双键全改了

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2016-07-13T12:44:13+00:00

666

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2016-07-13T12:46:13+00:00

liaoxingyao wrote:
666

小学生

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2016-07-14T02:07:30+00:00

MeowPaz wrote:
[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
zzb阿不要怕人找碴誰來找碴我就噴死誰可以改的就改吧
来找碴，不服喷我

Yahalo.ZZHBOY
Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
[NM]
00:19:180 (19180|2,19397|1,19615|0) - Ctrl+G，比较符合音高好
00:20:049 (20049|3) - 移到4 好
00:20:919 (20919|2) - Cymbal。两键，摆1和4 好
00:22:223 (22223|1) - 移到1 00:22:658 (22658|0) - 移到3 kick不顺序放手感会好点好
00:34:832 - 到00:41:789 - 太单调。这段抓笛子做LN。不要管别的音。笛子的1/6音可以省略低难度感觉放ln不太好暂时都只用1/2带过了
00:40:919 - 接上面这条。这里的音可以这么接：http://puu.sh/q0bAW/9df1a87120.jpg
00:48:310 - 这里同上，可以用LN

[HD]
00:27:006 - 这里转变用1234 1234 楼梯好
00:54:506 - 00:54:832 - 这么明显不要漏了额为了让前后节奏差不多这里就没动了

[MX]
00:40:919 - 这里用面海，左右拍根本没用。参考：http://puu.sh/q0e1t/e993cc0c95.jpg 好
00:40:810 (40810|2,40810|3) - 这个怎么是两个有声鼓
00:42:115 (42115|1,42332|3) - 这些连点不必要，手感差。换掉吧感觉还好...先留着吧
00:48:310 - 这里就不要点了，根本体现不了。用1/4LN写：http://puu.sh/q0dSU/546f207039.jpg
后面的同上感觉那些琴音用点的也可以...先keep了
00:58:745 - 这里用长的LN
01:42:658 - 这里三连也是，手感好就最好这么抓，参考好像是有点难但感觉还能打也先keep吧..http://puu.sh/q0e9Y/f3dac8c8c4.jpg

感谢摸得!

Aruel

1,891 posts

Joined February 2014

Aruel 2016-07-15T07:34:47+00:00

IRC

2016-07-15 15:35 Fresh Chicken: I'm here
2016-07-15 15:35 ZZHBOY: yeaaa
2016-07-15 15:36 Fresh Chicken: np me me
2016-07-15 15:36 ZZHBOY: just dowload that again
2016-07-15 15:36 Fresh Chicken: oh I see
2016-07-15 15:36 ZZHBOY: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1026169 AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu]
2016-07-15 15:37 Fresh Chicken: Icon checking rightr?
2016-07-15 15:37 Fresh Chicken: right?
2016-07-15 15:37 ZZHBOY: yea lol
2016-07-15 15:37 Fresh Chicken: Okay then let me check general first
2016-07-15 15:38 Fresh Chicken: aaaaaa So many HS lol
2016-07-15 15:39 ZZHBOY: yea
2016-07-15 15:41 Fresh Chicken: Okay non-using HS aren't
2016-07-15 15:41 Fresh Chicken: Let me check delay lol
2016-07-15 15:41 ZZHBOY: lol
2016-07-15 15:42 Fresh Chicken: http://puu.sh/q2iWK/048616d867.png
2016-07-15 15:43 Fresh Chicken: seems sex is here
2016-07-15 15:43 Fresh Chicken: http://puu.sh/q2iYq/b656f6d9ac.png
2016-07-15 15:43 Fresh Chicken: Seems these are sex
2016-07-15 15:43 ZZHBOY: i found that too
2016-07-15 15:43 ZZHBOY: but in fact it's a sexy fade in
2016-07-15 15:43 ZZHBOY: and are necessary
2016-07-15 15:44 Fresh Chicken: ohhhh I see
2016-07-15 15:44 ZZHBOY: they are all pipe and bass
2016-07-15 15:44 Fresh Chicken: I seex
2016-07-15 15:45 ZZHBOY: lol
2016-07-15 15:47 Fresh Chicken: Okay seems all fine
2016-07-15 15:47 ZZHBOY: o.o
2016-07-15 15:47 Fresh Chicken: owo
2016-07-15 15:47 ZZHBOY: fine sex
2016-07-15 15:47 Fresh Chicken: OD HP 7 is more better in NM
2016-07-15 15:48 Fresh Chicken: Yeah all good sex
2016-07-15 15:48 Fresh Chicken: And turn off Widescreen plz
2016-07-15 15:48 Fresh Chicken: sex
2016-07-15 15:48 ZZHBOY: ok
2016-07-15 15:48 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1026169 AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu [NM]]
2016-07-15 15:48 Fresh Chicken: Let's check NM first
2016-07-15 15:49 Fresh Chicken: http://puu.sh/q2jbo/241a15d747.png
2016-07-15 15:49 Fresh Chicken: Why did you turn on this? LOL
2016-07-15 15:49 Fresh Chicken: uhh and I don't know custom color can use in mania
2016-07-15 15:49 ZZHBOY: maybe it was checked automaticlly when transforming from bms
2016-07-15 15:49 Fresh Chicken: oh I see
2016-07-15 15:49 Fresh Chicken: Please turn off them all
2016-07-15 15:49 Fresh Chicken: *in all diffs
2016-07-15 15:50 ZZHBOY: i will fix them in final because if i do any change, i will do them in bms editor
2016-07-15 15:50 ZZHBOY: so same problems will happen again lol
2016-07-15 15:50 ZZHBOY: i will note them
2016-07-15 15:50 Fresh Chicken: o.o
2016-07-15 15:50 ZZHBOY: o.o
2016-07-15 15:51 Fresh Chicken: okay let's check patterns
2016-07-15 15:51 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1026169 AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu [NM]]
2016-07-15 15:51 ZZHBOY: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1026169 AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu [NM]]
2016-07-15 15:52 Fresh Chicken: 01:04:347 - How about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5611789 this
2016-07-15 15:52 Fresh Chicken: Seems good with stairs pattern imo
2016-07-15 15:53 ZZHBOY: ok
2016-07-15 15:53 Fresh Chicken: 01:10:217 (70217|3,70434|3) - it's better to remove for consistency, because of that you didn't use jack in other same parts
2016-07-15 15:54 Fresh Chicken: 01:13:804 (73804|3) - lol
2016-07-15 15:54 ZZHBOY: ee
2016-07-15 15:55 Fresh Chicken: oh well
2016-07-15 15:55 Fresh Chicken: 01:10:217 (70217|3,70434|3) - it's fine
2016-07-15 15:55 Fresh Chicken: lol
2016-07-15 15:55 ZZHBOY: and i think it's better to jack them?01:11:956 (71956|2,72173|3) -
2016-07-15 15:56 Fresh Chicken: yeah that's good. because you are using jack-jack-nonjack-nonjack 01:17:173 - in here too
2016-07-15 15:56 Fresh Chicken: So that's good too
2016-07-15 15:56 ZZHBOY: yaaa
2016-07-15 15:58 Fresh Chicken: Okay NM is good
2016-07-15 15:59 Fresh Chicken: Actually I don't point out so much lol
2016-07-15 15:59 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1026168 AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu [HD]]
2016-07-15 15:59 ZZHBOY: yes, i know
2016-07-15 15:59 ZZHBOY: i didn't map those double note well in nm
2016-07-15 16:00 Fresh Chicken: owo
2016-07-15 16:00 Fresh Chicken: well anyway NM is fine lol
2016-07-15 16:00 Fresh Chicken: Come to HD

2016-07-15 16:00 ZZHBOY: ok!
2016-07-15 16:01 Fresh Chicken: 00:14:999 - I think this part feels too empty, how about add some LN or 1/1 notes in here?
2016-07-15 16:02 ZZHBOY: how about add a ln at 00:14:999 - ?
2016-07-15 16:02 Fresh Chicken: yup
2016-07-15 16:02 Fresh Chicken: I mean
2016-07-15 16:02 ZZHBOY: ok
2016-07-15 16:02 Fresh Chicken: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5611817
2016-07-15 16:02 Fresh Chicken: like this
2016-07-15 16:02 Fresh Chicken: sex
2016-07-15 16:02 ZZHBOY: yeaa
2016-07-15 16:03 ZZHBOY: sexy ln
2016-07-15 16:05 Fresh Chicken: 00:40:760 - I think this part need a one note, in same parts of your flows are all having in
2016-07-15 16:06 ZZHBOY: yea
2016-07-15 16:06 Fresh Chicken: 00:37:282 - 00:39:021 - 00:42:499 - there are same part
2016-07-15 16:06 Fresh Chicken: yea
2016-07-15 16:07 Fresh Chicken: 01:11:956 (71956|1,72065|2) - switch the columns is more good imosex
2016-07-15 16:08 ZZHBOY: k
2016-07-15 16:08 Fresh Chicken: kk
2016-07-15 16:08 ZZHBOY: lol
2016-07-15 16:08 Fresh Chicken: 01:23:913 (83913|0) - move to 2 is more better imo, 01:23:913 (83913|0,84130|0,84347|0,84565|0) - those jacks are should be heavy imo
2016-07-15 16:09 ZZHBOY: sure
2016-07-15 16:10 Fresh Chicken: 01:40:869 - 01:41:739 - are they missing note?
2016-07-15 16:11 Fresh Chicken: oh well
2016-07-15 16:11 Fresh Chicken: it's fine to me
2016-07-15 16:11 ZZHBOY: maybe yes lol
2016-07-15 16:11 Fresh Chicken: lol
2016-07-15 16:11 Fresh Chicken: oh I see
2016-07-15 16:11 Fresh Chicken: LOL
2016-07-15 16:12 ZZHBOY: LOLLL
2016-07-15 16:12 Fresh Chicken: 01:43:478 - 01:48:695 -
2016-07-15 16:12 Fresh Chicken: ^
2016-07-15 16:14 Fresh Chicken: okay NM is fine toosex
2016-07-15 16:14 Fresh Chicken: oh it was HD
2016-07-15 16:14 Fresh Chicken: LOL
2016-07-15 16:14 ZZHBOY: both are sex
2016-07-15 16:14 ZZHBOY: lol
2016-07-15 16:15 Fresh Chicken: looool
2016-07-15 16:15 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1008972 AKITO - Sakura Kagetsu [MX]]
2016-07-15 16:15 Fresh Chicken: MXMX
2016-07-15 16:15 Fresh Chicken: oh and preview time is unsnap
2016-07-15 16:15 Fresh Chicken: please fix it please lol
2016-07-15 16:15 ZZHBOY: yea
2016-07-15 16:18 Fresh Chicken: 00:50:217 - I recommand the pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5611868 this, seems they are too heavy in left hand
2016-07-15 16:18 ZZHBOY: ok
2016-07-15 16:18 Fresh Chicken: 01:05:108 - 01:05:217 - Should have some note like 01:06:739 - this I think
2016-07-15 16:20 Fresh Chicken: 01:10:217 (70217|3,70326|3,70434|3) - Better to move in column 2,01:09:999 (69999|2) - for more good balance, this LN is disturbing it
2016-07-15 16:21 ZZHBOY: yea
2016-07-15 16:21 Fresh Chicken: 01:45:217 (105217|3) - better to move to 2 for balancex
2016-07-15 16:22 Fresh Chicken: Okay update plz
2016-07-15 16:22 ZZHBOY: wait me about 5min
2016-07-15 16:22 Fresh Chicken: oki
2016-07-15 16:28 ZZHBOY: uncheck enable custom color?
2016-07-15 16:28 Fresh Chicken: yap
2016-07-15 16:28 ZZHBOY: ok
2016-07-15 16:32 ZZHBOY: updated~
2016-07-15 16:33 Fresh Chicken: Time to bex
2016-07-15 16:33 Fresh Chicken: bubblex
2016-07-15 16:33 ZZHBOY: xxxxxx

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2016-07-15T07:45:26+00:00

thanks o.o

paperlens

505 posts

Joined August 2014

paperlens 2016-07-15T13:21:29+00:00

。。可以

liaoxingyao

864 posts

Joined November 2013

liaoxingyao 2016-07-23T13:01:20+00:00

我日，太厉害了吧

[ A v a l o n ]

1,978 posts

Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2016-07-29T09:58:41+00:00

oh this already bubbled lol
i don't know this map bubbled already ._.
okay then

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[General]

Song Setup & Metadata
Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/dee_news/exlast/course.html
Audio & Hitsounds
192kbps audio is good, but you have tons of delayed keysound :
"dr_008rsin.wav" & " dr_suzu and also mostly on "pipe" names are you sure for that ?
also you have unused hitsound "va_r_007.wav" and "va_l_007.wav" because i didn't get that keysound name in your .osu files (all diffs)
some extra problem (i also fix some for you)
- "dr_007crap" seems unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisoT/d5fb36b033.wav
- "dr_003" & "dr_004" under 100ms ==> idk how to fix ._.
- "dr_suzu_s" unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisFZ/20f8c57a7f.wav
- "zen_001" really big difference L/R ==> http://puu.sh/qisUE/ea0b8fd447.wav
BPM & Timing
all fine
Background
1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine

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[NM]
00:30:869 - i would like suggest you to follow those background instrument sound (with 1/2 snap) since they're more audible as sound and also it's better than put a single LN only without reason here . . . example http://puu.sh/qirvx/5737dfe14f.jpg
00:49:999 - 00:51:739 - 00:53:478 - 00:56:956 - 00:58:695 - you better to change that section with a 1/1 beat LN each for exchange/expressing those 1/4 melody here . . . since you've too much using nonstop 1/2 notes in this time, i think it need some variant mapping style to avoid boring
01:14:347 - add a note here for expressing the big impact sound here, same as you did on other parts too 01:17:826 - 01:21:304 - etc
01:52:173 (112173|2,112173|0,112608|1,112608|3) - LN would be more fit to expressing hose 1/4 sound here

[HD]
00:26:304 - maybe add a note would be make this part more easier to read, because it's almost contains same instrument phase like 00:24:565 -
00:53:260 (53260|3) - move to second column, that's more easier to plays and not give any heavy pressure because it have different column with this 00:53:478 (53478|3) -
01:03:043 - delete a note on here . . . because there is not having any same impact like on this part 01:02:608 - use 2 notes only for following piano instrument is more important
01:39:130 - start on this timing . . . i don't really recommended to use nonstop 1/4 mapping style here, but it's up to you then

[MX]
00:43:586 (43586|0,43695|1) - swap those column, i feel it's really really heavy to press mini jack after pressing double notes + short LN this time
00:43:913 (43913|2,44021|2) - same here, i didn't hear any possibility instrument sound to be given a mini jack this time . . . not like on this case 00:45:217 (45217|3,45326|3) - that actually fine to be given a mini jack
00:46:956 (46956|1,47065|1) - drag 1 column to the right side, reduce some heavy pressure in your left hand 00:46:956 (46956|0,47173|0) - because you left hand pressing this too . . . or you can try this instead http://puu.sh/qitqn/766da81be2.jpg
01:11:956 (71956|0,72065|0,72173|0) - you can see that this time is have a different sound, 2 notes in same column is already maximum here . . . my suggestion http://puu.sh/qitvb/b1a2f689e4.jpg
01:17:391 - 01:19:130 - 01:24:347 - 01:26:086 - 01:27:827 - 01:31:304 - 01:33:043 - well, i must say this . . . same issue like above ^

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ZZHBOY

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Topic Starter

ZZHBOY 2016-07-29T12:23:57+00:00

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
oh this already bubbled lol
i don't know this map bubbled already ._.
okay then

Qualify Check

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[General]
Song Setup & Metadata
Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/dee_news/exlast/course.html
Audio & Hitsounds
192kbps audio is good, but you have tons of delayed keysound :
"dr_008rsin.wav" & " dr_suzu and also mostly on "pipe" names are you sure for that ?
also you have unused hitsound "va_r_007.wav" and "va_l_007.wav" because i didn't get that keysound name in your .osu files (all diffs)
some extra problem (i also fix some for you)
- "dr_007crap" seems unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisoT/d5fb36b033.wav
- "dr_003" & "dr_004" under 100ms ==> idk how to fix ._.
- "dr_suzu_s" unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisFZ/20f8c57a7f.wav
- "zen_001" really big difference L/R ==> http://puu.sh/qisUE/ea0b8fd447.wav
BPM & Timing
all fine
Background
1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine

all fixed. those 5ms delay are not really 5ms delay, the sounds started before in 5ms exactly. also those sounds which shorter than 100ms were extended to more then 100ms.

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[NM]
00:30:869 - i would like suggest you to follow those background instrument sound (with 1/2 snap) since they're more audible as sound and also it's better than put a single LN only without reason here . . . example http://puu.sh/qirvx/5737dfe14f.jpg i think this part is quiet soft so i just want to use ln to fill there
00:49:999 - 00:51:739 - 00:53:478 - 00:56:956 - 00:58:695 - you better to change that section with a 1/1 beat LN each for exchange/expressing those 1/4 melody here . . . since you've too much using nonstop 1/2 notes in this time, i think it need some variant mapping style to avoid boring emm i think it's fine is the lowest diff o.o
01:14:347 - add a note here for expressing the big impact sound here, same as you did on other parts too 01:17:826 - 01:21:304 - etc added
01:52:173 (112173|2,112173|0,112608|1,112608|3) - LN would be more fit to expressing hose 1/4 sound here okey

[HD]
00:26:304 - maybe add a note would be make this part more easier to read, because it's almost contains same instrument phase like 00:24:565 - i just followed the melody so i want to keep there empty
00:53:260 (53260|3) - move to second column, that's more easier to plays and not give any heavy pressure because it have different column with this 00:53:478 (53478|3) - moved
01:03:043 - delete a note on here . . . because there is not having any same impact like on this part 01:02:608 - use 2 notes only for following piano instrument is more important yea, removed
01:39:130 - start on this timing . . . i don't really recommended to use nonstop 1/4 mapping style here, but it's up to you then lol seems those 1/4 isn't too hard due to it's low bpm

[MX]
00:43:586 (43586|0,43695|1) - swap those column, i feel it's really really heavy to press mini jack after pressing double notes + short LN this time
00:43:913 (43913|2,44021|2) - same here, i didn't hear any possibility instrument sound to be given a mini jack this time . . . not like on this case 00:45:217 (45217|3,45326|3) - that actually fine to be given a mini jack
00:46:956 (46956|1,47065|1) - drag 1 column to the right side, reduce some heavy pressure in your left hand 00:46:956 (46956|0,47173|0) - because you left hand pressing this too . . . or you can try this instead http://puu.sh/qitqn/766da81be2.jpg
01:11:956 (71956|0,72065|0,72173|0) - you can see that this time is have a different sound, 2 notes in same column is already maximum here . . . my suggestion http://puu.sh/qitvb/b1a2f689e4.jpg
01:17:391 - 01:19:130 - 01:24:347 - 01:26:086 - 01:27:827 - 01:31:304 - 01:33:043 - well, i must say this . . . same issue like above ^
all fixed
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thanks for mod ._.

[ A v a l o n ]

1,978 posts

Joined July 2014

[ A v a l o n ] 2016-07-29T13:54:53+00:00

did much re-check about unbalanced keysound volume, keysound usage, and pattern in messenger . . .

dem

2016-07-29 21:03:36 avalon_n
i just finish dl it btw

2016-07-29 21:05:57 avalon_n
you've deleted orgel_15.wav before ?

2016-07-29 21:06:09 ZZH      
no

2016-07-29 21:06:17 ZZH      
i typo to orgel_15

2016-07-29 21:06:35 ZZH      
let me upload

2016-07-29 21:06:39 ZZH      
then you can just update mx diff

2016-07-29 21:06:45 avalon_n
ok

2016-07-29 21:07:24 ZZH      
done

2016-07-29 21:07:30 ZZH      
update and rechekc plz

2016-07-29 21:08:05 avalon_n
good

2016-07-29 21:09:05 avalon_n
hope all keysound is fine now

2016-07-29 21:09:14 avalon_n
i'll re-check pattern

2016-07-29 21:09:15 ZZH      
yea x.x

2016-07-29 21:15:17 avalon_n
00:39:782 - you've missing dr_005 here

2016-07-29 21:15:21 avalon_n
MX

2016-07-29 21:16:17 ZZH      
you mean use dr005 instead of pipe006?

2016-07-29 21:16:39 avalon_n
use dr005 and pipe006

2016-07-29 21:16:46 ZZH      
2 note?

2016-07-29 21:16:49 avalon_n
fr005 as sample

2016-07-29 21:16:51 avalon_n
dr

2016-07-29 21:17:13 avalon_n
wait

2016-07-29 21:17:33 avalon_n
you copy this from original bms ?

2016-07-29 21:17:58 ZZH      
ee seems i removed that dr005 sound accidently

2016-07-29 21:18:06 ZZH      
it should be exist in sb 

2016-07-29 21:18:09 ZZH      
storyboard

2016-07-29 21:18:12 avalon_n
this is really strange, because all part is have dr005

2016-07-29 21:18:13 ZZH      
x.x

2016-07-29 21:18:34 avalon_n
ah yea, maybe you accidentaly remove it

2016-07-29 21:18:42 avalon_n
pls add it again

2016-07-29 21:19:30 ZZH      
damn

2016-07-29 21:19:36 ZZH      
i will never do key sound x.x

2016-07-29 21:19:54 ZZH      
i become to hate it too

2016-07-29 21:20:24 ZZH      
uploaded

2016-07-29 21:20:30 ZZH      
you can update for recheck

2016-07-29 21:20:38 avalon_n
your dr005 lmao

2016-07-29 21:20:46 ZZH      
lol

2016-07-29 21:20:50 avalon_n
unbalanced

2016-07-29 21:20:59 avalon_n
wait i fix it

2016-07-29 21:21:04 ZZH      
ok

2016-07-29 21:22:26 avalon_n
http://puu.sh/qiBRF/5ed74cb288.wav

2016-07-29 21:22:33 avalon_n
just replace

2016-07-29 21:22:43 ZZH      
ok

2016-07-29 21:24:08 ZZH      
how to decern if a wav is balance?

2016-07-29 21:24:20 avalon_n
you have audacity ?

2016-07-29 21:24:37 ZZH      
now it's 


2016-07-29 21:25:33 avalon_n
[image]use this for balance it

2016-07-29 21:26:16 avalon_n
if right too loud, drag it to left, and increase the dB

2016-07-29 21:26:35 ZZH      
i see

2016-07-29 21:26:49 ZZH      
original file's right was too loud?

2016-07-29 21:26:57 avalon_n
yes

2016-07-29 21:27:04 ZZH      
i seee~~

2016-07-29 21:27:12 avalon_n
updated ?

2016-07-29 21:27:20 ZZH      
yea

2016-07-29 21:28:24 avalon_n
00:58:260 - lol

2016-07-29 21:28:34 avalon_n
you have 2 dr001 here

2016-07-29 21:28:44 avalon_n
pls delete one sample

2016-07-29 21:29:10 avalon_n
[image]

2016-07-29 21:29:12 ZZH      
ok

2016-07-29 21:29:57 ZZH      
yea


2016-07-29 21:30:48 avalon_n
[image]

2016-07-29 21:31:02 avalon_n
what is this ?

2016-07-29 21:31:18 ZZH      
i removed that sound in sb

2016-07-29 21:31:27 avalon_n
okay

2016-07-29 21:31:33 avalon_n
all fine i guess

2016-07-29 21:32:01 avalon_n
did you take a look for other diff too ?

2016-07-29 21:32:12 avalon_n
i still didn't look other diff

2016-07-29 21:32:18 avalon_n
let me see

2016-07-29 21:33:09 ZZH      
ok

2016-07-29 21:33:16 ZZH      
seems other diff are fine

2016-07-29 21:33:34 avalon_n
in HD

2016-07-29 21:33:41 avalon_n
have 2 sample too

2016-07-29 21:33:49 avalon_n
di you remove it ?

2016-07-29 21:34:04 avalon_n
also NM

2016-07-29 21:34:43 avalon_n
yea i think that's all

2016-07-29 21:36:55 avalon_n
did you done fix them ?

2016-07-29 21:39:07 ZZH      
1 min

2016-07-29 21:39:17 ZZH      
where is that?


2016-07-29 21:40:15 ZZH      
i found it and fixed, now uploading

2016-07-29 21:44:09 avalon_n
Alright it's time