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Check Ai mod please, there are some unrankable warnings
Check Ai mod please, there are some unrankable warnings
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00:12:049 (1,2) - What is this random one doing here in the set of pattern???
Either change 00:14:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6) to that or 00:13:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) otherwise it's really random
00:11:400 (7,8,9,10) - This should be expanded, with emphasis by the drums and a sf the jumps should be noticeably larger than 00:10:103 (7,8,9,10)
00:16:589 (7,8,9,10) - There is obviously a crescendo here, an expansion would be nice
00:21:778 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:26:968 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:29:887 - Good place to add slider with the held guitar note don't you think? Especially because it leads well into the next verse
00:33:130 (3,4,5) - Make this straight line or fix the curve
00:42:697 (4) - This can be more zigzagged, recommend an increase in SV just for this guitar because it's very prominent
00:46:427 (3,4) - This was impossible to read first time especially because I have never heard this music before, the DS is similar to previous 2 but time interval was decreased by half
00:55:508 (4,5) - Swap these 2 and adjust, flows better
01:06:697 (2,3,4,5) - Map this like 01:07:670 (1,3) otherwise 01:07:670 (1,3) has too big DS difference
01:07:670 (1,3) - Either stack these or mirror them
01:16:103 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Fix this curve please
01:19:184 (3,4) - Make these 2 follow the curve, it's a softer verse, it should be smoother than the guitar heavy parts
01:26:968 (3,4,1,2) - Wasn't very pleasant for me to play, can't really explain why
01:35:076 (3) - I would stack this one the head of (1)
01:41:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - An accelerated stream would be better here
02:14:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - Making this broken stream flow the same way as the previous plays better imo
02:17:238 (3,4) - Swap these 2 and adjust, the is the shouting at 02:17:238 (3,4) and a singular drum at 02:17:562 (4) so it will fit the music better
02:25:995 (1,2,3,4) - This was REALLY weird to play, I mean I got it, but it was one of those huh? moments
02:25:346 (4,5) - No matter how I hear it, this is a held note and 02:25:751 is a triplet
02:25:995 (1) - Here you are not mapping to the guitar or the vocals but to the drums so why miss 02:26:724 ??
02:36:859 - Missing something here, I would make that (1) a slider
02:44:319 (4) - Make this into a non-repeating slider and 02:44:643 add a note here then make 02:44:805 (1,2) a repeating slider, just fits with the guitar better
02:47:887 (1) - Here the guitar is literately in sync with the vocals, so why not map to the vocal and add a HS 02:48:130 ?
02:49:508 (2,3,4,1) - Making these equidistant flows much better imo
02:57:535 - Missed a drum here, if you were mapping to the guitar then missed a guitar note 02:57:941
02:58:103 (1) - You already made it vertical before, why not horizontal this time for variation? Unless you want to keep it as a mirrored image then I got nothing
03:13:832 (1) - Were you trying to incorporate this into the stream? If so please fix
03:13:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This curve honestly does not look the best, would change that
I would make the stream stop 03:15:130 (1) and add another stream starting 03:15:616 (5) to latch onto 03:16:265 (1)
03:24:049 (1) - This section is very well mapped
03:22:751 (1) - Why the slow down??? Each drum is very distinct, if anything it should be accelerated
03:23:157 (6) - Probs get rid of this and latch the stream onto (1), it really fits the music better
03:36:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the acceleration gradual, otherwise it looks bad
03:40:589 (8) - Without this feels more epic
03:43:832 (4,5) - Yo man this is really not cool, my 500 combo just got rekt by this, the DS should be smaller, you have 03:43:508 (1,2,3) and then suddenly bam the (4,5) DS into my face just didn't work for me. Also the (6) should be at 03:44:319
03:46:103 (1,3,2,4,5) - Wth???
03:56:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Make the acceleration gradual please
04:22:022 (5) - This is good, but if you're going to do that then continue with it please
04:22:751 (1,2,3,4) - Why the decrease in DS??
04:24:535 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
04:55:184 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Just make that into 1 stream
05:11:319 (1) - What's this doing here? Also I would make the stream end 05:11:400
05:15:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Don't really get why you always slow down here, the music doesn't suggest that :/
05:31:184 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest making these 2 parallel straight lines
05:51:941 (7) - Spinner maybe? The guitar is held note
There are 1 or 2 stuff in there that I changed my mind but couldn't be stuffed editing
Great mapping
Good luck on ranking!
Hope I helped ))))
Either change 00:14:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6) to that or 00:13:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6) otherwise it's really random
00:11:400 (7,8,9,10) - This should be expanded, with emphasis by the drums and a sf the jumps should be noticeably larger than 00:10:103 (7,8,9,10)
00:16:589 (7,8,9,10) - There is obviously a crescendo here, an expansion would be nice
00:21:778 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:26:968 (7,8,9,10) - ^
00:29:887 - Good place to add slider with the held guitar note don't you think? Especially because it leads well into the next verse
00:33:130 (3,4,5) - Make this straight line or fix the curve
00:42:697 (4) - This can be more zigzagged, recommend an increase in SV just for this guitar because it's very prominent
00:46:427 (3,4) - This was impossible to read first time especially because I have never heard this music before, the DS is similar to previous 2 but time interval was decreased by half
00:55:508 (4,5) - Swap these 2 and adjust, flows better
01:06:697 (2,3,4,5) - Map this like 01:07:670 (1,3) otherwise 01:07:670 (1,3) has too big DS difference
01:07:670 (1,3) - Either stack these or mirror them
01:16:103 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Fix this curve please
01:19:184 (3,4) - Make these 2 follow the curve, it's a softer verse, it should be smoother than the guitar heavy parts
01:26:968 (3,4,1,2) - Wasn't very pleasant for me to play, can't really explain why
01:35:076 (3) - I would stack this one the head of (1)
01:41:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - An accelerated stream would be better here
02:14:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - Making this broken stream flow the same way as the previous plays better imo
02:17:238 (3,4) - Swap these 2 and adjust, the is the shouting at 02:17:238 (3,4) and a singular drum at 02:17:562 (4) so it will fit the music better
02:25:995 (1,2,3,4) - This was REALLY weird to play, I mean I got it, but it was one of those huh? moments
02:25:346 (4,5) - No matter how I hear it, this is a held note and 02:25:751 is a triplet
02:25:995 (1) - Here you are not mapping to the guitar or the vocals but to the drums so why miss 02:26:724 ??
02:36:859 - Missing something here, I would make that (1) a slider
02:44:319 (4) - Make this into a non-repeating slider and 02:44:643 add a note here then make 02:44:805 (1,2) a repeating slider, just fits with the guitar better
02:47:887 (1) - Here the guitar is literately in sync with the vocals, so why not map to the vocal and add a HS 02:48:130 ?
02:49:508 (2,3,4,1) - Making these equidistant flows much better imo
02:57:535 - Missed a drum here, if you were mapping to the guitar then missed a guitar note 02:57:941
02:58:103 (1) - You already made it vertical before, why not horizontal this time for variation? Unless you want to keep it as a mirrored image then I got nothing
03:13:832 (1) - Were you trying to incorporate this into the stream? If so please fix
03:13:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This curve honestly does not look the best, would change that
I would make the stream stop 03:15:130 (1) and add another stream starting 03:15:616 (5) to latch onto 03:16:265 (1)
03:24:049 (1) - This section is very well mapped
03:22:751 (1) - Why the slow down??? Each drum is very distinct, if anything it should be accelerated
03:23:157 (6) - Probs get rid of this and latch the stream onto (1), it really fits the music better
03:36:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make the acceleration gradual, otherwise it looks bad
03:40:589 (8) - Without this feels more epic
03:43:832 (4,5) - Yo man this is really not cool, my 500 combo just got rekt by this, the DS should be smaller, you have 03:43:508 (1,2,3) and then suddenly bam the (4,5) DS into my face just didn't work for me. Also the (6) should be at 03:44:319
03:46:103 (1,3,2,4,5) - Wth???
03:56:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Make the acceleration gradual please
04:22:022 (5) - This is good, but if you're going to do that then continue with it please
04:22:751 (1,2,3,4) - Why the decrease in DS??
04:24:535 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
04:55:184 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Just make that into 1 stream
05:11:319 (1) - What's this doing here? Also I would make the stream end 05:11:400
05:15:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Don't really get why you always slow down here, the music doesn't suggest that :/
05:31:184 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest making these 2 parallel straight lines
05:51:941 (7) - Spinner maybe? The guitar is held note
There are 1 or 2 stuff in there that I changed my mind but couldn't be stuffed editing
Great mapping
Good luck on ranking!
Hope I helped ))))