Nomeji wrote:

01:06:378 - Double note rhythm seems strange

Nomeji wrote:

01:29:794 - Typical example of overall remarque: notes are often superposing each others, very confusing. You could use more space.

Nomeji wrote:

02:31:878 - Why such a speed all of sudden?
02:32:461 - Another example of really confusing pattern.

Barodius wrote:

Mod in french here !

Barodius wrote:

SPOILER

>>> HARD <<<

> Add a note at 00:19:878
--> It's actually an intended "break" to avoid accelerating to fast at the very beginning of the song o/

> 00:27:045 & 00:27:378 -> Delete
--> I replaced with a large reverse slider, it feels better to me, how about you ?

> Use a simple slider at 00:30:045
--> Alright, done o/ It seems better

> Same at 00:31:045
--> I think (?) it's clear enough that this one's purpose is to change the direction of the "flow".

> Same at 00:32:378
--> Done, it works well o/

> Same at 00:36:378
--> Done, not sure if it's good enough tho. I tried not to mess up the spacing of the next part of the song but I might have ended up makin a confusing pattern. I might need feeback for that one I guess ~

> 00:38:378 -> Extend to 00:38:711
--> I won't, I try to avoid as much as much possible using reverse sliders with more than 3 notes since I find them very confusing most of the time. Plus, it would end at a moment of the song which is clearly the beginning of a new part.

> 01:22:044 -> Extend to 01:22:711
--> Pretty much the same problem, I really don't like 3+ notes reverse sliders. Plus I think for a hard diff it's ok to have streams of 5 circles :>

> 01:30:045 -> Delete
--> I replaced it with a simple large slider because I felt like removing it was wrong, like a misplaced break.

> The slider at 01:48:711 should go from 01:48:544 to 01:49:378
--> I tried, but I really really don't like the result sorry :')

> Use a slider from 02:16:711 to 02:17:378
--> I don't like it

> The stream at 03:19:378 feels misplaced, sounds bad
--> Probably. I'm not what's the best way to fix that tho. I tried something, tell me if it's better !

> From 03:34:044 to 03:34:711 use a short reverse slider
--> I don't like this one, but I added a 1/4 reverse slider (3 notes) instead

> Same from 03:44:711 to 03:45:378
--> Same

Barodius wrote:

SPOILER

>>>>> HYPER <<<<<

> Add a note at 00:21:878
--> Pretty much the same problem as the one you suggested I add at the beginning of the hard diff ; I originaly didn't put a circle here on purpose, so I don't accelerate too much at the beginning of the song.

> 00:34:544 -> Extend the slider to 00:34:711
--> I tried, but it felt quite strange

> 00:38:378 -> Shorten the slider to 1/4 measure
--> Actually when I made this diff I did this first, but it felt wrong so I changed it to a 1/2 and I think it works better this way ?

> 00:47:794 -> Delete
--> Done

> 00:55:878 and 00:56:044 -> Delete, since these circles are not based on the voice
--> While it is true that it might be confusing to have these circles here, not having them also create a huge hole. So I replaced them with a reverse slider. Hopefully it's better !

> The slider at 00:59:378 should go from 00:59:211 to 00:59:711
--> I did that for the 2nd chorus, I like having slightly different patterns for these parts :>

> 01:06:794 and 01:07:128 -> Delete
--> Done. I also added jumps.

> 02:02:044 -> Not necessarily the best choice
--> I knew this pattern would end up with someone not liking it. I don't know if I'll change or not because damn this is so much fun (to me, at least OTL)

> Add a note at 02:09:378 ?
--> It works. I don't know if it's better but it works ~

> 02:43:044 -> Shorten and reverse to make it 3 notes long
--> Nice !

> 03:11:378 -> Maybe try to separate the slider and shorten it.
--> It actually *works*. I won't do it though, I made this slider long on purpose so the player has 1 sec to rest in this chorus (which I mapped without refraining myself :'D)

> 03:50:711 -> Delete
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...
*done*

Again, thanks for your suggestions ! Hopefully it's a little better now

Anyway, I started working on the Insane diff. It'll probably take quite some time since it will be the first time I map for a higher diff than Hard/Hyper ~

JustPlayinOsu wrote:

read here for mod

00:16:045 (1) - maybe lower the volume here. And personal preference, I think 1/8 slider works better.
-> Fixed the volume issue, and I also did on the other diffs o/ But I didn't felt like changing the slider

00:27:711 (1) - why a combo here? I feel combo should be at 00:28:211 (2) instead. Same applies for all other combos. Try starting it at the downbeat unless u have a reason for it. (or im just a stickler for the traditional style combo)
-> While it may be true that our combo style are different, it is also true that I tend to set my combos on a strange way. The thing is there are a lot of them which start and end depending on the voice (it's the case here (+ it's visually more convenient)).
But there are some of them that may seems strange because I use them to display the "combo follow line" on jumps.
I'll try to fix as much combos as I can, it'll probably take time tho.

00:28:045 - maybe use a lower slider speed here.
-> That part is already slower than the intro, and the slider speed is higher in some parts of the song ; I'm not sure it would be good to have too much differencies in slider speed within the song ?

00:30:211 (1) and (2)- better blanketing
-> It should be better now !

00:43:044 (2,3,4,1,2) - i think circles (2) and (3) should be on top of (1) and (2) in the next combo.
-> Oh well, I did that on purpose first because I hate having non-consecutive circles at the exact same place : I can't see them with my no-approach-circle skin. But I figured nobody plays that way and forgot to fix it. Done !

00:44:878 (7,8,9) - better blanketing
-> Done

00:52:044 (1,2) - better blanketing
-> Fixed

01:27:378 (1) - feels abit awkward. If possible map the break from 01:22:711 to 01:27:378.
-> 01:27:378 (1) : I... tried something. It might be better to just delete that slider. Also I *can* map the break, but is it ok not to have any break to rest after a full minute of playing ?

01:28:044 (1,2) - better blanketing
-> Fixed

01:46:711 (1,2) - looks squeezy. Maybe change slider shape of (1)
-> It should be better now o/

02:05:711 (2,3,4) - maybe keep distance between sliders consistent?
-> I tried something, hopefully it's better

02:27:378 - maybe use lower slider speed here.
-> The same way as 00:28:045, I dont't now if it's okay to slow down too much ?

02:28:044 (1,2) - better blanketing
-> Fixed

02:33:711 (2,3) - better blanketing
-> Fixed

02:43:044 (1,2) - blanketing
-> It should be better o/

02:50:544 (1) - why suddenly such a big slider? maybe change this into shorter sliders/circles is better
-> This one is based on the voice, I made it long to "recover" from the circle jump and the stream. I think it was a difficult pattern ; you could see that long slider as "one-second recovery/break" to make sure the player know what's coming just after this.

03:04:878 (5,6) - blanketing
-> Fixed

03:18:544 (1) - how come this is normal hitsound? feels out of place
-> How come I never fixed that.

03:27:044 (2,3) - blanketing
-> Fixed

03:34:711 (9) - i feel this note should follow a spinner instead of a break.
-> I get your point but wouldn't that be redundant with the end of the song ?

BloodlEyes wrote:

my thoughts on extra diff

JustPlayinOsu's Extra

+ timing is good
+ for 5.2* it is easy to pass

- sliders at the beginning are too slow. it's like a hard diff. too boring for extra. I would set the slider speed from the chorus to the beginning and increase slider speed in chorus. so that both slider speeds increase.
- cursor movement is in circles a lot! that just annoys me. one or two rotations right and then the cursors rotates left. I was thinking about to quit. there are too less patterns.
- AR is 8.5. make it at least AR 9. low AR makes the map more slow. and with more slow I mean more boring
- 00:27:374 (7,8,9,10,1,2) - two times I didn't know how to play these. I get 50s. I played them too early I guess
- most parts of the map need more spacing. it is like mixing hard and insane diff. and only a few jumps you can call extra. I wonder how it got 5.2*

In the end I don't like the extra diff. I wanted to write you guys this because I was really annoyed xD but maybe you want to improve the extra diff. I have no mod suggestions because I don't like that diff, sry.

Tsuntsunbakamon wrote:

Somebody need to collaborate with you to revive this map I mean from what I'd know, most of ''hyper'' and ''insane'' got quite good flow, ''normal'' was a bit short, but hey, someone need to try to revive it