Kurosanyan wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:01:214 - Add a note? No
2. 00:14:833 (1) - Make it start at 00:14:635 - ? Make the rhythm easier to follow.No
3. 00:20:951 - Add a note?Done
4. 00:35:162 - Add a note?Done
5. 01:13:056 - Add a note?No
6. 01:16:214 (4,5) - Would be better like this imo: http://puu.sh/1L6sI fixed this in another way
7. 01:23:319 - Add a note?No

Chacha17 wrote:

-kevincela-'s easy - nice easy!
00:10:096 - an increase in the volume of the hitsound here would be bad nice For now no,but maybe I'll do it
00:42:662 (2) - move one grid upwards (nazi) Done

1. Perhaps tick rate: 1 ?, sounds good IMO
2. The difference between the 1st and the 2nd combo colour is barely noticeable while playing. Try this:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 149,155,208
   Combo2 : 255,232,255
   Combo3 : 132,232,191
   Combo4 : 215,218,219

3. Remove "star.png". It is not being used. (Don't forget to full submit)
4. "comboburst-0" is facing the wrong side, try this one. (Also, rename it to "comboburst" because you're only using 1 pic)
5. The offset seems off, I'm not sure tho. It might be my UO, however you should re-check it again.

1. 00:00:820 - 15% of volume with soft override sounds too low, I suggest to raise it at least to: 20~25% please.
2. 01:03:188 - ^
3. 01:13:451 - ^
4. Everything is great, good job. Just one suggestion: AR seems a bit high sometimes, would you reduce it 1 tick, please?

1. Same suggestion for all the sections with 15% of volume: 15% of volume with soft override sounds too low, I suggest to raise it at least to: 20~25% please. (Some suggestion for [Hard] & [Insane]
2. 00:17:793 (3) - The repeat sounds too "extra". You didn't use that repeat before while the rhythm is still the same, you should remove it.
3. 00:23:714 (4) - This silenced circle is so confusing, you silenced it because there's no rhythm on that spot. Just remove that circle.
4. 00:39:898 (3) - From this part: 00:26:083 - the music changed so you started using those repeating sliders, Why didn't you add a repeat to this one?
5. 00:44:833 (6,7) - These 2 circles were really unexpected tbh, plus the rhythm is a bit iffy, it sounds way better like this.
6. 00:45:425 (8) - There's obviously a New Combo missing here D
7. 00:48:977 (1) - This New Combo seems a bit random, I suggest to remove it to avoid any kind of confusion.
8. 01:14:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like this combo returns to the position of the last one, I suggest to use an horizontal flip here.

1. 00:03:188 (6) - I don't like why you completely silenced this slider, that's not necessary the slider sounds great w/o silencing it.
2. 00:02:004 (4) - This slider end sounds really off, it must end 1/6 earlier (00:02:201 - )
3. 00:08:320 (3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing it seems like fake 1/6's, use the same spacing you're using for 1/2.
4. 01:17:004 - There's no need to use 5% of volume, use 10 or 15% (There's no part of this song that needs to be completely silenced)
5. 01:18:188 - ^
6. 01:25:293 (6) - Same thoughts for this silenced slider.
7. 01:30:820 (5) - This circle is not following any rhythm remove it please, it's just forcing difficulty.

1. All those sections with 0% of volume are so awful and confusing, any part of this song need to be silenced increase the volume please.
2. 00:40:293 (6,7,8,9,10) - This part is a bit hard to read because the hit-burst are covering many circles, try to re-arrange the pattern like this.
3. 00:49:306 (6,7) - I see the same issue with these 2 circles, is not that bad tho. I'll not force you but try to move those circles away to avoid any kind of problem.
4. 00:57:662 (3,4) - Hmm this spacing, I don't see why it suddenly increase it, fix it please.
5. There many combos that are not placed correctly or are way too long. Little New Combo mod:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:00:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC on (6)
   2. 00:09:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC on (7)
   3. 00:13:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
   4. 00:17:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - NC on (5)
   5. 00:26:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - NC on (8) or (9)
   6. 00:32:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - NC on (7) or (8)
   7. 00:35:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - NC on (8)
   8. 01:00:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - NC on (8)
   9. 01:06:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   10. 01:26:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC on (7)

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Perhaps tick rate: 1 ?, sounds good IMOFixed
2. The difference between the 1st and the 2nd combo colour is barely noticeable while playing. Try this:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 149,155,208
   Combo2 : 255,232,255
   Combo3 : 132,232,191
   Combo4 : 215,218,219

   um i dislike this bright green but i changed the brightness of the current ones
3. Remove "star.png". It is not being used. (Don't forget to full submit)Fixed
4. "comboburst-0" is facing the wrong side, try this one. (Also, rename it to "comboburst" because you're only using 1 pic)Fixed
5. The offset seems off, I'm not sure tho. It might be my UO, however you should re-check it again.hm...

[-kevincela-'s Easy]

1. 00:00:820 - 15% of volume with soft override sounds too low, I suggest to raise it at least to: 20~25% please.Fixed
2. 01:03:188 - ^Fixed
3. 01:13:451 - ^Fixed
4. Everything is great, good job. Just one suggestion: AR seems a bit high sometimes, would you reduce it 1 tick, please?

[Normal]

1. Same suggestion for all the sections with 15% of volume: 15% of volume with soft override sounds too low, I suggest to raise it at least to: 20~25% please. (Some suggestion for [Hard] & [Insane]Fixed
2. 00:17:793 (3) - The repeat sounds too "extra". You didn't use that repeat before while the rhythm is still the same, you should remove it.Fixed
3. 00:23:714 (4) - This silenced circle is so confusing, you silenced it because there's no rhythm on that spot. Just remove that circle.Fixed
4. 00:39:898 (3) - From this part: 00:26:083 - the music changed so you started using those repeating sliders, Why didn't you add a repeat to this one? Fixed
5. 00:44:833 (6,7) - These 2 circles were really unexpected tbh, plus the rhythm is a bit iffy, it sounds way better like this.Fixed
6. 00:45:425 (8) - There's obviously a New Combo missing here Dur sure with the 8?
7. 00:48:977 (1) - This New Combo seems a bit random, I suggest to remove it to avoid any kind of confusion.Fixed
8. 01:14:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like this combo returns to the position of the last one, I suggest to use an horizontal flip here.Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:03:188 (6) - I don't like why you completely silenced this slider, that's not necessary the slider sounds great w/o silencing it.Fixed
2. 00:02:004 (4) - This slider end sounds really off, it must end 1/6 earlier (00:02:201 - )Fixed
3. 00:08:320 (3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing it seems like fake 1/6's, use the same spacing you're using for 1/2.guess thats fixed
4. 01:17:004 - There's no need to use 5% of volume, use 10 or 15% (There's no part of this song that needs to be completely silenced)Fixed
5. 01:18:188 - ^Fixed
6. 01:25:293 (6) - Same thoughts for this silenced slider. Fixed
7. 01:30:820 (5) - This circle is not following any rhythm remove it please, it's just forcing difficulty.Fixed

[Insane]

1. All those sections with 0% of volume are so awful and confusing, any part of this song need to be silenced increase the volume please.Fixed
2. 00:40:293 (6,7,8,9,10) - This part is a bit hard to read because the hit-burst are covering many circles, try to re-arrange the pattern like this.Fixed but on an other way
3. 00:49:306 (6,7) - I see the same issue with these 2 circles, is not that bad tho. I'll not force you but try to move those circles away to avoid any kind of problem.ill try to think of a new arrangement here
4. 00:57:662 (3,4) - Hmm this spacing, I don't see why it suddenly increase it, fix it please.Fixed
5. There many combos that are not placed correctly or are way too long. Little New Combo mod:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:00:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC on (6)
   2. 00:09:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC on (7)
   3. 00:13:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
   4. 00:17:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - NC on (5)
   5. 00:26:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - NC on (8) or (9)
   6. 00:32:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - NC on (7) or (8)
   7. 00:35:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - NC on (8)
   8. 01:00:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - NC on (8)
   9. 01:06:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   10. 01:26:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NC on (7)
       Fixed all

Combo1 : 149,155,208
Combo2 : 255,236,255
Combo3 : 202,202,255
Combo4 : 191,208,197

Kanon wrote:

Easy
Use tick rate 0.5? tick sounds weird. No
01:16:609 (5) - right two grid( nazi.. No
Other is fine

lovhin456 wrote:

-kevincela-'s Easy;
- 01:23:714 >> In comparison with your other sliders this look a bit too curved Well,i don't think that's a big problem,so i won't change this slider

kurohana wrote:

[Easy]
00:40:688 (2,3) stacked notes are a bit hard for beginner
00:50:951 (1,2) ^
00:52:530 (3,4) ^
00:54:109 (5,6) ^
01:05:162 (3,4) ^
Sorry,I'm not fixing anything.

Katsuri wrote:

Easy
I see that these Sliders of waves was all copypasted, but they all are not simetric, be careful because It really looks strange to se when editing, but playing no problem with.Well,I don't see any problem with the sliders,so I'm not changing anything

Shiki wrote:

[Easy]
00:18:888 (4) - Maybe add a repeat, then move the spinner 1/2 back?
00:28:208 (4) - ^
00:46:849 (3) - ^
00:56:752 (1) - Move the spinner 1/2 back then add a note.
Wait,but there aren't sliders in my difficulty!Maybe you modded another difficult but you considered it as easy?

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

Easy:
Seems fine

Normal:
I prefer you keep your mapping consistent. (Talking about the break) Since this is the only map with a break, I think you should map the break like hard and insane.
(I didn't mention easy because it's a guest diff) Hm not sure
00:24:306 (1,1) - Note after spinner might be too fast for beginners. Use a slider if you're going to put a note afterwards for lower difficulties.Fixed
00:51:346 (1) - I rather have this part as a note instead of slider end. It feels a lot better that you click then kiai time comes in instead of dragging the slider ball.Fixed

Hard:
Seems okay

Insane:
00:24:306 (1) - Extend spinner all the way 00:25:688 like hard.Fixed for now
00:32:596 (2) - I don't like how the two got overlapped by previous slider. Maybe curve these sliders 00:31:609 (2,3) around 00:32:596 (2)?Fixed

Aleks719 wrote:

Folder
I guess you you have a file star2.png, you are needing in star.png too.

SB
Remove all about mayathemebg from "background". I suggest to fix it in notepad.
before :

SPOILER

after :

SPOILER

Hard
00:10:227 (1) - why 1/6, then you use 1/4 in Insane in this part?
00:35:491 (1) - ^
00:37:004 (4) - ^ (Imo, 1/6 in hard better than 1/4 in insane)
00:48:122 (2) - ^
00:49:306 (5) - ^
01:32:333 (4) - ^

Added/Removed/Changed them but still need to take a closer look at this

Normal
00:54:898 (2) - add whistle to the endFixed
00:55:688 (3) - add finish to the endAdded Whistle to be Consisten with01:07:530 (2,3,4)

Easy
00:28:056 (2) - nazi spacing
01:28:056 (2) - ^

star

Wiinter wrote:

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:11:872 (1) - remove new combo? Done
00:14:833 (1) - move new combo to 00:13:451 (3). flows better, imo Done
Oh man, I really liked the way this diff was mapped. It's easy, but not boring as most of the easy diffs I see Thanks

spboxer3 wrote:

[-kevincela-'s Easy]
00:03:977 (1,2,3) - spacing~ Done
01:30:030 (2,3) - stack it? No