Thank you!Secretpipe wrote:
[Lumin's Light Insane]Good luck~
- 00:13:335 (1,4) - is this overlap on purpose? this would seem much cleaner to me Didn't even notice that, ty
- 00:30:062 (5,6) - I suggest spacing this a bit higher to express the additional sound here, currently you barely have to move at all between 00:30:062 (5,6,1) because of slider-leniency, please take that into consideration Changed by adding more spacing between sliders, hope it's okay
- 00:34:971 (6,1,2) - This is a very uncomfortable way of changing the spacing because the player just moves in one straight line but has to forcefully change the speed at which he's going, I recommend spacing (6,1) higher already since that would make more sense emphasis-wise too Fair enough
- 00:40:244 (4,5,6) - The vocals are repeating themselves here but you mapped it very differently, that doesn't make much sense to me Okay then, there was so many sliders in this section so I tried to variate a bit but this is reasonable enough.
- 00:41:699 (4,1) - Why did you space this so low? This forced slowdown is again very uncomfortable to play, and it doesn't emphasize (1) at all, which imo should be emphasized more than the rest Added more spacing
- 00:49:153 (5,6) - The spacing here could be bigger to emphasize that strong sound on (6); also, have you thought about adding a circle at 00:49:426 -? Emphasized the spacing between 5 and 6 but not adding note on that sound because this is focused on that instrument, not in vocals in this part so it would just be weird to suddenly follow vocals after, keep this
- 00:51:699 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I don't understand your spacing, it puts more emphasis on (6) and (8) than on (5) (7) and (1), why? I don't see any reason to emphasize the offbeats
repeats at 00:52:971 (2,3,4,5,6,1) Fixed them in someway (they were pain in the ass change tho) but I think that they are okay now
Generally the aesthetics look a bit unpolished since there are many notes that just seem cramped onto others for no reason
I KNOW I know I am bad in terms of aesthetics but learning that every day
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